Anna David - Den Lille Pige · forum

Rena-chan

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Rena-chan 2009-10-23T11:30:49+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 1. februar 2010 at 01:27:22

Artist: Anna David
Title: Den Lille Pige
Tags: JarJarJacob NachoPiggy
BPM: 90
Filesize: 5427kb
Play Time: 02:45
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2,18 stars, 187 notes)
Hard (4,5 stars, 331 notes)
Normal (3,03 stars, 188 notes)

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Wee~ Does this work ? Sure does. Okay !

Last edited by Rena-chan 2011-10-21T03:18:04+00:00, edited 33 times in total.

Azure_Kite

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Azure_Kite 2009-10-23T13:44:52+00:00

[RAPE] Has my star!

Great beatmap so far, I'd love to see the other difficulties when they're ready.

...IRC mods in #osu were made ~~although I have no idea why I wasn't pulled up about it ;p~~

Sourcerer

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Joined March 2009

Sourcerer 2009-10-23T13:45:47+00:00

Starred~
And now i want Internetz.

Rena-chan

Topic Starter

Rena-chan 2009-10-23T13:47:24+00:00

Azure_Kyte wrote:
[RAPE] Has my star!

Great beatmap so far, I'd love to see the other difficulties when they're ready.

...IRC mods in #osu were made ~~although I have no idea why I wasn't pulled up about it ;p~~

Great modding was done. <3

Nachy

807 posts

Joined April 2009

Nachy 2009-10-23T14:43:25+00:00

Pretty fun in it's own unique way, spacing is weird in a good effective way, nice job and finale kiai was a fun rape :v

Ultimate

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Joined December 2008

Ultimate 2009-10-23T15:06:28+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

GladiOol

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GladiOol 2009-10-23T15:52:36+00:00

~~RAPE~~ Star

O yeah, add BG! =D

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-10-24T00:44:08+00:00

I am a lazy mod.

fartownik

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Joined December 2008

fartownik 2009-10-24T02:03:25+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

0_o

2,155 posts

Joined December 2008

0_o 2009-10-24T04:48:57+00:00

01:00:90 (1,1) - Remove new combos
01:12:23 (1) - Make this an H-flip of the next note?
01:40:23 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos
01:46:57 (1) - ^
01:50:73 (1) - The jump is kinda crazy compared to the rest of the map, so it doesn't feel very natural
01:57:23 (3) - New combo
02:08:07 (1) - Unintuitive jump
02:35:57 (1) - Hidden slider, unrankable

I stopped pointing out new combo stuff but you really should cut out some of the new combo spam. Also, the red-only combo colours make it kind of dull, try using more of a colour palette?

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-10-24T08:32:21+00:00

Lalala

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige (Rena-chan) [Hard Jar Hitsound].osu

Rena-chan

Topic Starter

Rena-chan 2009-10-24T09:09:00+00:00

0_o wrote:
01:00:90 (1,1) - Remove new combos
01:12:23 (1) - Make this an H-flip of the next note? - Done.
01:40:23 (1,1,1) - Remove new combos - Done.
01:46:57 (1) - ^ - Done.
01:50:73 (1) - The jump is kinda crazy compared to the rest of the map, so it doesn't feel very natural - Done.
01:57:23 (3) - New combo - Done.
02:08:07 (1) - Unintuitive jump - Done.
02:35:57 (1) - Hidden slider, unrankable - - I'll have a BAT rage at me before I touch that slider.

I stopped pointing out new combo stuff but you really should cut out some of the new combo spam. Also, the red-only combo colours make it kind of dull, try using more of a colour palette?

Oh, also, Jar's hitsounds = applied.

MaxwellDemon

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Here since the beginning

MaxwellDemon 2009-10-26T17:39:02+00:00

Nice map, I'll do a proper modding when this isn't in WIP...

Here, here have a star first. XD XD

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-10-27T12:35:51+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige (Rena-chan) [Hard].osu

Rena-chan

Topic Starter

Rena-chan 2009-11-02T13:05:49+00:00

JarJarJacob wrote:
Hello, that slider is unrankable. Minor hitsound fixes.

Fine, it's fixed. >:|
Also, applied hitsound fixes.

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-11-06T11:41:18+00:00

derp

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige (Rena-chan) [Jar's Easy].osu

Nachy

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Nachy 2009-11-06T13:24:25+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Anna David - Den Lille Pige (Rena-chan) [NP's Normal].osu

Rena-chan

Topic Starter

Rena-chan 2009-11-06T13:31:31+00:00

Ready for modding now~

heintsi

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heintsi 2009-11-07T15:22:10+00:00

naruti

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Joined August 2008

naruti 2009-11-07T15:23:14+00:00

0_o it was from rena-chan i dident know...
anyway star XD

EEeee

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Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-11-25T15:28:31+00:00

Jar's Easy
nice diff, maybe remove some of the unused timing sections, meh

NP's Normal
nice diff, , , , 2x sectioins in a normal, , , but meh, i guess

Hard
02:29:057 (2) - this note isn't snapped, is this intended, because i think it sounds really perfect on the white tick, snap this sucker

*star, nice sbing

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2009-11-25T22:52:11+00:00

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing looks good

[JAR'S EASY]

looks fine

[NP'S NORMAL]

00:21:905 (x) - break
00:27:238 (x) - ^
02:05:571 (x) this 2x BPM part is a bit hard for a normal imo. I'd stick to 1x BPM here.

[HARD]

02:09:023 (5) - Remove this beat? It follows the music better without it to me

Not a bad map set. Its good to see someone not overmapping a slow(ish) song

star'd

alvisto

881 posts

Joined April 2009

alvisto 2009-11-27T17:52:20+00:00

JAR'S EASY
01:19:415 - 01:49:321 ->This section hitsound is way louder then the other section, which is this 01:53:292 - 02:03:904. Equalize them ?
-Increase hit circle size to be newbie-friendly ?
-Different offset from other diff ?

NP'S NORMAL
The sliders with x2 BPM and whistle spam does not appear flattering to me, it's noisy and unexpected, and it's in normal ? xD
01:28:023 (1,2,3,4) - Substitute all claps here with whistle ? Coz you use soft whistles at the later segments.

HARD
00:36:007 (3,4,5,6) - Imho, these anti jumps are bad to play. D:
01:45:040 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:06:023 (4,5,6) - Must you really use x2 sliders ? They are not really fitting and fun to play tbh.
02:09:057 (7) - O.O at the slider shape with whistle beep beep-ing
02:20:023 (6) - ^ ( This is more annoying I think)
02:28:090 (9) - Please evenize your jump
02:29:057 (2) - snap this ?
02:36:023 (3) - This is killing my ears (I mean whistle)

GENERAL
- I think hitsound volume during the chorus for all difficulty are really loud and not flattering to the ears. Whistles are really really. I suggest you use a custom whistle sound with lower volume if possible.
- Why you need 4 custom combo colour since I can see that your 3rd and your 4th combo colour are the same.

Azquelt

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Joined April 2008

Azquelt 2009-11-30T01:27:42+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Jarby

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Jarby 2009-12-06T13:13:16+00:00