1. Easy (2.57 stars, 257 notes)
2. Hard (4.96 stars, 665 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 908 notes)
4. Normal (4.05 stars, 383 notes)

1. 00:45:061 (5) - uniq overlap jump(in this way). This is bad casue player need to remeber where is note. Your flow is pretty readable but in this place you need to react on note. It isnt hard but destroys felling of flow for next 1-2 sec if u havent played map like 15-20 times.
   
   
2. 01:12:957 (2) - looks a bit strange with auto stacks. Maybe move this note to X:268 Y:296 or just redraw in your own way.
   
   
3. I think it's abit strange that stream's distance snap jumps. It gives feeling of changing SV speed but in fact it isnt. Did u want to make circular stream with 0.5 snap and straight with 0.6-0.7? I think its unnecessary casue without it map is more beautiful. I think 0.6-0.7 distnace snap will give better flow.
   
   
4. Also i think u need to color 4 combo make more colorful like this one R:167 G:84 B:63. Hard to see notes if BG enabled
   color

   

fergas wrote:

Really really nice flow!!! <3 But i think u can improve it if think about this:

1. 00:45:061 (5) - uniq overlap jump(in this way). This is bad casue player need to remeber where is note. Your flow is pretty readable but in this place you need to react on note. It isnt hard but destroys felling of flow for next 1-2 sec if u havent played map like 15-20 times. I changed this section substantially before you modded the map so I can't apply this one.
   
2. 01:12:957 (2) - looks a bit strange with auto stacks. Maybe move this note to X:268 Y:296 or just redraw in your own way. ^
   
   
3. I think it's abit strange that stream's distance snap jumps. It gives feeling of changing SV speed but in fact it isnt. Did u want to make circular stream with 0.5 snap and straight with 0.6-0.7? I think its unnecessary casue without it map is more beautiful. I think 0.6-0.7 distnace snap will give better flow. I changed most streams to 0.7x except I kept one or two streams at 0.5x.
   
   
4. Also i think u need to color 4 combo make more colorful like this one R:167 G:84 B:63. Hard to see notes if BG enabled
   color

   

Yeah i'll end up changing that one but I'm not too big a fan of that color.

Good luck with map. Insane is amazing

misk703 wrote:

Hi~
from Knotts's Queue
[General]
01:19:268 Kiai Mode END? done
02:35:366 ^ ^
04:00:244 ^ ^
[Insane]
00:10:670 (6) - How about this? I think i fixed.

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00:11:951 (3) - move x:372 y:156 look tidy changed to something different.
00:14:146 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - How about this? That looks hard to play because (1) isn't part of the stream. I know I need to fix this though.

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00:20:914 (1) - If you want blanket. x:64 y:248 done
00:21:829 (4,1) -00:21:829 (4) - slider head and 00:22:561 (1) - note. Let's carry out stack. fixed
01:37:012 (1) - If you want blanket. x:168 y:72 ^
02:09:756 (2) - ^ x:96 y:52 ^
02:10:487 (4) - Fix the form yeah I suck at experimenting with sliders. I'll try to fix it but i might just end up scraping it.

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02:39:939 (1) - I think that it is short.　end 02:40:853 ? I changed for now but I think its too close to (1).
03:27:134 (1,2) - miss? I think that it is difficult. 03:27:225 (2) - move 03:27:225 Idk how that happened. Fixed.
03:33:170 (7) - If you want blanket. x:52 y:92 done
03:46:158 (1) - add Clap ^
03:46:341 (2) - Remove Clap ^

GL~

Knotts wrote:

Kasuga

Kasuga wrote:

Hi, Mod for M4M requests

01:50:183 (1,3,4,5) - drag it to x:358 y:311 which one?
drag the circle number 1 to x:358 y:311 in the same time you move other circles to match the circles number 2 for the pentagram jump
pictures
sorry for this unclear mod

Star-ed

JeZag wrote:

Hello~ M4M please :3
I don't mod well so I use lots of images :/
These are merely SUGGESTIONS from a n00b mapper, so there is no obligation to follow any of this

Hard

SPOILER

00:17:987 (1) - remove the red tick to make it more like 00:18:353 (2)? idk i guess
00:41:402 (2,3) - this jump is a bit awkward i guess. the flow is also weird (movement down then jumps up to (3)0; you can maybe ctrl+G 00:41:951 (3,4) or shift the slider tail meh i kinda like my way. that way you suggested looks a little too crowded for my taste

01:18:811 (5,6) - separate these two? This is the only way to make this look good but if someone else suggests a way to make it look nice seperated ill move them

01:30:609 (1,1) - ^^ except put 01:30:975 (1) closer to the tail of 01:30:609 (1) or just move 01:30:609 (1) up a bit dont like :3
01:58:780 (4,1) - looks awk touching each other yeah i thought so too. moved.

overall nice flow

Insane

SPOILER

00:04:817 (5,1) - This jump is awkward. Suggestion: try shifting 2nd point of 00:04:085 (3) to around (150,280 ) and move 00:04:634 (4,5) so that it points towards 00:05:366 (1) It doesn't feel awkward to me when i play it
00:09:939 (4) - make this less curvy to blanket 00:09:756 (3) better i moved some stuff around

02:19:268 (5) - since you use a red tick here, maybe 02:19:817 (6) can be positioned better so that it is blanketed? i feel like its already blanketed well enough here

04:06:646 (2,4) - make a better blanket? done

Nice flow in general; just like your hard map

I wish i could map as well as you >.<

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

M4M req here for your queue!

[General]

SPOILER

This is a really good song.

[Hard]

SPOILER

Should probably move HP Drain and OD to 6. done

01:42:591 (3,4,5,6) - Move 3 closer to the upcoming slider (just a bit), and stack 4, 5, and 6 it onto the upcoming slider changed this in my own way.

01:57:500 (6,1,2,3) - Swap 1 and 2's spots and make 3 stack on the newly arranged 2 i don't really like this

02:35:366 (9) - Add a break between this and the upcoming spinner I put a break through before, haven't updated the map.

02:49:817 (1) - Move this a bit away from 2 so it doesn't overlap (more of a nit picky thing from me) i did this on purpose

[Insane]

SPOILER

I suck at modding Insanes, so I may not have much... sorry ;_;

00:01:158 (3,4) - Even for an Insane, this jump may be a bit too much I haven't seen one person i've asked to test play this miss that.

00:25:853 (7,8,9) - Stack onto previous slider or next slideri don't like the way it plays stacked because of the interval between the triple and the slider

01:08:841 (1) - No NC i guess not

01:12:957 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Would fit better if you moved 1 off to the side rather than stack onto the current slider and move 3,4,5,6,7,8,9 into a stream rather than a huge stack of circles (feel free to PM me if you need a picture of what I mean) maybe i'll change later if it comes up again.

01:15:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - Possibly move the circles into a star formation of some sort? It doesn't look too nice atm as a random blob of circles i don't want to overuse star patterns

01:50:183 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the star formation more evenly spaced and symmetrical tweaked a little

02:21:463 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^^ ^^

03:06:737 (4,5,6,7,8) - Better as a stack of circles rather than a ton of sliders this is my baby. the only thing i'd change is the posistioning to make it more appealing.

03:28:048 (5,6) - Swap 5 and 6's spots that'd be bad flow from (4)

1. I would replace the white color on any other that is suitable, or deleted altogether.

1. 00:13:597 - If this is the easiest difficulty, I think the spinner is too short for beginners. Can simply be removed.
2. 02:39:939 - ^
3. 00:23:292 (1) - I would replace the beginning of the slider to the note.
4. 00:42:317 (1) - ^
5. 00:59:878 (1) - ^
6. 01:05:731 (1) - ^ And other similar places.
7. 01:19:085 (3) - Would remove the slider. Would set the spinner from 01:19:268 to 01:20:548.
8. 02:00:244 (2) - Would remove the note. Here start the slider (3) without changing its ending.
9. 02:51:463 (1,2,3) - Maybe try something like that? http://puu.sh/7Hj54.jpg

1. 00:27:683 (6) - I would replace the beginning of the slider to the note.
2. 01:19:268 (6) - Would remove the slider. Would set the spinner from 01:19:268 to 01:20:548.
3. 01:53:475 (8,9,10) - Maybe try something like that? http://puu.sh/7HjBn.jpg
4. 01:57:134 (4) - Change location to X:280; Y:192?
5. 01:57:317 (5) - Change location to X:216; Y:240?
6. 03:36:372 (5,6) - Maybe try something like that? http://puu.sh/7HjTL.jpg

1. 01:38:841 (5,6) - I would have removed the jump, I do not see any sense in it.

Jarcode wrote:

Hey! M4M request:

Insane

This difficulty was really well done, I only found one thing:

03:04:634 (11,12,1,2,3) - I end up streaming into (1) and (2), just spamming my way so I don't miss. Maybe do something like this to make it more clear: yeah people have been having trouble with that. changed my way.

Hard

Super fun difficulty to DT btw.

00:55:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These streams made me go "Ack!" while I was playing, even without double time (since the rest of the map is really relaxing to play). I know it goes with the music really well, but maybe remove the first stack there and add one note in place: done



01:53:475 (2,3,4) - These look like they are overlapping. It's more clear when the 'drum fill' slider is going to come when (2) and (3) are out of the way: your way breaks the flow a bit so I just moved (4)



03:06:646 (5,6,7) - These are awkward. Make some jumps/shapes instead. if someone else says something about this i'll change.

I couldn't find a lot, since both hard and insane already have really good flow. I Hope this ranks ranked, it's a good map!

1. Uh WTF, why is the BG's file size 1.8 MB? I'm sure you'll only need somewhere around 200-400 KB (using the JPEG format) to achieve this kind of quality. Reducing the size of the picture will make the map far less bloated, and it will (obviously) also help in reducing the size of the .osz.

1. Looking at how complex the rhythm is in this diff, you might as well get an Easy inside the mapset too so the difficulty spread will be perfect and there will be something that newer or less skilled players can enjoy.
2. 00:02:622 (5) - Why don't you add claps here so the hitsounding here will be consistent? The sound of the instruments are still similar, I think.
3. 00:03:170 - 00:11:768 - I don't understand what are you trying to follow with the combo pattern here... Just use an NC every two stanzas plainly (on every slider with a finish and that begins on a red tick)? From what I see in the later parts, though, it looks like you're using one, so... yeah, do what you want, but make the combo pattern consistent and follow the stanza, I guess.
4. 00:13:597 - 00:14:695 - I think you wanted to give a small break here, but it actually makes this part kinda jarring because of its emptiness, so just map this part? It won't make the diff too hard; don't worry.
5. 00:26:585 (2,3) - Eh, the blanket here doesn't look quite neat. Move (3) to (190,161)?
6. 00:43:963 (4) - Add a clap here because thie instrument here is still of the same volume as 00:43:231 anyway?
7. 00:49:451 (3,1) - What's with the spacing inconsistency?
8. 01:10:122 (1,2) - Why are you suddenly only following the vocal while ignoring the instrument at 01:10:305? It just feels... weird. Try using a 1/2 slider with a repeat to replace 01:10:122 (1,2), maybe?
9. 01:49:634 (2,3) - The blanket here doesn't look nice, to be honest. Try moving the middle node to (63,223) and the one on the tail to (100,125)?
10. 01:52:926 (1,2) - ^. It's pretty hard to give a short and uncomplicated explanation for this one, so try making it look better by yourself.
11. 01:55:853 (3) - NC this so your combo won't be too long compared to how you form your combo pattern in the other parts of the diff?
12. 02:16:341 - Add a finish? I personally think the instrument is quite heavy here.
13. 02:20:366 - Why a clap at all sudden?
14. 02:32:439 (3) - This overlaps 02:34:085 (3) for around one second. It looks pretty bad at that time due to how they overlap, so maybe you can try to move them out from each other?
15. 02:43:597 (3) - Also add a finish here to follow that heavy instrument in the background?
16. 02:45:792 (2,3,4) - They look too close to each other, IMO. Maybe moving (4) to the right of (3)'s head would help?
17. 03:22:378 (3,2) - Same as 02:32:439 (3).
18. 04:01:158 (1,2,1) - ^

1. 00:01:890 (1,2) - Try to make a jump here, since 00:00:427 (1,2,3,4) is a series of jumps, and the music from the beginning of that pattern up to this one is basically the same? It'd create a sense of consistency, and will be not awkward to play, because of how the spacing is suddenly reduced here.
2. 00:14:146 (5) - I find this slider more comfortable to play if there was a 1.7x jump from 00:13:597 (4) by moving (5) to (376,101) and moving the node on tail to (383,50), for some reason. Maybe you should try it? (Basically, try to make a small jump between (4) and (5).) You might have to reduce the jump at 00:14:146 (5,1) if you really did this, though.
3. 00:21:829 - Uh, is the Normal whistle here intentional? I find it very awkward and inconsistent with the hitsound pattern here, personally.
4. 00:34:085 (1,2,3,4) - Uh, they'd look neater if the spacing was consistent. Maybe use 1.2x DS value and try to make a square if possible?
5. 00:36:829 (5) - NC this? I think the combo is too long compared to the other parts of the diff, and this is the good place to apply an NC here.
6. 00:51:097 (3,4) - idk why, but I find these sliders to be too close to each other. Try moving (4) to (187,180) (and make sure 00:52:012 (5) follows suit)?
7. 00:58:414 (5) - Move this to (270,72) so the gap between 00:57:317 (2,4,5) will look the same and thus neater that way?
8. 01:01:341 (7) - No barrage of claps like 01:07:012 (6)? I'm just thinking that it's really supposed to be here.
9. 01:01:890 (1,2,3) - Try making the spacing consistent? I can't see why would you space (2,3) by only 0.91x while it's perfectly possible to make them consistent.
10. 01:09:939 (6,1) - Select them all and move to (28,141) (as shown in the upper-right corner)? Same reason as 00:58:414 (5) (making the space between 01:09:573 (4,6,1) equal). You might have to deal with the slight overlap between 01:09:024 (3,6), though.
11. 01:17:987 (3,5) - Slightly touching each other in an awkward way. I think this is easily avoidable.
12. 01:37:012 (1,2,3) - Any reason for the spacing inconsistency? This pattern will be nicer to play and look at if the spacing is consistent.
13. 01:55:853 (1) - Move the node in the middle of the slider to (199,370) and the one on the tail to (265,301) for a better blanket with 01:55:305 (3,4)?
14. 02:03:353 (3,4) - The blanket here can also be better. Try moving (3)'s middle node to (295,255) and the tail node to (351,282)?
15. 02:24:207 - Missing clap?
16. 03:03:902 (3) - Since we don't know when will this slider end, it'll be really hard to get your sense of the song's rhythm back after being done with this slider, and you'll probably need to struggle to hit the next few notes correctly. Just saying.
17. 03:36:097 (4,5) - The stacking might be very tricky because this is probably the only time you ever used a 1/4 stack, while you've been frequently using 1/2 stacks. Consider using another pattern for this.
18. 03:59:512 (4,5,6,7,1) - I find this rhythm very hard to follow for some reason... You might want to ask a few friends to try playing this and ask for their opinion. It's probably because 03:59:786 (5) starts and ends on a blue tick. Probably.
19. 04:08:292 (8,9) - What about making a small (1.7x DS?) jump here to indicate that this is the end of the song's last part (excluding that spinner)? It feels more natural for me, somehow.

1. 00:04:817 (5,1) - Uh, the jump here is definitely too big compared to the music here and the other patterns you've made until now. It comes out as really unexpected. You may want to consider placing (5) to the left side of the screen instead.
2. 00:37:378 (7) - This slider slightly obscures the 00:37:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) stream. Not much of a problem, but you might want to make them not interfere each other because, in my opinion, they look... kinda weird.
3. 01:41:036 (1) - Make this blanket 01:40:487 (4,2)? Just a slight cosmetic suggestion.
4. 01:49:268 (2,3) - Move (2) to (285,42) and (3) to (374,32) so the pattern here will flow better and look nicer?
5. 01:54:298 (6,7,8) - Inconsistent stream spacing?
6. 02:08:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh, I think you can make a perfect pentagon here, right? It currently looks a little messy.
7. 02:41:402 - Add a finish to emphasize the vocal here (and because you have it in the other diffs)?
8. 03:59:512 (4,5,6,7,1) - Same as Hard.

Hinsvar wrote:

Hello!

...I'll just start modding now.

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

1. Uh WTF, why is the BG's file size 1.8 MB? I'm sure you'll only need somewhere around 200-400 KB (using the JPEG format) to achieve this kind of quality. Reducing the size of the picture will make the map far less bloated, and it will (obviously) also help in reducing the size of the .osz.

Gotcha

>Normal

1. Looking at how complex the rhythm is in this diff, you might as well get an Easy inside the mapset too so the difficulty spread will be perfect and there will be something that newer or less skilled players can enjoy. oh man im gonna cry if i have to make another 4 min difficulty. I'm not really too sure how to go about making an Easy and if there is going to be one i'll probably just beg people to make a GD
2. 00:02:622 (5) - Why don't you add claps here so the hitsounding here will be consistent? The sound of the instruments are still similar, I think. done
3. 00:03:170 - 00:11:768 - I don't understand what are you trying to follow with the combo pattern here... Just use an NC every two stanzas plainly (on every slider with a finish and that begins on a red tick)? From what I see in the later parts, though, it looks like you're using one, so... yeah, do what you want, but make the combo pattern consistent and follow the stanza, I guess. yeah consistency is good. changed.
4. 00:13:597 - 00:14:695 - I think you wanted to give a small break here, but it actually makes this part kinda jarring because of its emptiness, so just map this part? It won't make the diff too hard; don't worry. mapped
5. 00:26:585 (2,3) - Eh, the blanket here doesn't look quite neat. Move (3) to (190,161)? done
6. 00:43:963 (4) - Add a clap here because thie instrument here is still of the same volume as 00:43:231 anyway? done
7. 00:49:451 (3,1) - What's with the spacing inconsistency? must've happened when i changed something else and didn't rearrange stuff. Fixed
8. 01:10:122 (1,2) - Why are you suddenly only following the vocal while ignoring the instrument at 01:10:305? It just feels... weird. Try using a 1/2 slider with a repeat to replace 01:10:122 (1,2), maybe? done
9. 01:49:634 (2,3) - The blanket here doesn't look nice, to be honest. Try moving the middle node to (63,223) and the one on the tail to (100,125)? done
10. 01:52:926 (1,2) - ^. It's pretty hard to give a short and uncomplicated explanation for this one, so try making it look better by yourself.
11. 01:55:853 (3) - NC this so your combo won't be too long compared to how you form your combo pattern in the other parts of the diff? done
12. 02:16:341 - Add a finish? I personally think the instrument is quite heavy here. idk why there wasn't a finish here already
13. 02:20:366 - Why a clap at all sudden? idk. removed
14. 02:32:439 (3) - This overlaps 02:34:085 (3) for around one second. It looks pretty bad at that time due to how they overlap, so maybe you can try to move them out from each other? moved
15. 02:43:597 (3) - Also add a finish here to follow that heavy instrument in the background? ok. idk if u wanted me to keep the clap on there with it or not so i'll just have both for now.
16. 02:45:792 (2,3,4) - They look too close to each other, IMO. Maybe moving (4) to the right of (3)'s head would help? done
17. 03:22:378 (3,2) - Same as 02:32:439 (3). I think i fixed it but i may have ended up making another one of these. Not too sure.
18. 04:01:158 (1,2,1) - ^

^

>Hard

1. 00:01:890 (1,2) - Try to make a jump here, since 00:00:427 (1,2,3,4) is a series of jumps, and the music from the beginning of that pattern up to this one is basically the same? It'd create a sense of consistency, and will be not awkward to play, because of how the spacing is suddenly reduced here. yeah i thought it was pretty lame before as well
2. 00:14:146 (5) - I find this slider more comfortable to play if there was a 1.7x jump from 00:13:597 (4) by moving (5) to (376,101) and moving the node on tail to (383,50), for some reason. Maybe you should try it? (Basically, try to make a small jump between (4) and (5).) You might have to reduce the jump at 00:14:146 (5,1) if you really did this, though. done
3. 00:21:829 - Uh, is the Normal whistle here intentional? I find it very awkward and inconsistent with the hitsound pattern here, personally. idk how that got there.
4. 00:34:085 (1,2,3,4) - Uh, they'd look neater if the spacing was consistent. Maybe use 1.2x DS value and try to make a square if possible? ok
5. 00:36:829 (5) - NC this? I think the combo is too long compared to the other parts of the diff, and this is the good place to apply an NC here. ok
6. 00:51:097 (3,4) - idk why, but I find these sliders to be too close to each other. Try moving (4) to (187,180) (and make sure 00:52:012 (5) follows suit)? done
7. 00:58:414 (5) - Move this to (270,72) so the gap between 00:57:317 (2,4,5) will look the same and thus neater that way? ok
8. 01:01:341 (7) - No barrage of claps like 01:07:012 (6)? I'm just thinking that it's really supposed to be here. done
9. 01:01:890 (1,2,3) - Try making the spacing consistent? I can't see why would you space (2,3) by only 0.91x while it's perfectly possible to make them consistent. fixed
10. 01:09:939 (6,1) - Select them all and move to (28,141) (as shown in the upper-right corner)? Same reason as 00:58:414 (5) (making the space between 01:09:573 (4,6,1) equal). You might have to deal with the slight overlap between 01:09:024 (3,6), though. not too sure what this one's telling me to do.
11. 01:17:987 (3,5) - Slightly touching each other in an awkward way. I think this is easily avoidable. fixed
12. 01:37:012 (1,2,3) - Any reason for the spacing inconsistency? This pattern will be nicer to play and look at if the spacing is consistent. changed
13. 01:55:853 (1) - Move the node in the middle of the slider to (199,370) and the one on the tail to (265,301) for a better blanket with 01:55:305 (3,4)? ok
14. 02:03:353 (3,4) - The blanket here can also be better. Try moving (3)'s middle node to (295,255) and the tail node to (351,282)? ok
15. 02:24:207 - Missing clap? oops
16. 03:03:902 (3) - Since we don't know when will this slider end, it'll be really hard to get your sense of the song's rhythm back after being done with this slider, and you'll probably need to struggle to hit the next few notes correctly. Just saying.
17. 03:36:097 (4,5) - The stacking might be very tricky because this is probably the only time you ever used a 1/4 stack, while you've been frequently using 1/2 stacks. Consider using another pattern for this. changed. probably needs future revision
18. 03:59:512 (4,5,6,7,1) - I find this rhythm very hard to follow for some reason... You might want to ask a few friends to try playing this and ask for their opinion. It's probably because 03:59:786 (5) starts and ends on a blue tick. Probably. same as Insane
19. 04:08:292 (8,9) - What about making a small (1.7x DS?) jump here to indicate that this is the end of the song's last part (excluding that spinner)? It feels more natural for me, somehow.done

>Insane

1. 00:04:817 (5,1) - Uh, the jump here is definitely too big compared to the music here and the other patterns you've made until now. It comes out as really unexpected. You may want to consider placing (5) to the left side of the screen instead. hopefully i fixed this
2. 00:37:378 (7) - This slider slightly obscures the 00:37:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) stream. Not much of a problem, but you might want to make them not interfere each other because, in my opinion, they look... kinda weird. fixed
3. 01:41:036 (1) - Make this blanket 01:40:487 (4,2)? Just a slight cosmetic suggestion. done
4. 01:49:268 (2,3) - Move (2) to (285,42) and (3) to (374,32) so the pattern here will flow better and look nicer? done
5. 01:54:298 (6,7,8) - Inconsistent stream spacing? idk how that happened. fixed
6. 02:08:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uh, I think you can make a perfect pentagon here, right? It currently looks a little messy. tried my best to fix
7. 02:41:402 - Add a finish to emphasize the vocal here (and because you have it in the other diffs)? idk why I didn't have one here. Lazy me.
8. 03:59:512 (4,5,6,7,1) - Same as Hard. I'll go ask around

That's it, I think. The map's very good, I must say. Here's a star to show my support!

Good luck on the way

zorefire wrote:

[Normal]
01:20:548 - silence please i hear a clap here but if other people say otherwise i'll change
01:52:926 (5) - sounds better if you end it on the white tick but that would require moving things around moved stuff around
03:56:402 (5) - doesn't sound right, sounds like something was put there to take up time sounds fine to me :O
04:09:207 - would be nice if spinner started here I guess. i moved it to 04:09:116 to be consistent with the other difficulties but im not too sure if spinners can be that close to the end of a slider on a Normal. will change again if it comes up in future mods.
[Hard]
00:16:524 (1) - Rotate a little bit make it come down some more not too sure what this means. either way i think it looks fine
00:21:463 (2,3) - put more curves on these fine the way they are
00:22:926 (3) - fix the blanket if that is what was being done fixed
02:35:366 (6) - sounds like it doesn't finish properly I extended the slider to the next clap. hopefully that makes it "finish" better
02:39:939 (1) - ninja spinner ouch I dont think the recovery time is good enough should consider taking it out cause those have been banned unless used properly i dont think this is a ninja spinner because the break time letter box should signal something's coming up. Ill remove if others agree with you though.
02:53:658 (2) - that looks ugly the position its in should be move over some more to blanket 02:53:109 (1) fixed i think
04:09:207 - slider needs to end here it will make the map look so much better for an ending i moved the spinner to start there

Knotts wrote:

zorefire wrote:

[Normal]
01:20:548 - silence please i hear a clap here but if other people say otherwise i'll change
01:52:926 (5) - sounds better if you end it on the white tick but that would require moving things around moved stuff around
03:56:402 (5) - doesn't sound right, sounds like something was put there to take up time sounds fine to me :O
04:09:207 - would be nice if spinner started here I guess. i moved it to 04:09:116 to be consistent with the other difficulties but im not too sure if spinners can be that close to the end of a slider on a Normal. will change again if it comes up in future mods.
[Hard]
00:16:524 (1) - Rotate a little bit make it come down some more not too sure what this means. either way i think it looks fine
00:21:463 (2,3) - put more curves on these fine the way they are
00:22:926 (3) - fix the blanket if that is what was being done fixed
02:35:366 (6) - sounds like it doesn't finish properly I extended the slider to the next clap. hopefully that makes it "finish" better
02:39:939 (1) - ninja spinner ouch I dont think the recovery time is good enough should consider taking it out cause those have been banned unless used properly i dont think this is a ninja spinner because the break time letter box should signal something's coming up. Ill remove if others agree with you though.
02:53:658 (2) - that looks ugly the position its in should be move over some more to blanket 02:53:109 (1) fixed i think
04:09:207 - slider needs to end here it will make the map look so much better for an ending i moved the spinner to start there

Thanks for the mod
I'll continue to work on the GD for your map.

Fureimuu wrote:

Hi Useless mod here

Insane

03:33:719 (3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1462275 Pay attention: I removed 1 note from the following combo, but it's okay
00:27:317 (4) - remove clap removed
01:21:463 (1) - add hitclap at the end of slider done
01:24:207 (3) - add hitclap done
01:24:573 (5) - add hitclap ^
01:25:670 (2) - the last point of slider, remove hitclap dpme - added finish instead
01:26:402 (4) - add hitclap at the first point done
01:28:963 (3) - remove at the first point ^
01:29:695 (5) - add at the end ^
01:31:524 (2) - remove at the end, add at the first point ^
01:35:183 (4) - remove ^
01:43:963 (1) - remove ^
01:45:244 (4) - remove i hear a clap on this one
01:45:792 (2) - hitfinish at the 1st point done
01:46:524 (6) - remove hitfinish ^
01:48:353 (5) - remove its the same instrument used on (4) and i have a clap there :3
01:57:500 (3) - clap at the end done
01:58:414 (1) - clap at the end ^
02:05:183 (3) - clap ^
02:09:756 (2) - remove clap ^
02:10:487 (4) - remove clap ^
02:13:048 (1) - add clap at the end ^
02:14:512 (6) - add clap at the end ^
02:17:987 (1) - add clap at the end ^
02:26:036 (2,3,4) - remove claps, add at the end of slider ^
02:27:500 (3) - remove hitclap at the beginning, add at the end ^
02:30:244 (2,4) - remove ^
02:29:695 (1,3,5) - add hitclaps at the beginning and at the end sounds kinda weird to me with a clap on both ends of sliders but ill keep for now
02:31:707 (6,7) - add hitclaps at the end done

Can't tell you more, because a lot of points for hitsounds can't be mapped :c Start with this.
If you want, I can send you modded *.osu file with changed rythm )

L3gioN TM wrote:

Normal

00:00:427 (1) - CTRL + G, middle point one Tiny Grid higher, Ending point one Small Grid lower i prefer my way
00:01:158 (2) - Ending point two Small Grid lower dont need
00:01:890 (3,4) - Not the best idea. (3) Parameters: x240. y252; (4) Parameters: x208, y336 done
00:05:548 (4,1) - (3) CTRL+C, paste it on (4), Then click CTRL + H (4), Move to: x184, y164 i like how it is now
00:32:622 (1,2,3) - (1) Make a double slider. (2) Put at the end of (1), (3) Put at x344, y300 ^
00:35:000 (1) - Put at x364 y180 there's no way this can be done. Maybe you got coordinates wrong?
00:39:390 (4) - Missing circle. Put one at the ond of the slider. done
01:30:975 (2) - Meh.
01:55:853 (1,2,3) - Overlaped, make something like this: http://puu.sh/7Q59L.jpg, i think this should be fine
02:29:695 (1,2,3) - (1) CTRL+C, Replace (2), Make a mirror using, CTRL+C, CTRL+H, same with (3) I just Ctrl +G'ed some stuff and moved things around

More than 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Try to reduce this. shouldn't be a problem... i think

More Coming Soon.

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, testplay from my queue

Hard

AR-1 ? There's no need to really have it that high, since you're objects aren't crowded. Plus, try to keep it consistent throughout your mapset (since Normal = 4, Hard= 8(???), Insane = 9).

Try using AR 7 here, or increase the AR in Normal up to 5.

Normal

AR +1, if you disagree to my suggestion for the previous diff. did this

Overall, the mapset looks pretty clean. Good luck!

1. this diff is a little hard for beginner. I suggest to reduce some notes starting at 1/2 rhythm (red line)
2. 00:39:573 (4,1) - for normal diff, you should not make jump pattern like this
3. 01:19:268 (1) - end at 01:20:914
4. 01:34:085 (1,2) - make symmetric
5. 02:07:195 (3,1) - how about blanketting?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:18:536 (2) - end at 02:18:902
7. 02:25:122 (3) - curved slider is better
8. 02:29:329 (3,2) - stack corrctly
9. 03:56:402 (5) - twice reverse sider is confusing for beginner
10. 04:01:158 (1,2) - avoid overlap

1. 00:14:146 (5,1) - because of after many times revese, make DS smaller
2. 00:37:744 (4,1) - not stack on purpose?
3. 01:12:683 (2) - x:409 y:225
4. 01:50:366 (1) - x:294 y:189
5. 01:50:000 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - it is better to conform DS
6. 02:28:048 (6,1) - blanket correctly
7. 02:30:975 (2) - x:152 y:146
8. 02:39:939 (1) - too short spinner. I prefer to end at 02:41:036
9. 02:58:963 (4,1) - swap NC
10. 03:53:475 (6) - clap
11. 04:01:158 (3,2) - this overlap is not good

1. 00:11:585 (2) - I prefer to divide into 2 circles
2. 00:19:085 (4,5) - I prefer to exchange their positions
3. 00:34:451 (3) - x:344 y:270
4. 01:50:183 (1,2,3,4,5) -how about regular pentagon?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   354,315,110183,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   453,179,110366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   354,146,110548,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   453,283,110731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   293,231,110914,1,0,0:0:0:0:

5. 02:39:939 (1) - same as hard
6. 03:10:670 (4) - Ctrl+G
7. 03:15:609 (5,6) - blanket correctly

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[Normal]

1. this diff is a little hard for beginner. I suggest to reduce some notes starting at 1/2 rhythm (red line) I'm going to add an Easy so I think it should be fine
2. 00:39:573 (4,1) - for normal diff, you should not make jump pattern like this oops, didn't even notice
3. 01:19:268 (1) - end at 01:20:914 done
4. 01:34:085 (1,2) - make symmetric fixed
5. 02:07:195 (3,1) - how about blanketting? ok
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:18:536 (2) - end at 02:18:902 idk i kind of want it to end on the clap. if someone else suggests ill change
7. 02:25:122 (3) - curved slider is better i think im gonna keep it like this
8. 02:29:329 (3,2) - stack corrctly fixed
9. 03:56:402 (5) - twice reverse sider is confusing for beginner i'll keep for now but if suggested again ill change
10. 04:01:158 (1,2) - avoid overlap ^

[Hard]

1. 00:14:146 (5,1) - because of after many times revese, make DS smaller done
2. 00:37:744 (4,1) - not stack on purpose? didn't notice, fixed
3. 01:12:683 (2) - x:409 y:225 done
4. 01:50:366 (1) - x:294 y:189 ^
5. 01:50:000 (5,1,2,3,4,1) - it is better to conform DS fixed
6. 02:28:048 (6,1) - blanket correctly ^
7. 02:30:975 (2) - x:152 y:146 ^
8. 02:39:939 (1) - too short spinner. I prefer to end at 02:41:036 done
9. 02:58:963 (4,1) - swap NC done
10. 03:53:475 (6) - clap added
11. 04:01:158 (3,2) - this overlap is not good changed

[Insane]

1. 00:11:585 (2) - I prefer to divide into 2 circles done
2. 00:19:085 (4,5) - I prefer to exchange their positions niceee idea!
3. 00:34:451 (3) - x:344 y:270 done
4. 01:50:183 (1,2,3,4,5) -how about regular pentagon? done, thanks for the code
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   354,315,110183,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   453,179,110366,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   354,146,110548,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   453,283,110731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   293,231,110914,1,0,0:0:0:0:

5. 02:39:939 (1) - same as hard ok
6. 03:10:670 (4) - Ctrl+G done
7. 03:15:609 (5,6) - blanket correctly ok

Tommy is so cute <3
~Good Luck~

No Dap wrote:

So, is someone making an Easy diff? your normal is still not below 3.25 star rating :3

Knotts wrote:

No Dap wrote:

So, is someone making an Easy diff? your normal is still not below 3.25 star rating :3

Yeah but he said he's not 100% sure he'll finish it so I'm kind of confused.

Desperate-kun wrote:

Ohh it's sad to tell you ;w; But I am not able to finish it, because I got stuck with the rhythm and I kind of lost the motivation to finish it. I'm very, very sorry

1. 00:01:890 (5) - try to create symmetry with 00:01:524 (4) - maybe?
   (cause 00:00:427 (1,2,3) - create a nice symmetrical pattern, too)
2. 00:02:256 (6) - move to 177|186 (cause 00:03:170 (1) - )
3. you could increase curve here a bit
   screen

   
   imo, that'd look better with 00:03:170 (1) -
4. 00:09:024 (1,2) - blanket better
   comparison

   
   
5. 00:11:951 (4) - move end to ~ 350|176? just looks better to me. >:
   (+ similar shape to 00:12:866 (7) - )
6. 00:20:548 (4,1) - blanket better
   same here - 00:23:109 (4) - and 00:23:841 (1) -
   and - 00:25:305 (6,7,8,9) -
   there are more, but I'm lazy, so you might wanna check your diff for thsoe blankets and fix them real quick
   this might be nitpicking and a lot of people might not even notice this things,
   but to some (like me.. xD) this looks just sloppily mapped. (not saying you did, but it looks like it.)
7. 00:44:878 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - create 'correct' polygon pattern? if it's supposed to be one, it's off by a bit. o-o
8. 01:20:914 (6) - move to 152|238 to match better with 01:20:183 (4) -
9. 02:52:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - curve out like some other streams? it's a bit.. angular atm. o,o
   same here - 03:01:524 (2,3,4,5) - (is it intentional?)
10. 03:38:658 (5) - ctrl+g? have the feeling it flows better (by movement) and jump to 03:39:024 (6) - looks legit (to me).

1. same about the blankets
   .. I know it's tiring to refine shapes here and there and move objects 1 or 2 pixels, but it's woth it!
2. 00:08:658 (5,1) - just wanted to say I like these overlaps. pls keep them! xD
3. 00:10:670 (6) - shape looks kinda weird here. o_o Idk why, but the middle is so.. I really don't know. I think it should look more like this? -
   screen

   
4. 00:11:219 (1,2,3,4,5) - polygon pattern? .o.
5. 00:22:195 (1) - shape looks a bit random, cause it's angular.. if you wanna keep angularity, maybe refine it a bit
   example

   
   (and pay attention to having the red anchors on a red/blue tick, maybe! in most cases sliders look more structured then.)
6. 00:51:463 (4) - ctrl+g maybe? (movement/flow is better I think.)
7. 01:58:780 (4) - refine shape (curvy part)
8. 02:49:817 (1,2) - this overlap is kinda.. unexpected. maybe think of sth different? (if there's no specific reason for it)

1. 00:17:256 (3) - rotate a bit (36° by selec centre), it looks better with 00:17:987 (1) - I think
   (it's ok if it goes 'against the movement' indicated by 00:16:524 (1,2) - cause the slider is so short, you actually don't have to move the cursor, so.. yah. xD)
2. oh, and same about blankets. :b
3. another thing - you have some parts where you follow the vocals and some where you follow the actual beat
   this might be extremely confusing for beginner players, so Idk.. you might wanna take a look at that.
   it's mostly at those white/red tick changes, where you end one object on the red and start the next on a white tick again (or vice versa)
   since you are working on an Easy diff, it's kinda okay.. buuut still. just keep in mind it's hard to read!
4. 02:11:951 (4) - place further up, so you don't break movement/flow so abruptly here ( ~ 296|8)
5. 02:15:061 (5) - ctrl+g, adjust following objects?
6. 02:24:756 (2,3) - really close, move 3's end a bit to the right?

1. combo colours - this yellow is sooo bright, maybe you find a less neon-like yellow?
   or choose a light blue instead (like the blue something's .. on the right side of the background image.. Idk what it is, but the colour is nice!)
   example

   
   
   and

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 167,84,63
   Combo2 : 255,255,255
   Combo3 : 142,244,217
   Combo4 : 177,183,165

Squirrel wrote:

hi there!
mod by req~
eveyrthing is just suggestions, feel free to ignore me. :b xD

[Insane]
lol this is the first time I'm looking at the highest difficulty first.. kinda nervous. O-O

1. 00:01:890 (5) - try to create symmetry with 00:01:524 (4) - maybe? done
   (cause 00:00:427 (1,2,3) - create a nice symmetrical pattern, too)
2. 00:02:256 (6) - move to 177|186 (cause 00:03:170 (1) - ) done
3. you could increase curve here a bit
   screen

   
   imo, that'd look better with 00:03:170 (1) -
4. 00:09:024 (1,2) - blanket better fixed
   comparison

   
   
   did that but changed the pattern a little
5. 00:11:951 (4) - move end to ~ 350|176? just looks better to me. >: ok
   (+ similar shape to 00:12:866 (7) - )
6. 00:20:548 (4,1) - blanket better ^
   same here - 00:23:109 (4) - and 00:23:841 (1) - ^
   and - 00:25:305 (6,7,8,9) - ^
   there are more, but I'm lazy, so you might wanna check your diff for thsoe blankets and fix them real quick
   this might be nitpicking and a lot of people might not even notice this things,
   but to some (like me.. xD) this looks just sloppily mapped. (not saying you did, but it looks like it.)
7. 00:44:878 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - create 'correct' polygon pattern? if it's supposed to be one, it's off by a bit. o-o ok
8. 01:20:914 (6) - move to 152|238 to match better with 01:20:183 (4) -
9. 02:52:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - curve out like some other streams? it's a bit.. angular atm. o,o i think this is good enough to keep
   same here - 03:01:524 (2,3,4,5) - (is it intentional?) i curved this one a little bit more.
10. 03:38:658 (5) - ctrl+g? have the feeling it flows better (by movement) and jump to 03:39:024 (6) - looks legit (to me). done.

well, except for these blankets this looks totally fine.
& even tho the draining time is rather long and you have only one small break I didn't get tired while playing this diff. gj. :3

[Hard]

1. same about the blankets
   .. I know it's tiring to refine shapes here and there and move objects 1 or 2 pixels, but it's woth it!
2. 00:08:658 (5,1) - just wanted to say I like these overlaps. pls keep them! xD :D
3. 00:10:670 (6) - shape looks kinda weird here. o_o Idk why, but the middle is so.. I really don't know. I think it should look more like this? fixed -
   screen

   
4. 00:11:219 (1,2,3,4,5) - polygon pattern? .o. nah im going to keep as is
5. 00:22:195 (1) - shape looks a bit random, cause it's angular.. if you wanna keep angularity, maybe refine it a bit ehh i just scraped the design and made a regular curved slider.
   example

   
   (and pay attention to having the red anchors on a red/blue tick, maybe! in most cases sliders look more structured then.)
6. 00:51:463 (4) - ctrl+g maybe? (movement/flow is better I think.) it looks kinda weird both ways but ill take your word that this is better
7. 01:58:780 (4) - refine shape (curvy part) i don't know what you want it to look like but i tried my best :3
8. 02:49:817 (1,2) - this overlap is kinda.. unexpected. maybe think of sth different? (if there's no specific reason for it) idk i feel like it somewhat feels the vocals but a lot of people are telling me to change it. once more and i'll change it for sure

aaaand, just a really quick look at
[Normal]
cause I'm out of timeeee. ><

1. 00:17:256 (3) - rotate a bit (36° by selec centre), it looks better with 00:17:987 (1) - I think done
   (it's ok if it goes 'against the movement' indicated by 00:16:524 (1,2) - cause the slider is so short, you actually don't have to move the cursor, so.. yah. xD)
2. oh, and same about blankets. :b
3. another thing - you have some parts where you follow the vocals and some where you follow the actual beat
   this might be extremely confusing for beginner players, so Idk.. you might wanna take a look at that.
   it's mostly at those white/red tick changes, where you end one object on the red and start the next on a white tick again (or vice versa)
   since you are working on an Easy diff, it's kinda okay.. buuut still. just keep in mind it's hard to read!
4. 02:11:951 (4) - place further up, so you don't break movement/flow so abruptly here ( ~ 296|8) ok
5. 02:15:061 (5) - ctrl+g, adjust following objects? ok
6. 02:24:756 (2,3) - really close, move 3's end a bit to the right? ok

welp, that's all for now. >:

[General]

1. combo colours - this yellow is sooo bright, maybe you find a less neon-like yellow?
   or choose a light blue instead (like the blue something's .. on the right side of the background image.. Idk what it is, but the colour is nice!) ooh nice color
   example

   
   
   and

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 167,84,63
   Combo2 : 255,255,255
   Combo3 : 142,244,217
   Combo4 : 177,183,165

sooo, yah. overall a really nice mapset!
If you want me to take a look at the Easy map once it's done, just send a pm!

and if you want me to go into detail with the blanket stuff.. just tell me, I can list them up. xb

Good luck with this!!
*squee* ^__^/

1. 04:14:969 (1) - just one spinner is enough, there is no need to use two of them. Players will be tired after playing pretty long map and the second spinner is just too much spinning for poor and tired players. Please, consider removing it!
2. Try disabling Letterboxing (Song Setup > Storyboarding). It kinda hurts your awesome BG.
3. Also, try replacing the blue color with something else it is too bright and doesn't fit with your BG. For example, try my colors. They're not so bright, so players' eyes will not hurt too much.
   
   ugu

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 167,84,63
   Combo2 : 223,210,176
   Combo3 : 152,151,137
   Combo4 : 177,183,165

1. You've got plenty of 3/2 and 2/1 gaps between hitobjects. It may confuse players, so I'm asking you to reduce Overall Diff by one tick. It may help beginners to stay alive and enjoy your diff more.
2. 00:14:878 (1,3) - that's kinda nazi, but a lot of your blanket-sliders are imperfect. You can improve them, so your map will look a bit neater.
   Note: let me convince you this can easily convert to this. It won't take to much time, fix your sliders!
3. 00:55:305 (2,3) - this overlap does not look natural here, I'd say that it feels out of place. Try to replace it with something more suitable for your style? example1 or example 2
   Note: 03:36:280 (2,1) - 04:05:548 (2,3) - the same happens here. Maybe I'm just being too picky, but I relly dislike this pattern for some reason.
4. 01:34:085 (1,2) - beginners may accidentally ignore the-reverse arrow and click on (2). Try to avoid that by moving (1)'s tail somewhere else, if it is possible!
   Note: at this point players may get stressed and forget about the reverse-arrow, it is important to keep patterns intuitively playable!
5. 01:53:109 (1) - I'm not sure, but I would remove this new combo. It is not necessary here and it makes your pattern too short. In fact, your comboing looks a bit inconsistent and sometimes even messy. Please, check it once again, I'm sure you'll be able to fix some of the mistakes on your own!
6. 02:26:768 (1) - by the way, you can drag the beginning of the break to the big white line, so it will match with the music better. try to do it, it's easy!
   Note: same applies for all the breaks in all diffs, try dragging them to the downbeats, so they'd match with the music better.
7. 03:05:000 - this green line is totally useless and it is confusing for some modders Try to avoid useless green lines
   
   The diff needs some polishing and maybe some work on comboing. Apart from these things, that's a solid Easy.

1. HP Drain and OD should be set to 4. It will make the mapset a bit better-balanced and it works better with your rhythm. Moreover, that's a default settings for that kind of diffs.
2. 00:33:536 (2,3) - well, shape of the slider can be improved.This is what you can get if you spend 30 seconds to improve the slider. So, please, take your time and work on the sliders. I won't mention the same issue anymore.
3. 00:38:475 (3,1) - the transition from (3) to (1) is pretty hard to understand and flows pretty confusing. How about re-arrangin the pattern? See if you like it or not.
4. 00:56:036 (5,1) - the transition here feels weird. Considr changing it to something more logical? Well, at least try my example!
   Note: same happens a few more times poke me in-game for a detailed flow-mod or try to fix yourself if you agree with me.
5. 01:19:268 (1) - finish sound feels too noisy here. Consider replacing it with a whistle, please!
6. 01:54:573 (1,2,1,2,3) - nazi - maybe it's just me, but this pattern looks really messy and all of the notes are too close to each other. Perhaps, you've used too many 1/2s in a row. Consider simplifying your rhythm here to make the pattern look less complicated.
7. 02:48:719 (3,1,2) - just a little suggestion to improve your pattern.
   
   Example!

   
   

   363,262,168719,2,8,L|173:264,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   101,226,169817,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   177,177,170183,2,0,P|188:248|105:317,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

8. 03:56:402 (5) - the second reverse-arrow appears too late and it is really hard to notice it in ime, that is why such sliders are really tricky/confusing. Please, do not use such sliders for E/N diffs, unless sliders are long enough to be readable!
   
   A little bit more polishing and maybe a few more mods and you'll get an amazing diff! Keep up the good work!

1. This diff is supposed to be hard, so I'd increase HP Drain by one tick to make it really hard for players. Don't worry, the diff is still playable, but with higher Hp it's just a bit more interesting/challenging to play!
2. 00:08:292 (2,3) - just a little spacing mistake, I guess. It is noticeable, so it makes your map look a bit random.
   Note: x1.4 is not big enough to be considered as a ump, so I feel like it's a spacing mistake. It happens with a few more patterns like 00:32:622 (1,2) - so, I'm asking you to fix all similar patterns if you agree with me.
3. 00:36:829 (1,2,3,4) - maybe I just don't understand something, but x1.0 DS is different from what you've ued before in this diff. And it is changing at 00:42:134 (4,5) - again. Perhaps, you've made some spacig mistakes. If it is so - please fix them!
4. 00:58:963 (7) - whoops, overlap with the HP-Bar. Such things are not really important, but it's better if you avoid them, so your map looks much better
5. 01:18:811 (5) - such sliders are fine for this diff, but you can mke them a bit more readable and playable. Take a look here!. Sliders with just one repeat are more readable, so players would prefre them. :3
6. 01:33:353 (3,4) - can you avoid placing a jump here? It doesn't really fits with anything in music and kinda hard to understand. Random jumps can be pretty annoying, y'know.
7. 02:29:695 (1,2,1,2,1) - if only you could improve the blanketing here, I would really enjoy the paattern. Seriously, I like the idea, but sliders are a bit messy.
8. 02:32:439 (5) - there's a missed new combo on the slider, right? A new combo there would make the jump playable + it'll fit with the music and your patterns.
9. 02:35:366 (6) - and one more new combo here to emphasize velocity changes. It'll make the diff intuitively-understandable for low-skilled players.
   
   The diff appears a bit messy and has a couple of comboing mistakes. Sometimes spacing becomes weird, too. But your rhythm and patterns are really interesting and pleasant to play!

1. 00:16:158 (5) - try to use Ctrl+G on this slider, it may give you a bit more interesting flow.
2. 01:04:817 (5,6) - that little spacing mistake spoils the impression from the whole diff. I really do like the diff, but such minor mistakes make me sad
3. 02:12:683 (5) - nazi - meh, dude, such overlaps are the ONLY thing which really needs to be fixed in this diff, imo. I really do LOVE the diff, but minor overlaps are pretty annoying.
   Note: I'm using default skin, but the overlaps are visible with any other skin, too.
4. 03:06:737 (4) - 03:24:664 (6) - a new combo might help players to read this part. Not a big deal, anyway.
5. 03:10:670 (4) - using Ctrl+G on this slider gives you much smoother flow. It is also makes the slider intuitively catchable during gameplay.
   
   I'm impressed with the diff! Really good job!

No Dap wrote:

heavenly6 -> Heavenly6

or not?

Damnae wrote:

No Dap wrote:

heavenly6 -> Heavenly6

or not?

-Bakari- wrote:

Oh my God, that's an impressing mapset!

Randomly picked the map from #modreqs, hope you don't mind my mod.

[General]

1. 04:14:969 (1) - just one spinner is enough, there is no need to use two of them. Players will be tired after playing pretty long map and the second spinner is just too much spinning for poor and tired players. Please, consider removing it! ok sure, removed on all difficulties.
2. Try disabling Letterboxing (Song Setup > Storyboarding). It kinda hurts your awesome BG. done
3. Also, try replacing the blue color with something else it is too bright and doesn't fit with your BG. For example, try my colors. They're not so bright, so players' eyes will not hurt too much. makes sense, thanks for the codes
   
   ugu

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 167,84,63
   Combo2 : 223,210,176
   Combo3 : 152,151,137
   Combo4 : 177,183,165

[Easy]

1. You've got plenty of 3/2 and 2/1 gaps between hitobjects. It may confuse players, so I'm asking you to reduce Overall Diff by one tick. It may help beginners to stay alive and enjoy your diff more. changed
2. 00:14:878 (1,3) - that's kinda nazi, but a lot of your blanket-sliders are imperfect. You can improve them, so your map will look a bit neater.
   Note: let me convince you this can easily convert to this. It won't take to much time, fix your sliders!
3. 00:55:305 (2,3) - this overlap does not look natural here, I'd say that it feels out of place. Try to replace it with something more suitable for your style? sure. i chose example 1. example1 or example 2
   Note: 03:36:280 (2,1) - 04:05:548 (2,3) - the same happens here. Maybe I'm just being too picky, but I relly dislike this pattern for some reason. fixed these too.
4. 01:34:085 (1,2) - beginners may accidentally ignore the-reverse arrow and click on (2). Try to avoid that by moving (1)'s tail somewhere else, if it is possible! changed tail to point left.
   Note: at this point players may get stressed and forget about the reverse-arrow, it is important to keep patterns intuitively playable!
5. 01:53:109 (1) - I'm not sure, but I would remove this new combo. It is not necessary here and it makes your pattern too short. In fact, your comboing looks a bit inconsistent and sometimes even messy. Please, check it once again, I'm sure you'll be able to fix some of the mistakes on your own! removed nc. i'll keep an eye out for other combo problems.
6. 02:26:768 (1) - by the way, you can drag the beginning of the break to the big white line, so it will match with the music better. try to do it, it's easy! i'm kinda confused on what to do here :3
   Note: same applies for all the breaks in all diffs, try dragging them to the downbeats, so they'd match with the music better.
7. 03:05:000 - this green line is totally useless and it is confusing for some modders Try to avoid useless green lines removed
   
   The diff needs some polishing and maybe some work on comboing. Apart from these things, that's a solid Easy.

[Normal]

1. HP Drain and OD should be set to 4. It will make the mapset a bit better-balanced and it works better with your rhythm. Moreover, that's a default settings for that kind of diffs. changed
2. 00:33:536 (2,3) - well, shape of the slider can be improved.This is what you can get if you spend 30 seconds to improve the slider. So, please, take your time and work on the sliders. I won't mention the same issue anymore. i tried to fix it but i have no idea how to make good curved sliders.
3. 00:38:475 (3,1) - the transition from (3) to (1) is pretty hard to understand and flows pretty confusing. How about re-arrangin the pattern? sure, thanks for the ideaSee if you like it or not.
4. 00:56:036 (5,1) - the transition here feels weird. Considr changing it to something more logical? Well, at least try my example! ^
   Note: same happens a few more times poke me in-game for a detailed flow-mod or try to fix yourself if you agree with me.
5. 01:19:268 (1) - finish sound feels too noisy here. Consider replacing it with a whistle, please! meh i think it sounds weird both ways but i'll do it your way until i find someway to make it sound better.
6. 01:54:573 (1,2,1,2,3) - nazi - maybe it's just me, but this pattern looks really messy and all of the notes are too close to each other. Perhaps, you've used too many 1/2s in a row. Consider simplifying your rhythm here to make the pattern look less complicated. simplified
7. 02:48:719 (3,1,2) - just a little suggestion to improve your pattern. done. i did it without the code but hopefully i did what you were envisioning
   
   Example!

   
   

   363,262,168719,2,8,L|173:264,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   101,226,169817,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   177,177,170183,2,0,P|188:248|105:317,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

8. 03:56:402 (5) - the second reverse-arrow appears too late and it is really hard to notice it in ime, that is why such sliders are really tricky/confusing. Please, do not use such sliders for E/N diffs, unless sliders are long enough to be readable! suggested in another mod and fixed!
   
   A little bit more polishing and maybe a few more mods and you'll get an amazing diff! Keep up the good work!

[Hard]

1. This diff is supposed to be hard, so I'd increase HP Drain by one tick to make it really hard for players. Don't worry, the diff is still playable, but with higher Hp it's just a bit more interesting/challenging to play! if u say so..
2. 00:08:292 (2,3) - just a little spacing mistake, I guess. It is noticeable, so it makes your map look a bit random. fixed
   Note: x1.4 is not big enough to be considered as a ump, so I feel like it's a spacing mistake. It happens with a few more patterns like 00:32:622 (1,2) - so, I'm asking you to fix all similar patterns if you agree with me.
3. 00:36:829 (1,2,3,4) - maybe I just don't understand something, but x1.0 DS is different from what you've ued before in this diff. And it is changing at 00:42:134 (4,5) - again. Perhaps, you've made some spacig mistakes. If it is so - please fix them!
4. 00:58:963 (7) - whoops, overlap with the HP-Bar. Such things are not really important, but it's better if you avoid them, so your map looks much better fixed
5. 01:18:811 (5) - such sliders are fine for this diff, but you can mke them a bit more readable and playable. Take a look here!. Sliders with just one repeat are more readable, so players would prefre them. :3 sure thing, good to know.
6. 01:33:353 (3,4) - can you avoid placing a jump here? It doesn't really fits with anything in music and kinda hard to understand. Random jumps can be pretty annoying, y'know. ehh I don't think it really feels like a jump too much when you play it but i reduced the spacing a tiny bit.
7. 02:29:695 (1,2,1,2,1) - if only you could improve the blanketing here, I would really enjoy the paattern. Seriously, I like the idea, but sliders are a bit messy. attempted to fix but im sure you already know that i suck at blanketing/making sliders/mapping.
8. 02:32:439 (5) - there's a missed new combo on the slider, right? A new combo there would make the jump playable + it'll fit with the music and your patterns. oh yep. thanks for catching this
9. 02:35:366 (6) - and one more new combo here to emphasize velocity changes. It'll make the diff intuitively-understandable for low-skilled players. oops, forgot about that.
   
   The diff appears a bit messy and has a couple of comboing mistakes. Sometimes spacing becomes weird, too. But your rhythm and patterns are really interesting and pleasant to play!

[Insane]

1. 00:16:158 (5) - try to use Ctrl+G on this slider, it may give you a bit more interesting flow. changed it but i think it has a weird flow to (1). Might change it back if someone suggests to.
2. 01:04:817 (5,6) - that little spacing mistake spoils the impression from the whole diff. I really do like the diff, but such minor mistakes make me sad so sorry . fixed
3. 02:12:683 (5) - nazi - meh, dude, such overlaps are the ONLY thing which really needs to be fixed in this diff, imo. I really do LOVE the diff, but minor overlaps are pretty annoying. im not really too sure what this is overlapping
   Note: I'm using default skin, but the overlaps are visible with any other skin, too.
4. 03:06:737 (4) - 03:24:664 (6) - a new combo might help players to read this part. Not a big deal, anyway. done
5. 03:10:670 (4) - using Ctrl+G on this slider gives you much smoother flow. It is also makes the slider intuitively catchable during gameplay. oh yup, thanks.
   
   I'm impressed with the diff! Really good job!

Speaking aboutthe mapset, it still needs some more work. But it has a lot of potential, can't see what we'll get when the map will be ranked! Star! ~

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Best of luck!

sorry about any mistakes/typos I'm not feeling good now