- Miichan - wrote:

ALL FIXED. PLZ MOD

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[not94's Easy]
*Unherited timing points here. fixed but now there are many unsapped objects
*Check that all your objects distances are snapped accordingly.
00:03:681 (3) - NC fixed
00:06:940 (5) - ^ fixed
00:10:199 (7) - ^fixed
00:16:718 (6) - ^ instead of 00:17:370 (1) - .?
00:36:274 (6) - ^ ?
00:37:577 (1) - Add finish on all parts of this slider.that sounds a bit too overused
00:40:674 (3) - Add finish. ^
00:42:792 (2) - Add finish on all parts of this slider.^
00:45:400 (4) - NCfixed
00:50:614 (1,1) - Add finish on the head. Plus, that NC on 00:51:918 (1) - isn't necessary. fixed
00:55:829 (5,1) - Fix the blanket here.fixed
01:06:585 (3) - NCfixed
01:08:866 (1,2) - dd finish on the head.fixed
01:13:429 (1) - Should start on 01:14:081 instead, so it can emphasize the cymbal crash in the music with a finish on the head.fixed

gpq123 wrote:

[not94's Easy]

00:14:733 (5) - add new combo please To emphasize the vocal fixed
00:16:690 (6) - add finish please Add to emphasize the instrument will look better because.fixed
00:17:342 (1) - why add finish? awkward delete pleasefixed
00:21:744 (1) - I think the spinner to 00:24:516 - It is good to end. Think it is better to add the finish no because the spinner is following the vocals
00:44:244 (3) - slider end 00:44:733 - here fixed
00:47:994 - add finishfixed
01:01:690 (1) - same suggestionfixed

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01:03:646 - add finishfixed
01:19:951 (2) - slider end 01:20:603 - herefixed
01:21:255 (3) - slider end 01:21:581 - here and 01:21:907 - add noteyou're right, but I did something else

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Easy

1. 01:01:690 (1) - If you slow down your play back rate, you will hear that the reverse does not actually land on the blue tick! I would recommend you remove the reverse and just make it a normal slider. You should probably avoid mapping on blue ticks in an easy difficulty anyway...

Fixed

1. 00:03:693 (1) - Move to 264, 68?
2. 00:06:961 (1) - Use distance snap 1,0x, it's good not change the spacing
3. 00:14:733 (1) - this may confuse, increase the distance, move to 184, 292
4. 00:29:733 (3) - Move to 184, 100
5. 00:42:777 (2) - should not increase the slider velocity here and in the others, is so hard for a eazy diff
6. 00:40:168 (2,3,4) - Decrease distance
7. 00:54:353 (2,3) - Simplify the rhythm here, http://puu.sh/7oTP0.jpg
8. 01:03:646 (1) - Move to 252, 188
9. 01:05:277 (2) - Move to 328, 208
10. 01:06:581 - Try this rhythm http://puu.sh/7oUiQ.jpg

1. 00:14:081 (6) - Decrease the distance
2. 00:17:016 (1) - Suggestion:
   
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3. 00:33:646 (3) -
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4. 00:44:409 - Add a note?
5. 01:19:299 (1) -
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6. 01:20:603 (3,1,2) -
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1. Decrease 1 AR plz, i think it better for this song
2. 00:10:170 (1) - not cool increase the slider velocity here, it's better here 00:10:170 (1)
3. 00:12:451 (4,5) - Move to 432, 320?
4. 00:21:581 - Add a note here and 00:21:744 ?
5. 00:23:538 (3) - Add a normal hit in the head
6. 00:37:396 (3) - Move to 208, 112
7. 00:56:309 (2,3) - Overlap these better
8. 01:20:277 (4) - Move to 400, 232

Julini wrote:

Hi~ Here are some of my mods



Normal

00:27:125 remove finish because it doesn't really fit to that quiet point fixed
00:40:657 remove finishfixed
00:41:146 add finishfixed
00:43:755 ^ fixed
01:01:038 ^ fixed
01:01:690 remove the last reverse at the end of the slider NO?becoz there is a heavy beat
01:18:646 remove clap because it gets quiet in this point fixed

Love wrote:

Modding from my googlequeue.

[General]
The map is very monotone-sounding, which is against the guidelines. Try adding claps where you hear snares in the song itself to fix this problem.
Change the artist name to Minori Chihara.
The timing is wrong. The BPM should be 185 universal until the ending slow down. So change all of the 184 bpm timings to 185. Don't forget to click the box next to "Snap objects to new timing" and "Resnap slider lengths." Also snap 00:11:492's timing section and remove the timing section at 00:11:799.
Use this map for reference: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/120257 - Take the mp3, video and timing, just make sure you credit and link the map in the creator's notes.fixed

[Insane]
00:37:559 (1,1) - Why aren't these consistent with 00:42:777 (1)? You should change these to match what you have later on. FIXED
01:14:081 (4) - This shouldn't be a repeat slider. Try a spinner at 01:14:081 and then finish it at 01:15:059, removing the note placed there. I hv tried to do that.. but I feel a bit not good enough

Be careful. Close means close.

1. Missing Skin Files.
   hitcircleoverlay.png approachcircle.png reversearrow.png
2. Song title is Kyoukai no Kanata (and source)
3. Romanaised Artist is "Chihara Minori"
   Ranking Criteria wrote

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format
4. add tage "not94"
5. Why you use different combo colours? I think you should unify all diffs.
6. uncheck Widscreen Support.
7. You should use more hitsounds. Please refer to Vincent's diff hitsounds.
8. PreviewTime isn't snappend. 00:53:058 - or 00:53:221 - is better.

• 
  You shouldn't change DS and SV.This is Easy diff.
  HP+1 OD+1

1. 00:21:744 unsnapped inherited point.
2. 00:05:625 (2) - slider end isn't snapped
3. 00:08:254 (2) - Slider repeat and end isn't snapped.
4. 01:22:627 (4) - ^
5. 00:49:635 (1,1,1) - This NC is not needed.just ONE new Combo at 00:49:635 (1) -

• 
  00:27:138 (1) - ~ 00:51:917 (3) - Where is hitsounds?:o

1. 00:18:999 (3) - slider end isn't snapped
2. 00:08:254 (5) - ^
3. 01:22:622 (1,1) - remove sliderwhistle

1. 00:33:658 (1,2) - remove sliderwhistle
2. 00:34:963 (1) - ^
3. 01:04:633 (5) - ^
4. 01:06:589 (1,2,5) - ^
5. 01:11:643 (2,4,6) - ^
6. 00:09:848 (3) - slider end isn't snapped
7. 00:17:350 (2) - ^

1. 00:52:315 - unsnapped inherited point

keeeeeeko wrote:

Hi.
from my queue.
Quick mod.

Be careful. Close means close.

[General]

1. Missing Skin Files.
   hitcircleoverlay.png approachcircle.png reversearrow.png
2. Song title is Kyoukai no Kanata (and source)
3. Romanaised Artist is "Chihara Minori"
   Ranking Criteria wrote

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format
4. add tage "not94"
5. Why you use different combo colours? I think you should unify all diffs.
6. uncheck Widscreen Support.
7. You should use more hitsounds. Please refer to Vincent's diff hitsounds.
8. PreviewTime isn't snappend. 00:53:058 - or 00:53:221 - is better.

FIXED


[Normal]

• 
  00:27:138 (1) - ~ 00:51:917 (3) - Where is hitsounds?:o

1. 00:18:999 (3) - slider end isn't snapped I think its fine
2. 00:08:254 (5) - ^
3. 01:22:622 (1,1) - remove sliderwhistle

[Hard]

1. 00:33:658 (1,2) - remove sliderwhistle
2. 00:34:963 (1) - ^
3. 01:04:633 (5) - ^
4. 01:06:589 (1,2,5) - ^
5. 01:11:643 (2,4,6) - ^
6. 00:09:848 (3) - slider end isn't snapped I think its fine
7. 00:17:350 (2) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:52:315 - unsnapped inherited point

Good luck.

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

P4M mod here

[General]
This is a TV Size song, so it should usually go with some sort of video, considering this version is made for TV for some sort of anime
Love the Skin! done

[Normal]
General - You need to follow DS

00:06:309 (1) - Add clap hitsound fixed
00:12:302 - DS error, fix ASAPfixed
00:12:302 - DS error, fix ASAPfixed
00:13:437 - DS error, fix ASAPfixed
00:13:924 - DS error, fix ASAPfixed
00:18:999 (3) - Object's end not snapped I think its fine
00:31:050 (6,7) - For both of the sliders, make it the same length, but with no repeat fixed
00:47:515 - DS error, fix ASAP fixed
01:01:698 (2) - Replace with a spinner from the beginning of this slider to 01:03:002 good idea

[Hard]
This is the best diff out of the 3 I modded.

General - Move HP Drain to 6 fixed

00:50:776 (2,3) - Unnecessary overmapping fixed
00:51:428 (5,6) - Unnecessary overmapping fixed
01:05:937 (10) - Stack this right on the end of the previous slider why?

1. Remove all the commas on the tags. Tagging doesn't work that way here.

1. 00:01:085 (1,2) - Any reason why the spacing is inconsistent here? I think you can just move (1) a little further from (2).
2. 00:06:274 - Add a whistle? There's a clear piano sound here, so why not?
3. 00:17:350 (1,3) - Hmm, add claps here? They fit pretty well with the instruments.
4. 00:21:269 (3) - Move to (388,300) so the pattern here will be neater? Also, is the clap here an accident? It doesn't seem intentional, but if it is, remove the one on the head, at it doesn't fit with the song at all.
5. 00:32:354 - You should really add a circle with a finish here since it feels too empty without one.
6. 00:32:680 (1,2) - Uh, please use 1.0x distance spacing here, as a spacing change as drastic as this will definitely confuse typical Easy players.
7. 00:38:060 - There should be a finish too, to follow the cymbal.
8. 00:40:668 (3) - ^
9. 00:43:277 - ^
10. 00:45:396 (1) - ^
11. 00:46:048 (2) - Having a whistle here would be wonderful to follow the instruments.
12. 00:51:917 (2) - The NC isn't necessary, since this slider is still in the same stanza as 00:50:613 (1).
13. 00:50:613 (1) - Remove the finish? It just doesn't fit.
14. 00:54:199 (2) - Add a clap to make sure the hitsounding is consistent in this diff.
15. 00:58:764 - ^
16. 01:01:046 (6) - Add a finish to follow the cymbal too?
17. 01:02:187 - ^
18. 01:03:002 (2) - Remove the clap? It feels redundant and also conflicts with the one at 01:02:676.
19. 01:05:285 - Add a clap? Same reason as 00:54:199 (2).
20. 01:05:937 - ^
21. 01:06:589 - ^
22. 01:14:088 - Try to add a finish here?
23. 01:15:066 - Oh, and add a clap here too?

1. 00:01:085 - 00:10:822 - Remove all claps here since they don't fit the instruments at this part, please. Then try to use another hitsounding pattern; for example, add a whistle every first and third white tick of every stanza? The whistles should go along pretty well with the song.
2. 00:13:437 - Remove the clap here, then add a clap at 00:13:113 (4) and 00:13:762 so the hitsounding here will be more consistent?
3. 00:17:350 - 00:18:999 - Add claps every two white ticks? Same reason as the whistles at 00:01:085 - 00:10:822.
4. 00:19:639 (1,3) - The whistles aren't necessary, I think... I suppose you should just remove them.
5. 00:21:595 - Add a clap?
6. 00:27:790 (2) - Move this to (460,176)? It looks neater, IMO.
7. 00:31:050 (6,7) - Don't you think these sliders are too close to each other? Try moving (7) to (224,108) maybe? (You'll have to fix the spacing error that results from this, though!)
8. 00:38:060 - Add a finish since there's an audible cymbal sound? Feels empty to leave it unhitsounded.
9. 00:40:668 - ^
10. 00:43:277 - ^
11. 00:45:396 - ^
12. 00:48:004 - ^
13. 00:54:525 (3) - Move the middle node to (48,296) and the one on the tail to (-4,272)? Looks tidier this way.
14. 01:03:655 (1) - Make it look like this for a better flow, and again, to make it look tidier?
15. 01:08:871 - Add a finish to be consistent with 01:09:849?
16. 01:10:175 - Remove the clap here since it's empty here in the song?
17. 01:14:088 (2) - Try to make this symmetrical by playing with the nodes? It doesn't look appealing the way it is currently...
18. 01:21:587 (1) - Remove the whistle? It conflicts with the other whistles around it.
19. 01:22:997 - Add a whistle to follow the piano?

1. The spacing looks pretty inconsistent... I'd say to only use up to three spacing values to be used consistently whenever you're not making a jump. It looks pretty messy as is. And the overall placement does look kinda unstructured. Try to make them look more appealing.
2. 00:01:085 - 00:10:822 - Same as Normal, but using the default Soft sampleset.
3. 00:37:571 (4) - NC this since the song's rhythm "resets" (I don't really have any better word for this, but I hope you get what I meant) here?
4. 00:41:157 - Add a finish to be consistent with 00:38:549 (3)?
5. 00:42:788 (6,1) - Swap NC? I think the combo pattern is more correct this way.
6. 00:45:396 - Add a finish too, to follow that loud cymbal sound?
7. 00:48:004 - ^
8. 01:01:046 (4) - Add a finish? It should be obvious why after listening to the song here!
9. 01:03:002 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing consistent so it won't be confusing?
10. 01:03:655 - Add a finish?
11. 01:05:611 (9,10) - I understand why are you making this kind of rhythm, but it's really not recommended since it's not accurately following the song at all. I suggest to simply use a 1/1 slider.
12. 01:09:360 (4) - Move to (488,312) so 01:08:871 (1,2,3,4) will form a straight line? Looks neater like that, IMO.
13. 01:09:849 (1,2,3,4) - Also make this a straight line too?
14. 01:14:088 (6) - It's also not recommended to use a slider with multiple repeats since it can be really confusing to players because they don't know when will the slider ends. Just split this into a few sliders and/or circles.
15. 01:20:283 - Add a whistle here to follow the piano?
16. 01:21:261 (1) - There is nothing notable enough on the repeat for a whistle to be used on it, so remove it and add one at 01:21:261 and 01:21:913 instead?
17. 01:22:997 - Again, add a whistle here to follow the piano?

1. 00:01:085 - 00:10:822 - Same as Normal and Hard. And I just noticed something... Why is the sample usage very different between difficulties?
2. 00:05:949 (1) - Remove the NC? There is no need of an NC here, really.
3. 00:07:606 (4) - Move this to (272,240) so it'll look neater here?
4. 00:14:735 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Uh, the music doesn't support these twelve consecutive claps, which makes them sound very, VERY annoying (objectively of course). The best start here would be to remove all of them.
5. 00:22:573 (5,6) - Ctrl+G for a better flow?
6. 00:26:485 (3,4) - ^
7. 00:31:702 (5) - Use an NC to indicate that this slider is slower than the usual ones?
8. 00:37:571 - Add a finish?
9. 00:41:157 (2) - ^
10. 00:42:788 (9,1) - Swap NC so the combo pattern will be consistent like the previous two combos before them?
11. 00:51:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Uh, remove all the hitsounds here (except the finish on 00:51:917 (1)), then add a clap on 00:52:243 (5), a whistle on 00:52:651 (3), and another clap on 00:52:895 (6)? The current hitsounding is... kinda similar to 00:14:735 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) in terms of quality, if I have to be blunt (sorry, couldn't find a better wording lol). A simpler hitsounding would do better.
12. 01:09:686 (1) - You shouldn't map an empty part of the song like this one because it'd be confusing. And NOT silencing it, as it'll only lead to extreme awkwardness and confusion in the players' side. Just remove this, please.
13. 01:14:088 - Add a finish? I think it fits with the song...
14. 01:14:088 (4,1) - Swap NC? It follows the music's rhythm more correctly this way.
15. 01:21:913 - Whistle to follow the piano?
16. 01:22:622 - 01:23:444 - ^ (Everything in this range, I mean.)

1. 00:01:085 - 00:10:822 - While adding a whistle only once every stanza is relatively correct, many piano notes here are stronger on the third white ticks. I suggest to add the whistles there too, not just the first white ticks (at 00:01:733 (2) and 00:03:030 (5), for example).
2. 00:17:350 - I'd say to use the S:C2 clap here (or maybe just try to play with the S:C2 sample in the entire diff). It fits pretty well with the instrument.
3. 00:17:021 (2,3) - These objects are too close to each other, making them feel weird to play. Consider giving more space?
4. 00:21:921 (3) - Apply NC here since the music's rhythm "resets" (?) and starts to become stronger here?
5. 00:29:094 (1,2,3) - What's with the inconsistency in spacing? Value-wise, they are consistent, but that's because the spacing calculation becomes different when you're changing the slider velocity. Try to make the spacing between them visually equal. This pattern will look neater that way.
6. 00:30:398 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 00:29:420 (3,4) - Make the spacing between them bigger (maybe 1.8x or something) so they'll be more comfortable to play?
8. 00:45:396 - Add a finish here? I think it's obvious why.
9. 00:50:613 (4,6) - Add NCs here since they're the start of entirely different patterns? Also, add a finish on (4)?
10. 00:51:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same case as 00:51:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) in Miichan's Insane diff.
11. 01:01:046 - Add a finish? The music here really calls for it, IMO.
12. 01:02:187 - ^
13. 01:03:655 (1) - Drag this one grid down so the spacing at 01:03:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) will be consistent?
14. 01:08:382 - Remove the finish since there's nothing that sounds like it in the song?
15. 01:08:382 (1,2) - Swap NC because the music's rhythm only "resets" when (2) appears? I personally think that they shouldn't be like this on the first place, as the symmetry here implies that (1) is on the same stanza as (2), while it isn't really the case. Just try to only integrate (I hope you know what I'm talking about...) (1) into the 01:06:589 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) combo, and (2) only with 01:09:360 (3,4,5,6).
16. 01:19:957 (2,4) - Try to make something like this? It looks tidier and it'll make this part look nicer.
17. 01:20:283 (3) - Move this to (96,144) so the spacing will be more consistent and thus the pattern here will look neater? Also, add a whistle here and remove the one at 01:20:609 because the piano on the tick where this circle is... is stronger?
18. 01:21:261 (5) - Add a whistle here too since the piano is pretty audible?

615915887 wrote:

妈呀都会中文，我该用什么语言mod

1081,324.324324324324,4,2,0,60,1,0
10162,329.67032967033,4,2,0,70,1,0
11480,326.086956521739,4,2,0,70,1,0
21925,326.033798837146,4,2,0,35,1,0
81915,357.142857142857,4,2,0,45,1,0
82986,447.761194029851,4,2,0,30,1,0
83433,571.428571428571,4,2,0,30,1,0
84575,895.522388059701,4,2,0,30,1,0

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IamKwaN wrote:

When your map is ready to be modded, poke me in game please!

Caffe_[Latte] wrote:

:(

Why did you give up this?

[ Joey ] wrote:

If you need someone to make a hard GD, I could give it a shot?