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Koiyuki
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香草依依

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

yuki yuki ~here your ticket
sry for late> <
咱的很多建议yuki肯定会觉得“乃实力不够呀 快回家修炼吧”但是咱觉得这些图就节奏而言都不难 很多地方如果overmap就毁歌惹> <
所以咱的mod比较偏向突出原曲的风格 如果yuki不喜欢ignore就好
[General]
  1. none
[naorathon]
  1. nao拉松OD8 不好呀 （10分钟的曲子后面挺容易出现疲劳迟钝的 放过玩家吧> < 会考虑改成od7的~
  2. 打开aimod查下unsnap 好像有四个 fixed

  1. 曲一
  2. 00:20:829 (2) - 这个spacing变化有些太大了一点 挺突然的 试试这样 因为第一首歌bpm低，看上去间距大其实很容易打的
    另外如果这么做的话 后面4和6要ctrl+G兑换位子> <
  3. 00:21:412 - 00:30:732 - 00:40:052 - 00:42:383 - 00:49:373 - 00:51:703 - 另外这些音不要了咩？这些都是对节奏玩家掌控节奏很好的点漏掉大丈夫？ 大丈夫
  4. 00:42:674 (4) - circle的位子不太好 （为什么不480,96呢？ 用的blanket，顺便接2的尾
  5. 00:47:043 (5,6) - 这个太远了> < 建议和23叠起来 5和3叠起来也可以，另外建议7和4叠起来，因为这里有跳大多数玩家可以依靠记忆住4的位子就可以打好这个二连 不改，理由上面有说
  6. 00:48:790 (2) - 这里的spacing真的有些大，咱也想不到太好的办法 可以试试1和2的头叠起来 虽然不太好看但是玩起来还勉强可以> < 不喜欢ignore就好 ^
  7. 第一首曲子的音效建议不要只是24clap，比如00:24:616 (6) - 00:28:402 (5) - 00:47:043 (5) - 都可以加clap突出节奏 等等... 这里加clap就有点吵了
  1. 曲二
  2. offset+7ms 其实是-7吧…… -7 is better
  3. 01:07:771 - 01:11:674 - 这些音为什么要漏过去呀 玩起来怪怪的 妮妮的GD里面乃应该做过这个 不该空出来的吧 因为我是故意的
  1. 曲三
  2. 02:07:442 (3,4,1) - 这里好坑啊 可以去掉或者 4和1叠起来试试呢？另外这个滑条离前一个的spacing有些小 改成两个circle做跳应该挺好的 故意的
  3. 02:19:886 (5) - 这个跳的略微厉害 是问题不是spacing是flow不太好 容易怨念断> < 5的滑条走向是逆时针 但是这里突然转成顺时针的连打了（提一下而已 考虑一下
  1. 曲四
  2. 02:49:069 - 这里那么特殊为什么不放缓节奏呢？ 没看懂
  3. 03:01:422 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的flow不太好 建议2和3对换下时间位子就好 故意的
  4. 03:01:863 (3) - 这里是连打音效别再24拍了03:01:863 (3) - 去掉头上的clap 03:01:643 (2) - 头上加clap 03:02:084 (4) - 头尾都加clap 但是这里音乐就是24clap
  1. 曲五
  2. 03:40:647 (7,8,9,10) - 这个flow不太好 这样感觉顺畅一些 如果yuki觉得不想堆到一起可以反过来这样的flow 目前的flow正好反过来了 最后的滑条也没对着circle 其实这个flow没问题的~
  1. 曲六
  2. 这里是咱tsetplay出现miss最多的一段 有好多连打感觉太勉强 不合曲子的节奏 （这个曲子非常适合做跳图 连打不适合这个曲子 yuki的实力打这个没问题 但是4000以上玩就明显感觉很多地方出现难以预料的连打
  3. 03:46:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这个连打是不合适的 曲子里面3和4中间还有个音 我本来3是放的一个1/8滑条，想想还是去掉了，没必要搞那么难
  4. 03:47:704 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个5连太勉强了03:48:015 - 这里是应该空出来的吧 不啊，有个vocal><
  5. 03:49:359 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
  6. 03:51:222 (4,5,6) - 这个也太勉强了 这个节奏做成跳会很棒的这个我会考虑下
  7. 03:58:049 (5,6,7,8) - 同样很勉强 ^
  8. 03:55:980 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
  9. 03:51:842 (1,1,1) - 这个梗想法挺好的 但是这里滑条速度太快了滑条尾巴上还有个tick很容易断 而且后面的连打光标移动速度和sv差别挺大的 会1分的， 咱建议这里不要sv变化做成跳 这里我觉得这样比较fun而且滑条的颜色变化比较明显，又是slidertick2看得出来变速的
  10. 03:59:084 (3,4) - ...这个也挺坑的 :D
  11. 04:11:394 (9,3) - 这两个5连也很勉强 可以去掉9和3 懒得去了
  1. 曲七
  2. 04:31:477 - 连打里面咱感觉这个音没有呀 不空出来成三三连咩？（这里如果yuki认为有的话 咱觉得鼓声的音量有变化也应该做出些改变 抄rank图的233
  3. 04:42:777 (3) - 这个叠到2上反而要好些> < 故意的
  1. 曲八
  2. 挺好的就是觉得05:02:430 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个梗和后面节奏一样 可以尝试些变化让曲子更好玩一些 比如三连和折返的时间点反过来呀什么的 虽然实质没什么区别 乃全部选中ctrl+G试试就知道惹 想不到梗啊 啊啊啊啊啊
  1. 曲九
  2. 挺好的 开头有些跳05:31:425 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing可不可以整体小些 我想应该不用
  1. 曲十
  2. 用了好多1/4滑条 怪怪的 没有太大问题 就是音效哒哒哒的是不是可以稍微调小一些 本来就是大大大
  1. 曲十二
  2. offest - 4 ms 应该是+4……fixed
  1. 曲十三
  2. 08:25:999 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这两个三连怪怪的 这里这么做有什么特殊原因咩？奇怪吗？
  3. 08:30:589 (1,2) - 欺诈性太强了 最好不要叠起来吧 没必要.-.
  1. 曲十四
  2. 09:15:404 (1,2) - 这个spacing太欺诈了 放开一些吧 其实打的时候就感受不到了=w=
  3. 09:14:766 (1,2,3,4) - 这里是不是有些太难了难度的前后差异有些明显呢 很好读 但是这里的flow不太好， 光标走不动。testplay的时候这里差点fail 嗯这里会考虑改下梗的
  1. 曲十五
  2. 10:00:859 (1) - 这个折返箭头完全和和滑条不是一个方向了 而且只是折返处拐弯了一下 一不小心就会把折返漏掉（这里拐弯强烈建议去掉 不不不不
  3. 09:47:047 (2,3) - 这个跳有些莫名其妙 没有特别的重音节点spacing突然变大了miss几率太高了 嗯这个是跳？
  4. 10:05:463 - 这里建议滑条尾缩短加一个circle （原因挺明显的 就是这里太空了 再接个折返 那就有点难了=.= 我抄rank图的节奏的
  5. 10:07:245 (2) - 时间点不对 这个circle应该在10:07:097 - 要好些 这个我也是超rank图的
  1. 曲十六
  2. 10:28:944 (3) - sv太快了...会断折返> < 这个乃应该懂得呀 因为星爷的也是这么快嘛，这里我改下
  3. 11:48:727 (1) - 最后的转盘音量调到最小 （这spinner好长.... 最小貌似unrankable所以调的20%
就这么多了> < 这个mod好水丫..
谢啦，thanks for modding!

可爱飞球

Fycho wrote:

真是的=。=音效是最该注意的为何你们都不注意，好，我来写篇音效，虽然比较长但很多是音效改起来并不烦。
[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Bold: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix
[General]
  1. 做个SB把每首歌的歌名显示在上面？毕竟难得一见的马拉松 麻花在做tuo
[naorathon]
  1. 00:19:082 –第一个part音效略吵，建议降个10%，用50和60 好
  2. 00:38:305 (7) –Ctrl+G在把尾巴往右边歪歪？玩起来好点 我觉得不用=.=
  3. 01:06:552 –这里第二段的clap又觉得太轻了，我试了下觉得第一段的clap放第二段蛮合适 用的就是妮妮的图里的clap啊
  4. 01:15:088 (3) –强烈建议加finish，这大重音，而且是cymbal音，玩的时候没finish心理发毛 额好吧
  5. 01:16:308 (1) –和01:16:796 (4) –滑条尾一样加finish 好
  6. 01:24:113 (1) –头加whistle，参考01:28:015 (1) – ^
  7. 01:28:503 (3) –滑条尾whsitle跟key音 ^
  8. 01:30:698 (3) –头finish ^
  9. 01:31:918 (1) - ^
  10. 01:33:137 (6) –稍微有点overmapped，玩起来怪怪的 huehue
  11. 01:34:600 (3) –这些梗建议NC加这，别加01:34:844 (1) –，这样才对读图更好 好
  12. 01:35:576 (3) –类似。 ^
  13. 01:39:722 (5) –这颗把clap去掉，换成normal的sampleset更合曲 好
  14. 01:52:775 (2,3,4) –这些不加点音效？曲子里鼓这么重的说 因为我懒啊
  15. 01:53:664 –这一段的clap太轻，根本听不见了，感觉比finish轻了一个数量级，建议用ce啥的增增音量 这样的话后面又要改了，算了
  16. 01:56:442 (5) –这颗要加clap，你仔细听听音乐看（我第一反应想到出血樱op中间solo段那鼓点了） 好 加了
  17. 01:56:553 (6) –这个加不加clap看你 不加了这样也有点起伏感
  18. 01:59:997 (8) –clap，类似的不说了
  19. 01:58:108 (5,6,7) –这里给两个节奏建议，试试把几句连起来整体听了感受下 这个我考虑下，我个人不太想改
  20. 02:04:331 (1,3) –这两加finish表现力更强 好
  21. 02:04:664 –这个人声不跟？ 不跟
  22. 02:00:331 (10,11,12,13) –NC有点长？中间再断一次？ 不断
  23. 02:01:664 (5,6) –这两个的节奏你可以换成和这个
    SPOILER
    类似的，更好 你知道的我这个人比较善良w
  24. 02:06:108 (1) –加finish，有cymbal音 好
  25. 02:18:886 –跟人声=。=，不跟怪怪的 我不觉得怪啊=w=
  26. 02:19:220 (3) –重音滑条尾了，不要为了排列梗牺牲节奏啊，主次不分了 好我动了下
  27. 02:19:442 -02:20:331 –finish ok
  28. 02:21:220 (1,2,3,4) –头上全加上whistle？ ^
  29. 02:34:952 (1,2,3) –用绿线来个音量递增 好
  30. 02:36:275 (1) –这个滑条头的音效明显应该用S;C3，你怎么用S;C4 智障了，改过来了
  31. 02:36:275 (1,1) –分开放啊，重音来个滑条跳 不了，毕竟这个加速有点突然，找几个人1pc test的时候都接不上
  32. 02:39:804 (5) –加whsitle，跟乐器音 好
  33. 02:46:863 (5) -^ ^
  34. 02:41:128 (3,4) –头上全加whistle ^
  35. 02:54:363 (1,2,3) –靠的有点近 还好
  36. 02:57:452 (8) –头whistle 好
  37. 03:01:422 (1,2,3,4) –头上全加whsitle增加打击感 好
  38. 03:02:746 (6) –头上S;C3的clap ^
  39. 03:03:297 (1) –转盘尾巴音量到40%，并加个whistle。这里为转盘消音这太不合适了 ^
  40. 03:08:933 (1,2,3) –头上全finish用递增音量试试，whistle打击感太弱。其余地方可以试试normal的sampleset，这么强鼓点没个音效软死了 改了
  41. 03:09:790 (1,2,3) –类似。 ^
  42. 03:10:647 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –这些音效，强烈建议换成S;C1音效组，并在所有滑条头都加finish ^
  43. 03:16:433 (5) –这样试试？ ^
    SPOILER
  44. 03:20:933 (1,2,3,1,2,3) –这些滑条跳严重不合曲啊，跟这段开头那么多重音不同，这没重音，这么跳玩起来没对比感 好 去掉了
  45. 03:22:647 (1,2,3,4) –这节奏不好，please跟蓝线的鼓点，我提供个建议 好，
    SPOILER
  46. 03:24:361 (1,5) –这两个漏finish比较严重 加了
  47. 03:24:790 (4,5) –这距离太小，5是个重音可以放远点或者放到右边去。好
  48. 03:25:647 (8) –靠太近，没啥迎合音乐的打击感 稍微改了下
  49. 03:26:076 (1,2,4) –这三滑条头可以加finish，跟前面建议形成小半段轨 加了一个fin
  50. 03:27:790 (1) –漏finish啊喂=。= 加了
  51. 03:28:861 (4) –加whistle，强调人声和伴奏里那个高音乐器音 ok
  52. 03:29:290 (7,1) –这里两个最好合并成跨大白线的1/1滑条来强调03:29:290 –的重音。舍不得大白线的鼓点可以03:29:290 –起1/2红线滑条，然后03:29:719 –来个圈。最好03:29:290 –必须加finish 懒改就加了个fin
  53. 03:31:647 (2) –这么重要的finish都能漏 这里我真没听出fin,前面倒是有个
  54. 03:32:504 (5) –finish，这个5可以离4更远点，区别于3,4的间距 不改
  55. 03:33:576 (4,5,6) –这里应该是五连啊，03:33:897 –这有鼓点 但是我不想改了
  56. 03:36:147 (9) –这放到（20,52）附近去？一上一下的移动轨迹更科学 我这么打着很舒服啊
  57. 03:38:076 (1) –头finish 好
  58. 03:40:432 (5) –加whistle强调高音乐器音 ^
  59. 03:40:647 (7,8,9,10) –同理，头上全whistle ^
  60. 04:06:325 (1) - –去掉NC，04:05:911 (1,2,3,4,5) –这几个是一组的，听曲子 方便读图优先
  61. 04:06:118 (2) –漏clap 加上去感觉怪
  62. 04:06:532 (4,5) –加clap ^
  63. 04:06:118 (2,4) –这俩是否加finish你自己看情况吧 不用
  64. 04:06:325 –这里我倾向于改成五连的 ……
  65. 04:16:977 (2,3) –这两个明显需要加clap=。= 这是我忘了
  66. 04:19:977 (4) -–加whistle强调人声，只加三个whistle没什么意思 好
  67. 04:21:777 (4) –滑条头whistle ^
  68. 04:23:177 (5) - –^, 说不动了88 ^
  69. 04:26:377 (5) –whistle。总之这里就是不要出现whistle间断的小节，别加的太稀，一会有密死了 ^
  70. 04:28:177 (4) –头加whistle尾巴加clap ^
  71. 04:34:577 (4) -^ ^
  72. 04:30:177 (7) –加clap强调小重音和空拍 ^
  73. 04:30:577 (1) –加clap这是军鼓位 ^
  74. 04:37:777 (4) –中间蓝线上有鼓音，建议换成五连串子 我真没听到
  75. 04:40:777 (4) –为什么老是空出几个地方不加音效？ :P
  76. 04:41:577 (1) –应该加clap而不是whistle 好
  77. 04:42:177 (2) –这里选择跟鼓点比跟人声更好，突出04:42:377 –这个 改了
  78. 04:43:977 (1,2,3) –全加clap ^
  79. 04:44:577 (5) –漏clap，仔细听听曲子，这里双clap ^
  80. 05:00:861 (2) –加个NC？在break后一下子来这有点难读，我弱Bmiss了 ^
  81. 05:04:783 (1) –这里啊，我建议这样，
    SPOILER
    ，为什么呢，第一是白线起的滑条，第二你原来加速的地方是ei那个音，我的是强调ya的音，而ya是拖长音，用加速滑条更好吧。而且可以拉个奇怪形状的红点滑条来强调这个人声 该觉改了之后有点怪，先放着
  82. 05:11:057 (1) -^ ^
  83. 05:06:940 (1,2,3,4) –间距大点，换成等间距的大跳。这里不适合变间距跳 好
  84. 05:07:920 (1,2) –对着这两个shift+w, ctrl+e，和之前一样，有鼓音的地方只靠whistle打起来太软，没意思。dio
  85. 05:12:136 –人声在这啊，我建议把05:12:234 (5) –换到05:12:136 –来，这就是那个四连+而二连节奏了 wa我想想，这样就有点厉害了
  86. 05:14:979 (2,3) –这音效太弱 w
  87. 05:16:743 (3) –我是在搞不懂这里加clap干嘛，豪无根据。去了
  88. 05:14:783 (1,2,3,4) -05:16:351 (1,2,3,4) -05:16:351 (1,2,3,4) -05:21:057 (1,2,3,4) -05:22:626 (1,2,3,4) –这些全加finish吧，把那些奇怪的clap都去掉（这几个音在音乐里鼓都是一样的）好
  89. 05:31:607 (2,3,4,5) –加clap，空着像打空气 ^
  90. 05:33:607 –这一段的音效组换成S;C1，S;C5的clap太弱，这一段同样不适合。 ^
  91. 05:36:516 (1) –头上换成finish ^
  92. 05:39:425 (1) -^ ^
  93. 05:44:152 (3,4,5,6) –这里是五连，听05:44:243 –，而且这个五连全加上S;C1的clap。可以用S;C1但是要绿线降低音量 五年想不到梗才变成现在这样的，不过clap加了
  94. 05:44:698 (7,8,9,10) -^ ^
  95. 05:40:152 (3,1,3) –这些有必要的话滑条头都加上finish，丰富音效轨。Whsitle是在太弱 好
  96. 05:48:152 (1) –finish，类似的不说了 ^
  97. 05:56:879 (1) –头finish。 ^
  98. 05:57:970 (4) –finish并降音量（听曲子伴奏）我觉得就是clap
  99. 05:59:425 (4) -^ ^
  100. 05:56:879 (1) - 05:58:334 (1) –头上去掉whistle，这里是地鼓位，用了就滥用了，听起来还吵闹不合曲 好
  101. 05:59:788 (1,3) -^ ^
  102. 06:01:607 (2,4) –两个头上加whistle ^
  103. 06:02:698 (1) –头去掉whistle ^
  104. 06:04:152 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) –这个梗我炒鸡喜欢啊❤ :D
  105. 06:04:516 (2,3,4) –这些头上可以加whistle来强调这个梗 ^
  106. 06:05:607 (1,2,3,4) -^,而且这音乐里有高音伴奏 ^
  107. 06:10:879 (4) –前面跟着鼓点好好的，别突然跟人声啦，这种1/2spam抑扬顿挫比较适合这里。 ^
  108. 06:09:970 (1) –头去掉whistle ^
  109. 06:20:980 –tick音太吵，有点把滑条头给喧宾夺主的感觉。我建议这一段全下1/2的节奏来强调全白线军鼓part（一般都是这么处理的，别跟人声用滑条盖掉白线，别用tick）。跟人声的节奏就别下全白线clap用tick，因为音效和节奏音轨会冲突 好我白天再考虑下
  110. 06:31:921 (2) –漏clap fixed
  111. 06:54:017 (1) –不建议长白线滑条尾 ^
  112. 06:58:228 (8,9,1) –节奏乱下=。=这里是一个06:58:228 –起的1/1滑条最合适。（重音提前半拍很常见的）^
  113. 06:59:719 –加circle？并把06:59:280 (7,8,9,10,11) –放成串子样，别stack？^
  114. 07:00:859 (5) –漏clap^
  115. 07:04:193 –有音，考虑把滑条缩短半拍 这里就是跟vocal
  116. 07:10:333 (4) –这里应该加clap，仔细听曲子，这里音和07:09:982 –是一样的，也是全白线clap的part 好
  117. 07:11:736 (3) –同理clap ^
  118. 07:09:982 (2,3,4) –换五连？ 不好
  119. 07:10:596 (6) –overmap 哼
  120. 07:12:614 (1,2) -1加finish或者其他什么，2加clap 好
  121. 07:13:666 (1) –转盘漏clap -.-
  122. 07:20:848 (10) –加clap或者什么 好
  123. 07:25:736 (3) –加whistle突出人声 ^
  124. 07:31:129 (4,5) –whistle应该加在4而不是5，突出人声，而不是干扰地鼓位（我之前这样被草莓还有另外一个bat狂喷了下） ^
  125. 07:26:915 (3,4) –whistle加3的滑条尾，而不是4 ^
  126. 07:30:286 (6,1) -^,这个part类似的不提了 ^
  127. 07:52:132 (1) –尾巴whistle ^
  128. 08:00:704 (3) –去掉尾巴whsitle 咦这里本来就没有啊
  129. 08:01:528 (1) –应该加finish，和08:02:847 (1) –形成阶梯感 好
  130. 08:04:165 (1) –叠好？这偏的有点多 奇怪，本来是好的
  131. 08:24:523 (7,8) –滑条头和8加whistle，参考08:35:015 (6,7) - 好
  132. 08:35:015 (6,7) –whistle 好
  133. 08:40:097 (2) -^ ^
  134. 08:41:408 (2) -^ ^
  135. 08:45:999 (5) -^ ^
  136. 09:10:138 (1) –尾巴漏clap，仔细听下音乐^
  137. 09:10:856 (3) –加clap^
  138. 09:11:415 (1) –finish？闷闷的地鼓不舒服^
  139. 09:14:288 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) –全clap降低并适当音量。空着像打空气^
  140. 09:17:319 (4) –尾巴whistle，海王星都是两地鼓一军鼓的啊，你看老惹的diff，就是每小节第二个clap前有两个whistle这类的。仔细听下音乐。^
  141. 09:47:047 (2) –加whistle^
  142. 09:47:196 (3) –头clap^
  143. 09:47:493 (4) –尾巴whsitle^
  144. 09:47:790 (1) –头上加clap^
  145. 09:48:087 (2,3,5) –白线全加clap，把whistle去掉，09:48:532 (4,6) –whistle全加在这些红线上（听曲子^
  146. 09:52:097 (2) –whistle=。= 这首和海王星一样，第二个clap前是两个whistle^
  147. 09:52:542 (1) –头上没必要用地鼓就行了，别用默认的whsitle^
  148. 09:58:483 (1) -^^
  149. 10:02:047 (1) -^，类似不提^
  150. 10:05:017 (2) –头上应该加clap，这个音和10:04:720 –是等价的音^
  151. 10:05:240 (3) –尾巴clap^
  152. 10:05:612 (1) –头上应该是finish^
  153. 10:06:354 (2) –whistle^
  154. 10:06:800 (1) –头加finish，尾巴clap^
  155. 10:07:542 (4) –头whistle^
  156. 10:07:988 (1) –尾巴whistle^
  157. 10:08:582 (3) –头clap^
  158. 10:09:324 (4) –whistle^
  159. 10:53:292 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) –这些可以每组间距越来越大，更贴合音乐啊。好
  160. 11:12:278 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) –这样加NC没意义，还不如别spam，和开始某段一样^
  161. 11:27:204 (2) –头漏clap^
  162. 11:27:495 (3) –clap^
黑天使做的不错，似乎看到了理发匠的影子
最后本人已死有事烧纸，还好BG让人把持不住不然真死了 233

你摸我两张猴不猴啊，不猴就只摸上面那张(有点急)
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/166277
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/162857
白天摸上面一张，飞球谢了
ts8zs
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Joined May 2011
ts8zs
全程kiai是哪出……找几个比较高潮的歌kiai吧
NC请放在vocal头（长白线前红线）
[naorathon]
00:35:392 (6) - Ctrl+G
>00:35:975 (7) - ^
00:39:470 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529575
01:04:594 (1) - 还是del吧
01:39:715 (5) - a reverse
九九のmoon（问：这是哪国语言）
02:22:108 (1) - Ctrl+G
卧槽这首是only my railgun+Hot limit 么
03:13:219 (1) - NC
03:30:361 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529593
03:33:897 - note
04:03:428 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529595 虽然 repeat 很重要 但是太蛋疼了 这样 不好 不好
>04:04:256 (3,4) - swap
04:23:777 (1) - Ctrl+G
04:34:577 (4) - Ctrl+G
05:00:469 (1) - del 我可以理解你迫不及待的心情，但果然还是很蛋疼._.
05:04:783 (1) - Ctrl+G
05:11:057 (1) - Ctrl+G
05:24:783 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529603
06:26:450 (2) - 488,184
06:27:862 (2) - ^
>06:28:039 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529607
06:32:097 (3) - 176,60
06:39:686 (3,4) - 132,296
06:50:859 (4) - Ctrl+G 124,180
06:58:228 (1) - Ctrl+G
06:59:280 (6,7,8,9,10) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529614
07:21:017 (11,1) - swap NC._. 很重要所以要说两遍
07:29:444 (2) - 400,352
07:30:118 (5) - 292,44
07:42:084 (5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529624
07:44:275 (1) - remove finish
07:45:286 (1) - Ctrl+G
08:04:660 (2,3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529630
08:24:523 (7,8,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529636
08:25:835 (3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529639
08:46:162 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529640
08:47:474 (1) - 440,124
08:50:097 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+G
08:50:916 (2,4) - Ctrl+G
09:26:255 (3) - NC
喂这首歌不怕被和谐么
09:58:483 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529652
09:59:374 (3) - del a reverse longer 1/2
10:00:859 (1) - 看起来蠢爆了
哇 10分钟了
10:07:394 (3) - 496,204
10:11:553 (1) - del
10:32:422 (1) - Ctrl+G
10:35:176 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529658
>10:35:756 (1) - Ctrl+G
>>10:36:191 (2) - Ctrl+G
>>>10:36:480 (3) - Ctrl+G
>>>>10:36:770 (4) - Ctrl+G
>>>>>10:37:060 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529661
10:58:365 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529663
11:14:741 (5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529665
11:48:727 (1) - start at 11:48:799 - end at 11:54:307 -
开心么:3
我摸了这么半天才他喵的1kd 喵的，你看着办
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Koiyuki
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包子

ts8zs wrote:

全程kiai是哪出……找几个比较高潮的歌kiai吧 我就喜欢一直高潮
NC请放在vocal头（长白线前红线）
[naorathon]
00:35:392 (6) - Ctrl+G nope
>00:35:975 (7) - ^ ^
00:39:470 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529575 ^
01:04:594 (1) - 还是del吧^
01:39:715 (5) - a reverse 没看懂你什么意思
九九のmoon（问：这是哪国语言）
02:22:108 (1) - Ctrl+G nope，打的时候挺顺的
卧槽这首是only my railgun+Hot limit 么
03:13:219 (1) - NC 没啥必要
03:30:361 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529593 额图裂了没看到你怎么放的- -
03:33:897 - note 故意忽视的
04:03:428 (1,2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529595 虽然 repeat 很重要 但是太蛋疼了 这样 不好 不好 挺好 挺好
>04:04:256 (3,4) - swap so nope
04:23:777 (1) - Ctrl+G nope
04:34:577 (4) - Ctrl+G nope
05:00:469 (1) - del 我可以理解你迫不及待的心情，但果然还是很蛋疼._. 但是这个音很重所以我不想漏掉
05:04:783 (1) - Ctrl+G 考虑
05:11:057 (1) - Ctrl+G ^
05:24:783 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529603 没看懂这么放有什么意义=.=
06:26:450 (2) - 488,184 没必要啊故意去blanket
06:27:862 (2) - ^ ^
>06:28:039 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529607 nope
06:32:097 (3) - 176,60 不好
06:39:686 (3,4) - 132,296 好
06:50:859 (4) - Ctrl+G 124,180 nope
06:58:228 (1) - Ctrl+G 好
06:59:280 (6,7,8,9,10) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529614 我个人不太喜欢一坨
07:21:017 (11,1) - swap NC._. 很重要所以要说两遍 好
07:29:444 (2) - 400,352 不好
07:30:118 (5) - 292,44 ^
07:42:084 (5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529624 我觉得不差
07:44:275 (1) - remove finish 好
07:45:286 (1) - Ctrl+G 不
08:04:660 (2,3,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529630 ^
08:24:523 (7,8,1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529636 ^
08:25:835 (3,4,5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529639 ^
08:46:162 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529640 ^
08:47:474 (1) - 440,124 好
08:50:097 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+G nope
08:50:916 (2,4) - Ctrl+G 不
09:26:255 (3) - NC 故意的
喂这首歌不怕被和谐么 short cut ver不会被和谐，又不是整首歌
09:58:483 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529652 nope
09:59:374 (3) - del a reverse longer 1/2 没啥必要
10:00:859 (1) - 看起来蠢爆了 打我啊
哇 10分钟了
10:07:394 (3) - 496,204 稍微动了下
10:11:553 (1) - del nope
10:32:422 (1) - Ctrl+G ^
10:35:176 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529658 ^
>10:35:756 (1) - Ctrl+G ^
>>10:36:191 (2) - Ctrl+G ^
>>>10:36:480 (3) - Ctrl+G ^
>>>>10:36:770 (4) - Ctrl+G ^
>>>>>10:37:060 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529661 ^
10:58:365 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529663 ^
11:14:741 (5,6,7,8) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1529665 ^
11:48:727 (1) - start at 11:48:799 - end at 11:54:307 - end改了start没改
开心么:3 开心
我摸了这么半天才他喵的1kd 喵的，你看着办 Thanks for modding
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WinglessAsura
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Joined April 2014
WinglessAsura
Here's my mod !! :)

Timing

  • (1). 00:19:664 you should starts from here. where the vocal starts to sing.
    (2). 01:06:545 - 01:37:764 try some patterns. just clicking like that is boring, also change the color.
    example :

    (3). 01:39:472 add an object here or slider which ends at 01:39:715.
    (4). 01:53:664 beat starts from here, the same time with kiai starts.
    (5). 02:32:775 beat starts fading from here, keep follow the song rhytm but steadily decreasing the hit sound.
    (6). 02:36:716 beat starts from here, along with kiai time starts
    (7). 03:06:275 beat starts fading here.
    (8). 03:10:647 beat starts from here.
    (9). 03:42:361 beat starts fading here.
    (10).03:46:877 beat starts from here.
General

i just give mod about where to starts the beat and where it begin to fading. since mostly your map is empty tho :? . and i guess with that you get the idea, when the beat starts and fading for each song in compilation. i hope my mod is useful :) . feel free to ask more mod from me at my queue
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
naorathon

  1. 00:46:460 (3) - 去掉放在后面, 突出一下蓝线的vocal
  2. 01:54:331 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1562776
  3. 02:08:553 (3,5) - ^
  4. 03:47:704 (4,5,6,7,8) - 不好 怎么不跟歌词做
  5. 03:49:359 (3,4,5,6) - ^
  6. 03:54:325 (6) - ^
  7. 这首都没跟歌词做 为啥..
  8. 05:12:234 (5) - 移到前面蓝线去
  9. 好 神曲系233
  10. 07:13:315 (4) - 这样看不清的..
  11. 07:26:915 (3) - clap
  12. 08:31:408 (4) - 往下
  13. 如果是for rank/app的话不建议放komorebi fresnel这歌, 这歌rank版就被dmca过 而且不好听
  14. 11:01:843 - 别空这里
  15. 11:24:741 (1) - 连打放错地方了吧233
  16. nao高音这么好, 连首250bpm的歌都没, 实在可惜
tags少了一个 受け継がれる真説 就是那个jubeat的True Theory of Inheritance

没人做hatsuki yura的compilation啊 candle
Crystal
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Crystal

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

没人做hatsuki yura的compilation啊 candle
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

naorathon

  1. 00:46:460 (3) - 去掉放在后面, 突出一下蓝线的vocal 不好
  2. 01:54:331 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1562776 不好
  3. 02:08:553 (3,5) - ^ 不好
  4. 03:47:704 (4,5,6,7,8) - 不好 怎么不跟歌词做 不想
  5. 03:49:359 (3,4,5,6) - ^ 不想
  6. 03:54:325 (6) - ^ 不想
  7. 这首都没跟歌词做 为啥.. 不想
  8. 05:12:234 (5) - 移到前面蓝线去 太鬼畜
  9. 好 神曲系233
  10. 07:13:315 (4) - 这样看不清的.. 改了
  11. 07:26:915 (3) - clap added
  12. 08:31:408 (4) - 往下 好
  13. 如果是for rank/app的话不建议放komorebi fresnel这歌, 这歌rank版就被dmca过 而且不好听 片段 没事
  14. 11:01:843 - 别空这里 不加
  15. 11:24:741 (1) - 连打放错地方了吧233 没有
  16. nao高音这么好, 连首250bpm的歌都没, 实在可惜 蜡烛
tags少了一个 受け継がれる真説 就是那个jubeat的True Theory of Inheritance tag added

没人做hatsuki yura的compilation啊 candle
candle

thanks for modding

@WinglessAsura sry no fixed
Sharlo
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Sharlo

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

没人做hatsuki yura的compilation啊 candle
求做
DenoisoGoiso
681 posts
Joined April 2013
DenoisoGoiso


add this high bpm song ples >//<
ZZHBOY
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Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
好
[naorathon]
00:23:159 (3) - 建议红线停然后加个圈因为红线有音
00:47:043 (5) - nc?
01:09:472 (4) - nc?vocal换鼓点的时候nc下呗
01:13:374 (4) - ^
01:29:959 - 不和前面一样来个喷泉?
01:28:984 (4) - nc
02:36:275 (1) - 卧槽2.0 你用高速滑条前面还减速 不开蛇形滑条根本看不出来打miss不就美丽
03:02:746 (6) - nc
03:33:790 (6) - ^ 后面不说这个了不然成ncmod了妈蛋
03:26:933 (4) - 这个出界unrankable 问黄书了
04:30:977 (3) - 交换前面的nc到这里
07:20:848 (10,1,2,3) - 这个地方flow特别差 不如滑条前那两个圈弄直线?
07:33:657 (3) - 好像也出界 往内稍微移点呗
07:58:066 - 空出来感觉不舒服啊.-.
08:30:917 - 这里漏音感觉不好
08:36:982 (1,2,3) - 旋转20度感觉会和前面的flow好一点 然后再去调整一下后面的试试
08:46:162 (1,2) - 还是觉得这两个分别ctrl+g好话前后会flow好些
09:31:840 (1) - 像左下略凸起一些感觉flow好些
09:51:354 (1) - 出界
09:53:730 (1,2) - 没包好
10:59:959 (4,5,1) - 没包好
11:01:843 - 也是不建议空
美丽
黑天使音效抄了兴业?
Koiyuki
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DenoisoGoiso wrote:



add this high bpm song ples >//<
I cant see the video ...
永遠なる絆と想いのキセキ?
if it's that, so crazy.
the map will be nuked :o
DenoisoGoiso
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DenoisoGoiso
Yes. ;~;
Koiyuki
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ZZHBOY wrote:

好
[naorathon]
00:23:159 (3) - 建议红线停然后加个圈因为红线有音 不改
00:47:043 (5) - nc? nope
01:09:472 (4) - nc?vocal换鼓点的时候nc下呗 nope
01:13:374 (4) - ^ nope
01:29:959 - 不和前面一样来个喷泉? nope
01:28:984 (4) - nc nope
02:36:275 (1) - 卧槽2.0 你用高速滑条前面还减速 不开蛇形滑条根本看不出来打miss不就美丽 这就是为什么用slidertick2的原因，看tick可以看得出来是告诉滑条
03:02:746 (6) - nc 这个加了
03:33:790 (6) - ^ 后面不说这个了不然成ncmod了妈蛋 nope
03:26:933 (4) - 这个出界unrankable 问黄书了 nope, it's not unrankable
04:30:977 (3) - 交换前面的nc到这里 nope
07:20:848 (10,1,2,3) - 这个地方flow特别差 不如滑条前那两个圈弄直线? 我打的时候不觉得
07:33:657 (3) - 好像也出界 往内稍微移点呗 不干
07:58:066 - 空出来感觉不舒服啊.-. .-.
08:30:917 - 这里漏音感觉不好 我觉得没问题啊
08:36:982 (1,2,3) - 旋转20度感觉会和前面的flow好一点 然后再去调整一下后面的试试 懒
08:46:162 (1,2) - 还是觉得这两个分别ctrl+g好话前后会flow好些 好
09:31:840 (1) - 像左下略凸起一些感觉flow好些 先这样吧
09:51:354 (1) - 出界 nope
09:53:730 (1,2) - 没包好 fixed
10:59:959 (4,5,1) - 没包好 fixed
11:01:843 - 也是不建议空 再说
美丽
黑天使音效抄了兴业? 忘了是lfj还是星爷了Q,Q
thanks for modding
Kayano
1,286 posts
Joined July 2011
Kayano
From your request

  1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
  2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
  3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
  4. Gray - Personal preference
[General]
  1. 01:04:594 - Multi timing section with different hitsounds and volume settings here, please remove the green line
[ naorathon]
Rhythm
  1. 10:37:930 (4,1) - Try this
    SPOILER
Hitsounds
  1. 01:32:642 - Add a finish here? You've added at 01:30:691 - so I think you'd better add one here, also it sounds nice
  2. 01:33:374 (7) - I heard piano here, also I noticed that you added whistles to fit piano before, so add a whistle here
  3. 01:36:789 - whistle here
  4. 03:23:504 (3) - Add a whistle to follow the music
  5. 03:33:361 (3) - Finish here? I heard it
  6. 03:34:219 (7) - Same as above
  7. 03:49:359 (3) - Missing whistle
  8. 04:04:256 (3) - Finish here? so it can be "4/1 finish -> 2/1 finish -> 1/1 finish"
  9. 04:06:118 (2) - Maybe also finish here to fit music?
  10. 04:06:532 (2) - Same as above
  11. 07:02:438 (5) - 07:03:140 (3) - 07:03:491 (5) - whistle these, they are following vocal and they sounds nice
  12. 08:25:343 - Missing whistle
  13. 08:46:326 - Same as above
  14. 10:38:220 - Finish should be at 10:38:075 - If you change the Rhythm
  15. 10:53:292 (1) - On purpose? I think it should be finish here
  16. 10:54:451 (1) - Same as above
  17. 11:35:031 (1) - I think N-finish works better here
Placement
  1. 03:13:219 (1) - maybe NC here
  2. 03:26:933 (4) - Repeat point is out of grids, well, although RC didn't say about this, but I still highly suggest you to use a safer way like this (Screenshot in AR3)
    SPOILER
    And here is the code for you
    Click Here!
    466,175,206826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    497,143,206933,2,0,P|505:126|507:106,2,40
  3. 09:51:354 (1) - This is slightly out of grids, move the repeat point to x:512 y:304 or somewhere inside
Okay that's it, good luck on getting it approved ;)
挑的都是些nazi的问题 hitsounds会影响到太鼓和mania 那些出界滑条也是不安全的 希望不要懒得改 今晚皇叔会来看 提前恭喜bubble
Atrue
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Atrue
Marked.. Will get here after you check the mods.
Koiyuki
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Topic Starter
Koiyuki

OniJAM wrote:

From your request

  1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
  2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
  3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
  4. Gray - Personal preference
[General]
  1. 01:04:594 - Multi timing section with different hitsounds and volume settings here, please remove the green line fixed
[ naorathon]
Rhythm
  1. 10:37:930 (4,1) - Try this
    SPOILER
    ok changed
Hitsounds
  1. 01:32:642 - Add a finish here? You've added at 01:30:691 - so I think you'd better add one here, also it sounds nice but there is not finish at 01:32:642 - in the music, and 01:30:691 - has the finish.
  2. 01:33:374 (7) - I heard piano here, also I noticed that you added whistles to fit piano before, so add a whistle here ok added
  3. 01:36:789 - whistle here added
  4. 03:23:504 (3) - Add a whistle to follow the music ^
  5. 03:33:361 (3) - Finish here? I heard it clap is enough here
  6. 03:34:219 (7) - Same as above ^
  7. 03:49:359 (3) - Missing whistle added
  8. 04:04:256 (3) - Finish here? so it can be "4/1 finish -> 2/1 finish -> 1/1 finish" sounds fine, added
  9. 04:06:118 (2) - Maybe also finish here to fit music? too much finshes and sounds not fine to me
  10. 04:06:532 (2) - Same as above ^
  11. 07:02:438 (5) - 07:03:140 (3) - 07:03:491 (5) - whistle these, they are following vocal and they sounds nice added
  12. 08:25:343 - Missing whistle added
  13. 08:46:326 - Same as above ^
  14. 10:38:220 - Finish should be at 10:38:075 - If you change the Rhythm yeah
  15. 10:53:292 (1) - On purpose? I think it should be finish here add clap instead, sounds better to me
  16. 10:54:451 (1) - Same as above ^
  17. 11:35:031 (1) - I think N-finish works better here changed
Placement
  1. 03:13:219 (1) - maybe NC here I like it currently because 稍微坑一下读图
  2. 03:26:933 (4) - Repeat point is out of grids, well, although RC didn't say about this, but I still highly suggest you to use a safer way like this (Screenshot in AR3)
    SPOILER
    And here is the code for you
    Click Here!
    466,175,206826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    497,143,206933,2,0,P|505:126|507:106,2,40
    fixed
  3. 09:51:354 (1) - This is slightly out of grids, move the repeat point to x:512 y:304 or somewhere inside ok
Okay that's it, good luck on getting it approved ;)
挑的都是些nazi的问题 hitsounds会影响到太鼓和mania 那些出界滑条也是不安全的 希望不要懒得改 今晚皇叔会来看 提前恭喜bubble
thanks for modding
Atrue
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Atrue
Hello~
From pm req.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.


[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
clear.
[naorathon]
General
Clear and safe.
Timing fine here.
Beats
04:06:428 - As a matter of fact... You know here I think a circle is more fit in the music. But you also have a good pattern here, so just consider it again. Giving my examples here for reference:
SPOILER
11:01:843 - Somehow I think here you can add a note because it is in high time in the music and leaving the blank will be a bit strange. For a proper flow you can add a note here.
SPOILER
(The spinners at last is really looooooooong.. XD.. Just saying it~ )
Placement
06:17:450 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I know it is designed intentionally, but I have to say if you don't know the bpm, it is really easy to be confused by the speed change of the circles.. The distance is really similar and no signals here to suggest the accelerate. Just personal opinion, there are varies of ways of solving the problem. Here is one choice:
SPOILER
10:32:422 (1) - Ah.. just saying that the flow I think can be better placed..The direction of the arc may be better if you use some thing like this imo. Example:
SPOILER
Hitsound
04:05:497 - If you set the volume increase by about 5% per NC in the small part until 04:06:325 , it would be a lot better fit in the music.
09:25:298 - Yes, here is clap imo. Maybe you forgot that..
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me:)

Important: lemme know when you finish checking the mod, as you said you may add SB to it and I'll just wait to check your SB. Before that, please let me know if you have any extra changes. Call me back when you are really ready. Good luck! :)
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
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Topic Starter
Koiyuki

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From pm req.

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.


[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
clear.
[naorathon]
General
Clear and safe.
Timing fine here.
Beats
04:06:428 - As a matter of fact... You know here I think a circle is more fit in the music. But you also have a good pattern here, so just consider it again. Giving my examples here for reference:
SPOILER
I keep this pattern.
11:01:843 - Somehow I think here you can add a note because it is in high time in the music and leaving the blank will be a bit strange. For a proper flow you can add a note here.
SPOILER
[/color]
rearranged the pattern, so needn't add note here :3 (I wanna to keep 3333combo)
(The spinners at last is really looooooooong.. XD.. Just saying it~ )
Placement
06:17:450 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I know it is designed intentionally, but I have to say if you don't know the bpm, it is really easy to be confused by the speed change of the circles.. The distance is really similar and no signals here to suggest the accelerate. Just personal opinion, there are varies of ways of solving the problem. Here is one choice:
SPOILER
the bpm will be added in sb, I keep this and because of the obvious rhythm, I think it's easy to read.
10:32:422 (1) - Ah.. just saying that the flow I think can be better placed..The direction of the arc may be better if you use some thing like this imo. Example:
SPOILER
remake the pattern
Hitsound
04:05:497 - If you set the volume increase by about 5% per NC in the small part until 04:06:325 , it would be a lot better fit in the music. k, good idea
09:25:298 - Yes, here is clap imo. Maybe you forgot that.. lol, added
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me:)

Important: lemme know when you finish checking the mod, as you said you may add SB to it and I'll just wait to check your SB. Before that, please let me know if you have any extra changes. Call me back when you are really ready. Good luck! :)
Thanks Atrue.
I will call you back after the sb finished <3
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu
↓↓↓My SB done↓↓↓
http://puu.sh/8LLV1.rar

It is indeed the first time that I made SB xD. Hopefully you like it :3
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
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Topic Starter
Koiyuki
updated!
Atrue
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2012
Atrue
Checked SB.
1. file size is bit big, try to make it smaller.
2. image size is too big and some of the images can be cropped and resized.
3. Enable epilepsy warning.

Call me back when you are ready.
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu
Cropped and updated SB:

http://puu.sh/8M1gV.rar

Thx for checking Ature :3
Atrue
osu! Alumni
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Atrue
Ok~ Rechecked and every things looks fine~
:)
Good luck!
Bubble #1
Skystar
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Skystar
M-CHAN STOLE MY HEART
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
Thanks Atrue!

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

M-CHAN STOLE MY HEART
Skystar have my baby!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
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jonathanlfj
irc stuff
2014-05-18 13:17 jonathanlfj: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/381490 nao - Songs Compilation [naorathon]]
2014-05-18 13:24 jonathanlfj: someone pmed me sec
2014-05-18 13:24 [Minakami Yuki]: o/
2014-05-18 13:24 jonathanlfj: mod requests slurehaowhtnerdszhjrtjmrd
2014-05-18 13:25 [Minakami Yuki]: cvhjuytdvbjkiuytfvbn
2014-05-18 13:31 jonathanlfj: 嗯只有几个小问题其他的都很好
2014-05-18 13:32 [Minakami Yuki]: o/
2014-05-18 13:33 jonathanlfj: 02:13:664 (5,6,7) - 这里多给点间距
2014-05-18 13:34 [Minakami Yuki]: 好
2014-05-18 13:34 jonathanlfj: 02:39:363 (3,6,7,1) - 这里是故意overlap？
2014-05-18 13:36 [Minakami Yuki]: 可以移开点咯
2014-05-18 13:36 jonathanlfj: 嗯
2014-05-18 13:36 [Minakami Yuki]: 其实我觉得影响不大
2014-05-18 13:36 [Minakami Yuki]: test了一下感觉没啥问题
2014-05-18 13:37 jonathanlfj: 04:12:118 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这个在玩的时候repeat被挡住了
2014-05-18 13:37 jonathanlfj: manual stack可破
2014-05-18 13:37 jonathanlfj: 或者不stack
2014-05-18 13:37 [Minakami Yuki]: 噗
2014-05-18 13:37 [Minakami Yuki]: 好
2014-05-18 13:38 jonathanlfj: 04:30:977 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 这里蓝线起stream切指感觉很不舒服
2014-05-18 13:39 jonathanlfj: 04:30:977 (3) - 可以考虑换成stack triplet
2014-05-18 13:39 [Minakami Yuki]: 改成stack triplet吧
2014-05-18 13:39 jonathanlfj: 嗯
2014-05-18 13:39 [Minakami Yuki]: 改成四个吧
2014-05-18 13:40 [Minakami Yuki]: 三个叠起来有点难度
2014-05-18 13:40 [Minakami Yuki]: 读
2014-05-18 13:40 jonathanlfj: 行
2014-05-18 13:43 jonathanlfj: 07:13:315 (4) - 为什么从这里音量变成了30%
2014-05-18 13:43 jonathanlfj: 我觉得音乐还是很响啊
2014-05-18 13:44 [Minakami Yuki]: 这个是放错了q.q
2014-05-18 13:44 [Minakami Yuki]: my mistake
2014-05-18 13:44 jonathanlfj: haha
2014-05-18 13:44 [Minakami Yuki]: 改回70%了
2014-05-18 13:45 jonathanlfj: 08:19:933 (1,2,3) - 被坑了
2014-05-18 13:45 jonathanlfj: 08:20:261 (2) - 加个NC
2014-05-18 13:46 [Minakami Yuki]: 好
2014-05-18 13:46 jonathanlfj: 希望不要把你的NC规律破坏掉
2014-05-18 13:46 [Minakami Yuki]: 没啥 我重新放一次
2014-05-18 13:47 jonathanlfj: 08:29:769 (1,2,3,4) - 这个角度用鼠标打好难
2014-05-18 13:47 jonathanlfj: 角度再做的小一点
2014-05-18 13:47 [Minakami Yuki]: 啊我觉得还好啊
2014-05-18 13:47 jonathanlfj: 我打起来有点勉强
2014-05-18 13:47 jonathanlfj: 可以间距大一些角度小一些
2014-05-18 13:48 [Minakami Yuki]: 其实我打的时候感觉挺好
2014-05-18 13:48 [Minakami Yuki]: 我看看
2014-05-18 13:49 jonathanlfj: 嗯我直线flow有点弱
2014-05-18 13:50 [Minakami Yuki]: 尽量动了下
2014-05-18 13:50 jonathanlfj: 09:15:404 (1) - 这个摆的位置容易读错
2014-05-18 13:51 jonathanlfj: http://puu.sh/8QLdu.jpg
2014-05-18 13:52 [Minakami Yuki]: 好
2014-05-18 13:53 jonathanlfj: 09:48:978 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 我本来想说点什么的但是这里比较带感我就不破坏掉了
2014-05-18 13:54 [Minakami Yuki]: :>
2014-05-18 13:55 jonathanlfj: 10:11:553 (1) - 这里我会把sb替换成黑白的
2014-05-18 13:55 jonathanlfj: 如果借的麻烦就算了
2014-05-18 13:55 jonathanlfj: 觉得*
2014-05-18 13:56 [Minakami Yuki]: 我是觉得渐渐变亮也不错w
2014-05-18 13:57 [Minakami Yuki]: 对了 我没开sb warning
2014-05-18 13:57 [Minakami Yuki]: 10:48:654 - 全图就一个这里 是不是要开啊
2014-05-18 13:57 jonathanlfj: 11:24:451 (5,6,7,8,1) - 这里我断了是因为1/4 repeat应该从11:24:596 - 这里开始
2014-05-18 13:58 jonathanlfj: sb没问题
2014-05-18 13:58 [Minakami Yuki]: 那这里怎么改……我要是从11:24:596 - 开始1/4 repeat
2014-05-18 13:58 jonathanlfj: 我想想
2014-05-18 13:58 [Minakami Yuki]: 后面不就少一个1/2
2014-05-18 14:00 jonathanlfj: 我的版本是从11:25:176 - 开始就是circle stream
2014-05-18 14:01 jonathanlfj: 11:30:104 (5) - 话说少个clap
2014-05-18 14:02 [Minakami Yuki]: added
2014-05-18 14:02 jonathanlfj: 11:25:466 - 或者从这里下个triplet也行
2014-05-18 14:04 jonathanlfj: 你决定吧不改也行就是打起来会别扭一些
2014-05-18 14:04 jonathanlfj: 差不多就这些了完了update一下
2014-05-18 14:05 [Minakami Yuki]: 那我先不改了 觉得改的也有点别扭Q.Q
2014-05-18 14:05 jonathanlfj: 嗯
2014-05-18 14:06 [Minakami Yuki]: 额 上传卡11%了 我得重新开下osu
2014-05-18 14:06 jonathanlfj: 好
Bubble #2~

To next BAT: please double check the rhythm at 11:24:451 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3), maybe its just me but i find it really hard to play due to off-beat repeat sliders
Satellite
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Satellite
yuki chan gogo :3/
BeatofIke
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BeatofIke
You should probably enable epilepsy warning because of 10:48:654 (1).
About 11:24:451 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3), it depends on how you read it. If you read notes via approach circle then it's quite easy.
For players who assumes that all kick sliders should always start on white ticks then it's quite unexpected!
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki

BeatofIke wrote:

You should probably enable epilepsy warning because of 10:48:654 (1).
About 11:24:451 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3), it depends on how you read it. If you read notes via approach circle then it's quite easy.
For players who assumes that all kick sliders should always start on white ticks then it's quite unexpected!
Thanks ike~
and enabled epilepsy warning
BeatofIke
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Nao~Flame!
Koiyuki
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BeatofIke wrote:

Nao~Flame!
nao~
Akemi_Homura
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Akemi_Homura
Congratz~! :)
Meg
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soooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!
gratz! 8-)
keeeeeeko
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keeeeeeko
Congratz!
Satellite
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Awesome Yuki chan !!
iiyo
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Sugoi Map~
Last edited by iiyo , edited 1 time in total.
Sellenite
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Sellenite
nao nao~
Taskmaster
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OwO
Vhy
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gratz yuki ＞＜
Koiyuki
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Thank you all guys~ :3

Storm- wrote:

So me and a bunch of friends were doing maps, and we seen this map got ranked so i decided to do it, and I SS"d it and for some reason it never uploaded? why
submission error? I dont know :<
Flask
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挖哇哇哇哇哇哇哇哇哇哇
Kamio Misuzu
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诶，好 恭喜~
fanzhen0019
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妈呀撞bg了
Koiyuki
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fanzhen0019 wrote:

妈呀撞bg了
maya哪张图和反震大爷撞了 我立刻下下来玩
-Nanaka-
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gratz :)
iiyo
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[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

Thank you all guys~ :3

Storm- wrote:

So me and a bunch of friends were doing maps, and we seen this map got ranked so i decided to do it, and I SS"d it and for some reason it never uploaded? why
submission error? I dont know :<

Great map! +1 +1 +111111111111 Love the flow of the last song.. =] Would play again!
CakiP
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gratz! omedetou~
Nichiyouki
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nao~ <3

Congratz \:D/
ariescool
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oh I love this map :>
Oyatsu
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NO have https://osu.ppy.sh/s/151251 ? =w= Abit sad!
Anyways, Congratz!! :)
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