M4M
[General]
Some blanks of tags have two words spacing, you should set 1 spacing between words.
Add "未確認で進行形" to Tags better.
[Easy]
Well I don't agree with tick2 since it tends to miss notes for newbie.
Placement
00:45:224(1) It's ok but if you put 1/2 rhythm on Easy, you can put this note more easy to read, current looks a bit difficult imo.
01:12:596(3) Not reasonable placement, the flow from (2) looks odd I suppose. So put this note like this?
Rhythm
00:34:126(1) Not good rhythm since you don't cantch the downbeat, so pick the sound at 00:34:479 in beginning of note better. And 00:35:185, you can put a note here since here is a vocal and drum sound, so it's not reasonable to make a blank.
00:41:538(2,3) Again, you should pick the sound at 00:42:067 and 00:42:332, I know it's red line but heard strongly. e.g.)
Hit Sound
01:24:596(3) Add finish at end.
[Normal]
Rhythm
00:38:008(2,3) It's not bad rhythm, but to follow the vocal and music I suppose it would be more fitting to it.
Hit Sound
00:27:067(3) Add whistle here to follow the beginning of vocal.
00:51:420(1) Prefer finish than whistle to follow the instrumental.
01:18:244(4)^
01:06:773(3) Add finish here?
[Hard]
SV×1.7 looks a bit faster for Hard, and there are a lot of jumps, so I just suppose AR8 would be nice.
Placement
00:09:067(3) NC here to follow the downbeat.
00:15:773(2) Just reverse of the direction would be nice flow for playing.
00:26:714(1,1) These NC is really needed? I don't suppose it works well.
Rhythm
00:42:767(7) I suppose you can begin the 1/2 slider from here to follow the vocal, vocal sounds bigger than drums & music, so it would be better. e.g.)
Hit Sound
00:45:420(1) Delete whistle and add finish at reverse same as Insane.
01:06:773(3) Add finish?
[Insane]
Placement
00:07:126(2,3,4) This flow of movement looks a bit forced and not good I suppose, for now I don't have any idea of placement but you can replace better by your own.
00:15:067(2) The spacing from (1) looks a bit confused for playing since it looks same distance compared with normal spacing.So you can place this part like 00:17:185(4,1), it looks much better.
00:21:067(4) Stack not (1) but (2) (164:88) better to follow the end of slider at (3).
00:21:773(1) Maybe you can reverse the direction of slider better, just suggestion.
00:24:949(5) I don't like this overlap with (4), so move a bit away and bent this slider like this?
00:56:008(8,1) This jumping looks suddenly and really hard to read, maybe you can decrease spacing or replace placement better.
Rhythm
00:12:773(6,7) Swap these notes better to follow the vocal since 00:13:126 has a beginning of vocal "ta", it would fit to play much more.
00:45:244(6) I don't agree this 1/1 slider, it sounds really odd. You should pick the drum sound at 00:45:220.
Hit Sound
00:33:420(3,5) Add whistle at end to follow the instrumental.
00:38:808(5) Perfer finish than clap to follow the music.
01:06:596(4) Add finish at end?
Good luck.
[General]
Some blanks of tags have two words spacing, you should set 1 spacing between words.
Add "未確認で進行形" to Tags better.
[Easy]
Well I don't agree with tick2 since it tends to miss notes for newbie.
Placement
00:45:224(1) It's ok but if you put 1/2 rhythm on Easy, you can put this note more easy to read, current looks a bit difficult imo.
01:12:596(3) Not reasonable placement, the flow from (2) looks odd I suppose. So put this note like this?
Rhythm
00:34:126(1) Not good rhythm since you don't cantch the downbeat, so pick the sound at 00:34:479 in beginning of note better. And 00:35:185, you can put a note here since here is a vocal and drum sound, so it's not reasonable to make a blank.
00:41:538(2,3) Again, you should pick the sound at 00:42:067 and 00:42:332, I know it's red line but heard strongly. e.g.)
Hit Sound
01:24:596(3) Add finish at end.
[Normal]
Rhythm
00:38:008(2,3) It's not bad rhythm, but to follow the vocal and music I suppose it would be more fitting to it.
Hit Sound
00:27:067(3) Add whistle here to follow the beginning of vocal.
00:51:420(1) Prefer finish than whistle to follow the instrumental.
01:18:244(4)^
01:06:773(3) Add finish here?
[Hard]
SV×1.7 looks a bit faster for Hard, and there are a lot of jumps, so I just suppose AR8 would be nice.
Placement
00:09:067(3) NC here to follow the downbeat.
00:15:773(2) Just reverse of the direction would be nice flow for playing.
00:26:714(1,1) These NC is really needed? I don't suppose it works well.
Rhythm
00:42:767(7) I suppose you can begin the 1/2 slider from here to follow the vocal, vocal sounds bigger than drums & music, so it would be better. e.g.)
Hit Sound
00:45:420(1) Delete whistle and add finish at reverse same as Insane.
01:06:773(3) Add finish?
[Insane]
Placement
00:07:126(2,3,4) This flow of movement looks a bit forced and not good I suppose, for now I don't have any idea of placement but you can replace better by your own.
00:15:067(2) The spacing from (1) looks a bit confused for playing since it looks same distance compared with normal spacing.So you can place this part like 00:17:185(4,1), it looks much better.
00:21:067(4) Stack not (1) but (2) (164:88) better to follow the end of slider at (3).
00:21:773(1) Maybe you can reverse the direction of slider better, just suggestion.
00:24:949(5) I don't like this overlap with (4), so move a bit away and bent this slider like this?
00:56:008(8,1) This jumping looks suddenly and really hard to read, maybe you can decrease spacing or replace placement better.
Rhythm
00:12:773(6,7) Swap these notes better to follow the vocal since 00:13:126 has a beginning of vocal "ta", it would fit to play much more.
00:45:244(6) I don't agree this 1/1 slider, it sounds really odd. You should pick the drum sound at 00:45:220.
Hit Sound
00:33:420(3,5) Add whistle at end to follow the instrumental.
00:38:808(5) Perfer finish than clap to follow the music.
01:06:596(4) Add finish at end?
Good luck.