Honhon, as requested ig, Taiko mod.
[ Wmf's Taiko]
There is a harder diff ahead, I recommend OD5 for your diff o.o
Also, according to the diff naming rules, rename to "Wmf's Oni", put "Taiko" only doesn't make much sense.
00:11:728 (45) - k instead ? I find it more fitting because you follow the voice from the beginning.
00:15:174 (1) - Dunno, a K would be better here.
00:17:205 - Add k, we can clearly hear the kickbass.
00:17:611 (12,13) - Transform your d k into a dkd
00:19:337 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - Mmmh, In order to be consistent with the line above, I suggest you to do that pattern: http://puu.sh/73mbS.png
00:28:159 (58) - Add K, hear closely the cymbal !
00:29:578 (65) - d sounds quite better imo
00:30:591 (70,71,72,73) - kdd k looks cooler here, because of the sound you can hear right after the first k
00:36:267 - This place is empty, you an easily add a d
00:37:281 - Same thing as above.
00:37:889 (104) - Add D ?
00:40:929 (115,116,117,118,119) - I find that pattern a little rhythm-breaking, try with kkd kd (just change 116 and 117's position to 00:41:031 - )
00:42:754 (126) - Add K ?
00:44:375 (136) - Same, you can add a D ifyou want.
00:45:997 - ^
00:54:916 - From here to 00:55:727 - I suggest to put a kdkdD 1/2, simply follow the bass :D/
01:08:700 (34) - Add D ?
01:20:051 (93) - Add K, it's better if you accentuate the kick.
01:21:166 - Add a d, you can make a ddk, which is cooler to hear.
01:21:672 (99) - Add D !
01:27:450 (125) - This final pattern is quite confusing and harder than the rest, you should remove the k
[ Cream's Oni]
Everything seems fine except that:
00:34:836 (179) - unsnapped note, watch out.
Now, let me look at your patterns.
00:03:215 (12,13) - Reverse those two, the tone is constantly increasing here. ( k d => d k)
00:04:228 (16) - k instead.
00:05:242 (21,22,23) - No need to put a 1/4 pattern, remove 21 and 22, then put d at the place where 21 was.
00:08:688 (34,35,36,37,38) - Not sure about that, dkkkd 1/2 fits more imo.
00:11:525 (45,46,47) - If you follow the voice, shift 45 to 00:11:424 - and change 47 to d
00:12:336 (48,49,50) - You can put a kdddk 1/2, you will be in harmony with the piano.
00:13:552 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - That stream bothers me, it sounds overmapped, so I suggest you to make something lighter like that: http://puu.sh/73HSl.png And if you end by having a D, the contrast makes it better.
00:15:580 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,) - I'd like to see k d ddd k d, two contrasted triplets aren't especially fitting.
00:17:002 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - Duh, I don't really like that set of pattern, though it's completely subjective. I suggest ddk d dkd k d D, because of the bass.
00:18:830 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102) - Same as above, in order to make something less tricky, k d dkddk d d d d d ddddk would be smarter.
00:22:078 (106,107,108,109,110,111) - Why not d k ddk, you follow the same sound on the next pattern, why not keeping that idea ?
00:23:902 (117) - k, it's more consistent.
00:24:916 (124,125,126,127,128) - Don't mind being repetitve if it still follows the rhythm, d k d k ddk would be easier.
00:27:348 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - d kdd k D, You can hear that double beat, but you can add a k to make it less awkward.
00:29:375 (148,149,150) - d k d keeps the flow with the following kkd, I recommend you to do that :p
00:32:112 (163) - Remove ? I don't really like that dkd
00:32:416 (165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - You'll surprise the player with that kk, it's quite uncomfortable. There's a simple way to make that better, like that: http://puu.sh/73Lja.png
00:33:835 (172,173,174,175,176) - ddddk, easier.
00:35:355 (181,182,183) - Like I said with the kk, it can be surprising as well. From 00:35:254 - , make a d d k
00:36:267 (187,188,189,190,191) - Just remove 188, i find that pattern overmapped.
00:39:105 (205) - k, it's up to you.
00:39:510 (207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216) - d d k k d ddk, 1/2 can stay as they were before, but that stream has nothing to do here, follow my suggestion or try to replace it by something less overwhelming.
00:41:740 (222,223,224,225,226,227,228) - Hmmmm, k ddd k k d ? It's more fitting with the rest of your pattern.
00:43:970 (233,234) - k d D, way better, imo.
00:45:186 (236,237,238,239,240) - Quite obvious, according to the bass, try this: http://puu.sh/73MO5.png
00:46:808 (243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - A little complicated, ddddk would be clean.
00:50:456 (263,264,265,266,267,268,269) - Remove 268, it's less overmapped.
00:52:483 (279,280,281,282,283,284,285) - Instead of put that stream, you can make a better rhythm effect by placing d kd kd
00:53:700 (288,289,290,291,292,293) - The beat does a ddddd here, imitate it. Remove 292 also.
00:54:916 (295,296,297,298) - ddd k ? Dunno what to put here, it sounds better to me.
00:55:727 (300,301,302,303,304) - Change 303 to d in order to obtain ddddk
00:58:362 (315,316) - ddk, else you're breaking your rhythm.
00:58:970 (318,319,320,321,322) - It's quite empty, d d d d ddddk, like the beat does.
01:00:591 (324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338) - Remove the entire stream, I don't see any reason to put that here, make a spinner from 01:00:591 - to 01:02:010 -
01:02:416 (340,341,342,343,344,345,346) - Same thing, i don't really know what to put here, maybe d k d ddd k, though it's repetitive :s
01:14:172 (410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418) - Hmmm.... ddddkdd, somehow easier to play, imo.
01:15:186 (419,420,421,422,423) - d ddk d, cooler with the next patterns.
01:17:618 (434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443) - - ddddk d d ddk, your actual pattern isn't really fitting to the song itself.
01:19:645 (446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456) - I would like to see k d d ddkdd d, since the song doesn't change, no need to put such a big stream.
01:21:166 - Add d ? There is a blank, and we can hear the beat.
01:24:510 (479) - k, a little better.
01:26:537 (491,492) - d d, like all the passages with the single beat I mentioned.
01:27:348 (495,496,497,498,499,500,501,502,503) - Hmm, awkward stream, ddddkdddd would be a great last stream, more playable and fitting.
I didn't find something wrong with the Muzukashii, i'm sorry <.<
That's all.
[ Wmf's Taiko]
There is a harder diff ahead, I recommend OD5 for your diff o.o
Also, according to the diff naming rules, rename to "Wmf's Oni", put "Taiko" only doesn't make much sense.
00:11:728 (45) - k instead ? I find it more fitting because you follow the voice from the beginning.
00:15:174 (1) - Dunno, a K would be better here.
00:17:205 - Add k, we can clearly hear the kickbass.
00:17:611 (12,13) - Transform your d k into a dkd
00:19:337 (21,22,23,24,25,26) - Mmmh, In order to be consistent with the line above, I suggest you to do that pattern: http://puu.sh/73mbS.png
00:28:159 (58) - Add K, hear closely the cymbal !
00:29:578 (65) - d sounds quite better imo
00:30:591 (70,71,72,73) - kdd k looks cooler here, because of the sound you can hear right after the first k
00:36:267 - This place is empty, you an easily add a d
00:37:281 - Same thing as above.
00:37:889 (104) - Add D ?
00:40:929 (115,116,117,118,119) - I find that pattern a little rhythm-breaking, try with kkd kd (just change 116 and 117's position to 00:41:031 - )
00:42:754 (126) - Add K ?
00:44:375 (136) - Same, you can add a D ifyou want.
00:45:997 - ^
00:54:916 - From here to 00:55:727 - I suggest to put a kdkdD 1/2, simply follow the bass :D/
01:08:700 (34) - Add D ?
01:20:051 (93) - Add K, it's better if you accentuate the kick.
01:21:166 - Add a d, you can make a ddk, which is cooler to hear.
01:21:672 (99) - Add D !
01:27:450 (125) - This final pattern is quite confusing and harder than the rest, you should remove the k
[ Cream's Oni]
Everything seems fine except that:
00:34:836 (179) - unsnapped note, watch out.
Now, let me look at your patterns.
00:03:215 (12,13) - Reverse those two, the tone is constantly increasing here. ( k d => d k)
00:04:228 (16) - k instead.
00:05:242 (21,22,23) - No need to put a 1/4 pattern, remove 21 and 22, then put d at the place where 21 was.
00:08:688 (34,35,36,37,38) - Not sure about that, dkkkd 1/2 fits more imo.
00:11:525 (45,46,47) - If you follow the voice, shift 45 to 00:11:424 - and change 47 to d
00:12:336 (48,49,50) - You can put a kdddk 1/2, you will be in harmony with the piano.
00:13:552 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - That stream bothers me, it sounds overmapped, so I suggest you to make something lighter like that: http://puu.sh/73HSl.png And if you end by having a D, the contrast makes it better.
00:15:580 (65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,) - I'd like to see k d ddd k d, two contrasted triplets aren't especially fitting.
00:17:002 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85) - Duh, I don't really like that set of pattern, though it's completely subjective. I suggest ddk d dkd k d D, because of the bass.
00:18:830 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102) - Same as above, in order to make something less tricky, k d dkddk d d d d d ddddk would be smarter.
00:22:078 (106,107,108,109,110,111) - Why not d k ddk, you follow the same sound on the next pattern, why not keeping that idea ?
00:23:902 (117) - k, it's more consistent.
00:24:916 (124,125,126,127,128) - Don't mind being repetitve if it still follows the rhythm, d k d k ddk would be easier.
00:27:348 (136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - d kdd k D, You can hear that double beat, but you can add a k to make it less awkward.
00:29:375 (148,149,150) - d k d keeps the flow with the following kkd, I recommend you to do that :p
00:32:112 (163) - Remove ? I don't really like that dkd
00:32:416 (165,166,167,168,169,170,171) - You'll surprise the player with that kk, it's quite uncomfortable. There's a simple way to make that better, like that: http://puu.sh/73Lja.png
00:33:835 (172,173,174,175,176) - ddddk, easier.
00:35:355 (181,182,183) - Like I said with the kk, it can be surprising as well. From 00:35:254 - , make a d d k
00:36:267 (187,188,189,190,191) - Just remove 188, i find that pattern overmapped.
00:39:105 (205) - k, it's up to you.
00:39:510 (207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215,216) - d d k k d ddk, 1/2 can stay as they were before, but that stream has nothing to do here, follow my suggestion or try to replace it by something less overwhelming.
00:41:740 (222,223,224,225,226,227,228) - Hmmmm, k ddd k k d ? It's more fitting with the rest of your pattern.
00:43:970 (233,234) - k d D, way better, imo.
00:45:186 (236,237,238,239,240) - Quite obvious, according to the bass, try this: http://puu.sh/73MO5.png
00:46:808 (243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - A little complicated, ddddk would be clean.
00:50:456 (263,264,265,266,267,268,269) - Remove 268, it's less overmapped.
00:52:483 (279,280,281,282,283,284,285) - Instead of put that stream, you can make a better rhythm effect by placing d kd kd
00:53:700 (288,289,290,291,292,293) - The beat does a ddddd here, imitate it. Remove 292 also.
00:54:916 (295,296,297,298) - ddd k ? Dunno what to put here, it sounds better to me.
00:55:727 (300,301,302,303,304) - Change 303 to d in order to obtain ddddk
00:58:362 (315,316) - ddk, else you're breaking your rhythm.
00:58:970 (318,319,320,321,322) - It's quite empty, d d d d ddddk, like the beat does.
01:00:591 (324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338) - Remove the entire stream, I don't see any reason to put that here, make a spinner from 01:00:591 - to 01:02:010 -
01:02:416 (340,341,342,343,344,345,346) - Same thing, i don't really know what to put here, maybe d k d ddd k, though it's repetitive :s
01:14:172 (410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418) - Hmmm.... ddddkdd, somehow easier to play, imo.
01:15:186 (419,420,421,422,423) - d ddk d, cooler with the next patterns.
01:17:618 (434,435,436,437,438,439,440,441,442,443) - - ddddk d d ddk, your actual pattern isn't really fitting to the song itself.
01:19:645 (446,447,448,449,450,451,452,453,454,455,456) - I would like to see k d d ddkdd d, since the song doesn't change, no need to put such a big stream.
01:21:166 - Add d ? There is a blank, and we can hear the beat.
01:24:510 (479) - k, a little better.
01:26:537 (491,492) - d d, like all the passages with the single beat I mentioned.
01:27:348 (495,496,497,498,499,500,501,502,503) - Hmm, awkward stream, ddddkdddd would be a great last stream, more playable and fitting.
I didn't find something wrong with the Muzukashii, i'm sorry <.<
That's all.