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Ceui - Stardust Melodia

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Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 12월 18일 목요일 at 오후 12:44:33

Artist: Ceui
Title: Stardust Melodia
Source: 境界線上のホライゾン
Tags: Asgard Natsu Kyoukai Senjou no Horizon In the middle of nowhere Ending Odaka Kotaro セイ Labyrinthus
BPM: 106
Filesize: 7343kb
Play Time: 04:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Asgard's Hard (2.29 stars, 275 notes)
  2. Insane (3.01 stars, 428 notes)
  3. Natsu's Normal (1.42 stars, 192 notes)
Download: Ceui - Stardust Melodia
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Song is good
Last edited by Sonnyc , edited 26 times in total.
Kodora
Kodora
taking first for no reason
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
앜ㅋㅋ 코도라 쿠도스
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
SOOOOOOOO GOOOOD

I wish my map could be even half as good as this amazing one :)

Insta-star


Source: Kyoukai Senjou no Horizon | 境界線上のホライゾン

Tags: In the middle of nowhere (English translation of the anime and very popular) | Opening | Odaka Kotaro (Composer)

<3 <3
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Wait.. why did I say Opening for the tags.

This is an Ending >_>

Sorry lol. I don't know what I was thinking last night.

By the way. I'm having trouble with audio on your insane file. When I redownload the map it says it needs an update, and then the Music stops. Maybe try re-uploading it.
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
I'm 80% done with normal, I'll finish today in some hours, sorry, I told you sunday, but I was on a travel with my family D:, I'll edit this post with my diff :p

Done:
http://puu.sh/7AED6
Asgard
639 posts
Joined June 2011
Asgard
이거 맵 슬라이더 패치 전에 만든 맵이라 슬라이더 모양 이상할텐데 ㅋㅋ
meiikyuu
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
meiikyuu


hi ~~

Natsu's Normal
  1. 00:30:181 (2) - whistle at head
  2. 00:55:087 (5) - sometimes i want to click something at this beat too lol, it will match the future rhythms too
  3. 01:15:464 (1) - <3
  4. 01:47:163 (3) - add finish
  5. 02:50:559 (3) - one grid left, idk to keep the motion forward
  6. 04:03:011 (5) - NC, emphasize cool square pattern (:
nice, nothing big to fix

Asgard's Hard
  1. 00:32:447 (6) - whistle, she sings louder note here
  2. 01:01:596 (1) - whistle at tail
  3. 01:04:145 (6) - whistle, to follow instrument
  4. 01:14:332 (7) - this pattern feels better imo:

  5. 03:33:577 (3) - NC , emphasize beginning of strong part of song
  6. 03:35:843 (1) - remove NC
comfortable play xD~

Insane
  1. 00:50:276 - add note? either way works though
  2. 01:06:125 (2) - ctrl+g , it might flow better imo
  3. 02:00:464 - if you added note from first mod then add here too
  4. 02:16:313 (2) - same as 01:06:125 (2) -
  5. 02:56:219 (1) - remove NC , previous combo is short lol
good also
difficulty level spread is nice (:
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

meiikyuu wrote:



hi ~~

Natsu's Normal
  1. 00:30:181 (2) - whistle at headk
  2. 00:55:087 (5) - sometimes i want to click something at this beat too lol, it will match the future rhythms too did some here
  3. 01:15:464 (1) - <3 <3
  4. 01:47:163 (3) - add finish I feel whistle fit better
  5. 02:50:559 (3) - one grid left, idk to keep the motion forward k
  6. 04:03:011 (5) - NC, emphasize cool square pattern (:
nice, nothing big to fix yay :D

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Sonnyc ignore my pm then, and updated with this one:

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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Title:Stardust Melodia
TitleUnicode:Stardust Melodia
Artist:Ceui
ArtistUnicode:Ceui
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:Kyoukai Senjou no Horizon
Tags:Asgard 境界線上のホライゾン In the middle of nowhere Ending Odaka Kotaro
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-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
경계선상의 호라이즌이다..
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc
meiikyuu

meiikyuu wrote:

Asgard's Hard
  1. 00:32:447 (6) - whistle, she sings louder note here // Makes sense. Added
  2. 01:01:596 (1) - whistle at tail // I think the vocal gets rather down that part.
  3. 01:04:145 (6) - whistle, to follow instrument // Added
  4. 01:14:332 (7) - this pattern feels better imo: // Changed.

  5. 03:33:577 (3) - NC , emphasize beginning of strong part of song
  6. 03:35:843 (1) - remove NC
comfortable play xD~

Insane
  1. 00:50:276 - add note? either way works though // I wanted to go with vocal.
  2. 01:06:125 (2) - ctrl+g , it might flow better imo // Then I think the flow to the next slider won't go nice, and that was the reason why I did a kick slider. Will see some more opinion though.
  3. 02:00:464 - if you added note from first mod then add here too
  4. 02:16:313 (2) - same as 01:06:125 (2) -
  5. 02:56:219 (1) - remove NC , previous combo is short lol // Removed
good also
difficulty level spread is nice (:
Thanks for modding!
Yumeno Himiko
Elite Storyboarder
1,168 posts
Joined August 2012
Yumeno Himiko
Hi there~
I see it's a song by Ceui so I come in >.<
Well I'm a newbie mapper.I'm trying to give you some suggestions(If I say something wrong,just ignore it >_>)

Normal
02:04:709 (3) - It seems that this circle is not at its place?

Hard
01:01:598 (1) - I think if it is better when it changes to a reverse slider

I think the Hard diff can be harder ~

Insane
01:53:672 (1) - It seems that this circle is not at its place?

Well this map is really good~ But some of the patterns may reappear too many times.Maybe try to replace them with other patterns?
I'll be glad if you come and mod my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/158376 It's also a song by Ceui ;w;

Cheers~~
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Hey, mod from queue 8-)
[Insane]
01:02:445 (4) - Replace with a flipped 01:01:879 (3) - like this:

It'll help 01:01:879 (3) - form a comforting blanket around the next several notes.

01:19:426 - 01:22:257 Consider adding these objects here:

The hit circle at 01:19:426 will hit the 'o' and the spinner at 01:19:992 - 01:22:257 will follow the vocals long hold on the 're' in fiore.
This gives a more finished feeling the playtime before the break, because the playtime also covers the vocals here.

02:12:634 (4) - Same suggestion as 01:02:445 (4) -

03:05:276 (10) - NC for slider speed change.

03:33:577 (3) - NC instead of 03:34:709 (1) - since it's the first object to land on the big white tick mark (which indicates a new rhythm cycle).

03:51:691 (1,2,3,4) - Nazi mod here, these sliders aren't centered. Rotate them 3° Degree clockwise and it should be good.

[Asgard's Hard]
00:25:654 (5) - Change finish on the head to a whistle, there's no cymbal crash here.

00:34:709 (4,5,6,1) - DS is very wrong here. The objects are too close together, when you compare the spacing between 00:34:428 (3,4) - (which are 1/2 beats apart). However, these notes 00:34:709 (4,5,6,1) - are 1 full beat apart.

01:03:579 (5,6) - Would sound and look better if these 2 notes were 1 single slider instead, so they follow the long hold on the 'sa' in sakenda.

01:13:202 (6) - NC

01:38:107 (5,6) - Same suggestion as 01:03:579 (5,6) - . Make it a long slider so it follows the vocals long hold on the 'na' in hanabira.

01:58:766 (4) - Should be starting at 01:58:908 instead, so that it hits the 'na' properly, in furuenagara. But I'm guessing you kept it the way it is now just for the sake of symmetry.
Please fix it, or consider changing 01:58:485 (3,4) - rhythm to this:


02:50:560 (3) - NC

03:01:881 (1,2) - Change to 1 single slider so it follows the vocals long hold on the 'ki' in kirameki.

03:33:577 (3) - NC and I also found something interesting here. For both sldiers 03:33:577 (3,4) - , Try adding a drum clap on the reverse end of the slider.

03:42:634 (3) - NC since it's the first object to appear in Kai time.

03:44:898 (4) - NC
03:53:955 (5) - ^

04:00:747 (3) - NC since it's the first object to appear in Kai time.

[Natsu's Normal]
cool.

Good luck!
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
But I don't wanna post...!

Fine... "quick mod"

Normal-
01:15:464 (1) - ... call me picky or whatnot, but... I don't know, i think you should drag the start of the slider up a bit, cuz the end of the slider (or the where the repeat is) seems too long if you're going for the music note art
01:22:257 - the break is off, easy fix
03:33:011 (3,1) - mmm, I just don't think that (3) should be a part of the old combo... cuz thats where vocal starts, so it would make more sense as a new combo, unless you really want to keep it for pattern/music's sake

Hard-
Silly mistake, resnap notes~

Insane-
Said my opinion on game chat, just opinions, nothing major.
(But I had some "new combo" thoughts when I looked, but since you look like you know what you're doing, not worth mentioning)

My quick mods still take at least an hour ;w;
rEdo
809 posts
Joined November 2008
rEdo
From my queue.
[Natsu's Normal]
01:15:464 (1) - I guess this note-like slider could be shaped better. Also, try to set the red sliderpoint at the exact moment where big white tick on the timeline is - the slider flips perfectly with the song like that.
03:56:219 (1) - It's almost exceeding the screen, and might cover up with certain HP Drain meters while playing with HardRock. You might want to consider moving this somewhere closer to the middle.
04:09:804 (1) - End with a finish.

[Asgard's Hard]
01:10:371 (1,2,3) - This doesn't really follow the vocals, and I can't find anything else to match these notes. Consider changing this part a little bit.
02:20:560 (1) - I was sure this would start on a 1/4 tick. Increase the distance from (8), please notice the Distance Snap meter.
02:52:824 (1) - Add a finish here, so it matches with the finishes from the beginning.
03:01:881 (1) - Just like above.

[Insane]
The copypaste quite ruined the map for me, and it was pretty good >.<

01:10:936 (1) - Missing a finish here.
02:25:087 (2,3,4,5) - I'd like to have an extra note at 02:25:653­, for this part isn't as silent as it was in the first chorus.
03:05:276 (10) - New combo.
03:51:691 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are quite close to each other, consider increasing the distance between them.


Sweet map. <3
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc
examination

examination wrote:

Hard
01:01:598 (1) - I think if it is better when it changes to a reverse slider // I think 1/4 won't be that approriate here..

I think the Hard diff can be harder ~

Insane
01:53:672 (1) - It seems that this circle is not at its place? // This much distance is fine.
crystalmask

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue 8-)
[Insane]
01:02:445 (4) - Replace with a flipped 01:01:879 (3) - like this: // Sorry, I wanted a altered symmetry here.

It'll help 01:01:879 (3) - form a comforting blanket around the next several notes.

01:19:426 - 01:22:257 Consider adding these objects here: // I think that will ruin the break..

The hit circle at 01:19:426 will hit the 'o' and the spinner at 01:19:992 - 01:22:257 will follow the vocals long hold on the 're' in fiore.
This gives a more finished feeling the playtime before the break, because the playtime also covers the vocals here.

02:12:634 (4) - Same suggestion as 01:02:445 (4) -

03:05:276 (10) - NC for slider speed change. // Well you can see that sv change isn't done in a large amount, and since it's not that hard to catch, I'd rather stick to the previous combo to fit the vocals.

03:33:577 (3) - NC instead of 03:34:709 (1) - since it's the first object to land on the big white tick mark (which indicates a new rhythm cycle). // Removed the later NC.

03:51:691 (1,2,3,4) - Nazi mod here, these sliders aren't centered. Rotate them 3° Degree clockwise and it should be good. // Fixed

[Asgard's Hard]
00:25:654 (5) - Change finish on the head to a whistle, there's no cymbal crash here. // fixed

00:34:709 (4,5,6,1) - DS is very wrong here. The objects are too close together, when you compare the spacing between 00:34:428 (3,4) - (which are 1/2 beats apart). However, these notes 00:34:709 (4,5,6,1) - are 1 full beat apart. // Fixed somehow

01:03:579 (5,6) - Would sound and look better if these 2 notes were 1 single slider instead, so they follow the long hold on the 'sa' in sakenda. // I'd prefer a aesthetic symmetry here. Sorry

01:13:202 (6) - NC // Hmm.. added.

01:38:107 (5,6) - Same suggestion as 01:03:579 (5,6) - . Make it a long slider so it follows the vocals long hold on the 'na' in hanabira.

01:58:766 (4) - Should be starting at 01:58:908 instead, so that it hits the 'na' properly, in furuenagara. But I'm guessing you kept it the way it is now just for the sake of symmetry. // Hmm fixing would be nice, but it will be hard to change, and since it isn't actually following nothing, I'll keep for now.
Please fix it, or consider changing 01:58:485 (3,4) - rhythm to this:


02:50:560 (3) - NC // NC in symmetry won't look nice.

03:01:881 (1,2) - Change to 1 single slider so it follows the vocals long hold on the 'ki' in kirameki. // Note placements along 03:01:596 (6,1,2,3) won't be bad imo..

03:33:577 (3) - NC and I also found something interesting here. For both sldiers 03:33:577 (3,4) - , Try adding a drum clap on the reverse end of the slider. // NC doesn't fits, but added drum.

03:42:634 (3) - NC since it's the first object to appear in Kai time. // Patterns are along the vocals, distributing with NC won't feel nice.

03:44:898 (4) - NC
03:53:955 (5) - ^

04:00:747 (3) - NC since it's the first object to appear in Kai time.

Good luck!
Shinxyn

Shinxyn wrote:

But I don't wanna post...!

Fine... "quick mod"

Hard-
Silly mistake, resnap notes~

Insane-
Said my opinion on game chat, just opinions, nothing major. // Fixed clap sounds etc
(But I had some "new combo" thoughts when I looked, but since you look like you know what you're doing, not worth mentioning)

My quick mods still take at least an hour ;w;
rEdo

rEdo wrote:

From my queue.

[Asgard's Hard]
01:10:371 (1,2,3) - This doesn't really follow the vocals, and I can't find anything else to match these notes. Consider changing this part a little bit. // It actually matches a clap sound, but I agree this wasn't a nice rhythm.
02:20:560 (1) - I was sure this would start on a 1/4 tick. Increase the distance from (8), please notice the Distance Snap meter. // Did something.
02:52:824 (1) - Add a finish here, so it matches with the finishes from the beginning. // Added
03:01:881 (1) - Just like above. // Add

[Insane]
The copypaste quite ruined the map for me, and it was pretty good >.<

01:10:936 (1) - Missing a finish here. // Added
02:25:087 (2,3,4,5) - I'd like to have an extra note at 02:25:653­, for this part isn't as silent as it was in the first chorus. // Added. Good point
03:05:276 (10) - New combo.
03:51:691 (1,2,3,4) - These notes are quite close to each other, consider increasing the distance between them. // Tried.


Sweet map. <3
Thanks for mods!
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
examination

examination wrote:

Hi there~


Normal
02:04:709 (3) - It seems that this circle is not at its place? mm I feel it fine


Cheers~~
Shinxyn

Shinxyn wrote:

But I don't wanna post...!

Fine... "quick mod"

Normal-
01:15:464 (1) - ... call me picky or whatnot, but... I don't know, i think you should drag the start of the slider up a bit, cuz the end of the slider (or the where the repeat is) seems too long if you're going for the music note art no is ok, I was working on this a bit should be fine now, I hope
01:22:257 - the break is off, easy fix this is on purpose, I feel like the break should be delayed a bit to fit better the song sections
03:33:011 (3,1) - mmm, I just don't think that (3) should be a part of the old combo... cuz thats where vocal starts, so it would make more sense as a new combo, unless you really want to keep it for pattern/music's sake it's for keep the pattern, mmm the onlysolution Ifeel to follow the music properly is adding a single combo there, but I'm not sure, I'll hear more opinions about this one


My quick mods still take at least an hour ;w;
rEdo

rEdo wrote:

From my queue.
[Natsu's Normal]
01:15:464 (1) - I guess this note-like slider could be shaped better. Also, try to set the red sliderpoint at the exact moment where big white tick on the timeline is - the slider flips perfectly with the song like that. I reworked this on previous mod
03:56:219 (1) - It's almost exceeding the screen, and might cover up with certain HP Drain meters while playing with HardRock. You might want to consider moving this somewhere closer to the middle. already tested the heart, just touch it abit with HR, not abig problem imo
04:09:804 (1) - End with a finish. okisSweet map. <3

thanks for mods, btw add me in tags :'c

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Neta
536 posts
Joined May 2011
Neta
안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 왔습니다

[Natsu's Normal]
  1. 02:03:011 (1) - how about move to 304, 92 ? it looks better i think
  2. 03:33:577 (1,2,3) - this looks little weird.. so i recommend this one but maybe i can be on your purpose
    SPOILER
  3. nice

[Asgard's Hard]
  1. 00:33:011 - 여기 노트 하나 넣어보시는건 어떤가요. 약간 빈느낌이 들어요
  2. 01:50:559 (3) - 약간 블랭킷에서 벗어났는데 500, 156 으로 옮겨주세요
  3. 02:02:728 (8,1) - 이거보다는 3연타 쪽이 낫지 않을까요?
  4. 03:05:276 (6) - NC 넣어주세요 (슬라 변속)
  5. 03:33:294 (2) - Prev랑 Next랑 차이가 좀 나는데 100, 288 추천 드려요
    SPOILER
  6. 04:05:276 (1) - NC 넣으신 이유가 있나요?

[Insane]
  1. 03:05:276 (10) - NC! 슬라변속
  2. 잘만드신듯
딱히 고칠점은 없는거같아요

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Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc
Neta

Neta wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 왔습니다

[Asgard's Hard]
  1. 00:33:011 - 여기 노트 하나 넣어보시는건 어떤가요. 약간 빈느낌이 들어요 // 음 이 파트는 가사가 비어서 비운거라<<
  2. 01:50:559 (3) - 약간 블랭킷에서 벗어났는데 500, 156 으로 옮겨주세요 // (2)를 한칸 옮겼습니다.
  3. 02:02:728 (8,1) - 이거보다는 3연타 쪽이 낫지 않을까요? // 변경
  4. 03:05:276 (6) - NC 넣어주세요 (슬라 변속) // 여기는 원래 있었는데,, 추가
  5. 03:33:294 (2) - Prev랑 Next랑 차이가 좀 나는데 100, 288 추천 드려요
    SPOILER
    // 옮겼습니다
  6. 04:05:276 (1) - NC 넣으신 이유가 있나요? // 사각 대칭이 04:06:125 (1) 부터 시작하기 때문에 미형상 이런 처리를 했습니다.

[Insane]
  1. 03:05:276 (10) - NC! 슬라변속 // 큰 변동이 아니고 음악과 호응해서 이부분은 놔두고 싶습니다.
  2. 잘만드신듯
딱히 고칠점은 없는거같아요

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감사합니다.
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Neta wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐에서 왔습니다

[Natsu's Normal]
  1. 02:03:011 (1) - how about move to 304, 92 ? it looks better i think ok
  2. 03:33:577 (1,2,3) - this looks little weird.. so i recommend this one but maybe i can be on your purpose I prefer mine <:
  3. nice thanks
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Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
저도 매빙 잘하고 시버요
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
Hello

General:

Insane:
tbh I don't think normal whistles suits to this song
01:06:125 (2) - you may ctrl+g that, but not a big deal
00:53:955 (4) - slightly offgrid
02:06:408 (1) - copy paste makes me sad, really map is sweet until you meet just mirrored copy-paste
get rid of copy paste part, make new cool patterns there and i'll vote this for best map 2014

Asgard's Hard:
00:27:634 (1,2,3) - try manual stack in such spots, and instead of http://puu.sh/85nyR.jpg there will be http://puu.sh/85nBk.jpg
00:38:672 (4,5) - that's kinda strange spacing because here 00:36:691 (6,1) - and 00:40:087 (2,4,6) - you use 1.3 DS and nothing changed in music
02:18:860 (6,7,8) - this flow is awkward a bit crtl+g them?
nice hitsounding

Natsu's Normal:
01:15:464 (1) - wow
clear, nice art

except this little copy-paste part on insane orz mapset is pretty ready imo
GL
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Sonnyc

Sieg wrote:

Hello

General:

Insane:
tbh I don't think normal whistles suits to this song
01:06:125 (2) - you may ctrl+g that, but not a big deal // Sorry, I prefer the kick..
00:53:955 (4) - slightly offgrid // Yes it's offgrid, but since it isn't offscreen, I'm sure this is acceptable.
02:06:408 (1) - copy paste makes me sad, really map is sweet until you meet just mirrored copy-paste // Sorry. I'll try mapping.
get rid of copy paste part, make new cool patterns there and i'll vote this for best map 2014

Asgard's Hard:
00:27:634 (1,2,3) - try manual stack in such spots, and instead of http://puu.sh/85nyR.jpg there will be http://puu.sh/85nBk.jpg // Sorry, I think it will be bad in reading..
00:38:672 (4,5) - that's kinda strange spacing because here 00:36:691 (6,1) - and 00:40:087 (2,4,6) - you use 1.3 DS and nothing changed in music // Fixed.
02:18:860 (6,7,8) - this flow is awkward a bit crtl+g them? // Stacked instead.
nice hitsounding

except this little copy-paste part on insane orz mapset is pretty ready imo
GL
Thanks!
Trust
1,240 posts
Joined March 2012
Trust
Hey, sorry for the wait

[General]
  1. Because Natsu is moe, you should add Natsu to the tags!
[Natsu's Normal]
  1. 01:49:426 (1,2,3,4) - The tails aren't perfectly stacked lol. Here you go~
    Code
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    Beautiful and perfect. just like you
[Asgard's Hard]
  1. 01:31:313 (1) - Not that big of a deal but the head of this slider and tail of 01:32:445 (3) pinch closely together and just barely touch in gameplay. I would space these two sliders a little further apart.
  2. 01:56:219 (5) - Feels rather empty without a hit-sound. Consider adding a finish on the head and changing the tail to a whistle.
  3. 03:29:049 (1) - I would make use of S:C99 here and silence this sliderslide for a nice effect with how this part plays softly.
[Insane]
  1. 01:50:559 (5) - It's hard to notice because of the angle, but the upper portion of this slider is less curved than the bottom portion. You can move the node at x:392 y:92 to the left a couple grids to have both parts with similar curves for a cleaner shape. Another thing to mention is the drum-clap on the tail isn't very fitting. I would prefer you use a soft-clap instead like you did for 01:53:389 (5), it would keep the claps consistent for this musical section.
  2. 02:55:653 (2) - Perhaps add a whistle or drum-finish on the head to put emphasis on the beat here.
  3. 03:47:162 (1) - You used a soft-finish for this part in the other kiais. Consider using one on the head instead of a drum-sample.
  4. 03:51:125 (2) - I see a drum addition on the head but no hit-sound to go along. Did you mean to use a drum-finish here? If not, a cool idea would be to use a normal whistle on the slider-body (and head if you would like) to accentuate the vocal that's held for the duration of the slider.
  5. 03:57:351 (5) - Add a whistle to the tail. It gives this nice effect with the how the vocals rise in pitch at the end of the slider.

    A very clean and safe approach to mapping. Excellent stuff!
Sorry it isn't much, but everything is very well done! I hope some of this helps~
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Fixed, also I added myself in tags :(

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KSHR

Trust wrote:

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