lZenxl wrote:

Ayoo Mod from Queue

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Italic mods may contradict with your mapping style, so change them if you truly want to have that change

[Oni]

00:25:865 (126) - k > d | I'm a bit worried about this note, it contradicts the kat pattern you have here since it starts 1/2 earlier than expected and it feels overemphasized since you are mapping outside of the original kat rhythm >> Changed
00:38:379 (196) - k > d | I feel that there's too many kats here compared to the sections similar to this, it feels a bit unbalanced >> Result of accounting for the vocals a little bit; I'll keep this as is for now.
01:02:722 (310,311,312) - Add finishes | According to your pattern, it feels that you missed out these as finishes
01:13:694 (375,376,377) - ^ >> Similiar issue as your suggestion for 00:13:008 of the Muzu; I don't really want to use too many finishes ><; Although I tried to make as much sense as possible doing so, I'll wait to hear more feedback about this.

[Muzu]

00:13:008 (35) - k > K | It feels that the music strongly emphasizes this note also, change this if you want. >> Since there's already a finish 2/1 later in the song, I'd rather not have another one right before; also I'd like to stay consistent with emphasizing the high synth notes with K. If others feel that the "jump!" should be emphasized more though, I'll consider this. Sorry! ;-;
01:02:722 (216,217) - Add finishes | Same as Oni, it feels underemphasized according to the pattern
01:13:693 (259,260,261,262) - ^ >> Refer to Oni

[Futsuu]

00:56:893 (105,106) - k,D > K,d | Since you are only using a finish on one vocal at this point, I suggest to have the finish on "Jump" vocal since it feels stronger than the "Yeah" vocal here >> Mainly keeping it as is for the sake of consistency with other diffs, as well as the other finisher placements in the chorus. I'll consider the change if others also bring it up.

[Kantan]

00:25:693 (31) - The kat here seems to be not emphasizing anything major, I suggest to move it left (<) by 1/2 so that it emphasizes the vocal
Same goes for these similar notes 00:28:436 (34) - ,00:31:179 (37) - .. etc. >> I was aiming for simplicity here to make the section different from 00:35:293~, when the background synth kicks in. I'll keep it as is for now!
00:56:893 (69,70) - k,D > K,d | Same reason as Futsuu >> Refer to Futsuu
Just a small suggestion : 01:20:893 - You might want to map this note in the music by moving some notes and adding notes since it feels very significant in the music and you might not want to miss this note out >> Will consider this. I'm a bit reluctant as there's already little difference in difficulty between Kantan and Futsuu, and I'll also have to add notes for spots like 00:13:693 and 00:19:179 if I take up on this suggestion.

No Other problems, very smooth kat rhythm for all charts, very good use of finishes >> Thank you

1. 00:13:008 (49) - change K
2. 00:56:551 ~ 00:56:808 I want 1/6 stream (this is not mod
3. 01:05:465 (326) - , 01:06:151 (331) - change D
   01:16:437 (391) - , 01:17:123 (396) - change D
   good

1. 00:01:865 , 00:02:551 , 00:03:236 , 00:04:608 , 00:05:293 , 00:05:979 , 00:07:351 , 00:08:722 , 00:10:093 , 00:11:465 add d , what do you mean ?
2. 00:13:008 (45) - change K
3. 00:34:093 (127) - change k
4. 01:20:036 add d
   01:20:379 add k

1. 00:11:979 ~ 00:12:665 change spinner
2. 00:46:265 (63) - change D

1. 00:11:979 ~ 00:12:665 change spinner

Cihyaa wrote:

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[general]
none

[Oni]

1. 00:13:008 (49) - change K >> OK
2. 00:56:551 ~ 00:56:808 I want 1/6 stream (this is not mod >> I might've used 1/6 had this difficulty been a bit harder overall
3. 01:05:465 (326) - , 01:06:151 (331) - change D >> I don't really hear anything that needs emphasizing here, so I'll keep it as is >< The K at 01:06:836 was for the high-pitched synth note.
   01:16:437 (391) - , 01:17:123 (396) - change D >> ^
   good >> Thanks! ありがとうございます！

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:01:865 , 00:02:551 , 00:03:236 , 00:04:608 , 00:05:293 , 00:05:979 , 00:07:351 , 00:08:722 , 00:10:093 , 00:11:465 add d , what do you mean ? >> For the very beginning I kept it simple because not a whole lot is going on; when the bass guitar kicks in at 00:06:151 I start accounting for it.
   最初は落ち着いてる雰囲気でシンプルに置きました。そして00:06:151からはベースが入るのでをれを考えてd加えてみました！
2. 00:13:008 (45) - change K >> Quite a few people seem to think a finisher here would be nice; added.
3. 00:34:093 (127) - change k >> Changed
4. 01:20:036 add d
   01:20:379 add k >> Keeping this as is for now since I do want to emphasize the "3, 2, 1, go!" part. Sorry!

[Futsuu]

1. 00:11:979 ~ 00:12:665 change spinner >> I'll consider this, although I'm leaning towards just having a gap here because the spinner would be too short and disorienting for beginners.
2. 00:46:265 (63) - change D >> Changed

[Kantan]

1. 00:11:979 ~ 00:12:665 change spinner >> Same as Futsuu, sorry! ><

good maps !
gogo ranked >> Thank ya!

tetsutaro wrote:

I am not sorry I am sorry for being late.

[Design]
I would choose to move down the background to show three faces. (Change in .osu manually to about -75) >> Will consider this.

[Notechart]
Perceived rating: 3★ Kantan / 5★ Futsuu / 5★ Muzukashii / 8★ Oni
<Muzukashii> is unpickable.
00:01:008~ - Suggests lean katsu-based opening. Refer to D's Adventure Note etc. >> For each difficulty I accounted for the vocals as well as the hand claps to make the section less dull to players. If the beginning was a bit simpler, I'd have been okay with a light kat-centered opening.
<Kantan> <Futsuu> 00:11:979 / 01:19:179 and similar - 3-beat drumroll >> I'd rather not have drumrolls for the easier diffs given that this song isn't exactly the slowest. Sorry! ><
<Kantan> Chorus / 00:57:236~ - Suggesting a more intuitive o_o_ooo_ instead of the current o_o_o_oo basic patterns >> The current patterns seem fine to me (accounting for both the vocals and the background trumpet-y sounds), but I'll consider this if others bring it up.
<Kantan> <Futsuu> 01:26:036 (1,1) - Bait-switch note after denden is very uncommon in general Anime Kantan/Futsuu >> While a lot of the time it probably isn't necessary, I see it from time to time when there's a note that really could use emphasizing (e.g. the very end of Love's Colorful precious life.) I feel that this song has the same sort of strong note at the end, which is why I left the big kat there for both the Kantan and Futsuu diffs. Kept it as is for now!
<Oni> Blatantly overmapped at places. e.g. 01:25:351 (447,448,449,450,451,452,453) is completely made up.
Here is an similarly-feeling Anime song's authentic Oni for reference about what's more suitable.

LET'S GO OUT 6★ authentic Oni

>> I tried to keep the 1/4 patterns as consistent and straightforward as possible, while still keeping a fair difficulty difference between this and the Muzukashii. The denser sections such as 01:07:522 and 01:19:865 have corresponding drum rhythms; 01:25:351 was for the buildup leading to the very end of the song. I'll consider toning down the patterns if others also feel that the diff is overmapped, but given that the patterns aren't very complex and the Muzukashii already contains various 1/2 patterns and spacings, I'd rather not make the Oni too much simpler.

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

Oni

00:14:722 (59) - k 00:15:065 (62) - d >> 00:14:722 (59) 보다 00:14:893 (60) 이 음이 더 높고, 00:15:065 (62) 의 경우 스네어 드럼을 따르는 차원에서 그대로 두겠습니다<

00:15:579 (64) - k 00:15:751 (65) - delete
혹은
00:15:579 (64,65) - kd >> 여기도 마찬가지로 드럼비트를 고려하고 있기에 00:15:751을 k로 두고 싶네요 >< 00:15:579의 경우 이전 트럼펫 음보다도 낮기에 d로 두어도 될 것 같습니다... 물론 kk로 두는 방법도 있겠지만 그러면 이 부분이 지나치게 강조될듯 해요

00:17:379 (75) - k추가 >> 추가했습니다!

00:20:379 (95,96) - k >> 수정했습니다

00:21:065 (99) - k 00:21:236 (100) - delete
혹은
00:21:065 (99,100) - kd >> 00:15:579와 동일한 이유로 그대로 두겠습니다... 죄송합니다

01:02:379 (309) - k
01:02:551 (310) - d
01:02:722 (311) - k

01:13:351 (374) - k
01:13:523 (375) - d
01:13:693 (376) - k >> 개인적으로 현재 패턴이 맘에 들기에 이 부분은 일단 보류하고 더 많은 분들의 의견을 들어 보도록 하겠습니다<

제가 오니만 많이 만들어서 무즈카시이나 다른것들은 감히 못건들겠네요 막 어려워질까봐.. >> 괜찮습니다 ㅎㅎ

Kurodragon wrote:

Dat name ._.

Kantan
00:21:579 (25) - Delete this and put...
00:21:236 - Don
00:21:579 - Kat >> Leaving this as is so that 00:18:836~ will be similar in structure to 00:13:351~. Sorry! (Also, the 1/1 I used at 00:18:493 was for the vocal note.)
00:38:722 (47,48,49) - kkd >> I think this section is fine as is because the vocal drops for 00:39:236, then rises a bit again for 00:39:751. It also mirrors the following phrase (00:40:779~00:42:493).
00:59:293 (74,75,76) - You can make it more easy
01:02:036 (78,79,80) - ^
01:04:779 (83,84,85) - ^
01:10:265 (92,93,94) - ^
01:13:008 (97,98,99) - ^
01:15:751 (102,103,104) - ^ >> I wanted to make the rhythms a bit more interesting here, because otherwise it'd be a string of nothing but 2/1 for an entire 20 seconds. Plus it's the highlight of the song so I felt that it could be slightly more difficult compared to other sections of the map! However, I'll try to think up a workaround if others also believe that the chorus is too hard for a Kantan.
01:26:036 (1,1) - This is too hard to Kantan >> I think this has been brought up by tetsutaro as well. I deleted the note at 01:27:408 and extended the denden to this point. I'd prefer to keep the last big kat for Futsuu and up, though.

Futsuu
00:45:236 (82) - Move to 00:45:065 - Futsuus are 1/1, Kantan 2/1 >> I tried to follow this general rule; however, I think that it'd actually be easier for players to follow the rhythm here if I just kept this note as is, because both the synth and the vocal hit their high point here. Sorry!
00:56:208 (103) - Delete this >> Similar thing here; since the notes are heavily emphasized, I felt that a simple 1/2 pattern would work nicely even for a Futsuu. I tried to use them in moderation though, and I think this is the only spot that has a string of three 1/2 notes, haha.

Muzukashii

1. 00:35:293 ~ 00:45:236 - i don't recommend the current patterns. you should make more simpler pattern in the same way as 00:24:322 ~ 00:33:922
   the bpm of this song is 175. that bpm is not slow. and current patterns have a complex rhythm for Kantan. these are really scary ;_;
2. 01:02:722 (80) - change to d? for the sake of uniformity. if you want a change of pattern, 01:05:122 (84) - change to k?
3. 01:13:693 (99) - same as above.

1. 00:33:236 (61) - => 00:33:065 - maybe move here? for fit the vocal sound.
2. 00:44:208 (80) - => 00:44:036 - same reason as above.
3. 01:05:122 (124) - => 01:06:493 - move here? plays/sounds better imo.
4. 01:16:093 (148) - => 01:17:465 - same reason as above.
5. 01:25:693 - how about add a k here? can be fit the snare drum.
   
   
6. very nice Futsuu :3c

1. 00:14:208 (39) - => 00:14:551 - move here? because 00:14:551 - this point has a relatively strong sound than 00:14:208 well, up to you.
2. 00:17:465 (52,53) - move to left side on 1/2. i mean 00:16:951 - dkdd here. it also up to you. to be able to emphasize this 00:17:636 when you create a blank here 00:17:636 .
3. 00:22:779 - add a d here if you accepted above suggestion.
4. 00:23:979 (79) - finisher? indeed, this point has a bit weak sound than 00:22:951 (75,77) - but, current pattern is not follow the flow well.
5. 00:45:065 (162) - change to k in the same way as 00:34:093 (118) - you will be able to emphasize these floor tom sound 00:45:408 (164,165,166) -
6. 01:19:179 (282) - no finisher. instead, 01:20:208 (285) - finisher here.

1. i feel the kinda high diff spread between Muzukashii and Oni.
   
   
2. 00:13:265 (51) - del. important sound doesnt exist here.
   00:20:465 (92) - same as above.
   01:22:179 (421) - same as above.
3. 00:16:693 (68) - 00:17:379 (72) - del. i think that its a bit excessive pattern.
   00:21:836 (98) - 00:22:522 (102) - same as above.
   01:23:893 (429) - same as above.
4. 00:35:465 (171) - del? maybe,unnecessary sound?
5. 00:38:636 (191) - del? a bit excessive sound to me.
6. 00:45:922 (229) - change to d. snare drum sound doesnt exist.
7. 01:19:179 (402) - no finisher. there is no important strong sound.

TKS wrote:

sorry for late ;___; >> modいただいただけで十分ですよ

[ Kantan]

1. 00:35:293 ~ 00:45:236 - i don't recommend the current patterns. you should make more simpler pattern in the same way as 00:24:322 ~ 00:33:922
   the bpm of this song is 175. that bpm is not slow. and current patterns have a complex rhythm for Kantan. these are really scary ;_; >> もっとシンプルにしました！
2. 01:02:722 (80) - change to d? for the sake of uniformity. if you want a change of pattern, 01:05:122 (84) - change to k? >> 00:57:236の場合はkが連続に出過ぎないよう、Dにしておいたんです。そして01:02:722のほうが00:59:979より音が高いので変化をあげたいですね。一旦キープします
3. 01:13:693 (99) - same as above. >> ^

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:33:236 (61) - => 00:33:065 - maybe move here? for fit the vocal sound.
2. 00:44:208 (80) - => 00:44:036 - same reason as above. >> 両方fixしました。
3. 01:05:122 (124) - => 01:06:493 - move here? plays/sounds better imo. >> vocalを考えてkに変えて移しました。
4. 01:16:093 (148) - => 01:17:465 - same reason as above. >> ^
5. 01:25:693 - how about add a k here? can be fit the snare drum. >> hmm... ふつう譜面でノートも多くないので、ここはsynthを強調したい気がします。とりあえず同じ部分の00:23:979にもスネアは抜きにしておいたので、01:25:693もそのままで良いと思います。すみません
   
6. very nice Futsuu :3c >> ありがとうございます！

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:14:208 (39) - => 00:14:551 - move here? because 00:14:551 - this point has a relatively strong sound than 00:14:208 well, up to you. >> ここはドラムを少しフォローしたいので一応そのままにします ><
2. 00:17:465 (52,53) - move to left side on 1/2. i mean 00:16:951 - dkdd here. it also up to you. to be able to emphasize this 00:17:636 when you create a blank here 00:17:636 . >> これもいいですね…修正しました！
3. 00:22:779 - add a d here if you accepted above suggestion. >> そうしました。01:25:865も同じく追加しました。
4. 00:23:979 (79) - finisher? indeed, this point has a bit weak sound than 00:22:951 (75,77) - but, current pattern is not follow the flow well. >> 個人的にはどうしても00:22:951 (75,77)と00:23:979 (79)の差が大きく感じてくるのでfinisherはどうかなぁと思います…　代わりに00:24:151にdを追加しました。これでベースもドラムももっとフォロー出来てflowも良くなると思いますけどどうでしょうか。
5. 00:45:065 (162) - change to k in the same way as 00:34:093 (118) - you will be able to emphasize these floor tom sound 00:45:408 (164,165,166) - >> そうですね！kにしました。
6. 01:19:179 (282) - no finisher. instead, 01:20:208 (285) - finisher here. >>トランペットの音は下がるみたいですが、やはりコーラスの最後ですし、vocalも重ねて出るので強調したいですね。そして他の難易度にもDにしておいたのでここはキープします。すみません

[ Oni]

1. i feel the kinda high diff spread between Muzukashii and Oni. >> TKさんの提案など考慮したおかげでOniのレベルをちょっと下げることが出来た気がします。
   
   
2. 00:13:265 (51) - del. important sound doesnt exist here.
   00:20:465 (92) - same as above.
   01:22:179 (421) - same as above.
3. 00:16:693 (68) - 00:17:379 (72) - del. i think that its a bit excessive pattern.
   00:21:836 (98) - 00:22:522 (102) - same as above.
   01:23:893 (429) - same as above. >> 似た部分は全部消しました！そして01:24:493との統一性のため00:22:779はkからdに変えました。
4. 00:35:465 (171) - del? maybe,unnecessary sound? >>そうしました。
5. 00:38:636 (191) - del? a bit excessive sound to me. >> ここは削除して、周りも全体的にシンプルな感じに変更しました。長めのトランペット音を考えて00:27:065辺りとは少し異なるパターンにしておきましたがどうでしょうか。
6. 00:45:922 (229) - change to d. snare drum sound doesnt exist. >> Muzuではdにしたのに結構ミスったんですね 修正しました！
7. 01:19:179 (402) - no finisher. there is no important strong sound. >> Muzuと同じです。すみません！

overall, quite nice stuff. at a later date, please call me for recheck. (*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)

TKS wrote:

on the Oni.
01:07:951 (338,339) - maybe delete these notes in the same way as 00:56:893 (274) -
i think that deleted in accordance with the "yay" is good.
indeed, this point has a drum roll sound. but if anything, i need a sense of unity. >> Sounds good; deleted!
Also deleted the d at 01:07:436 for a bit more emphasis for the "yay".
変更して01:07:436のdも削除しました!

TKS wrote:

good luck~