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V.K - Reverse - Parallel Universe [OsuMania]

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Arzenvald
no more update after bubble, please..
Topic Starter
Chamelo
whoops, my bad :P
Harbyter
working on :D
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Oh yeah, a little concern.

Can I edit the OP (not by updating beatmap) when it was bubbled/ranked?
I mean, without popping the bubble.
Backstep
เดี๋ยวก็แรงค์แล้ว :P
Blocko
This map. I just love it.
Btw Harbyter passed the map onto me to check (as told by ExUsagi), so I'm taking his place.


Chamelo_Th wrote:

Oh yeah, a little concern.

Can I edit the OP (not by updating beatmap) when it was bubbled/ranked?
I mean, without popping the bubble.
Yeah, you can edit the description and it doesn't change the map's icon status.

Okay, here I go.




[General]
Artist: Change the artist to "V.K".
7K
7K Column:
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
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[Easy]
Check inside
00:34:645 (34645|1) - Replace keysound with B4H with 70% volume

00:49:145 (49145|3,49395|5,49645|2,49895|1) - Use 50% volume for these notes to be the same as Hard?

00:53:145 (53145|6,53395|3,53645|0) - Same suggestion as above

00:56:645 (56645|5) - Move to 4, then 00:56:895 (56895|6,57395|4) - switch these notes around by column for piano pitch

01:26:895 (86895|4) - Extend this LN up to 01:27:645 - to have similarities with Normal.

01:27:645 (87645|1) - Use F5H with 70% volume

01:39:270 (99270|3) - Snap the LN to the white line.

02:04:645 (124645|6) - Snap down to 02:04:613 - using 1/16 Beat Snap Divisor.

02:27:895 (147895|3) - Move to 2 or 3 for hand balance

02:42:145 (162145|1,162145|5) - Snap up to 02:42:176 - using 1/16 Beat Snap Divisor.
If you applied the suggestion above, move 02:41:895 (161895|1,162176|1) - to 1 and move 02:41:895 (161895|5,162176|5) - to 7. Using outermost columns will give a lot more impact, so 1 and 7 should be a good place for the ending.
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[Normal]
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00:11:895 - Add a note here for chord consistency?
If you applied the suggestion above, be sure to use F#4H_Gb4H with 70% volume on that note.

00:13:199 (13199|4) - Replace keysound with A4H with 70% volume

00:18:678 (18678|1) - Move to 5, then 00:19:069 (19069|4) - move to 3 for piano pitch

00:22:330 (22330|0) - Replace keysound with F#4H_Gb4H with 70% volume

00:38:270 (38270|1) - Move to 1 so this measure can be a bit special for only using white note columns?

00:44:270 (44270|6) - Replace keysound with B4H with 70% volume

00:45:895 to 00:53:895 - The higher pitched piano notes have 30% volume (barely audible), while the same notes on Hard have 50% volume (audible enough). Make the notes here audible enough as well with 50% volume.

00:47:895 - Add a note on 1 for a piano chord (use Four_EG#B3D#4 with 50% volume)

00:49:895 - Add note on 3 for piano chord (use Four_DF#A3C#4 with 50% volume)

00:51:895 - Add note on 1 for piano chord (use Four_A2C#EG#3 with 50% volume)

00:56:645 (56645|4,56895|6) - Move both notes two columns to the left and 00:57:395 (57395|0) - move to 7 for the pitch

01:08:145 (68145|2) - Move to 5, then 01:08:395 (68395|4,68645|5,68770|3) - move the notes two columns to the right for pitch

01:25:770 - Add a note on 6 for the piano (use D#5H_Eb5H with 70% volume)

01:33:770 - Same suggestion as above

02:17:645 (137645|4,137770|5) - Remove both notes? They might be unnecessary since Hard doesn't have those on.

02:18:395 (138395|4) - Move to 2 for hand balance.

02:21:770 - Add a note on 3 for the piano (use D#5H_Eb5H with 70% volume)

02:23:895 (143895|5) - Use A#3H_Bb3H with 45% volume for this note.

02:29:770 - Add a note on 2 for the piano (use D#5H_Eb5H with 70% volume)

02:42:145 (162145|5,162145|1) - Snap up to 02:42:176 - using 1/16 Beat Snap Divisor.
If you applied the suggestion above, move 02:41:895 (161895|1,162176|1) - to 1 and move 02:41:895 (161895|5,162176|5) - to 7. Using outermost columns will give a lot more impact, so 1 and 7 should be a good place for the ending.
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[Hard]
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00:15:286 - Add a note at 1 for the faint finish

00:56:270 (56270|4,56645|5,56895|6) - Move these notes one column to the left and 00:57:395 (57395|1) - move to 7 for piano pitch

01:07:395 (67395|6,67645|4) - Switch these notes around by column for pitch

01:09:145 (69145|0) - Move to 2 or 3 to give the pattern some flow to it

01:28:270 (88270|5,88645|6) - Move both notes one column to the left and 01:28:895 (88895|4) - move to 7 for the pitch

01:58:020 (118020|6) - Move to 6 to avoid minijack?

02:03:395 (123395|2) - Add whistle.

02:09:270 (129270|3) - Move to 5, then 02:09:645 (129645|3) - move to 2 so the overall pattern plays better based on pitch

02:19:645 (139645|3,139645|4) - Move both notes one column to the right for pattern flow

02:21:895 (141895|2) - Move to 4 to make the pattern easier to do for the left hand

02:24:395 (144395|3) - Move to 3, 02:24:645 (144645|2,144645|6,144645|4) - shift 1 column to the left and 02:24:895 (144895|5,144895|3,144895|1) - shift 1 column to the right. This is so the pattern is arranged to follow the piano pitch.

02:27:770 - Add a note on 6 for the synth

02:30:895 (150895|2,151145|0) - Switch these notes around by column for the pitch

gogogo
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Thank you very much, Blocko!
Basically, I've changed/fixed everything from your mod. so no need to write such a long reply.
Or should I? (Please tell me if I have to.)

Blocko wrote:

This map. I just love it.
<3

Note: I didn't upload yet.
Evening
Hi, im here to check metadata
If Blocko hasn't told you yet,

Artist : V.K克
Romanised Artist : V.K

Source : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/215381 and basically this whole big bunch of thing https://www.google.com.sg/search?q=V.K% ... uQSrx4CYAw

Title : 逆動‧平行時空
Romanised Title : Reverse - Parallel Universe

Source ( @ 14 ) : http://www.cdbaby.com/cd/vksounds3
Though it's not the same as Deemo's Release, this may still be a viable source to look at

The Romanised title isn't Reverse ‧ Parallel Universe due to the period not usable for metadata, instead a hyphen is used in place for it
And i'm rather sure that 逆動‧平行時空 is the title, I can almost read chinese

You have 2 .osb files, remove V.K. - Reverse - Parallel Universe (Chamelo_Th).osb

didn't really bother to check anything else

Honestly, HP 6 is way too low, considering that i mashed through 90% of the song without looking at the screen, it definitely needs something higher, consider 7 for EZ, 7.2 or 7.3 for NM, HD should be ok

The song progress bar is at the bottom of the screen, the yellow bar thing ( My "testplay" on EZ )


and blocko will be back soon, from school to qual this, i'm just passing by so that this doesn't get fuc-ed

Would really love to see the file size dip though, try to use jpg instead of png due to png being lossless



Oh, and consider adding more tags.


Edit:


Was wondering why was the music muffled, I suggest to go for a 192kbps audio if possible ( with consideration of the beatmap size limit ), though it's a rather minor audio quality improvement, it'd be great if you can have a better audio https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RpfQ91VgXrY
Topic Starter
Chamelo
This?



Should be fine now.

By the way, thank you very much for metadata check! :)
also difficulty check. xD
Blocko
Thanks a bunch, Z3nx! You da man.
Hopefully this'll be the final check before qualification. (no kudosu)




[General]
Preview Point: Aimod detects Preview Point conflicts in other diffs. Be sure to snap them back to 01:21:451 - !
7K
7K Column:
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
[]
[Easy]
Check inside
Increase OD to 6.5.
This is to reduce the tendency for players to mash through the song, though just a little bit.
[]
[Normal]
Check inside
Increase HP to 7.5.
It shouldn't really increase the drain that much, especially on the Normal diff.


00:11:951 (11951|2) - Turn this into an LN ending at 00:12:473 - for pattern consistency

00:22:386 (22386|0) - Turn this one into a regular note for pattern consistency

00:22:908 (22908|3) - Move to 6 for pitch relevance
[]
[Hard]
Check inside
Increase HP to 8.
The patterns aren't really that hard and this is the hardest diff in the mapset. HP 8 is like the standard drain in most cases. OD 7.5 isn't, but at least it makes it a little easier to hit and release the LNs.


01:50:576 (110576|5,110826|1) - Move both notes one column to the left, then for the 1/8 notes at 01:50:951 - , use this pattern: http://puu.sh/hp2hG/dffeb2220e.png
The suggested pattern would make the 1/8 notes easier to execute, and the rearranged chordjacks would flow with that easily.



Yeah.
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Done~
Blocko
I leave a piece of my heart to this map.

Qualified!

Congratulations, Chamelo_Th!
Shinzo-
Grats Chamelo ! o/
Arzenvald
deemo world comes to osu..

superb keysound cham, you deserved for this.. /w/ congrats
Evening
gj

always nice to see deemo stuff getting ranked
FlobuFlobs
Gratz :P
Topic Starter
Chamelo
Now everybody put your hands in the air and say, "yeah, yeah, yeah!"

Thank you so much for everything. I seriously can't find such a flaw and metadata sources by myself.
I hope that we'll get to work together again soon or later. <3
-[ AmiShici ]-
Gratz chamelo
Kyousuke-
yeayy deemo songg <33
grats chamelo! awsome mapset!
Akasha-
wow, nice charts with the good song <3 Grats
Gexigamma
Congratz chamelo-tan! :3

"yeah, yeah, yeah!"
Sky_Demon
Congratz!
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