Kenssai wrote:

M4M request :3!!

[Easy]
00:46:890 (3) - to 00:46:707 ?
00:47:256 (1) - start at 00:47:073 to 00:47:622
00:55:305 (2) - delete slider, replace it by a circle and put it at 00:55:487
00:56:036 (3) - start it at 00:55:853 to 00:56:402
00:58:597 (2) - replace by slider 00:58:231 to 00:58:597
01:10:305 (2) - delete, move 01:10:670 (1) to 01:09:939 to 01:11:036, reverse the slider at 01:10:487
01:51:646 (1,2,3,4) - move it at 01:51:463
02:00:426 (1) - start at 02:00:244 + same length
02:02:987 (3,1) - start at 02:02:805
02:14:695 (2,1) - start at 02:14:512
02:16:341 (2,1) - too close, might scare beginner
02:22:195 (1) - start at 02:22:012 to 02:22:744
02:23:109 (2) - make it a cicle at that time
02:23:841 (1) - no reverse and start it at 02:23:475 to 02:24:573
02:26:768 (1) - start it at 02:26:585 to 02:26:951
02:27:500 (2) - delete circle and put a slider instead that start at 02:27:317 to 02:27:683
02:54:207 (2) - end at 02:54:939
03:27:866 (2,1) - start it at 03:27:683
03:51:280 (3,1) - start it at 03:51:097

sorry, no change in Easy

[Normal]
00:20:914 (1) - make it one tick longer i prefer to stop on the clap
00:23:109 - add a circle i'd rather avoid making this harder
00:50:914 (2) - put it at 00:50:731 i'm gonna keep as is
01:02:622 (2) - put it at 01:02:439 ^
01:45:061 (3) - no reverse, end at 01:45:426 ^
02:14:329 (3) - change to to a slider start at 02:14:146 to 02:14:512 ^
02:57:500 (2) - make it one tick longer i want to end the slider on the clap
03:08:475 (2) - change to a normal slider start at 03:08:292 to 03:08:658 i did this so it'd be easier to hitsound :3
03:20:183 (2) - change it to a slider that start at 03:20:000 to 03:20:366 ^
03:31:890 (2) - change it to a slider that start at 03:31:707 to 03:32:073 ^

no change in Normal

[Hard]
00:19:451 (1,2,3,4) - could make a jump i prefer anti-jumps
00:23:292 (1) - reverse slider, it will have the same length sure
01:35:183 (4) - replace the start and end by circle fine as is
01:35:548 (1,2,3,4) - make a jump same reason as last time
01:38:292 (5) - make this 2 tick longer so delete this 01:38:658 (1) i'd be missing some beats then
01:47:256 (1,2,3,4) - make a jump same reason as above
01:50:000 (5) - make this 2 tick longer so delete this 01:50:366 (1) same reason as above
01:52:926 (6) - make this 2 tick longer so delete this 01:53:292 (1) ^
01:53:475 (2) - delete this and use the 3 tick for 3 circles fine as is
02:17:987 (1) - no reverse, so slider will be halfed and add 4 circles afterit follows the music nicely as it is
02:54:481 - add circle here i don't hear anything to map there
02:54:664 - ^ ^
03:59:786 (5) - replace slider by 3 circles i prefer my way
04:02:896 - add circle here i don't hear anything to map here
03:36:189 - ^ ^
04:02:622 (4) - replace slider by 3 prefer as is circles

[Insane]
00:33:536 (4) - stop it at 00:33:719 and add a circle here 00:33:902 i think its fine as is because its not that significant of a sound and it'd match the vocals better
00:53:658 - add another circle here~ there's no sound to support a circle there
01:09:207 (6) and 01:09:390 (7) - switch places I feel like its fine as is
01:42:408 - add circle here i don't hear any sounds to map here either
03:01:890 (6) - make it shorter to 03:02:073 same as 00:33:536
03:02:256 - add a circle
03:02:622 (8) and 03:02:987 (1) - switch place fine as is

No change here either

Good luck for ranking it xD

Naitoshi wrote:

Yo dude, you asked me for a nazi. Ask and ye shall receive... but you forgot that I'm still bad at modding So pretty much all of this is aesthetics... (which I kinda feel bad for buuuut w/e)

[Easy]
00:22:195 (2) - I'm not sure if this was meant to be a blanket or not, but you should make it one (approach circle for guidance)

Bad example box

00:24:939 (2,1) - You could curve one more to look like it blankets 2

this is also a bad example cause I lazy

If you use this example then you will have to adjust other things to keep ds constant.

00:42:683 (2,3) - this blanket is off by 2 pixles. you could remove grid snap and set the bottom anchor on 2 to 297 , 144

SPOILER

00:58:963 (3) - make this less curved for a better blanket

01:19:268 (1) - this isn't symmetrical, move the red tick closer to the slider head. Even if it was intentional, it'd probably look better if it was symmetrical

01:35:548 (2,1) - so close but not quite :<

01:52:378 (2,4) - this overlapping doesn't look great

02:00:426 (1) - red just a tiny bit closer to slider head

02:33:353 (2) - a bit less curved for a better blanket

02:35:366 (1) - why finish this slider end?

02:44:329 (1,2) - a bit closer? you'd only have to move 2's middle anchor

eeex

02:49:817 (3,1) - lol by one pixel I won't ask you to change this, just putting out this extreme super nazi

02:58:963 (1) - maybe have this a bit higher so it doesn't overlap with 02:57:134 (2) - this is noticeable in game

03:24:573 (2,1) - eh this just looks a bit shloppy is all

03:27:866 (2,1) - fix blanketo

03:47:073 (2,1) - maybe not have these overlap?? somehow?

03:51:280 (3,1) - also a bit off

03:55:670 (2,3) - less curved for a better blanket

annd ohnnnn to the next diff

[Normal]
00:07:744 (3,4) - less curvature for a better blanket

00:14:329 (5,1) - lol it's ok, slider ends never stack properly cause gay =-= I hate this problem

00:20:914 (1,3) - just a bit off. Move 1's lower anchor to the left just a tinnssie bit like one px

00:39:756 (1,2) - probably intentional, buut it could be a blanket if you wanted it to be

00:47:987 (3,2) - ohhh more curvature for a better blanket

more bad examples from the wizard of band examples

01:19:268 - maybe you could add a circle here and then have the spinner go right after it? I dunno I feel that it should be clicked

01:49:634 (2,3) - just a bit off, use approach circle for guidance

02:02:805 (1,3) - I can't tell if these were meant to be or not. But you could :>

02:07:195 (3,1) - same with these. for this one then the 3 could be more curved for a better blanket

02:28:048 (1) - more curved for a better blanket

OMG THIS IS THE SH*TTIEST EXAMPLE SO FAR

02:53:109 (1,3) - these overlap a bit

02:58:048 (3) - you could make sliders like these less lop-sided if ya know what I mean:

they could look a bit better is all

03:36:280 (3) - less curved for better blanket on slider end

These examples keep getting worse

04:00:244 (4,1,2,1) - these overlaps could be confusing for players to play and they don't look to great imo... you should space these sliders out

[Hard]
00:07:012 (2,3) - It's not a blanket right now but it could be

eh still bad ex

00:11:219 (1,2,3,4) - Try to have even spaced circles? It looks kinda shloopy

not bad example

00:12:866 (2,3) - blanket a bit off, use 3 approach circle for guidance

00:29:695 (1,2) - ^ same

rawr

00:43:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use ds to space these evenly, looks kinda shlooepmdk

00:51:463 (4,5) - fix blanket approachie for guidie

00:52:195 (1,5) - this is a weird overlap, not asking you to fix it, just throwing it out there

00:54:024 (2,3) - off blanket, use slider follow circle for guidance

Randy pls

00:57:317 (2,3) - fixie fixie

01:00:244 (3,4) - this too if it's suppose to be one

02:21:829 (2,3) - notable one. use approachie

02:29:695 (1,2,1,2,1) - I'm not sure if this is rankable or not @-@ ... don't mind me actually. it plays fine

02:41:402 (1,2) - Usssseeeee the slider follow circle for guidance

02:47:256 (2,3) - how about copy and paste one of these for the other one? It looks weird that they're different sliders

rawr

03:26:585 (3,4) - probably wasn't meant to be a blanket, but could be

03:52:926 (5,6) - fixie

04:01:890 (2) - nice blanket

onnn to the first diff I saw oeeoeopeaeo

[Knottsane]
00:07:561 (4,5) - could be better but close enough...

00:23:841 (1) - adjust this to blanket 00:23:109 (4) - better

00:31:158 (2,3,4,5) - you probably won't change this: just pointing out that they aren't parallel

00:46:707 (8,1) - weird overlap

00:52:378 (7,8,9,1) - yes these could all be better too

00:52:378 (7,9) - and btw these don't stack

01:19:817 (2,3,4) - really Randy? I smiley face? too pro 4 me

01:21:463 (1,4) - overlapss

01:50:183 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is confusing to play mostly because of the 2 is stacked with the slider end of 5... you can fix this like this

ctrl g all the circasldie

if you use this example, you'll have to adjust the other thing after 5 so it isn't such a big jump

02:14:878 (6,1) - fixie, almost

02:28:048 (4,2) - overlap, could place 2 and the stream lower to avoid it

03:08:658 (3,4,5) - just throwing this overlap out dere too

03:43:780 (6,1) - fix blanket

04:04:634 (5,1) - ^ if meant to be



whewww obviously I didn't cover alllll of the blankets but that was a good sum of them. I think you should take the time to go over your entire mapset and just nazi it too. If you have questions ask me in game o3o I'll probably point out some other things I didn't cover cause... I wasn't sure of myself?

Knotts wrote:

Fixed everything except for the things that I didn't fix.

No Dap wrote:

IRC mod

SPOILER

11:32 Knotts: yo, im ready for that mod
11:32 No Dap: give me a second
11:41 No Dap: can you np
11:41 *Knotts is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/396366 Tommy heavenly6 - PAPERMOON]
11:44 No Dap: can just irc mod
11:44 No Dap: i don't see a lot
11:44 Knotts: alright sure
11:44 No Dap: 00:17:987 (1,2) - something happened here
11:45 No Dap: spacing 
11:46 Knotts: duno how that happened. fixed
11:47 No Dap: 00:23:841 (1) - shouldn't this end on red tick?
11:47 No Dap: oh nvm
11:47 No Dap: 00:29:329 (3) - clap ?
11:47 Knotts: added
11:49 No Dap: 01:03:170 (1) - is this NC pattern change on purpose?
11:49 Knotts: oh, just changed it right now :3
11:50 No Dap: you deleted it?
11:50 Knotts: changed the NCs around
11:50 No Dap: I would keep the same pattern
11:50 No Dap: which seems to be every 2 tanza
11:50 No Dap: like 00:57:317 (1,2,3,4) - 
11:51 No Dap: 00:54:390 (1) - thi well
11:51 No Dap: your kiai NC seems a bit inconsistent
11:51 No Dap: they are consistent in the kiai but why the change?
11:52 No Dap: combos are too short and it's making kiai easier
11:52 Knotts: yeah idk, i have no idea how to combo
11:52 No Dap: do you see big white ticks
11:52 No Dap: on the timeline
11:53 No Dap: http://puu.sh/8hEr2.jpg this is your NC pattern
11:53 No Dap: every 2 big white tick NC
11:53 No Dap: 00:38:475 (1,2,3) - 
11:53 No Dap: 00:41:402 (1,2,3) - 
11:53 No Dap: all before until kiai
11:54 Knotts: so i was doing it right there ^?
11:54 No Dap: yeah
11:55 No Dap: 00:50:183 (1,2,3,4) - this was fine
11:55 No Dap: but
11:55 No Dap: 00:53:841 (2,1) - from here
11:55 No Dap: evreything changed
11:55 No Dap: 00:56:036 (3) - NC should start here
11:55 No Dap: not 00:54:390 (1) - 
11:55 No Dap: 00:58:963 (3) - same reason
11:55 No Dap: no nc here 00:57:317 (1) - 
11:56 No Dap: its not a big deal but you're giving way too much HP for plyaers
11:56 Knotts: alright so im basically counting any white ticks and putting a NC on the 9th one
11:56 No Dap: and they are too short
11:56 No Dap: yes
11:57 Knotts: what about 01:13:597 (1,2,3)  - that kinda breaks the pattern
11:58 Knotts: do i just restart my count from 01:17:622 (1) 
11:58 No Dap: yeah
11:58 No Dap: 01:17:622 (1) - 
11:59 No Dap: 01:33:719 (3) - clap?
11:59 No Dap: or was this intentional
12:00 Knotts: sometimes osu deletes my hitsounds when i update :3
12:00 No Dap: lol
12:01 No Dap: 01:51:097 (4,1) - do you have any other stacked notes?
12:02 Knotts: nope zzz
12:02 No Dap: then it's probably a good idea not to have any
12:03 No Dap: you're already using lots of notes that start on red tick (because of music :3) so it's already pretty complex for beginners
12:03 No Dap: id prefer if you don't stack
12:15 Knotts: alright i pretty much fixed all the comboing in Easy
12:16 No Dap: 02:04:634 (2) - shouldn't there be clap on end
12:16 No Dap: feels really empty
12:17 Knotts: sounds weird with a clap on the end though
12:18 No Dap: probably becuase vocal starts on02:05:548 -  
12:18 No Dap: 02:05:731 - but i do hear clap on the bgm
12:19 Knotts: well if you say so i guess ill put it 
12:20 No Dap: 02:16:341 (2) - this reverse 
12:20 No Dap: makes 1/2 on02:16:341 (2) - 02:16:341 (2) - 
12:20 No Dap: wot
12:20 No Dap: 02:17:805 - 02:17:987 - 
12:20 No Dap: how about this http://puu.sh/8hGfI.jpg
12:20 No Dap: 02:17:622 - vocal ends here also
12:22 Knotts: what do i do about 02:16:341 (1)  - just remove the repeat?
12:22 No Dap: remove repeat
12:22 No Dap: 02:17:622 - and add a circle
12:23 No Dap: you might have to tweak this whole part a little 
12:23 No Dap: starting 02:15:061 (1) - here i guess
12:25 Knotts: fixed
12:26 No Dap: 03:35:366 (1) - le spacing
12:27 No Dap: other than that easy seems god
12:27 No Dap: good
12:28 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/388445 Tommy heavenly6 - PAPERMOON [Normal]]
12:28 No Dap: let me know when youre ready
12:28 Knotts: ready
12:29 No Dap: 00:26:585 (2) - spacing
12:29 Knotts: fixed
12:29 No Dap: 00:29:695 (1,2,3) - this part sounds off to me
12:30 No Dap: http://puu.sh/8hGTo.jpg i find this more fitting
12:30 No Dap: 00:30:609 - because this drum sounds strong to me 00:30:609 - 
12:36 Knotts: well i g2g out to eat.. again. just post this and anything else you want on thread
12:36 No Dap: ok

[Normal]

1. 00:42:683 (2) - check spacing here fixed previously
2. 02:11:219 (3) - this clap on tail doesn't sound very fitting removed
3. 02:15:975 (1) - check spacing here fixed
4. 02:45:792 (3) - consider adding finish on tail. as it is clearly in the bgm added
5. 02:55:670 (1) - this shouldn't be a big deal, but why the inconsistent spacing? adjusted
6. 03:42:134 (3) - I don't see why you would start this slider here. starting 03:41:951 - would follow vocal more.
   I would do this done
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 03:43:414 (2) - this clap on tail doesn't sound fitting removed
8. 03:48:353 (4) - forgot clap? oops

[Hard]

1. Seems pretty challenging. Consider reducing HP by 1 tick for smoother play changed this too many times; im just gonna stick to 6 until a BAT tells me otherwise
2. 00:19:451 (1,2,3,4) - I personally don't think this is a good place to put anti jump. as you are ignoring all those drums in the music. But it's your choice keeping for now. i like me some anti jumps
3. 00:23:292 (1) - missing clap on head fixed
4. 00:25:305 (2) - clap doesn't sound good here removed
5. 00:39:756 (2,3,4) - this flow is awkward. I'd move 00:40:305 (3) - like this for better flow mehh i think its fine but i think i tweaked it a little. i dont remember what i had before lol.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:00:975 (5) - clap doesn't sound good here removed
7. 01:01:890 (1,2) - this jump seems a bit harsh for a hard diff i don't think 2.0x DS is too big a jump for a hard but i'll reduce it if it comes up again
8. 01:13:597 (1) - to 01:17:987 (3) - , I think if you put clap on every white tick, it would follow music better as you did on all other diffs done
9. 01:23:109 - no need to start break here. just start it here 01:22:378 - and if you did this on any other diff consider fixing them too fixed on Hard and Normal
10. 01:35:548 (1,2,3,4) - same as i pointed out on 00:19:451 (1,2,3,4) - same
11. 01:47:256 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
12. 01:58:231 (2) - delete clap? ok
13. 02:31:890 (1,2,3) - add clap? ^
14. 02:34:634 (4) - you should add clap on tail because it sounds very weird only having them on 02:34:908 (5) - ^
15. 03:02:439 (5) - clap on tail as music? ^
16. 03:32:439 (4) - this clap on tail sound wierd removed
17. 03:56:768 - 03:56:951 - 03:57:134 - add clap? done
18. 03:58:231 (7) - there should be clap according to music i added a clap and finish
19. 04:07:926 (7,8,9) - consider reducing spacing a bit here. They seem too harsh for an ending reduced

[Insane]

1. OD 8 ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
2. 00:43:231 (4) - this stacked note feels really weird and also giving bad flow. I'd prefer if you just stack on 00:42:683 (3) - tail i did something else, hopefully i didn't make it worse.
3. 00:44:146 (9) - delete clap? sounds wierd i have a clap on 00:43:963 (9) and they have identical sounds so it'd only make sense to have a clap on both
4. 00:51:097 (3) - forgot clap on tail oops
5. 00:54:024 (3,4) - This would be better to play and more intuitive if you let players click on vocal like this. done
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:54:756 (6,7) - ^ ^
7. 01:12:500 (7,8) - flow here seems a bit awkward. If you agree, don't hesitate to rearrange them i like it as it is now but i fixed that ugly blanket to something less ugly.
8. 01:15:975 (6) - clap missing according to 02:32:073 - yup
9. 02:14:878 (6,1) - stack nazi. stack on 02:13:414 (1) - ? it wasnt meant to be a stack but i guess it is now
10. 02:31:158 (5) - clap missing on tail fixed
11. 02:34:634 (3) - consider adding clap here also. as i said in hard diff 02:34:634 (4) - okie

Good luck

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey~ From my modding queue

Easy

1- 00:03:170 (1) - Try to curve this a bit more. Should be going right into 2 but it's missing it for just a bit adjusted
2- 00:14:878 (1,2,3) - try to have 00:14:878 (1) blanketing 00:16:524 (2), if you find a way to do it without ruining the structure with 00:16:890 (3). that's what i was thinking at first but i couldnt find a way but after looking at it again i easily did it :3
3- Maybe remove NC from 00:53:109 (1) and put it on 00:54:390 (3), then remove NC on 00:56:036 (1) i'm having a NC every two stanzas so i'm gonna keep as is to keep my comboing consistent (unless i'm doing it wrong).
4- 01:48:719 (1) - Could be a bit better curved. adjusted a little
5- 02:17:987 (3) - invert concavity? i think this is fine as it is
6- 03:03:170 (2) - Since there's no real pattern involved with 03:03:170 (2), improve this curve into 03:04:085 (3) adjusted

Probably one of the smallest mods on an Easy difficulty I've done so far. Good job.

Normal

1- 00:02:622 (5) - Improve curve adjusted
2- 00:04:817 (3) - ^ on both i think these are fine
3- 00:26:036 (4) - ^ ^
4- 00:28:231 (3) - ^ ^
5- 00:56:036 (1) - ^ too curved. since 00:55:670 (5) is there, you'll have to change 00:56:036 (1) so that the blanket stays and the curve is fixed. Since 00:56:951 (2,3) could be better as well, do this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1537439. Not perfect, but best possible solution. adjusted
6- 01:10:122 (5) - lower slider direction and it'll be just fine i think i did what you were asking me to do
7- 01:40:487 (2) - just a liiiitle bit more curved adjusted
8- 02:03:353 (1,2) - Rotate 02:03:353 (1) clockwise, readjust 02:04:085 (2) and rotate it clockwise as well, and you'll keep the 2-slider pattern and have 02:04:085 (2) going into 02:04:634 (3) just fine. i think its fine but next time can you post a screenshot so i can see what you were envisioning? it'd be really helpful!
9- 02:16:341 (2) - Oops, too curved. i think it flows fine even curved like this
10- 03:45:792 (1) - could be a bit more curved. adjusted a little

Just small things, overall it's a great difficulty as well.

Great song, great maps~ Good luck, and have a sparkling star~

Mao wrote:

Req by PM, sorry for the delay :c

1. Unrankable Issue
2. Recommended to fix
3. Highly Suggested
4. Suggestion
5. Just my own opinion / Comment

General

1. Delete the .osb file from your folder.

Easy

1. 00:04:085 (2,3,4) - I'd suggest you mapping this like you did for 00:09:939 (2,3) - . This sounds a lot better! did something similar i think
2. 00:53:841 (2,3) - The polarity issue beteen these could easily be fixed if you map it like: done
   
   Screenshot

   
3. The overall map is okay to me even though I don't really like your timeline. I don't know, it just uses so much red tick stuff which is due to the song but you've already used a lot of red ticks in your Normal and this easy contains just a few less. You can try to avoid mapping that many red ticks. Lemme take an example:
   01:11:951 (3) - If you lsiten to the music you can hear that the vocals for example are pretty strong on the previous white tick. So we can map the strong vocals on this one and ignore them at the following red tick.
   
   Screenshot

   
   Another thing bothering me is that you really seem to love S-Shaped Sliders but they always look a bit messy in your map, so I'll give you a little advice how to make S-Sliders look good C:
   
   Screenshot

   
   Legend to the above Screenshot

   Green - try to keep these lines parallel
   Pink - About the same distance from the borders
   Brown - The middle line should go through the slider tick (you have to estimate it's location if it isn't there)
   Purple - Try to keep the last anchor point on the centre of the slider's tail

Normal

1. 00:21:829 (2) - I actually missed this note due to it being on the red tick. It felt kinda weird to me, probably because it's a polarity issue. Maybe something as shown in the screenshot below could help. done
   
   Screenshot

   
2. 00:26:585 (1) - 1,30 DS far away from the previous one? o-o Consider changing this. It looks and palys a bit weird due to the rest having a consistent spacing. oops, fixed
3. 01:37:926 (2,3) - The stack here feels a bit weird here. You always stacked notes that were 1/2, so it might confuse newer players to have a 1/1 stack here. changed
4. 02:15:975 (1) - Same as I said before. I find this a bit weird to hit, so it'd suggest you placing a 1/2 slider from the previous white tick to this red tick. ^
5. 02:18:536 (5) - Shorten this to the red tick since the vocals on the red tick are really strong. There wont be any polarity issues either. Same goes for 02:19:268 (1) - done
   
   Screenshot

   
6. 03:05:000 (6) - Unneeded inherited section *o* deleted
7. 03:14:512 (2) - +0,05 to your usual spacing. Don't you think it's a bit high spaced? Consider adjusting the spacing here a bit for better readability for newer palyers. reduced spacing
8. 03:23:292 (2) - Why is the spacing to the next object so low? Might be confusing for newer players. oops, fixed
9. 03:41:951 (4) - Move this to 199|165 to get a kind of circular movement for better flow C: done
10. Seems nice to me. I don't like having 1/1 and 1/2 stacks in one and the same Normal since it can confuse some newbies but well, keep it if you want.

Hard

1. I don't know, HP6 is a bit High. I'd suggest you to decrease it by one because it is such an easy diff :c too many suggested changes at this. im just going to keep it at 6 until a BAT tells me otherwise
2. 00:04:634 (4) - Try to keep the spacing consistent here. A jump from the previous tick over to here doesn't really fit to me especially since the following big white tick has a way bigger emphasis, so why aren't the distances consistent here? there isn't a jump here
3. 00:11:219 (7,8,9,10) - A real square would increase the look of this pattern a lot since these look a bit as you tried to do a square but failed. Use "Create Polygon Circles".
4. 00:16:341 (4) - Again this unconsistent spacing. I've also got a little suggestion here in terms of placement: adjusted
   
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5. 00:33:536 (3,4) - These objects are 1/2 and aren't stacked properly. Looks pretty messed up in play.fixed
6. 00:58:963 (1) - Move to something about 317|25, make some adjustements and see, it will be an equal triangle C: done
7. 01:45:792 (1) - Why does this use the old slider algorithm? idk but i fixed
8. 02:34:634 (7,8) - The transition here confused me a bit in playtest. Clicking on the blue tick feels a bit unnatural to me here since the emphasis on the white tick is stronger than on the blue one. Consider changing the timeline as I show in the screenshot below. done
   
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9. 02:43:414 (4) - The gaps between the objects are almost the same but timeline based the previous is 1/2 and the following is 1/1. I thought the next object was 1/2 so I was kinda confused after I noticed it was 1/1. Consider making a bigger gap here. i meant for it to kinda play like an anti jump
10. 02:49:817 (8,1) - Make these two parallel. since so many people requested i guess ill finally make them parallel
11. 03:36:829 (10,11,1) - These aren't stacked properly. Especially for 1/4 it's really weird x-x
12. 03:55:122 (2,3,4) - This looks a bit messy due to 3 completely different slider shapes trying to look like being rotated. How about using one slider rotated instead of 3 different sliders? done
13. 03:59:786 (9) - Stack issue to the following object is pretty weird with 1/4 :C fixed
14. There are loads of parts that I wasn't able to enjoy while playing due to some messed up spacing. In normal spacing patterns there is a variation from +-0,10 DS which shouldn't be the case for these patterns. I mean it's a Hard and jumps are okay, but distance variation like this looks really messy and random to me since I didn't really found out about a scheme. There were the same parts mapped with completely different spacing, varying the spacing even in curves of circles. Well I guess it's just not my taste :/

Insane

1. 00:18:536 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Is it just me or didn't you use "Create Polygon Circles" here? If you didn't consider using it! only 00:18:719 (3,4,5,6,7) - is supposed to be a pentagon and it looks fine to me
2. 00:28:963 (8) - This slider looks kinda like a ball. Consider changing the strack as I show in the screenshot below for better aesthetics. adjusted a little
   
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3. 00:34:085 (5,6,7) - The variation of Spacing here compared to 00:33:170 (2,3) - stood out to me a lot while playing. I don't really see an increase in the music that tells you to vary the spacing here. Maybe change it for consitency. i reduced the spacing a little
4. 00:36:646 - According to your usual clap pattern there should be a clap here, don't you think so? i don't use a clap pattern, i just put one whenever i hear one and i dont hear one there
5. 01:03:719 (7,8) - These are basically almost the same as 00:52:012 (5,6,7) - , so why didn't you map it like this? If you take a look at 01:03:719 (7) - you can hear that the vocals are really strong on the red tick the slider ends on. So in my opinion it would be better if you map it with a circle, as you did before. i'm gonna keep as is for not but i guess if someone brings it up again i'll change it. i dont think its too necessary to copy other sections on Insanes too often.
6. 01:36:280 (8,9) - These sliders don't really fit each other to me because the one is curved a lot as the other is almost straight. I'd suggest you to replace 9 with a rotated version of 8 or you just simply curve 9 a bit more. done
7. 02:35:366 (1) - This is a nice slider but maybe it could be even better giving the first part which is straight by now a little curve. done
8. 02:42:866 (4,5) - The spacing here felt a bit weird to me due to the 5 being so close to 4. Using a DS from 1,25 or so as you did before could work here as well.
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9. 02:51:829 (5,7) - As much as I can see you've spaced these 2 like a stream, but why didn't you use the same spacing for 02:52:561 (1) - ? It would make the transition look a lot better and cleaner here. it looks the same to me. if you could provide a screenshot of what you were thinking of i'd appreciate it
10. 03:09:390 (5) - The spacing here isn't constant with the others! You've used 0,80 DS for 1/4 stuff like this. Why did you use 0,40 here? Consider changing it to 0,80.
11. 03:25:305 (1) - ^
12. 03:28:780 (3) - Replacing this with a 120° rotated version of 03:28:414 (2) - could make a better trnasition here if you place it a bit higher than the old one for a kind of circular movement C:
    
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13. 03:35:183 (4) - Maybe you can stack this with 03:33:719 (8) - :c
14. 03:59:512 (8,9,10,11) - Spacing these all with 0,80 would make the part more consistent since it's all 1/4 it should be spaced the same way! spaced
15. Nice Stream Shapes and overall flow! Some spacing is a bit unconsitent and feels a bit random to me though :c

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3

• here's my mod !!
  
  General
  
  so, lets take conclusion for all of your map.
  
  1. slightly improve hitsound, it makes map better than just a silent hit following song rhytm.
  2. at some point, you seems slightly not following the song.

CDFA wrote:

Dank.

Insane:
00:02:439 (1) - It's sort of weird how this end on the blue tick, but it'd be weird to start the stream on the blue tick too. weird indeed
00:07:744 (5) - This would probably be better being more cohesive with the previous notes in the combo, rather than just being a random curve slider. yeah i was waiting for someone to tell me this sucked. changed.
00:24:939 (4) - Remove the clap since it doesn't go with the timing? idk how that got there. removed
00:39:207 (4) - It might be cool to reimagine this so it's not so boxy. It's a tight curve for the wrist to make and looks and plays better if it's not overlapping with (1) curved it up and no overlap
00:44:878 (2,3,4,5) - This is cool and all but like what purpose does it have? It may be me being stuck in 2012, but pointless jumps are sort of odd, especially for a transitional unhitsounded area. get with the time pls, its 2014... changed T_T
01:03:170 (4,5,6) - This sort of bugs me because you're following the drums here, but there's no real drum action, but (6) is so far away from (5). It's sort of unfitting. ok
01:15:244 (6) - Same as before, random jump in a pretty not so impactful area (Also it's not centered with the two diagonal lines ) i reduced the spacing a bit so it doesn't play like a jump. i think.
From this point onward, just gonna skip making this post super huge and i'll say that jumps should have a purpose. "Making it harder" isn't really a valid excuse ;w;.
01:30:975 (1) - This is a cool slider but (2) has no coherence to it. If this was going in sort of a path, this would be fine, but they're just begging to be made parallel.
01:51:463 (1) - Parallell ;w; i actually prefer to have this not parallel because it looks/flows cool to me.
02:17:987 (1) - Sort of bugs me because directionally I want to go to the left, but I'm jerked both to the right and down, neither of which I naturally want to go to. idk how the slider got curved but i made it parallel instead
02:36:463 - Go ahead and map this ;w;. I know that it's cool to have breaks and all and I totally agree but like it just is sort of a weird place to put it. i thought it was a pretty solid spot to put a break but i guess not. i guess my maps not that hard so no one needs a break anyways.
03:01:158 (7) - Even out the spacing go go go ;w; them ghost be moving my stuff.
03:09:024 (4) - No fun overlap ;www; i think its fun but i guess if someone else tells me it sucks i'll change it
03:22:012 (10) - ;W; i'm sorry T_T
03:28:780 (3) - Raise this up so (2) and this are making a U shape

Hard:
00:19:451 (1,2,3,4) - This would actually be pretty cool except that you've already established a sort of flowy drum-based kind of thing here, so this just feels out of place.
00:53:109 (1) - I'm actually completely fine with the whole diamond pattern, just center this so it looks pretty ;w; ok done
Second chorus is suspiciously copy-paste ;w;. but i didn't copy paste anything T_T
03:09:024 (5) - its ok make the triangle u can do it i think i did it but who knows.
03:30:426 (7) - ^ ^
03:44:695 (5) - Even out this spacing fixerino

Normal:
Huge diff jump ;w; dont say this pls. i don't want to remap
Not much specific

Easy:
01:53:841 (4) - Make these matchsies ;w; done

1. 00:35:000 (3,2) - move to x: 288, y:160
2. 01:40:670 (3,1) - not sure about this

1. 00:38:475 (1,2) - hard for beginner? this is the only time you use this overlay pattern in the whole song
2. 02:20:914 (3,4,1) - looks nice but can be confusing

1. 01:41:951 (5,1, 2) - use Ctrl+H for slider 1 (and other objects as needed) and stack circle 2 to previous circles?
2. 01:57:500 (1,4) - make this flow better
3. 02:30:426 (1) - Ctrl+G here

1. Everything looks OK!

Project Railgun wrote:

hello i am railgun

[Easy]

1. 00:35:000 (3,2) - move to x: 288, y:160 moved to stack properly
2. 01:40:670 (3,1) - not sure about this should be fine

[Normal]

1. 00:38:475 (1,2) - hard for beginner? this is the only time you use this overlay pattern in the whole song i'll change it if it comes up again
2. 02:20:914 (3,4,1) - looks nice but can be confusing ^

[Hard]

1. 01:41:951 (5,1, 2) - use Ctrl+H for slider 1 (and other objects as needed) and stack circle 2 to previous circles? fixed my own way
2. 01:57:500 (1,4) - make this flow better flows fine
3. 02:30:426 (1) - Ctrl+G here that'd make the flow really bad to play

[Insane]

1. Everything looks OK!

Good luck~

[Colours]
Combo1 : 149,74,55
Combo2 : 202,180,119
Combo3 : 230,115,0
Combo4 : 0,145,145 

waxman wrote:

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[Insane]

00:27:683 (4,5) - too far. 00:27:683 (4) - x:412 y:52 i think this is fine for now
00:30:426 (3,4) - take more distance. like 00:29:695 (1,2,3) done
00:47:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - SD 1.2x? fixed a little
01:15:792 (9,10) - take more distance.
01:36:097 (7,8) - miss spacing? take more distance increased

01:50:183 (6) - NC. because longest white line is here. im following a pattern of a NC every 2 stanzas
01:51:097 (11) - NC ^
01:51:463 (1) - remove NC^
02:04:634 (5) - NC. because SD of 02:04:634 (5,6,7) is different from 02:03:353 (1,2,3,4). and you added Finish on the beginning of 02:04:634 (5) i think you're talking about SV? if you are they have the same SV
02:08:109 (5) - NC? you know ^
02:14:512 (8) - x:168 y:120. Those spacing will be fine. cuz shape of 02:13:414 (4,5,6,7,8) is strange. instead i stacked on other circle
02:28:048 (4) - stack on 02:26:585 (10)? The end position of 02:28:048 (4) will be low. i think its fine as is
02:35:274 (11,1) - I think regular spacing is better. ?
02:59:512 (2,3) - move to x:330 y:310? For avoiding to overlap on 02:58:506 (9,10,11,12,13). i think its fine. the NC colors are really different so its easy to distinguish
03:07:286 (4) - Whistle it doesn't sound like a whistle would fit here
03:07:469 (5) - ^ ^
03:07:652 (6) - ^ ^
03:07:652 (6,1) - I like this one.(High recommended) looks weird to read, gonna keep as is.

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03:08:292 (2,3,4) - like this? i think my way flows better

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03:59:512 (8) - delete Clap? on end of slider
04:04:634 (5,6) - take mode distance changed

[Hard]

00:56:951 (2) - move to x:336 y:304 that'd ruin my jump and stack :3
00:57:866 (4) - move to x:176 y:336 that'd mess up the blanket
01:00:244 (4) - NC. cuz those spacing is different from here, and you added finish too. i dont think its necessary, i'll stick to a NC every 2 stanzas.
01:08:658 (2) - move to x:400 y:192. those spacing will be fine. instead i just stacked this on 8
01:11:951 (4,5) - rather shorter spacing. 1.24x DS isn't really that big of a space
01:12:683 (6) - NC i dont think its needed, it'd ruin my pattern of a NC every 2 stanzas
01:45:061 (7,8) - too close? i think its fine
02:05:548 (8,1) - too far, isn't it? i evened out the spacing
02:56:036 (1,2,3) - like this? no i meant for it to be like this

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I'm done.
GOOD LUCK

1. 00:11:219 (7,8,9) - just a note here see these how you have big sounds on (7),(8) and (9)? it's really anti climatic to make the jumps a smaller distance from (8) to (9)
2. 00:16:524 (6) - i think this flows better if you curved the slider like this instead
   
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3. 00:17:439 (9) - this reverse slider just feels awkward as there is a strong vocal sound on the reverse
4. 03:39:756 (1) - ^ same idea
5. 03:45:609 (1) - ^
6. 03:51:463 (1) - ok in general, just keep finish notes on slider heads or circles >_<
7. 00:25:305 (6,7) - imo, this would look better if you had copied one of the sliders
8. 00:28:963 (8,9) - ^
9. 01:02:805 (3,4) - ^ (also fun fact, if you ctrl g the sliders back and forth it would fix up your slider points )
10. 03:59:512 (8,9) - ^
11. 00:31:158 (5,6) - can you make these more diverse? they're not suppose to be parallel but since they're so close to being parallel it's a bit bothering lol
12. 00:31:890 (7,8) - ^
13. 00:35:914 (3) - ctrl g MIGHT give a bit better flow and less awkward gameplay
14. 01:06:097 (4) - ^
15. 00:36:463 (4,6) - blanket owo?
16. 01:16:341 (1,2) - ^
17. 01:54:573 (1,2) - ^
18. 03:54:573 (1,2) - ^
19. 00:44:146 (11) - reposition this somewhere else as currently, the flow into (1) is not that great
20. 00:44:878 (2,6) - not too important but u could consider stacking
21. 01:03:719 (6,1) - ^
22. 01:01:341 (2,3,4,5) - ahh can u make this curve smoother >_<?
23. 01:07:195 (3,4,5,6) - ^
24. 01:21:646 - tbh i think this should be a circle for better emphasis instead of a slider end
    this also applies to other similar parts
25. 01:23:841 - ^
26. 01:41:951 (6) - i recommend you place it like this, that way it blankets (7) and also kinda gets blanketed by (5)
    
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27. 01:49:817 (5) - this isn't a very good place for a passive slider (strong beat on end)
28. 01:52:378 (4,5) - ^
29. 02:36:097 (3,4) - ^
30. 01:54:207 (4,5,6,7) - for these you can probably replace with 2 1/4 sliders so you can put some indication on the vocals
31. 02:36:097 (3,4) - how bout this? (dw about 4 going off screen, it won't be in game play)
    
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32. 03:41:219 (4,5,6) - keep spacing consistent?
33. 03:57:317 (1,4) - i think you should space out
34. I just realized, you have no breaks o_O i would REALLY strongly recommend you to add one or two

1. 00:01:524 (4,5,6) - how bout one of those triangle pattern things here? (copy one slider rotate 120, repeat once more)
2. 00:05:548 - same as in insane, i feel like a circle would be better for this
3. 00:17:256 (7,8) - again, copy paste one of the sliders, ctrl hj
4. 00:31:890 (8,9) - ^
5. 02:01:707 (5,6) - ^
6. 03:52:195 (2,3) - ^
7. 00:19:451 (1,2,3,4,1) - antijumps here feel a bit awkward >_< i dunno how to explain it. I just don't really feel the music stopping or slowing down you know what i mean?
8. 00:23:841 (1) - ctrl g will give better flow here
9. 01:19:268 - i feel like there needs to be a circle with NC here instead
10. 01:35:548 (1,2,3,4,1) - same as before, also, move (1) up a bit to make a straight line lol
11. 01:47:256 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
12. 02:16:341 (4) - make this first curve with 2 slider points istead- makes blanket better. Also, expose the tail a bit more
13. 03:35:366 (4) - ^
14. 02:33:353 (3,6) - space out?
15. 03:32:439 (4,6) - ^

1. 00:30:426 (2) - move this 1/2 back and extend 00:29:695 (1) - by 1/2
2. 00:48:536 (4,1) - not a good overlap
3. 00:50:731 - with the second kiai, you placed a 1/1 slider here so i think you should do that here too
4. 03:31:707 - ^
   same goes with every other similar place
5. 03:01:890 (1,3) - again, the copy pasting thing
6. 03:03:902 (4) - this may be a bit confusing as there isn't a strong indication in the music for this circle
7. 03:11:585 - map this guitar out pls

1. 00:19:451 (2,1) - u could blanket the head of (1) with the last little curve of (2)?
   
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2. 00:32:622 (1,2) - blanket?
3. 01:50:000 (3) - btw the quality of your waves could be improved. do something more like this
   
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4. 02:54:207 (2) - ^here too
   
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   just improve all your wave sliders a bit lol

Really really good mapset! gogo rank it !

Kibbleru wrote:

m4m i guess owo
lol i ended up modding first

[Insane]

1. 00:11:219 (7,8,9) - just a note here see these how you have big sounds on (7),(8) and (9)? it's really anti climatic to make the jumps a smaller distance from (8) to (9) okie, spaced some more.
2. 00:16:524 (6) - i think this flows better if you curved the slider like this instead yup, changed
   
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3. 00:17:439 (9) - this reverse slider just feels awkward as there is a strong vocal sound on the reverse it doesn't sound awkward to me but ill go ask around about this later.
4. 03:39:756 (1) - ^ same idea yeah i understand this one
5. 03:45:609 (1) - ^ ^
6. 03:51:463 (1) - ok in general, just keep finish notes on slider heads or circles >_< ok
7. 00:25:305 (6,7) - imo, this would look better if you had copied one of the sliders done
8. 00:28:963 (8,9) - ^ ^
9. 01:02:805 (3,4) - ^ (also fun fact, if you ctrl g the sliders back and forth it would fix up your slider points ) ^ (:o didn't know that)
10. 03:59:512 (8,9) - ^ ^
11. 00:31:158 (5,6) - can you make these more diverse? they're not suppose to be parallel but since they're so close to being parallel it's a bit bothering lol fixed it up
12. 00:31:890 (7,8) - ^ ^
13. 00:35:914 (3) - ctrl g MIGHT give a bit better flow and less awkward gameplay doesn't feel awkward to play for me.
14. 01:06:097 (4) - ^ did this one
15. 00:36:463 (4,6) - blanket owo? fixed
16. 01:16:341 (1,2) - ^ this one's not really meant to be a blanket but i fixed it up a little
17. 01:54:573 (1,2) - ^ fixed
18. 03:54:573 (1,2) - ^ ^
19. 00:44:146 (11) - reposition this somewhere else as currently, the flow into (1) is not that great true dat
20. 00:44:878 (2,6) - not too important but u could consider stacking i remapped this part with your other suggestion.
21. 01:03:719 (6,1) - ^ i dont think this one's necessary since a good amount of time's already passed
22. 01:01:341 (2,3,4,5) - ahh can u make this curve smoother >_<? fixed i just learned about convert slider to stream xD
23. 01:07:195 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
24. 01:21:646 - tbh i think this should be a circle for better emphasis instead of a slider end
    this also applies to other similar parts true, true
25. 01:23:841 - ^ ^
26. 01:41:951 (6) - i recommend you place it like this, that way it blankets (7) and also kinda gets blanketed by (5) ok
    
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27. 01:49:817 (5) - this isn't a very good place for a passive slider (strong beat on end) im gonna keep this for now so i can keep my pentagon :3
28. 01:52:378 (4,5) - ^ ehh idk, i like the way it plays and it doesn't sound noticeably bad to me
29. 02:36:097 (3,4) - ^ ^
30. 01:54:207 (4,5,6,7) - for these you can probably replace with 2 1/4 sliders so you can put some indication on the vocals i like it, cool idea though i may have ruined your idea with my crappy placement. i'll probably end up rearranging it later.
31. 02:36:097 (3,4) - how bout this? (dw about 4 going off screen, it won't be in game play) ok
    
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32. 03:41:219 (4,5,6) - keep spacing consistent? fixed
33. 03:57:317 (1,4) - i think you should space out done
34. I just realized, you have no breaks o_O i would REALLY strongly recommend you to add one or two yeah i had a break before but CDFA told me to just map it and now idk what to do anymore.

[Hard]

1. 00:01:524 (4,5,6) - how bout one of those triangle pattern things here? (copy one slider rotate 120, repeat once more) ehh i think its fine as it is, i'm not really sure what you're envisioning though.
2. 00:05:548 - same as in insane, i feel like a circle would be better for this done
3. 00:17:256 (7,8) - again, copy paste one of the sliders, ctrl hj ok
4. 00:31:890 (8,9) - ^ ^
5. 02:01:707 (5,6) - ^ i think this one looks fine
6. 03:52:195 (2,3) - ^ ^
7. 00:19:451 (1,2,3,4,1) - antijumps here feel a bit awkward >_< i dunno how to explain it. I just don't really feel the music stopping or slowing down you know what i mean? i'll keep for now because im too lazy to change but if oneee more person to complains about this ill change.
8. 00:23:841 (1) - ctrl g will give better flow here i guessss
9. 01:19:268 - i feel like there needs to be a circle with NC here instead okay i changed
10. 01:35:548 (1,2,3,4,1) - same as before, also, move (1) up a bit to make a straight line lol ^
11. 01:47:256 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ ^
12. 02:16:341 (4) - make this first curve with 2 slider points istead- makes blanket better. Also, expose the tail a bit more i dont really understand, sorry :3
13. 03:35:366 (4) - ^
14. 02:33:353 (3,6) - space out? ok
15. 03:32:439 (4,6) - ^ ^

[Normal]

1. 00:30:426 (2) - move this 1/2 back and extend 00:29:695 (1) - by 1/2 im guessing you meant forward, fixed.
2. 00:48:536 (4,1) - not a good overlap i dont think you can really notice it in game
3. 00:50:731 - with the second kiai, you placed a 1/1 slider here so i think you should do that here too i did something, idk if its what you wanted though
4. 03:31:707 - ^ ^
   same goes with every other similar place
5. 03:01:890 (1,3) - again, the copy pasting thing fixed
6. 03:03:902 (4) - this may be a bit confusing as there isn't a strong indication in the music for this circle changed
7. 03:11:585 - map this guitar out pls ok

[Easy]

1. 00:19:451 (2,1) - u could blanket the head of (1) with the last little curve of (2)? oh cool, done
   
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2. 00:32:622 (1,2) - blanket? fixed a little
3. 01:50:000 (3) - btw the quality of your waves could be improved. do something more like this yeah i've been struggling with these
   
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4. 02:54:207 (2) - ^here too ^
   
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   just improve all your wave sliders a bit lol i'll go fix them later, i really need to go do hw lol

Really really good mapset! gogo rank it !

take a star or 2

enmyuuuU wrote:

Hello from my queue


[Easy]

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nice

[Normal]

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nice map!
damn me sliderbreaking ._.

[Hard]

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-this diff is really good and well-made

[Insane]

SPOILER

-Flow is ok
-don't have anything to say, but this map need some 'refining' (dunno how to say it, lol) maybe trying some non-mainstream pattern. It's reaaally long and I would got bored in short time.


[Overall]
-really nice hitsounds! I love it!
-good difficulty spreads nice job
-technically this mapset is really good!
-I love this song really I am a big fan of The brilliant Green (=tommy heavenly6)


sorry for being nazi ._. anyway good luck and good job there!

Nada Dabuh wrote:

for normal:
00:18:719 (3) is short try to extend it a bit till 00:19:268 ? i think it's better, because there is a beat that you shouldn't ignore.
Nice work also good luck !! okay i deleted some stuff, extended the slider, and moved stuff around.

Knotts wrote:

Am I supposed to give kudos for this? yolo.

1. 00:11:951 (1,2,3,4) - imo the jump should occur from 3->4 instead of from 1->2 since 4 has a pretty strong beat there and a hitsound to support it. It will also be more consistent with the jump to 00:13:597 (6)
2. 00:19:451 (7) - remove clap? it sounds a bit odd there imo, and when i remove the hitsound, there isn't a particularly strong beat there
3. 00:19:085 (5) - but add clap here? rhythmically this hitsound pattern sounds better to me, up to you though
4. 00:22:195 (5) - remove clap on tail for same reasons?
5. 00:22:926 (8,9) - maybe swap these on timeline? flows better for me, yes i know it's a conventional star pattern e_e
6. 00:25:670 (6) - to make the pattern neater, consider moving this left a bit so it doesn't touch 00:24:939 (4), the overlap is noticeable even with AR9
7. 00:36:463 (4,5,6) - consider making the pattern neater by adjusting like so? http://puu.sh/8BeC6.jpg
8. 00:37:652 (1) - as far as i can hear, there's no sound here, consider removing
9. 01:09:024 (6,7,8,9) - how about this rhythm to better fit the vocals and music? http://puu.sh/8BeRg.jpg
10. 01:11:951 (6,7,8) - this doesn't flow too well for me, it's kind of an abrupt change in direction from CCW to CW, not sure what you can do without touching the next few circles though :/
11. 01:17:256 (3,4,5) - the jump between 3->4 is quite large and doesn't really suit the vocals personally. I think a better jump would be 4->5 since that's when she starts singing again
12. 01:26:219 (3) - for neatness purposes, stack this on the tail of 1?
13. 01:26:402 (4,5) - the angle between these 2 is quite sharp doesn't flow too well, how about http://puu.sh/8Bf8g.jpg
14. 01:27:500 (7,8,9) - i think the pattern would be neater if the spacing was equal here
15. 01:28:963 (3) - consider making this slider curved this way to better lead into the next pattern and imo a straight slider looks pretty severe there LOL http://puu.sh/8Bfe8.jpg
16. 01:30:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - might seem nitpicky, but these aren't parallel
17. 01:34:085 (1) - i think it'd be cool to have a jump here! Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/8BfkZ.jpg
18. 01:37:926 (3) - to better fit vocals, i suggest breaking this up into a 1/2 slider and then a circle
19. 01:38:475 (4) - ah her voice is vibrating here, but i don't think a 1/4 repeat slider fits here. Actually, the drums are pretty strong here, why not map 2 circle jumps?
20. 01:45:426 (7,1) - woah this jump is quite large and it's not even the kiai yet! try this? http://puu.sh/8Bfwf.jpg
21. 01:46:433 (4) - i understand her voice is vibrating here, but i think this part could be much more clearer if you simply removed this note, and if you like, you can put a jump here
22. 01:50:183 (6,7,8,9,10) - this variation of a star pattern plays kinda oddly for me, and the main reason is that 8 has a really strong beat here, which you emphasized using a clap, yet the spacing between 7->8 is smaller than from 9->10. Maybe you can make this a regular star pattern, or do another circle jump pattern?
23. 01:51:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - consider swapping rhythms around to better fit vocals? http://puu.sh/8BfTe.jpg
24. 01:54:573 (1) - move this down & left a bit so it's not so close to the previous slider?
25. 01:56:585 (6,7,8) - i think this rhythm would suit the music better: http://puu.sh/8BfZG.jpg
26. 01:59:786 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this straight stream doesn't flow too well from 6, which is a curved slider, how about following 6's curve and making the stream curve in a circular way? or maybe a wave
27. 02:02:256 (5) - angle the slider left some so it intersects 4 right in the middle? http://puu.sh/8Bg3P.jpg
28. 02:03:170 (7,1) - not sure if it's a good idea to stack 7 and 1, 1 seems pretty powerful and strong, i think it should stand alone
29. 02:05:366 (7) - maybe have this slider blanket 6?
30. 02:08:109 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - just a comment that i think this is a relatively nice looking and flowing jump!
31. 02:20:000 (7) - maybe angle slider this way for better flow? http://puu.sh/8Bgl7.jpg
32. 02:21:646 (3,4) - maybe ctrl+G these two for a zigzag feeling that plays a bit better than what you currently have
33. 02:28:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - for neatness, move these so they don't overlap? http://puu.sh/8Bgwl.jpg the slider in the pic doesn't blanket the previous one, but the rest of the stream does sorry
34. 02:32:439 (1) - the slowdown doesn't really fit the music here even with the long drawn out vocals, it sorta reduces the momentum built up from kiai
35. 02:33:353 (2,3) - i think ctrl+G would improve the flow of this pattern cause it would lead directly from 1, and the back and forth pattern would be super cool
36. 02:35:366 (1) - here as well, don't think this 0.75x SV section fits too well, the constant drums makes this section quite powerful
37. 02:43:963 (6,2) - personally i think these would work better as complete antijumps, meaning stacking directly on the previous sliders ends
38. 02:48:628 (6) - i can see where you're coming from with this 1/4 rhythm, but i don't think there's really a 1/4 beat here justifying this circle
39. 02:50:183 (1) - with such a long slider at low SV, it's important to make the blanket nice and tidy since the player will see it for a longer period of time than usual, here's an example: http://puu.sh/8BgNi.jpg Use the approach circle as a guide when making blankets
40. 03:02:622 (3) - clap on head to match beat in music
41. 03:05:823 (4) - drum finish on tail? would sound pretty cool
42. 03:07:286 (4,5) - drum claps on heads & tails would sound neat here
43. 03:09:024 (4) - maybe separating this from 3 would look nicer, here's a suggestion: http://puu.sh/8Bh2l.jpg oops they're not parallel sorry
44. 03:14:329 (2,3) - try this instead? http://puu.sh/8Bh50.jpg looks nicer imo
45. 03:15:609 (6) - this overlap looks quite messy, how about this? http://puu.sh/8Bh6y.jpg
46. 03:24:664 (1,2,3) - personally i think a regular stream would work better here D:
47. 03:29:329 (5) - place it like this for better flow? (plus X jumps are cool) http://puu.sh/8Bhab.jpg
48. 03:38:292 (4,5,6) - imo the rhythm should be slider-circle-circle to better fit vocals
49. 03:45:426 (11) - clap on head to maintain consistent hitsound pattern

1. 00:07:012 (3) - how about playing up and left a bit for a nice triangle pattern?
2. 00:12:866 (3) - down and left for ^
3. 00:22:195 (4) - blanket previous slider for neatness http://puu.sh/8Cq7p.jpg
4. 00:36:829 (4,5) - swap on timeline to better match vocals & so the strong beat is on slider head instead of tail
5. 00:39:207 (3,4,5) - hmm not sure i understand why you chose to stack these D: imo it would be clearer if you unstacked
6. 01:11:951 (4) - to make this pattern neater, this can blanket 3 a bit better
7. 01:13:231 (10) - clap on head & tail to emphasize strong beat?
8. 01:15:792 (7) - maybe clap on head & tail too?
9. 01:17:256 (4) - maybe angle this so it blankets 5 so the direction change isn't too sharp?
10. 01:42:500 (1,2,3,4) - since drums are soft here, and this is a hard, why not make this a 1/4 repeat slider
11. 01:42:866 (1) - clap on repeat?
12. 01:45:792 (1) - move left a bit for consistent spacing
13. 02:17:530 (7) - having the slider start on a blue tick makes this play a bit oddly for me, how about reducing the slider by one tick and having it move 1/4 over to next red tick
14. 02:25:122 (3,4,5,6) - this diamond looks quite squashed D: maybe even out the spacing some? http://puu.sh/8CqV7.jpg
15. 02:34:817 (7) - add claps on white ticks too? it sounds funny having claps on blue ticks cause it sounds offbeat
16. 02:45:792 (5,6) - remove clap from 5's tail and put on 6's tail instead ot better match the music
17. 02:56:951 (3) - this jump is rather high for the slow part, how about http://puu.sh/8Crrr.jpg
18. 03:03:902 (3) - maybe clap on each repeat of the slider starting on the first white tick?
19. 03:14:512 (3,4) - maybe blanket these better for a neater look D:
20. 03:18:811 (7) - same comment as before
21. 03:30:426 (7) - avoid a messy overlap with 4 by making a diamond with the previous sliders? http://puu.sh/8CrBj.jpg
22. 03:47:622 (5,6) - similar concept here! X jumps are great
23. 03:59:512 (8,9,10,11) - this plays quite oddly for me rhythmically for some reason... ic an't really put my finger on it, but consider just having 1 1/4 repeat slider starting at 03:59:695 leading into 04:00:244 (1)
24. 04:04:817 (6) - remove clap from head for consistency
25. 04:07:926 (7) - hmm i don't really hear a finish or cymbal sound in the bg, remove finish?

1. 00:14:329 (5,1) - a bit minor but not properly stacked
2. 00:24:390 (2,3) - to better fit vocals, try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/8CswY.jpg
3. 00:26:768 (1) - finish on head
4. 00:30:426 (2) - i know you're adding a clap for the beat in the bg, but maybe it'd be more consistent to add it on the tail instead
5. 00:32:622 (1,2) - just a suggestion, why not extend the first slider to where 2 is (so a 5/2 slider) to match vocals?
6. 00:36:097 (3,4) - maybe this rhythm would fit with vocals better: http://puu.sh/8Cw4N.jpg
7. 00:57:317 (3,4) - this pattern looks quite uneven, maybe adjust like so? http://puu.sh/8Cw8x.jpg
8. 01:01:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - hmmm, you may want to make the rhythm here similar to that of 00:50:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6). The notes here are mostly on white ticks, while the pattern in the beginning of kiai were all on red ticks. It'd make your map feel more unified & cohesive if you had a consistent rhythm imo
9. 01:12:866 (5) - maybe add drum finish here?
10. 01:39:390 (4) - since she doesn't start singing at the red tick, i suggest deleting the repeat and moving the slider to next white tick
11. 01:53:109 (5,6) - would fit vocals better imo if these were just 1/1 sliders 1/1 apart
12. 02:07:195 (3) - remove clap from tail, sounds out of place i think
13. 02:09:939 (1) - don't think this NC is needed D:
14. 02:11:951 (4) - NC here instead of at 02:13:048 (1)? It's a new verse & new big white tick
15. 02:15:975 (1) - don't think this NC is necessary, but NC should be added at 02:17:987 (4), since that's when she repeats the chorus again
16. 02:19:268 (1) - if you follow above suggestion, remove NC from here~
17. 02:31:890 (2) - clap here for strong beat?
18. 02:35:366 (3) - seems odd for this slider to be this long, it stops before she stops singing, how about adding a circle here and then a spinner 1/2 beat afterward, ending at 02:37:012?
19. 02:42:866 (4) - this 1/2 slider doesn't fit the music imo, maybe follow the long vocals and either make this a 1/1 slider or have it end where 5 is
20. 02:45:792 (3) - for consnistency, remove clap from head & maybe add at tail
21. 02:59:695 (2) - hmmm just a suggestion, move this circle 1/2 over for vocals
22. 03:00:244 (3) - would fit vocals better to extend this by 1/2, fits better imo
23. 03:01:890 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm here seems quite abrupt and choppy compared to the long and drawn out vocals D: longer sliders would fit this section better personally
24. 03:30:792 - maybe add a note here? the previous slider seems to end at kinda a weird spot imo
25. 04:06:097 (6) - NC here?

1. 00:16:890 (3) - consider extending this slider to next white tick, it feels more complete imo since it lasts as long as the singer's voice
2. 00:32:622 (1) - maybe extend this slider to next red tick for same reason
3. 01:44:695 (3) - extend to white tick for ^ i'll stop mentioning these, since you probably wanted to emphasize the heavy beats in the background. Personally, I think this abundance of 3/2 rhythms might be too confusing for beginners, but your call
4. 02:21:646 (4) - kinda far from 3, move it closer to maintain distance snap :O

Raose wrote:

Hi! o/ You requested a map from either my/Love/dkun/Frostmourne/Oracle/Atrue's userpages!!! Your mod is long overdue sir.

[General]

Err, combo colors seem to be different in the diffs, at least between Easy and the rest. Consider making them the same, especially since you're the one who made all the diffs!
[Insane]

It's not really necessary to NC everytime you start a stream
mostly just flow & neatness issues, you'll learn both as you go along, no worries new mapper! This is a pretty solid set for someone as new as yourself *_* fighto!

eh, guess i should start organizing my mod better

1. 00:11:951 (1,2,3,4) - imo the jump should occur from 3->4 instead of from 1->2 since 4 has a pretty strong beat there and a hitsound to support it. It will also be more consistent with the jump to 00:13:597 (6) fixed
2. 00:19:451 (7) - remove clap? it sounds a bit odd there imo, and when i remove the hitsound, there isn't a particularly strong beat there removed
3. 00:19:085 (5) - but add clap here? rhythmically this hitsound pattern sounds better to me, up to you though i think it'd be strange to delete the other clap because it didn't have a strong beat and add one here since this doesn't have a strong beat either :3
4. 00:22:195 (5) - remove clap on tail for same reasons? ok
5. 00:22:926 (8,9) - maybe swap these on timeline? flows better for me, yes i know it's a conventional star pattern e_e oh yup. flows better
6. 00:25:670 (6) - to make the pattern neater, consider moving this left a bit so it doesn't touch 00:24:939 (4), the overlap is noticeable even with AR9 done
7. 00:36:463 (4,5,6) - consider making the pattern neater by adjusting like so? http://puu.sh/8BeC6.jpg done
8. 00:37:652 (1) - as far as i can hear, there's no sound here, consider removing if i listen to it a 25% i can hear sound there
9. 01:09:024 (6,7,8,9) - how about this rhythm to better fit the vocals and music? http://puu.sh/8BeRg.jpg done
10. 01:11:951 (6,7,8) - this doesn't flow too well for me, it's kind of an abrupt change in direction from CCW to CW, not sure what you can do without touching the next few circles though :/ changed since this was the second time this was brought up
11. 01:17:256 (3,4,5) - the jump between 3->4 is quite large and doesn't really suit the vocals personally. I think a better jump would be 4->5 since that's when she starts singing again fixed i think.
12. 01:26:219 (3) - for neatness purposes, stack this on the tail of 1? done
13. 01:26:402 (4,5) - the angle between these 2 is quite sharp doesn't flow too well, how about http://puu.sh/8Bf8g.jpg i can't tell if that's a straight slider or not because that glare is right in the center but i adjusted my slider.
14. 01:27:500 (7,8,9) - i think the pattern would be neater if the spacing was equal here done
15. 01:28:963 (3) - consider making this slider curved this way to better lead into the next pattern and imo a straight slider looks pretty severe there LOL http://puu.sh/8Bfe8.jpg done
16. 01:30:244 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - might seem nitpicky, but these aren't parallel fixed i think
17. 01:34:085 (1) - i think it'd be cool to have a jump here! Maybe like this? http://puu.sh/8BfkZ.jpg done
18. 01:37:926 (3) - to better fit vocals, i suggest breaking this up into a 1/2 slider and then a circle done
19. 01:38:475 (4) - ah her voice is vibrating here, but i don't think a 1/4 repeat slider fits here. Actually, the drums are pretty strong here, why not map 2 circle jumps? done
20. 01:45:426 (7,1) - woah this jump is quite large and it's not even the kiai yet! try this? http://puu.sh/8Bfwf.jpg done
21. 01:46:433 (4) - i understand her voice is vibrating here, but i think this part could be much more clearer if you simply removed this note, and if you like, you can put a jump here done
22. 01:50:183 (6,7,8,9,10) - this variation of a star pattern plays kinda oddly for me, and the main reason is that 8 has a really strong beat here, which you emphasized using a clap, yet the spacing between 7->8 is smaller than from 9->10. Maybe you can make this a regular star pattern, or do another circle jump pattern? fixed i think
23. 01:51:463 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - consider swapping rhythms around to better fit vocals? http://puu.sh/8BfTe.jpg done
24. 01:54:573 (1) - move this down & left a bit so it's not so close to the previous slider? done
25. 01:56:585 (6,7,8) - i think this rhythm would suit the music better: http://puu.sh/8BfZG.jpg done
26. 01:59:786 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this straight stream doesn't flow too well from 6, which is a curved slider, how about following 6's curve and making the stream curve in a circular way? or maybe a wave ehh i think this is fine but i changed the end slider to be straight.
27. 02:02:256 (5) - angle the slider left some so it intersects 4 right in the middle? http://puu.sh/8Bg3P.jpg
28. 02:03:170 (7,1) - not sure if it's a good idea to stack 7 and 1, 1 seems pretty powerful and strong, i think it should stand alone done
29. 02:05:366 (7) - maybe have this slider blanket 6? ehh i dont think its worth changing it
30. 02:08:109 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - just a comment that i think this is a relatively nice looking and flowing jump! yay
31. 02:20:000 (7) - maybe angle slider this way for better flow? http://puu.sh/8Bgl7.jpg i like it
32. 02:21:646 (3,4) - maybe ctrl+G these two for a zigzag feeling that plays a bit better than what you currently have done
33. 02:28:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - for neatness, move these so they don't overlap? http://puu.sh/8Bgwl.jpg the slider in the pic doesn't blanket the previous one, but the rest of the stream does sorry fixed
34. 02:32:439 (1) - the slowdown doesn't really fit the music here even with the long drawn out vocals, it sorta reduces the momentum built up from kiai fixed
35. 02:33:353 (2,3) - i think ctrl+G would improve the flow of this pattern cause it would lead directly from 1, and the back and forth pattern would be super cool done
36. 02:35:366 (1) - here as well, don't think this 0.75x SV section fits too well, the constant drums makes this section quite powerful okay i changed
37. 02:43:963 (6,2) - personally i think these would work better as complete antijumps, meaning stacking directly on the previous sliders ends done
38. 02:48:628 (6) - i can see where you're coming from with this 1/4 rhythm, but i don't think there's really a 1/4 beat here justifying this circle ok deleted
39. 02:50:183 (1) - with such a long slider at low SV, it's important to make the blanket nice and tidy since the player will see it for a longer period of time than usual, here's an example: http://puu.sh/8BgNi.jpg Use the approach circle as a guide when making blankets fixed, idk what happened to that blanekt lol
40. 03:02:622 (3) - clap on head to match beat in music oops, fixed
41. 03:05:823 (4) - drum finish on tail? would sound pretty cool done
42. 03:07:286 (4,5) - drum claps on heads & tails would sound neat here sure thing.
43. 03:09:024 (4) - maybe separating this from 3 would look nicer, here's a suggestion: http://puu.sh/8Bh2l.jpg oops they're not parallel sorry idk, even though i said i'd change this if someone brought it up again i dont want to part with it T_T
44. 03:14:329 (2,3) - try this instead? http://puu.sh/8Bh50.jpg looks nicer imo
45. 03:15:609 (6) - this overlap looks quite messy, how about this? http://puu.sh/8Bh6y.jpg done
46. 03:24:664 (1,2,3) - personally i think a regular stream would work better here D: done
47. 03:29:329 (5) - place it like this for better flow? (plus X jumps are cool) http://puu.sh/8Bhab.jpg done
48. 03:38:292 (4,5,6) - imo the rhythm should be slider-circle-circle to better fit vocals done
49. 03:45:426 (11) - clap on head to maintain consistent hitsound pattern done

[Hard]

Overall I think this diff is quite jumpy for a Hard! Nothing wrong with that, but try not to make your jumps quite so large sometimes

1. 00:07:012 (3) - how about playing up and left a bit for a nice triangle pattern? done
2. 00:12:866 (3) - down and left for ^ ^
3. 00:22:195 (4) - blanket previous slider for neatness http://puu.sh/8Cq7p.jpg
4. 00:36:829 (4,5) - swap on timeline to better match vocals & so the strong beat is on slider head instead of tail ^
5. 00:39:207 (3,4,5) - hmm not sure i understand why you chose to stack these D: imo it would be clearer if you unstacked ^
6. 01:11:951 (4) - to make this pattern neater, this can blanket 3 a bit better fixed i think
7. 01:13:231 (10) - clap on head & tail to emphasize strong beat? oops, fixed
8. 01:15:792 (7) - maybe clap on head & tail too? ^
9. 01:17:256 (4) - maybe angle this so it blankets 5 so the direction change isn't too sharp? done
10. 01:42:500 (1,2,3,4) - since drums are soft here, and this is a hard, why not make this a 1/4 repeat slider ^
11. 01:42:866 (1) - clap on repeat? ^
12. 01:45:792 (1) - move left a bit for consistent spacing ^
13. 02:17:530 (7) - having the slider start on a blue tick makes this play a bit oddly for me, how about reducing the slider by one tick and having it move 1/4 over to next red tick i made the repeating slider into a triplet instead but im not sure if that's the right thing to do :3
14. 02:25:122 (3,4,5,6) - this diamond looks quite squashed D: maybe even out the spacing some? http://puu.sh/8CqV7.jpg done
15. 02:34:817 (7) - add claps on white ticks too? it sounds funny having claps on blue ticks cause it sounds offbeat ^
16. 02:45:792 (5,6) - remove clap from 5's tail and put on 6's tail instead ot better match the music ^
17. 02:56:951 (3) - this jump is rather high for the slow part, how about http://puu.sh/8Crrr.jpg ^
18. 03:03:902 (3) - maybe clap on each repeat of the slider starting on the first white tick? ^
19. 03:14:512 (3,4) - maybe blanket these better for a neater look D: ^
20. 03:18:811 (7) - same comment as before ^
21. 03:30:426 (7) - avoid a messy overlap with 4 by making a diamond with the previous sliders? http://puu.sh/8CrBj.jpg ^
22. 03:47:622 (5,6) - similar concept here! X jumps are great ^
23. 03:59:512 (8,9,10,11) - this plays quite oddly for me rhythmically for some reason... ic an't really put my finger on it, but consider just having 1 1/4 repeat slider starting at 03:59:695 leading into 04:00:244 (1) took your idea
24. 04:04:817 (6) - remove clap from head for consistency ok
25. 04:07:926 (7) - hmm i don't really hear a finish or cymbal sound in the bg, remove finish? ^

[Normal]

Distance snap isn't really required, but it's strongly recommended, especially for a Normal diff! There's a couple spots where your sliders are too far from each other. Check AiMod (Ctrl+Shift+A to see where)
Hmmm your comboing seems slightly off in some sections. Mappers usually (but not always) combo every 1 to 2 measures, as indicated by the large white ticks. It'd be a good idea to follow that rule as it gives the map a sense of good pacing and consistency!

1. 00:14:329 (5,1) - a bit minor but not properly stacked fixed
2. 00:24:390 (2,3) - to better fit vocals, try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/8CswY.jpg done
3. 00:26:768 (1) - finish on head ^
4. 00:30:426 (2) - i know you're adding a clap for the beat in the bg, but maybe it'd be more consistent to add it on the tail instead ^
5. 00:32:622 (1,2) - just a suggestion, why not extend the first slider to where 2 is (so a 5/2 slider) to match vocals? ^
6. 00:36:097 (3,4) - maybe this rhythm would fit with vocals better: http://puu.sh/8Cw4N.jpg i agree
7. 00:57:317 (3,4) - this pattern looks quite uneven, maybe adjust like so? http://puu.sh/8Cw8x.jpg fixed
8. 01:01:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - hmmm, you may want to make the rhythm here similar to that of 00:50:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6). The notes here are mostly on white ticks, while the pattern in the beginning of kiai were all on red ticks. It'd make your map feel more unified & cohesive if you had a consistent rhythm imo done
9. 01:12:866 (5) - maybe add drum finish here? sure
10. 01:39:390 (4) - since she doesn't start singing at the red tick, i suggest deleting the repeat and moving the slider to next white tick this sounds fine to me
11. 01:53:109 (5,6) - would fit vocals better imo if these were just 1/1 sliders 1/1 apart done
12. 02:07:195 (3) - remove clap from tail, sounds out of place i think ok
13. 02:09:939 (1) - don't think this NC is needed D: oops, it looks like i messed up my comboing pattern :3
14. 02:11:951 (4) - NC here instead of at 02:13:048 (1)? It's a new verse & new big white tick okie
15. 02:15:975 (1) - don't think this NC is necessary, but NC should be added at 02:17:987 (4), since that's when she repeats the chorus again done
16. 02:19:268 (1) - if you follow above suggestion, remove NC from here~ ^
17. 02:31:890 (2) - clap here for strong beat? ok
18. 02:35:366 (3) - seems odd for this slider to be this long, it stops before she stops singing, how about adding a circle here and then a spinner 1/2 beat afterward, ending at 02:37:012? ok
19. 02:42:866 (4) - this 1/2 slider doesn't fit the music imo, maybe follow the long vocals and either make this a 1/1 slider or have it end where 5 is ended where 5 was
20. 02:45:792 (3) - for consnistency, remove clap from head & maybe add at tail done
21. 02:59:695 (2) - hmmm just a suggestion, move this circle 1/2 over for vocals ^
22. 03:00:244 (3) - would fit vocals better to extend this by 1/2, fits better imo ok
23. 03:01:890 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm here seems quite abrupt and choppy compared to the long and drawn out vocals D: longer sliders would fit this section better personally fixed
24. 03:30:792 - maybe add a note here? the previous slider seems to end at kinda a weird spot imo ok
25. 04:06:097 (6) - NC here? done

[Easy]

Overall, some awkward 3/2 rhythms and gaps. Might be just a difference in preferences though!

1. 00:16:890 (3) - consider extending this slider to next white tick, it feels more complete imo since it lasts as long as the singer's voice done
2. 00:32:622 (1) - maybe extend this slider to next red tick for same reason ^
3. 01:44:695 (3) - extend to white tick for ^ i'll stop mentioning these, since you probably wanted to emphasize the heavy beats in the background. Personally, I think this abundance of 3/2 rhythms might be too confusing for beginners, but your call ok
4. 02:21:646 (4) - kinda far from 3, move it closer to maintain distance snap :O oops idk what happened here

Goodluck on your set! =w= Sorry the mod was long

1. i think the combo colour3 are a little dark for me,(149,226,255)may fit the bg better.

1. 00:00:792 (2,4) - you can take sometimes to fix the stack iusses like this,it may make your mapset cleaner and more readable.
2. 00:03:170 (1) - try to put this slider on the right side of the playfield to avoid the overlap,may be like this.
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3. 00:27:500 (3,4) - i think this rhythm may fit the vocal better
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4. 00:37:744 (7,1) - when people play the diff and meet those two note,they may feel that sldier7's end is stack with slider1,so ctrl+g slider7 maybe a better choose for this part.
5. 00:46:341 (7,8,9) - balance the distance between 7,8,9.
6. 00:50:731 (2,3) - make 2,3 parallel to 00:50:183(1) may better to me.
7. 01:00:792 (5) - try to put at (357,230) so 5,6 may looks like symmetry.
8. 01:04:817 (1) - move to(470,157) for better blanket.
9. 01:31:707 (3,4) - try this rhythm here?
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10. 01:42:500 (8) - there is no need to use a kick-sldier here imo.
11. 02:28:048 (4,5) - Let them symmetry with 02:26:768(1),maybe like this
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12. 02:30:426 (1,1) - remove nc
13. 02:43:414 (4) - make this slider end in 02:43:780 make better to me.
14. 02:54:939 (6,7) - this overlap is not a good choice cause there are almost no same overlap in the whole diff,so just stack them under 02:54:939(6) or put them somewhere else.
15. 03:44:878 (6,7) - make a better blanket like this
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    ,remember move 03:45:609(8) a bit right to avoid overlap.
16. 04:07:012 (4) - remove finish maybe 0.0

1. 00:04:085 (3) -make the end of 00:04:085(3) stack with the end of 00:03:170(1)？
2. 00:12:683 (3,4) - there is no reason to use such a big ds here.
3. 00:13:597 (6) - How about this？:
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4. 00:28:963 (8) - 1 grid right for blanket.
5. 01:06:097 (4) - ^
6. 01:11:402 (4) - use ctrl+g to increase the distance of 3,4 and 4,5
7. 01:15:426 (7) - (152,224)may better to me.
8. 01:36:646 (9) - try this?
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9. 02:11:036 (5,6) - you can change the position of those two circle to make a better partten.
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10. 02:35:274 (11,1) - samll distance issue.
11. 02:39:207 (3) - change this sldier into two to fit the rhythm.
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12. 02:47:073 (7) - remove this circle?
13. 03:06:463 (6,1) - swap nc.
14. 03:39:024 (7) - i may put this circle around (9,152).
15. 03:56:219 (5,6) - i think there are no need to make a jump between 03:55:853(4,5) according to the music,so you can use ctrl+g to fix the ds.
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Melt wrote:

Hi
request from queue

[General]

1. i think the combo colour3 are a little dark for me,(149,226,255)may fit the bg better. hmm i need some more opinions on combo colors T_T

[Hard]

1. 00:00:792 (2,4) - you can take sometimes to fix the stack iusses like this,it may make your mapset cleaner and more readable. fixed all of them i think
2. 00:03:170 (1) - try to put this slider on the right side of the playfield to avoid the overlap,may be like this. done
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:27:500 (3,4) - i think this rhythm may fit the vocal better
   SPOILER

   done
4. 00:37:744 (7,1) - when people play the diff and meet those two note,they may feel that sldier7's end is stack with slider1,so ctrl+g slider7 maybe a better choose for this part. done
5. 00:46:341 (7,8,9) - balance the distance between 7,8,9. fixed
6. 00:50:731 (2,3) - make 2,3 parallel to 00:50:183(1) may better to me. done
7. 01:00:792 (5) - try to put at (357,230) so 5,6 may looks like symmetry. ok
8. 01:04:817 (1) - move to(470,157) for better blanket. ok
9. 01:31:707 (3,4) - try this rhythm here?
   SPOILER

   ok
10. 01:42:500 (8) - there is no need to use a kick-sldier here imo. i hear it in the bg and i dont want to use that long of a circle stream on Hard
11. 02:28:048 (4,5) - Let them symmetry with 02:26:768(1),maybe like this ok
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12. 02:30:426 (1,1) - remove nc its for the pattern :3 No one else brought this up so i'll keep for now
13. 02:43:414 (4) - make this slider end in 02:43:780 make better to me. ok
14. 02:54:939 (6,7) - this overlap is not a good choice cause there are almost no same overlap in the whole diff,so just stack them under 02:54:939(6) or put them somewhere else. idk i really like this :3
15. 03:44:878 (6,7) - make a better blanket like this ok
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    ,remember move 03:45:609(8) a bit right to avoid overlap.
16. 04:07:012 (4) - remove finish maybe 0.0 i hear a finish here.

[Insane]

1. 00:04:085 (3) -make the end of 00:04:085(3) stack with the end of 00:03:170(1)？ok
2. 00:12:683 (3,4) - there is no reason to use such a big ds here. there's a drastic change in the music
3. 00:13:597 (6) - How about this？ok:
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4. 00:28:963 (8) - 1 grid right for blanket. ok
5. 01:06:097 (4) - ^ ^
6. 01:11:402 (4) - use ctrl+g to increase the distance of 3,4 and 4,5 that feels weird to play for me
7. 01:15:426 (7) - (152,224)may better to me. ok
8. 01:36:646 (9) - try this?
   SPOILER

   ok
9. 02:11:036 (5,6) - you can change the position of those two circle to make a better partten. ok
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:35:274 (11,1) - samll distance issue. fixed
11. 02:39:207 (3) - change this sldier into two to fit the rhythm. done
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12. 02:47:073 (7) - remove this circle? ill keep for now because it lands on a clap
13. 03:06:463 (6,1) - swap nc.i put a NC there to indicate the slider stream
14. 03:39:024 (7) - i may put this circle around (9,152). ok
15. 03:56:219 (5,6) - i think there are no need to make a jump between 03:55:853(4,5) according to the music,so you can use ctrl+g to fix the ds. ok
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That's all from me
Good luck :3

Krfawy wrote:

For God's sake, Knotts, wake up and go to any BAT because it's too good to rot in graveyard! >:-/ Better than my 2 ranked mapsets, so I will ask you as polite as I can: WHAT THE FREAKIN' HELL IS IT DOING HERE!?!?!? DX

Now release it from the graveyard, go to any BAT and bubble and rank in one day, please. ._.

CDFA wrote:

if you revive this ill give you a kiss

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