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Anna David - Den Lille Pige

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Rena-chan
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Rena-chan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 1. februar 2010 at 01:27:22

Artist: Anna David
Title: Den Lille Pige
Tags: JarJarJacob NachoPiggy
BPM: 90
Filesize: 5427kb
Play Time: 02:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,18 stars, 187 notes)
  2. Hard (4,5 stars, 331 notes)
  3. Normal (3,03 stars, 188 notes)
Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Wee~ Does this work ? Sure does. Okay !
Last edited by Rena-chan , edited 33 times in total.
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
[RAPE] Has my star!

Great beatmap so far, I'd love to see the other difficulties when they're ready.

...IRC mods in #osu were made although I have no idea why I wasn't pulled up about it ;p
Sourcerer
46 posts
Joined March 2009
Sourcerer
Starred~
And now i want Internetz.
Rena-chan
Topic Starter
Rena-chan

Azure_Kyte wrote:

[RAPE] Has my star!

Great beatmap so far, I'd love to see the other difficulties when they're ready.

...IRC mods in #osu were made although I have no idea why I wasn't pulled up about it ;p
Great modding was done. <3
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Pretty fun in it's own unique way, spacing is weird in a good effective way, nice job and finale kiai was a fun rape :v
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
RAPE Star

O yeah, add BG! =D
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
I am a lazy mod.
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
01:00:90 (1,1) - Remove new combos
01:12:23 (1) - Make this an H-flip of the next note?
01:40:23 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos
01:46:57 (1) - ^
01:50:73 (1) - The jump is kinda crazy compared to the rest of the map, so it doesn't feel very natural
01:57:23 (3) - New combo
02:08:07 (1) - Unintuitive jump
02:35:57 (1) - Hidden slider, unrankable

I stopped pointing out new combo stuff but you really should cut out some of the new combo spam. Also, the red-only combo colours make it kind of dull, try using more of a colour palette?
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Lalala

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige (Rena-chan) [Hard Jar Hitsound].osu
Rena-chan
Topic Starter
Rena-chan

0_o wrote:

01:00:90 (1,1) - Remove new combos
01:12:23 (1) - Make this an H-flip of the next note? - Done.
01:40:23 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos - Done.
01:46:57 (1) - ^ - Done.
01:50:73 (1) - The jump is kinda crazy compared to the rest of the map, so it doesn't feel very natural - Done.
01:57:23 (3) - New combo - Done.
02:08:07 (1) - Unintuitive jump - Done.
02:35:57 (1) - Hidden slider, unrankable - - I'll have a BAT rage at me before I touch that slider.

I stopped pointing out new combo stuff but you really should cut out some of the new combo spam. Also, the red-only combo colours make it kind of dull, try using more of a colour palette?
Oh, also, Jar's hitsounds = applied.
MaxwellDemon
osu! Alumni
903 posts
Here since the beginning
MaxwellDemon
Nice map, I'll do a proper modding when this isn't in WIP...

Here, here have a star first. XD XD
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige (Rena-chan) [Hard].osu
Rena-chan
Topic Starter
Rena-chan

JarJarJacob wrote:

Hello, that slider is unrankable. Minor hitsound fixes.
Fine, it's fixed. >:|
Also, applied hitsound fixes.
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
derp

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige (Rena-chan) [Jar's Easy].osu
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige (Rena-chan) [NP's Normal].osu
Rena-chan
Topic Starter
Rena-chan
Ready for modding now~
heintsi
1,126 posts
Joined January 2009
heintsi
:P
naruti
219 posts
Joined August 2008
naruti
0_o it was from rena-chan i dident know...
anyway star XD
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Jar's Easy
nice diff, maybe remove some of the unused timing sections, meh

NP's Normal
nice diff, , , , 2x sectioins in a normal, , , but meh, i guess

Hard
02:29:057 (2) - this note isn't snapped, is this intended, because i think it sounds really perfect on the white tick, snap this sucker

*star, nice sbing
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing looks good

[JAR'S EASY]

looks fine

[NP'S NORMAL]

00:21:905 (x) - break
00:27:238 (x) - ^
02:05:571 (x) this 2x BPM part is a bit hard for a normal imo. I'd stick to 1x BPM here.

[HARD]

02:09:023 (5) - Remove this beat? It follows the music better without it to me

Not a bad map set. Its good to see someone not overmapping a slow(ish) song :)

star'd
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
JAR'S EASY
01:19:415 - 01:49:321 ->This section hitsound is way louder then the other section, which is this 01:53:292 - 02:03:904. Equalize them ?
-Increase hit circle size to be newbie-friendly ?
-Different offset from other diff ?

NP'S NORMAL
The sliders with x2 BPM and whistle spam does not appear flattering to me, it's noisy and unexpected, and it's in normal ? xD
01:28:023 (1,2,3,4) - Substitute all claps here with whistle ? Coz you use soft whistles at the later segments.

HARD
00:36:007 (3,4,5,6) - Imho, these anti jumps are bad to play. D:
01:45:040 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:06:023 (4,5,6) - Must you really use x2 sliders ? They are not really fitting and fun to play tbh.
02:09:057 (7) - O.O at the slider shape with whistle beep beep-ing
02:20:023 (6) - ^ ( This is more annoying I think)
02:28:090 (9) - Please evenize your jump
02:29:057 (2) - snap this ?
02:36:023 (3) - This is killing my ears (I mean whistle)

GENERAL
- I think hitsound volume during the chorus for all difficulty are really loud and not flattering to the ears. Whistles are really really. I suggest you use a custom whistle sound with lower volume if possible.
- Why you need 4 custom combo colour since I can see that your 3rd and your 4th combo colour are the same.
Azquelt
8 posts
Joined April 2008
Azquelt
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby

alvisto wrote:

02:36:023 (3) - This is killing my ears (I mean whistle)
:|
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
Jar's Easy
00:38:238(2,3) - center these on the y-axis?
00:48:904(2,3) - ^
01:47:571(^) - ^

maybe like this
[attachment=0:8cd39]screenshot005 rena.jpg[/attachment:8cd39]


NP's Normal
00:58:738(1) - start on white tick. Insert a note on the blue tick before it
overall - at some parts the hitsounds are too loud (the claps seem louder on this diff than on the other maps)

Hard
00:12:904(9) - center this
00:21:905(2,3,4) - ugly, fix it?


Overall i like, its a nice map
star
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi
Lol, This is epic and rocks, STAR!
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi
.... Anyway, I found nazi mistake. on Hard.

00:34:238 (3, 4) - Move to right 1 time in grid level 3, both notes doesn't fit with 1 and 2 note.
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
NP's Normal less 2xBPM rape edition

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige (Rena-chan) [Normal].osu
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Ok then. Round 2

-I'm liking that storyboard
-Why do you have 4 combo colours when you're only using red and pink? You should remove those other two
[EASY]

01:15:071 (x) - Remove all those unused Timing sections?

Apart from that, looks good

[NORMAL]

00:58:738 (1) - This sounds better to me if you push it 1/4 forward (and shorten it by 1/4)
01:11:572 (x) - Beat here?
02:04:905 (x) -Remove the unused timing sections?
02:45:571 (x) - ^

[HARD]

02:09:238 (5) - I still think it follows better when you remove this beat

Sweet. Can't star since I've already starred
Rena-chan
Topic Starter
Rena-chan

Doomsday93 wrote:

Ok then. Round 2

-I'm liking that storyboard
-Why do you have 4 combo colours when you're only using red and pink? You should remove those other two Fixed.
[EASY]

01:15:071 (x) - Remove all those unused Timing sections? Fixed.

Apart from that, looks good

[NORMAL]

00:58:738 (1) - This sounds better to me if you push it 1/4 forward (and shorten it by 1/4)
01:11:572 (x) - Beat here?
02:04:905 (x) -Remove the unused timing sections?
02:45:571 (x) - ^

[HARD]

02:09:238 (5) - I still think it follows better when you remove this beat Fixed.

Sweet. Can't star since I've already starred
maal
maal
Star FELLOW DANISH POWAH!, Anyways, nice map.
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
The Little Pig Girl

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige (Rena-chan) [Normal].osu
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Good good

Protobubbled
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
[Normal]

00:18:571 (3) - Sounds like the newcombo should start here.
01:01:571 (6) - ^
01:46:905 (3) - ^


Also, you need to get the SB fixed so that the map can end properly.
Rena-chan
Topic Starter
Rena-chan

whymeman wrote:

[Normal]

00:18:571 (3) - Sounds like the newcombo should start here.
01:01:571 (6) - ^
01:46:905 (3) - ^


Also, you need to get the SB fixed so that the map can end properly.
Small changes, I fixed everything.
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Almost, but the black background in the SB is still going past the ending point of the map (doesn't end after the final note). See if that can be fixed then i'll bubble.

Edit: Alright then. Bubble for you.
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Oh yes. Take it off.
Oh I uhh... ranked!
Onizuki
49 posts
Joined November 2009
Onizuki
Woot! Dansk Sang...FLOT! :)

ps. Tak Rena :)
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