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Kurosaki Maon - unchain.

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Mei
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年9月13日 at 2:24:37

Artist: Kurosaki Maon
Title: unchain.
Tags: rinsukir Tokyo Ravens
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6039kb
Play Time: 04:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.4 stars, 612 notes)
  2. Insane (5.05 stars, 922 notes)
  3. rsk's Normal (1.85 stars, 283 notes)
Download: Kurosaki Maon - unchain.
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k-kira(ゝ∀･)
Last edited by Mei , edited 35 times in total.
rinsukir
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rinsukir
神麻婆又要rank图惹.-.
EDIT: hitsound irc modded.
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2014-02-28 13:03 Mei: 音效来指导一下啊
2014-02-28 13:03 Mei: 呜呜
2014-02-28 13:03 rinsukir: 03:27:503 (1) - 
2014-02-28 13:03 rinsukir: 要么换一个音效要么调小声
2014-02-28 13:03 rinsukir: 你神音效
2014-02-28 13:03 rinsukir: 我挑不出东西
2014-02-28 13:04 Mei: 等等啊
2014-02-28 13:04 Mei: 别跑1
2014-02-28 13:04 rinsukir: 还有开头一段
2014-02-28 13:04 rinsukir: 最好下的松一点
2014-02-28 13:04 Mei: 开头蛮送啊
2014-02-28 13:04 rinsukir: 音量小一点
2014-02-28 13:04 Mei: 松
2014-02-28 13:04 rinsukir: 最好别用whistle
2014-02-28 13:04 rinsukir: 我说音效
2014-02-28 13:04 Mei: 嗯
2014-02-28 13:04 Mei: 行
2014-02-28 13:04 rinsukir: 有松的段落才能体现出紧的段落
2014-02-28 13:05 Mei: 候
2014-02-28 13:05 rinsukir: 00:19:837 (1) - 不加音效?
2014-02-28 13:05 Mei: 没什么好加的吧
2014-02-28 13:05 Mei: 感觉加finish有点不对
2014-02-28 13:05 rinsukir: finish可以吧
2014-02-28 13:05 rinsukir: .
2014-02-28 13:05 rinsukir: normal finish
2014-02-28 13:05 rinsukir: 你whistle什么时候下的这么神啦
2014-02-28 13:05 Mei: 我看看
2014-02-28 13:06 Mei: whistle我一边下一边改
2014-02-28 13:06 rinsukir: 然后就是建议1/4下多点whistle
2014-02-28 13:06 Mei: 后面的kiai超前面的
2014-02-28 13:06 rinsukir: 00:43:503 (1,2,3,4) - 
2014-02-28 13:06 rinsukir: 就说这串
2014-02-28 13:06 rinsukir: 你可以12 3还有后面滑条头whistle
2014-02-28 13:06 rinsukir: 服气
2014-02-28 13:07 Mei: 候啊
2014-02-28 13:07 Mei: 感觉不错
2014-02-28 13:07 rinsukir: 后面和前面一些类似的1/4可以考虑这样下
2014-02-28 13:07 rinsukir: whistle可以突出1/4
2014-02-28 13:08 rinsukir: 00:53:003 (3) - 考虑clap?
2014-02-28 13:08 rinsukir: 00:59:086 (5,6,7,8,9) - 太吵
2014-02-28 13:08 Mei: 有finish了
2014-02-28 13:08 Mei: 加clap太吵
2014-02-28 13:09 Mei: 这里加clap是有鼓
2014-02-28 13:09 Mei: 还好把
2014-02-28 13:09 rinsukir: 00:59:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 个人感觉这段没必要全部白线下clap
2014-02-28 13:09 rinsukir: 那你也别全都下啊.-.
2014-02-28 13:09 rinsukir: 留几个不下
2014-02-28 13:09 Mei: 这里是抄神麻婆的
2014-02-28 13:09 rinsukir: 01:02:336 (6,7) - clap
2014-02-28 13:10 rinsukir: 谁啊
2014-02-28 13:10 Mei: 我只下了红白线把0 0
2014-02-28 13:10 Mei: cxu
2014-02-28 13:10 rinsukir: .
2014-02-28 13:10 rinsukir: 唉
2014-02-28 13:10 rinsukir: 风格问题
2014-02-28 13:10 Mei: 我觉得还行
2014-02-28 13:10 Mei: 就这样抄了
2014-02-28 13:10 rinsukir: 你滑条头尾都下了号码
2014-02-28 13:10 rinsukir: .
2014-02-28 13:10 Mei: 咦
2014-02-28 13:10 Mei: 诶嘿
2014-02-28 13:11 rinsukir: 01:02:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 为什么突然用whistle
2014-02-28 13:11 rinsukir: 个人感觉可以用clap
2014-02-28 13:11 rinsukir: 01:05:170 (1) - 考虑clap?
2014-02-28 13:11 rinsukir: 01:06:670 (1) - ^
2014-02-28 13:11 Mei: 背景音乐也少了点东西
2014-02-28 13:12 Mei: 这里用whistle我觉得是对的
2014-02-28 13:12 Mei: .-.
2014-02-28 13:12 Mei: 那个用的是finish代替clap啊
2014-02-28 13:12 rinsukir: 01:09:170 (7) - 头whistle
2014-02-28 13:12 rinsukir: 这样啊
2014-02-28 13:12 rinsukir: 01:10:503 (5) - ^
2014-02-28 13:12 rinsukir: 算了whistle我先不挑
2014-02-28 13:12 rinsukir: 等我吃完饭仔细看看
2014-02-28 13:12 rinsukir: 先去吃饭
2014-02-28 13:13 Mei: 呜呜
2014-02-28 13:13 Mei: 你可以有时间写个mod啊
2014-02-28 13:13 Mei: 我去送你意粉
2014-02-28 13:13 Mei: 一分
2014-02-28 13:13 Mei: 或者这就算irc了
2014-02-28 13:13 Mei: 你可以去骗一分
2014-02-28 13:31 rinsukir: 我回来啦
2014-02-28 13:32 rinsukir: 懒写mod 我就给你简单看看音效而已
2014-02-28 13:32 rinsukir: 看完当irc po上去
2014-02-28 13:32 Mei: 候
2014-02-28 13:32 Mei: 然后我送你意粉
2014-02-28 13:32 Mei: 爽
2014-02-28 13:32 rinsukir: 爽
2014-02-28 13:32 rinsukir: whistle我估计不会一个个仔细挑啦
2014-02-28 13:33 Mei: 03:29:170 (1) - 
2014-02-28 13:33 Mei: 主要帮我看看那一段啊
2014-02-28 13:33 Mei: 那一段我下的烂
2014-02-28 13:33 rinsukir: 等下啊
2014-02-28 13:34 rinsukir: 01:14:836 (1,2,3,4) - 这段改改
2014-02-28 13:34 rinsukir: 1头clap
2014-02-28 13:34 rinsukir: 2和3头尾whistle
2014-02-28 13:34 rinsukir: 4头clap
2014-02-28 13:34 rinsukir: 这样好听点
2014-02-28 13:34 rinsukir: 01:16:503 (4) - 尾巴去掉clap 可以考虑换成whistle
2014-02-28 13:35 rinsukir: 01:19:086 (4) - 头去掉clap 可以考虑换成whistle
2014-02-28 13:35 Mei: 01:16:836 (5) - 
2014-02-28 13:36 Mei: 啊不对
2014-02-28 13:36 Mei: 看错了
2014-02-28 13:36 Mei: 01:19:086 (4) - 
2014-02-28 13:36 Mei: 这个不能改啊
2014-02-28 13:36 Mei: 是原曲有得
2014-02-28 13:36 rinsukir: 我开25%都听不到啊
2014-02-28 13:36 rinsukir: 思考
2014-02-28 13:37 Mei: 咦
2014-02-28 13:37 Mei: 如果没有的话我就不会那样下note啊
2014-02-28 13:37 rinsukir: 01:28:003 (8,9) - 可以考虑把头的clap换到尾巴
2014-02-28 13:37 rinsukir: 我说你音效而已啊
2014-02-28 13:37 Mei: 难道是我做的时候幻听了
2014-02-28 13:37 rinsukir: 你看看你
2014-02-28 13:37 rinsukir: 估计是幻听
2014-02-28 13:37 Mei: 不过也不能换
2014-02-28 13:38 Mei: 会感觉漏拍
2014-02-28 13:38 rinsukir: 01:29:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 这段好突然..
2014-02-28 13:38 Mei: 漏了一个clap
2014-02-28 13:38 Mei: 我加了一个whistle
2014-02-28 13:38 rinsukir: 3和4的头可以考虑whistle
2014-02-28 13:38 rinsukir: 啥
2014-02-28 13:38 Mei: 你是说音效么
2014-02-28 13:38 Mei: 还是什么突然
2014-02-28 13:38 rinsukir: 01:34:169 (4) - 头最好加个whistle
2014-02-28 13:38 rinsukir: 是
2014-02-28 13:38 rinsukir: 不对
2014-02-28 13:38 rinsukir: clap
2014-02-28 13:39 rinsukir: 01:34:503 (5) - clap?
2014-02-28 13:39 Mei: 还是finshi吧
2014-02-28 13:39 rinsukir: hou
2014-02-28 13:39 rinsukir: 03:29:170 (1) - 我还是先看这段吧
2014-02-28 13:40 rinsukir: 等等 你好像没调过音效
2014-02-28 13:40 rinsukir: 请你吃电视
2014-02-28 13:40 rinsukir: 音量*
2014-02-28 13:40 Mei: 啥
2014-02-28 13:40 Mei: 啊
2014-02-28 13:40 Mei: 对啊
2014-02-28 13:40 Mei: 我不会
2014-02-28 13:40 Mei: 那是啥
2014-02-28 13:40 Mei: 哦我不是不会调
2014-02-28 13:40 Mei: 神恶魔状况下调不懂啊
2014-02-28 13:40 rinsukir: 那是啥
2014-02-28 13:40 rinsukir: .
2014-02-28 13:41 rinsukir: 你就平缓(?)段落低音量 kiai高音量就行啦
2014-02-28 13:41 Mei: 什么状况下该改变音量
2014-02-28 13:41 rinsukir: 一段一段来很简单的吧
2014-02-28 13:41 Mei: 多低多高啊没思考过
2014-02-28 13:41 Mei: 呜呜
2014-02-28 13:41 rinsukir: 你个神麻婆居然不会调
2014-02-28 13:41 rinsukir: 请你吃电视
2014-02-28 13:41 rinsukir: 00:11:837 (1) - 比如说这段
2014-02-28 13:41 rinsukir: 比较静的
2014-02-28 13:41 rinsukir: 可以考虑50左右
2014-02-28 13:42 Mei: 好
2014-02-28 13:42 Mei: 50
2014-02-28 13:42 rinsukir: 00:19:837 (1) - 然后这个转盘尾就要调高一点一辆了
2014-02-28 13:42 rinsukir: 音量
2014-02-28 13:42 rinsukir: 可以考虑70
2014-02-28 13:42 Mei: 候啊那里就是75
2014-02-28 13:42 rinsukir: 00:33:170 (1) - 间奏过了就比较安静了
2014-02-28 13:43 rinsukir: 可以考虑60到65
2014-02-28 13:43 rinsukir: 00:42:670 (1) - 这里开始可以调大一点
2014-02-28 13:43 rinsukir: 00:43:836 (1) - 然后这里开始没那么安静了
2014-02-28 13:43 rinsukir: 可以考虑70-75
2014-02-28 13:44 rinsukir: 00:54:503 (1) - kiai前的过渡段 音量小一点
2014-02-28 13:44 rinsukir: 60到65这样就好
2014-02-28 13:44 rinsukir: 不对
2014-02-28 13:44 rinsukir: 那段鼓点重
2014-02-28 13:44 rinsukir: 你自己想吧(
2014-02-28 13:45 Mei: 我好想懂了
2014-02-28 13:45 Mei: .-.
2014-02-28 13:45 rinsukir: 好
2014-02-28 13:45 rinsukir: 那你自己想把
2014-02-28 13:46 Mei: prpr
2014-02-28 13:46 rinsukir: 03:29:170 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - 这段可以考虑下的松一点
2014-02-28 13:47 rinsukir: 03:37:836 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这段不用下那么多clap吧
2014-02-28 13:47 Mei: 我就是完全不会下啊
2014-02-28 13:48 rinsukir: 03:59:003 (7,8) - 你幻听
2014-02-28 13:48 rinsukir: .
2014-02-28 13:48 Mei: 只肯定那个1/3滑条要clap
2014-02-28 13:48 rinsukir: 我想想
2014-02-28 13:48 rinsukir: 咦
2014-02-28 13:48 rinsukir: 你还有1/3?
2014-02-28 13:48 Mei: 03:33:170 (1,2) - 
2014-02-28 13:48 rinsukir: 03:34:503 (1) - 这个前面尽量只用whistle
2014-02-28 13:48 rinsukir: 不然就规矩24clap
2014-02-28 13:48 rinsukir: 等等
2014-02-28 13:49 rinsukir: 上面那句当我没说
2014-02-28 13:49 rinsukir: 尽量只用whistle就行
2014-02-28 13:49 rinsukir: 1/3滑条要clap的话建议减音量
2014-02-28 13:49 Mei: 那24clap呢
2014-02-28 13:49 rinsukir: 03:34:503 (1) - 这个后面24clap就好
2014-02-28 13:49 rinsukir: 啥
2014-02-28 13:49 rinsukir: 前面别下clap
2014-02-28 13:50 rinsukir: whistle也下的松一点
2014-02-28 13:50 rinsukir: 感觉这曲子其实可以规矩13whistle24clap啊
2014-02-28 13:50 Mei: 咦
2014-02-28 13:51 Mei: 感觉十分正确
2014-02-28 13:52 rinsukir: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/293759 ClariS - Luminous]
2014-02-28 13:52 rinsukir: 用飞球diff的音效我觉得就挺好
2014-02-28 13:54 Mei: 唉
2014-02-28 13:54 Mei: 音效怎么这么难
2014-02-28 13:54 Mei: 我完全没懂
2014-02-28 13:54 rinsukir: 我也
2014-02-28 13:54 Mei: .-.
2014-02-28 13:54 rinsukir: 音效基本上都看感觉下的吧
2014-02-28 13:54 rinsukir: 好听不违和就行
2014-02-28 13:54 Mei: 候啊你可以去骗一分了
2014-02-28 13:55 rinsukir: 好
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
good beatmap! ^^ ~ I like this so much and wish you good luck! x3
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Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei
thank you for your support Mikarunoel131 :)
Atrue
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Joined July 2012
Atrue
Hello~
From your req

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
irc mod(if it is)
2014-03-09 17:36 Atrue: god
2014-03-09 17:36 Atrue: 略跳
2014-03-09 17:36 Mei: youdian
2014-03-09 17:36 Mei: 不过后面没什么太难得了
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: 我还有各种路人断
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: 也不是，这么跳也是应该断
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: 不知道该断在哪里
2014-03-09 17:37 Mei: 嗯
2014-03-09 17:37 Mei: 怎样啊
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: 我去看看hard
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: 整体挺爽啊
2014-03-09 17:37 Mei: 嗯
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: hd可以+1
2014-03-09 17:37 Mei: 好
2014-03-09 17:37 Mei: 呜呜
2014-03-09 17:38 Atrue: 我看着血条心惊胆战
2014-03-09 17:38 Mei: 行
2014-03-09 17:38 Mei: 因为我自己打没什么问题
2014-03-09 17:38 Mei: 所以我不太清湖
2014-03-09 17:43 Atrue: 还行，音效很漂亮，有个别地方可能需要说下
2014-03-09 17:43 Atrue: 应该不多，你等我mod就行
2014-03-09 17:43 Mei: 好啊
2014-03-09 17:43 Mei: ok
2014-03-09 17:43 Atrue: 我也是低ar恐惧
2014-03-09 17:43 Atrue: haha
2014-03-09 17:44 Mei: ;w;
2014-03-09 17:44 Mei: 来试试nm
2014-03-09 17:44 Atrue: 那我上mod
2014-03-09 17:44 Mei: 嗯
2014-03-09 17:47 Atrue: 怎么这么多转盘
2014-03-09 17:48 Atrue: normal的话感觉偏简单了
2014-03-09 17:48 Atrue: 我去吃饭了，今晚估计给你摸一下
2014-03-09 17:48 Mei: 那我要不要补个难度啊
2014-03-09 17:48 Atrue: 这个当ez不好
2014-03-09 17:49 Atrue: 你会发现，note密度有时高有时低
2014-03-09 17:49 Mei: 嗯
2014-03-09 17:49 Atrue: 高的时候是normal，低的时候也是偏向ez
2014-03-09 17:49 Atrue: 不过一般没人这么刁难低难度
2014-03-09 17:49 Atrue: 尤其是1st
2014-03-09 17:50 Mei: 那你觉得要改是想密集一点改还是在删note啊
2014-03-09 17:50 Atrue: 密集一点
2014-03-09 17:50 Atrue: 而且我觉得密集的姿势不太对
2014-03-09 17:50 Mei: 其实我是想自己再做个难度
2014-03-09 17:50 Atrue: 然后可能需要一个ez
2014-03-09 17:50 Atrue: 对
2014-03-09 17:50 Mei: 大概4星左右
2014-03-09 17:50 Mei: 但是就是看看别人怎么说
2014-03-09 17:50 Atrue: 你是想把它弄简单了啊。。那我觉得可能还不太好弄
2014-03-09 17:51 Mei: 呜呜
2014-03-09 17:51 Mei: 问题是这是gd啊
2014-03-09 17:51 Mei: 啊总之你看着办.-.
2014-03-09 17:51 Mei: 交给你啦少年
2014-03-09 17:51 Atrue: 所以我去让他加点东西
2014-03-09 17:51 Mei: 嗯嗯
2014-03-09 17:51 Atrue: 改天让你试试我的新图哈
2014-03-09 17:51 Atrue: 或者做完了就让你直接testplay
2014-03-09 17:52 Mei: 好w
2014-03-09 17:52 Mei: ok
2014-03-09 17:52 Atrue: lol
2014-03-09 17:52 Atrue: 吃饭去了，你抓紧睡会吧。。
2014-03-09 17:52 Mei: 嗯好的w
2014-03-09 17:52 Mei: 白白
2014-03-09 17:52 Atrue: 拜拜
mainly focused on the overall mapset.
作为迟到的补偿我还是给一颗星(ノ·ω·)ノ︵
你可能需要再加个diff，正像你说的那样
[rsk's Normal]
General
有点空，i整体还行
Beats
00:13:420 - 这些地方可以塞滑条，比单点可能显得充实些，虽然你得找几个长滑条梗
00:49:836 - 不知为何要空
01:51:038 - 这一段也是一样
02:26:336 (3) - 这里又确实节奏紧了些
02:37:003 (2,3,4,5) - 还有这里
03:11:170 - 加个note
转盘有点多我感觉太松了
04:11:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不得不说这里节奏又密集的过于厉害，只是吐槽，具体怎么改我还真是不太清楚
Hitsound
00:38:836 - 利用slidertick做音效
类似这样的地方不少，建议还是这么干
NCs
04:36:836 (1,1) - nc不对，后边nc去掉
[Hard]
General
挺好的
Beats
01:20:170 (6) - 换滑条，有点空
01:21:670 - 加note，有点空
02:31:003 - ^
03:45:836 (1) - 这转盘怎么连着俩，我觉得有点偷懒嫌疑
Placement
01:00:503 (5,6) - 不觉得这边打起来flow会比较陡么？
[Insane]
General
没啥太多要说的
Beats
01:19:003 (3,4,5) - 这里你的节奏从非常平稳的1/2 ,1/4 变化成了这种形态，我觉得原来的音乐没有体现这样的节奏上的变化，可能会有点坑
Placement
02:33:003 (4,1) - 这个跳我感觉可能不是你想要的那种感觉，距离是可以弄得大些的，不过flow的反向，尤其是这种撤回来的感觉是不太好的
02:26:503 (9) - 我觉得做成02:25:837 (6) - 这种梗挺好的，为何是这样下来的？况且这么下来我觉得flow也不好
03:04:670 (5,6,7,1,2) - flow不好，但是不知道怎么改。。我觉得后边的滑条2可能换个方向，然后拉大7,1之间的距离是可取的
03:17:503 (1) - 真心觉得你得把这个滑条弄得漂亮点，对称会好些（我美术也不好你不要怪我）
SPOILER

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From your req

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
irc mod(if it is)
2014-03-09 17:36 Atrue: god
2014-03-09 17:36 Atrue: 略跳
2014-03-09 17:36 Mei: youdian
2014-03-09 17:36 Mei: 不过后面没什么太难得了
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: 我还有各种路人断
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: 也不是，这么跳也是应该断
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: 不知道该断在哪里
2014-03-09 17:37 Mei: 嗯
2014-03-09 17:37 Mei: 怎样啊
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: 我去看看hard
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: 整体挺爽啊
2014-03-09 17:37 Mei: 嗯
2014-03-09 17:37 Atrue: hd可以+1
2014-03-09 17:37 Mei: 好
2014-03-09 17:37 Mei: 呜呜
2014-03-09 17:38 Atrue: 我看着血条心惊胆战
2014-03-09 17:38 Mei: 行
2014-03-09 17:38 Mei: 因为我自己打没什么问题
2014-03-09 17:38 Mei: 所以我不太清湖
2014-03-09 17:43 Atrue: 还行，音效很漂亮，有个别地方可能需要说下
2014-03-09 17:43 Atrue: 应该不多，你等我mod就行
2014-03-09 17:43 Mei: 好啊
2014-03-09 17:43 Mei: ok
2014-03-09 17:43 Atrue: 我也是低ar恐惧
2014-03-09 17:43 Atrue: haha
2014-03-09 17:44 Mei: ;w;
2014-03-09 17:44 Mei: 来试试nm
2014-03-09 17:44 Atrue: 那我上mod
2014-03-09 17:44 Mei: 嗯
2014-03-09 17:47 Atrue: 怎么这么多转盘
2014-03-09 17:48 Atrue: normal的话感觉偏简单了
2014-03-09 17:48 Atrue: 我去吃饭了，今晚估计给你摸一下
2014-03-09 17:48 Mei: 那我要不要补个难度啊
2014-03-09 17:48 Atrue: 这个当ez不好
2014-03-09 17:49 Atrue: 你会发现，note密度有时高有时低
2014-03-09 17:49 Mei: 嗯
2014-03-09 17:49 Atrue: 高的时候是normal，低的时候也是偏向ez
2014-03-09 17:49 Atrue: 不过一般没人这么刁难低难度
2014-03-09 17:49 Atrue: 尤其是1st
2014-03-09 17:50 Mei: 那你觉得要改是想密集一点改还是在删note啊
2014-03-09 17:50 Atrue: 密集一点
2014-03-09 17:50 Atrue: 而且我觉得密集的姿势不太对
2014-03-09 17:50 Mei: 其实我是想自己再做个难度
2014-03-09 17:50 Atrue: 然后可能需要一个ez
2014-03-09 17:50 Atrue: 对
2014-03-09 17:50 Mei: 大概4星左右
2014-03-09 17:50 Mei: 但是就是看看别人怎么说
2014-03-09 17:50 Atrue: 你是想把它弄简单了啊。。那我觉得可能还不太好弄
2014-03-09 17:51 Mei: 呜呜
2014-03-09 17:51 Mei: 问题是这是gd啊
2014-03-09 17:51 Mei: 啊总之你看着办.-.
2014-03-09 17:51 Mei: 交给你啦少年
2014-03-09 17:51 Atrue: 所以我去让他加点东西
2014-03-09 17:51 Mei: 嗯嗯
2014-03-09 17:51 Atrue: 改天让你试试我的新图哈
2014-03-09 17:51 Atrue: 或者做完了就让你直接testplay
2014-03-09 17:52 Mei: 好w
2014-03-09 17:52 Mei: ok
2014-03-09 17:52 Atrue: lol
2014-03-09 17:52 Atrue: 吃饭去了，你抓紧睡会吧。。
2014-03-09 17:52 Mei: 嗯好的w
2014-03-09 17:52 Mei: 白白
2014-03-09 17:52 Atrue: 拜拜
mainly focused on the overall mapset.
作为迟到的补偿我还是给一颗星(ノ·ω·)ノ︵where is small star star /.\
你可能需要再加个diff，正像你说的那样

[Hard]
General
挺好的
Beats
01:20:170 (6) - 换滑条，有点空没
01:21:670 - 加note，有点空音
02:31:003 - ^啊
03:45:836 (1) - 这转盘怎么连着俩，我觉得有点偷懒嫌疑原来这里是insane的，后来做了hard才把insane的给map了_(:зゝ∠)_
Placement
01:00:503 (5,6) - 不觉得这边打起来flow会比较陡么？加了nc提示吗，flow应该是没问题的

[Insane]
General
没啥太多要说的
Beats
01:19:003 (3,4,5) - 这里你的节奏从非常平稳的1/2 ,1/4 变化成了这种形态，我觉得原来的音乐没有体现这样的节奏上的变化，可能会有点坑我后来忘了当时是怎么想的，刚刚把note删掉用25%仔细一听背景这里是有对应的不过蛮小声。。我在看看毕竟这个要改不能更简单
Placement
02:33:003 (4,1) - 这个跳我感觉可能不是你想要的那种感觉，距离是可以弄得大些的，不过flow的反向，尤其是这种撤回来的感觉是不太好的我觉得挺棒啊（思考
02:26:503 (9) - 我觉得做成02:25:837 (6) - 这种梗挺好的，为何是这样下来的？况且这么下来我觉得flow也不好fix了虽然我觉得flow还行
03:04:670 (5,6,7,1,2) - flow不好，但是不知道怎么改。。我觉得后边的滑条2可能换个方向，然后拉大7,1之间的距离是可取的换了个更翔的
03:17:503 (1) - 真心觉得你得把这个滑条弄得漂亮点，对称会好些（我美术也不好你不要怪我）这个挺好啊不是很像蜗牛么www不过你不把锚点搞出来我哪知道怎么拉啊/.\
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That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
xiexie mod aaaa
Atrue
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Atrue
忘记了…再补一颗好了…
另外其实不必纠结有没有音的问题
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
rinsukir

Atrue wrote:

[rsk's Normal]
General
有点空，i整体还行
Beats
00:13:420 - 这些地方可以塞滑条，比单点可能显得充实些，虽然你得找几个长滑条梗 还好吧 压星爽11
00:49:836 - 不知为何要空 fix
01:51:038 - 这一段也是一样 这个段落比较静 所以
02:26:336 (3) - 这里又确实节奏紧了些 fix
02:37:003 (2,3,4,5) - 还有这里 fix
03:11:170 - 加个note fix
转盘有点多我感觉太松了 11个..而已(够
04:11:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 不得不说这里节奏又密集的过于厉害，只是吐槽，具体怎么改我还真是不太清楚 我也觉得 都是楼主的错
Hitsound
00:38:836 - 利用slidertick做音效 fixed in another way, 我橘的不用非得24clap的 下不了clap用whistle填充也行嘛
类似这样的地方不少，建议还是这么干
NCs
04:36:836 (1,1) - nc不对，后边nc去掉 fix
thanks for mod~
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481,197,135836,2,0,B|505:148|505:148|490:110|490:110|515:87|515:87|496:54|505:4,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,229,137503,6,0,P|321:193|200:193,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,215,138503,2,0,B|89:289|128:349|128:349|204:343,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,343,139503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
366,338,139836,6,0,L|467:298,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,145,140836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,72,141170,2,0,P|316:51|294:53,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,63,141836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,100,142170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
99,183,142503,6,0,P|106:246|133:283,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,293,143503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
393,285,143836,2,0,P|399:228|428:183,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,128,144503,2,0,P|476:56|451:30,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,25,145003,6,0,L|360:43,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,31,145503,2,0,B|211:77|143:51|143:51|103:104,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,178,146503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,268,146836,2,0,B|90:324|140:327|140:327|184:310|240:336,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,320,147836,6,0,P|391:287|420:206,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,253,149170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,163,149503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,86,149836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,49,150170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
50,46,150503,6,0,L|4:146,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,313,151503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,336,151836,2,0,P|201:342|239:341,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,339,152503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,313,152836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,238,153170,6,0,P|466:175|451:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,57,153836,2,0,P|358:63|315:44,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,32,154503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,21,154836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
41,163,155503,6,0,B|23:225|23:225|45:240|45:240|16:313|80:351,2,200,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,134,157170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,111,157503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,126,157836,2,0,P|361:119|413:129,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,145,158503,6,0,B|462:213|510:266|510:266|470:260,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,110,159836,2,0,B|346:92|346:92|309:110|309:110|257:97|257:97|227:105|227:105|193:85|193:85|161:110|110:108,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,143,161170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
221,342,162170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
310,342,162503,2,0,P|394:328|456:224,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,75,164836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,75,165169,2,0,P|92:89|30:193,2,200,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,166670,12,8,169003,0:0:0:0:
130,123,177170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
396,78,178170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,284,179003,2,0,L|405:353,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,345,179836,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,194,180836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
197,25,181670,2,0,P|260:29|313:21,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,25,182503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,294,183503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,338,184503,2,0,P|145:341|101:324,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,266,185170,6,0,P|19:206|30:111,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,249,186503,2,0,L|255:229,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,216,187170,2,0,P|398:206|443:181,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,124,187836,6,0,P|472:70|436:35,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,26,188503,2,0,P|287:42|245:43,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,47,189170,2,0,P|112:78|71:174,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,43,190503,6,0,L|317:126,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,192,191170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,271,191503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,328,191836,2,0,B|270:307|278:373|194:351,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193170,12,0,195170,0:0:0:0:
167,163,195836,6,0,B|218:148|218:148|256:150|256:150|286:138|286:138|329:138|329:138|371:117|426:137,1,250,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,182,197003,2,0,B|465:223|487:260|487:260|481:290|443:314,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207670,12,4,209170,0:0:0:0:
258,188,211836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,188,214503,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,188,217170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217836,12,0,219336,0:0:0:0:
143,156,219836,6,0,P|211:151|268:90,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,67,220503,2,0,L|352:103,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,134,221003,2,0,P|476:197|463:266,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,318,221836,2,0,L|329:328,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,333,222336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,222503,12,0,225170,0:0:0:0:
341,158,225836,6,0,L|330:223,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,295,226336,2,0,P|257:335|159:334,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,301,227170,2,0,L|78:248,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,163,227670,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,187,228503,6,0,B|338:153|391:156|391:156|414:108|477:84,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,285,230503,6,8,B|181:294|181:294|204:323|204:323|243:323|243:323|269:348|269:348|303:337|303:337|329:345|329:345|377:318,1,250,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,266,231670,2,0,B|475:231|475:231|484:181|446:132,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,232503,12,0,234836,0:0:0:0:
185,147,235503,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,233,235836,6,0,P|255:286|299:306,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,330,236503,2,0,P|391:275|429:246,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,182,237170,2,0,L|506:119,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,159,237836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,105,238170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
229,109,238503,6,0,L|120:88,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,76,239170,2,0,P|12:119|12:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,241,239836,2,0,L|18:287,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,257,240503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,241,240836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,260,241503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
469,191,241836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,101,242170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,76,242336,2,0,P|386:36|334:19,2,100,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,162,243336,2,0,L|315:227,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,241,243836,6,0,B|215:291|164:270|164:270|125:289,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,198,245003,2,0,L|303:143,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,58,245503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
213,33,245836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,40,246170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,98,246503,6,0,P|36:164|41:215,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,278,247170,2,0,P|131:297|166:333,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,353,247670,2,0,L|250:327,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,311,248170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,320,248503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,266,248836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
497,177,249170,6,0,P|474:129|421:98,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,117,249836,2,0,P|298:127|234:113,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,103,250336,2,0,L|166:134,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,198,250836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,287,251170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,331,251503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,348,251836,6,0,P|337:353|398:338,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,294,252503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,206,252836,2,0,L|500:153,2,50,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,215,253503,2,0,P|331:198|305:165,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,94,254170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,69,254503,6,0,B|84:31|84:31|9:39,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,94,255836,2,0,B|304:165|377:152|377:152|392:243|322:301,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,379,257170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
71,249,258170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
61,159,258503,2,0,P|96:93|224:57,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,330,260836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
359,340,261169,2,0,P|425:305|461:177,2,200,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,262670,12,0,265170,0:0:0:0:
167,170,266170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
203,87,266503,6,0,P|246:63|304:62,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,70,267170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,128,267503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,217,267836,2,0,L|428:317,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,349,268836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,270,269503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
68,91,270170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
143,42,270503,2,0,L|249:41,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,54,271503,2,0,L|471:100,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,127,271836,6,0,P|481:186|458:244,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,272503,2,0,P|351:288|306:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,273170,12,0,275836,0:0:0:0:
82,182,276836,5,8,0:0:0:0:
161,139,277170,2,0,P|222:140|262:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,113,277836,2,0,L|412:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,273,278503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
385,337,278836,2,0,L|319:347,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,279503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,319,279836,5,0,0:0:0:0:
54,250,280170,2,0,L|68:190,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,81,280836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,281170,12,0,283836,0:0:0:0:
@mei: 所以说你之前给我挑的问题我改完好像有发给你吧为什么你传的是前一个版本现在我也找不到改过的版本了你说怎么办好伤心啊/cry.
EDIT: 我的diff实际上是2.85 思考
edit2: 至于改节奏的问题 保持nor的话我只会压星做法 顶多塞满1/1 改ez就热吗脾 你书怎么改就怎么改啦
eeezzzeee
979 posts
Joined August 2013
eeezzzeee
Hi, from modding queue

rsk's NORMAL
00:54:503 (1,2) - try like this
SPOILER
00:57:170 (1,2) - ^
02:06:503 (1,2) - ^
02:09:170 (1,2) - ^
02:57:170 (1,2) - ^
02:59:836 (1,2) - ^
03:02:503 (1,2) - ^
03:27:670 (1,1,1,1) - i know you used this for other sections but i dont think it fits the music here
04:38:503 (4) - new combo

HARD
02:42:670 (3,4) - this is a little too far
03:40:003 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - i dont like these 2 very long spinners and then a tiny section and then another spinner. I think the second spinner can be replaced with notes
03:56:503 (2,5) - make these two the same shape
try to keep the combos for similar sections consisent
New combo
01:00:836 (1,2) - new combo on (2) remove on (1)
01:02:336 (1,2) - new combo on (2) remove on (1)
01:03:836 (6) - new combo
01:12:836 (4) - new combo
01:16:836 (3) - new combo
01:22:503 (7,1) - new combo on (7) remove on (1)
01:25:336 (1) - remove new combo, new combo on 01:26:503 (5)
01:26:503 (5) - new combo
01:31:836 (5) - new combo
01:59:836 (1) - remove new combo, new combo on 02:00:836 (6) remove on 02:01:003 (1)
02:15:836 (5,1) - new combo on (5) remove on (1)
02:17:170 (4) - new combo
02:33:836 (1,4) - new combo on (4) remove on (1)
03:00:170 (8,1) - new combo on (8) remove on (1)
04:04:836 (3) - new combo
04:16:836 (1) - remove new combo
04:21:170 (5) - new combo

INSANE
Mapping is good! Just some combo changes
New combo
00:15:837 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:836 (5) - new combo
01:27:836 (7) - new combo
01:53:170 (1) - remove new combo
01:57:170 (5,1) - new combo on (5) remove on (1)
02:12:836 (1,3) - new combo on (3) remove on (1)
02:13:670 (1) - remove new combo
02:28:836 (1,2) - new combo on (2) instead of (1)
02:31:670 (1,2) - new combo on (2) instead of (1)
02:32:503 (1) - remove new combo
02:34:170 (1,2) - new combo on (2) instead of (1)
04:18:170 (1,2,3) - add new combo on (3), (1,2) this part should be in the previous combo, but i see that the style is different so if you change it you might need to rearrange the circles too
04:23:836 (5) - new combo

Map is very nice, mostly just combo changes. Of course I might have missed some places so you should check, but I think this would make the consistency of the combos better. That's all, best of luck :)
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue
HARD
02:42:670 (3,4) - this is a little too farok changed it
03:40:003 (1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - i dont like these 2 very long spinners and then a tiny section and then another spinner. I think the second spinner can be replaced with notesiam too lazy_(:зゝ∠)_ maybe gona fix it one day
03:56:503 (2,5) - make these two the same shapeI did ;_;
try to keep the combos for similar sections consisent
New combo
01:00:836 (1,2) - new combo on (2) remove on (1)
01:02:336 (1,2) - new combo on (2) remove on (1)
01:03:836 (6) - new combo
01:12:836 (4) - new combo
01:16:836 (3) - new combo
01:22:503 (7,1) - new combo on (7) remove on (1)
01:25:336 (1) - remove new combo, new combo on 01:26:503 (5)
01:26:503 (5) - new combo
01:31:836 (5) - new combo
01:59:836 (1) - remove new combo, new combo on 02:00:836 (6) remove on 02:01:003 (1)
02:15:836 (5,1) - new combo on (5) remove on (1)
02:17:170 (4) - new combo
02:33:836 (1,4) - new combo on (4) remove on (1)
03:00:170 (8,1) - new combo on (8) remove on (1)
04:04:836 (3) - new combo
04:16:836 (1) - remove new combo
04:21:170 (5) - new combo
my NC skill really bad ;_; thank you

INSANE
Mapping is good! Just some combo changes
New combo
00:15:837 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:836 (5) - new combo
01:27:836 (7) - new combo
01:53:170 (1) - remove new combo
01:57:170 (5,1) - new combo on (5) remove on (1)
02:12:836 (1,3) - new combo on (3) remove on (1)
02:13:670 (1) - remove new combo
02:28:836 (1,2) - new combo on (2) instead of (1)
02:31:670 (1,2) - new combo on (2) instead of (1)
02:32:503 (1) - remove new combo
02:34:170 (1,2) - new combo on (2) instead of (1)
04:18:170 (1,2,3) - add new combo on (3), (1,2) this part should be in the previous combo, but i see that the style is different so if you change it you might need to rearrange the circles too
04:23:836 (5) - new combo
all fixed except the one in 04:18:170 (1,2,3) -
Map is very nice, mostly just combo changes. Of course I might have missed some places so you should check, but I think this would make the consistency of the combos better. That's all, best of luck :)
thank you for your modding :)
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
From my queue

[General]
  1. please add tag 'rinsukir' hard and Insane diff.
  2. Remove Widescreensupport please. (normal and hard)
  3. Remove osb. file please.
  4. Please setting combo color.
[rsk's Normal]
  1. 00:19:503 (1) - I guess Remove NC.
  2. 00:49:170 (1,2) - add whistle slider head both. vocal follow.
  3. 00:51:170 (4) - add whistle.
  4. 01:32:836 (1) - add clap.
  5. 01:45:170 (1,1,1) - lazy mapping :/
  6. 02:00:503 (3) - end point move (x:326 y:192). more good flow imo.
  7. 02:02:836 (2) - add whistle slider reverse.
  8. 03:42:503 (1) - add finish.
  9. 03:52:503 (1) - spinner start time is 03:52:336 - better imo. fit song.
[Insane]
  1. 00:33:670 (2) - add whistle slider head. vocal follow.
  2. 00:57:170 (1) - not fit finish slider head imo. remove and instead add clap.
  3. 02:09:170 (1) - ^
  4. 04:43:836 (6) - remove finish. last is calm.
[Hard]
  1. 00:14:837 (2) - add whistle slider end.
  2. 04:41:170 (1) - remove finish. last is calm.
gl!
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Wow so many mods already :D great work ^^ ~
Hopefully it does not take too much time for you te get it ranked. :3

Hurray x33 Good Luck :D
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

P o M u T a wrote:

From my queue

[General]
  1. please add tag 'rinsukir' hard and Insane diff.ok
  2. Remove Widescreensupport please. (normal and hard)fixed this
  3. Remove osb. file please.i am not sure if ti will cause any problem.... anyway i will take a look at this
  4. Please setting combo color.sure, *whisper*steal from CXu's map>.>

[Insane]
  1. 00:33:670 (2) - add whistle slider head. vocal follow.
  2. 00:57:170 (1) - not fit finish slider head imo. remove and instead add clap.
  3. 02:09:170 (1) - ^
  4. 04:43:836 (6) - remove finish. last is calm.fixed all
[Hard]
  1. 00:14:837 (2) - add whistle slider end.
  2. 04:41:170 (1) - remove finish. last is calm.fixed all
gl!
thank you!!
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
rinsukir

eeezzzeee wrote:

rsk's NORMAL
00:54:503 (1,2) - try like this
SPOILER
00:57:170 (1,2) - ^
02:06:503 (1,2) - ^
02:09:170 (1,2) - ^
02:57:170 (1,2) - ^
02:59:836 (1,2) - ^
03:02:503 (1,2) - ^ it's too hard
03:27:670 (1,1,1,1) - i know you used this for other sections but i dont think it fits the music here long tone here
04:38:503 (4) - new combo fix

P o M u T a wrote:

[rsk's Normal]
  1. 00:19:503 (1) - I guess Remove NC. fix
  2. 00:49:170 (1,2) - add whistle slider head both. vocal follow. 1added, i think 2 is needn't to add
  3. 00:51:170 (4) - add whistle. fix
  4. 01:32:836 (1) - add clap. no
  5. 01:45:170 (1,1,1) - lazy mapping :/ fix
  6. 02:00:503 (3) - end point move (x:326 y:192). more good flow imo. fix
  7. 02:02:836 (2) - add whistle slider reverse. fix
  8. 03:42:503 (1) - add finish. fix
  9. 03:52:503 (1) - spinner start time is 03:52:336 - better imo. fit song. fix
thanks for mods~
code
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 65003
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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Title:unchain.
TitleUnicode:unchain.
Artist:Kurosaki Maon
ArtistUnicode:黒崎真音
Creator:Mei
Version:rsk's Normal
Source:
Tags:rinsukir
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484,284,179003,2,0,L|405:353,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,345,179836,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,194,180836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
197,25,181670,2,0,P|260:29|313:21,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,25,182503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,294,183503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,338,184503,2,0,P|145:341|101:324,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,266,185170,6,0,P|19:206|30:111,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,249,186503,2,0,L|255:229,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,216,187170,2,0,P|398:206|443:181,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,124,187836,6,0,P|472:70|436:35,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,26,188503,2,0,P|287:42|245:43,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,47,189170,2,0,P|112:78|71:174,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,43,190503,6,0,L|317:126,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,192,191170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,271,191503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,328,191836,2,0,B|270:307|278:373|194:351,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193170,12,0,195170,0:0:0:0:
167,163,195836,6,0,B|218:148|218:148|256:150|256:150|286:138|286:138|329:138|329:138|371:117

|426:137,1,250,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,182,197003,2,0,B|465:223|487:260|487:260|481:290|443:314,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207670,12,4,209170,0:0:0:0:
258,188,211836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,188,214503,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,188,217170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217836,12,0,219336,0:0:0:0:
143,156,219836,6,0,P|211:151|268:90,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,67,220503,2,0,L|352:103,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,134,221003,2,0,P|476:197|463:266,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,318,221836,2,0,L|329:328,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,333,222336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,222503,12,4,225170,0:0:0:0:
341,158,225836,6,0,L|330:223,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,295,226336,2,0,P|257:335|159:334,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,301,227170,2,0,L|78:248,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,163,227670,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,187,228503,6,0,B|338:153|391:156|391:156|414:108|477:84,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,285,230503,6,8,B|181:294|181:294|204:323|204:323|243:323|243:323|269:348|269:348|303:337

|303:337|329:345|329:345|377:318,1,250,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,266,231670,2,0,B|475:231|475:231|484:181|446:132,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,232336,12,0,234836,0:0:0:0:
185,147,235503,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,233,235836,6,0,P|255:286|299:306,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,330,236503,2,0,P|391:275|429:246,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,182,237170,2,0,L|506:119,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,159,237836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,105,238170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
229,109,238503,6,0,L|120:88,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,76,239170,2,0,P|12:119|12:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,241,239836,2,0,L|18:287,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,257,240503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,241,240836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,260,241503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
469,191,241836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,101,242170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,76,242336,2,0,P|386:36|334:19,2,100,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,162,243336,2,0,L|315:227,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,241,243836,6,0,B|215:291|164:270|164:270|125:289,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,198,245003,2,0,L|303:143,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,58,245503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
213,33,245836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,40,246170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,98,246503,6,0,P|36:164|41:215,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,278,247170,2,0,P|131:297|166:333,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,353,247670,2,0,L|250:327,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,311,248170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,320,248503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,266,248836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
497,177,249170,6,0,P|474:129|421:98,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,117,249836,2,0,P|298:127|234:113,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,103,250336,2,0,L|166:134,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,198,250836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,287,251170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,331,251503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,348,251836,6,0,P|337:353|398:338,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,294,252503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,206,252836,2,0,L|500:153,2,50,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,215,253503,2,0,P|331:198|305:165,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,94,254170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,69,254503,6,0,B|84:31|84:31|9:39,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,94,255836,2,0,B|304:165|377:152|377:152|392:243|322:301,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,379,257170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
71,249,258170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
61,159,258503,2,0,P|96:93|224:57,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,330,260836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
359,340,261169,2,0,P|425:305|461:177,2,200,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,262670,12,0,265170,0:0:0:0:
167,170,266170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
203,87,266503,6,0,P|246:63|304:62,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,70,267170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,128,267503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,217,267836,2,0,L|428:317,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,349,268836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,270,269503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
68,91,270170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
143,42,270503,2,0,L|249:41,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,54,271503,2,0,L|471:100,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,127,271836,6,0,P|481:186|458:244,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,272503,2,0,P|351:288|306:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,273170,12,0,275836,0:0:0:0:
82,182,276836,5,8,0:0:0:0:
161,139,277170,2,0,P|222:140|262:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,113,277836,2,0,L|412:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,273,278503,5,0,0:0:0:0:
385,337,278836,2,0,L|319:347,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,279503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,319,279836,5,0,0:0:0:0:
54,250,280170,2,0,L|68:190,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,81,280836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,281170,12,0,283836,0:0:0:0:
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
GugUCorn
m4m

[General]

  1. Add "Tokyo Ravens" to tag.
[rsk's Normal]

  1. 00:39:836 (3,4) - blanket check
  2. 01:34:670 (1) - end 01:37:170
  3. 01:45:170 (1) - finish on head of slider
  4. 02:06:503 (1,2) - finish
  5. 02:08:336 (3) - finish on end of slider
  6. 02:13:170 (3) - remove clap on head and end of slider
  7. 02:42:503 (3) - whistle on arrow of slider
  8. 02:45:170 (2) - ^
  9. 03:27:670 (1) - start on 03:27:503
  10. 04:01:503 (1) - remove and add slider starting on 04:01:170
  11. 04:07:670 (3) - remove clap
  12. 04:10:336 (3) - ^
[Hard]

  1. 00:14:170 (5,1) - distance check
  2. 00:15:836 (4) - whistle on end of slider than head of slider
  3. 00:54:503 (5,1) - swap NC
  4. 01:00:503 (5,6) - blanket
  5. 01:21:170 (3,4) - ^
  6. 01:54:670 (1,2) - finish
  7. 01:55:170 (4) - whistle on middle of slider
  8. 02:20:503 (2) - remove clap
  9. 03:01:836 (6,7) - blanket
  10. 03:18:503 (5) - NC and finish
  11. 03:51:003 (3,4,5) - blanket
gl!
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

TaMul wrote:

m4m

[General]

  1. Add "Tokyo Ravens" to tag.ok

[Hard]

  1. 00:14:170 (5,1) - distance checkfixed
  2. 00:15:836 (4) - whistle on end of slider than head of sliderfixed
  3. 00:54:503 (5,1) - swap NCok
  4. 01:00:503 (5,6) - blanketumm current pattern is fine, no need to change
  5. 01:21:170 (3,4) - ^fixed
  6. 01:54:670 (1,2) - finishfixed
  7. 01:55:170 (4) - whistle on middle of sliderseems good
  8. 02:20:503 (2) - remove clapfixed
  9. 03:01:836 (6,7) - blanketfixed
  10. 03:18:503 (5) - NC and finishfixed
  11. 03:51:003 (3,4,5) - blanketfixed
gl!
thank you for your modding. Almost are usefui!
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
Hi as requested ~




  • General
    the BG.. Asphyxia already told it lol


  • Normal
  1. AR+1 to have better spread with Hard which has AR 8
  2. please keep consistency kiai with the mapper, even you're GD. your kiai time isn't really good as the music working
  3. 00:19:503 (2) - the music isn't really fit to emphasize with whistle imo. since the sound is a clap sound, use clap instead?
  4. 00:22:170 (3) - the sound of slider's head is really low if we compare this one with 00:20:837 - that has clap music here. actually i prefer to add circle on 00:22:503 - only to make the cymbal can clickable by player. has more sense imo
  5. 00:34:503 - strongly to suggest add note here because the loud piano sound. piano sound here has the main music on relax part like this imo (oh add whistle too if you add circle here)
  6. 00:37:836 - same as asbove
  7. 00:37:170 (3) - i feel this slider has different flow with previous because this slider made too curvy here. try to smoother this one like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1456258 to have better flow and shaping
  8. 00:40:336 - same mention as 00:34:503 - , since the piano on red tick i would to 00:39:836 (3,4) - change this become http://puu.sh/7LdNs.jpg
  9. 00:42:503 (4) - the music on tail is a clap sound imo, whistle doesn't suitable for me so use clap instead? if you feel the clap too loud use 50% instead
  10. 00:45:170 (2) - add whistle on head, for consistency with 00:46:503 - also emphasize the piano sound here
  11. 00:47:836 (2) - ^
  12. 00:49:170 (1) - extend the slider to 00:49:670 - , if i feel it, i feel so empty while skipping this vocal and piano sound here, it really bothering me ><
  13. 00:51:170 (4,5) - how about use slider instead circle here? somehow the vocal of 00:50:836 - and 00:51:503 - are different that mean use different object (slider) to make it more sense
  14. 00:52:670 (3,4) - rhythm could improving here imo, because you map 00:53:336 - that hasn't any loud music but you skipping 00:53:670 - which has loud music here, so remove these sliders and change with http://puu.sh/7NEBq.jpg instead
  15. 00:55:503 (2) - i know you just following the music here and it's fine for me but the music of this time still continue until 00:55:670 - so strongly i say please change this circle with 1/2 slider
  16. 00:58:170 (2) - ^
  17. 00:59:836 (1) - change the clap with finish since music is cymbal here
  18. 01:00:836 (2) - flow broken here because you did it opposite of natural flow do, i tried to give solution to tweaking some objects here
    example

    324,84,60836,2,0,P|274:68|225:77,2,100,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    268,156,61836,2,0,P|216:168|164:156,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    80,156,62503,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    64,244,62836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  19. 01:07:836 (1) - imo inconsistency spacing 1,07x here doesn't make any sense. it would be better to keep consistency 0,9x spacing here
  20. 01:09:836 (4,5,1) - sorry it just a my taste but i feel the flow of this pattern feels boring here. how about zig zag flow like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1462144 instead?
  21. 01:13:670 - this vocal must be mapped since you mapped 01:13:003 - which is similar
  22. 01:15:836 (1) - try to rotate 15 degree clockwise, having a better flow to follow imo
  23. 01:20:503 (4,5,1) - same goes to 01:09:836 (4,5,1) - , try flow of https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1462177 instead?
  24. 01:22:503 (2,3) - same too, imo flow feels boring and little bit weird so try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1462182 instead?
  25. 01:25:503 (3) - since on this part you're following vocal. whitetick doesn't work with well here, strongly suggest to remove slider and add circle on 01:25:670 - instead
  26. 01:26:503 (1) - add finish on tail since the music is cymbal on that time
  27. 01:27:670 - why don't map this time which the music is louder than 01:27:503 - ? my suggestion is 01:27:836 (2) - move this one start on 01:27:670 - and change the rhythm become like http://puu.sh/7NGyS.jpg
  28. 01:45:170 (1) - finish because a low(weak) cymbal here
  29. 01:46:503 - add note because piano sound here (+whistle) as you did at 01:49:170 - , keep the consistency
  30. i need to stop here, design hitsound are fine imo but you missed much of important sounds here like 01:47:003 - 01:49:836 -, 01:57:170 - which piano is really a important music on the relax part. same goes to 02:07:670 - which the music is louder than previous (whitetick). look them all in the whole of music


  • Hard
  1. 00:14:836 (2) - nazi, try to make this slider become like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1462300 to do the triangle pattern between 00:14:170 (5,1) - ? neater than previous imo lol
  2. 00:16:170 - how about map this with circle + clap? as long the music is sounds as clap, imo you need to map this
  3. 00:18:837 - same as above but no clap on circle. music still continue here
  4. 00:35:003 (5) - whistle feels noisy here if you do on 1/2 space. let this circle w/o hitsound. would be nice to hear
  5. 00:37:336 (5,6) - the distance from (4) to (5) is too far imo, a little bit hard to catch, so try to move these circles going to closer with (4)?
  6. 00:40:170 (4,5) - remove whistle on circle and add it to slider's head instead because the piano sound
  7. 00:54:336 (4) - move the circle to somewhere to avoid the stack? somehow i feel the stack doesn't fit with the song and pattern
  8. 00:57:670 - the vocal feels important for the relax part so 00:57:836 (2) - move to 00:57:670 - and add circle at 00:58:170 - instead
  9. 01:22:503 (1,2) - much of circles like 01:22:170 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - feel Hard for me so 01:22:503 (1,2) - please change this with slider instead
  10. 01:23:503 (1,2) - swap NC instead because stanza. if you agree, 01:24:170 (1) - remove NC
  11. 01:33:503 (2) - ctrl+G this slider instead, at least flow feel better than previous (feel broken)
  12. 01:34:503 (5) - move to 232,24 for place it into the centre of slider? doing a mini triangle (slider's head slider's tail and circle) here
  13. 01:46:170 (3) - ctrl+G instead to make the natural flow here
  14. 02:08:336 - imo the vocal here is important, feel as stress of vocal so please map this time
  15. 02:22:170 (2) - remove whistle on tail, same as i mean before. 1/2 space of whistle sounds bad here
  16. 02:32:670 (2) - ^ (but remove whistle on head)
  17. 02:46:503 (5) - it would be make more sense if you do a little jump to emphasize the cymbal example move this to 384,312
  18. 03:33:170 (1,2,3) - all of them aren't 1/3 tbh. the piano on 1/2 and 1/4 beat. example : 03:33:503 - 03:33:586 - 03:33:670 - 03:33:836 - with 03:34:086 -
  19. 03:45:836 (1) - actually spin doesn't work with well here. it would be better if you map with circles and sliders here
  20. 04:02:503 (2) - too hard to catch, flow seems bad too. move to 320,172 instead
  21. 04:08:503 (1) - remove whistle on tail. same as mean about 1/2 whistle bad here


  • Insane
  1. 00:19:503 (6) - feel a little bit random here, how about move to 256,192? at least have more sense because placed on centre
  2. 00:34:836 (6) - remove whistle on tail. same meantion on Hard
  3. 00:54:086 (4,5) - actually i don't like triplet like this because it feel as fake. not stacked at all so separate the placement of these circles would be better as http://puu.sh/7NJLI.jpg
  4. 01:06:670 (1,2) - swap the NC, it helping a lot to read 1/2 jumps with well
  5. 01:57:170 (1) - flow feels too forced here. try to smoother it or ctrl+G
  6. 02:02:670 (1,2) - just wanna say that flow here feel too forced, uncomfortable. but didn't have any suggestion orz
  7. 03:17:503 (1) - use finish on tail as you did on Hard diff
  8. 03:33:170 (1,2) - same as Hard no 1/3.. if want an example http://puu.sh/7NHGQ.jpg
  9. Very hard Insane but it's nice lol

Good Luck :oops:
Last edited by Xinely , edited 4 times in total.
Asphyxia
osu! Alumni
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia


General thoughts
  1. Inconsistencies in kiai-times, see below:
    Click!
  2. Your BG is in a wrong resolution (1221x768), resize it to 1024x768 please!

Insane
  1. 00:16:503 (7) - There isn't anything wrong with this slider, but this is just a suggestion; If you would turn this to a curved slider and blanketing it with 00:16:170 (6) - , it'd fit better with the previous sliders better and the flow would improve!
    Example
  2. 00:19:503 (6) - Well, I just dislike this notes current place because the antijump isn't that cool to play so to avoid this, you could move the note to x:256 y:360 so it isn't as close as it was before.
  3. 00:33:170 (1,2) - Fixing this blanket would be neat.
  4. 00:36:336 (5,6) - I personally don't like this too much, if you simply would curve 00:36:836 (6) - to the left instead of right, the pattern would improve quite a much imo. If you like your current one, feel free to disagree with me since both play enough fine.
    Example
  5. 00:38:170 (5,1) - This played really awkwardly because 00:38:503 (1) - is so close to 5 so please, if you can, move it further away from it.
  6. 00:41:170 (6,7,8) - <3 a bit of symmetry, nice ;)
  7. 00:43:503 (1) - This NC feels quite unnecessary to me, I guess it's somewhat understandable because the music changes a bit but I still feel like it's not needed here. Tell me what you think.
  8. 01:28:336 (3) - Meh, I dislike this slider, try something like this? It'd be imo a bit better:
    Example
  9. 02:02:670 (1,2) - Looks untidy to me and probably the blanket isn't the best. Rotating 02:03:170 (2) - and making small changes to it's curve would improve this so much, see the example below:
    Example
  10. 02:05:170 (1,2) - This doesn't fit because 2 was supposed to be a mirror of 1 (or that's what I think), maybe redo it like this?
    Example
  11. 02:38:003 (3,4) - I'd give them more spacing because then it'd be more consistent with other parts similar to this.
  12. 02:54:670 (5,6,7) - You could form a cool triangle with these 3 objects here, like this? (You'd have to make it a bit prittier than mine though since my looks kind of untidy)
    Example
  13. 03:40:003 (1) - This single NC for this slider is totally unnecessary, please remove it.
  14. Nice Insane :3

Hard
  1. +1 HP for a better difficulty spread?
  2. 00:43:003 (6,7) - Does not flow well so that's why I have an example for you with a better flow:
    Example
  3. 00:46:503 (1,2) - This flows kind of bad so here's an example how to improve it!
    Example
  4. Your hard difficulty is very good and very clean, great job on this!

rsk's Normal
  1. 00:59:836 (1,2) - Could flow better, a bit like this maybe?
    Example
  2. 02:20:836 (2,3) - Spacing error
  3. There's nothing major to point out, I liked this difficulty a lot too, somewhat different slider shapes which I like, flow was pretty good, NC'ing was done correctly so yeah, gj~

Such a short mod, sorry D: GL with this nice mapset :3
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei
too lucky that i can get 2 quality mod today :) :)

Asphyxia wrote:



General thoughts
  1. Inconsistencies in kiai-times, see below:fixed!
    Click!
  2. Your BG is in a wrong resolution (1221x768), resize it to 1024x768 please!!

Insane
  1. 00:16:503 (7) - There isn't anything wrong with this slider, but this is just a suggestion; If you would turn this to a curved slider and blanketing it with 00:16:170 (6) - , it'd fit better with the previous sliders better and the flow would improve!no enough place for blanket ;_;i know this is kind overlapped but also this is the best way I found
    Example
  2. 00:19:503 (6) - Well, I just dislike this notes current place because the antijump isn't that cool to play so to avoid this, you could move the note to x:256 y:360 so it isn't as close as it was before.lol I think it not should be called a 'jump' anyway fixed this
  3. 00:33:170 (1,2) - Fixing this blanket would be neat.sure
  4. 00:36:336 (5,6) - I personally don't like this too much, if you simply would curve 00:36:836 (6) - to the left instead of right, the pattern would improve quite a much imo. If you like your current one, feel free to disagree with me since both play enough fine.I think this one is ok and if i use your partern the flow will be broken after that slider
    Example
  5. 00:38:170 (5,1) - This played really awkwardly because 00:38:503 (1) - is so close to 5 so please, if you can, move it further away from it.well changed in another way
  6. 00:41:170 (6,7,8) - <3 a bit of symmetry, nice ;)<3
  7. 00:43:503 (1) - This NC feels quite unnecessary to me, I guess it's somewhat understandable because the music changes a bit but I still feel like it's not needed here. Tell me what you think.lol I always NC when there's a stream. If you say that than remove that NC
  8. 01:28:336 (3) - Meh, I dislike this slider, try something like this? It'd be imo a bit better:looks nice
    Example
  9. 02:02:670 (1,2) - Looks untidy to me and probably the blanket isn't the best. Rotating 02:03:170 (2) - and making small changes to it's curve would improve this so much, see the example below:fixed
    Example
  10. 02:05:170 (1,2) - This doesn't fit because 2 was supposed to be a mirror of 1 (or that's what I think), maybe redo it like this?not going to make a symmetric there since I think it will break the flow
    Example
  11. 02:38:003 (3,4) - I'd give them more spacing because then it'd be more consistent with other parts similar to this.fixed
  12. 02:54:670 (5,6,7) - You could form a cool triangle with these 3 objects here, like this? (You'd have to make it a bit prittier than mine though since my looks kind of untidy)lol fixed
    Example
  13. 03:40:003 (1) - This single NC for this slider is totally unnecessary, please remove it.small mistake >.>
  14. Nice Insane :3

Hard
  1. +1 HP for a better difficulty spread?ok
  2. 00:43:003 (6,7) - Does not flow well so that's why I have an example for you with a better flow:fixed
    Example
  3. 00:46:503 (1,2) - This flows kind of bad so here's an example how to improve it!ok
    Example
  4. Your hard difficulty is very good and very clean, great job on this!


Such a short mod, sorry D: GL with this nice mapset :3

Xinely wrote:

Hi as requested ~




  • General
    the BG.. Asphyxia already told it lol:3


  • Hard
  1. 00:14:836 (2) - nazi, try to make this slider become like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1462300 to do the triangle pattern between 00:14:170 (5,1) - ? neater than previous imo lolthat's what I did :o actually i copied the previous slider pattern
  2. 00:16:170 - how about map this with circle + clap? as long the music is sounds as clap, imo you need to map thissounds good
  3. 00:18:837 - same as above but no clap on circle. music still continue here^
  4. 00:35:003 (5) - whistle feels noisy here if you do on 1/2 space. let this circle w/o hitsound. would be nice to hear fixed
  5. 00:37:336 (5,6) - the distance from (4) to (5) is too far imo, a little bit hard to catch, so try to move these circles going to closer with (4)?maybe it is kinda hard but i dont want to broke that pattern;w;
  6. 00:40:170 (4,5) - remove whistle on circle and add it to slider's head instead because the piano soundfixed
  7. 00:54:336 (4) - move the circle to somewhere to avoid the stack? somehow i feel the stack doesn't fit with the song and patternso i removed that note ;P
  8. 00:57:670 - the vocal feels important for the relax part so 00:57:836 (2) - move to 00:57:670 - and add circle at 00:58:170 - insteadfixed in another way
  9. 01:22:503 (1,2) - much of circles like 01:22:170 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - feel Hard for me so 01:22:503 (1,2) - please change this with slider insteadfixed
  10. 01:23:503 (1,2) - swap NC instead because stanza. if you agree, 01:24:170 (1) - remove NCok
  11. 01:33:503 (2) - ctrl+G this slider instead, at least flow feel better than previous (feel broken)ok
  12. 01:34:503 (5) - move to 232,24 for place it into the centre of slider? doing a mini triangle (slider's head slider's tail and circle) herei think you mean something like blanket lol fixed
  13. 01:46:170 (3) - ctrl+G instead to make the natural flow herewhy not D:
  14. 02:08:336 - imo the vocal here is important, feel as stress of vocal so please map this timeummm no since i dont want it be to difficult and the 1/1 slider fits there
  15. 02:22:170 (2) - remove whistle on tail, same as i mean before. 1/2 space of whistle sounds bad herefixed
  16. 02:32:670 (2) - ^ (but remove whistle on head)^
  17. 02:46:503 (5) - it would be make more sense if you do a little jump to emphasize the cymbal example move this to 384,312^
  18. 03:33:170 (1,2,3) - all of them aren't 1/3 tbh. the piano on 1/2 and 1/4 beat. example : 03:33:503 - 03:33:586 - 03:33:670 - 03:33:836 - with 03:34:086 - yes but i was following the drum there. And the amin reason why i used 1/3 because I find it sounds much better than 1/2 and 1/4 is too noise
  19. 03:45:836 (1) - actually spin doesn't work with well here. it would be better if you map with circles and sliders here
  20. 04:02:503 (2) - too hard to catch, flow seems bad too. move to 320,172 insteadnot that hard I think
  21. 04:08:503 (1) - remove whistle on tail. same as mean about 1/2 whistle bad herefixed


  • Insane
  1. 00:19:503 (6) - feel a little bit random here, how about move to 256,192? at least have more sense because placed on centrealready fixed :3
  2. 00:34:836 (6) - remove whistle on tail. same meantion on Hardfixed
  3. 00:54:086 (4,5) - actually i don't like triplet like this because it feel as fake. not stacked at all so separate the placement of these circles would be better as http://puu.sh/7NJLI.jpg many people do this :o ok fixed
  4. 01:06:670 (1,2) - swap the NC, it helping a lot to read 1/2 jumps with wellok
  5. 01:57:170 (1) - flow feels too forced here. try to smoother it or ctrl+Gno change since this flow is good for me
  6. 02:02:670 (1,2) - just wanna say that flow here feel too forced, uncomfortable. but didn't have any suggestion orz so i made some change on it orz
  7. 03:17:503 (1) - use finish on tail as you did on Hard diff
  8. 03:33:170 (1,2) - same as Hard no 1/3.. if want an example http://puu.sh/7NHGQ.jpg same reason as hard
  9. Very hard Insane but it's nice lol

Good Luck :oops:
thank you Asphyxia and Xinely. All suggestions are useful and I changed a lot <333
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
rinsukir

TaMul wrote:

[rsk's Normal]

  1. 00:39:836 (3,4) - blanket check fix
  2. 01:34:670 (1) - end 01:37:170 fix
  3. 01:45:170 (1) - finish on head of slider fix
  4. 02:06:503 (1,2) - finish no
  5. 02:08:336 (3) - finish on end of slider no
  6. 02:13:170 (3) - remove clap on head and end of slider fix
  7. 02:42:503 (3) - whistle on arrow of slider no
  8. 02:45:170 (2) - ^ fix
  9. 03:27:670 (1) - start on 03:27:503 fix
  10. 04:01:503 (1) - remove and add slider starting on 04:01:170 fix
  11. 04:07:670 (3) - remove clap fix
  12. 04:10:336 (3) - ^ fix

Xinely wrote:


  • Normal
  1. AR+1 to have better spread with Hard which has AR 8 fix
  2. please keep consistency kiai with the mapper, even you're GD. your kiai time isn't really good as the music working fix
  3. 00:19:503 (2) - the music isn't really fit to emphasize with whistle imo. since the sound is a clap sound, use clap instead? fix
  4. 00:22:170 (3) - the sound of slider's head is really low if we compare this one with 00:20:837 - that has clap music here. actually i prefer to add circle on 00:22:503 - only to make the cymbal can clickable by player. has more sense imo no
  5. 00:34:503 - strongly to suggest add note here because the loud piano sound. piano sound here has the main music on relax part like this imo (oh add whistle too if you add circle here) fix
  6. 00:37:836 - same as asbove fix
  7. 00:37:170 (3) - i feel this slider has different flow with previous because this slider made too curvy here. try to smoother this one like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1456258 to have better flow and shaping fix
  8. 00:40:336 - same mention as 00:34:503 - , since the piano on red tick i would to 00:39:836 (3,4) - change this become http://puu.sh/7LdNs.jpg no
  9. 00:42:503 (4) - the music on tail is a clap sound imo, whistle doesn't suitable for me so use clap instead? if you feel the clap too loud use 50% instead fix
  10. 00:45:170 (2) - add whistle on head, for consistency with 00:46:503 - also emphasize the piano sound here fix
  11. 00:47:836 (2) - ^ fix
  12. 00:49:170 (1) - extend the slider to 00:49:670 - , if i feel it, i feel so empty while skipping this vocal and piano sound here, it really bothering me >< fixed in another way
  13. 00:51:170 (4,5) - how about use slider instead circle here? somehow the vocal of 00:50:836 - and 00:51:503 - are different that mean use different object (slider) to make it more sense fix
  14. 00:52:670 (3,4) - rhythm could improving here imo, because you map 00:53:336 - that hasn't any loud music but you skipping 00:53:670 - which has loud music here, so remove these sliders and change with http://puu.sh/7NEBq.jpg instead fixed in another way
  15. 00:55:503 (2) - i know you just following the music here and it's fine for me but the music of this time still continue until 00:55:670 - so strongly i say please change this circle with 1/2 slider fix
  16. 00:58:170 (2) - ^ fix
  17. 00:59:836 (1) - change the clap with finish since music is cymbal here fix
  18. 01:00:836 (2) - flow broken here because you did it opposite of natural flow do, i tried to give solution to tweaking some objects here fix
    example

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  19. 01:07:836 (1) - imo inconsistency spacing 1,07x here doesn't make any sense. it would be better to keep consistency 0,9x spacing here fix
  20. 01:09:836 (4,5,1) - sorry it just a my taste but i feel the flow of this pattern feels boring here. how about zig zag flow like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1462144 instead? fix
  21. 01:13:670 - this vocal must be mapped since you mapped 01:13:003 - which is similar fix
  22. 01:15:836 (1) - try to rotate 15 degree clockwise, having a better flow to follow imo fix
  23. 01:20:503 (4,5,1) - same goes to 01:09:836 (4,5,1) - , try flow of https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1462177 instead? fix
  24. 01:22:503 (2,3) - same too, imo flow feels boring and little bit weird so try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1462182 instead? fix
  25. 01:25:503 (3) - since on this part you're following vocal. whitetick doesn't work with well here, strongly suggest to remove slider and add circle on 01:25:670 - instead fixed in another way
  26. 01:26:503 (1) - add finish on tail since the music is cymbal on that time fix
  27. 01:27:670 - why don't map this time which the music is louder than 01:27:503 - ? my suggestion is 01:27:836 (2) - move this one start on 01:27:670 - and change the rhythm become like http://puu.sh/7NGyS.jpg fix
  28. 01:45:170 (1) - finish because a low(weak) cymbal here fix
  29. 01:46:503 - add note because piano sound here (+whistle) as you did at 01:49:170 - , keep the consistency fix
  30. i need to stop here, design hitsound are fine imo but you missed much of important sounds here like 01:47:003 - 01:49:836 -, 01:57:170 - which piano is really a important music on the relax part. same goes to 02:07:670 - which the music is louder than previous (whitetick). look them all in the whole of music ok~

Asphyxia wrote:

rsk's Normal
  1. 00:59:836 (1,2) - Could flow better, a bit like this maybe? fixed in another way
    Example
  2. 02:20:836 (2,3) - Spacing error fix
  3. There's nothing major to point out, I liked this difficulty a lot too, somewhat different slider shapes which I like, flow was pretty good, NC'ing was done correctly so yeah, gj~ thx><
thanks for mods~
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282,77,73670,2,0,P|205:100|122:72,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,57,74336,2,0,P|42:119|44:179,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,220,75003,2,0,P|118:228|183:293,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,337,75836,6,0,B|304:283|328:325|381:256,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,327,77170,2,0,B|126:291|126:291|94:272|94:272|100:237|100:237|78:211|78:211|89:154|89:154|68:115|84:61,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
165,43,78503,6,0,L|272:43,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,54,79503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
490,130,79836,2,0,P|481:186|443:227,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,264,80503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,212,80836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,218,81170,6,0,B|95:237|95:237|55:349|173:377,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,336,82503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
334,351,82836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
475,246,83503,6,0,P|475:165|412:61,2,200,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,263,85003,2,0,P|369:266|323:248,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,242,85503,2,0,L|238:267,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,221,86003,2,0,L|174:159,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,98,86503,6,0,B|79:78|44:84|44:84|8:60|11:12,2,150,2|2|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,91,87670,2,0,B|229:61|229:61|249:78|249:78|318:39|394:84,1,250,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,127,88836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
497,212,89170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
252,326,90170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
162,326,90503,2,0,P|55:287|23:206,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,84,92836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
371,84,93169,2,0,P|478:123|510:204,2,200,0|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,94670,12,0,97170,0:0:0:0:
206,142,105170,6,0,P|143:145|59:98,2,150,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,128,106503,2,0,P|348:121|397:141,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,309,107503,1,2,0:0:0:0:
357,342,107836,6,0,P|262:353|196:336,2,150,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,308,109170,2,0,P|457:260|451:204,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,122,109836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
359,82,110170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,75,110503,6,0,P|115:76|106:71,2,150,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,82,111836,2,0,P|358:152|384:195,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,226,112503,2,0,P|438:283|400:318,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,113170,12,2,115336,0:0:0:0:
414,169,115836,6,0,P|415:259|453:314,2,150,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,79,117170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
321,33,117503,2,0,P|268:41|208:34,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,53,118170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,107,118503,6,0,P|41:169|49:254,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,42,119836,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,91,120503,2,0,L|326:192,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,271,121170,6,0,P|400:317|484:331,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,143,122836,2,0,P|161:128|111:133,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,212,123836,5,0,0:0:0:0:
372,225,124170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
477,140,124670,2,0,L|513:96,2,50,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,128,125336,2,0,P|346:68|343:28,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,243,126503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
205,337,127503,2,0,L|169:303,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,150,128336,2,0,P|129:132|165:94,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,46,129170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
415,280,130170,2,0,L|357:318,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,334,131003,2,0,L|89:333,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,208,131836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
56,118,132170,2,0,P|95:63|224:66,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,64,133170,2,0,L|395:12,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,137,134170,2,0,P|226:193|232:242,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,293,134836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
376,314,135170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
461,285,135503,1,2,0:0:0:0:
481,197,135836,2,0,B|505:148|505:148|490:110|490:110|515:87|515:87|496:54|505:4,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,229,137503,6,0,P|321:193|200:193,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,215,138503,2,0,B|89:289|128:349|128:349|204:343,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,343,139503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
366,338,139836,6,0,L|467:298,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,122,140836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
401,72,141170,2,0,P|316:51|294:53,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,63,141836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,100,142170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
99,183,142503,6,0,P|106:246|133:283,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,293,143503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
393,285,143836,2,0,P|399:228|428:183,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,128,144503,2,0,P|476:56|451:30,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,25,145003,6,0,L|360:43,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,31,145503,2,0,B|211:77|143:51|143:51|103:104,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,178,146503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,268,146836,2,0,B|90:324|140:327|140:327|184:310|240:336,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,320,147836,6,0,P|391:287|420:206,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,253,149170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
271,163,149503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
223,86,149836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,49,150170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
50,46,150503,6,0,L|4:146,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,313,151503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,336,151836,2,0,P|201:342|239:341,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,339,152503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,313,152836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
453,238,153170,6,0,P|466:175|451:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,57,153836,2,0,P|358:63|315:44,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,32,154503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,21,154836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
41,163,155503,6,0,B|23:225|23:225|45:240|45:240|16:313|80:351,2,200,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,134,157170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,111,157503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
301,126,157836,2,0,P|361:119|413:129,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,145,158503,6,0,B|462:213|510:266|510:266|470:260,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,110,159836,2,0,B|346:92|346:92|309:110|309:110|257:97|257:97|227:105|227:105|193:85|193:85|161:110|110:108,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,143,161170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
221,342,162170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
310,342,162503,2,0,P|394:328|456:224,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,75,164836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
176,75,165169,2,0,P|92:89|30:193,2,200,0|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,166670,12,8,169003,0:0:0:0:
130,123,177170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
396,78,178170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,284,179003,2,0,L|405:353,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,345,179836,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,194,180836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
197,25,181670,2,0,P|260:29|313:21,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,25,182503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,294,183503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
215,338,184503,2,0,P|145:341|101:324,1,100,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
57,266,185170,6,0,P|19:206|30:111,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,249,186503,2,0,L|255:229,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,216,187170,2,0,P|398:206|443:181,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,124,187836,6,0,P|472:70|436:35,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,26,188503,2,0,P|287:42|245:43,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,47,189170,2,0,P|112:78|71:174,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,43,190503,6,0,L|317:126,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,192,191170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,271,191503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,328,191836,2,0,B|270:307|278:373|194:351,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193170,12,0,195170,0:0:0:0:
167,163,195836,6,0,B|218:148|218:148|256:150|256:150|286:138|286:138|329:138|329:138|371:117|426:137,1,250,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,182,197003,2,0,B|465:223|487:260|487:260|481:290|443:314,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,207503,12,4,209170,0:0:0:0:
258,188,211836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,188,214503,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,188,217170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217836,12,0,219336,0:0:0:0:
143,156,219836,6,0,P|211:151|268:90,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,67,220503,2,0,L|352:103,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,134,221003,2,0,P|476:197|463:266,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,318,221836,2,0,L|329:328,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,333,222336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,222503,12,4,225170,0:0:0:0:
341,158,225836,6,0,L|330:223,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,295,226336,2,0,P|257:335|159:334,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,301,227170,2,0,L|78:248,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,163,227670,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,187,228503,6,0,B|338:153|391:156|391:156|414:108|477:84,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,285,230503,6,8,B|181:294|181:294|204:323|204:323|243:323|243:323|269:348|269:348|303:337|303:337|329:345|329:345|377:318,1,250,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,266,231670,2,0,B|475:231|475:231|484:181|446:132,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,232336,12,0,234836,0:0:0:0:
185,147,235503,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,233,235836,6,0,P|255:286|299:306,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,330,236503,2,0,P|391:275|429:246,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,182,237170,2,0,L|506:119,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,159,237836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,105,238170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
229,109,238503,6,0,L|120:88,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,76,239170,2,0,P|12:119|12:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,241,239836,2,0,L|18:287,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,257,240503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,241,240836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,262,241170,6,0,P|374:273|429:258,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,191,241836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,101,242170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,76,242336,2,0,P|386:36|334:19,2,100,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,162,243336,2,0,L|315:227,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,241,243836,6,0,B|215:291|164:270|164:270|125:289,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,198,245003,2,0,L|303:143,1,50,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,58,245503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
213,33,245836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
123,40,246170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,98,246503,6,0,P|36:164|41:215,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,278,247170,2,0,P|131:297|166:333,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,353,247670,2,0,L|250:327,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,311,248170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,320,248503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,266,248836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
497,177,249170,6,0,P|474:129|421:98,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,117,249836,2,0,P|298:127|234:113,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,103,250336,2,0,L|166:134,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,198,250836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,287,251170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,331,251503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,348,251836,6,0,P|337:353|398:338,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,294,252503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,206,252836,2,0,L|500:153,2,50,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,215,253503,2,0,P|331:198|305:165,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,94,254170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,69,254503,6,0,B|84:31|84:31|9:39,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,94,255836,2,0,B|304:165|377:152|377:152|392:243|322:301,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,379,257170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
71,249,258170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
61,159,258503,2,0,P|96:93|224:57,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,330,260836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
359,340,261169,2,0,P|425:305|461:177,2,200,2|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,262670,12,0,265170,0:0:0:0:
167,170,266170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
203,87,266503,6,0,P|246:63|304:62,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,70,267170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,128,267503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,217,267836,2,0,L|428:317,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,349,268836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,270,269503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
68,91,270170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
143,42,270503,2,0,L|249:41,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,54,271503,2,0,L|471:100,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,127,271836,6,0,P|481:186|458:244,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,272503,2,0,P|351:288|306:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,273170,12,0,275836,0:0:0:0:
82,182,276836,5,8,0:0:0:0:
161,139,277170,2,0,P|222:140|262:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,113,277836,2,0,L|412:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,273,278503,5,0,0:0:0:0:
385,337,278836,2,0,L|319:347,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,279503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,319,279836,5,0,0:0:0:0:
54,250,280170,2,0,L|68:190,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,81,280836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,281170,12,0,283836,0:0:0:0:
卧槽快3星了
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~

[Hard]
  1. 00:52:336 (3,4,5,6) - flow is not good. for example, how about this?
    SPOILER
  2. 01:05:670 (2,3) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
  3. 01:11:837 (1,2,3,1) - I recommend to avoid this overlap. hard to see...
  4. 03:59:836 (1,2,3,1) - ^
  5. 01:55:170 (4) - start at 01:55:336
  6. 02:06:670 (2,3) - blanket correctly
  7. 02:24:503 (6) - awkward slider...
  8. 02:24:003 (3,4) - I prefer not to stack
  9. 03:27:586 (1,1,2) - how about this?
  10. 03:33:836 (3,1,2) - I prefer not to stack because of changing from 1/3 rhythm to 1/4 rhythm
  11. 04:22:586 (1) - end at 04:25:170?
[Insane]
  1. 00:54:253- add a note?
  2. 01:09:003 (6,7) - blanket correctly
  3. 01:16:753- remove clap
  4. 01:52:836 (4,6) - blanket correctly
  5. 02:35:170 (4) - Ctrl+G
  6. 03:12:670 (3,4) - very confusing. I recommend not to stack
[rsk's Normal]
  1. 00:54:503- finish
  2. 01:58:170 (4,2) - how about stacking?
  3. 02:06:503 (1) - - finish
  4. 02:37:836 (4) - move to around x:300 y:94 for smoother cursor moving
  5. 03:31:836 (1,1,1) - I prefer to add finish instead of whistle
  6. 03:37:836 (1) - end at 03:39:170
  7. 03:39:836 (1) - end at 03:40:170
  8. 04:21:169 (2) - hitsound pattern is defferent from 01:33:170 (2) - and 02:45:169 (2) -. Is ot on purpose?
~Good Luck~
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Hard]
  1. 00:52:336 (3,4,5,6) - flow is not good. for example, how about this?i think there should be a jump, buit fixed in another way
    SPOILER
  2. 01:05:670 (2,3) - I prefer to combine into 1 sliderok
  3. 01:11:837 (1,2,3,1) - I recommend to avoid this overlap. hard to see...fixed
  4. 03:59:836 (1,2,3,1) - ^this one is fine I think
  5. 01:55:170 (4) - start at 01:55:336fixed
  6. 02:06:670 (2,3) - blanket correctlyi tried my best ;_;
  7. 02:24:503 (6) - awkward slider...not awkward ;_;
  8. 02:24:003 (3,4) - I prefer not to stacknot bad i think
  9. 03:27:586 (1,1,2) - how about this?look nice
  10. 03:33:836 (3,1,2) - I prefer not to stack because of changing from 1/3 rhythm to 1/4 rhythmfixed
  11. 04:22:586 (1) - end at 04:25:170?
[Insane]
  1. 00:54:253- add a note?not really necessary, no obvious drum there so no
  2. 01:09:003 (6,7) - blanket correctlyfixed
  3. 01:16:753- remove clapok
  4. 01:52:836 (4,6) - blanket correctlyfixed
  5. 02:35:170 (4) - Ctrl+Gno because cuerrent one has better flow
  6. 03:12:670 (3,4) - very confusing. I recommend not to stackfixed

~Good Luck~
thank you for your modding ><
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
Hi~ Mei~

[General]
Good.

[rsk's Normal]
I really think you can make much more use of finish to emphasize during KIAI. A lot of whistle can be replaced with finish imo :3
For hit sound, I'm only gonna point out till the first Kiai, then you can go over on the other part if you like my suggestion
00:19:503 (2) - Why is this not NC? It's not following your NC pattern.
00:22:170 (3) - how about this? I don't think you should use a slider here when there is no music or anything at all.
SPOILER
00:34:503 (3,4) - I'd move these to a little bit more right side for better shape and flow
00:37:170 (3,4,5,1) - give a little angle so it's more fun to play
SPOILER
00:40:336 (4) - Try this, I don't see a lot of 1/2. you can also add whistle on the head if you do this
SPOILER
00:42:670 (4) - This makes so much more sense. no reason to start the slider from 00:42:503 - and the vocal ends 00:43:503 -
SPOILER
01:10:586 (1) - finish?
01:13:003 (1) - I don't see a reason to make this 1/2 slider, plus suddenly complicated beat compared to non-kiai part. make it a circle.
01:14:336 (4) - delete clap on head?
01:15:836 (1) - finish on all 3 point?
01:21:170 (1) - finish fits better imo
01:34:670 (1) - end the spinner 01:37:003 - ? makes much more sense. 04:22:670 (1) - too
01:59:836 (2) - why not stack this on 01:58:170 (4) - for neatness :3
03:06:503 (2) - this slider shouldn't be shaped like this.
SPOILER
03:27:503 (1,1,1,1,1) - definitely fill in notes, or just leave it as break time. Really not a good idea to do this imo. or at least use finish instead of whistle
03:37:836 (1,1,2) - this part feels awkward. you're following vocal here 03:41:003 (3,4,5) - and you're not on these.
04:02:336 (4) - delete clap on head?
04:05:003 (2) - is there really a need to use 1/2 slider here?
04:15:670 (2) - This makes more sense, and follows music better imo
SPOILER
04:37:170 (2) - NC? not following your NC pattern

[Hard]
Reduce HP by 1 tick for better diff spread
00:19:837 (1) - I'd end this on 00:22:170 - and delete finish. fits music much better imo
00:34:170 (3) - kind of a awkward flow, but it's ok. I would curve it the other way, though.
00:35:003 (5) - delete this circle? It fits ryour pattern better imo
00:37:003 (4) - delete this circle to emphasize the calmness here?
00:41:670 (2,3) - This makes more sense and follows music better imo
SPOILER
00:53:670 (5,6) - Try this pattern. And I don't think you should ignore 00:54:003 - 00:54:170 - 00:54:336 -
SPOILER
01:25:336 (3) - delete this circle to keep the same beat as previous notes
01:31:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part has bad flow imo..
SPOILER
01:32:503 (3) - try curve it the other way
01:33:170 (1) - crtl + g
01:33:503 (2) - ^
01:34:586 (1) - end it 01:37:003 - here?
01:46:836 (4,5,6,7,8) - This part felt really awkward probably because of overmapping and passive slider. and you're ruining the calmness of this part
SPOILER

02:21:003 (4,5) - I don't know if this was on purpose, but does not seem to fit here well, and only makes it harder.
02:24:003 (3,4) - unstack? I don't see why you would stack this and not the others 02:23:503 (1,2,5,6) -
02:44:836 (4,1) - try to have a better connection, or shape
03:16:336 (1,2,3,4) - overmapped and doesn't follow the music at all
SPOILER
03:18:503 (1) - delete it and start the break from here?
03:33:170 (1,2) - this is really hard rhythm,
03:33:836 (3) - reduce one reverse and add circle?
03:33:170 (1,2) - this slider length is really not a good indication for 1/3. Try to do this?
SPOILER
03:40:003 (1,1) - these 2 spinners are extremely long, and can be really tiring for players. also boring
03:51:003 (3,4) - try this. I don' think you need a slider here 03:51:336 - because the vocal and guitar are so dominant in this part. you can ignore drum :D
SPOILER
03:59:836 (1,2,1,2,3) - you should remap this part, it's not allowing you to use ur NC pattern and basic NC. plus a bit too hard imo
04:15:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to use some sliders here, really hard
04:16:836 (9) - NC?
04:17:836 (1) - I don't see why you would have this circle.
02:42:170 (2,3,4) - I think you should follow the vocal here, like the first kiai. 04:18:170 (2,3,4) - here too
04:20:837 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - a bit awkward flow, but I guess you can keep it if you want.
04:28:836 (3,1,2) - a ung♥ a ung♥ /me runs


Good luck!
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

No Dap wrote:

Hi~ Mei~hi~no dap~

[General]
Good.

[Hard]
Reduce HP by 1 tick for better diff spreaddone
00:19:837 (1) - I'd end this on 00:22:170 - and delete finish. fits music much better imofixed
00:34:170 (3) - kind of a awkward flow, but it's ok. I would curve it the other way, though.fixed
00:35:003 (5) - delete this circle? It fits ryour pattern better imofixed
00:37:003 (4) - delete this circle to emphasize the calmness here?fixed
00:41:670 (2,3) - This makes more sense and follows music better imofixed
SPOILER
00:53:670 (5,6) - Try this pattern. And I don't think you should ignore 00:54:003 - 00:54:170 - 00:54:336 - there used to have a circle but i want it easier
SPOILER
01:25:336 (3) - delete this circle to keep the same beat as previous notesok
01:31:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part has bad flow imo.. looks good
SPOILER
01:32:503 (3) - try curve it the other way
01:33:170 (1) - crtl + g
01:33:503 (2) - ^
01:34:586 (1) - end it 01:37:003 - here? I think current one is better
01:46:836 (4,5,6,7,8) - This part felt really awkward probably because of overmapping and passive slider. and you're ruining the calmness of this partfixed
SPOILER

02:21:003 (4,5) - I don't know if this was on purpose, but does not seem to fit here well, and only makes it harder.for sure note ;_;
02:24:003 (3,4) - unstack? I don't see why you would stack this and not the others 02:23:503 (1,2,5,6) - well the reason why i stack is for there is no enough space....but the stack does not cause any problem so no fix there
02:44:836 (4,1) - try to have a better connection, or shapefixed
03:16:336 (1,2,3,4) - overmapped and doesn't follow the music at allkinda overmap there yes ur right, but i dont want to breake the pattern there so keep this
SPOILER
03:18:503 (1) - delete it and start the break from here?no since i think it is necessary to add note for emphasizing the piano there
03:33:170 (1,2) - this is really hard rhythm, keep this i will ask some more people about there
03:33:836 (3) - reduce one reverse and add circle?1/3 maybe hard for someone
03:33:170 (1,2) - this slider length is really not a good indication for 1/3. Try to do this?
SPOILER
03:40:003 (1,1) - these 2 spinners are extremely long, and can be really tiring for players. also boringiam too lazy for now maybe gonna map this part in the future
03:51:003 (3,4) - try this. I don' think you need a slider here 03:51:336 - because the vocal and guitar are so dominant in this part. you can ignore drum :Dthis one also fine but i dont want break my symmetric patten ;_;
SPOILER
03:59:836 (1,2,1,2,3) - you should remap this part, it's not allowing you to use ur NC pattern and basic NC. plus a bit too hard imoremapped
04:15:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to use some sliders here, really hardfixed
04:16:836 (9) - NC?fixed
04:17:836 (1) - I don't see why you would have this circle.
02:42:170 (2,3,4) - I think you should follow the vocal here, like the first kiai. 04:18:170 (2,3,4) - here toofixed;_;
04:20:837 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - a bit awkward flow, but I guess you can keep it if you want.so i keep this >.>
04:28:836 (3,1,2) - a ung♥ a ung♥ /me runswhat i could say is no dap san hentai>.<


Good luck!
thank you for you modding <3
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
我给你星你给我个GD怎么样，是不是很划算【喂！

Edit:考虑到收支平衡还是写点水水好了，当一只水笔有什么不好

[normal]

00:19:837 (1) - DS±0.05这个习俗我觉得就是水帖用的233

01:53:170 (1,1) - 转盘接note好像要空比较长才行……话说11个转盘是不是太多了

[hard]

00:19:837 (1) - 对hard来说9个转盘感觉真的有点多，像开头这个我就感觉不太需要……

00:56:170 (5,1) - unrank啊orz……至少我的皮肤还是会出300的【所以我还是渣

01:59:503 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard及以下diff不建议读图杀，要杀就多放点，偶尔来一个是坑【喂！

02:05:336 (2,3) - slider跳note用2.5是不是太大了，hard还是规矩点好

03:40:003 (1,1) - 2个转盘连着本身就丢失了很多点击了，后面还有一个……删吧？

03:58:336 (3,5) - 像这个虽然300的图标已经没了，但是这样的梗我还是不建议

还有难度设置有点乱，第一个kiai居然是最难的...

[insane]

这diff的星数居然没我的新图高真不科学，而且我只会刷分图排版这根本写不了东西……

01:22:503 (1,3) - unrank……

01:31:503 (4) - 严格的讲师不允许锚点出界的虽然你滑条没出界，我建议你大部分滑条拉完如果锚点出界的话可以ctrl+G两次，能自动定位锚点
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

Narcissu wrote:

我给你星你给我个GD怎么样，是不是很划算【喂！好啊

Edit:考虑到收支平衡还是写点水水好了，当一只水笔有什么不好


[hard]

00:19:837 (1) - 对hard来说9个转盘感觉真的有点多，像开头这个我就感觉不太需要……我在改后面的

00:56:170 (5,1) - unrank啊orz……至少我的皮肤还是会出300的【所以我还是渣这个还ok吧

01:59:503 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard及以下diff不建议读图杀，要杀就多放点，偶尔来一个是坑【喂！这个还好吧;w;我dt这里也没问题

02:05:336 (2,3) - slider跳note用2.5是不是太大了，hard还是规矩点好好

03:40:003 (1,1) - 2个转盘连着本身就丢失了很多点击了，后面还有一个……删吧？正在改这里

03:58:336 (3,5) - 像这个虽然300的图标已经没了，但是这样的梗我还是不建议呜呜不太好改啊

还有难度设置有点乱，第一个kiai居然是最难的...重新排了一下第一段kiai

[insane]

这diff的星数居然没我的新图高真不科学，而且我只会刷分图排版这根本写不了东西……

01:22:503 (1,3) - unrank……fixed

01:31:503 (4) - 严格的讲师不允许锚点出界的虽然你滑条没出界，我建议你大部分滑条拉完如果锚点出界的话可以ctrl+G两次，能自动定位锚点哦学到了新的小技巧
我还回你一分啊我也是好人.-.
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
rinsukir

RandomEffect wrote:

[rsk's Normal]
  1. 00:54:503- finish fix
  2. 01:58:170 (4,2) - how about stacking? fix
  3. 02:06:503 (1) - - finish fix
  4. 02:37:836 (4) - move to around x:300 y:94 for smoother cursor moving fix
  5. 03:31:836 (1,1,1) - I prefer to add finish instead of whistle fix
  6. 03:37:836 (1) - end at 03:39:170 fix
  7. 03:39:836 (1) - end at 03:40:170 fix
  8. 04:21:169 (2) - hitsound pattern is defferent from 01:33:170 (2) - and 02:45:169 (2) -. Is ot on purpose? fix

No Dap wrote:

[rsk's Normal]
I really think you can make much more use of finish to emphasize during KIAI. A lot of whistle can be replaced with finish imo :3 i'm not used to using finish.-.
For hit sound, I'm only gonna point out till the first Kiai, then you can go over on the other part if you like my suggestion
00:19:503 (2) - Why is this not NC? It's not following your NC pattern. no
00:22:170 (3) - how about this? I don't think you should use a slider here when there is no music or anything at all. a tone on 00:22:170
SPOILER
00:34:503 (3,4) - I'd move these to a little bit more right side for better shape and flow fix
00:37:170 (3,4,5,1) - give a little angle so it's more fun to play fix
SPOILER
00:40:336 (4) - Try this, I don't see a lot of 1/2. you can also add whistle on the head if you do this no
SPOILER
00:42:670 (4) - This makes so much more sense. no reason to start the slider from 00:42:503 - and the vocal ends 00:43:503 - fix
SPOILER
01:10:586 (1) - finish? fix
01:13:003 (1) - I don't see a reason to make this 1/2 slider, plus suddenly complicated beat compared to non-kiai part. make it a circle. fix
01:14:336 (4) - delete clap on head? no
01:15:836 (1) - finish on all 3 point? only add on the first two points
01:21:170 (1) - finish fits better imo fix
01:34:670 (1) - end the spinner 01:37:003 - ? makes much more sense. 04:22:670 (1) - too no
01:59:836 (2) - why not stack this on 01:58:170 (4) - for neatness :3 fix
03:06:503 (2) - this slider shouldn't be shaped like this. fix
SPOILER
03:27:503 (1,1,1,1,1) - definitely fill in notes, or just leave it as break time. Really not a good idea to do this imo. or at least use finish instead of whistle fix
03:37:836 (1,1,2) - this part feels awkward. you're following vocal here 03:41:003 (3,4,5) - and you're not on these. maybe fixed
04:02:336 (4) - delete clap on head? no
04:05:003 (2) - is there really a need to use 1/2 slider here? no isn't
04:15:670 (2) - This makes more sense, and follows music better imo fix
SPOILER
04:37:170 (2) - NC? not following your NC pattern no

Narcissu wrote:

[normal]

00:19:837 (1) - DS±0.05这个习俗我觉得就是水帖用的233 思考

01:53:170 (1,1) - 转盘接note好像要空比较长才行……话说11个转盘是不是太多了 好吧跟vocal 不多你看这张也是11个b/92984
thanks for mods~
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318,161,245170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,74,245503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
213,36,245836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
123,40,246170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,98,246503,6,0,P|36:164|41:215,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,278,247170,2,0,P|131:297|166:333,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,353,247670,2,0,L|250:327,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,311,248170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,320,248503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,266,248836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
497,177,249170,6,0,P|474:129|421:98,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,117,249836,2,0,P|298:127|234:113,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,103,250336,2,0,L|166:134,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,198,250836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,287,251170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,331,251503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,348,251836,6,0,P|337:353|398:338,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,294,252503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,206,252836,2,0,L|500:153,2,50,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,215,253503,2,0,P|331:198|305:165,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,94,254170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,69,254503,6,0,B|84:31|84:31|9:39,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,81,255670,2,0,B|261:152|359:124|359:124|401:229|322:298,1,350,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,379,257170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
71,249,258170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
61,159,258503,2,0,P|96:93|224:57,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,330,260836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
359,340,261169,2,0,P|425:305|461:177,2,200,0|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,262670,12,0,265170,0:0:0:0:
167,170,266170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
203,87,266503,6,0,P|246:63|304:62,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,70,267170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,128,267503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,217,267836,2,0,L|428:317,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,349,268836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,270,269503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
68,91,270170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
143,42,270503,2,0,L|249:41,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,54,271503,2,0,L|471:100,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,127,271836,6,0,P|481:186|458:244,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,272503,2,0,P|351:288|306:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,273170,12,0,275836,0:0:0:0:
82,182,276836,5,8,0:0:0:0:
161,139,277170,2,0,P|222:140|262:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,113,277836,2,0,L|412:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,273,278503,5,0,0:0:0:0:
385,337,278836,2,0,L|319:347,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,279503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,319,279836,5,0,0:0:0:0:
54,250,280170,2,0,L|68:190,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,81,280836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,281170,12,0,283836,0:0:0:0:
好改个摸一个下午又美丽(
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Hey, mod from queue 8-)
[General]
Source: Tokyo Ravens

[Hard]
00:47:503 (3,5) - Very confusing overlap, it'll trick players into thinking that they should click 00:48:003 (5) - instead of 00:47:836 (4) - after 00:47:503 (3) - . Why not move 00:48:003 (5) - to where 00:48:170 (6) - is, and then place 00:48:170 (6) - underneath 00:47:836 (4) - to form a back-and-forth sort of flow here, like this:

Style suits pretty ok here, since this part is following off-vocals.

01:07:503 (1) - Add a whistle here?

01:16:836 (1) - Remove NC here, it isn't necessary.

01:08:336 - Consider adding a note here, it sounds really awkward how there's a pause here, while the vocals is clearly still singing the words 'out'. Especially since you've previously made the previous note 1 full beat apart from this slider (01:07:503 (1,1) -, where 01:07:503 (1) - hits the lyrics 'Break'). And that was when is a pause in between the notes.
But now having a 1 beat spacing here in between 01:07:836 (1,2) - makes no sense. There is no pause here in the music now, it's the chorus.

01:19:003 - Add a note if you agreed to the previous suggestion.

01:54:170 (3) - Is looking a bit too low there.

02:01:003 (2) - Placing it under 02:00:670 (8) - will create a better flow, as a back-and-forth sort of flow (Similar to what I've suggested for 00:47:503 (3,5) - ).

02:46:670 - 02:49:003 Why not add a spinner here with a clap hitsound? It follows the vocals long hold on the 'te' in hiraite.

03:56:336 - Add a note here. Similar to the same issue at 01:08:336 -. In this case you have the notes 03:55:503 (1,1) - beat apart due to the pause there at 03:55:670. however, there is no pause in between 03:55:836 (1,2) - ,so they shouldn't be a beat apart. It breaks the rhythm consistency with the music.

04:07:003 - Add a note here, same reason as above.

04:41:170 (1) - In an Easy diff, this'd be alright. But for a hard diff, I'd say you should actually continue mapping until 04:43:836, since the beats are still loud and alive, and they're still going.

[rsk's Normal]
Looks cool.

Good luck.
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue 8-)
[General]
Source: Tokyo Ravensthis song is in the same album with Tokyo Ravens' op1 but actually not in that anime(I think....since i did not watched that anime

[Hard]
00:47:503 (3,5) - Very confusing overlap, it'll trick players into thinking that they should click 00:48:003 (5) - instead of 00:47:836 (4) - after 00:47:503 (3) - . Why not move 00:48:003 (5) - to where 00:48:170 (6) - is, and then place 00:48:170 (6) - underneath 00:47:836 (4) - to form a back-and-forth sort of flow here, like this:
ok fixed in this way
Style suits pretty ok here, since this part is following off-vocals.

01:07:503 (1) - Add a whistle here?fixed

01:16:836 (1) - Remove NC here, it isn't necessary.fixed

01:08:336 - Consider adding a note here, it sounds really awkward how there's a pause here, while the vocals is clearly still singing the words 'out'. Especially since you've previously made the previous note 1 full beat apart from this slider (01:07:503 (1,1) -, where 01:07:503 (1) - hits the lyrics 'Break'). And that was when is a pause in between the notes.
But now having a 1 beat spacing here in between 01:07:836 (1,2) - makes no sense. There is no pause here in the music now, it's the chorus.well keep this comment because I think it still palys well without the note and testplayers also think it is fine.alsdo I dont want it be too difficult so maybe remove the note after that later

01:19:003 - Add a note if you agreed to the previous suggestion.

01:54:170 (3) - Is looking a bit too low there.fixed

02:01:003 (2) - Placing it under 02:00:670 (8) - will create a better flow, as a back-and-forth sort of flow (Similar to what I've suggested for 00:47:503 (3,5) - ). i think it will make this part more readable anyway fixed

02:46:670 - 02:49:003 Why not add a spinner here with a clap hitsound? It follows the vocals long hold on the 'te' in hiraite.

03:56:336 - Add a note here. Similar to the same issue at 01:08:336 -. In this case you have the notes 03:55:503 (1,1) - beat apart due to the pause there at 03:55:670. however, there is no pause in between 03:55:836 (1,2) - ,so they shouldn't be a beat apart. It breaks the rhythm consistency with the music.but it plays well so not gona change this if no more people confirm this to me

04:07:003 - Add a note here, same reason as above.

04:41:170 (1) - In an Easy diff, this'd be alright. But for a hard diff, I'd say you should actually continue mapping until 04:43:836, since the beats are still loud and alive, and they're still going.no since i am a lazy boy....jkjk maybe fixed it later but spinner works fine there so not gonna chane it now

[rsk's Normal]
Looks cool.

Good luck.
thank you :) :)
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
Sorry for late! OAO

NORMAL

Lower AR, OD, and HP DR. Those settings are too high for normal and whats more this is the easiest difficulty in the mapset

00:21:170 (2) - Move middle node to x176 y144 so that the blanket is more proper

00:47:836 (2) - Extend to 00:48:503 ? since there's a note on 00:48:503

01:01:836 (3) - Bring tail up to x168 y144

01:59:836 (2,3) - Change rhythm. This would suit better

HARD

00:57:170 (1) - Blanket properly. Why is it so close to (6) anyway?

01:48:336 (1) - I don't think the stack works because the time from (6) to (7) is one beat but from (7) to (1) is one and a half beats

03:04:503 (5) - Bring the middle and last node down a bit so the blanketing is proper

03:13:003 (5) - I find this overmap

good effort

Cant mod insanes

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

yurunneram wrote:

Sorry for late! OAO

HARD

00:57:170 (1) - Blanket properly. Why is it so close to (6) anyway?iwant it stacked properly but not going to make a blanket there

01:48:336 (1) - I don't think the stack works because the time from (6) to (7) is one beat but from (7) to (1) is one and a half beatskeep this because i think this is fine and no any ideas how to change this ._.

03:04:503 (5) - Bring the middle and last node down a bit so the blanketing is properfixed

03:13:003 (5) - I find this overmapok so removed this

good effort

Cant mod insanes

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
lol you get the 2kd slot
thank you for your star and mod <3
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
rinsukir
厚

yurunneram wrote:

NORMAL

Lower AR, OD, and HP DR. Those settings are too high for normal and whats more this is the easiest difficulty in the mapset fix

00:21:170 (2) - Move middle node to x176 y144 so that the blanket is more proper fix

00:47:836 (2) - Extend to 00:48:503 ? since there's a note on 00:48:503 fixed in another way

01:01:836 (3) - Bring tail up to x168 y144 fix

01:59:836 (2,3) - Change rhythm. This would suit better fix
thanks for mod~
Crystal
Former osu!catch Champion: 2018
1,123 posts
Joined June 2012
Crystal
hi~ from my queue~! :D
时间比较紧所以就看一下Insane了;w;抱歉

[General]
出自东京暗鸦? 把Tokyo Ravens填在Source?

[Insane]
00:22:503 (5) - NC?

00:34:503 (4,5,6,1) - 这里flow不太好,感觉. 建议把6的尾巴向下调整一点

00:37:336 (2) - 换成2个circle? 1/2起滑条不太顺的感觉

00:46:670 (2) - ^

00:56:670 (5) - 这样? XD (把折返去掉,换成一个圈
SPOILER

01:01:336 (2) - 不要被01:00:836 (4) - 遮挡住吧,看起来不太好看

01:06:336 (3,4,1) - 这么放让我以为是1/1 ;w; 因为和刚才那个1/1的间距同样

01:07:503 (1) - 建议可以放类似这样的表现这个滑条是变速的3/4滑条 (只是举个例子,这么放后面也要调整,不然就揉成一团了;w;)
SPOILER

01:15:836 (1,2,3,4) - 这个梗挺难打的,建议把01:16:170 (2,3) - 换成一个滑条

01:19:836 (1,2,3) - 调整好,3放在中间

02:11:336 (5,7) - 分别Ctrl+G

03:17:503 (1) - ..不好看

03:40:836 (3,4,5) - 不好读,不建议stack

04:09:003 (6) - (316,24)

04:44:003 - 这里加个转盘更能切合音乐

;w;没啥大问题 简直神麻婆
好运~~
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

[_Crystal] wrote:

hi~ from my queue~! :Dhihi
时间比较紧所以就看一下Insane了;w;抱歉

[General]
出自东京暗鸦? 把Tokyo Ravens填在Source?
是东京暗鸦op专辑里面的另外一首歌，我没看这动漫所以不知道里面有没有出现过这首歌所以没有擅自乱填.-.
[Insane]
00:22:503 (5) - NC?ok

00:34:503 (4,5,6,1) - 这里flow不太好,感觉. 建议把6的尾巴向下调整一点改了下

00:37:336 (2) - 换成2个circle? 1/2起滑条不太顺的感觉呜我觉得还行啊，先保留意见

00:46:670 (2) - ^^

00:56:670 (5) - 这样? XD (把折返去掉,换成一个圈呜想了一下觉得没太必要啊
SPOILER

01:01:336 (2) - 不要被01:00:836 (4) - 遮挡住吧,看起来不太好看fixed

01:06:336 (3,4,1) - 这么放让我以为是1/1 ;w; 因为和刚才那个1/1的间距同样确实但从读图上来说是这样，但是配合这里的歌声我觉得这样是恰当的，刚好这个向会折的跳能给人一种爆发的感觉。而且我个人打这里是没有问题的（初见

01:07:503 (1) - 建议可以放类似这样的表现这个滑条是变速的3/4滑条 (只是举个例子,这么放后面也要调整,不然就揉成一团了;w;)这也只是单纯的缩小间距了吧。。不用改啊我觉得现在的反而好些
SPOILER

01:15:836 (1,2,3,4) - 这个梗挺难打的,建议把01:16:170 (2,3) - 换成一个滑条呜。。。虽然有点难打但是vocal刚好落在你说的滑条的尾巴上了这样反而效果会变差（按照我的理解）没改._.

01:19:836 (1,2,3) - 调整好,3放在中间hao调整了一下

02:11:336 (5,7) - 分别Ctrl+G呜抱歉是故意这样的

03:17:503 (1) - ..不好看我也觉的但是我不会拉._.

03:40:836 (3,4,5) - 不好读,不建议stack用了别的梗替换掉了

04:09:003 (6) - (316,24)做了些修正

04:44:003 - 这里加个转盘更能切合音乐呜感觉必要不太大

;w;没啥大问题 简直神麻婆
好运~~
:D :D 谢谢你的mod
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