Hi.
Modding as requested a while ago.
[General]
Timing is off. Try this:
1. Offset: 1,081ms BPM: 185.00
2. Offset: 10,162ms BPM: 182.00
3. Offset: 11,480ms BPM: 184.00
4. Offset: 21,925ms BPM: 184.03
5. Offset: 81,915ms BPM: 168.00
6. Offset: 82,986ms BPM: 134.00
7. Offset: 83,433ms BPM: 105.00
8. Offset: 84,575ms BPM: 67.00
1081,324.324324324324,4,2,0,60,1,0
10162,329.67032967033,4,2,0,70,1,0
11480,326.086956521739,4,2,0,70,1,0
21925,326.033798837146,4,2,0,35,1,0
81915,357.142857142857,4,2,0,45,1,0
82986,447.761194029851,4,2,0,30,1,0
83433,571.428571428571,4,2,0,30,1,0
84575,895.522388059701,4,2,0,30,1,0
It may be off a few ms but it'd be more accurate. Or you could take it from popner's mapset if you're using the same mp3. Make sure to make it consistent in all diffs.
Make sure tags are consistent in all diffs.
[Easy]
00:01:085 (1,2) - Maybe fix spacing?
00:03:679 (1) - This would look better blanketing 00:03:030 (2).
00:05:625 (2,1) - Maybe fix spacing
00:06:922 (1,2) - This flow is a bit ankward due the peak it forms, make something smoother, not exactly like this, but an idea of how it could be, this would require to fix the placement of other objects.
00:11:800 (1,2) - Improve the blanket here
00:13:430 (4,1) - Fix the spacing for these ones, it's a bit hard to tell they're 1 beat apart each other.
00:32:343 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo is a bit buffed up in difficulty in comparison with the previous one, given the rhythm in the music is quite similar in bot parts, it'd be better to use a rhythm similar as in the previous combo.
00:41:148 (4,1) - This overlap looks very ugly :c Move (4) down, around x:216 y:252
00:47:343 (4) - Move the reverse arrow a bit to the left, it's covered by the hitburst of 00:46:039 (2) for a considerable time.
00:51:909 (2) - This slider matches better the vocals ending in 00:52:561.
00:54:517 (4,5) - Improve blanket.
00:58:756 (3) - Maybe put NC?
01:01:040 (6) - Move this around x:156 y:200 to improve blanket.
01:05:279 (2) - Move the tail a bit to the right so the blanket looks better.
01:22:607 (1,2) - I highly suggest you to use a slider here, the timing change will trick beginners and they'll likely hit these in a very inaccurate way.
[Normal]
00:01:732 (2) - Put whistle in the end.
00:04:327 (5) - Put whistle in the end, not in the reverse.
00:05:624 (7) - Maybe put whistle.
00:11:800 (1) - Remove NC.
00:14:083 (6) - Put NC and remove it from 00:14:735 (1).
00:19:300 - I noticed this diff lacks of 1/2 rhythm and this spot would be nice to put some, this would also make a nice spread with Easy which introduces a simpler version of this rhythm. Do something like any of the suggestions below:
00:34:952 (1) - Maybe remove NC.
00:46:691 (1) - Remove NC.
01:00:387 (1) - Remove NC here too, also you could remove the reverse and begin the spinner in 01:01:039, which feels way better.
01:08:865 (1,2) - Do a rhythm similar as the one I suggested in 00:19:300, try to avoid this short sliders with more than 1 repeat.
01:15:061 (1) - I'd suggest to put a circle here and begin this spinner in 01:15:224, it'd make more sense with vocals.
01:20:604 (3) - Remove the repeat and put a circle there? It'd fit better with vocals.
01:21:583 (1) - Remove NC.
01:23:475 (1) - Remove NC.
[Insane]
AR 8 fits better with the map, imo.
00:09:841 (3) - This note would play better begin stacked in 00:10:170 (4).
00:11:148 (1) - Remove NC?
00:16:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd suggest you to use a pentagon shape (not star) for these, the flow is pretty uncomfy for (4,5)
00:19:789 (4,5) - Try to move this note closer, the jumps feels a bit bad here as there's no big emphasis in the music, added to the drastic decrease in spacing for the next note.
00:20:930 (1,2) - The NC should be in (2).
00:21:420 (3,4) - I'd reverse this (Ctrl+G), flows better.
00:23:050 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - All these should be in the same combo.
00:25:822 (5,1) - The NC should be in (5).
00:24:517 - 00:26:637 - To be honest, I feel this plays a bit ankward due the combos being placed wrong, but I'd suggest you to change a bit the placement here after you made the combo changes, it looks like you only made patterns and put NC for each one, I may be wrong on this though.
00:29:090 - 00:45:387 - I'd suggest you to increase the slider velocity here to 1.0x, it feels a bit ankward being fast between circles and slowing down drastically on the sliders.
00:35:034 (2) - I'd suggest to remove this, this triple is overmapped imo.
00:35:686 (2,4) - And these too.
00:56:311 (2,3,4,5,6) - I suggest you to polish this star shape and make it more regular.
00:57:126 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1/2 sliders instead these 3/4 sliders, they compliment the song way better.
01:00:224 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - This feels a bit unconfortable as the biggest jump should be in (6,1) and not in (5,6), it'd be better to close the V shape considerably and reverse some circles, like here. Note that this is not perfect, is just a guide of how could you do it.
01:01:854 (1) - Remove NC.
01:01:854 (1,2) - These notes would play better as a 1/2 slider for vocals.
01:02:180 (1) - The rhythm here is wrong, as the 1/4 stream should begin in 01:02:669, try this rhythm instead
01:03:485 (1) - Use two circles and make a jump between them, hitting a circle in 01:03:648, is better as the vocals are stronger here.
01:05:278 (4) - Move this down and much closer to (5), this big jump doesn't fit at all.
01:08:376 (10) - Remove the slowdown here, there's nothing that helps to foresee this one, so this may be taken as a 1/2 slider instead a 1/1.
01:13:267 (10) - Move this around x:320 y:216, the shape for 01:12:778 (7,8,9,10) would look better and cleaner.
01:14:083 (1) - This slider doesn't fit at all with the song. Make a long slider or map on the drums.
01:22:623 (1,2) - I highly suggest to use a slider here, the timing change makes this part to hit accurately.
01:24:620 (1) - It'd make more sense to remove this and begin the spinner here.
[Vincent's Insane]
AR 8 fits better with the map, imo.
00:01:085 (1) - Maybe remove NC.
00:20:943 (5,1) - This is kinda misleading, at first glance it may be taken as a 1/2 spacing instead 1/1, so it'd be better to move this away.
00:24:040 (5,6,1) - The jump should be in (6,1) and not in (5,6).
00:24:529 - There should be something to hit here, so using 00:24:366 (1,2) the circle first and then the slider would play better imo.
00:37:571 (1,2) - Use 1/1 sliders, the compliment the song better, as you have it now you're ignoring the drums in 00:37:897 and 00:38:386.
00:40:179 (1,2) - ^
00:42:788 (1,2) - ^
00:45:070 (5) - Use a 1/2 slider here, similar reason as above.
01:24:620 (1) - It'd make more sense to remove this and begin the spinner here.
That'd be all from my part, I wanted to ask if you are making hard, but I already saw it's in WIP, good luck.