I can't get this song out of my head! I'm not going to post hitsound suggestions but here is my mod:
General:
Add audio lead in, 1.5-2 seconds should be sufficient - do this for all difficulties.
Also where is the difficulty differences, both your difficulty and Loogie's are set to normal on everything (though mapped differently) Krisom's is difficulty normal but hp drain rate lower. I suggest reducing Krisom's difficulty by 1 and increase the difficulty of either Loogie or yours. You also need an insane
Timing:
The offset seems off I'm hitting 45ms early and getting an SS.
SBI never usually mod SB but this seems so random, why do random song lyrics appear in the middle of no where?:
00:22:673 "I'm looking for a friend"
The next installment of lyrics is at 00:41:349 - "Can't find you in the dark"
Then you have to wait another 40 seconds to get the last few lyrics.
This is so random it made me laugh, for that keep it, someone else will probably point this out though
KrisomMix00:29:095 (2) - Nothing wrong with the way it is but I think it would be better opposite 00:29:010 (1) - makes the player move a little more. Adjust the rest of the combo if you take this suggestion.
00:40:024 (2) - Make this repeat 3 times so you catch "Asoko" - one word. Add an extra beat to the start of 00:41:010 (3) - stack it or something if you decide to take the above suggestion.
00:43:024 (2) - I personally dislike these designs on small sliders, it may throw off a new player, otherwise it's fine. This applied to the others as well.
01:08:031 (3) - You could move this up slightly to make it land right in the center of the previous two sliders.
01:20:053 (1) - Reposition this it doesn't look very good landing on the top of a slider.
LoogieMix:
00:16:003 - Add a beat here, without it ruins you rhythm imo.
00:53:010 (1) - Start on the red tick [Left]
01:05:208 - Do you have to show your name twice?
01:13:003 (1,2) - This just doesn't work as well as 01:09:060 (1,2) - I'd recommend just deleting it and doing something else.
Found: - Why this difficulty name?
The whole difficulty is set to normal,
00:02:095 (7) - Right one.
00:06:060 (1) - New combo?
00:10:003 (10) - ^
00:12:081 (9) - ^
00:16:088 (12) - ^
00:23:053 (7) - ^
00:37:067 (10) - ^
00:40:088 (8) - ^
00:41:095 (13) - Remove this clap to make 00:42:017 (1,2) - sound better.
00:44:031 (8) - New combo?
00:47:095 (9) - ^
00:50:031 - Beat?
00:51:038 (10) - New Combo
00:52:003 - Beat?
00:53:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Apply ^ on this combo to.
00:56:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Same as ^ but add a beat to 00:57:060 -
00:59:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^
Ouran you didn't use a single slider in this whole song
If you really want to map it this way I'd suggest making the circles bigger, also break up some of the combo's they get too long.
Apologies for the lengthy mod, star!