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Hiromi Satou - Guri Guri (TV Size)

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ztrot
osu! Alumni
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ztrot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 16, 2009 at 10:19:39 PM

Artist: Hiromi Satou
Title: Guri Guri (TV Size)
Source: Green Green
Tags: anime ztrot GreenGreen GuriGuri
BPM: 188.18
Filesize: 13818kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.66 stars, 70 notes)
  2. Hard (4.99 stars, 331 notes)
  3. Normal (4.49 stars, 202 notes)
Download: Hiromi Satou - Guri Guri (TV Size)
Download: Hiromi Satou - Guri Guri (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Green Green OP
Strong suggestive theme.
All mods and edits are up to date.
Skin is finished mostly a recolor.
Last edited by ztrot , edited 30 times in total.
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
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Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
I find no problems with your Hard so far; Let me know when other Diffs are done xD

Starred in the meantime
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
HIHI

Hard
00:13:22 (8) - new combo here or on next note, u pick :D
00:14:81 (13) - move down a bit, so it's aligned with ^
00:46:08 (1,2,3) - Nice!!!
00:51:18 (1,2,3) - same ^
01:04:099 - fix break


kk that's all ^^, u have some 1000 spinners in the map, i think there was 2, maybe fix the first one somehow, but the last one can stay imo since it's a Finish to the map, idk ^^ oh wait, moving the overall diff down 1 time will make em 2000 :D

*star
PicoLo
188 posts
Joined July 2009
PicoLo
~Star. ;)
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Timing is weird, I dunno

Hard
00:27:25 (5,6) - uh

also Easy difficulty

Download: Hiromi Satou - Guri Guri (TV Size) (ztrot) [Easy].osu
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
I'll star this now. Give me kudos.
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
[Easy]
00:30:78 (3) - 1/2 beat forward

[Normal]
00:31:09 (7) - 1/2 beat backwards

[Hard]
Fine :)


Oh yeah, you owe me cookies since I FC'd this with video on like you promised :U
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
The following are all suggestions, and opinions, please keep that in mind.

Is it just me or is the offset a little early?

[General/All]
I really don't see a point for the first section unless you like the pumping cookie on time >_>
01:06:47 (Timing Section) - Resnap this... (So picky, sorry... ._.)
(I wonder why when I click to resnap all notes it changes something, and asks me to save...?)

[Easy]
Nothing...

[Normal]
00:10:35 (1) - I personally find this annoying, it could be easily made into something better and more fun.
00:27:57 (4,5,6) - It was my instinct to hit in a clockwise pattern because of (1,2,3), maybe switch 5 and 6's placement?
00:48:95 (4) - New combo? (It would go with the vocals/beat better IMO)
00:49:27 (1) - If ^ remove new combo?
00:59:15 (4,5,6,7) - I just think this is a little mean for a [Normal]...
01:19:08 (1,2,3) - Not be so nazi, but move 1 grid 3 left to have under the fading slider ends? (Looks a little nicer.) (3) is hidden by the hit bursts! >_>

[Hard]
00:22:54 (2,3,4,5) - ._.' This is a little cruel...
00:23:66 (3,4) - ^
00:24:46 (7,8) - ^
00:25:57 (1,2) - ^
01:38:84 (Timing Section) - Why not on the end of the spinner? Unless you wanted it silent at that point or Kiai to end there? (btw, resnap ._.)

Hard is fun in general, the fast paced clicking! (Except for the cruel 1/4th hits!)
I think it deserves a star for that! ;)
Sushi
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Joined October 2008
Sushi
[Easy]
00:18:00 (2,1,2,3) - Not a perfect diamond, but no one will see that.

[Normal]
00:27:73 (5,6) - align these

[Hard]
00:22:54 (2,3,4,5) - what, that's not very legal, a spacing like that
00:23:66 (3,4,5) - tell me that was a mistake.
00:24:22 (6,7,8) - ^
00:25:57 (1,2,3) - ^
01:00:75 (1,2,5,6) - that messes up with the current symetry pattern, huh?

inb4 watzerearnakedgalsindisvidionotrankablelololxdxdxd

Green Green <3
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
[Easy]
00:53:73 (1) - I hate to mess this slider up, but could you fix the bottom anchor so that the 3rd and 9th ticks overlap? I remember getting yelled at for having ugly ticks, so.. orz
00:56:28 (2) - Same thing with the overlapping slider ticks please :3 (Anchor in the middle)

[Normal]
00:55:01 (5,6,7) - This is a little bit confusing since you have other patterns that go three in a row throughout the song
01:18:44 (2) - Not sure about this jump

[Hard]
I see nothing out of place :3
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
[Easy]
Personally, I feel that Slider tick rate should be 1. It sounds good and is easier for the noobs.

[Normal]
01:18:44 (2) - Kinda easy to get a slider break here, don't you think? Considering it's normal and all.

[Hard]
Sure is hard. Nothing that seems bad here. :D
Mystearica
Mystearica
[Easy]

tick rate a tad high?

00:12:74 (1,1) - this just sounds so delayed but..I don't see what's wrong with it even though I think it sounds really awkward ;-;
00:36:04 - add a circle here?
01:26:89 (1) - start at 01:26:57? or add a note on the "mae" perhaps.

[Normal]

00:24:86 (4) - remove this
00:29:34 (3,6) - maybe remove these too
01:06:17 - possibly add a circle here
01:29:44 - end your kiai time here? o.o it's just dragging on

[Hard]

Ok .-.
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old

Loogiesquared wrote:

I'll star this now. Give me kudos.
i was kidding, but ok.
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1

Loogiesquared wrote:

Loogiesquared wrote:

I'll star this now. Give me kudos.
i was kidding, but ok.
But I who actually had a few comments got none. It's a conspiracy, I tell ya!
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
If you kudosu me I'll eat your children.


xierbaliti
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xierbaliti
:) good map
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
01:16:69 - Add kiai burst.
WHISTLES

Normal:

00:10:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3) - Nice hitsounds.
00:25:33 (5) - New combo.
00:30:46 (5) - New combo.
00:33:01 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:33:33 (7) - New combo.
00:34:76 (5) - New combo.
00:36:51 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:75 (7) - New combo.
00:56:28 (9) - New combo.
00:56:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:01:70 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:05:85 (1,2) - Remove, extend break.
01:01:70 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Remove, extend break.
01:14:14 - THIS BREAK IS SILLY
01:17:96 (1) - Remove new combo.


Hard:

00:05:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:05:27 (6) - New combo.
00:15:45 (1) - Gay.
00:26:77 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:26:93 (8) - New combo.
00:27:91 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:28:38 (8) - New combo.
00:33:01 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:33:49 (9) - New combo.
00:38:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:59 (9) - New combo.
00:43:53 (9) - New combo.
00:44:17 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:53:41 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:53:73 (12) - New combo.
01:04:17 - NO.
01:34:38 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:34:54 (6) - New combo.
01:37:10 (5) - New combo.
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Timing: Fine. No problems here.

Italics are advice - that is, what I would do personally in that situation and are not explicit fixes required - more suggestions than anything else
Bold designates pressing issues that could potentially be preventing your map from being ranked or approved.
Underline designates observations and comments thereof.

[Hard]
00:00:64 (2) - Align midpoint with the mid of the previous slider - move it up one unit basically
00:03:19 (2) - Draw end point back to minimum possible distance
00:06:22 (5) - Draw third bezier point back 2 units and align end point to the min. possible distance
00:08:30 (2) - Same deal again - align midpoint with mid of the previous slider
00:12:74 (7) - Draw end back to min. possible distance
00:15:45 (1) - Holy shit the bezier map is weird here. Nice slider nevertheless. Draw the end point back to min. possible distance too
00:51:18 (1,2,3) - Top notch. Liking that pattern.
00:53:73 (3) - Draw end to min. possible distance
01:08:24 (4) - End to min. possible distance
01:15:41 (5) - Draw end to min. possible distance - results in perfect origin/end alignment
01:28:01 (7) - Draw end to min. possible distance
01:29:92 (4) - Align midpoint with previous slider's midpoint

[Normal]
00:15:45 (1) - Draw end to min. possible distance
01:10:63 (6) - Draw end to min. possible distance
01:26:57 (1) - End bezier point shift one unit to the left to align with origin

[Easy]
Tick rate should probably be one. Two looks weird.
00:56:28 (2) - Drop second bezier point by 1 unit and shift the third bezier point to the left by three units to align the ticks on the looping slider - it looks pretty :D

Interesting video. Nice comboburst. Deserves a star.
jericho2442
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jericho2442
nice song, nice map, LOL video :P

enjoy a star :)
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
[General]
Wouldn't it better if the third timing point was at 28,229, synchronizing with the 1st beat of the sequence instead?

It's odd, really, since I have a feeling the BPM is actually 188.2. I haven't tried it out, but maybe you'll get better results with that?

[Normal]
I have a feeling the spacing's a bit too cruel for a Normal, but that's just me. Well... it's also filled with 1/2s that may be a bit too fast for new players (but then again there's Easy so... nvm me)
01:18:44 (6) - woooh sudden jump

Hard is really fun to play, though.
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
Higher quality MP3 :3
BPM is 188.11
Download: GURI GURI (TV Size).rar


~OSB~
Add some SB to expand the maps to end after MV.

~Easy~
SliderTickRate: 2
00:34:60 (2) - move start 1/2 backward

~Normal~
No major issues.

~Hard~
No major issues.


+Star
ztrot
osu! Alumni
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Topic Starter
ztrot
Bpm Feels right to me :S
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
Hi Ztrot... orz I forgot...

General
1. Unused Hiromi Satou - Guri Guri (TV) Size (ztrot).osb file. Remove it.

HARD
00:15:45 (1) - Clap at end of slider (white tick)
00:57:56 (6) - Clap at end of slider ?
00:58:51 (1) - Clap
01:17:96 (1) - Clap
01:15:41 (5) - Clap at end of slider ?
01:38:37 (1) - Extend the spinner to 01:39:212 ? (yellow tick using 1/8)
01:25:94 (6) - Clap here instead at 7 ? ( For consistant with 00:19:60 (5,6) )

This diff is REALLY fun. ^ ^

NORMAL
Imo, there are a few quite confusing and hard beat placements for a Normal. (Hard is even easier to play... xD)

00:27:57 (4) - Remove clap ?

EASY
Good !

Bouncy~~ Good and fun map ! Star~ ^o^
Alace
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Alace
+2 overall diff in easy and normal (High BPM song) you may also -hp to reduce stars XD
I can`t time anything for now
but i play it fine
pretty nice mapset

<PS> i can`t tell 300 or 100 during playing all green XD
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Green Green map.

star. o_o
blissfulyoshi
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Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Easy:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:41:62 (3) - new combo for the end of the lyrics
00:42:25 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and place a new combo on 2 to show that 2 is the start of the lyrics
01:17:96 (3) - I think it is more consistent with the section before the spinner to add a new combo here

Normal:
SPOILER
The amount of clusters and back and forth movements in this map made it difficult for me to play this

Combo mod:
00:34:76 (1,3) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to be consistent with hard (swap new combo)
00:55:80 (8,1) - swap new combo

Hard:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:17:36 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:12:26 (6) and 00:14:81 (6)
01:27:21 (4) - new combo?
01:34:38 (1,3) - remove 1's new combo and a new combo to 3 to be consistent with 00:05:11 (4,1)
01:37:10 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 00:07:82 (1)

Nice map. Star.
yaya
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yaya
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
miccoliasms
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Joined April 2009
miccoliasms
:oops:
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Niice. I made you check the timing kudosu me >:3
Jarby
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Joined August 2008
Jarby
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Everything looks good~ (I mean everything)
Jarby
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Jarby
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