1. Easy (2.49 stars, 96 notes)
2. Hard (4.93 stars, 208 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 313 notes)
4. Normal (4.28 stars, 138 notes)

Hope you enjoy... >~<

by me
by me
by me
by me

Thank you Kodora for teaching me how to use whistles

mp3, video, BG taken from Fycho's map

Feverie wrote:

[Easy]

00:44:161 (3,4,1,2) - You may want to check the overlap on 3 and 2 Distance snap does not allow me to do so
01:19:786 (1) - Remove the Curve (Make it Straight) Fixed

[Normal]

00:13:036 (3) - Remove the curve (Make it Straight) Not fixed
00:19:786 (1,2,1) - Try to make the first new combo end where the second New combo starts Not fixed

SPOILER

01:09:286 (1,2) - Make these Slider Straight Fixed
01:25:411 (3,4,5) - Slight overlap with 3 + 5 Fixed

[Hard]

00:19:036 (6,7) - Try making the Slider go at the same angle Fixed
00:46:786 (1,2) - Try to Make it overlap like this Not Fixed

SPOILER

Good Luck. Hope this helped.
GL

Winek wrote:

Hello! This is my mod you requested.

Link : Mod here!
Sorry, I know my mod is kinda short. Colors represent the difficulty, you sould know what I mean.

If you want you can also answer in "Your Answer" zone. It is registered, and it will be seen.

I'll ony give you the map if you give me kudosu say this post is helpful, to not look like some kind of rushing dude.

By the way, some *star* to get rid of them because your map is great!

Raisa12 wrote:

Hello ! I will do this mod
sorry if my English is bad
regarding Kiai Time I think I should start here 01:00:286 mmmmmmmmm.... I'll think about it
[Easy]
because they use the same slider slider 00:16:786 (2) for 00:15:286 I mean this http://puu.sh/6MFu3.jpg Oh yeah I actually had it that way, I don't know what happened thank you
00:33:286 (1) I think this very attached to slider 3 so move .. x: 16 y: 264 fixed
01:06:286 (2) middle anchor a bit further away http://puu.sh/6MGca.jpg fixed
[Normal]
00:44:911 (6) move x:292 y:232 ? fixed/color]
00:47:911 (6) move x:476 y:208 ?
01:04:036 ... try this? http://puu.sh/6MGHK.jpg not fixed
[Hard]
this look good ._.

good luck with your map

FlawlessTea wrote:

Hello ~ ^^
wow ok I finished the mod, then accidentally deleted it. Time to mod again ~~

[General]
Hitsounds seem very quiet. I suggest you increase volume I will if someone else points out this again
01:00:286 Kiai should start here fixed
01:12:286 Kiai should start here fixed

[Easy]
00:12:286 (1,3) - This overlap looks bad ;w; i suggest something like this http://puu.sh/6MGwG.jpg fixed
00:14:911 (4,1) - Blanket properlyfixed
00:15:286 (1,1) - Stack properly fixed
00:24:661 (1) - change to http://puu.sh/6MGLt.jpg to avoid overlap with the next combo fixed
00:33:286 (1) - This is too close! put to 16,264 Already fixed
01:06:286 (2) - Blanket like this: http://puu.sh/6MGWw.jpg ^
01:12:286 (1) - Put tail to 324,172. It will blanket properly I think you messed up. It does not blanket at all..

[Normal]
00:18:286 (3,1) - Stack the 3 with the 1 properly and rotate by -35 degrees for better flow : http://puu.sh/6MIsN.jpg only stakced
Then adjust 00:20:348 (2,1) accoringly.
00:27:661 (1,2) - These aren't perfectly parallel ;w; not fixed
00:33:661 (1,2,3) - Your stacking leniency messes this up. The 2 appears much closer to the 1 slider not fixed
01:06:286 (2,3) - Properly blanket the 3 with the tail of the 2 fixed
01:07:786 (5,6) - ^ fixed
01:11:911 (1,2) - Why are these so close and then 01:12:848 (3,4) further away? make like this http://puu.sh/6MJrK.jpg fixed

[Hard]
00:22:786 (1,2) - Move one grid up to stack with 00:21:848 (2) fixed
00:33:661 (2,3,4) - Blanket properly not fixed
00:52:786 (5,6,7) - Again, your stacking leniency messes this up. The 6 appears very close to the 5 slider. I suggest you fix not fixed
01:03:848 (5,6) - Proper blanket not fixed
01:18:849 (6,4) - Stack properly fixed

Nice map ~ ^^

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

._.

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ No dap

[ General ]

문제없음.

[ Easy ]

HP - 1 AR - 1 OD - 1 ( 일단 이건 이렇게 해놓으시고 .. AR 정도만 올리라 하면 올리시면 좋을듯.. 뱃들이 지적해주니까요. 는 이건!! ) fixed

00:09:286 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - 개인적으로 여기부분 .. 조금 사각형처럼 딱딱하지 않게 .. 수정좀 해주셧으면 더 좋으실꺼같아요.
( 아이디어가 별로 생각이 나지는 않는데 .. 조금 보기가 그래서 .. ) 생각이 안나서 보류

00:15:286 (1) - 슬라이더의 가장 끝부분 = 꼬리를 딱 한칸만 위로 올려주시면 좋을꺼같아요. fixed
00:16:786 (2) - 이건 아래로 ..fixed

00:24:286 (1) - 이쪽 스피너의 문제인데..

이지 노말에서는 최소한 이정도의 간격은 있어야되요 ..

( 알아서 잘 생각해주세요. ) 저도 그래서 일부러 다음노트룰 중앙에 놓았어요

00:58:786 (3,4) - 조금 어려운 박자인듯 싶네요 .. 그래도 이지라고 표기된 난이도에서 ..
( 이런식으로

모양은 신경쓰지 마시고 .. 박자를 저렇게 보컬따라가주시면 좋을듯 싶어요.

) fixed

01:05:536 (6) - 여기도 보면 1/3을 쓰셧는데 그냥 단순하게 해주셔도 박자 맞고 더 쉬워질수 있을꺼같아요.
( =

이렇게 단순한 박자로 해주시면 될꺼같아요.

fixed

01:12:286 (1) - 슬라이더의 끝부분에 있는 점을 한칸만 오른쪽으로 해주시는게 더 좋아보여요. fixed

01:26:723 (4) - 이 슬라이더의 가장 처음부분을 제거 . =

간격도 설정해주셔야되요..!

fixed

Easy = 음... 단순하게 이정도로 수정하시면 될듯하네요 .. 그리고 원래 거의 1/3 슬라이더는 이지와 노말에서는 쓰지않는게 좋아요.
스피너에서 이지노말에서는 최소한 그정도는 떨어져 있으셔야 되요. 안그러면 지적옴 ㅇㅇ.. 이정도 수정하시면 괜찮을꺼 같아요. : )

[ Normal ]

CS - 1 AR - 1 ( 적당할듯. ) 일단 ar은 내렸는데 cs내리니까 담요 다 망해버려서 그냥 둘게요

00:09:286 (1,2) - 이거 두개는 대칭으로 하시려나본데 .. 대칭으로 하실꺼면 먼저 하나의 노트를 찍고 그 노트를 선택하셔서 Ctrl + H , J 하시면 됩니다.
( 꼭 간격이 맞지는 않아도되니.. 거의 맟게 해주시면 됩니다. ) 생각없이 넣었어요 ㅋㅋ 디스턴스 생각만하고

00:10:786 (3,4) - 직선으로

3번의 끝과 4번의 시작지점이 조금 .. 딱딱하고 치기 힘들어보이네요 ..

( 부드럽고 둥글둥글하게 해주시는게 좋으실꺼같아요. ) fixed

00:12:286 (1,2) - 여기서부터 간격이 넓어지는거같은데 .. 이렇게 하실빠에는 .. 9초부분부터 일정한 간격으로 해주시는게 좋아요 ..
( 간격 조절하시는건 거의 하드나 인센부터 .. ) 일부러 저기부터 넓혔어요

00:17:536 (2,3) - 모양도 모양이지만.. 노래 흐름상으로 같은 모양으로 해서는 안될꺼같아요..
( 모양을 바꿔주시는걸 추천해요 .. 완전 다른모양으로 .. 전에 있던모양이 둥근거니까 직선같은 걸로..... ) fixed

01:08:348 (6) - Ctrl + G 로 리버스 해주시면 더 치기 편할꺼같아요.fixedd

01:22:598 (1) - 스피너의 끝.. 간당간당하네요 .. 다른사람이 수정하라하면 해야될정도로 .....
( 전 일단 이건 보류할꺠요 .. 확실한지 모르겠어서 .. ) 저도 보류

01:26:723 (5) - 이건 이지와 비슷하게 간격을 조금 두고 해주셧으면 더 좋을꺼같아요 .. 이런건 하드에서 쓰면 짱좋을듯!
( = 본격 하드에서 많이쓰는 1人... ) 흠... fixed

Normal = 노말도 .. 조금 어려운듯 싶어요 ..... 간격도 1.2고 ... 근데 노말이 간격넓은거 빼면 .. 꽤 괜찮을꺼같네요.

[ Hard ]

HP - 1 ( 원래는 .. 6으로 하라고 할태지만.. 일단은 5로 해놓으시고 .. 6으로 올리라고 하면 그때 올리시면될듯.. 안드레아는 6으로 하라할듯. ) 저도 6이 좋아요!

00:10:786 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + G 로 리버스 해주시면 적당할듯.. fixed

00:29:348 (6) - 이 서클을 제거하신 후에.. 00:29:536 (6) - 이 슬라이더를 서클을 제거하신쪽에 두시고 반복슬라이더로 만들어주세요.

00:30:098 (7) - 그후 이걸 제거하고... 00:30:286 (1) - 이 서클을 제거하신쪽으로 이동.not fixed 해봤는데 제가 이해를 못한건지 이상하네여

00:30:661 (2,3,4) - 여기서부터는 알아서 간격맟춰주시면될듯..
( 개인적으로 .. 00:34:786 (5,6,7) - 여긴 좋네요 'ㅅ' .. " 영상이 아닌 노트가!! " )

'ㅅ'..

00:51:286 (1) - 이거랑. 00:52:786 (5) - 이거 조금더 서클을 감싸주시는게 더 좋을듯..음.. 해봤는데 똑바로 됐는지 모르겠네용

01:27:098 (9) - 이 서클을 7번서클있는곳에 겹쳐주세요. not fixed

Hard = 하드에서 간격은 1.3정도까지 쓰셔도 무방할듯... = ( 1.3으로 랭크시킨 1人... )
노말이 그렇게 간격이 넓은데 .. 하드가 이렇게 좁으면 ..조금 그럴듯..... 는 넓게 해주셔도되지만.. 지금 이대로 해주셔도 상관은 없을듯..

[ Fast's Insane ]

도 ..남았긴했는데 .. 맵을 일단 보긴봤어요 ..

는 .. 일단 롤약속 잡혀서 .. 롤하고올꺠요..

ㅃㅃ...

는 일단 시간나면 페스트&망맵을 보겠지만.. ( 이건 다음모딩떄 지워야지 흐흐 ... )

페스트님 맵 모딩후에 .. 그 인세인분 오시면 그것도 해드릴태니 오시면 저한태 말해주세요 'ㅅ' .. 리체크겸 해드릴꺠요 .. 는 하드까지 다고치세요 일단..

그리고 쿠도스 100개 주시구요!! ( 모딩하느라 힘들었음!! )

ㅂㅂ~ 롤하고옴.

Fast wrote:

간단모딩

전부 제안입니다
[hard]


00:15:286 (1) - 두번째점 x407 y115 , 마지막점 x312 y104 fixed

00:25:036 (3) - 두번째점 x180 y232 , x세번째점 x168 y268 , 네번째점 x180 y300 fixed

00:25:598 (4) - 자연스럽게 x68 y308으로 이동 fixed

00:34:411 (4) - x200 y52 fixed

00:37:786 (5) - 마지막점 y413 x193 fixed

00:44:348 (7) - 두번째점 y249 x328 , 세번째점 x306 y269 fixed

01:00:848 (2) - 세번째점 x103 y289 , 네번째점 x140 y276 fixed

01:01:598 (4) - 2번째 점 위치가 애매해서 슬라가 자연스럽지 않는거같아요 흠.. 건드려 봤어요

01:14:161 (6) - x304 y87 fixed

나머지는 귗낳음

GUHROOVY wrote:

[Normal]

CS+1 흠.. 또 지적 받는군요 fixed

00:14:161 (1) - NC fixed

00:49:786 (1) - NC fixed

00:59:536 (5) - remove NC fixed

01:00:286 (1) - NC fixed

01:03:848 (2) - 이노트 리딩이 힘듭니다 초보자들에게 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1315482 이런식으로 고쳐주시면 좋을거같음 fixed

[Hard]

00:11:911 (4) - remove NC not fixed

00:22:786 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1315505 이런리듬이 곡에더잘맞지않을까요 리딩도편하고 not fixed

00:29:536 (7) - ctrl+g fixed

00:49:786 (1) - NC fixed

00:52:786 (5) - NC fixed

01:14:161 (1) - 다음부터 리듬비는곳이 좀있으니 NC해도 됄듯 fixed

01:25:786 (1) - NC fixed


이지는 완벽하네요

개꿀맵에는 스타를쏘고가라고 배웠습니다

수고하세요!

GUHROOVY wrote:

[Fast's Insane]

00:17:536 (3) - 앞에 7번노트랑 완전히 스택시키세요

00:59:536 (9) -remove NC

00:59:911 (10) - NC

01:12:848 (3) - 그냥 오른쪽으로 이동하시는게...

01:19:223 - 리듬 너무허전해요 채워주세요

▶ 전부수정



이지는 완벽하네요

개꿀맵에는 스타를쏘고가라고 배웠습니다

수고하세요!

sheela901 wrote:

|M4M Request|

Easy

00:10:036 (2,1,2,3,4) - I was thinking of making another pattern, like more curve. Try to move the the circles by following the coodinations:
-00:10:036 (2) - x:120 y:104
-00:10:786 (1) - x:284 y:24
-00:11:161 (2) - x:364 y:64
-00:11:536 (3) - x:425 y:129
-00:11:911 (4) - x:360 y:192 I tried but didn't like how 1234 were arranged.
01:24:286 (1) - To be precise, move the last point of the slider (the little square at the end) to x:176 y:232, so the tail and the head should has the same height. Thanks, I didn't notice this

Normal

00:17:536 (2) - I don't like that this curve's slider touch to a note. Try to move it to x:196 y:28, and move 00:18:286 (3) to x:360 y:80. not exactly what you suggested me, but changed
00:18:286 (3) - Add a new combo.fixed
The patterns that starts 00:24:661 to 00:35:536 - The slider and notes are a bit too close. Maybe move them a bit further. I either have to reduce CS or remap.. it was fine with cs 4
00:51:286 (1,2,3) - It should be more something like this:not fixed

SPOILER

00:52:786 (4,5,6) - Something like this:not fixed

SPOILER

00:58:786 (4) - Move it to x:396 y:226. not fixed
01:04:223 (3) - Move it to x:250 y:268.not fixed
01:04:786 (4) - Move it to x:127 y:118.not fixed
01:06:848 (3) - Move it to x:166 y:325.not fixed
01:08:348 (6) - Move it to x:505 y:144. not fixed

That's all I can find. Good Luck on ranking this map.

[ Zzz ] wrote:

노답님 = 일단.. 전부다 보긴봤는데 .. 이런말씀 드리기는 좀 그렇지만.. 아직까지는 랭크가 힘들어보여요 .. 전체적 난이도로요 .. 물론 이지는 괜찮.
( 안된다고는 안했어요!! )
하지만.. 뭐 일단은 모딩받아가면서 최소한의 랭크기준에 달할정도의 맵이 된다면.. 랭크가 될수있겠죠!!
힘내여!! = 버블받으면 스타하나 쏴줌!!

DragonSparta wrote:

Easy
00:59:911 (1) - Mini jumps in Easy seems a bit weird because that's probably the combo breaker for novices Thanks for noticing this. fixed

Normal
00:12:286 (1) - Two grids right (Level 4) to make spacing equal fixed
00:16:786 (1) - Make this slider into two notes? Singers seems to be saying "One, two kiss" "Want to kiss" ? not fixed

Hard
none~

UnderminE wrote:

is the bg ok, i wonder

[ Zzz ] wrote:

[ snrnsl39's Insane ]

무언가 .. 박자가 이상한듯한 느낌이 드네요 .. 1/3~1/6을 쓰셔서 그런가 .. ( 이상하다고는 했지만 안맞다고는 안했어요!! )
( 일단 이건 보류.. )

00:11:911 (1) - 여기.. 변속을 넣기보다는.. 그냥 서클 하나로 때워주셔도 될꺼같고 .. 좁은간격으로 1/4연타로 4연타 넣어주시면 괜찮을꺼같아요.

00:25:973 (6,7,1) - 음.. 이런 연타도 좋긴하지만.. 꽤 생각하셔서 넣은것 같아서 .. 좀 그렇지만..
그냥 겹쳐서 연타해주셔도 상관은 없을꺼같아요.

00:30:473 (2,3,4) - 이것도 겹쳐주시는게 좋을꺼같아요.

00:46:786 (1,2,3,4,1) - 이부분은.. 플레이어 배려를 전혀 안한것같네요.. 조금 맵을 플레이어의 입장으로 생각하시면서 만드시면 좋을꺼같아요..
( 저부분 평범하게 뜯어고치는게 좋을듯.. 지금이상태로면.. 랭크가 된다쳐도 ..욕먹을꺼같아요.. )

01:18:754 (7,8) - 이것도 ..별로 안좋은 선택인듯 하네요 .. 평범하게 바꿔주세요.

01:26:067 (2,3) - 차라리 ..이 2개의 서클을.. 슬라이더의 뒤로 겹쳐주시면 좋을듯 싶어요.

01:27:098 (1) - 이 슬라이더를 그냥 지우고 .. 슬라이더의 시작자리에 서클 하나로 변경해주세요.

all fixed

DragonSparta wrote:

Insane
00:00:286 (1) - Make it more symmetrical?
00:11:911 (1) - Seems confusing since it overlaps the next slider, perhaps moving it aside?
00:30:286 (1) - Add whistle?
01:27:068 (1) - Add a finish here?

all fixed

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m from ur q

btw disable grid snap to properly stack some of the circles.

[Fast's Insane]

00:05:536 (4,5) - not stacked properly

00:05:536 (4,5) - not sure if those NCs are nessecary. if you want it to be harder, remove cuz nc give hp It makes it harder with HR


[Hard]

00:29:348 (6,7) - not stacked properlyfixed
00:28:786 (5,8) - ^ fixed
01:13:598 (5,1) - ^ fixed

00:28:786 (5,7) - overlap a bit weird I don't get what you mean

00:10:786 (1,2,3,1) - might look cooler if slightly tilted? maybe, but not fixed

00:16:036 (3,4) - these aren't exactly parallel. (if they're meat to be) fixed
00:00:286 (1,2) - neither are these fixed

suggestion:
01:07:786 (1,2) - how bout 2 slight curves fixed it differently


[Normal]

some parts would look better if you spaced them out. even though it might interfere with distance snap
ie:
00:31:036 (2,3,4,5) -
00:33:661 (1,2,4,5) -
00:58:411 (3,4) -
01:03:848 (2,3,4) -
and more...
mainly its just the blankets that look really bad if they're slightly overlapped
This whole thing is because of CS -1... I had it blanket on cs 4 :3 I might as well change it back to 4...

00:52:786 (4,6) - not properly stacked fixed

00:31:786 (4) - imo i think would flow better if u ctrl + g but idk what you would do for the next sliders. probably just leave this crtl + g on 5


[Easy]

00:29:161 (3) - make this blanket a bit better I did what I could...
00:36:661 (2) - ^ I think they are fine
01:06:286 (2) - ^ ^

00:45:286 (1,2) - looks off idk why sry :/ probably because (1) doesnt blanket the start of (2) well enough or something o-o Surprised no one has noticed this yet, thank you

01:02:911 (1,3) - not stacked properly fixed




yahh thats all i got. sry if its a bad mod. you dont have to mod my map if you didn't find this helpful

truth revealer wrote:

Easy

Don't you think it's a bit annoying to see play-warning arrow repeatedly in sort time?
So, how about if you change the break time with :

00:01:786 -> Add a circle with clap hitsound.
00:04:411 -> Add a circle with normal hitsound.
00:04:786 -> Add a circle with clap hitsound.

Normal

Change the break time with :

00:01:786 -> Add a circle with clap hitsound.
00:04:036 -> Add a circle with normal hitsound.
00:04:786 -> Add a circle with clap hitsound.
00:05:536 -> Add a circle with clap hitsound.
00:07:036 -> Add a circle with clap hitsound.
00:07:786 -> Add a circle with normal hitsound.
00:08:161 -> Add a circle with normal hitsound.
00:08:536 -> Add a circle with clap hitsound.

GUHROOVY wrote:

헐 이게랭크가 힘들다구요? 랭퀄 딱인데 ....

1. remove Widescreen Support all diff please. not used SB.
2. remove Letterbox during breaks?

1. Slider Tick Rate2→1 better imo. because bit loud tick for me.
2. AR+1. more smooth play imo.
3. 00:19:411 (2,4) - y grid same better. (4) y:216 try.
4. 00:24:661 (1) - spinner between really small imo. sound is nice. but, hard play begginer.
5. 00:34:786 (3) - add whistle.
6. 00:59:911 (1) - add clap.
7. 01:24:286 (1) - spinner between really small again.

1. AR+1
2. 00:12:286 (1) - add finish? because easy diff put finish.

1. 00:04:786 (3) - add whistle slider head.
2. 00:11:911 (1) - remove NC?
3. 00:23:536 (1) - remove NC?
4. 00:24:661 (1,2,3) - (2) is (x:256 y:264), (3) is (x:192 y:216) is better. so, (1) and (3) is symmetry, also (2) is middle line. looks good.
5. 00:42:286 (1) - add whistle?
6. 00:45:286 (1) - add whistle slider head?
7. 00:53:911 (4) - try move (x:134 y:196)?
8. 00:59:911 (2) - add clap slider head.

1. 00:17:536 (3) - add whistle slider head.
2. 00:36:286 - add 50% volume green line please. bit weird sound. instead remove 00:36:661 - this.
3. 01:27:098 (1) - heart is cute. but, slider end time is 01:27:661 better imo. more fit.

1. 00:11:911 (1) - add whistle slider head?
2. 00:12:286 (1) - add finish slider head.
3. 00:15:286 (3) - add whistle slider head.
4. 00:21:286 (1,3) - add whistle slider head.
5. 00:32:161 (3) - i think overmap this. try slider→circle.
6. 00:36:473 (2) - remove finish?
7. 00:58:786 (1,1,1) - add whisitle slider head.
8. 00:59:911 (5) - add clap.
9. 01:00:286 (1) - add finish.
10. 01:12:286 (2) - add finish.
11. 01:24:286 (1) - add finish.

Kibbleru wrote:

[snrsl39's Insane]

im bad at modding insane ;-;

00:01:286 (2) - move this over to the right so its at the center of 00:00:286 (1)

00:03:286 (1,2,3,4) - pattern looks weird :\

00:58:786 (1,1,1) - uhh space these out more evenly

01:01:504 (7) - umm move up maybe?

01:02:723 (1,3) - stack ?

01:13:598 (1,2,3) - space out more evenly

all fixed

-Kirito wrote:

[snrnsl39's Insane]
00:00:286 (1) - ~ 00:07:786 (1) - 1/3 박자로 배치된 노트 1/4박자로 바꿔 배치해주세요. fixed
00:23:536 (1) - 1/8입니다. I'm pretty sure that's 1/6 (1/6이 맞는거같음)
00:48:286 (1) - ~ 00:54:286 (2) - 1/4 박자로 배치 fixed

-Kirito wrote:

hello~ you from queues (m4m)

[General]
- 桜Trick를 소스에 Sakura Trick는 태그로 바꿔주세요.
- 컬러 설정안하신거 같네요.

colour

여자 캐릭터의 머리색으로 짠겁니다(아마도.. )

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,166,255
Combo2 : 255,255,157
Combo3 : 192,129,129
Combo4 : 128,128,192

all fixed

[Easy]
- 슬라이드 틱스 1로 바꿔주세요. 이지는 1로도 충분해요

00:22:786 (3,1) - 서클삭제하시고 스피너를 바로 시작하게 놓으세요
00:55:786 (2) - x388 y228로 이동? 왠지 옆에 바로 있어서 뭔가 딱딱하다는 느낌이 들어요
all fixed

[Normal]
- 슬라이드 틱스 1로 바꿔주세요. 이지와 동일 틱을 빼면 틱 클랩을 못써서..
- 슬라이드 속도가 빠르게 느끼게 보이네요. (기분탓)

00:11:348 - 문제는 없는데 Ai 모드에서 This object is too far from the previous object. 라고 뜨는데 버그같네요
01:16:411 (2) - 초보한테는 치기 이상하네요. 01:16:223 - 으로 이동
01:16:786 - 여기에 서클 추가
01:22:411 (3) - 너무 왼쪽으로 가있는 거같네요. x392 y84로 이동fixed

[Hard]
- 슬라이드 틱스 2로 바꿔주세요.
00:10:786 (1,2,3) - 1/2슬라이드로 바꾸셔도 될꺼 같아요(재미를위한)
00:11:911 (4) - 뉴콤 삭제 fixed
00:12:848 (2) - 휘슬 추가? fixed
00:13:036 (3,4) - 앞부분 휘슬 추가 fixed
00:15:286 (1) - ^ fixed
00:16:786 (1,2,3) - 갑작스럽게 변속 넣으면 이상해요
00:17:911 (1) - 클랩 추가fixed
00:23:536 (1) - 1/6슬라이드가 아닐텐에요? 1/8로 바꾸거나 1/4로 바꿔주세요. 그리고 이 부분만 소리 40% 줄이세요
00:26:911 (8,1) - (1)에 휘슬 삭제하시고 (8) 슬라이드 뒷부분에 휘슬 추가
00:30:098 (8,1) - ^
00:32:911 (9,1) - ^
00:34:786 (5) - NC 추가 fixed
00:49:036 (3) - 내려갔다 올라가기 조금 이상해요. (3) 서클이 있는 곳에 언지면 좋을 꺼 같네요 음.. 3을 3위에 얹으라는게 무슨뜻 인지 몰라서...
00:50:348 (2) - ^
01:09:286 (5) - NC 추가fixed
01:11:911 (1) - 앞뒤로 휘슬 추가? fixed
01:13:411 (4,5) - 간격이 너무 멀어요 어라 버그인지 컨트롤 g가 돼있네여 ㄷㄷ fixed
01:23:911 - 굳이 소리를 5%로 할일은 없는 같아요 70%로 하셔서 휘슬 추가하세요. 휘슬은 ya(?)로 맞춥니다 other diffs spinners fixed as well
01:24:661 (2,4) - 슬라이드 1/2가 좋습니다.fixed

하드치고는 노트가 부족한거 같아요'3'

행운을 빕니다 답없는님!

P o M u T a wrote:

m4m!
[General]

1. remove Widescreen Support all diff please. not used SB.
2. remove Letterbox during breaks?

I don't think these matters, since my bg is not 1366x768

[Easy]

1. Slider Tick Rate2→1 better imo. because bit loud tick for me. already fixed
2. AR+1. more smooth play imo.fixed
3. 00:19:411 (2,4) - y grid same better. (4) y:216 try.fixed
4. 00:24:661 (1) - spinner between really small imo. sound is nice. but, hard play begginer. already fixed
5. 00:34:786 (3) - add whistle.
6. 00:59:911 (1) - add clap.
7. 01:24:286 (1) - spinner between really small again.

[Normal]

1. AR+1
2. 00:12:286 (1) - add finish? because easy diff put finish.

all fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:04:786 (3) - add whistle slider head.fixed
2. 00:11:911 (1) - remove NC? alreadt fixed
3. 00:23:536 (1) - remove NC? fixed
4. 00:24:661 (1,2,3) - (2) is (x:256 y:264), (3) is (x:192 y:216) is better. so, (1) and (3) is symmetry, also (2) is middle line. looks good. fixed
5. 00:42:286 (1) - add whistle? fixed
6. 00:45:286 (1) - add whistle slider head? fixed
7. 00:53:911 (4) - try move (x:134 y:196)? I moved the whole thing
8. 00:59:911 (2) - add clap slider head.

good luck!

toybot wrote:

just a little mod from #modreqs i guess ^^

[General]
Remove letterbox during breaks, you have no breaks in the map for some diffs, so keep consistency would be best fixed. I don't even know what this is and what this does...

[Easy]
really nice
00:33:286 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make this pattern symmetrical? (2) - x168 y168, (3) - x348 y168, and (4) - x500 y264 Not fixed, I have to remap the rest.. if i move them D:
01:04:036 (3) - this paired with the previous two circles on that spot can be pretty confusing. maybe rearrange the slider in a different way, like a reverse one? not fixed, I personally don't think its confusing

[Normal]
normally i'd suggest cs3 for a normal, but since you made your blankets really tight, leave :p Yeah, people have been telling me to change, but it ruined my whole blanket so I changed it back.
00:13:786 (4) - how about nc here instead? fixed
00:34:223 (2,3) - how about make these one slider not fixed
01:17:911 (1) - put a finish at the last beat of slider? not fixed, sounds awkward

[Hard]
00:13:411 (4) - ctrl+g ? fun that make 5 slider awkward imo
00:54:286 (1) - i'm pretty sure this is wrong rhythm. maybe shorten the reverse on the slider, and make another slider 1/2 beat away? it only doesn't follow vocal. not fixed
01:26:348 (2,3,4) - maybe make the distance between these objects larger, more dramatic ? fixed

[snrnsl39's Insane]
sometimes the hitsounds feel a bit.. unfinished I kind of worked on it for him

okey, sorry for bad mod

nice map, but insanes feel like they could be a bit more polished, instead of just random jumps Hardcore jumps all day every day

good luck!

P o M u T a wrote:

[snrnsl39's Insane]

1. 00:11:911 (1) - add whistle slider head?
2. 00:12:286 (1) - add finish slider head.
3. 00:15:286 (3) - add whistle slider head.
4. 00:21:286 (1,3) - add whistle slider head.
5. 00:32:161 (3) - i think overmap this. try slider→circle.
6. 00:36:473 (2) - remove finish?
7. 00:58:786 (1,1,1) - add whisitle slider head.
8. 00:59:911 (5) - add clap.
9. 01:00:286 (1) - add finish.
10. 01:12:286 (2) - add finish.
11. 01:24:286 (1) - add finish.

all fixed

toybot wrote:

[snrnsl39's Insane]
sometimes the hitsounds feel a bit.. unfinished
00:06:286 (1) - nc fixed
00:17:161 (1,1,1) - remove nc from these 3 objects, they're the exact same sv anyways, so no point ncing them not fixed
00:18:098 (2) - if you do above, then add nc to this not fixed
00:22:973 (2) - i think there was a discussion on if these could be unrankable or not, but i'm not sure... fixed
00:36:473 (2) - remove finish fixed
01:00:848 (3,4) - ctrl+g? flows a lot better imo than back and forth not fixed
01:12:286 (2) - add finish fixed

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

[snrnsl39's Insane]
00:16:786 (1,1,1) - 변속 삭제해주세요. not fixed
00:21:286 (1) - 이 뒤에도 마찬가지 not fixed
00:25:036 (3) - Ctrl + G fixed
00:30:473 (2,3) - 노트 삭제 not fixed
00:41:161 (2,4) - 완전히 겹쳐주세요. fixed
00:46:598 (6) - 전에 패턴이랑 일관성을 갖추기 위해 Ctrl + G fixed
00:48:848 (2) - 삭제 not fixed
00:55:036 (3,6) - 완전히 겹쳐주세요. fixed
00:58:036 (3,4,5,6) - 그닥 보기 좋아보이는 패턴은 아님 fixed
00:58:786 (1,1,1) - 변속 없애주시고 00:59:629 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 음악이랑 안어울리는 연타는 다른 패턴으로 하시는게 ..? not fixed
01:22:504 (1) - 흐름을 끊는 스핀.. 이랄까 다른패턴 추천 not fixed

[Twinkle] wrote:

Hi, I love this song!
M4M

Easy

01:19:786 (1) - this slider is not vertica, just change it to make it beautiful not fixed

Hard

00:25:598 (4,5) - DS here is not the same not fixed
00:26:348 (6,7) - ^ ^
00:27:661 (2) - this slider is not vertical ^
00:48:848 (2,3) - DS here is not the same ^
00:50:348 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:01:411 (3,4) - ^ ^

Snaggletooth wrote:

Heres my M4M ~

[Hard]

General Notes:

1. due to some jumps and the speed of the map maybe reduce OD to 5.

I'd like to keep my OD, instead HP-1

Object Placement

• I'd like to keep my OD, instead HP-1

1. 00:54:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could make a Star-formation out of this so this wouldn't be a plain square.

wow very good idea thx. applied.

That'S it~

[Easy]

General Notes:

1. Nothing

Object Placement

1. The only thing that I would definitly change, and I really want you to change this, are the spinners 00:22:786 (1,1). They are way too short for an easy and the next objects show while the spinners are still playing. This can easily confuse newbs and cause them to either miss the spinner or the upcoming slider/circle.

I would fix them, if I only knew what to do D:


I hope this mod was any help to you. This mapset is great and I hope to see it ranked soon!

Good luck~

[Twinkle] wrote:

Hi, I love this song!
M4M

snrnsl39's Insane

00:34:786 (1,2,3,4) - short slider here is a bit hard to read also not beautiful, may consider DS it or just put these in the same direction. fixed
00:45:286 (1,2,3,4,5) - not straight not fixed
00:46:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ not fixed
00:50:067 (5,6,7) - this is so hard to read,plz find a way to change these fixed
00:51:567 (2,3,4) - ^ fixed
00:53:067 (6,7,8) - ^ fixed
00:57:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - not in the same direction fixed
01:14:161 (3) - not placed well fixed

Snaggletooth wrote:

Heres my M4M ~

[snrnsl39's Insane]

General Notes:

1. Nothing~

Object Placement

1. 00:14:536 (8,9) - I'd suggest you hit ctrl+g here so this stays in flow. However, if you do that, you need to do the same on these following ones: 00:14:911 (1,2) not fixed

Raiku wrote:

Another mod from me!

[Hard]

00:11:723 (4) - Move this slider back in time to fit how I placed it. Fits the music better (http://puu.sh/6VlLo.jpg). not fixed

00:30:286 (1,2) - No NC on 1, start it on 2 (http://puu.sh/6VlSh.jpg). consistency with 00:26:911 (8,1) and so on

00:51:848 (2) - No stack here, think about continuity vs. variety at stages such as this. Continuity wins in my mind since it is a hard (http://puu.sh/6VlY5.jpg). Stacked on 00:52:411 (4)

00:53:348 (2) - Same here. Honestly the stacks are too stale (http://puu.sh/6Vm1Q.jpg). ^

00:55:411 (2) - No NC needed (http://puu.sh/6Vm6T.jpg). fixed

01:02:536 (1,2,3) - No NC on 1, start on 3. good catch

01:05:536 (1,2,3,4) - Again, start the NC on 4 (http://puu.sh/6Vmem.png). fixed, but not exactly cuz your link is weird lol

01:27:098 (4) - Finish on a new combo for end of song impact. doesn't look fit, not fixed

Thanks again~

Winek wrote:

Pls Rank This

HabiHolic wrote:

[Easy]

00:22:786 (1) - 스피너 바로 앞에 노트가 있으면 치기 힘들어요 그냥 박자를 짜맞추는게 좋을것 같아요 음 리턴을 없애고 뒤로 밀었는데 괜찮은지 모르겠네욤
01:05:536 (1) - 담요 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350273 fixed
01:16:598 (3) - 흠.. 이거 그냥 삭제하시고 01:15:848 (2) - 이걸 01:16:598 - 여기까지 늘리는게 좋을것 같아요 만약 저상태로 둔다면 초보자 기준으로 치기도 힘들것 같아요 그러면 클랩 틱에 못넣게돼서 그냥 박자를 바꿔보았습니다
01:22:598 (1) - 스피너 길이 01:23:536 - 여기까지 fixed

[Normal]

00:20:348 (2) - 겹치지 마세요 겹치지않고 걸쳤습니다

[Hard]

00:13:411 (4) - Ctrl + g? fixed
00:19:411 (7) - ^ fixed
00:33:661 (2) ~ 00:34:598 - 힛사 없으니까 어색한데 그 휘슬이라도 넣어보시는게 어떠세요 fixed
00:38:348 (6,7,8) - 리듬 제안 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350313 보컬도 좋지만 음.. 지금것도 괜찮은거 같아서 not fixed

Yoeri wrote:

[General]
Change the brown combo colour. It blends in with the background too much.
It does with the BG, but not with the Video. So idk

[Easy]
00:25:411 (1) - Doesn't make much sense to me to start it here instead of the big tick. fixed it my own way
00:27:286 (3,1,2) - Do this the other way around. Slider slider circle instead of circle slider slider. not fixed
00:30:661 (1,2) - Kind of same thing here. If you started a slider at 00:31:036 instead, the track would emphasize the vocals. not fixed
00:46:036 (2,3) - Blanket pls. fixed
00:48:286 (1) - Move this up for better flow. fixed
01:00:286 (2,3) - Blanket plssss. not fixed
01:05:536 (1,2) - ^ fixed it my own way
01:06:286 (2,3) - ^ not fixed
01:17:911 (2) - The slider ends on a stronger beat than it starts. fixed

[Normal]
00:24:286 (1,2) - Jump??? twf how did this happen LOL
00:34:223 (2,4) - Blanket plsssssssss. fixed
00:58:411 (3,4) - Looks kind of squished. fixed
01:00:286 (1,2,3) - Blankets plsssssssssssssss. fixed
01:06:286 (2) - Put (2) above (1) for better flow.fixed
01:10:411 (3,4) - Blanket pls. T~T fixed
01:15:661 (1,2,3) - Feels empty in between these, especially since the vocals are held here. maybe, but no change
01:26:911 (5) - Two circles? no change

[Hard]
Cool diff.
00:03:286 (1,2) - Why not make this a slider instead of the (2) before it? good, fixed
00:13:036 (3) - Ctrl+g maybe. And then (4) as well. It's better to play with flow after a slider than after a circle. only 3
00:47:161 (2) - Put it under or right from (1) for better flow. I think it has better flow now
00:47:911 (4) - Same here. Above or right from (3).^
01:03:286 (1) - idk about the bezier. lol

[Insane]
00:03:286 (1,2) - Same as Hard.I think i'll keep insane this way
00:11:536 (3,1) - Avoid the start and end overlapping? no change
00:11:911 (1,1) - .......................blanket pls :-) no change
00:20:161 (2) - Flow badly. I think it's fine
00:30:848 (3) - Passive slider, you should switch it with (2) or (4). I dunno what you mean so no change :p
00:41:161 (6) - Put this on the left of (5) for better flow. no change
00:58:786 (1,2) - Would make more sense if these were the other way around. The 1/2 slider first and the 3/4 slider after, or even two 1/2 sliders and then a circle. this was fixed during S.S's IRC mod
01:13:598 (5,6) - To end this mod on the of course most important note: BLANKET PLS. 8) Never lol!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Oh joy, a yuri song...that certainly isn't awkward for me, lol. \o/

[Easy]
01:00:286 (2) - Should be NC instead of 00:59:911 (1) - , because it is the first object appearing in Kai time. I'm surprised no one's pointed this out? fixed
01:16:036 (2,1) - Try switching these notes, on the timing point. Sonuds better imo, because, when the slider is at 01:16:411, it will follow the ' da yo', and 01:17:161 (1) - on 01:16:036 will hit the finishing syllable 'to' in koto. fixed
01:22:598 (1) - Start at 01:22:786. New players may react too early upon seeing how soon this slider comes in, and will lose hold on the previous slider
01:21:286 (3) - completely, just to catch this spinner. I don't know what "this" slider is, so can't fix

[Normal]
00:15:286 (4) - Move a bit higher so it's tail isn't attached to the previous object 00:14:161 (2) - fixed
01:20:536 (3,1) - Move a bit more farther apart. Similar reason as the suggestion above. fixed
01:26:161 (4,5) - Move them lower, mainly so that 01:26:911 (5) - isn't attached to 01:25:411 (3) - fixed

[Hard]
00:19:411 (7,3) - Stack under the head? fixed if you meant 00:20:911 (3) -
00:36:661 (1) - Remove NC, it's not needed here. oops
01:02:161 (5) - NC here, or remove the one at 01:14:161 (1) - I put nc 01:14:161 (1) - here to indicate that its a different pattern
01:04:786 (5) - NC here, or remove the one at01:17:161 (1) - same as above

[Insane]
00:06:286 (1,2,3,4) - Should form a more square-like formation, instead of the triangle. Something like this: mm I tried.
Except more neater of course.
Right now, 00:08:536 (4) - looks more like the fall-out slider in this rhythm lol.
00:12:286 (1) - add finish on the head. ixed
01:03:848 (3) - The flow...it's just weird here. I find it unappealing how it's reverse arrow is faced towards the previous object. Please flip horizontally, and position it so that its head is still under 01:02:723 (4) - , like this: fixed

Nice mapset. Have a star ~
Good luck!

No Dap wrote:

Oh joy, a yuri song...that certainly isn't awkward for me, lol. \o/

[Easy]
01:22:598 (1) - Start at 01:22:786. New players may react too early upon seeing how soon this slider spinner comes in, and will lose hold on the previous slider 01:21:286 (3) - completely, just to catch this spinner. I don't know what "this" slider is, so can't fix

10crystalmask01 wrote:

No Dap wrote:

Oh joy, a yuri song...that certainly isn't awkward for me, lol. \o/

[Easy]
01:22:598 (1) - Start at 01:22:786. New players may react too early upon seeing how soon this slider spinner comes in, and will lose hold on the previous slider 01:21:286 (3) - completely, just to catch this spinner. I don't know what "this" slider is, so can't fix

Omg, sorry I meant to say spinner not slider

Yes Dap wrote:

insane

00:00:286 (1,2) - 2 지우고 1복붙한다음 ctrl+> >(아니면 180도 회전) 힛사 다시 집어넣는것도 잊지 마시고
00:00:286 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 사이사이 좀더 매핑 할 수 있을텐데요
00:06:286 (1,2) - 00:06:942여기에 2슬라 머리에 노트 놓으시고(http://puu.sh/7gpwd.jpg) 1슬라 복붙 후 ctrl+>(http://puu.sh/7gpAK.jpg), 2슬라 머리를 그 노트 있는 곳에 옮기시고 노트 제거(http://puu.sh/7gpCT.jpg) (3,4슬라도 같은 방법으로 제대로 90도씩 돌리세요)
00:17:911 (1,2,3) - 01:06:286 (4,5,6) - 01:07:786 (1,2,3) - 지금 보기 전까지 한 박자 쉬고 치는 건줄... 님 리딩이 안돼시는겁니다
00:31:786 (1) - NC
00:33:192 (1) - NC
00:33:286 (2) - remove NC
00:37:786 (1) - NC
00:40:786 (1) - NC
01:06:286 (1) - NC
01:13:598 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/7gpSZ.jpg 이렇게 하시고 6슬라 다시 ctrl+g
01:16:786 (1) - NC

iNickel wrote:

I tried to mod your map, but I couldn't find anything wrong xD

Here are some suggestions:

[Easy]
00:00:286 (1) - I don't like these breaks at the beginning. Try this : http://puu.sh/7labA.jpg (End here: 00:03:286 (1) I might try this on Normal, but I think easy is fine as it is.
00:06:286 (1) - ^ (End here: 00:09:286 (1) ^
00:22:786 (3) - Maybe a better shape? http://puu.sh/7lamV.jpg rearranged that part

[Normal]
Same as easy for the beginning. I'm still thinking about

OD - 3 Then my will have lower OD than my Easy.. So not fixed.

That's all. Sorry for so short :/

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey~ i'm here from your in-game request.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:16:786 (2) - it'll be more fun if you follow the vocals by adding 2 1/1 sliders since i feel that the vocals stand out more than the guitar. i feel that following the guitar here feels uncomfortable for beginners during gameplay.
00:22:786 (3) - make some sliderart with this slider. i find that curving it regularly doesn't make the diff more exciting for beginners during gameplay. try something like this. it stands out more and more fun to follow during gameplay IMO
00:46:786 (3) - i don't see anything that stands out here that follows this repeat slider. stick to the 1/1 rhythm so that it'll follow the vocals nicely during gameplay.
00:54:286 (1) - i think you're forgetting a finish at the beginning of this slider. add it for emphasis in the cymbals.
00:58:786 (3) - this part is separate. if you don't understand it follows the BGM, and then the vocals. for this one replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider to follow the music more properly during gameplay. No, I think it plays very fine. It's supposed to be a 3/4 reverse and a circle, but I didn't want to use 3/4 in Easy diff, so i replaced them with 1/1 reverse
01:17:536 (4) - i think you can make this slider look like (2) for symmetry and for an even smoother transition.
i really think you can make this diff more creative during gameplay, that's all.

[Normal]
00:15:286 (1,2,3) - move this combo like this. the difference between yours and mine is that mine is perfectly stacked on certain notes for neatness and a smoother transition during gameplay.
00:16:786 (1) - replace this for 2 circles to follow the vocals more properly during gameplay. as well as there's no hold in the vocals like the next slider since the next slider follows "kiss~"
00:46:411 (3) - stack this note on the end of 00:44:911 (4) -. same reason as 00:15:286.
00:48:286 (1,2) - consider spacing this out to the default spacing and that's 1.3x. my concern is that players might hit this a lot sooner than usual since the spacing is this close during gameplay.
00:49:786 (1,2) - ^
00:58:786 (4) - make this a NC. this follows a different part in the BGM. if this was together, the vocals would be in the same pitch.
01:15:286 (4) - maybe a whistle here to emphasize that dinging sound in the BGM?
01:24:286 (1) - i really want you to consider removing this note. even though it's a normal diff, players might get surprised over this when they play during gameplay. giving a 1/1 gap should be enough for them to recover. I don't see why it would surprise them, and they should be able to play through here just fine.

[Hard]
00:03:286 (1) - same as 00:54:286 on easy.
00:04:786 (2) - in order to be consistent, space this note out like you did between 00:00:286 (1,2) - .
01:01:598 (1) - think you can make this slider more symmetrical so that it'll flow more nicely during gameplay?
01:21:849 (2) - i really think you can space this out for more emphasis in the cymbals. i find it more exciting to follow for players during gameplay. I had it like that, but someone was like wtf spacing.. I guess i'll fix it

[Insane]
00:17:911 (1,2,3) - this might cause a lot of problems for players since the triplet appears too sudden for players to react to during gameplay. think you can reduce the spacing so that it'd be more readable for players during gameplay. This is something I see a lot or often in insane maps, and was very playable to me. But I guess I'll reduce the DS a little bit.
00:28:692 (6) - delete this note. yes it follows the BGM, but it breaks consistency with 00:26:161 (6,7) - since there's no note here.
00:30:848 (3,4) - think you can make this jump more comfortable to follow because i really feel that this jump breaks the general flow of the song during gameplay. something like this would flow a lot smoother and it'll feel more comfortable for players during gameplay.
00:48:848 (2) - i felt that the flow suddenly stopped when it's stacked. stacking it on (3) instead feels more comfortable during gameplay. I think the stacked note plays fine here with the slower SV
00:51:942 (3) - i really think the 1/4 note breaks the calmness of this part of the song even though it follows the BGM. consider removing this note to keep the calmness steady during gameplay.
01:01:411 (6,7) - the jump here feels too sudden for players to react in time during gameplay. consider stacking this on one of these notes(01:01:411 (6,7) - ). it'll keep the flow steady and it's something players would enjoy and more comfortable for players to follow during gameplay.
01:06:286 (4,5,6) - same as 00:17:911. I think its fine, and players should be able to read this pattern. and it actually is readable
01:07:786 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
the only concern i really have are those spaced out triplets. they're too far out during gameplay.

and that's all i got. your easy can be more creative, and consider fixing that problem for the insane. if it was an extra diff, i'd leave it alone. anyways GL and don't give up on the map .

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Ayu wrote:

hello~

Easy

1. 00:29:161 (3) - Blanket could be a bit improved here, middle point one up?!!?!
2. 00:36:661 (2) - This one too, the slider end is too close to the hitcircle.
3. 00:40:786 (3) - Same thing here, slider end too.
4. 00:48:286 (1,2) - Could also be improved, slider starts are too close. Meh, I think i'll keep it this way

Normal

1. 00:49:036 (2) - Could put this a little bit up, for some extra design points. No, I want to keep them aligned
2. 00:50:536 (2) - This one too. ^
3. 01:00:286 (1,3) - These blankets could really be improved, slider starts are slightly too close. No, I think it's fine

Hard

1. 00:21:286 (1) - Slider is too tight here to blanket (4) nicely. I think it's fine. Not everything needs to be perfect blanket
2. 00:44:161 (6) - I'd either stack this or put it on 0,5x distance for consistency. I think it's fine. I don't want to follow the DS all the time in harder diffs.
3. 01:03:661 (2) - same here. ^

Insane

1. 00:11:911 (1) - This should be spaced 1,70x from the previous object, instead of 1,20x. They actually are pretty much (not exactly) the same DS because there is an SV change here.
2. 00:12:286 (1) - Could curve a little bit better around (1)'s end. I'll take this as "improve blanket" and fixed
3. 00:30:286 (1,2,3) - Spacing here looks and feels weird, I'd put 1,7x ds between (1) and (2). Why is it weird? :3
4. 00:44:161 (5) - 00:47:161 (2) - Those 2 are inconsistent with the patterns used before, so I'd stack them because they wouldn't look good with 1,3x ds. I think it plays very fine during game play.
5. 00:58:786 (1) - I'd rather have this made into a repeat slider instead, so it follows the more dominant beat of the song It'd be too boring for players then. I think this works fine here.
6. 01:13:598 (5) - This blanket could reaaally be improved No change
7. 01:20:161 (2,3) - This anti-jump doesn't really make sense here. I agree. Fixed

~ Pretty fun map and also pretty solid. Great work!