This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月11日 at 0:31:08

Artist: a_hisa
Title: Cheshire,s dance
Tags: scary polka
BPM: 120
Filesize: 5667kb
Play Time: 02:56
Difficulties Available:

1. Another (5 stars, 1208 notes)
2. Beginner (2.38 stars, 188 notes)
3. Easy (3.72 stars, 230 notes)
4. Hard (4.84 stars, 476 notes)
5. Hyper (4.97 stars, 961 notes)
6. Normal (4.36 stars, 305 notes)

Download: a_hisa - Cheshire,s dance
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Best of 2014 #35

awesome <:

yay get mine!!

LRJ's Taiko

pend

awesome i like this

muyAR10

\o/

total 3371 objects.
I'm tired

This is awesome!
Take my star

thanks for star!

<3

<3

Just a thing:

its a ' and not a ,

Cancel wrote:

Just a thing:

its a ' and not a ,

http://www.last.fm/music/a_hisa/_/Cheshire,s+dance
lol u

Priti wrote:

Cancel wrote:

Just a thing:

its a ' and not a ,

http://www.last.fm/music/a_hisa/_/Cheshire,s+dance
lol u

That doesn't make any fucking sense though…
Whatever.

probably right now (source from a_hisa's site)

Muya wrote:

probably right now (source from a_hisa's site)

still, it doesn't make any sense in normal english, but ok

From your M4M Queue~

my mod is all suggestion

[General]

1. No tags

[Beginner]

1. NP

[Easy]

1. 00:45:164 (4) - better make same as 2nd one
2. 02:32:864 (3) - http://puu.sh/77g5e.jpg how about this?
3. 02:44:264 (5) - move to 256, 60

[Normal]

1. 00:18:014 (3) - delete
2. 00:22:814 (3) - ^
3. 01:05:564 (2) - move to 444, 252
4. 01:28:964 (6) - move to 64, 272
5. 02:06:464 (3) - http://puu.sh/77ggk.jpg this one will be better

[Hard]

1. 00:34:064 (1,2) - make same shape as first?
2. 01:27:164 (2) - ^
3. 02:01:664 (1) - http://puu.sh/77gsI.jpg also i think this is better
4. 02:40:364 (3) - straight slider will be better

[Hyper]

1. 01:55:664 (1,2,3,4) - slider will be better

[Another]

1. AR 10??
2. 02:02:264 (6) - little closer to 5th note
3. 02:07:064 (6) - ^ or http://puu.sh/77gZT.jpg
4. 02:10:664 (5) - move to 268, 344

Sorry for poor mod

OH.. It will be very hard diff lol

GOOD LUCK~

Muya,s map too stronk
can,t mod ;;

thanks for mod

Just take my star~

wow thank you!

Hi hi hi ~

[General]

1. add 1500 or 2000 AudioLeadIn, diffs are starting too soon

[Another]

1. 00:08:450 (1,2) - add more spacing between them? can be confuse, since people can think is 1/4 too
2. 00:24:164 (10,11) - probably 1/4 sliders will fit the music nicely imo
3. 00:28:664 (3) - finish fit really well the end of the section here
4. 00:42:164 (5,6) - a slider fit better the music for me here, since bring more emphasis to the piano
5. 00:42:914 (3) - and here 2 circles fit better the music, since the sound at 00:43:064 is strong and need a clickable action
6. 00:48:014 (4,5) - they are to close use 1.80 distance? and keep the jump feeling with previous beats? (actually this can be confused with 1/4)
7. 01:12:164 move this to x:432 y:136 to be stacked with 01:11:264 (1) -, your map will look more clean.
8. 01:20:564 (10,2,3) - try to avoid the overlap?
9. 01:47:864 (3) - same as 00:28:664
10. 02:22:964 (6,4) - stack this properly
11. 02:45:614 (7,8,9) - maybe a mistake? but a straight stream look better like you did with 02:45:314 (4,5,6) -
12. 02:56:264 probably a NC will bring more empathize to the last three hits there, since the music is different there.[/color]

[Hyper]

1. 00:11:828 (1,1) - try to avoid the overlap? just move 00:12:203 (1) - 1 grid to the left
2. 00:17:714 (2,3,4) - use the same distance between them? somethink like:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:22:514 (2,3,4) - same as above
4. 00:28:664 same as another
5. 00:57:464 (5,6) - this rhyhtm doesn't fit the song properly imo, my suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:22:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stack them properly
7. 01:23:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
8. 01:26:564 (10,3) - try to avoid the overlap here
9. 01:47:864 same as another
10. 01:52:214 (2,5) - avoid the overlap? you can make a nice blanket there instead
11. 02:56:264 (9) - same as another

[Hard]

1. 00:15:389 add a circle here for consistency with 00:16:514 (2,3,4) -
2. 00:20:189 same as above
3. 00:28:664 (3) - same as another
4. 01:33:914 you need a circle here, that part feel to empty without it IMO
5. 01:46:964 (4,3) - stack this properly
6. 01:47:864 (5) - same as another
7. 02:13:064 (3,4) - you can stack this better
8. 02:14:264 (7,8) - ^
9. 02:43:364 (4) - what you think of stack 4 on 02:43:664 (1) - , like:
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. AR6 fit better this diff, maybe ask for more opinions
2. HP +1 (4) for better diff spread
3. 00:10:450 (5) - this should be NC following your every 2 stanzas pattern
4. 00:59:714 (5) - personally I think you can do a better rhythm here, try:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:51:464 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - parts like this with a lot of objects at same time make me feel you need AR6 here but not totally sure.
6. 02:56:264 add NC same reason as the other diffs.

[Easy]

1. HP+1 (3) for better diff spread
2. 00:09:450 (6,7,8) - use the same spacing between them, actually 7 and 8 are too close
3. 00:23:264 (3) - I guess double repeats are really hard to play for no experienced players, try another rhythm?
4. 01:01:664 (3) - same as above
5. 02:32:564 (2,3) - try to avoid the tiny overlap
6. 02:36:464 (1) - same as 00:23:264
7. 02:56:264 (4) - same suggestion as the other diffs

[Beginner]

1. Hp +1 for better spread
2. 00:13:664 (1) - avoid double repeats new players can't notice them.
3. 00:23:264 (3) - same as above
4. 00:36:464 (1) - this one is ok since he slider is long and new players have the time to notice it.
5. 00:44:564 (3,4,5) - use a repeat slider instead? too much single tap for the easy diff of the set.
6. 01:01:664 (3) - same as 00:13:664
7. 01:37:364 (3,4,5) - same as 00:44:564
8. 01:46:064 (1,2) - same with double repeat, also this is more confuse the first one have 2 repeats and the second 1.
9. 01:51:539 remove the unnecesay green lines

awesome mapset <3 (｀・ω-)▄︻┳┻═一 *

M4M from ur queue, hope this helps

[Another]
00:12:997 (2) - confusing slider, not sure if its rankable since the path isn't clear
00:00:325 (2) - not snapped Oo
you have a bunch of unsnapped notes that are snapped if you use 1/4 beat snap o-o not sure why but u have 1/6 on
01:08:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why does the spacing change
01:52:814 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - i'd say kinda hard to read
01:58:064 (1,2) - make (2) parallel with the end of (1)
01:58:064 (1,3) - stack (3) onto the third slider point?
02:17:264 (1,2) - make the ends parallel with each other o-o?
02:19:064 (3) - something like this?
i noticed that u didn't use any curves in this map. not sure why but i think curves make the map look nice :I

bleh sry, i have no idea how to mod this kind of style of mapping lol xD


[Hyper]
00:36:914 (3) - ctrl g for better flow ?
00:47:714 (3) - ^
01:47:114 (5,1) - bad overlap
01:52:214 (2,5) - ^

[Hard]
00:08:950 (2,3) - distance between these sliders is slightly different than (1) and (2) or (3) and (4)
00:18:989 - add note ?
00:23:789 - ^
00:32:864 (1) - how bout a spinner instead of this slider that goes across the whole screen
00:45:314 (3,1) - bad overlap
01:38:114 (3,1) - ^
and, don't copy and paste whole sections *-*
02:14:264 (7,8) - stack better
02:16:664 (3,1) - bad flow

[Normal]
00:11:495 - why not add the circles here like u did with the other difficulties? (you could try using sliders too i think)

bleh this difficulty is fine

[Easy]
00:10:450 (7,8) - don't overlap? :U
01:33:164 (4) - i suggest adding reverse
01:34:064 - don't copy paste o-o?
01:34:064 (1,2) - these touch, space them out slightly
02:32:564 (2,3) - ^
02:14:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - too many consecutive circles for an easy

[Beginner]
00:23:264 (3) - 2 reverses too confusing for new players
00:36:464 (1) - ^
and more


phew that was a long mapset. anyway, i HOPE this mod is helpful (although i don't think so cuz im not used to modding fast bpm songs :I)
anyway gl

Natsu wrote:

Hi hi hi ~

[General]

1. add 1500 or 2000 AudioLeadIn, diffs are starting too soon

added 2000

[Another]

1. 00:08:450 (1,2) - add more spacing between them? can be confuse, since people can think is 1/4 too
2. 00:24:164 (10,11) - probably 1/4 sliders will fit the music nicely imo
3. 00:28:664 (3) - finish fit really well the end of the section here
4. 00:42:164 (5,6) - a slider fit better the music for me here, since bring more emphasis to the piano
5. 00:42:914 (3) - and here 2 circles fit better the music, since the sound at 00:43:064 is strong and need a clickable action
6. 00:48:014 (4,5) - they are to close use 1.80 distance? and keep the jump feeling with previous beats? (actually this can be confused with 1/4)
7. 01:12:164 move this to x:432 y:136 to be stacked with 01:11:264 (1) -, your map will look more clean.
8. 01:20:564 (10,2,3) - try to avoid the overlap? fixed
9. 01:47:864 (3) - same as 00:28:664
10. 02:22:964 (6,4) - stack this properly
11. 02:45:614 (7,8,9) - maybe a mistake? but a straight stream look better like you did with 02:45:314 (4,5,6) - fixed
12. 02:56:264 probably a NC will bring more empathize to the last three hits there, since the music is different there.[/color]

[Hyper]

1. 00:11:828 (1,1) - try to avoid the overlap? just move 00:12:203 (1) - 1 grid to the left fixed
2. 00:17:714 (2,3,4) - use the same distance between them? somethink like:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:22:514 (2,3,4) - same as above
4. 00:28:664 same as another
5. 00:57:464 (5,6) - this rhyhtm doesn't fit the song properly imo, my suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:22:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - stack them properly
7. 01:23:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
8. 01:26:564 (10,3) - try to avoid the overlap here
9. 01:47:864 same as another
10. 01:52:214 (2,5) - avoid the overlap? you can make a nice blanket there instead fixed
11. 02:56:264 (9) - same as another

[Hard]

1. 00:15:389 add a circle here for consistency with 00:16:514 (2,3,4) -
2. 00:20:189 same as above
3. 00:28:664 (3) - same as another
4. 01:33:914 you need a circle here, that part feel to empty without it IMO
5. 01:46:964 (4,3) - stack this properly
6. 01:47:864 (5) - same as another
7. 02:13:064 (3,4) - you can stack this better
8. 02:14:264 (7,8) - ^
9. 02:43:364 (4) - what you think of stack 4 on 02:43:664 (1) - , like:
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. AR6 fit better this diff, maybe ask for more opinions fixed
2. HP +1 (4) for better diff spread fixed
3. 00:10:450 (5) - this should be NC following your every 2 stanzas pattern fixed
4. 00:59:714 (5) - personally I think you can do a better rhythm here, try:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:51:464 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - parts like this with a lot of objects at same time make me feel you need AR6 here but not totally sure.
6. 02:56:264 add NC same reason as the other diffs.

[Easy]

1. HP+1 (3) for better diff spread fixed
2. 00:09:450 (6,7,8) - use the same spacing between them, actually 7 and 8 are too close fixed
3. 00:23:264 (3) - I guess double repeats are really hard to play for no experienced players, try another rhythm?
4. 01:01:664 (3) - same as above
5. 02:32:564 (2,3) - try to avoid the tiny overlap
6. 02:36:464 (1) - same as 00:23:264
7. 02:56:264 (4) - same suggestion as the other diffs

[Beginner]

1. Hp +1 for better spread fixed
2. 00:13:664 (1) - avoid double repeats new players can't notice them.
3. 00:23:264 (3) - same as above
4. 00:36:464 (1) - this one is ok since he slider is long and new players have the time to notice it.
5. 00:44:564 (3,4,5) - use a repeat slider instead? too much single tap for the easy diff of the set.
6. 01:01:664 (3) - same as 00:13:664
7. 01:37:364 (3,4,5) - same as 00:44:564
8. 01:46:064 (1,2) - same with double repeat, also this is more confuse the first one have 2 repeats and the second 1.
9. 01:51:539 remove the unnecesay green lines fixed

awesome mapset <3 (｀・ω-)▄︻┳┻═一 *

thank you Natsu

Kibbleru wrote:

M4M from ur queue, hope this helps

[Another]
00:12:997 (2) - confusing slider, not sure if its rankable since the path isn't clear
00:00:325 (2) - not snapped Oo
you have a bunch of unsnapped notes that are snapped if you use 1/4 beat snap o-o not sure why but u have 1/6 on
01:08:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why does the spacing change
01:52:814 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - i'd say kinda hard to read
01:58:064 (1,2) - make (2) parallel with the end of (1)
01:58:064 (1,3) - stack (3) onto the third slider point?

SPOILER

02:17:264 (1,2) - make the ends parallel with each other o-o?
02:19:064 (3) - something like this?

SPOILER

i noticed that u didn't use any curves in this map. not sure why but i think curves make the map look nice :I

bleh sry, i have no idea how to mod this kind of style of mapping lol xD


[Hyper]
00:36:914 (3) - ctrl g for better flow ?
00:47:714 (3) - ^
01:47:114 (5,1) - bad overlap
01:52:214 (2,5) - ^ fixed

[Hard]
00:08:950 (2,3) - distance between these sliders is slightly different than (1) and (2) or (3) and (4)
00:18:989 - add note ?
00:23:789 - ^
00:32:864 (1) - how bout a spinner instead of this slider that goes across the whole screen
00:45:314 (3,1) - bad overlap
01:38:114 (3,1) - ^
and, don't copy and paste whole sections *-*
02:14:264 (7,8) - stack better
02:16:664 (3,1) - bad flow

[Normal]
00:11:495 - why not add the circles here like u did with the other difficulties? (you could try using sliders too i think)

bleh this difficulty is fine

[Easy]
00:10:450 (7,8) - don't overlap? :U
01:33:164 (4) - i suggest adding reverse
01:34:064 - don't copy paste o-o?
01:34:064 (1,2) - these touch, space them out slightly
02:32:564 (2,3) - ^
02:14:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - too many consecutive circles for an easy

[Beginner]
00:23:264 (3) - 2 reverses too confusing for new players
00:36:464 (1) - ^
and more


phew that was a long mapset. anyway, i HOPE this mod is helpful (although i don't think so cuz im not used to modding fast bpm songs :I)
anyway gl

thank you Kibbleru

Super fun :>

hi this is for M4M






the rest are fine, but is easy nescessary for this mapset ? I think you can just delete ez and keep normal as your second diff

In all the whole mapset are good so I shoot a star. Good luck :3

Hard is both fixed
thanks Mei!

m4m

BEGINNER

00:24:464 (1) - slider is too short for beginner difficulty, extend to 00:26:864

00:44:564 (3,4,5) - may be hard for easy difficulty to hit 3 circles. maybe 1 bounce back slider


01:37:364 (3,4,5) - ^

02:02:264 (3) - move to (248.272) to avoid overlap with 02:02:864 (1) -

EASY

01:36:764 (2) - move slightly higher to (424,332) to make better blanket

NORMAL

00:42:464 (3) - suggest you ctrl+J to make symmetrical pattern and more flow

02:45:464 (3) - make this straight to match 02:46:064 (5) -

HARD

00:10:450 (1,1,1,1,1,1,2) - I think you should just replace with spinner instead. so many timing points, very hard to hit precisely

02:14:714 (8) - it will flow better if it was stacked on 02:14:864 (1) -

sorry, but Im not experienced enough to mod the other 2 difficulties. too hard for me, but I hope these mods helped

thanks ritsu-tanaika!
but no changed, sorry

ohai. Some hitsound suggestions (Another) cuz i love songandmy grandmamap , feel free to ignore this and blah-blah-blah
00:03:450 (7) - well, what about soft finishes (on red and white tick) with decreasing volume(20-30% sounds cool for me)?
00:07:450 (7) - same
00:12:203 (1) - try drum finish here (with 30-40% vol.)
00:12:664 (1) - if you accept drum finish try soft whistle here
00:44:864 (1) - soft finish?
00:46:064 (1) - ^
00:54:464 (1,1,1) - again soft finishes
01:14:864 (1) - ^
01:16:064 (1,5) - and here
01:16:664 (9) - and here
01:50:114 (6) - normalhit? O:
Hope it helps.
also feel free to poke me in game if you need something like irc hitsounds based mod
Good luck!

>EvilElvis
thank you!
but sorry no changed

hyper = hard
hard = hyper
hyper = hard+
hard+ = neither insane or hyper

beginner = easy
easy = beginner
beginner = easy+
easy+ = neither normal or beginner

neither mapset what you do lel

[General]

1. Wow, you're makes many difficulty. At least you have 2 hard and 2 easy, that akward really sense.
2. BG Size like unrankable, need to resize it. according to the ranking criteria only having background size with 1024x768, need to fix that or you can find another background image.

[Beginner]

1. 00:12:203 - Add note (circle) here, it's like a sound to map it. however rhythm is really gone away.
   
   00:23:864 - This greenline currently like unnecessary, no need to very fit the rhythm. Or also 00:24:164 - this one have a sounds like this 00:23:864 - greenline hitsound sample, currently instrumental is same pitched. And you should make it longer space greenline like an unnecessary for a rhythm it.
   
   00:24:464 (1) - The spinner have not done with the end spinner sound and rhythm, you should make it fit the sound. it should be ended in 00:25:514 - this one currently pitching in instrumental chorus in the spinner like whole, stanza/big white tick doesn't be fitted, the necessary thing only at pitches not big white tick (but big white tick have a range pitch) should be consistent with the other spinner too.
   
   00:34:064 (1,2,3) - Neither (1)/(3), triangle spacing really not good with the pattern. I mind (2) be deleted then make spacing with (1) and (3) is fair (not need to (2) deleted). Triangle perfectly have a fair and straight diagonalling, Consider (1) move to 72,48, (2) move to 144,152, (3) moved to 216,48, also too diagonally really bad with this beginner flow one.
   
   00:36:464 (1) - i don't agree with this current 3 times repeating/reversing arround. New comboing and rhythming is AAAAAAAAre overused while play we should repeating it again. But rhythm still in the chorus instrumental doesn't should be like that, try to make a new rhythming to make an enjoyable to players, And new comboing is too short. Needs like 1/1 slider, because overall with the diff is like a easy. like this one 00:41:264 (1,2) - have an maximum 2 comboing on same chorus like purpose but good.
   
   00:51:464 (1,2) - Neither do i lel, why ;w; curving (2) like an not pass with curving flow instead (dropoff like what) i suggest to you to make this one for not curveing bcz any strong slider 00:48:464 (1) - curving in a strong chorus like what.
   
   01:26:864 (1,2,3) - Like the before one, 00:34:064 (1,2,3) - this suggestion same like this mod.
   
   01:44:264 (1,2) - ^, 00:36:464 (1) - this suggestion same like this mod.
   
   01:50:864 (1,2) - Make curve for consistent or Make straight for consistent? I suggest you to change to small (4) grid size, 3 grid size can't making straight so much, mapping such like a bad, if you want make the pattern to be a better, follow the image on the spoilerbox.
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   1. Distancing is consistent with it. Axis(s) in the image, doesn't have problem. Distancing snap making sure.
   
   01:53:264 (1) - Now please stack with 01:50:864 (1) - this one, mistake (nazi) is like what ;w;
   
   02:05:264 (1) - out of screen. (no need to change if you purpose to do it.)
   
   02:30:464 (2) - Looks like an overlap a bit. try to curving into a another place/axis for consistency.
   
   02:55:664 (3,4,5) - i suggest to make an overlap with the distance snapping more consistent. Linear path is like what.
   
   
   SPOILER

   

[Easy]

1. This one like prefered/purposed to be a normal. you uses so many 1/1 patterns.
   
2. 00:12:203 - Add note? suggestion same like beginner.
   
   00:14:864 (1,2) - Bit overlap, not really an overlap. i suggest you to increase the distancing snap ;w;
   
   00:22:064 (1,2,3) - Curving slider like an ugly for flow shaping, The curving is too strong for (1) whole (3) is curving a bit strong, curving now is breaked for the pattern, Make not curve is not problem for not curving, so overlap gonna wreck the curving. Make sure that you followed the image, the image current shape have not curving instead.
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   00:36:764 (2,3,4) - So boring, having 1/1 so bad a far, rhythm is repeating then player get bored, somehow like an overmapped a bit then it's can't be consistent at playing.
   
   00:41:264 (1,2,3) - curvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurve
   
   01:08:264 (3,5) - Make beat blanket of course great, no be a problem when you "no D: distance blanketing is so far with the DS so no " but it's still called blanket. nah, now overlap making a problem. i suggest to 01:08:864 (4) - move to 448,80 for have a bit space for spacing. any image for you:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   01:11:264 (4) - *continue mod above* also stack it.
   
   01:26:864 (1,2,3) - too linearing. reduce linearing please ;w;
   
   can't find more ;w;

goddamn normal is too hard

[Normal]

1. wai
   
2. 00:37:664 (2) - move to 84,172 make a blanket in a various away. Before, looks like placed in a ignored place.
   
   01:03:464 (3,5) - Shape isn't same, shape pattern is not good like general. I suggest copy paste, then Rotate it or CTRL + > two times then CTRL + G and place it in the before one.
   
   01:47:864 (5) - move it to 232,136
   
   02:24:464 (1) - curvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurve
   
   02:46:064 (5,6) - make it straight.

[Hard]

1. 00:32:864 (1) - curvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurve
   curvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurve
   curvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurvecurve
   
   00:36:614 (2) - This rhythm is really late and unnecessary. i suggest 00:36:464 (1) - delete this then 00:36:614 (2) - move to 00:36:464 - so adjust it to 00:36:914

orz can't find more

good luck ;w; sorry for long mod and strong mod ;w; hope it's no problem and hope it helps.

Groumiezi wrote:

• [Beginner]
  [list:1337]01:50:864 (1,2) - Make curve for consistent or Make straight for consistent? I suggest you to change to small (4) grid size, 3 grid size can't making straight so much, mapping such like a bad, if you want make the pattern to be a better, follow the image on the spoilerbox.
  
  
  SPOILER

  
  
  

  1. 1. Distancing is consistent with it. Axis(s) in the image, doesn't have problem. Distancing snap making sure.
  both change to curve slider
  
  01:53:264 (1) - Now please stack with 01:50:864 (1) - this one, mistake (nazi) is like what ;w; fixed[Easy]
  00:22:064 (1,2,3) - Curving slider like an ugly for flow shaping, The curving is too strong for (1) whole (3) is curving a bit strong, curving now is breaked for the pattern, Make not curve is not problem for not curving, so overlap gonna wreck the curving. Make sure that you followed the image, the image current shape have not curving instead.
  
  
  SPOILER

  
  
  fixed
  
  [Normal]
  
  1. wai
     
  2. 00:37:664 (2) - move to 84,172 make a blanket in a various away. Before, looks like placed in a ignored place. move to x:84 y:168
     
     01:47:864 (5) - move it to 232,136
     
     02:46:064 (5,6) - make it straight. fixed

others not fixed
thanks Groumiezi

Hi Muya!
[General]

1. If you want, you could reduce the volume to about 40% volume at the beginning of the song, since this part is relatively softer than the main part of the music at 00:13:664.
2. Please add some tags if you can! It'll be useful for map searching.
3. That's quite a strange BG Size (1081x768). Just my observations. I still recommend a 1024x768 BG size though. Either way, it is not unrankable (see green text below), so you are okay. :3
   
   Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
4. Disable Wide-Screen support. You don't need it since there are no storyboarding on this map.

[Hyper]

1. 01:46:214 (2,5) - You could stack the end of 01:46:214 (2) with the start of 01:45:464 (3). If you like my suggestion, you can also make 2 symmetrical with 5.

[Another]

1. I found no problems for this difficulty, but can you at least reduce the Approach Rate to 9?

Very good mapset as always. Good luck with your map. I'll leave a star icon for now!

I've found something about the title, according to a_hisa's webpage: http://hisaweb.6.ql.bz/

In the homepage you can find twice "Cheshire's dance" with apostrophe, but if you check this picture under the Music tag, you'll see it's "Cheshire,s dance" with comma. But which one is reliable?

I've looked for more examples, and this is a more clear one: Another famous piece of a_hisa is "Anhedonia", which you can find like that in the homepage. If you go again to the Music section, you'll find its name with the Greek characters "Ανηεδονια" (see this picture). In this case, it'd be clear enough that the Unicode Title would be the one with the Greek letters, since it wouldn't be supported in the webpage/search tool, while the one with the Latin letters would be the actual Title.

So if we follow that case, you'd have this for the current song:

1. Title: Cheshire's dance
2. TitleUnicode: Cheshire,s dance

It's just a minor fix, but it'd be more common to search with an apostrophe instead of a comma. Good luck with this mapset! I'm looking forward to see it ranked

BeatofIke wrote:

[General]

1. Please add some tags if you can! It'll be useful for map searching.

I have no idea
added this song's genre

[Another]

1. I found no problems for this difficulty, but can you at least reduce the Approach Rate to 9?

BPM200, many jumps and streams, I think AR10 is fit

others all fixed

>Deif
changed title

thanks Ike and Deif

huhuhuhuhu, #modreqs

I can't mod this, sorry X.X


This will be ranked @.@

From my modding queue~

00:28:964 - meow
ok


Sorry for the late mod, usually I get them done sooner but I guess I was lazy. The song is pretty fast and fun, I hope you have fun mapping!

> toybot
thanks for mod! but no changed

pkmnyab wrote:

From my modding queue~

00:28:964 - meow
ok

[Normal]

02:17:864 (2,3) - to match the music/beat better, try moving (3) so the start of the slider is on the white tick.

SPOILER

02:34:064 (1,2) - this could be better if you match the beat instead of the offbeat music part. Try shortening (1) to the previous white tick and move (2) backward to the last white tick. Test it to see if it fits better

SPOILER

02:48:464 (4,5) - perhaps you can have these not overlap by moving (5) up to the right a bit with distance snap on, maybe around x 492 y 248

02:56:264 (5,6,7) - consider making this a new combo to match/emphasize the end of the music

[Hard]
00:35:264 (1) - try to curve this upwards to improve flow, the slider shape will naturally lead into (2)

SPOILER

fixed, 01:28:064 (1) - too

02:23:564 (2,3) - these look too close together. If you have to, break distance snap to space them farther apart. This way the space between each slider will look the same, and it will look nicer.

Sorry for the late mod, usually I get them done sooner but I guess I was lazy. The song is pretty fast and fun, I hope you have fun mapping!

fixed these, thanks for mod!

why can't I find anything wrong?

star

thank you

200 bpm map, uses AR10, everyone complains, get over it AR10 is correct

Cancel wrote:

still, it doesn't make any sense in normal english

>Implies everything must be english-based

I can title my work with anything nonsense you have no right on it.

The last red timing section sounds really late. Try 13,648 (-16) for the offset.

done!

I cant upload when changed to Deif's Title

Muya wrote:

I cant upload when changed to Deif's Title

It can't be helped then. Going to bubble this map now!
Good luck Muya and get hyped everyone!

wow god muya

HP8 / OD9 / AR10 on THIS Another? eeee
The beginning is too frustrating with this setup. Because of the non existent notes to recover sufficiently, you have a hard time to survive the beginning if you start hitting a few notes early (100/50) - which happens quickly on AR10 at 120bpm, especially with the spaced 1/4 doubles.
I really do not like this. And I am tempted to pop because of this. But eeeeee. Can't drop a full mod ;_;

tl;dr: I would put AR9/HP7 on this Another. I am probably just a weeaboo

I really like this AR/HP
I dont want to change

obligatory be pro or die (another)

btw I just think that the bg doesn't fit. Just saying.

No need to do anything because the map is lovely.

Why is this AR 10?

Really, is this really that hard to read. AR 10 is way too fast when you have streams cluttered up at really low distance snaps making this AR feel tacked on due to people having horrible readability on even the easiest patterns. The only things people might need AR 10 are probably patterns like 00:53:248 (1,2,3,4) but they come few in the whole map which can easily fixed by spreading your circles around and not making each one close to each other. AR 9 would suit this map better.

The HP is very unforgiving. It would be acceptable if not for the beginning. A few 100's which is very easy to get on OD 9 is extremely overkill for the beginning. The space doubles make this even worse and you would barely live after the beginning. I suggest you to lower the drain.

Just my 2 cents.

I think AR10 is easy to read
also AR9 is too slow at this map

Personally, I would go with AR9 on this. AR10 is for something like.... jumpy maps with less streams on 220 bpm+
Just my opinion

But I enjoyed the map on AR10 as well. Good job Muya!

How is AR9 too slow for 200bpm?
AR9/HP7 works way better here.

Personally, I prefer the same exact settings as in this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/103372
HP8/AR9/OD9

the only argument i can give why i wouldnt want ar10 on this map is that im bad at reading ar10. i think the map plays fine with ar10.

BeatofIke wrote:

Personally, I prefer the same exact settings as in this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/103372
HP8/AR9/OD9

I have to agree with this as well, this map doesn't call for AR10 imo.

Use easy mod

ontopic : I can't play because high HP, ar is not a problem for me.

BeatofIke wrote:

Personally, I prefer the same exact settings as in this map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/103372
HP8/AR9/OD9

NO!

over 181+ bpm maybe allowed, under 180 bpm with AR10 looks like overmapped, BPM is so different like that another a_hisa. Song like that map is not fast and not fit so much. i prefer to fit the song.

please make this rank ;~;

anyway I want to keep AR10,
ok?

ok

rank when

I gave a look to Another diff. It's so awesome.
I will mod it tomorrow, be ready for rank~

AR10 fits pretty well here. I don't see why this needs to be changed.

The life drain is still too high. Reducing it by one and it should work for me. :/

I should stop checking maps with multiple offsets.

General

1. 3rd offset is terribly placed too early. It's 11505(+10ms) to me. About 6th one I have 12682. Moreover, a red line is really needed for 00:12:932 (2) on 13030. I'm pretty sure of it, but if you want more confirm you can ask to other BATs as well.

Easy

1. 01:06:448 (4) - (nazi) Replace this circle with distance snap. That little stack between this and the previous slider's end looks a bit bad

Normal

1. 00:11:495 (1) - I know you are using distance snap here but this reduced spacing can confuse players being a Normal diff. I would place circle in this other way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1467659
2. 02:34:048 (1) - I didn't get this rhythm to be honest. I would set this other one, it fits much better IMO http://puu.sh/7PLEx.jpg

Hard

1. 00:36:448 (1,2) - If you listen the song you would notice that CTRL + G these two elements would fit the music much better, I mean: http://puu.sh/7PNfj.jpg . Obviously it's the same for 01:29:248 (1,2) -

Hyper

1. 02:56:398 (10,11) - What about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1467735 ? Much enjoyable to play trust me. This up-down-up is fun to play

Another

1. Everyone is contesting about the AR and HP. Consider to change it like Loctav said, but it's up to you.
   I think AR10 fits fine but idk, I will let you decide lol
2. 00:23:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - omg ♥
3. 01:14:248 (5,6) - This change of spacing is exaggerated.
4. 02:04:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Those sliders in this stream don't convince me to be honest. I would make something like 00:23:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - with sliders only

wow this mapset is awesome
I have to pop because of timing issues, sadly

Chewin wrote:

I should stop checking maps with multiple offsets.

General

1. 3rd offset is terribly placed too early. It's 11505(+10ms) to me. About 6th one I have 12682. Moreover, a red line is really needed for 00:12:932 (2) on 13030. I'm pretty sure of it, but if you want more confirm you can ask to other BATs as well.

Easy

1. 01:06:448 (4) - (nazi) Replace this circle with distance snap. That little stack between this and the previous slider's end looks a bit bad

Normal

1. 00:11:495 (1) - I know you are using distance snap here but this reduced spacing can confuse players being a Normal diff. I would place circle in this other way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1467659

fixed these thanks Chewin!

I feel like ranking it, idunnowhy.

poke chewin for a rebubub

Gabe wrote:

I feel like ranking it, idunnowhy.

poke chewin for a rebubub

*still waiting*

EDIT:

Gabe wrote:

rebubub

before I rank it, I want a screenshot where somebody S or SS the Another (;

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