CLSW wrote:

[Cup]
00:11:202 (3) - use 00:11:876 (4,5). i saw on testplay and they are same altho using different objects so i'm lazy to use circles lol

[Rain]
00:21:989 (1) - x : 88, it would be hyper-dashed. sure
00:22:326 (2) - make it horizontal. sorry i wanna keep consistency with previous
00:22:663 (3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475222 here is my recommend.sure for better flow
00:49:629 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Overdose+ tier jump. It's too hard for Rain lovers. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475229 Try this. wanna keep first since this is an epic pattern, also i reduced the distance until 4 times. i tried it as it can played with well for Rain diff imo
00:55:696 (1) - x : 260 ok

Nice song and map!

1. In all the difficulties, exept the cup one, the first tag is "ekijouban", a g ismissing, it should be "gekijouban".

1. 00:50:303 (1) - I'd rather see this slider going in the opposite direction, because the music becomes more "dynamic" from here. Going backward would emphasize this dynamism more efficiently!
   Just try something like this and you'll see what I mean
   
   :3

   
2. 01:04:629 (3,1) - Increase the spacing a bit between those two notes ? That would give more vivacity to the pattern without making it harder.
3. 01:15:415 (3,1) - ^ Same thing as above ?

1. 00:49:123 (3) - If you actually want to follow the drums here, the slider should end at 00:49:292, because there is nothing in the music on this blue tick.

1. 00:42:213 (1) - Increase this jump maybe, I find it to short compared to your previous patterns and the drums in the music.
2. 00:49:123 (3) - Same thing I mentionned in the Salad difficulty.
3. 01:13:730 (2) - What about moving this circle close to 01:14:067 (3) ? That'd fit the music better in my opinion.
   
   :3

   

1. 00:17:607 (4,1) - Make a hyperdash between those 2 notes, and the pattern will suddenly become awesome *.*
2. 00:33:786 (6,1) - Same thing with this slider!
3. 00:40:865 (1) - I'd rather see a jump here, because this is what you did at almost every downbeat (the big white ticks on the timeline), because that fits the music. So why not having on here too? Invert the positions of 00:40:865 (1,2) maybe?
4. 00:50:191 (10,1) - To add more vivacity to this stream, why not making a hyperdash between those notes ?

Kurai wrote:

[Tags]

1. In all the difficulties, exept the cup one, the first tag is "ekijouban", a g ismissing, it should be "gekijouban". my bad, fixed

[Cup]

1. 00:50:303 (1) - I'd rather see this slider going in the opposite direction, because the music becomes more "dynamic" from here. Going backward would emphasize this dynamism more efficiently!
   Just try something like this and you'll see what I mean sure, flow become better
   
   :3

   
2. 01:04:629 (3,1) - Increase the spacing a bit between those two notes ? That would give more vivacity to the pattern without making it harder. sure to make the distance neater here
3. 01:15:415 (3,1) - ^ Same thing as above ? fixed as i told above :3

[Rain]

1. 00:17:607 (4,1) - Make a hyperdash between those 2 notes, and the pattern will suddenly become awesome *.* sure *.*
2. 00:33:786 (6,1) - Same thing with this slider! sure
3. 00:40:865 (1) - I'd rather see a jump here, because this is what you did at almost every downbeat (the big white ticks on the timeline), because that fits the music. So why not having on here too? Invert the positions of 00:40:865 (1,2) maybe? nice idea xD
4. 00:50:191 (10,1) - To add more vivacity to this stream, why not making a hyperdash between those notes ? firstly i thought a little bit hard because 1/3 but i tried and it was awesome so fixed :3

I don't have much to say on this mapset, it's really well done, good job! :3 arigatou Kurai-san :3

Kurai wrote:

[Tags]

1. In all the difficulties, exept the cup one, the first tag is "ekijouban", a g ismissing, it should be "gekijouban".

[m1ng's Salad]

1. 00:49:123 (3) - If you actually want to follow the drums here, the slider should end at 00:49:292, because there is nothing in the music on this blue tick.okay

[m1ng's Platter]

1. 00:42:213 (1) - Increase this jump maybe, I find it to short compared to your previous patterns and the drums in the music. moved to a bit left :3
2. 00:49:123 (3) - Same thing I mentionned in the Salad difficulty. okay
3. 01:13:730 (2) - What about moving this circle close to 01:14:067 (3) ? That'd fit the music better in my opinion. hihii changed :3
   
   :3

   

I don't have much to say on this mapset, it's really well done, good job! :3

Vhy wrote:

hi hi Xinely ~
here's mod from my queue. yesss 2kds :3
yeaaa 1st CtB mod eper!!

[Cup]
00:25:359 (4,5) - kalo menurut ku sih lebih bagus yang (5) ditaruh di sebelah kiri yang (4). trus yang (4) coba ditambah DS nya dikit. x:324 mungkin ok
00:59:741 (2) - umm bukannya lebih cocok pake drum-finish buat kepala sama ekor disini? ekor doang, konsisten sama rain
01:02:101 (4) - clap kayanya bagus disini ada nya suara violin jadi clap ga cocok. ganti nya whistle aja deh biar konsisten sama rain
01:06:483 (2,3) - try this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/8rXut.jpg nice, fixed
01:14:572 (2) - try x:364. flow lebih enakan keep, aku pengen buat flow gampang yang follow nya gampang juga buat newbie

[Rain]
00:10:191 (2,4) - geser ke kiri lagi ok
00:27:887 (2) - coba ini? http://puu.sh/8rYNA.jpg ryuuta moves better entar slider 1 sama 2 ke stack dong. q rubah dikit aja deh
01:00:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - nah kenapa kalo aku disini lebih milih pake low distance karena disini lagunya yang apalah... santai moment? eh piano nya .__. sehabis itu juga ada stream nice idea, reduced tp ga banyak amat krn pianonya jg keras

hope this helps ;w;