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Misawa Aki - Ashita no Sora [OsuMania]

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Sorarei
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Sorarei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 03, 2014 at 8:26:25 AM

Artist: Misawa Aki
Title: Ashita no Sora
Tags: naotyu- Setsurei Aki no Sora Fuyusora no Arupejio
BPM: 144
Filesize: 10153kb
Play Time: 04:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 7Key (2.59 stars, 1407 notes)
  2. Normal - 7Key (1.9 stars, 1033 notes)
Download: Misawa Aki - Ashita no Sora
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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You can read original novel ---- Forest of Phonautograph (Japanese)
Last edited by Sorarei , edited 39 times in total.
dalollypop
94 posts
Joined June 2013
dalollypop
EDIT: I'M AN IDIOT, IGNORE THIS ANSWER. I DID NOT READ YOUR POST CORRECTLY :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: so stupid me

I think the timing is

BPM: 144
offset: I think you've got it correct already

p.s i don't do this much so i might be wrong. just trying to help :)

GL with map
captin1
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Joined February 2011
captin1
posting cause i need more kds hue

SPOILER
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1526,833.333333333333,4,2,0,40,1,0
40876,833.333333333333,4,2,0,40,1,0
41709,833.333333333333,4,2,0,40,1,0
203375,833.333333333333,4,2,0,40,1,0
275041,882.352941176471,4,2,0,40,1,0
275923,1052.63157894737,4,2,0,40,1,0
276975,1100.91743119266,4,2,0,40,1,0
REDYUMiKA
485 posts
Joined August 2013
REDYUMiKA
I came here to translate the lyrics for wonderful SB~♥



Inside
[Aki Misawa - Ashita no Sora (三澤秋 - あしたの空)]
  • ときどき / 昔(むかし)を / 思(おも)い出(だ)すよ
    Tokidoki / mukashi wo / omoi dasuyo.
    Sometimes it reminds me of the olden days.

    言葉(ことば)に / できない / 気持(きも)ちに埋(う)もれて
    Kotoba ni / dekinai / kimochi ni umorete,
    I came near being fulfilled in words that cannot express,

    溺(おぼ)れてしまい / そうだったんだ
    oborete (shimai / sou) dattannda.
    and then being drowned.

    *行(い)きは / 深(ふか)く / ゆっくり歩(ある)いて *息(Breath)でも意味が通ります。
    Yuki wa / fukaku / yukkuri aruite,
    Think deeply, walk slowly on the way to go,

    空(そら)の / 先(さき)に / 明日(あした)があるんだ
    sora no / saki ni / ashita ga arunda.
    we have (or"there is") a future beyond the sky.

    ねえ.. / それだけで / いいんだ
    Ne / soredake de / iinda.
    I'm satisfied only that, you see...?

    ときどき / 思(おも)うよ
    Tokidoki / omouyo,
    Sometimes I believe,

    今(いま)の僕(ぼく)なら / 違(ちが)った道(みち)にも
    ima no boku nara / chigatta michi nimo,
    I would have been aware of what a better other life, myself.

    気付(きづ)いた / ようにと / 今更(いまさら)なこと
    kiduita / youni to / imasara na koto.
    But it is too late to regret that...

    そのたび / 思(おも)うよ / やり直(なお)せない / 時間(じかん)があるから
    Sonotabi / omouyo / yarinaosenai / jikan ga arukara.
    Every time I think, (that) we can never go back to the past.

    輝(かがや)く / 苦(にが)い / そんな当(あ)たり前(まえ)のこと
    Kagayaku / nigai / sonna atarimae no koto.
    That's why, we can live nobly, and feel much pain.

    ひとつ / ひとつ / 形(かたち)を失(なく)して
    Hitotsu / hitotsu / katachi wo nakushite,
    One by one, one by one, collapse the shape.

    消(き)えて / しまう / 愛(いと)おしものに
    kiete / shimau / itooshii mono ni,
    Day by day, day by day, the precious things disappear.

    願(ねが)う / 今(いま)を / 奇跡(きせき)と呼(よ)ぶんだ
    negau / ima wo / kiseki to yobunda,
    Crying, crying, I will pray for miracles to happen.

    ぜんぶ / ぜんぶ / 大事(だいじ)に抱(かか)えて
    zenbu / zenbu / daiji ni kakaete,
    All of them, all of them, I will keep them desperately.

    そう.. / それだけで / いいんだ
    Sou / soredake de / iinda.
    ah, I'm satisfied only that.

    Uh~ / Uh~

    *僕(ぼく)は / 深(ふか)く / ゆっくり歩(ある)いて
    Boku wa / fukaku / yukkuri aruite,
    Think deeply, walk slowly on the way to go,

    空(そら)の / 先(さき)に / 明日(あした)があるんだ
    sora no / saki ni / ashita ga arunda.
    we have (or"there is") a future beyond the sky.

    ねえ.. / それだけで / いいんだ
    Ne / soredake de / iinda.
    I'm satisfied only that, you see...?

    Ah~ / Ah~ (END)
[NOTE]
Don't forget that are included free translations cuz to sing this song by english.
I believe you like this, Good Luck. ;)
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei
ohh as i see in translation, this song have much "feel"
Setsurei
1,149 posts
Joined May 2012
Setsurei
actually I don't need to spend too much time to work on simple SB
because of laziness on alternating through the design and code window, I delayed too much huehue
btw, SB files inside the song folder
(I don't put them on folder, so it's the same directory as your .osu, BG, mp3 and stuffs [for .osb optimization])

I've checked through the map:
- no SB load above 4.00x (fading snow and lyrics are needed to reduce them, so please don't comment on why I fade it too early or what lol)
- the images are all rankable size
- codes are all used, no wasted code lines

for the text on white screen, let me know when you've come up with the words
no kds thx
osb code
[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"Akimisawa.jpg",0,0
Sprite,Background,Centre,"Akimisawa.jpg",320,240
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"Start.jpg",360,240
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 S,0,41709,68375,0.9
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG 2.jpg",320,240
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG 3.jpg",320,240
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG 3.jpg",320,240
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG 8.jpg",322,315
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 S,0,203375,,1.067
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG 9.jpg",320,240
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 M,0,209208,227541,320,400,320,300
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 F,0,226708,227541,1
Sprite,Background,Centre,"J-Lyrics.png",320,240
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 M,0,117542,120875,546,240
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 M,0,133375,135042,499,240,450,240
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 M,0,135042,140875,450,240
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 M,0,140875,141708,450,240,402,240
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 M,0,147542,148375,402,240,354,240
 F,0,147542,148375,0
 F,0,148375,148583,0,1
 M,0,148375,154208,354,240
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 M,0,154208,155042,354,240,305,240
 M,0,155042,160875,305,240
 M,0,160875,161708,305,240,257,240
 M,0,161708,201708,257,240
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 F,0,171708,201708,0
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 F,0,203375,209104,1
 M,0,203375,209208,209,240
 F,0,209104,209208,1,0
 M,0,209208,210041,209,240,162,240
 F,0,209208,210041,0
 F,0,210041,210145,0,1
 M,0,210041,215875,162,240
 F,0,210145,225875,1
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 M,0,216708,226708,113,240
 F,0,225875,226708,1,0
 M,0,226708,228375,113,240,63,240
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Akimisawa.png",320,240
 F,0,-973,-557,0,1
 S,0,-140,41709,0.8
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Start.png",360,240
 F,0,40876,41709,0,1
 S,0,41709,68375,0.9
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG 2.png",320,240
 S,0,80875,,1.174
 F,0,80875,134208,1
 M,0,80875,135042,320,180,320,350
 F,0,134208,134625,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG 3.png",320,240
 F,0,134208,135042,0,1
 S,0,135042,,0.8
 F,0,135042,148375,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG 3a.png",320,240
 S,0,147542,,0.8
 F,0,147542,148375,0,1
 F,0,148375,171708,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"s.png",320,240
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 F,0,135042,137542,0,1
 F,0,137542,145042,1
 F,0,145042,147542,1,0
 F,0,147542,148375,0
 F,0,148375,150875,0,1
 F,0,150875,170042,1
 F,0,170042,170875,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG 12.jpg",320,240
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 F,0,170875,171708,0,1
 M,0,170875,185042,320,500,320,0
 F,0,171708,185042,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG 10.jpg",320,240
 F,0,184208,185042,0,1
 S,0,184208,201708,1,1.5
 F,0,185042,201708,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG 8.png",322,315
 F,0,202958,203375,1
 S,0,203375,,1.067
 F,0,203375,210041,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"w.png",320,240
 F,0,67542,68375,0,1
 F,0,68375,80875,1
 F,0,80875,81708,1,0
 F,0,81708,201292,0
 F,0,201292,201708,0,1
 F,0,201708,202958,1
 F,0,202958,203375,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG 9.png",320,240
 F,0,209208,210041,0,1
 M,0,209208,227541,320,400,320,300
 F,0,210041,226708,1
 F,0,226708,227541,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG 7.jpg",320,240
 S,0,226708,,1.6
 F,0,226708,227541,0,1
 M,0,226708,266708,600,240,220,240
 F,0,227541,266708,1
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG 6.jpg",320,240
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 F,0,266708,284681,1
 F,0,284681,286883,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
Last edited by Setsurei , edited 1 time in total.
Sorarei
1,420 posts
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Topic Starter
Sorarei
contributor should been have kudos right ?
Setsurei
1,149 posts
Joined May 2012
Setsurei
SB makers are the same as GD mappers, so there's no need for kds (except if the SB is so "wow" you may give lol)
dosyeru
431 posts
Joined August 2010
dosyeru
misawa aki <3
Sorarei
1,420 posts
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Topic Starter
Sorarei

dosyeru wrote:

misawa aki <3
ohh yeah <3
Remillion Cross
522 posts
Joined October 2012
Remillion Cross
Hi Reikosaka o_o/
mod req via pm, sorry for late

[General]
i don't know if this map needs epilepsy warning, but AiMod tells it

[Normal]
*01:44:000 (104000|4) - delete
*02:35:875 - add circle in 7th column
*OD change to 5

[Hard]
*00:08:817 (8817|6) - move this 3rd column, maybe it will same as 00:09:234 (9234|3,9442|0) -
*01:21:708 - strong beat here, add another circle
*01:47:958 (107958|6) - the slider should be end at 01:50:250 -
*03:35:666 (215666|2) - move to 7th column
*03:37:750 (217750|6) - delete ( un-necessary pattern )
*03:47:125 - add a circle in 4th or 5th column ( listen the drum sound )

Good luck :3 dem it why i mod this when in the night saturday ;_; so much feels
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hi Reikosaka o_o/
mod req via pm, sorry for late

[General]
i don't know if this map needs epilepsy warning, but AiMod tells it i still don't know how this is work, i think SB doesn't have strobing. i will consider later

[Normal]
*01:44:000 (104000|4) - delete
*02:35:875 - add circle in 7th column
*OD change to 5

all fixed

[Hard]
*00:08:817 (8817|6) - move this 3rd column, maybe it will same as 00:09:234 (9234|3,9442|0) - i want this keep following stream. no fix
*01:21:708 - strong beat here, add another circle i think not, since i use hitsound test to this section
*01:47:958 (107958|6) - the slider should be end at 01:50:250 - fixed
*03:35:666 (215666|2) - move to 7th column keeping like reverse stream
*03:37:750 (217750|6) - delete ( un-necessary pattern ) it's necessary since the it have little tick beat
*03:47:125 - add a circle in 4th or 5th column ( listen the drum sound ) too small sound, since i only put note in biggest beat/main beat it's not consistent if i do

Good luck :3 dem it why i mod this when in the night saturday ;_; so much feels
thanks :D , yeah this song <3
Deep Sea
1,947 posts
Joined June 2013
Deep Sea
Hi dear Reika :3
mod ready

[Normal]
00:32:984 - add note to 4
00:35:484 - move to 4
00:45:459 - move to 4
00:45:667 - move to 2
00:45:875 - move to 6
00:50:875 - move to 2
04:40:002 - Suggesting : http://puu.sh/7FhEw.jpg

[Hard]
HP8 OD8

01:39:000 - move to 5
02:28:167 (148167|7) - move to 5
02:46:292 - move to 4

P.S all diff done perfectly

divine song,keep star :)
I hope my mod useful to you ;)
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi dear Reika :3
mod ready

[Normal]
00:32:984 - add note to 4 doesn't need to add note
00:35:484 - move to 4 no fix
00:45:459 - move to 4 no fix
00:45:667 - move to 2 no fix
00:45:875 - move to 6 no fix
00:50:875 - move to 2 fixed
04:40:002 - Suggesting : http://puu.sh/7FhEw.jpg i'm fit with this

[Hard]
HP8 OD8 it won't fit

01:39:000 - move to 5 fixed
02:28:167 (148167|7) - move to 5 no fix
02:46:292 - move to 4 no fix

P.S all diff done perfectly

divine song,keep star :)
I hope my mod useful to you ;)
thanks for mod :)
Last edited by Sorarei , edited 1 time in total.
imariL
370 posts
Joined February 2011
imariL
From my queue
Column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]

I highly recommend to set Normal and Hard each diff's OD over than 7, Don't allow under OD 7 without few holds.

[Normal]

02:08:375 (128375|4) - violin sound should be like this, but it's up to you fix or not example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1447323 pattern is random at here
02:21:292 (141292|0) - I prefer move to 4
02:40:458 ~ 02:41:500 - Starting minijacks at 02:40:875 is more fit with song example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1447300
03:07:542 (187542|6,187958|5,188375|3) - Ignored pitch relevancy too much, pitch is going up here
03:28:375 (208375|2,208375|0,209208|1,209208|3) - Ctrl+J
04:29:208 (269208|4,269625|5,270041|6) - pitch is going down here
04:31:083 (271083|5,271291|4,271500|2,271708|0) - Here should be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1447312

[Hard]

02:08:375 (128375|4) - Same reason with Normal diff
03:58:270 - beat missing?
04:23:375 ~ 04:26:708 - I really really want to Ctrl+H this part
04:33:375 (273375|0,273791|2,274208|4,274625|6) - ^

Where did you find this song? I really like this kind of song. But I think it would be more better with Easy+Normal mapset, not Normal+Hard. Anyway it's just my opinion. Also, Normal diff was AWESOME to me. Almost perfect.

Take my star, Good Luck!
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

Chocoliti wrote:

From my queue
Column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]

I highly recommend to set Normal and Hard each diff's OD over than 7, Don't allow under OD 7 without few holds.

[Normal]

02:08:375 (128375|4) - violin sound should be like this,violin does only 1 string i think but it's up to you fix or not example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1447323 pattern is random at here pattern does not random, it's fit when playing
02:21:292 (141292|0) - I prefer move to 4 mirrored from here 02:20:458 (140458|6,140667|4,140875|6) -
02:40:458 ~ 02:41:500 - Starting minijacks at 02:40:875 is more fit with song example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1447300 i think i'm already do that
03:07:542 (187542|6,187958|5,188375|3) - Ignored pitch relevancy too much, pitch is going up here mirrored
03:28:375 (208375|2,208375|0,209208|1,209208|3) - Ctrl+J fixed
04:29:208 (269208|4,269625|5,270041|6) - pitch is going down here i may do some arragement here following the piano
04:31:083 (271083|5,271291|4,271500|2,271708|0) - Here should be like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1447312 fixed

[Hard]

02:08:375 (128375|4) - Same reason with Normal diff violin does only 1 string i think
03:58:270 - beat missing? i think not, already trying use 25% playback
04:23:375 ~ 04:26:708 - I really really want to Ctrl+H this part okay if this you want, it doesn't problem for me
04:33:375 (273375|0,273791|2,274208|4,274625|6) - ^ i think this not

Where did you find this song? i have thousand song with various genre, include this style music and same artist. I really like this kind of song. But I think it would be more better with Easy+Normal mapset, not Normal+Hard. Anyway it's just my opinion. Also, Normal diff was AWESOME to me. Almost perfect.

Take my star, Good Luck!
thanks for mod :D
yoshilove
yoshilove
from modding queue~
[SB]
02:25:875 - 愛おしものに --> 愛おしいものに

Column 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Normal
[Normal]
00:24:025 (24025|5) - Add note to 6 (It is a very faint sound)
01:45:042 (105042|0,105042|2) - move to 2 4
01:51:708 (111708|2) - LN end 01:53:583
02:43:792 (163792|4) - remove note
02:49:417 (169417|6) - ^
03:06:500 (186500|5) - move to 5 (Because a pitch is different )

  • 03:09:000 (189000|4) - add note to 5
    03:09:417 (189417|5) - move to 4
03:11:708 (191708|4) - LN end 03:12:750

Hard
[Hard]
(add note : become a little more difficult.)
00:14:025 - Add note (to 2~3?)
00:24:025 - Add note (to 6~7?)
01:08:375 (68375|1) - remove note

  • 01:10:042 - add note
    01:11:708 - ^
    01:13:375 - ^
    01:14:208 - ^
    01:15:042 - ^
    01:16:708 - ^
    01:17:542 - ^
    01:18:375 - ^
01:20:875 - add note

  • 02:52:542 - add note
    02:54:208 - ^
    02:55:875 - ^
    02:57:542 - ^
    02:59:208 - ^
    03:00:875 - ^
04:19:208 - add note (to 6?)

  • 04:24:208 - add note
    04:25:875 - ^
  • 04:28:375 - add note
    04:30:041 - ^
    04:31:708 - ^
    04:32:541 - ^
    04:33:375 - ^
    04:35:041 - ^

nice song!
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

yoshilove wrote:

from modding queue~
[SB]
02:25:875 - 愛おしものに --> 愛おしいものに will fix

Column 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

Normal
[Normal]
00:24:025 (24025|5) - Add note to 6 (It is a very faint sound) i don't want triple note
01:45:042 (105042|0,105042|2) - move to 2 4 moved
01:51:708 (111708|2) - LN end 01:53:583 fixed
02:43:792 (163792|4) - remove note removed
02:49:417 (169417|6) - ^ there's small tick sound
03:06:500 (186500|5) - move to 5 (Because a pitch is different ) moved

  • 03:09:000 (189000|4) - add note to 5 the sound aren't enough to placed double
    03:09:417 (189417|5) - move to 4 no fix
03:11:708 (191708|4) - LN end 03:12:750 fixed

Hard
[Hard]
(add note : become a little more difficult.)
00:14:025 - Add note (to 2~3?) add note on 7th column
00:24:025 - Add note (to 6~7?) add note on 6th column
01:08:375 (68375|1) - remove note removed

  • 01:10:042 - add note added
    01:11:708 - ^ added
    01:13:375 - ^ added
    01:14:208 - ^ added
    01:15:042 - ^ added
    01:16:708 - ^ added
    01:17:542 - ^ added
    01:18:375 - ^ added

    it's fit so fix all adding note
01:20:875 - add note no fix

  • 02:52:542 - add note no fix
    02:54:208 - ^ no fix
    02:55:875 - ^ no fix
    02:57:542 - ^ no fix
    02:59:208 - ^ no fix
    03:00:875 - ^ no fix
04:19:208 - add note (to 6?) the sounds supposed to be pressed

  • 04:24:208 - add note no fix
    04:25:875 - ^ no fix
  • 04:28:375 - add note added
    04:30:041 - ^ added
    04:31:708 - ^ added
    04:32:541 - ^ added
    04:33:375 - ^ added
    04:35:041 - ^ added

nice song!
thanks for mod :)
arcwinolivirus
1,588 posts
Joined October 2012
arcwinolivirus
From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

Sorry for the late mod :?

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

Column:
      _ _ _ _ _ _ _
7K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:02:775 (2775|6) - move to 5. More comfortable on index finger with low pitch.
00:06:109 (6109|1) - move to 3. ^
00:09:442 (9442|0) - ^
00:13:192 (13192|1) - ^
00:16:109 (16109|1) - ^
00:18:817 (18817|0) - ^
00:41:292 (41292|5) - move to 4 since another instrument. and better at middle as opening to the start.
00:41:709 - add note to 7 for strong start and like 00:43:375 (43375|5,43375|6,45042|1,45042|2)
01:05:875 - add note to 4 for the kick-like sound and to fill emptiness.
01:06:709 - add note to 3 for the piano-sound and ^
01:07:958 (67958|0) - move to 5 different pitch.
01:08:375 - add note to 7 for chord-bass-like sound and start.
01:20:875 (80875|0) - move to 3 different instrument and pitch
01:21:500 (81500|6) - move to 5 ^
01:21:708 (81708|6) - move to 4 ^
01:21:708 - then add note to 6 for strong sound and start.
01:25:042 - add note to 1
01:35:042 - add note to 6
01:38:375 - add note to 2
01:44:208 - add note to 5
02:14:000 (134000|1) - remove no sound. no hithat.
02:20:875 - add note to 3
02:40:458 - add note to 3
02:45:875 - add note to 2
02:48:167 (168167|5) - move to 2
03:42:958 (222958|0) - move to 2 different pitch before the beat sounds.
04:15:458 - add note to 6. There is a beat sound to note for.
04:34:833 (274833|6) - move to 5



[Hard]
SPOILER
00:01:734 - add note to 5. There's a low pitch piano sound here.
00:05:067 - add note to 3. ^
00:15:067 - add note to 2
00:18:400 - add note to 5
00:41:084 (41084|4) - move to 3
01:08:375 - add note to 5 for start and like 01:10:042 (70042|1,70042|6)
01:20:875 (80875|6) - move to 3 and add note to 5. strong sound
01:21:500 (81500|0) - move to 5
01:21:708 - add note to 7 strong start.
01:54:833 (114833|3) - move to 5
02:24:625 (144625|6) - move to 5
02:42:542 - add note to 2 or 6 for the snare-like sound
02:48:375 - add note to 2
03:55:875 - add note to 5. 2-noted for snare-like sound
04:15:041 (255041|0) - move to 5
04:18:374 (258374|5) - move to 5
04:21:083 (261083|0) - move to 5

[Overall]
Wow cool relaxing song. That's Reiko for ya~ Thank you for requesting and Goodluck :)
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

Sorry for the late mod :?

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

Column:
      _ _ _ _ _ _ _
7K - |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

[Normal]
SPOILER
00:02:775 (2775|6) - move to 5. More comfortable on index finger with low pitch. fix
00:06:109 (6109|1) - move to 3. ^ fix
00:09:442 (9442|0) - ^ fix
00:13:192 (13192|1) - ^ fix
00:16:109 (16109|1) - ^ fix
00:18:817 (18817|0) - ^ fix
00:41:292 (41292|5) - move to 4 since another instrument. and better at middle as opening to the start. actually it have same sound with additional sound
00:41:709 - add note to 7 for strong start and like 00:43:375 (43375|5,43375|6,45042|1,45042|2) added
01:05:875 - add note to 4 for the kick-like sound and to fill emptiness. i'm only want to keep as guitar sound
01:06:709 - add note to 3 for the piano-sound and ^ i'm only want to keep as guitar sound
01:07:958 (67958|0) - move to 5 different pitch.moved to 2nd column
01:08:375 - add note to 7 for chord-bass-like sound and start. added
01:20:875 (80875|0) - move to 3 different instrument and pitch prefer like this, there's a drum sound too
01:21:500 (81500|6) - move to 5 ^ prefer like this, there's a drum sound too
01:21:708 (81708|6) - move to 4 ^ prefer like this, there's a drum sound too
01:21:708 - then add note to 6 for strong sound and start. added
01:25:042 - add note to 1 added
01:35:042 - add note to 6 added
01:38:375 - add note to 2 added
01:44:208 - add note to 5 keep
02:14:000 (134000|1) - remove no sound. no hithat. removed
02:20:875 - add note to 3 added
02:40:458 - add note to 3 added in 7th column
02:45:875 - add note to 2 added in 1st column
02:48:167 (168167|5) - move to 2 move to 7th column
03:42:958 (222958|0) - move to 2 different pitch before the beat sounds. moved
04:15:458 - add note to 6. There is a beat sound to note for. actually i'm follow J-guitar sound
04:34:833 (274833|6) - move to 5 moved



[Hard]
SPOILER
00:01:734 - add note to 5. There's a low pitch piano sound here. surely no sound
00:05:067 - add note to 3. ^ surely no sound
00:15:067 - add note to 2 surely no sound
00:18:400 - add note to 5 surely no sound
00:41:084 (41084|4) - move to 3 moved
01:08:375 - add note to 5 for start and like 01:10:042 (70042|1,70042|6) the sound just have little tick
01:20:875 (80875|6) - move to 3 and add note to 5. strong sound keep
01:21:500 (81500|0) - move to 5 keep
01:21:708 - add note to 7 strong start. keep
01:54:833 (114833|3) - move to 5 keep
02:24:625 (144625|6) - move to 5 keep
02:42:542 - add note to 2 or 6 for the snare-like sound i'm following violin sound
02:48:375 - add note to 2 keep
03:55:875 - add note to 5. 2-noted for snare-like sound added in 4th column
04:15:041 (255041|0) - move to 5 keep
04:18:374 (258374|5) - move to 5 moved
04:21:083 (261083|0) - move to 5 moved in 2nd column

[Overall]
Wow cool relaxing song. That's Reiko for ya~ Thank you for requesting and Goodluck :)
thanks for mod :)
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
4,418 posts
Joined April 2013
Akasha-
Aki Misawa - Ashita no Sora [ OsuMania Mod]

===oOo===

Mod by request of Reikosaka


[Generals]
Bug in Normal diff, make a post to fix this bug!
BPM: No problem
Offset: Okay
SB: Seems like 03:29:208 - 03:30:041 - is unrankable
03:46:708 - 03:47:541 -
Aimod: No problem
Nice song! I love beat after 04:26:708 -

Column | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

[ Normal]
00:01:942 (1942|5) - move to 7
00:02:775 (2775|4) - move to 6 and 00:02:775 (2775|5,3192|6) - Ctrl + J
00:05:275 (5275|0) - move to 3
00:22:567 (22567|1) - move to 1
00:22:775 (22775|4) - move to 4
00:23:192 (23192|4) - move to 6
00:31:525 (31525|5,33192|1) - move to 1 & 7
00:36:525 (36525|5) - move to 7
00:50:042 (50042|5) - move to 5
00:53:167 (53167|4) - move to 4
00:59:625 (59625|4,60458|1) - ^
01:00:667 - has a sound in here
01:05:042 (65042|1) - move to 3
01:52:958 (112958|6,112958|1) - why 2 notes
02:15:042 (135042|2) - move to 5
02:36:292 (156292|3) - move to 5
03:24:208 (204208|1) - move to 4
03:25:041 (205041|3) - move to 3
04:07:541 (247541|2) - move to 4

[ Hard]
00:11:942 (11942|5) - move to 4
00:48:792 (48792|3) - move to 5
01:21:917 (81917|3) - move to 3
01:50:667 (110667|3,111292|4) - Ctrl + J
01:52:958 (112958|5) - move to 3
02:30:458 (150458|2) - move to 4
02:46:708 (166708|6) - move to 6
03:26:291 (206291|4) - move to 6
03:58:791 (238791|3) - move to 5
04:09:208 - try this patterns http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1466791
04:27:541 (267541|0) - move to 4
04:30:041 (270041|2) - move to 2
04:40:277 (280277|6) - suggest end in 04:47:984 -
Nice song! Nice map, good job Reikosaka and take my xD
Setsurei
1,149 posts
Joined May 2012
Setsurei
SB still rankable, if you read the SB load on the editor that's a bug, please test it because the SB load counts perfectly there
(I counted the use of layers too so it's not above 4.0, because 5.0+ is unrankable)
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Aki Misawa - Ashita no Sora [ OsuMania Mod]

===oOo===

Mod by request of Reikosaka


[Generals]
Bug in Normal diff, make a post to fix this bug!
BPM: No problem
Offset: Okay
SB: Seems like 03:29:208 - 03:30:041 - is unrankable
03:46:708 - 03:47:541 -
Aimod: No problem
Nice song! I love beat after 04:26:708 -

Column | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |

[ Normal]
00:01:942 (1942|5) - move to 7 no fix
00:02:775 (2775|4) - move to 6 and 00:02:775 (2775|5,3192|6) - Ctrl + J no fix
00:05:275 (5275|0) - move to 3 no fix
00:22:567 (22567|1) - move to 1 no fix
00:22:775 (22775|4) - move to 4 no fix
00:23:192 (23192|4) - move to 6 no fix
00:31:525 (31525|5,33192|1) - move to 1 & 7 no fix
00:36:525 (36525|5) - move to 7 no fix
00:50:042 (50042|5) - move to 5 [fixed
00:53:167 (53167|4) - move to 4 no fix
00:59:625 (59625|4,60458|1) - ^ no fix
01:00:667 - has a sound in here 01:03:167 - yeah example like this, but i don't add it because i will increase difficult if i do
01:05:042 (65042|1) - move to 3 moved
01:52:958 (112958|6,112958|1) - why 2 notes have enough loud string
02:15:042 (135042|2) - move to 5 moved
02:36:292 (156292|3) - move to 5 no fix
03:24:208 (204208|1) - move to 4 no fix
03:25:041 (205041|3) - move to 3 no fix
04:07:541 (247541|2) - move to 4 no fix

[ Hard]
00:11:942 (11942|5) - move to 4 no fix
00:48:792 (48792|3) - move to 5 moved
01:21:917 (81917|3) - move to 3 no fix
01:50:667 (110667|3,111292|4) - Ctrl + J fixed
01:52:958 (112958|5) - move to 3 fixed
02:30:458 (150458|2) - move to 4 no fix
02:46:708 (166708|6) - move to 6 no fix
03:26:291 (206291|4) - move to 6 no fix
03:58:791 (238791|3) - move to 5 no fix
04:09:208 - try this patterns http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1466791 i don't fit in the middle section while playing
04:27:541 (267541|0) - move to 4 no fix
04:30:041 (270041|2) - move to 2 no fix
04:40:277 (280277|6) - suggest end in 04:47:984 - the sounds is too little for continue until there ._.
Nice song! Nice map, good job Reikosaka and take my xD
i'm sorry if i mostly decline your mod, it's somehow not fit to the pattern for me
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
YunoFanatic
IRC modded Reiko~!

SPOILER
17:11 YunoFanatic: reiko
17:11 YunoFanatic: open up
17:11 *YunoFanatic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/385677 Aki Misawa - Ashita no Sora [Normal]]
17:12 Reikosaka: okay
17:12 YunoFanatic: 01:11:708 (71708|0) - 
17:12 YunoFanatic: why wont you consider to add another note
17:12 YunoFanatic: i mean its not that bad to double because its too loud
17:13 YunoFanatic: 01:11:708 (71708|0,73375|5,74208|0,75042|6,76708|3,77542|5,78375|1) -  these notes need to be stronge
17:13 YunoFanatic: just to claridy so i wont put it in my mod
17:14 Reikosaka: i will consider
17:14 Reikosaka: and tested by 3 or 4 newbie people
17:14 Reikosaka: if they're fine then i will fix that
17:14 YunoFanatic: well ok then
17:15 Reikosaka: just put that in modding :)
17:16 YunoFanatic: added.
17:42 YunoFanatic: reiko
17:42 YunoFanatic: ill just irc this =w=
17:42 YunoFanatic: open up 
17:42 *YunoFanatic is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/385677 Aki Misawa - Ashita no Sora [Normal]]
17:42 YunoFanatic: please ^^
17:43 Reikosaka: okay
17:43 YunoFanatic: normal
17:43 YunoFanatic: 00:08:609 (8609|0) -  Stack this up with 00:08:192 (8192|4) -  because this is only the pattern that has stair on it. which is not suitable because you didnt use straight stair one.
17:44 YunoFanatic: 00:23:192 (23192|4,23192|1) -  move these notes to 1 and 7 to spread the pattern. because the main pattern here is 00:21:734 (21734|4,21942|6,22150|3,22567|1,22775|4) - 
17:44 YunoFanatic: what do you think?
17:45 Reikosaka: wait
17:46 Reikosaka: i don't get with your first issue
17:46 Reikosaka: also fix 2nd issue
17:46 YunoFanatic: well ok nvrmnd the 1st one
17:47 YunoFanatic: 00:33:192 (33192|1) -  move this to one to keep the consistancy of the pattern 00:31:942 (31942|1,32150|4,32359|6,32567|4,32775|1) - because only 00:32:775 (32775|1,33192|1) -  is stacked up and its quite odd dont you think
17:48 Reikosaka: well moved
17:48 YunoFanatic: 00:37:359 (37359|0) -  move to the middle? there's no note at there.
17:49 Reikosaka: i don't want to move this
17:49 YunoFanatic: 2:18:375 (138375|1) -  move this to 1 to balance the pattern cause the main pattern is 02:17:125 (137125|1,137333|3,137542|5,137958|2,138167|4) -  and make 02:16:708 (136708|0,136708|4) -  like 02:18:375 (138375|1,138375|6) -  so its much comfortable.
17:50 Reikosaka: rewrite please
17:50 YunoFanatic: Simply move 02:18:375 (138375|1) -  to 1 
17:51 Reikosaka: i don't want to move that :/
17:51 YunoFanatic: 02:32:958 (152958|5) -  rather than stack move this to 4 to continue the pattern. 
17:52 YunoFanatic: aaaand 02:47:958 (167958|5,168167|6,168375|5) -  make them like 02:48:792 (168792|1,169000|3,169208|1) -  
17:53 Reikosaka: 02:32:958 (152958|5,153375|0,153375|5,153792|0,154208|0,154208|4) - this look amazing
17:53 Reikosaka: also i don't want to do that :/
17:54 YunoFanatic: also have you considered 01:10:042 (70042|6,71708|0,73375|5,74208|0,75042|6) -  these notes need to be stronger cause the piano is loud and energetic. also 01:16:708 (76708|3,77542|5,78375|1) - 
17:54 Reikosaka: yeah i know, you told it before
17:54 Reikosaka: i will consider later. if i added double note which can be do well with newbie player i will fix all
17:55 YunoFanatic: ok lets go to hard
17:55 YunoFanatic: 00:09:859 (9859|2) - dont you want to move this to 2? 
17:55 YunoFanatic: for the patterns to get better
17:56 Reikosaka: end note and start note i do same pattern, see this -> 00:11:525 (11525|2,11525|5) - 
17:57 YunoFanatic: hmmm reiko 00:24:025 (24025|5) -  why did you add a note here? it doesnt have sound. or else 
17:57 YunoFanatic: add a green line and make it until 20%
17:57 YunoFanatic: cause the soft sample doesnt fit
17:58 Reikosaka: 00:24:025 (24025|5) - well it have sound but too little, deleted
17:59 YunoFanatic: 00:29:859 (29859|1) -  move to 3
17:59 YunoFanatic: i mean 4
17:59 YunoFanatic: to continue the pattern in this way its much better for the hands
18:00 Reikosaka: i don't want to move these one
18:01 YunoFanatic: 00:36:109 (36109|1) -  move to 3
18:01 YunoFanatic: its to far away
18:01 YunoFanatic: it doesnt fit the pattern
18:02 Reikosaka: moved
18:03 YunoFanatic: i think you forgot to hitsound these 00:51:084 (51084|1,51500|3) - 
18:03 Reikosaka: forget about hitsound
18:03 Reikosaka: lol i will add later
18:03 YunoFanatic: xD
18:03 YunoFanatic: 01:04:625 (64625|5) -  move to `5
18:04 YunoFanatic: to far away from the pattern
18:04 Reikosaka: i don't want to move it :| 
18:06 Reikosaka: hello o.o ?
18:06 YunoFanatic: lol
18:06 YunoFanatic: hard to find problems >W<
18:06 YunoFanatic: very good map you have here
18:07 YunoFanatic: 01:33:375 (93375|5) -  move to 7 to continue your pattern?
18:08 Reikosaka: 01:32:750 (92750|0,92958|6,93167|0) - looks awkward with this if i do that :/
18:08 YunoFanatic: hmmm then move it the same
18:09 YunoFanatic: http://puu.sh/7QDko.png
18:09 YunoFanatic: cause new stair pattern in 01:33:583 (93583|3,93792|0,93792|1,94000|2) - 
18:10 Reikosaka: that's what i talked about
18:10 Reikosaka: rapid 1 & 7 make awkward pattern i think >.<
18:11 YunoFanatic: well its only 4 notes lol but ok
18:15 YunoFanatic: 03:09:208 (189208|2) - 
18:15 YunoFanatic: move to 2
18:16 YunoFanatic: so it can have a pattern with 03:08:792 (188792|2) - 
18:16 Reikosaka: moved
18:16 YunoFanatic: 03:19:625 (199625|2) -  move to 4?
18:17 YunoFanatic: so it can match with03:19:208 (199208|2,199208|0) - 
18:18 Reikosaka: i think moved to 5 are best way
18:18 YunoFanatic: ok its good tou
18:19 YunoFanatic: 03:59:416 (239416|3) -  move to 3
18:19 YunoFanatic:  so it looks like this nice. http://puu.sh/7QDF1.png
18:20 YunoFanatic: 04:00:041 -  also i dont think this note is enough i mean the sound has loud i think you should add
18:20 Reikosaka: is this better http://puu.sh/7QDHW.jpg ?
18:21 Reikosaka: well you're right, added note
18:21 YunoFanatic: cool
18:22 YunoFanatic: 04:19:208-  add a ln until 04:19:624-
18:22 Reikosaka: rewrite
18:23 YunoFanatic: 04:19:208 (259208|4) -  add an ln until 04:19:624 (259624|4) - ?
18:23 YunoFanatic:  i just added a note so i cant write it easily
18:25 YunoFanatic: and thaaats all
18:25 Reikosaka: From 04:19:624 - until end i leave all to acoustis instrument
18:25 Reikosaka: and thank you very much yuno :D
18:26 Reikosaka: post that in the queue so i can kudos you
18:26 YunoFanatic: sorry >W< poor mod
18:26 Reikosaka: i never thinks everyone mod are poor
18:27 Reikosaka: i'm appreaciate it :D
18:28 YunoFanatic: Thanks!
18:29 YunoFanatic: lost the logs but posted a proof
Last edited by YunoFanatic , edited 2 times in total.
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei
well i don't know why you irc modding when i playing :/

anyway thanks for modding
Ryu Sei
2,879 posts
Joined October 2013
Ryu Sei
Nih lah, mod...
[General]
So, disnap 1/8 yah? Tapi ada bagian yang harus disnap 1/16 nih...
*OPSIONAL* Ubah warna BG di Color setting jadi coklat muda.
[Normal]
00:14:025 (14025|1) - Set suara jadi 10%
03:09:000 - Saran tambah LN 1/4
03:21:708 (201708|6) - Geser 1/16 beat ke depan
04:36:975 - Tambah 2 not
04:40:002 (280002|3,280071|2,280140|1,280208|0) - Balik urutan, geser 1 kolom ke kanan
[Hard]
00:14:025 (14025|6) - Set suara jadi 10%
01:02:333 (62333|5) - Ganti samplenya
03:21:708 (201708|5) - Geser 1/16 beat ke depan
03:52:541 (232541|4) - Mundurin end LN-nya ke 03:53:166 -
03:55:041 (235041|1) - Majuin end LN-nya ke 03:56:708 -
04:36:975 - Tambah 1 not
---
Secara keseluruhan polanya bagus, hanya ada beberapa hal kecil yang terlupakan ^_^
Sorarei
1,420 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Sorarei

Ryu Sei wrote:

Nih lah, mod...
[General]
So, disnap 1/8 yah? Tapi ada bagian yang harus disnap 1/16 nih... kalo kupikir itu note nya delay jadinya terlihat nggak pas sama timing
*OPSIONAL* Ubah warna BG di Color setting jadi coklat muda. well akan di coba
[Normal]
00:14:025 (14025|1) - Set suara jadi 10%
03:09:000 - Saran tambah LN 1/4 fixed
03:21:708 (201708|6) - Geser 1/16 beat ke depan i think it's 1/1
04:36:975 - Tambah 2 not added, well thanks reminding this
04:40:002 (280002|3,280071|2,280140|1,280208|0) - Balik urutan, geser 1 kolom ke kanan i feel not comfortable with that
[Hard]
00:14:025 (14025|6) - Set suara jadi 10%
01:02:333 (62333|5) - Ganti samplenya
03:21:708 (201708|5) - Geser 1/16 beat ke depan i think it's 1/1
03:52:541 (232541|4) - Mundurin end LN-nya ke 03:53:166 - fixed with adding more LN's
03:55:041 (235041|1) - Majuin end LN-nya ke 03:56:708 - not make it longer but adding more LN's
04:36:975 - Tambah 1 not added
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Secara keseluruhan polanya bagus, hanya ada beberapa hal kecil yang terlupakan ^_^
finally i can see indonesian modder, unanswered issue is fixed but later because all of them are about hitsounding.
well this did much help thanks anyway
PROGUY
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PROGUY
Try re-submitting in the Normal difficulty to try to rid of the update problem (or change something first before submitting).
Sorarei
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Topic Starter
Sorarei
already do that. still same

if you update the latest version , all stuff is same like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/156837 (pattern , time , metadata)

seems like i have 2 beatmaps which connected being one. i will wait till my duplicate beatmaps can be deleted
- Yuuto -
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Joined September 2013
- Yuuto -
Mod req from queue..

Coloumn : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[7K Normal]
Im sorry im skip this, i don't why its finish at 00:16:525 .. There's no longer note after it. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1479940 and im have checked that is las pending version , i wonder its only me or not. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1479949

[7K Hard]
00:14:025 (14025|6) - there's no sound, delete this.
00:30:692 - add note to 6
00:34:025 - add note to 7
00:39:859 (39859|6) - swap to hold end at 00:41:709
01:10:042 - im suggested you to add one more note, its so strong sound , so yeah. its HD diff after all.
01:11:708 - here's too ^
01:13:375 - ^
01:14:208 - ^
01:20:667 (80667|6,80875|6) - move them to 4 for release new stream.
01:48:583 - add note
01:54:208 - add note to 1
01:54:625 (114625|6) - move to 6
02:04:208 (124208|5) - move to 7
02:17:958 (137958|5,138167|6) - swap to normal note
02:19:208 (139208|3) - ^ then move to 6
02:31:292 (151292|4,151500|5) - swap to normal note

02:33:375 (153375|3) - swap to normal note then move to 6 and...
02:33:792 (153792|6,154000|4) - ctrl G and...
02:33:792 (153792|4) - swap this to hold note end at 02:34:208 and
02:34:000 (154000|6) - for comfortable play move this to 3. its all like this.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1479977

02:47:542 - add note to 3 or 7
02:49:625 (169625|2) - move this to 02:50:042
02:51:292 (171292|4) - move this to 02:50:875
02:51:708 - add note to 3
03:36:708 - add note for strong sound
03:38:375 - ^
03:40:041 - ^
03:41:708 - ^
03:53:166 (233166|5) - swap to normal note
03:53:166 (233166|5) - add note to 1 for strong sound
04:12:125 (252125|4) - delete, there's no strong sound, so yeah.
04:16:708 (256708|3) - swap to hold end at 04:17:124
04:36:712 (276712|5) - delete

Its the real story board. peacfully song, good map as well~ Good luck!
also sorry for my poor mod
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