Kurosaki Maon - unchain. · forum

Mei

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-03-31T07:35:18+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
From my queue~

[Hard]
00:52:336 (3,4,5,6) - flow is not good. for example, how about this?i think there should be a jump, buit fixed in another way
SPOILER
01:05:670 (2,3) - I prefer to combine into 1 sliderok
01:11:837 (1,2,3,1) - I recommend to avoid this overlap. hard to see...fixed
03:59:836 (1,2,3,1) - ^this one is fine I think
01:55:170 (4) - start at 01:55:336fixed
02:06:670 (2,3) - blanket correctlyi tried my best ;_;
02:24:503 (6) - awkward slider...not awkward ;_;
02:24:003 (3,4) - I prefer not to stacknot bad i think
03:27:586 (1,1,2) - how about this?look nice
03:33:836 (3,1,2) - I prefer not to stack because of changing from 1/3 rhythm to 1/4 rhythmfixed
04:22:586 (1) - end at 04:25:170?
[Insane]
00:54:253- add a note?not really necessary, no obvious drum there so no
01:09:003 (6,7) - blanket correctlyfixed
01:16:753- remove clapok
01:52:836 (4,6) - blanket correctlyfixed
02:35:170 (4) - Ctrl+Gno because cuerrent one has better flow
03:12:670 (3,4) - very confusing. I recommend not to stackfixed

~Good Luck~

thank you for your modding ><

Ozato Fumika

Beatmap Nominator

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

Ozato Fumika 2014-03-31T22:41:47+00:00

Hi~ Mei~

[General]
Good.

[rsk's Normal]
I really think you can make much more use of finish to emphasize during KIAI. A lot of whistle can be replaced with finish imo :3
For hit sound, I'm only gonna point out till the first Kiai, then you can go over on the other part if you like my suggestion
00:19:503 (2) - Why is this not NC? It's not following your NC pattern.
00:22:170 (3) - how about this? I don't think you should use a slider here when there is no music or anything at all.

SPOILER

00:34:503 (3,4) - I'd move these to a little bit more right side for better shape and flow
00:37:170 (3,4,5,1) - give a little angle so it's more fun to play

SPOILER

00:40:336 (4) - Try this, I don't see a lot of 1/2. you can also add whistle on the head if you do this

SPOILER

00:42:670 (4) - This makes so much more sense. no reason to start the slider from 00:42:503 - and the vocal ends 00:43:503 -

SPOILER

01:10:586 (1) - finish?
01:13:003 (1) - I don't see a reason to make this 1/2 slider, plus suddenly complicated beat compared to non-kiai part. make it a circle.
01:14:336 (4) - delete clap on head?
01:15:836 (1) - finish on all 3 point?
01:21:170 (1) - finish fits better imo
01:34:670 (1) - end the spinner 01:37:003 - ? makes much more sense. 04:22:670 (1) - too
01:59:836 (2) - why not stack this on 01:58:170 (4) - for neatness :3
03:06:503 (2) - this slider shouldn't be shaped like this.

SPOILER

03:27:503 (1,1,1,1,1) - definitely fill in notes, or just leave it as break time. Really not a good idea to do this imo. or at least use finish instead of whistle
03:37:836 (1,1,2) - this part feels awkward. you're following vocal here 03:41:003 (3,4,5) - and you're not on these.
04:02:336 (4) - delete clap on head?
04:05:003 (2) - is there really a need to use 1/2 slider here?
04:15:670 (2) - This makes more sense, and follows music better imo

SPOILER

04:37:170 (2) - NC? not following your NC pattern

[Hard]
Reduce HP by 1 tick for better diff spread
00:19:837 (1) - I'd end this on 00:22:170 - and delete finish. fits music much better imo
00:34:170 (3) - kind of a awkward flow, but it's ok. I would curve it the other way, though.
00:35:003 (5) - delete this circle? It fits ryour pattern better imo
00:37:003 (4) - delete this circle to emphasize the calmness here?
00:41:670 (2,3) - This makes more sense and follows music better imo

SPOILER

00:53:670 (5,6) - Try this pattern. And I don't think you should ignore 00:54:003 - 00:54:170 - 00:54:336 -

SPOILER

01:25:336 (3) - delete this circle to keep the same beat as previous notes
01:31:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part has bad flow imo..

SPOILER

01:32:503 (3) - try curve it the other way
01:33:170 (1) - crtl + g
01:33:503 (2) - ^

01:34:586 (1) - end it 01:37:003 - here?
01:46:836 (4,5,6,7,8) - This part felt really awkward probably because of overmapping and passive slider. and you're ruining the calmness of this part

SPOILER

02:21:003 (4,5) - I don't know if this was on purpose, but does not seem to fit here well, and only makes it harder.
02:24:003 (3,4) - unstack? I don't see why you would stack this and not the others 02:23:503 (1,2,5,6) -
02:44:836 (4,1) - try to have a better connection, or shape
03:16:336 (1,2,3,4) - overmapped and doesn't follow the music at all

SPOILER

03:18:503 (1) - delete it and start the break from here?
03:33:170 (1,2) - this is really hard rhythm,
03:33:836 (3) - reduce one reverse and add circle?
03:33:170 (1,2) - this slider length is really not a good indication for 1/3. Try to do this?

SPOILER

03:40:003 (1,1) - these 2 spinners are extremely long, and can be really tiring for players. also boring
03:51:003 (3,4) - try this. I don' think you need a slider here 03:51:336 - because the vocal and guitar are so dominant in this part. you can ignore drum

SPOILER

03:59:836 (1,2,1,2,3) - you should remap this part, it's not allowing you to use ur NC pattern and basic NC. plus a bit too hard imo
04:15:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to use some sliders here, really hard
04:16:836 (9) - NC?
04:17:836 (1) - I don't see why you would have this circle.
02:42:170 (2,3,4) - I think you should follow the vocal here, like the first kiai. 04:18:170 (2,3,4) - here too
04:20:837 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - a bit awkward flow, but I guess you can keep it if you want.
04:28:836 (3,1,2) - a ung♥ a ung♥ /me runs

Good luck!

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-04-01T04:33:33+00:00

No Dap wrote:
Hi~ Mei~hi~no dap~

[General]
Good.

[Hard]
Reduce HP by 1 tick for better diff spreaddone
00:19:837 (1) - I'd end this on 00:22:170 - and delete finish. fits music much better imofixed
00:34:170 (3) - kind of a awkward flow, but it's ok. I would curve it the other way, though.fixed
00:35:003 (5) - delete this circle? It fits ryour pattern better imofixed
00:37:003 (4) - delete this circle to emphasize the calmness here?fixed
00:41:670 (2,3) - This makes more sense and follows music better imofixed
SPOILER
00:53:670 (5,6) - Try this pattern. And I don't think you should ignore 00:54:003 - 00:54:170 - 00:54:336 - there used to have a circle but i want it easier
SPOILER
01:25:336 (3) - delete this circle to keep the same beat as previous notesok
01:31:836 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part has bad flow imo.. looks good
SPOILER
01:32:503 (3) - try curve it the other way
01:33:170 (1) - crtl + g
01:33:503 (2) - ^
01:34:586 (1) - end it 01:37:003 - here? I think current one is better
01:46:836 (4,5,6,7,8) - This part felt really awkward probably because of overmapping and passive slider. and you're ruining the calmness of this partfixed
SPOILER

02:21:003 (4,5) - I don't know if this was on purpose, but does not seem to fit here well, and only makes it harder.for sure note ;_;
02:24:003 (3,4) - unstack? I don't see why you would stack this and not the others 02:23:503 (1,2,5,6) - well the reason why i stack is for there is no enough space....but the stack does not cause any problem so no fix there
02:44:836 (4,1) - try to have a better connection, or shapefixed
03:16:336 (1,2,3,4) - overmapped and doesn't follow the music at allkinda overmap there yes ur right, but i dont want to breake the pattern there so keep this
SPOILER
03:18:503 (1) - delete it and start the break from here?no since i think it is necessary to add note for emphasizing the piano there
03:33:170 (1,2) - this is really hard rhythm, keep this i will ask some more people about there
03:33:836 (3) - reduce one reverse and add circle?1/3 maybe hard for someone
03:33:170 (1,2) - this slider length is really not a good indication for 1/3. Try to do this?
SPOILER
03:40:003 (1,1) - these 2 spinners are extremely long, and can be really tiring for players. also boringiam too lazy for now maybe gonna map this part in the future
03:51:003 (3,4) - try this. I don' think you need a slider here 03:51:336 - because the vocal and guitar are so dominant in this part. you can ignore drum this one also fine but i dont want break my symmetric patten ;_;
SPOILER
03:59:836 (1,2,1,2,3) - you should remap this part, it's not allowing you to use ur NC pattern and basic NC. plus a bit too hard imoremapped
04:15:503 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try to use some sliders here, really hardfixed
04:16:836 (9) - NC?fixed
04:17:836 (1) - I don't see why you would have this circle.
02:42:170 (2,3,4) - I think you should follow the vocal here, like the first kiai. 04:18:170 (2,3,4) - here toofixed;_;
04:20:837 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - a bit awkward flow, but I guess you can keep it if you want.so i keep this >.>
04:28:836 (3,1,2) - a ung♥ a ung♥ /me runs~~what i could say is no dap san hentai>.<~~

Good luck!

thank you for you modding <3

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-04-02T09:00:48+00:00

我给你星你给我个GD怎么样，是不是很划算【喂！

Edit:考虑到收支平衡还是写点水水好了，~~当一只水笔有什么不好~~

[normal]

00:19:837 (1) - DS±0.05这个习俗我觉得就是水帖用的233

01:53:170 (1,1) - 转盘接note好像要空比较长才行……话说11个转盘是不是太多了

[hard]

00:19:837 (1) - 对hard来说9个转盘感觉真的有点多，像开头这个我就感觉不太需要……

00:56:170 (5,1) - unrank啊orz……至少我的皮肤还是会出300的【所以我还是渣

01:59:503 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard及以下diff不建议读图杀，要杀就多放点，偶尔来一个是坑【喂！

02:05:336 (2,3) - slider跳note用2.5是不是太大了，hard还是规矩点好

03:40:003 (1,1) - 2个转盘连着本身就丢失了很多点击了，后面还有一个……删吧？

03:58:336 (3,5) - 像这个虽然300的图标已经没了，但是这样的梗我还是不建议

还有难度设置有点乱，第一个kiai居然是最难的...

[insane]

这diff的星数居然没我的新图高真不科学，而且我只会刷分图排版这根本写不了东西……

01:22:503 (1,3) - unrank……

01:31:503 (4) - 严格的讲师不允许锚点出界的虽然你滑条没出界，我建议你大部分滑条拉完如果锚点出界的话可以ctrl+G两次，能自动定位锚点

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-04-02T21:00:04+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
我给你星你给我个GD怎么样，是不是很划算【喂！好啊

Edit:考虑到收支平衡还是写点水水好了，~~当一只水笔有什么不好~~

[hard]

00:19:837 (1) - 对hard来说9个转盘感觉真的有点多，像开头这个我就感觉不太需要……我在改后面的

00:56:170 (5,1) - unrank啊orz……至少我的皮肤还是会出300的【所以我还是渣这个还ok吧

01:59:503 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - hard及以下diff不建议读图杀，要杀就多放点，偶尔来一个是坑【喂！这个还好吧;w;我dt这里也没问题

02:05:336 (2,3) - slider跳note用2.5是不是太大了，hard还是规矩点好好

03:40:003 (1,1) - 2个转盘连着本身就丢失了很多点击了，后面还有一个……删吧？正在改这里

03:58:336 (3,5) - 像这个虽然300的图标已经没了，但是这样的梗我还是不建议呜呜不太好改啊

还有难度设置有点乱，第一个kiai居然是最难的...重新排了一下第一段kiai

[insane]

这diff的星数居然没我的新图高真不科学，而且我只会刷分图排版这根本写不了东西……

01:22:503 (1,3) - unrank……fixed

01:31:503 (4) - 严格的讲师不允许锚点出界的虽然你滑条没出界，我建议你大部分滑条拉完如果锚点出界的话可以ctrl+G两次，能自动定位锚点哦学到了新的小技巧

我还回你一分啊我也是好人.-.

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

rinsukir 2014-04-04T09:15:47+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
[rsk's Normal]
00:54:503- finish fix
01:58:170 (4,2) - how about stacking? fix
02:06:503 (1) - - finish fix
02:37:836 (4) - move to around x:300 y:94 for smoother cursor moving fix
03:31:836 (1,1,1) - I prefer to add finish instead of whistle fix
03:37:836 (1) - end at 03:39:170 fix
03:39:836 (1) - end at 03:40:170 fix
04:21:169 (2) - hitsound pattern is defferent from 01:33:170 (2) - and 02:45:169 (2) -. Is ot on purpose? fix

No Dap wrote:
[rsk's Normal]
I really think you can make much more use of finish to emphasize during KIAI. A lot of whistle can be replaced with finish imo :3 i'm not used to using finish.-.
For hit sound, I'm only gonna point out till the first Kiai, then you can go over on the other part if you like my suggestion
00:19:503 (2) - Why is this not NC? It's not following your NC pattern. no
00:22:170 (3) - how about this? I don't think you should use a slider here when there is no music or anything at all. a tone on 00:22:170
SPOILER
00:34:503 (3,4) - I'd move these to a little bit more right side for better shape and flow fix
00:37:170 (3,4,5,1) - give a little angle so it's more fun to play fix
SPOILER
00:40:336 (4) - Try this, I don't see a lot of 1/2. you can also add whistle on the head if you do this no
SPOILER
00:42:670 (4) - This makes so much more sense. no reason to start the slider from 00:42:503 - and the vocal ends 00:43:503 - fix
SPOILER
01:10:586 (1) - finish? fix
01:13:003 (1) - I don't see a reason to make this 1/2 slider, plus suddenly complicated beat compared to non-kiai part. make it a circle. fix
01:14:336 (4) - delete clap on head? no
01:15:836 (1) - finish on all 3 point? only add on the first two points
01:21:170 (1) - finish fits better imo fix
01:34:670 (1) - end the spinner 01:37:003 - ? makes much more sense. 04:22:670 (1) - too no
01:59:836 (2) - why not stack this on 01:58:170 (4) - for neatness :3 fix
03:06:503 (2) - this slider shouldn't be shaped like this. fix
SPOILER
03:27:503 (1,1,1,1,1) - definitely fill in notes, or just leave it as break time. Really not a good idea to do this imo. or at least use finish instead of whistle fix
03:37:836 (1,1,2) - this part feels awkward. you're following vocal here 03:41:003 (3,4,5) - and you're not on these. maybe fixed
04:02:336 (4) - delete clap on head? no
04:05:003 (2) - is there really a need to use 1/2 slider here? no isn't
04:15:670 (2) - This makes more sense, and follows music better imo fix
SPOILER
04:37:170 (2) - NC? not following your NC pattern no

Narcissu wrote:
[normal]

00:19:837 (1) - DS±0.05这个习俗我觉得就是水帖用的233 思考

01:53:170 (1,1) - 转盘接note好像要空比较长才行……话说11个转盘是不是太多了好吧跟vocal 不多你看这张也是11个b/92984

thanks for mods~

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387,215,253503,2,0,P|331:198|305:165,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,94,254170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,69,254503,6,0,B|84:31|84:31|9:39,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,81,255670,2,0,B|261:152|359:124|359:124|401:229|322:298,1,350,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,379,257170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
71,249,258170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
61,159,258503,2,0,P|96:93|224:57,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,330,260836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
359,340,261169,2,0,P|425:305|461:177,2,200,0|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,262670,12,0,265170,0:0:0:0:
167,170,266170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
203,87,266503,6,0,P|246:63|304:62,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,70,267170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,128,267503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,217,267836,2,0,L|428:317,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,349,268836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,270,269503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
68,91,270170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
143,42,270503,2,0,L|249:41,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,54,271503,2,0,L|471:100,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,127,271836,6,0,P|481:186|458:244,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,272503,2,0,P|351:288|306:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,273170,12,0,275836,0:0:0:0:
82,182,276836,5,8,0:0:0:0:
161,139,277170,2,0,P|222:140|262:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,113,277836,2,0,L|412:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,273,278503,5,0,0:0:0:0:
385,337,278836,2,0,L|319:347,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,279503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,319,279836,5,0,0:0:0:0:
54,250,280170,2,0,L|68:190,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,81,280836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,281170,12,0,283836,0:0:0:0:

好改个摸一个下午又美丽(

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-04-05T03:04:00+00:00

Hey, mod from queue

[General]
Source: Tokyo Ravens

[Hard]
00:47:503 (3,5) - Very confusing overlap, it'll trick players into thinking that they should click 00:48:003 (5) - instead of 00:47:836 (4) - after 00:47:503 (3) - . Why not move 00:48:003 (5) - to where 00:48:170 (6) - is, and then place 00:48:170 (6) - underneath 00:47:836 (4) - to form a back-and-forth sort of flow here, like this:

Style suits pretty ok here, since this part is following off-vocals.

01:07:503 (1) - Add a whistle here?

01:16:836 (1) - Remove NC here, it isn't necessary.

01:08:336 - Consider adding a note here, it sounds really awkward how there's a pause here, while the vocals is clearly still singing the words 'out'. Especially since you've previously made the previous note 1 full beat apart from this slider (01:07:503 (1,1) -, where 01:07:503 (1) - hits the lyrics 'Break'). And that was when is a pause in between the notes.
But now having a 1 beat spacing here in between 01:07:836 (1,2) - makes no sense. There is no pause here in the music now, it's the chorus.

01:19:003 - Add a note if you agreed to the previous suggestion.

01:54:170 (3) - Is looking a bit too low there.

02:01:003 (2) - Placing it under 02:00:670 (8) - will create a better flow, as a back-and-forth sort of flow (Similar to what I've suggested for 00:47:503 (3,5) - ).

02:46:670 - 02:49:003 Why not add a spinner here with a clap hitsound? It follows the vocals long hold on the 'te' in hiraite.

03:56:336 - Add a note here. Similar to the same issue at 01:08:336 -. In this case you have the notes 03:55:503 (1,1) - beat apart due to the pause there at 03:55:670. however, there is no pause in between 03:55:836 (1,2) - ,so they shouldn't be a beat apart. It breaks the rhythm consistency with the music.

04:07:003 - Add a note here, same reason as above.

04:41:170 (1) - In an Easy diff, this'd be alright. But for a hard diff, I'd say you should actually continue mapping until 04:43:836, since the beats are still loud and alive, and they're still going.

[rsk's Normal]
Looks cool.

Good luck.

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-04-05T06:28:02+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, mod from queue
[General]
Source: Tokyo Ravensthis song is in the same album with Tokyo Ravens' op1 but actually not in that anime(I think....since i did not watched that anime

[Hard]
00:47:503 (3,5) - Very confusing overlap, it'll trick players into thinking that they should click 00:48:003 (5) - instead of 00:47:836 (4) - after 00:47:503 (3) - . Why not move 00:48:003 (5) - to where 00:48:170 (6) - is, and then place 00:48:170 (6) - underneath 00:47:836 (4) - to form a back-and-forth sort of flow here, like this:
ok fixed in this way
Style suits pretty ok here, since this part is following off-vocals.

01:07:503 (1) - Add a whistle here?fixed

01:16:836 (1) - Remove NC here, it isn't necessary.fixed

01:08:336 - Consider adding a note here, it sounds really awkward how there's a pause here, while the vocals is clearly still singing the words 'out'. Especially since you've previously made the previous note 1 full beat apart from this slider (01:07:503 (1,1) -, where 01:07:503 (1) - hits the lyrics 'Break'). And that was when is a pause in between the notes.
But now having a 1 beat spacing here in between 01:07:836 (1,2) - makes no sense. There is no pause here in the music now, it's the chorus.well keep this comment because I think it still palys well without the note and testplayers also think it is fine.alsdo I dont want it be too difficult so maybe remove the note after that later

01:19:003 - Add a note if you agreed to the previous suggestion.

01:54:170 (3) - Is looking a bit too low there.fixed

02:01:003 (2) - Placing it under 02:00:670 (8) - will create a better flow, as a back-and-forth sort of flow (Similar to what I've suggested for 00:47:503 (3,5) - ). i think it will make this part more readable anyway fixed

02:46:670 - 02:49:003 Why not add a spinner here with a clap hitsound? It follows the vocals long hold on the 'te' in hiraite.

03:56:336 - Add a note here. Similar to the same issue at 01:08:336 -. In this case you have the notes 03:55:503 (1,1) - beat apart due to the pause there at 03:55:670. however, there is no pause in between 03:55:836 (1,2) - ,so they shouldn't be a beat apart. It breaks the rhythm consistency with the music.but it plays well so not gona change this if no more people confirm this to me

04:07:003 - Add a note here, same reason as above.

04:41:170 (1) - In an Easy diff, this'd be alright. But for a hard diff, I'd say you should actually continue mapping until 04:43:836, since the beats are still loud and alive, and they're still going.no since i am a lazy boy....jkjk maybe fixed it later but spinner works fine there so not gonna chane it now

[rsk's Normal]
Looks cool.

Good luck.

thank you

yurunneram

682 posts

Joined January 2012

yurunneram 2014-04-18T10:37:47+00:00

Sorry for late! OAO

NORMAL

Lower AR, OD, and HP DR. Those settings are too high for normal and whats more this is the easiest difficulty in the mapset

00:21:170 (2) - Move middle node to x176 y144 so that the blanket is more proper

00:47:836 (2) - Extend to 00:48:503 ? since there's a note on 00:48:503

01:01:836 (3) - Bring tail up to x168 y144

01:59:836 (2,3) - Change rhythm. This would suit better

HARD

00:57:170 (1) - Blanket properly. Why is it so close to (6) anyway?

01:48:336 (1) - I don't think the stack works because the time from (6) to (7) is one beat but from (7) to (1) is one and a half beats

03:04:503 (5) - Bring the middle and last node down a bit so the blanketing is proper

03:13:003 (5) - I find this overmap

good effort

Cant mod insanes

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-04-19T06:00:45+00:00

yurunneram wrote:
Sorry for late! OAO

HARD

00:57:170 (1) - Blanket properly. Why is it so close to (6) anyway?iwant it stacked properly but not going to make a blanket there

01:48:336 (1) - I don't think the stack works because the time from (6) to (7) is one beat but from (7) to (1) is one and a half beatskeep this because i think this is fine and no any ideas how to change this ._.

03:04:503 (5) - Bring the middle and last node down a bit so the blanketing is properfixed

03:13:003 (5) - I find this overmapok so removed this

good effort

Cant mod insanes

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

lol you get the 2kd slot
thank you for your star and mod <3

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

rinsukir 2014-04-27T02:12:56+00:00

厚

yurunneram wrote:
NORMAL

Lower AR, OD, and HP DR. Those settings are too high for normal and whats more this is the easiest difficulty in the mapset fix

00:21:170 (2) - Move middle node to x176 y144 so that the blanket is more proper fix

00:47:836 (2) - Extend to 00:48:503 ? since there's a note on 00:48:503 fixed in another way

01:01:836 (3) - Bring tail up to x168 y144 fix

01:59:836 (2,3) - Change rhythm. This would suit better fix

thanks for mod~

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,123 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-04-27T11:04:05+00:00

hi~ from my queue~!

时间比较紧所以就看一下Insane了;w;抱歉

[General]
出自东京暗鸦? 把Tokyo Ravens填在Source?

[Insane]
00:22:503 (5) - NC?

00:34:503 (4,5,6,1) - 这里flow不太好,感觉. 建议把6的尾巴向下调整一点

00:37:336 (2) - 换成2个circle? 1/2起滑条不太顺的感觉

00:46:670 (2) - ^

00:56:670 (5) - 这样? XD (把折返去掉,换成一个圈

SPOILER

01:01:336 (2) - 不要被01:00:836 (4) - 遮挡住吧,看起来不太好看

01:06:336 (3,4,1) - 这么放让我以为是1/1 ;w; 因为和刚才那个1/1的间距同样

01:07:503 (1) - 建议可以放类似这样的表现这个滑条是变速的3/4滑条 (只是举个例子,这么放后面也要调整,不然就揉成一团了;w;)

SPOILER

01:15:836 (1,2,3,4) - 这个梗挺难打的,建议把01:16:170 (2,3) - 换成一个滑条

01:19:836 (1,2,3) - 调整好,3放在中间

02:11:336 (5,7) - 分别Ctrl+G

03:17:503 (1) - ..不好看

03:40:836 (3,4,5) - 不好读,不建议stack

04:09:003 (6) - (316,24)

04:44:003 - 这里加个转盘更能切合音乐

;w;没啥大问题简直神麻婆
好运~~

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-04-28T07:37:54+00:00

[_Crystal] wrote:
hi~ from my queue~! hihi
时间比较紧所以就看一下Insane了;w;抱歉

[General]
出自东京暗鸦? 把Tokyo Ravens填在Source?
是东京暗鸦op专辑里面的另外一首歌，我没看这动漫所以不知道里面有没有出现过这首歌所以没有擅自乱填.-.
[Insane]
00:22:503 (5) - NC?ok

00:34:503 (4,5,6,1) - 这里flow不太好,感觉. 建议把6的尾巴向下调整一点改了下

00:37:336 (2) - 换成2个circle? 1/2起滑条不太顺的感觉呜我觉得还行啊，先保留意见

00:46:670 (2) - ^^

00:56:670 (5) - 这样? XD (把折返去掉,换成一个圈呜想了一下觉得没太必要啊
SPOILER

01:01:336 (2) - 不要被01:00:836 (4) - 遮挡住吧,看起来不太好看fixed

01:06:336 (3,4,1) - 这么放让我以为是1/1 ;w; 因为和刚才那个1/1的间距同样确实但从读图上来说是这样，但是配合这里的歌声我觉得这样是恰当的，刚好这个向会折的跳能给人一种爆发的感觉。而且我个人打这里是没有问题的（初见

01:07:503 (1) - 建议可以放类似这样的表现这个滑条是变速的3/4滑条 (只是举个例子,这么放后面也要调整,不然就揉成一团了;w;)这也只是单纯的缩小间距了吧。。不用改啊我觉得现在的反而好些
SPOILER

01:15:836 (1,2,3,4) - 这个梗挺难打的,建议把01:16:170 (2,3) - 换成一个滑条呜。。。虽然有点难打但是vocal刚好落在你说的滑条的尾巴上了这样反而效果会变差（按照我的理解）没改._.

01:19:836 (1,2,3) - 调整好,3放在中间hao调整了一下

02:11:336 (5,7) - 分别Ctrl+G呜抱歉是故意这样的

03:17:503 (1) - ..不好看我也觉的但是我不会拉._.

03:40:836 (3,4,5) - 不好读,不建议stack用了别的梗替换掉了

04:09:003 (6) - (316,24)做了些修正

04:44:003 - 这里加个转盘更能切合音乐呜感觉必要不太大

;w;没啥大问题简直神麻婆
好运~~

谢谢你的mod

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-04-28T16:30:09+00:00

OAO 马个先来晚不好意思我尽快摸真音妹子o3o

Meg

1,617 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2014-04-29T00:42:49+00:00

good map than mine... I respect.
gl><

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2014-08-08T15:47:47+00:00

Hi, modding as you requested.

[General]

Just a tip, try swapping Combo Colour 2 with 3 or 4, so there's higher contrast which makes the map easier for the player to read since you have two light colours and two dark colours. This or this.

[rsk]

00:17:170 (1,2) - I think this is likely to confuse the player since the previous stacked notes are all spaced by 8 beats. I suggest to unstack it. (Alternatively, you could map circles on 00:14:170 and 00:16:837 too to make the rhythm understandable.
00:38:503 (1) - Whistle on head for piano.
00:39:836 (3,4) - You can improve this blanket: http://puu.sh/aJQvB/51b75e5543.jpg
00:46:503 (1) - Maybe curve slightly? http://puu.sh/aJQyr/cef82c3af0.jpg
00:48:503 (3) - Whistle?
01:50:170 (4) - Remove whistle? It doesn't match piano here.
03:03:503 (2,3) - Fix spacing.
04:02:170 (3,4) - It could look and play better if you stacked these.

[Hard]

Disable widescreen support.
00:14:837 (2) - Whistle on end.
00:15:836 (4) - Remove whistle from head, add whistle on end.
00:17:503 (2,3,4,5) - These feel too close in my opinion. Even though the DS is the same, sliders like this feel a lot close since you don't actually have to move your cursor all the way to the end of the slider. I suggest reversing the directions of all these sliders: http://puu.sh/aJSDP/92cdd1b019.jpg
00:38:503 (1) - Whistle on head.
00:39:003 (2) - Whistle on head.
00:39:003 (2,3) - You could make a cleaner blanket here: http://puu.sh/aJTb1/8609f71afc.jpg
00:42:503 (4) - Remove this circle? I think it makes both the flow and rhythm excessively complex, and it doesn't seem to follow any note in the music.
00:44:836 (3,4,5,6,7) - a.. flow here is quite awkward because of the drop-off from (3) to (4), and (4,5) lead opposite to (6)'s curve.
00:52:336 (3,1) - This jump could be confusing because the other objects are so close together, making it difficult to read ((2) is 1.2x from (3), so the player might click that instead of (1) -.-). I'm not sure if this will fix it, but maybe you could try curving (3) upward (away from (2)) to direct the player's movement toward (1): http://puu.sh/aJUby/682dc91211.jpg
01:05:670 (2,3) - Increase spacing to 1.2x.
01:08:503 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try this? http://puu.sh/aJUnx/bde5410e31.jpg
01:12:836 (1) - Ctrl+G flows better.
01:14:836 (3,4,5) - Flow is better this way? http://puu.sh/aJUti/6443f3d308.jpg
01:17:836 (1,2,3,4) - Oh wow, you use real streams in Hard o.o Not really a problem, as they do fit in the difficulty spread. Just uncommon to see these in Hard.
01:27:503 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm fits the music better: http://puu.sh/aJUFN/db75a8f867.jpg
01:47:836 (7,1) - Maybe swap NC, though I can understand why you might prefer it this way.
02:08:003 (5,6,7) - I don't really understand your choice of rhythm here. I think this fits better: http://puu.sh/aJV5z/3fabba0b49.jpg
03:17:003 (1) - NC for symmetry pattern emphasis.
03:18:503 (1) - I just feel unstack plays better: http://puu.sh/aJVgc/666858c2af.jpg
03:33:836 (3) - I wonder is this double repeat is readable enough...
03:57:003 (4,5) - Swap them around on the timeline? It will let (4) accent the syncopated vocal note.
04:08:836 (2,3) - Space it farther since (3) is a strong note, or maybe you could try this: http://puu.sh/aJVN1/e71cc2fbd3.jpg
04:15:003 (2,1) - Crazy jump for Hard diff. ;_; Try to reduce it.
04:21:170 - Is this inheriting section supposed to do something? If not, remove it.
04:34:170 (5,6) - Prefer stack to play a bit smoother and to make (1) feel stronger.
04:37:336 (2) - Just an idea, try a 0.5x SV 1/1 slider?

[Insane]

00:13:170 (4,5) - Stack these?
00:15:003 (2,3) - Remove whistle from head of (3) and add whistle to (2).
00:33:170 - Combos in this section are inconsistent. Try to always start the combos on large white ticks.
00:45:003 (5,6) - Feels too close for me. Also, I feel (6,7) should be switched on the timeline. Try this: http://puu.sh/aJXEL/5c1abfe473.jpg
01:01:836 (4,5) - I feel that this stack kills the momentum that you're building up, so maybe you could unstack (and maybe change the rhythm to http://puu.sh/aJXLm/a50c7ab68c.jpg).
01:06:170 (3) - Maybe add a circle. If you add this, here's my suggestion for the jump pattern too: Keep current position for first four circles, (4,5) 1/1 stack, and (1) on head of next combo.
01:18:336 (7,1) - This is awkward to play since the spacing suddenly decreases. Try a rotation pattern instead? http://puu.sh/aJYbj/3b2f382a5f.jpg
01:19:003 (3,4) - What is this following in the music? I suggest just putting 1/2 slider starting on the red tick instead. Also, remove the clap...
02:31:003 (3,4) - Same here, and for all other parts like this.
03:59:003 (7,8) - Yeah.. I don't really get this rhythm. It doesn't really play well. ;_;
04:21:170 - Is this inheriting section supposed to do something? If not, remove it.
04:39:336 (7) - Move this left more for better flow into (8). http://puu.sh/aJYIL/69736a9641.jpg
04:43:836 (6) - Remove? There's no note in the music here.

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

rinsukir 2014-08-09T06:07:16+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
[rsk]
00:17:170 (1,2) - I think this is likely to confuse the player since the previous stacked notes are all spaced by 8 beats. I suggest to unstack it. (Alternatively, you could map circles on 00:14:170 and 00:16:837 too to make the rhythm understandable. fixed in another way
00:38:503 (1) - Whistle on head for piano. fix
00:39:836 (3,4) - You can improve this blanket: http://puu.sh/aJQvB/51b75e5543.jpg maybe fixed
00:46:503 (1) - Maybe curve slightly? http://puu.sh/aJQyr/cef82c3af0.jpg no
00:48:503 (3) - Whistle? fix
01:50:170 (4) - Remove whistle? It doesn't match piano here. fix
03:03:503 (2,3) - Fix spacing. fix
04:02:170 (3,4) - It could look and play better if you stacked these. no, i don't like stack in normal..

thanks for mod~

ocde

osu file format v13

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256,192,222503,12,4,225170,0:0:0:0:
341,158,225836,6,0,L|330:223,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,295,226336,2,0,P|257:335|159:334,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,301,227170,2,0,L|78:248,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
73,163,227670,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,187,228503,6,0,B|338:153|391:156|391:156|414:108|477:84,2,200,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,285,230503,6,8,B|181:294|181:294|204:323|204:323|243:323|243:323|269:348|269:348|303:337|303:337|329:345|329:345|377:318,1,250,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,266,231670,2,0,B|475:231|475:231|484:181|446:132,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,232336,12,0,234836,0:0:0:0:
185,147,235503,5,0,0:0:0:0:
208,233,235836,6,0,P|255:286|299:306,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,330,236503,2,0,P|391:275|429:246,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,182,237170,2,0,L|506:119,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,159,237836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,105,238170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
229,109,238503,6,0,L|120:88,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,76,239170,2,0,P|12:119|12:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,241,239836,2,0,L|18:287,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,257,240503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,241,240836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,262,241170,6,0,P|374:273|429:258,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,191,241836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
462,101,242170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,72,242336,2,0,P|389:32|337:15,2,100,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,155,243336,2,0,L|310:220,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,241,243836,6,0,B|215:291|164:270|164:270|125:289,2,150,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,161,245170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,74,245503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
213,36,245836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
123,40,246170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
54,98,246503,6,0,P|36:164|41:215,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,278,247170,2,0,P|131:297|166:333,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,353,247670,2,0,L|250:327,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,311,248170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,320,248503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
482,266,248836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
497,177,249170,6,0,P|474:129|421:98,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,117,249836,2,0,P|298:127|234:113,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,103,250336,2,0,L|166:134,1,50,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,198,250836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,287,251170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,331,251503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,348,251836,6,0,P|337:353|398:338,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,294,252503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,206,252836,2,0,L|500:153,2,50,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,215,253503,2,0,P|331:198|305:165,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,94,254170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,69,254503,6,0,B|84:31|84:31|9:39,2,150,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,81,255670,2,0,B|261:152|359:124|359:124|401:229|322:298,1,350,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,379,257170,5,2,0:0:0:0:
71,249,258170,1,2,0:0:0:0:
61,159,258503,2,0,P|96:93|224:57,2,200,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,330,260836,5,2,0:0:0:0:
359,340,261169,2,0,P|425:305|461:177,2,200,0|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,262670,12,0,265170,0:0:0:0:
167,170,266170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
203,87,266503,6,0,P|246:63|304:62,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,70,267170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,128,267503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,217,267836,2,0,L|428:317,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,349,268836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
89,270,269503,5,8,0:0:0:0:
68,91,270170,1,8,0:0:0:0:
143,42,270503,2,0,L|249:41,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,54,271503,2,0,L|471:100,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,127,271836,6,0,P|481:186|458:244,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,300,272503,2,0,P|351:288|306:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,273170,12,0,275836,0:0:0:0:
82,182,276836,5,8,0:0:0:0:
161,139,277170,2,0,P|222:140|262:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,113,277836,2,0,L|412:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,273,278503,5,0,0:0:0:0:
385,337,278836,2,0,L|319:347,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,344,279503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,319,279836,5,0,0:0:0:0:
54,250,280170,2,0,L|68:190,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,81,280836,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,281170,12,0,283836,0:0:0:0:

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-08-09T17:34:31+00:00

CloudSplash16 wrote:
Hi, modding as you requested.

[General]
Just a tip, try swapping Combo Colour 2 with 3 or 4, so there's higher contrast which makes the map easier for the player to read since you have two light colours and two dark colours. This or this.
[Hard]
Disable widescreen support.
00:14:837 (2) - Whistle on end.
00:15:836 (4) - Remove whistle from head, add whistle on end.
00:17:503 (2,3,4,5) - These feel too close in my opinion. Even though the DS is the same, sliders like this feel a lot close since you don't actually have to move your cursor all the way to the end of the slider. I suggest reversing the directions of all these sliders: http://puu.sh/aJSDP/92cdd1b019.jpg
00:38:503 (1) - Whistle on head.
00:39:003 (2) - Whistle on head.
00:39:003 (2,3) - You could make a cleaner blanket here: http://puu.sh/aJTb1/8609f71afc.jpg
00:42:503 (4) - Remove this circle? I think it makes both the flow and rhythm excessively complex, and it doesn't seem to follow any note in the music.
00:44:836 (3,4,5,6,7) - a.. flow here is quite awkward because of the drop-off from (3) to (4), and (4,5) lead opposite to (6)'s curve.
00:52:336 (3,1) - This jump could be confusing because the other objects are so close together, making it difficult to read ((2) is 1.2x from (3), so the player might click that instead of (1) -.-). I'm not sure if this will fix it, but maybe you could try curving (3) upward (away from (2)) to direct the player's movement toward (1): http://puu.sh/aJUby/682dc91211.jpg
01:05:670 (2,3) - Increase spacing to 1.2x.
01:08:503 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try this? http://puu.sh/aJUnx/bde5410e31.jpg
01:12:836 (1) - Ctrl+G flows better.
01:14:836 (3,4,5) - Flow is better this way? http://puu.sh/aJUti/6443f3d308.jpg
01:17:836 (1,2,3,4) - Oh wow, you use real streams in Hard o.o Not really a problem, as they do fit in the difficulty spread. Just uncommon to see these in Hard.
01:27:503 (3,4,5,6) - This rhythm fits the music better: http://puu.sh/aJUFN/db75a8f867.jpg
01:47:836 (7,1) - Maybe swap NC, though I can understand why you might prefer it this way.
02:08:003 (5,6,7) - I don't really understand your choice of rhythm here. I think this fits better: http://puu.sh/aJV5z/3fabba0b49.jpg
03:17:003 (1) - NC for symmetry pattern emphasis.
03:18:503 (1) - I just feel unstack plays better: http://puu.sh/aJVgc/666858c2af.jpg
03:33:836 (3) - I wonder is this double repeat is readable enough...
03:57:003 (4,5) - Swap them around on the timeline? It will let (4) accent the syncopated vocal note.for this following distance is also fine i think
04:08:836 (2,3) - Space it farther since (3) is a strong note, or maybe you could try this: http://puu.sh/aJVN1/e71cc2fbd3.jpg
04:15:003 (2,1) - Crazy jump for Hard diff. ;_; Try to reduce it.
04:21:170 - Is this inheriting section supposed to do something? If not, remove it.
04:34:170 (5,6) - Prefer stack to play a bit smoother and to make (1) feel stronger.
04:37:336 (2) - Just an idea, try a 0.5x SV 1/1 slider?ummm i dont want to use those sttuff in a hard
[Insane]
00:13:170 (4,5) - Stack these?
00:15:003 (2,3) - Remove whistle from head of (3) and add whistle to (2).
00:33:170 - Combos in this section are inconsistent. Try to always start the combos on large white ticks.
00:45:003 (5,6) - Feels too close for me. Also, I feel (6,7) should be switched on the timeline. Try this: http://puu.sh/aJXEL/5c1abfe473.jpg
01:01:836 (4,5) - I feel that this stack kills the momentum that you're building up, so maybe you could unstack (and maybe change the rhythm to http://puu.sh/aJXLm/a50c7ab68c.jpg).
01:06:170 (3) - Maybe add a circle. If you add this, here's my suggestion for the jump pattern too: Keep current position for first four circles, (4,5) 1/1 stack, and (1) on head of next combo.
01:18:336 (7,1) - This is awkward to play since the spacing suddenly decreases. Try a rotation pattern instead? http://puu.sh/aJYbj/3b2f382a5f.jpg
01:19:003 (3,4) - What is this following in the music? I suggest just putting 1/2 slider starting on the red tick instead. Also, remove the clap...
02:31:003 (3,4) - Same here, and for all other parts like this.
03:59:003 (7,8) - Yeah.. I don't really get this rhythm. It doesn't really play well. ;_;
04:21:170 - Is this inheriting section supposed to do something? If not, remove it.
04:39:336 (7) - Move this left more for better flow into (8). http://puu.sh/aJYIL/69736a9641.jpg
04:43:836 (6) - Remove? There's no note in the music here.ummm iam nott sure about it but i want the music end at white tick so not gonna change this yet

others fixed! thank you CloudSplash16

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2014-08-18T05:48:39+00:00

hi from my queue
I'm not senpai I'm just a scrub who can neither play or map ;w;
annnd I have terrible internet which is why this was delayed :c gomen ne

[rsk's Normal]
講中文..吧??
00:37:170 (3,5) - 00:37:836 (4,1) -把他們連在一起比較乾淨 http://puu.sh/aXb6W/2d8ce8305f.jpg
00:47:836 (2) - (316, 256) 跟 00:46:170 (4,1) - 做個三角形, DS 也就需要改瞜
01:02:503 (1) - 這combo跟 01:00:836 (2,3) - 比太安靜了感覺怪怪的
01:05:170 (1) - 有點難看 :\
01:09:836 (4,1) - (y=85)
01:51:836 (2,3) - 就用同樣的形狀吧.. 反正後面只是接個spinner ctrl+c, ctrl+v, ctrl+h
01:55:836 (1) - 覺得彎另一邊flow比較好
01:59:836 (2) - 滑條尾有個whistle跟之前hitsound不同
02:00:836 (3,1) - 一條直直的下去看起來比較爽 http://puu.sh/aXbrh/3ad57f0ef8.jpg
02:02:836 (2) - 因為 02:01:170 (1) - 蠻圓的你也就把這灣一點吧之後的flow也比較好 http://puu.sh/aXbBC/59d8fd722d.jpg (ah small overlap oh well they wont see that stuff)
02:18:503 (2,3,4) - 一直線試試? (我加了個滑條來幫我) http://puu.sh/aXbPO/d613935d9f.jpg 沒加 http://puu.sh/aXbSa/7555d1000c.jpg
02:25:003 (1) - 其實一個circle就夠了
02:29:503 (3,4) - 在normal還算蠻多的.. 試著把這兩個改成滑條?
02:38:503 (1) - 好像有點難讀, 試試 -> http://puu.sh/aXc4f/d52d3eafa4.jpg
02:41:170 (1) - 嗯雖然是第一拍但vocal還是在 02:41:003
03:11:836 (4) - 這個如何? http://puu.sh/aXcjg/5aee0394da.jpg
03:17:003 (2) - vocal 在 03:17:336 結束
03:31:836 (1,1,1) - 為什麼不放正中間? (256, 192)
03:55:503 (1) - (160,156)
04:01:170 (1) - (y=257) 跟 04:00:503 (4) - 連, 你(3) 跟 (5) 有連好 (Y)
04:05:503 (3,4) - 改滑條?
04:11:836 (1) - 你rhythm有點怪, 但這是normal 所以沒怪你.. 我意見不知道你喜不喜歡 http://puu.sh/aXd3p/ab243da326.jpg 或你可以跟 04:01:170 (1) - 用一樣的rhythm. 但把(5)改成的circle感覺比較好 http://puu.sh/aXdel/e170f3c0a8.jpg

[Hard]
me being ocd: 02:03:170 (7,1) - 03:05:670 (3,7) - 04:06:503 (1,3) - 04:33:670 (4,1) - 04:37:336 (2,1) - stack 不完美 (Insane 也有一些)
00:19:837 (1) - 01:34:586 (1) - 02:46:670 (1) - 03:13:170 (1) - ETC.. 你spinners都不一樣, 我覺得通通改成 01:34:586 (1) - 03:27:503 (1) - 一樣比較好 http://puu.sh/aXfpU/3049ce1e7c.jpg

00:11:837 (1) - 我覺得這在下面比較好

哇畫的還真好 >sarcasm

00:14:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - 試這? 我比較喜歡圓圈的flow

真的是畫的太好了

00:41:836 (2,3) - 這 -> 00:40:170 (4,5) - 沒疊我看你就也不要吧
00:47:003 (2) - 1. 小overlap不好看. 要的話就弄多一點! http://puu.sh/aXe0V/83d38915c9.jpg 2. flow 有點問題, 試這? http://puu.sh/aXe87/f8faa641c3.jpg
00:57:170 (1) - 你想跟 00:56:170 (5) - 疊我了解但為了疊你跟 00:56:336 (6) - 就包得不好看反正試hard你跳一下不會怎樣
01:11:670 (6) - clap
01:11:837 (1) - 尾不要clap
01:21:670 (4) - 改成1/1滑條放成 http://puu.sh/aXeN9/99cda52d03.jpg 聽起來比較舒服 copy+paste + ctrl+> 01:21:170 (3) -
01:27:670 (4) - finish
01:28:836 - clap
01:29:003 (3) - 不要clap
01:33:170 (1,2,3,4) - 跟之前一樣尾也加clap
01:55:336 (1) - whistle 是故意的嗎?
02:00:836 (1,2) - ctrl+g 覺得因該要跟 00:47:836 (4,5,6,7) - 一樣
02:03:836 (1,3) - 覺得不好看, 乾脆stack?
02:45:170 (1) - 跟 01:33:170 (1,2,3,4) - 一樣
03:59:170 (4) - (344, 304)
04:13:336 (3) - (172, 192) flow

[Insane]
1/4 滑條好多 >.>
01:05:170 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - 距離都一樣但有些是1/2 跟 1/1
01:30:503 (1,2,3,4) - 距離好像增加了?
01:45:670 (2) - 太近了, 建議疊成antijump 譬如 http://puu.sh/aXfZ8/9ac0aead17.jpg 或是像你 01:47:836 (4,1) - 一樣只隔一點
02:14:253 (6) - 一個circle在 02:14:336 就夠了
02:16:669 (6) - (268,336)
02:55:336 (7,1) - 包?
03:17:503 (1) - 突然變超慢我保證向我一樣的人會sliderbreak.
03:59:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - 好瘦的星星喔
04:41:670 (4) - (349, 203)
04:43:003 (5) - 尾放在 (68,30)
04:43:670 (5) - 其實我覺得這改成circle然後去掉 04:43:836 (6) - 聽起來比較好

Insane 很好玩^^ (可惜我電腦有問題, 玩不了多久 T^T)
加油~~

edit: 哇我po的時候被osu給logout了.. 幸好chrome有幫我存不然我差點罵髒話

Mei

1,053 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

Mei 2014-08-18T19:36:23+00:00

Gaia wrote:
hi from my queue
I'm not senpai I'm just a scrub who can neither play or map ;w;
annnd I have terrible internet which is why this was delayed :c gomen ne

[Hard]
me being ocd: 02:03:170 (7,1) - 03:05:670 (3,7) - 04:06:503 (1,3) - 04:33:670 (4,1) - 04:37:336 (2,1) - stack 不完美 (Insane 也有一些)f-fixed
00:19:837 (1) - 01:34:586 (1) - 02:46:670 (1) - 03:13:170 (1) - ETC.. 你spinners都不一樣, 我覺得通通改成 01:34:586 (1) - 03:27:503 (1) - 一樣比較好候啊 http://puu.sh/aXfpU/3049ce1e7c.jpg

00:11:837 (1) - 我覺得這在下面比較好
哇畫的還真好 >sarcasm
00:14:503 (1,2,3,4,5) - 試這? 我比較喜歡圓圈的flow^nice paint 10/10
真的是畫的太好了
00:41:836 (2,3) - 這 -> 00:40:170 (4,5) - 沒疊我看你就也不要吧要调距离好麻烦容我犯个懒_(:зゝ∠)_
00:47:003 (2) - 1. 小overlap不好看. 要的話就弄多一點! http://puu.sh/aXe0V/83d38915c9.jpg 2. flow 有點問題, 試這? http://puu.sh/aXe87/f8faa641c3.jpg重做了下
00:57:170 (1) - 你想跟 00:56:170 (5) - 疊我了解但為了疊你跟 00:56:336 (6) - 就包得不好看反正試hard你跳一下不會怎樣还-还ok吧
01:11:670 (6) - clapfixed
01:11:837 (1) - 尾不要clapfixed
01:21:670 (4) - 改成1/1滑條放成 http://puu.sh/aXeN9/99cda52d03.jpg 聽起來比較舒服 copy+paste + ctrl+> 01:21:170 (3) - 感觉现在的也挺好
01:27:670 (4) - finishfixed
01:28:836 - clap^
01:29:003 (3) - 不要clap^
01:33:170 (1,2,3,4) - 跟之前一樣尾也加clap不加好听点
01:55:336 (1) - whistle 是故意的嗎?貌似加了whistle和没加一样。。。删了
02:00:836 (1,2) - ctrl+g 覺得因該要跟 00:47:836 (4,5,6,7) - 一樣改了下
02:03:836 (1,3) - 覺得不好看, 乾脆stack?唔。。这样好打orz
02:45:170 (1) - 跟 01:33:170 (1,2,3,4) - 一樣
03:59:170 (4) - (344, 304)fixed
04:13:336 (3) - (172, 192) flow fixed

[Insane]
1/4 滑條好多 >.>
01:05:170 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - 距離都一樣但有些是1/2 跟 1/1之前尝试改过不过效果很差，这个用nc分过组了我个人感觉蛮好打
01:30:503 (1,2,3,4) - 距離好像增加了?故意的
01:45:670 (2) - 太近了, 建議疊成antijump 譬如 http://puu.sh/aXfZ8/9ac0aead17.jpg 或是像你 01:47:836 (4,1) - 一樣只隔一點stack了
02:14:253 (6) - 一個circle在 02:14:336 就夠了这样好玩w
02:16:669 (6) - (268,336)fixed
02:55:336 (7,1) - 包?fixed
03:17:503 (1) - 突然變超慢我保證向我一樣的人會sliderbreak.还-还ok吧
03:59:836 (1,2,3,4,5) - 好瘦的星星喔其实我都没注意这里是星orz
04:41:670 (4) - (349, 203)fixed
04:43:003 (5) - 尾放在 (68,30)感觉没差太多
04:43:670 (5) - 其實我覺得這改成circle然後去掉 04:43:836 (6) - 聽起來比較好再看看

Insane 很好玩^^ (可惜我電腦有問題, 玩不了多久 T^T)
加油~~

edit: 哇我po的時候被osu給logout了.. 幸好chrome有幫我存不然我差點罵髒話

thank you for mod senpai

rinsukir

385 posts

Joined March 2012

rinsukir 2014-08-19T06:13:38+00:00

Gaia wrote:
[rsk's Normal]
講中文..吧??
00:37:170 (3,5) - 00:37:836 (4,1) -把他們連在一起比較乾淨 http://puu.sh/aXb6W/2d8ce8305f.jpg 爱这些对不对齐其实没啥的后面一样
00:47:836 (2) - (316, 256) 跟 00:46:170 (4,1) - 做個三角形, DS 也就需要改瞜 fixed in another way
01:02:503 (1) - 這combo跟 01:00:836 (2,3) - 比太安靜了感覺怪怪的前者与后者相比少了一点鼓声啊
01:05:170 (1) - 有點難看 :\ 爱还好吧
01:09:836 (4,1) - (y=85)
01:51:836 (2,3) - 就用同樣的形狀吧.. 反正後面只是接個spinner ctrl+c, ctrl+v, ctrl+h fix
01:55:836 (1) - 覺得彎另一邊flow比較好你书的对
01:59:836 (2) - 滑條尾有個whistle跟之前hitsound不同一样啊
02:00:836 (3,1) - 一條直直的下去看起來比較爽 http://puu.sh/aXbrh/3ad57f0ef8.jpg fix
02:02:836 (2) - 因為 02:01:170 (1) - 蠻圓的你也就把這灣一點吧之後的flow也比較好 http://puu.sh/aXbBC/59d8fd722d.jpg (ah small overlap oh well they wont see that stuff) 改了下不喜欢太弯的
02:18:503 (2,3,4) - 一直線試試? (我加了個滑條來幫我) http://puu.sh/aXbPO/d613935d9f.jpg 沒加 http://puu.sh/aXbSa/7555d1000c.jpg fix
02:25:003 (1) - 其實一個circle就夠了空长白会死病
02:29:503 (3,4) - 在normal還算蠻多的.. 試著把這兩個改成滑條? kiai中间过渡多一点circle也没问题吧
02:38:503 (1) - 好像有點難讀, 試試 -> http://puu.sh/aXc4f/d52d3eafa4.jpg fix
02:41:170 (1) - 嗯雖然是第一拍但vocal還是在 02:41:003 长白上也有vocal的(
03:11:836 (4) - 這個如何? http://puu.sh/aXcjg/5aee0394da.jpg fix
03:17:003 (2) - vocal 在 03:17:336 結束跟鼓点
03:31:836 (1,1,1) - 為什麼不放正中間? (256, 192) 没开gs..
03:55:503 (1) - (160,156) fix
04:01:170 (1) - (y=257) 跟 04:00:503 (4) - 連, 你(3) 跟 (5) 有連好 (Y)
04:05:503 (3,4) - 改滑條? no
04:11:836 (1) - 你rhythm有點怪, 但這是normal 所以沒怪你.. 我意見不知道你喜不喜歡 http://puu.sh/aXd3p/ab243da326.jpg 或你可以跟 04:01:170 (1) - 用一樣的rhythm. 但把(5)改成的circle感覺比較好 http://puu.sh/aXdel/e170f3c0a8.jpg fixed in another way 越改越难了爱

thanks for mod~

code

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