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SMiLE.dk - Koko Soko

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Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
Missing some lyric SB, if you DO have all the lyric SB, go full submit so it's added in.

KrisomMix - add a preview point. <- add a space between Krisom and Mix?
kiai time in a area where they start to get quiter? I dunno but it jsut doesn't feel right..
01:22:003 (3) - too close

LoogieMix <- add a space between Loogie and Mix?
Fine to me.

Found
Kiai thing.

starred'
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
SB Fix. <3Download: SMiLE.dk - Koko Soko (ouranhshc).osb
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Everything )except some parts( is subtitle'd,Download: SMiLE.dk - Koko Soko (ouranhshc).osb
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
Is the lyric SB uncompleted?
Remove the flashy sb. Ok if it happens one or twice, but DEFINITELY NOT IN A ROW. You are better off using kiai at those parts.

[Krisom]
Nazi 00:49:67 (1,2,3,4) - Move two ticks left and 3 ticks right.
01:22:24 (4,5) - Move 1/2 to the left on the timeline.

[Loogie]
Decrease hitsound volume, perferrably(?) on the 4th line from the right.
Nazi 00:15:81 (3,4) - Move 1 tick down
Nazi 00:43:24 (2) - Make this straight. Move the slider end without using grid snap.
Nazi 00:46:67 (2) - ^
Nazi 01:06:35 - I like how this is flashier than the lyrics. (Not.)

[Found]
00:23:53 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too high. Move this down by to ticks.
00:51:60 (11,12,13,14) - Sounds weird.
00:56:53 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Sounds weird.

Starred, I guess.
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Nharox
[Overall]

00:23:530 - Lyrics are missing. It's "Who is lost in the dark."

[Found]

So many +10 combos. Go place some new combos. :P And why not use some sliders? There are only 4 of them.

[Loogie Mix]

00:05:101 (1) - Too close to the previous note.
00:08:530 (1) - ^
00:15:387 (1) - ^
01:17:101 (1) - ^
01:04:244 - Why would you display the "by Loogiesquared" again?

Try the AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) because the only problem is the spacing. And you might add kiai time like the other 2 diffs did.

[Krisom Mix] is fine.
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[Krisom Mix]
  1. Everything's fine, just needs more hitsounds. :P
[Loogie Mix]

01:04:244 - We already saw your name at the beginning, Loogiesquared.
Kim Jin Seok
369 posts
Joined December 2008
Kim Jin Seok
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Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Offset = 1695 (resnap all notes)

[Krisom mix]

It's ok

[Loogie mix]

It's ok

[Found]

It's ok

Starred~
Last edited by Diasios , edited 1 time in total.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: Yes.
Custom Skin: Yes.
Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes. (Capitalize all the tags.)
File Size: 3,83MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 140,00 - Offset: 1.705 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Krisom Mix]

00:40:024 (2,3,4) - Too hard for the most easier difficulty.
01:05:074 (3) - Partially offscreen.

[Loogie Mix]

No major problems found.

[Found]

Increase HP Drain by 1 tick for balance with Overall difficulty?

00:12:060 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:003 (1) - ^
00:19:045 (1) - ^
00:30:038 (6) - Invisible slider.
00:31:024 (9) - ^
00:34:045 (9) - New combo.
00:35:095 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Unexpected change of spacing.
01:07:045 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:088 (1) - ^
01:23:053 (6) - Just a suggestion: Add hitwhistle.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
La dedadedadeda La dedadeda :3
timing sounds good imo

Krisom Mix
looks fine ^^

Loogie Mix
same here

Found
diff looks tight dawg, just resnap all notes, a lot aren't snapped, like well the first pattern actually
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
KRISOM MIX
Fine, in fact, it's very good.

LOOGIE MIX
Purely suggestion : For these beats placement and all other similar ones 00:08:055 (1,2,3,4,5) , remove these notes for better flow 00:09:009 (4) ?
Others are fine, and it's fun.

FOUND
00:10:078 (4) - remove clap
00:17:034 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Imho, I think clap spams are not flaterring xD Also, O.O at the beat placement.
00:42:020 (1,2) - VERY bad jump imho. xD
00:50:044 (5) - This beat is weird imo. Remove it ?
00:53:087 (5) - ^
00:56:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - I think the way you "clap" here is very not flattering. Try clap only at these notes 00:56:098 (3,6,9,1,3,5) - ?
01:14:034 (4) - A sudden whistle ? O.O Remove it ? xD
Sorry to dissapoint you but to me, box mapping is not flattering and not fun to play, but this is definitely better than your last map. =D *You can PM me for further impressions on this diff... xD

GENERAL
1. The skin of hitcircle is too hard to see imho (It's too transparent). Imagine playing that translucent hitcircles in FOUND difficulty, I reckon it would be very frustrating to some players. xD Consider increase its opacity ?

2. BG makes the hitcircles even harder to see.

3. Kiai makes the hitcircles even even even harder to see.

Conclusion : either fix the BG or hitcircle.

Star, and good luck !
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
here is the SB

Download: SMiLE.dk - Koko Soko (ouranhshc).osb
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[Krimson Mix]
Nazi
01:22:005 (3) - move this one grid to the left (aligns with #4)
Get a "By Krimson" SB like [Loogie Mix]?

[Loogie Mix]
Nazi
00:08:087 (2,3,4,5) - Lets try it to make it easier like sliders or something so it makes sense with other notes. Don't have to
00:43:027 (2) - Ugly, straighten it
00:46:069 (2) - ^
00:52:048 (x,x) - Just my tast. Add notes on red and white tick.
00:55:091 (x,x) - ^ with claps

[Found]
Nazi
00:14:034 (3) - move this 1 grid to the right
00:21:020 (3) - one grid to the left
Huge improvement since the first version :D

Most of them are my taste. Staarreed
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Tags: Please add which game this came from

Krisom Mix:
You might want to put your kiai sections directly on the note since they are slightly before the note right now.
Combo mod:
00:17:128 (3) - new combo to be consistent with 00:10:485 (1)?
01:11:985 (3) - ^

Timing section mod:
01:22:994 - unneeded timing section

Loogie Mix:
The slider-slide sounds bad, so please lower the hitsound volume or add a custom one.
Also, 10+s of almost straight break in a 85s song is pretty boring and annoying to go through, so please map some of the breaks
Combo mod:
You seem quite indecisive on how many lines of lyrics you want in a combo. Sometimes there is 1 line, and at other times, you have 2. I advise you make them all consistent. Ex: 00:39:414 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) and 00:42:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)

Found:
I don't know y, but the combos feel so similar to each other that the map feels copy and pasted at some parts even though they are arranged differently.
You might want to put your kiai sections directly on the note since they are slightly before the note right now.
Combo mod:
00:29:985 (1,2,3,1) - feels better if you add a new combo to 2 and remove both 1s' new combos
00:47:985 (8) - new combo to follow the lyrics and your combo pattern
01:01:057 (1,3) - fits the lyrics better if you remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3

---
Nice map overall.
Star.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old



Download: SMiLE.dk - Koko Soko (ouranhshc) [Krisom Mix].osu
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Loogie]
00:44:055 (5,6,7,8,9) - Don't put five finishes in a row! Really, the entire song has way too much finish.

[Found]
Too much finish here, too.
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Krisom Mix]
00:44:98(4,5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
00:54:84(7) - How about align both (4) and (7)'s end?
00:56:55(1) - Make its end to align with center line.

[Loogie Mix]
No issues :3

[Found]
00:15:73(4) - [Suggestion] How about move little up to make line with (3)'s end,(4),(5)'s start?
00:31:70(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?

Good map :3
I hope it will be ranked soon.

Here's my star X3
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[Krisom]
Nazi 01:23:128 - End kiai here. currently it ends a little early.

[Loo]
Nazi 00:46:69 (2) - Silder is not straight. Fix this whole combo.
The ending stinks a little, since you go though a 10 second break just to hit a few beats.

Nothing [Found], geddit? *shot*
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
done
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
//Krimson Mix// - Cool diff
  1. 00:08:557(1) - Finish hitsound on the first hit
  2. 00:15:414(1) - ^
  3. 00:16:271(2) - Just a detail: Could you please move 4 level 3 grids to the right? I think it's better this way
  4. 00;22:271(1) - Finish hitsound on the first hit
  5. 01:03:414(1) - ^
  6. 01:10:271(1) - ^
  7. 01:17:100(timing section) - This one is too close to the hitcircle. If the player hit it a little earlier, the sound will be the one from the previous timing section. Make it earlier, please.
//Loogie Mix// - A little bit repetituve but it's fun!
  1. 00:05:140(timing section) - it's on the top of the hitcircle. If the player hit it a little earlier, the sound will be the one from the previous timing section. Make it earlier, please.
  2. 01:01:699(8) - New Combo?
    Hum... No kiai?
//Found// - The taiko hitsounds, nice :]
  1. 01:22:485(1) - I think it's better no New Combo here =/
//Overall//
The hitcircle skin is cool but it's a little bit hard to see what is >_<
I took a while to guess that they are butterflies =/
Make the pic black and white may fix this problem.

Great map. Star~ ;)
Kerensa
167 posts
Joined January 2009
Kerensa
O.o

Kris...:
01:08:342 [3]one tiny square down.

Loogie:
00:09:092 [*] whats with the gap between 2,3?\

star ~
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: SMiLE.dk - Koko Soko (ouranhshc) [Loogie Mix].osu
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
loogie, wtf

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1273

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1274
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
- General / All diff's.
  1. Offset 1685.
  2. Ending kiai feels 'out of place', maybe delete it (?)
- Found.
  1. All good.
- Krisom Mix.
  1. Decrease overall difficulty by one (?)
Starred~
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Tags: You should probably add DDR and Dance Dance Revolution. Also you should add the person who sbed the lyrics

Krisom Mix: fine

Found:
00:33:185 (5,6) - add a new combo to one of these notes for the lyrics

===
Very minor things. Hope you get the song ranked soon.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Krisom Mix
Sounds good!

Found
00:13:899 (1,2,3) - move them a square right
00:27:827 (2) - move it 3 squares down and 3 squares left
01:13:470 (1,2,3) - move them a square right

Let's star this well-storyboarded map! ;3
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
Krisom Mix
00:19:685 (2,1) - What. Kill a repeat and at least move the (1) further away. I totally almost got an X here.
00:40:256 (2) - Almost combo-broke here, too.

Found
What kind of diff. name is this?

All checks out though.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,945 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Offset: 1700

Aside from that, looking good. Fix offset and I'll bubble.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Ephemeral wrote:

Offset: 1700

Aside from that, looking good. Fix offset and I'll bubble.
FIXED
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
smile.dk :D
nice map and perfect storyboard
just advice
[Hard]
how about add a note on both 00:42:200 & 00:42:414 (with clap)you can make it a jump XD
00:55:914 ^
01:09:628 ^

have your star~
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[General]
  1. I'd appreciate it if you made an easier difficulty.
  2. You should make a clarification about the Taiko hitsounds in the first post or something.
  3. Erase "Koko Soko smile.dk" from the tags, since they're already in other fields. Also, the source would fit more as tags.
[Storyboard]
  1. Some of the lyrics images are the same, please recheck and delete the unnecessary ones (Example: All the "LyricsA#" are the same as other images). If you have trouble with the script, call me.
  2. Krimson.png is not used.
[Hard]

00:42:399 (2,1) - This little spacing problem tripped me up, recheck it.
00:56:113 (2,1) - ^

~ ~ ~

Wow, this map changed a lot. I like how did you used the Taiko hitsounds though. :P
Gens
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Gens
Almost there.

00:44:542 - Missing storyboard.
Lyrics11.png and LyricsA2.png are still the same.

Your easy is pretty good. :)

(Oh and yes, do not give me kudosu for this post)
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Gens wrote:

Almost there.

00:44:542 - Missing storyboard.
Lyrics11.png and LyricsA2.png are still the same.

Your easy is pretty good. :)

(Oh and yes, do not give me kudosu for this post)
whoops i misread it
Gens
osu! Alumni
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Gens
Good, you fixed the missing storyboard, but the Lyrics11.png and LyricsA2.png are still there. =/

Also, before I forget again, you should have a valid reason why "Bemani Konami" is set as the source, and if not, put it in the tags field instead.

(and do not give kudosu to this post)
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Gens wrote:

Good, you fixed the missing storyboard, but the Lyrics11.png and LyricsA2.png are still there.fixed =/

Also, before I forget again, you should have a valid reason why "Bemani Konami" is set as the sourceChanged source to Dance Dance Revolution, moved Bemani to Tags, and if not, put it in the tags field instead.

(and do not give kudosu to this post)
fixed
Gens
osu! Alumni
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Gens
Thaaat's it. Proto-bubbling!
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Upgrading proto-bubble!

-insert transformation noises here-
Mystearica
Mystearica
Well, overall it's quite an improvement from your Alfarshear map, so good job for that.

Although...

If your custom hitsounds were meant to make people laugh, it certainly worked on me.

Remove all of your custom hitsounds, trust me. Just because you have custom hitsounds doesn't mean your map is better UNLESS the custom sounds actually fits the song better than the default samples.

Map played fine for me other than the lol hitsounds. So uh, for that reason if I had the power to pop this, I would. Don't think I have any other complaints.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc
aww, but i liked the hitsounds :cry: :( :cry: :(
Mystearica
Mystearica
I guess there's no way I can convince you that they don't fit for now eh?

You're going to see this eventually, too bad I don't have any powers to do anything to make you change it.

Meh, lol hitsounds are lol.
Skyripper
osu! Alumni
1,016 posts
Joined August 2008
Skyripper
I strongly suggest removing the taiko hitsounds and using a dimmer background. It is incredibly hard to sit the beats up against that background I don't really feel the taiko hitsounds fit.

I'm suggesting this as a player, and not as a BAT.

Everything else is tip top.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
fixed, new background, new combo color, redid hitsounds on hard.
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
no BG???
---------------

lol...(DL again...

nice map

star~ :) :)
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Its fine.

Star~

Hard feels over mapped for me, but this is just me I guess.
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
Everything looks spiffy to me. Though I hope I haven't overlooked something. That'd be embarassing.

It actually is impressive seeing the difference between this and early Zero and Alfarshear versions. I especially liked Hard and the crisp look of the map and upbeat song and style.

I give it my approval, good job. I don't know how Proto-bubbles, popping, and re-Proto-bubbling would go at the moment. Since it would appear it's been popped by Skipper? I'll leave it as giving my star and a thumbs up.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,945 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Bubble repair (hitsounds removed, BG changed, easy diff added)
Larto
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Joined June 2008
Larto
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
MegaManEXE
710 posts
Here since the beginning
MegaManEXE
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ouranhshc
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc
i kinda like catharsis garden and sacred oath the best out all my maps so far
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