Zero__wind wrote:

ok let's see
no kd for this post

oh god all the missing claps lol q-q
basically fixed everything except one and ill explain o-o

General
all the inherited points are 1ms unsnapped and that causes kiai time unsnapped, plz resnap them all properly
your preview time is unsnapped, plz reset it to 00:55:164 - in all diffs
your soft-slidertick2.wav file is totally not used, plz remove it
I suggest that you disable letterbox for all diffs

Insane
00:41:923 (1) - missing finish
00:42:337 (3) - missing clap
00:43:164 - missing clap
00:54:337 (5) - remove clap fits better
01:01:578 (9) - (324,336) for better flow, no need to stack
01:10:888 (2) - (224,320) plays better, currently spacing too small after a jump
01:19:785 (4) - stack on 01:20:406 (2) - 's end instead of head for better flow
02:39:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - recommend to clap on all of them and set some inherited points to gradually increase volume from lower one, 30% ~40% ~50% ~60%
02:53:095 (3) - (140,92) for better flow
03:07:578 - missing finish

Hard
00:48:544 (1) - missing finish
00:53:923 (3) - missing clap
01:04:053 - add a circle here at (184,304) for more coherent rhythm
01:21:750 (1) - referring to Insane, you need an additional whistle here well idk why there was a whistle on the insane diff but i just removed it o-o
01:48:130 - missing finish
02:01:371 - missing finish
02:05:923 - missing clap
02:06:750 (3) - missing clap
02:13:371 (3) - missing clap
02:19:371 (4,5) - remove body whistle, only keep the one on head and tail
02:39:233 (4,1,2,3) - rhythm too loose, plz use at least coherent 1/2 circles with claps at this part to present the drums
02:25:371 (2) - move the whistle at end to its head for consistency I think so for here i kinda tried to use the whistles like claps so i put them only on beats 2 and 4
02:41:095 - missing finish
03:07:578 - missing finish

Easy
00:28:268 - remove clap as there's simply no drum
00:41:923 (1) - missing finish
00:53:509 (3) - missing clap for all three beats
02:07:164 (6) - why is there a clap on sliderbody lol, seems no harm though
02:12:957 (4) - missing clap
03:07:578 (1) - missing finish
03:21:233 (2) - missing clap

That's all.
If only you could be more careful and considerate, you know, you could get your maps ranked faster

Zero__wind wrote:

pkmnyab's Normal
00:48:544 - missing finish added finish
00:53:095 - missing clap added clap
01:09:233 (2,3) - plz better arrange the rhythm like 01:11:303 (1,2) - to keep the rhythm consistent I feel that it's better as it is. The reason I changed the rhythm for second part is because the vocal isn't as smooth. This is also why I stacked a hitcircle on the slider. I also feel that making it consistent isn't necessary as the vocal isn't exactly the same at both parts.

for referrence only

01:34:888 - add a circle here with finish, and don't drag the break time 01:34:268 - , just leave it natural fixed
02:02:200 (2,3) - unstack them to avoid confusion, it's better that you only stack 1/2 beats like 01:48:751 (1,2) - throughout the diff, no 1/1 stacks fixed

SPOILER

02:06:751 (4,5) - replace these with a 1/2 slider? it's currently confusing because 02:06:751 (4,5) - and 02:07:165 (6) - are on different tracks fixed

SPOILER

02:13:785 - remove clap sounds better, no drums at this point fixed
02:14:613 (1) - unnecessary NC, better remove it fixed
02:55:993 (4) - same problem like the first kiai, plz rearrange the rhythm on vocal like 02:57:441 (6) - to keep the rhythm stable and intuitive didn't change for same reason as before

only for referrence

03:05:923 (1) - missing clap I think fixed
03:10:888 (1,2) - unstack them like I've mentioned above fixed

SPOILER

03:11:302 (2) - missing clap on both head and tail fixed
03:20:819 (1) - missing finish fixed
03:24:544 (2) - need clap on both beginning and end fixed
03:32:406 (1,3) - both clap to fit the drums? fixed
03:34:061 (1) - use some inherited points to gradually silence this like other diffs plz? fixed

No Dap wrote:

such pro. teach me how to map pleae

poddo wrote:

yoo!! your map is doing great! uwu hope it gets ranked >w< the song is good too

some very minor modding:

easy mode:
01:21:647 (1) - the spinner is too short, beginners usually suck with spinners because they spin around the border of the entire osu window or just put too much stress on their hands, if you make it longer, they have an easier time with spinning it. since it will sync less with the music if you make it longer, you could completely remove it and add hit objects instead. less spinners = better for easy mode hmm i gave it a little bit of thought i guess fixed

hard mode:
basically sometimes the hard mode feels too easy, i guess i can note out that you should emphasize the beats more? like.. hard doesn't need to be that hard. i think the difficulty of this is appropriate
00:11:095 - add circle here
00:11:923 - here too
00:15:647 - and here
00:16:888 - here? maybe. if you want the speed to slow down or something as the voice comes on to match the pace, then don't add it here
00:19:785 - same goes here
01:19:992 (1,2,3,4) - the shapes of these sliders are asymmetrical, maybe you should match up their shapes(unless asymmetry was what you were aiming for) intentional

that's about all i can help with! good luck ;w;

Sellenite wrote:

Hi！from Modding Queues M4M

[pkmnyab's Normal]
01:52:061 (6,7) - a bit strange,I think delete them and put a note in the 01:52:681 will be better remapped this part, should be better now
02:34:475 (1) - remove NC kept NC but removed NC from slider in previous measure
02:34:889 (2) - NC fixed
02:36:131 (1) - remove NC I like this NC here to match the music in the background and the vocal

good luck~

neonat wrote:

General

pkmnyab's Normal

00:15:854 (2,3) - is there any particularly striking difference between this circle and slider end that is different from the rest of the verse? Only both of them do not have the clap I might have left out the claps here to let the vocal stand out more, I'm not sure. Anyways added claps
00:40:268 (1) - end of slider clap fixed
00:53:510 (1) - this spinner should be louder, do not use 5%, use at least 20% fixed
02:12:958 (1) - clap on the start of the slider (why is there clap on the body of the slider?) hm this might be from back when I thought putting clap on the body did the same thing as putting it on head and tail, anyways fixed
03:11:302 (2) - clap on start and end of slider fixed
03:19:992 (6) - clap on the middle (repeating end) of the slider fixed

Good luck

neonat wrote:

General

First of all, you really need to get your sources straightened out (I honestly found the previous discussions amusing because of all the assumptions made)
Heart's Homing Instinct is what people deem as the translation of the title, in all the officials I have seen, it's either 帰想本能, Kisō Hon'nō, Kisou Honnou, all of those sorts etc. So you took a subber as a source of the title even when though it used "HEART’S HOMING INSTINCT" you used "HEART’s HOMING INSTINCT". Even then, they sometimes use "Heart Homing Instinct". So honestly, this is really doubtful, all capitals is highly unlikely from the official source.
Second thing is that this is a cover and not an original. The original is sung by Hatsune Miku. Add 'cover' into the tags. The song was released way back in 2009 in the Lovegazer album.
From 03:07:578 - onwards the supporting vocals in the background is Hatsune Miku, you might want to add Vocaloid and Hatsune Miku into the tags

The current tags on Easy Hard and Insane are as follow:
LOVE CALENDER so18140621 Ryosuke Dr.R Sakai pkmnyab kissou honnou
Current tags on the Normal are:
LOVE CALENDER so18140621 Ryosuke Dr.R Sakai pkmnyab kissou honnou
fix the difference (which is just 1 space....) for consistency (Edit: wait what? did the forum fix the space? The one with 2 spaces in between R and Sakai is the Easy Hard Insane)

still not sure about the title but fixed the tags

Hard

00:33:232 (5) - object end is not snapped fixed i think?
01:20:819 (3) - clap on the end of slider k
02:53:509 (4) - ^ ^
03:19:992 (1) - ^ ^

Insane

00:36:130 (3) - you can split this up to have focus on 00:36:337 as well hmm.. ok
00:36:750 - you can filler here to lead to the next part i dont understand what u mean
01:07:578 (6) - clap on end of slider added all claps
01:20:819 (3) - ^
02:16:061 (5) - possible spicing up of rhythm, end the slider at 02:16:371 and have another slider from 02:16:475 to 02:16:681 nah not here
02:53:509 (4) - clap on end of slider
03:06:750 (3) - ^
03:19:992 (1) - ^

Good luck

BeatofIke wrote:

Looking better. Keep it up!

1. Remove OSB File. You don't need it since your map does not contain a storyboard.
2. On Normal difficulty, you forgot to add video for this difficulty.
3. On Hard, this slider at 00:28:681 (2) is unsnapped. Please re-snap this sider.

No Dap wrote:

Teach me the secret of getting BAT mod

No Dap wrote:

Teach me the secret of getting BAT mod

pkmnyab wrote:

No Dap wrote:

Teach me the secret of getting BAT mod

...it all makes sense now

1. Does the title need to be in uppercase, actually...?
2. I'm sure it should be "Kisou" instead of "Kissou" in tags after digging some information about the song.
3. 03:07:578 - I think the second kiai should end here since it's the end of the chorus. The current kiai end looks... random.

1. 00:08:819 (1) - Make it look like this to create a better flow to 00:10:061 (2) and to blanket 00:08:406 (5) so the designing here will look neater overall?
2. 00:49:371 (2,3) - Rotate them 10 degrees counter clockwise and move them to (216,68) to, again, make a better flow from 00:48:544 (1)?
3. 01:23:302 - 01:24:957 - Map this part so the break after the chorus begins at 01:24:957? It really feels more natural, because the song's rhythm structure changes from there (I hope you know what I'm talking about lol). Just try it first.
4. 03:10:061 (1,3) - Swap NC and remove the NC at 03:11:302 (1)? Since you use an NC every two stanzas (usually), I think it's more logical if you did everything that I said, as it'll make the combo pattern consistent.

1. 00:07:579 (4) - Move to (296,136) so the spacing at 00:06:751 (3,4,5) will be even?
2. 00:30:337 (1,4) - Swap NC so the combo pattern will be consistent? (Applies to similar cases. Honestly, I can't see any reason about this combo pattern which goes by "NC - 1 stanza - NC - 2 stanzas - NC - 1 stanza - (rinse and repeat from the beginning)"... I don't think it followed anything in particular lol)
3. 00:33:648 (1) - Move this to (388,112) to improve the flow?
4. 00:33:648 (1,2) - What's with the spacing lol
5. 00:53:095 - Since this is the stanza's fourth white tick, what about adding a clap? There's no reason to leave it unmapped.
6. 01:06:544 (1) - What's with this NC? I think this is not necessary, judging from how you make your combo pattern.
7. 01:19:993 (1) - ^
8. 01:35:510 (1) - ^
9. 01:41:510 (6,1) - Swap NC to follow how the stanza goes here?
10. 01:46:475 (1) - Uh, remove NC? I also think this one is redundant.
11. 01:55:579 (1,3) - Swap NC and remove the NC at 01:58:062 (1) to make the combo pattern consistent.
12. 02:08:819 (2) - Move this to (84,260) so it'll look neater here because the head is directly below 02:07:993 (1)'s tail?
13. 02:57:441 (6,1) - (6) is overlapping (1) to the point where the half of the circle is covered. Not only this looks jarring, but it is also pretty hard to read. Consider moving them out from each other please.
14. 03:04:889 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing?
15. 03:10:061 (5,6) - The flow could be better if (5) were moved to (104,212) and (6) were moved to (128,320), I think.
16. 03:19:992 (6) - Move the node on the tail to (72,128) so the design here will be better and the flow will also be nicer?

1. 00:11:302 (2,1) - Inconsistent spacing?
2. 00:15:440 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:33:232 (5,1) - ^. I know why is this one inconsistent, but you shouldn't sacrifice gameplay with something as small as having a slider's head stacked on another slider's...
4. 00:42:337 (3,4,5) - ^ (Suddenly using 1.0x?)
5. 00:48:957 (2,3) - I just realized something from here: You don't have any (even slightly) jumpy pattern until now. Maybe try to add some jumps so the diff will be a little more fun?
6. 00:59:302 (2,3) - Same as 00:33:232 (5,1).
7. 01:00:750 (6,7,8) - Try to make the rhythm look like this? Fits with the vocal pretty nicely, IMO. Here's a pattern suggestion if you want.
8. 01:03:440 (3,4,1) - I know you want to make a nice-looking pattern here, but I think you don't need to use 0.8x. Using 1.1x is possible here, and I recommend it so this pattern won't feel awkward to play.
9. 01:19:992 (1,2,3,4) - This honestly doesn't look too neat lol. Try to make something like this by copy-pasting (1) and flipping it?
10. 01:36:544 (1,2) - 1.04x spacing?
11. 01:39:440 (4,5,1) - Make it look like this (remember that (4) is stacked below (3)) for a better flow? Currently, the cursor movement feels kinda forced...
12. 01:53:095 (1,2,3,4) - Suddenly using 1.2x? What about making them look like this (this is just a rough illustration) with 1.1x spacing? Feels more consistent overall.
13. 02:31:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing here is very inconsistent. Consider using one single DS value.
14. 02:52:681 - 03:07:578 - ^

1. 01:13:578 (4,5) - The direction of the curve is breaking the flow from (3)'s curve. Maybe copy-paste (3) and rotate it counter clockwise a little to replace (4,5). Their curve and the direction of the rotation here doesn't seem to go along well. (I hope you get what I meant lol)
2. 01:17:095 (2) - What about simply using a copy-pasted and 180 degrees-flipped version of 01:16:681 (1) instead for, again, a better flow?
3. 01:21:647 (1) - Move to (184,356) so it'd look neater because this isn't overlapped below 01:21:233 (4)?
4. 01:54:750 (1) - I think this is too close to 01:54:337 (5)... Try moving it to (392,152)?
5. 01:59:509 (4,1) - The anti-jump here doesn't really work well since you're going on a constant 1/2 rhythm for the map (by this, I mean the gap between objects are mainly 1/2), and there's nothing that really indicates the need of it... So make the spacing consistent?
6. 02:44:199 (3) - Similar to the first two suggestions; I think you should be able to get the idea from there.
7. 03:20:819 (3,1) - Swap NC? I can't see what is the current combo pattern following...
8. 03:27:440 (3,1) - ^

Hinsvar wrote:

Hello!

>pkmnyab's Normal

1. 00:07:579 (4) - Move to (296,136) so the spacing at 00:06:751 (3,4,5) will be even? fixed
2. 00:30:337 (1,4) - Swap NC so the combo pattern will be consistent? (Applies to similar cases. Honestly, I can't see any reason about this combo pattern which goes by "NC - 1 stanza - NC - 2 stanzas - NC - 1 stanza - (rinse and repeat from the beginning)"... I don't think it followed anything in particular lol) yea I'm not sure what I did there lol
3. 00:33:648 (1) - Move this to (388,112) to improve the flow?fixed
4. 00:33:648 (1,2) - What's with the spacing lolfixed with the previous change
5. 00:53:095 - Since this is the stanza's fourth white tick, what about adding a clap? There's no reason to leave it unmapped.shortened slider and added clap
6. 01:06:544 (1) - What's with this NC? I think this is not necessary, judging from how you make your combo pattern.fixed
7. 01:19:993 (1) - ^fixed
8. 01:35:510 (1) - ^ fixed
9. 01:41:510 (6,1) - Swap NC to follow how the stanza goes here? fixed
10. 01:46:475 (1) - Uh, remove NC? I also think this one is redundant. fixed
11. 01:55:579 (1,3) - Swap NC and remove the NC at 01:58:062 (1) to make the combo pattern consistent. fixed
12. 02:08:819 (2) - Move this to (84,260) so it'll look neater here because the head is directly below 02:07:993 (1)'s tail? fixed
13. 02:57:441 (6,1) - (6) is overlapping (1) to the point where the half of the circle is covered. Not only this looks jarring, but it is also pretty hard to read. Consider moving them out from each other please. rearranged notes
14. 03:04:889 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing? fixed
15. 03:10:061 (5,6) - The flow could be better if (5) were moved to (104,212) and (6) were moved to (128,320), I think. fixed
16. 03:19:992 (6) - Move the node on the tail to (72,128) so the design here will be better and the flow will also be nicer? fixed

Yep, quite a nice map (as expected from Canadians). Insane's pretty fun actually, but it still looks a little messy. I tried to keep my urge from giving placement suggestions because I'd use my own style lol

Good luck on the way!

Hinsvar wrote:

Hello!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

1. Does the title need to be in uppercase, actually...? Yes i believe so
2. I'm sure it should be "Kisou" instead of "Kissou" in tags after digging some information about the song. ok
3. 03:07:578 - I think the second kiai should end here since it's the end of the chorus. The current kiai end looks... random. uhh actually i think that's only on easy and that was my mistake xD oops

>Easy

1. 00:08:819 (1) - Make it look like this to create a better flow to 00:10:061 (2) and to blanket 00:08:406 (5) so the designing here will look neater overall? l
2. 00:49:371 (2,3) - Rotate them 10 degrees counter clockwise and move them to (216,68) to, again, make a better flow from 00:48:544 (1)? hmm k fixed
3. 01:23:302 - 01:24:957 - Map this part so the break after the chorus begins at 01:24:957? It really feels more natural, because the song's rhythm structure changes from there (I hope you know what I'm talking about lol). Just try it first. ehh i disagree, and i'd like the break times to be somewhat consistent :X
4. 03:10:061 (1,3) - Swap NC and remove the NC at 03:11:302 (1)? Since you use an NC every two stanzas (usually), I think it's more logical if you did everything that I said, as it'll make the combo pattern consistent.agree, fixed

>Hard

1. 00:11:302 (2,1) - Inconsistent spacing? lol whoops fixed these thanks
2. 00:15:440 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:33:232 (5,1) - ^. I know why is this one inconsistent, but you shouldn't sacrifice gameplay with something as small as having a slider's head stacked on another slider's...
4. 00:42:337 (3,4,5) - ^ (Suddenly using 1.0x?) fak forgot to change this. (i had all 1.0 before but changed to 1.1 since overlaps n stuff)
5. 00:48:957 (2,3) - I just realized something from here: You don't have any (even slightly) jumpy pattern until now. Maybe try to add some jumps so the diff will be a little more fun? Alright i added a few small jumps where i think is appropriate ^o^
6. 00:59:302 (2,3) - Same as 00:33:232 (5,1). yep
7. 01:00:750 (6,7,8) - Try to make the rhythm look like this? Fits with the vocal pretty nicely, IMO. Here's a pattern suggestion if you want. hmm nice rhythm! applied.
8. 01:03:440 (3,4,1) - I know you want to make a nice-looking pattern here, but I think you don't need to use 0.8x. Using 1.1x is possible here, and I recommend it so this pattern won't feel awkward to play.k after a bit of rearranging i got it to work
9. 01:19:992 (1,2,3,4) - This honestly doesn't look too neat lol. Try to make something like this by copy-pasting (1) and flipping it?ahh i really like this tho idk why x.x ill keep for now until someone else tell me to change :X
10. 01:36:544 (1,2) - 1.04x spacing? uhh lol. k i fixed all the spacing issues
11. 01:39:440 (4,5,1) - Make it look like this (remember that (4) is stacked below (3)) for a better flow? Currently, the cursor movement feels kinda forced... alright
12. 01:53:095 (1,2,3,4) - Suddenly using 1.2x? What about making them look like this (this is just a rough illustration) with 1.1x spacing? Feels more consistent overall. i thought it might look neater with 1.2 but u know what? i think it works fine with 1.1 too
13. 02:31:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing here is very inconsistent. Consider using one single DS value.
14. 02:52:681 - 03:07:578 - ^

>Insane

1. 01:13:578 (4,5) - The direction of the curve is breaking the flow from (3)'s curve. Maybe copy-paste (3) and rotate it counter clockwise a little to replace (4,5). Their curve and the direction of the rotation here doesn't seem to go along well. (I hope you get what I meant lol) hmm, i don't really see TOO much of a problem, and i like this :X
2. 01:17:095 (2) - What about simply using a copy-pasted and 180 degrees-flipped version of 01:16:681 (1) instead for, again, a better flow? hmm i've considered this too, fixed!
3. 01:21:647 (1) - Move to (184,356) so it'd look neater because this isn't overlapped below 01:21:233 (4)? fixed
4. 01:54:750 (1) - I think this is too close to 01:54:337 (5)... Try moving it to (392,152)? i didnt use ur coordinates but i spaced them out
5. 01:59:509 (4,1) - The anti-jump here doesn't really work well since you're going on a constant 1/2 rhythm for the map (by this, I mean the gap between objects are mainly 1/2), and there's nothing that really indicates the need of it... So make the spacing consistent?kk
6. 02:44:199 (3) - Similar to the first two suggestions; I think you should be able to get the idea from there. ^
7. 03:20:819 (3,1) - Swap NC? I can't see what is the current combo pattern following... kk fixed these ncs
8. 03:27:440 (3,1) - ^

Yep, quite a nice map (as expected from Canadians)lolwat? are Canadians suppose to be good at mapping xD?. Insane's pretty fun actually, but it still looks a little messy. I tried to keep my urge from giving placement suggestions because I'd use my own style lol

Good luck on the way! TYVM! for mod! it was very helpful, i wish i could give me more than just 1 kudos for it haha

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello~

[General]
You have inconsistent kiai times. o:
02:14:613 (3) - Favorite part T_T lel i didnt map this part on easy eheh..

[Easy]
00:05:095 (5,1) - The blanket could be better o3o nazi.exe bleh k i tried my best >_< (fixed the rest as well)
00:05:509 (1,3) - ^
00:10:061 (2,3) - ^
00:17:923 (5,1) - ^ ._.
00:59:716 (3,1) - ^
And goes on like this, nothing else than those nazi o: Good job :3

[Hard]
02:53:923 (5,1) - Nazi blanket .-. mmk
03:03:854 (7,1) - Make this blanket better, just for the looking part .-.

[Insane]
02:50:612 (4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing. fixed

That aside, have a star and good luck :3.

pkmnyab wrote:

[Hard]
Just some suggestions. If I straight-up tell you to do something, keep in mind that it's a suggestion. I'm not saying you have to do it! but seriously do it or I will hunt you down


00:03:647 (5,1) - this is a bit awkward in terms of flow, right now I think there are two things you can do to make it better:

1.
00:03:233 (3,4,5) - arrange like this

SPOILER

00:03:854 (1) - ctrl+g
00:04:681 (3) - ctrl+g

By rearranging (3,4,5), it transitions well into 00:03:854 (1) - (assuming that you already ctrl+g'd it). Test it out and see if it flows better.

2.
00:03:233 (3,4,5) - arrange like this (I also moved (2) down a little)

SPOILER

00:03:854 (1,2,3,4) - use 1.1x distance snap to increase space between each slider and make it look less cluttered

SPOILER

The first change allows a smooth transition from (5) into (1). Second change makes it look neater and also a bit more difficult/less easy since the movement created from dragging a slider to the end then going to the next slider seemed a little tight/cramped.


...moving on, 00:07:164 (1,2,3,4) - you can also apply 1.1x distance snap here

00:11:095 - consider adding a note here, feels sort of empty given the note density before this part

00:14:199 (2) - flow improvement, ctrl+g
00:15:026 (4) - ctrl+g, also curve downwards (position is at x 412 y 296)
00:15:440 (1) - also move this if you applied the last change, the position is in the last screenshot

00:26:819 (4,1) - move (4) down and (1) up a little because current flow feels a bit awkward

SPOILER

01:05:095 (1,2,3) - hm flow feels a bit awkward, maybe you can curve (1) downwards or something. Alternatively if you want to keep the shape of (1), you can ctrl+g (3) and reposition (2,3) a bit

SPOILER

You'll have to worry about (4) and all the notes after this though

01:11:095 (3,4) - try placing it like this instead

SPOILER

01:37:578 (3) - ctrl+g, move 01:37:992 (4) - to somewhere around x 320 y 140. This change creates some nice flow~

01:46:888 (2) - ctrl+g
01:47:302 (3,4) - position it something like this

SPOILER

These changes create circular motions when going from slider to slider, not sure if you'd like this though.

01:52:888 (4,1) - this transition is a bit awkward, and since you're running out of room, I suggest stacking 01:52:681 (3,4) - so (4) will flow well into (1)

I feel that hit circle and slider will help bring out the vocal more (vocal sounds really nice here~!)
01:55:578 (2,1) - delete
01:55:572 - add hitcircle
01:55:992 - add slider here that ends on 01:56:406 -

02:05:923 (4) - I would have liked this ctrl+g'd, but you would have to rearrange 02:06:337 (1,2,3,4) - , etc

02:11:095 (3) - consider extending this to 02:11:509 - to match vocal
02:16:061 (5,4) - consider extending each of these to the next white tick to match vocal

Looking good! Keep up the good work bring home the gold for your good ol' buddy pk

1. 00:08:820 (1) - finish here sounds so weird
2. 00:14:613 (5,3) - arrange notes so they can stack?
3. 00:23:716 - i prefer having slider here to emphasize guitar same with any of the other guitar sounds. try to make it so that there's a slider where the guitar plays.
4. 01:51:440 - ^ guitar here again, map these out with sliders please
5. 00:36:544 (3,2) - why aren't these stacked??
6. 00:36:131 (2,3) - ^
7. 00:43:165 (2,4) - ^
   so many things you can stack, why not?
8. 00:51:854 (1) - looks kinda bad, change design
9. 00:56:406 - pls can u add stuff to the places like here, the missing clap sound just sounds soo weird ;-;
10. 02:42:337 - ^ yah u get the point.
11. 00:59:924 (1,2,3) - i'd honestly prefer you map out the drums instead just so we can get the clap sound again lol.
12. 01:13:165 (1,2,3) - ^
    same goes with other similar rhythms. pls, the missing hitsounds just sound so weird >_<
13. 01:17:510 (5,1) - these are not the same shape, if you know what i mean here. pm me in game if u don't understand
14. 01:19:165 (3) - curve this the other way?
15. 01:19:165 (3,4) - something like this might look better
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 01:35:302 - can probably map this out too, maybe use a 1/2 slider going into 01:35:510 (2) -
17. 01:37:786 (6,4) - could stack
18. 01:59:717 (5) - kinda ugly lol
19. 02:03:026 (4) - ^ basically give these curves a less sharp on the inside. see how this little inner curve looks sharp?
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 02:07:993 (1,2,4) - im not sure if you did, however, making these kind of triangular things, use the rotate tool (ctrl shift r) and rotate the sliders by 120 each time.
21. 02:12:958 (1) - remove last clap
22. 02:36:131 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should replace with 2 sliders
23. 02:38:612 (2,5) - i THINK you can stack? if not, rearrange a bit. looks messy
24. 02:39:027 (3,6) - ^
25. 02:54:337 (2,3) - idk perfectly vertical or horizontal just looks ugly to me lmao.
26. 03:00:337 (4,2) - oh god this overlap..
27. 03:05:923 (1) - you totally don't need this spinner
28. 03:11:302 (2,4) - u can stack lol
29. 03:31:578 (3,3) - ^
30. 03:29:095 (3,4) - they touch. space out, besides, this design doesn't look that good overall imo.
31. 03:33:233 (3,4) - i think you can use a 1/1 slider for drum roll. or maybe even a 1/2 slider repeated twice

Vita-VVA wrote:

Hello!From your queue for M4M
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with purple is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing my individual opinion Ignore them if you think they are helpless

[General]
break should start and end at white lines (I remember a BAT told me...) ok ill keep that in mind!
Tell me the secret for so many BAT mod..... uhh this map has been out for a long time? iunno lol BD m4m, zero liked the song, and ike was from a queue

[Insane]
00:05:095 (6) - I prefer to use a single note instead of slider in order to make it different from the 2nd section and 4th section,or another way is add a note at here 00:14:923 - like drums: do ta do ta~~~chinese:动次大次 hm i was going for trying to map the instrument sound and here it has a long sound soo no change.
00:11:716 (5) - ^
01:36:337 (4) - I heared nothing follow this note....maybe delete it ?
01:45:233 (2,5) - Not necessary and I'll delete them
01:57:233 (3) - too much triangle jumps....maybe try few this

reverse and blanket

i like triangle jumps and i have no creativity '^'
02:11:095 (5) - Better a NC? k
02:48:130 (1) - May divide into two notes hmm ok
03:07:578 (1) - the difficult could be harder from here...(I love this part) i unno, this is kinda like the outro and the song kinda gets quieter.

[Hard]
00:05:095 (4) - As insane
nothing more

[Easy]
excellent

[Finally]
it's hard to mod such a map(nearly perfect),And I began to love DECO27 since 妄想税
Shoot for rank earlier~

Kibbleru wrote:

So im actually going to mod the Normal GD lol.. so yeah
Please DO consider these suggestions. Trust me, i want this to get ranked more than u do lel

>Normal

1. 00:08:820 (1) - finish here sounds so weird removed
2. 00:14:613 (5,3) - arrange notes so they can stack? fixed
3. 00:23:716 - i prefer having slider here to emphasize guitar same with any of the other guitar sounds. try to make it so that there's a slider where the guitar plays. fixed
4. 01:51:440 - ^ guitar here again, map these out with sliders please fixed
5. 00:36:544 (3,2) - why aren't these stacked?? fixed
6. 00:36:131 (2,3) - ^
7. 00:43:165 (2,4) - ^
   so many things you can stack, why not? fixed
8. 00:51:854 (1) - looks kinda bad, change design you look bad loljk don't kill me please
9. 00:56:406 - pls can u add stuff to the places like here, the missing clap sound just sounds soo weird ;-;
10. 02:42:337 - ^ yah u get the point. fixed
11. 00:59:924 (1,2,3) - i'd honestly prefer you map out the drums instead just so we can get the clap sound again lol. fixed
12. 01:13:165 (1,2,3) - ^
    same goes with other similar rhythms. pls, the missing hitsounds just sound so weird >_< fixed
13. 01:17:510 (5,1) - these are not the same shape, if you know what i mean here. pm me in game if u don't understand fixed
14. 01:19:165 (3) - curve this the other way? fixed
15. 01:19:165 (3,4) - something like this might look better fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 01:35:302 - can probably map this out too, maybe use a 1/2 slider going into 01:35:510 (2) - added note instead
17. 01:37:786 (6,4) - could stack fixed
18. 01:59:717 (5) - kinda ugly lol you're kinda ugly i lie
19. 02:03:026 (4) - ^ basically give these curves a less sharp on the inside. see how this little inner curve looks sharp? fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
20. 02:07:993 (1,2,4) - im not sure if you did, however, making these kind of triangular things, use the rotate tool (ctrl shift r) and rotate the sliders by 120 each time. fixed
21. 02:12:958 (1) - remove last clap this is intentional, it's to match the snare/drum roll in the music fixed
22. 02:36:131 (1,2,3,4) - i think you should replace with 2 sliders done
23. 02:38:612 (2,5) - i THINK you can stack? if not, rearrange a bit. looks messy fixed
24. 02:39:027 (3,6) - ^
25. 02:54:337 (2,3) - idk perfectly vertical or horizontal just looks ugly to me lmao. moved second one left a bit
26. 03:00:337 (4,2) - oh god this overlap.. fixed
27. 03:05:923 (1) - you totally don't need this spinner you see, this is intentional. This is to transition from kiai time to the non-kiai time. This separates the two different melodies/sections of the music, so it's fine.
28. 03:11:302 (2,4) - u can stack lol fixed
29. 03:31:578 (3,3) - ^
30. 03:29:095 (3,4) - they touch. space out, besides, this design doesn't look that good overall imo. fixed
31. 03:33:233 (3,4) - i think you can use a 1/1 slider for drum roll. or maybe even a 1/2 slider repeated twice fixed

booo i cant give myself kudos. lel

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Jemmmmy wrote:

hi,from my M4M queue
[easy]
00:42:750 (3,4,5) - little change of the shape of slider and placement ok fixed
02:32:406 (2,3) - better blanket hmm i see what you're getting at but i like this
[hard]
00:13:785 (1,2,3) - same distance,2 to 3 is 1.03 lol whoops fixed all these ty
00:18:130 (2,3,1) - ^
02:07:992 (1,2,3) - ^
02:15:233 (2,3,4) - ^
03:25:785 (1) - hm ok changed
03:26:612 (3) - nah not this one
[insane]
00:26:199 (4) - ctrl+g hmm no
other are just good

nice map

Raiku wrote:

Raiku mod!

[Easy]

00:23:716 (3) - I personally feel that this slider would do nicely if the head were to be aimed directly out of the flow line of the preceding note for enhanced flow like so (http://puu.sh/7TZYl.jpg). Maybe soften the curve of the succeeding slider to match. k fixed

00:53:509 (3) - I recommend aiming this repeat slider for progressive flow towards the next note (http://puu.sh/7U05s.jpg). hmm ok!

01:13:371 (3,4) - I suggest rotating these sliders on their selection centre at about -20 degrees (http://puu.sh/7U0bN.png) so that the first slider flows out of the preceding note and the second slider flows directly into the slider after (http://puu.sh/7U0hO.jpg). fixed!

03:05:923 (1,2) - I felt that this blanket was slightly off and could benefit with slider 1 being moved to the right a few pixels and the tailpoint of slider 2 being moved down by literally pixels at a time until you see perfection (http://puu.sh/7VjDn.jpg). ehh not exactly trying to blanket but adjusted a bit



[Hard]

00:07:164 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps you can make the spacing of the blankets of these notes to be the same as the same pattern before for continuity. they are?

00:12:130 (1) - I recommend exposing the tail end of the body of this slider slightly (http://puu.sh/7Vl8D.jpg). brilliant. taken

00:13:578 (5,1) - There seems to be a big spacing change between the blue combo and the next combo, in fact the slider leading in to the circles moving down the screen to the slider coming out of them sees this spacing change. Then again I can see what you are doing, it is a kind of pattern symmetry involving spacing changes a little like 00:41:923 (1,2,3,4,5). uhh not exactly sure what u meant but fixed?

00:16:268 (4) - I suggest moving the tail point of this slider up a little to see a neater blanket (http://puu.sh/7Vld3.jpg). k lel

00:44:406 (3) - I think you should move the kink forward a little so the slider is symmetrical and the kink is exactly on the slider tick a little bit something like this (http://puu.sh/7Vlki.jpg). hmm ok

01:19:992 (1,2,3,4) - If there are going to be changing gradients in this array of sliders, either make the spacing inbetween them perfectly symmetrical and even or make it so they are all the same gradient in my opinion, they look a little chaotic at the moment. Alternatively you could just move the tail point of slider 2 down so that all spacings remain even (http://puu.sh/7Vm1U.jpg). uh took second suggestion

01:40:681 (3) - I'm not too sure how to feel about the kink of this slider, maybe you should keep with the kink on the tick thing you were going with for a little continuity, we don't want to go too 0108 up in here, unless of course you want to k fixed

01:46:888 (2,3,4) - Perhaps even out the blankets between these sliders to improve the symmetry (http://puu.sh/7Vmdz.jpg). i tried my best xD

02:06:957 (4,5,6) - There is a large spacing change between the circles preceding these notes and the spacing between these notes themselves. nah not here, the jumps are meant to play out the guitar thing idk what u call it

02:17:716 (4) - I feel that this slider is too long to be bland, but then again it could fit for the drawn out vocals in this section. Anyway either way, here is a fun alternative (http://puu.sh/7Vmpm.jpg). i feel like smooth sliders work well in the smooth, calm zone of the music


[Insane]

00:08:406 (6) - I feel this will play better if you flip it on its end using ctrl+g like so (http://puu.sh/7Vnbj.jpg). brilliant. fixed

00:19:578 (4,5,1) - You could even the blanket here by moving the headpoint of slider 1 down a little (http://puu.sh/7VnfY.jpg). k

00:21:854 (4) - I recommend moving this note so that the preceding note in more or less the same position stacks on it preventing an overlap. I moved it to x:172 y:180 (http://puu.sh/7Vo97.jpg). k

00:22:681 (3,4,5,6) - The spacing between 4 and 5 is greater than the spacing between 5 and 6, so in effect if you were to make the spacing equidistant you can also benefit from improving the blanket between 6 and 1 (http://puu.sh/7VoeS.jpg). ok fixed

00:34:268 (2,4) - I recommend making these two stack to prevent an overlap for beauty. x:324 y:192. kk

01:21:647 (1) - Why not place this note where the previous combo's slider 2's head was to continue with the backtracking pattern you had going on, its a nice flair to have it in the centre before the spinner (http://puu.sh/7Vom4.jpg). This plays really well. hmm good idea fixed

02:57:026 (2,4) - This blanket could be improved somewhat (http://puu.sh/7VorY.jpg). eh i wasn't really aiming for blankets here but i suppose i could blanket yah

02:58:681 (3) - You could ctrl+g this slider to keep the progressive to the right of the screen spacing going on. The doublebacking flow works really well here too (http://puu.sh/7Votc.jpg). no i don't think it flows really well if i do this

Brilliant mapset, well done and I hope you get some bat attention now! Good luck!

Raiku wrote:

Raiku mod!

[pkmnyab's Normal]

00:02:613 (2) - I personally feel that you can get a more exciting flow by flipping the curve of this slider around so that the tail is facing in the opposite direction like so (http://puu.sh/7Vkes.jpg). good catch, fixed

00:07:993 (5) - I suggest bringing the tail of this slider down a pixel to improve the blanket (http://puu.sh/7Vkne.jpg). fixed

00:18:751 (1) - This slider seems to have a harsher curve than the rest, perhaps soften for continuity? fixed

00:36:958 (1) - I recommend lowering the angle of this slider so that the flow into and out of it is enhanced. Also remember to keep the spacing between the slider and the note (http://puu.sh/7VkvX.jpg). fixed

00:51:854 (1) - Perhaps make the first curve of this slider reduced in curve acuteness to match the last curve which seems to be a little softer. All in all I think this slider would look nicer with softer curves (http://puu.sh/7VkCt.jpg). Something like that but perfectly symmetrical. fixed

01:15:855 (3,5) - I believe you could stack the tail and head of these sliders pixel perfect, a little nazi I know. Coordinates for slider 5 would now be x320 y220 (http://puu.sh/7VkI2.jpg). fixed

01:35:717 (4) - Maybe expose the head side of the body of this slider a little more to avoid slider length confusion for beginners, I know this is a small change but every little helps with a beginner player in mind. Just make it so there is no overlap with the slider head and the body. fixed

01:49:786 (3) - Same here, notice how you can see a little bit of body under the head now (http://puu.sh/7VkOr.jpg). fixed

01:57:648 (2) - Coordinates for this stack to be pixel perfect are x:301 y:71 (http://puu.sh/7VkSN.jpg). fixed

02:09:647 (4) - Perhaps soften this slider curve so that it flows directly into the succeeding note (http://puu.sh/7VkU3.jpg)? fixed

02:11:096 (3) - This slider could be symmetrical in curve angle at either side to promote beauty. fixed

02:36:957 (5,2) - I'm not completely sure about this overlap, It seems a little messy (http://puu.sh/7VkXQ.jpg).

02:38:612 (2,5) - Here too. stacked instead

02:39:027 (3,6) - And here, which leads me to say this section could be a little too clustered in one part of the screen. fixed


Brilliant mapset, well done and I hope you get some bat attention now! Good luck!

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Title:HEART'S HOMING INSTINCT
TitleUnicode:帰想本能
Artist:DECO*27 feat. Aoi Yuki
ArtistUnicode:DECO*27 feat. 悠木碧
Creator:Kibbleru
Version:pkmnyab's Normal
Source:
Tags:LOVE CALENDER so18140621 Ryosuke Dr.R Sakai pkmnyab kisou honnou Vocaloid Hatsune Miku
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FlawlessTea wrote:

I don't know rhythm T_T
All I can mod is lame layout


[Insane]
00:02:819 (3,4,5,6,1) - THIS SHALL BECOME A BEAUTIFUL STAR. You're stopping it from reaching it's highest potential ;-; wahh i dun really want a star ;-; ill consider

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460,192,3233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,156,3440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,264,3647,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,108,3854,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,28,4061,1,0,0:0:0:0:

see how the 4 isn't too close to the 6? so pretty *-* (You could probably move 00:04:061 (2) to a better location if you use this code)

00:11:716 (5) - try ctrl+G for better flow k

00:22:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - very very small suggestion: I think the 1 slider should lead into the 2 circle for better flow. right now 2 seems out of place. maybe 00:22:475 (2,5) - switch places and then 00:22:681 (3,4) - switch places as well (fix hitsounds if you do this.. actually hitsounds don't sound quite bad, but for consistency i guess) mmk done


I see you're trying to stack 01:42:130 (3) with 01:43:164 (1) and 01:42:337 (4) with 01:43:785 (2), but then 01:41:923 (2,3,4,5) looks weird
temporary fix might be to ctrl+G 01:42:130 (3,4), but i suggest making the distances equal or making them a "random" jump fixd

01:44:406 (4,1) - looks odd. maybe something like

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k
This creates partial symmetry so that it looks nicer, while maintaining the blanket and the flow. Although it makes an overlap with 01:43:164 (1) , it's not even noticeable, compared to what you had before which is much more noticeable (actually, I'm probably the only person to get bothered by this kind of stuff...)

01:46:475 (1,2,3) - this also looks strange because you're using two different sliders in the same combo. perhaps maybe either

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k

or anything else with identical sliders that has 1000x better flow than what i came up with

01:48:957 (3,4,5,1) - also looks strange. here's something I came up with:

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I rotated 01:48:957 (3) because 01:48:130 (1,2,3) also looked a little strange + this way there's better flow. The 3 slider leads into the 4 hitcircle, then copy paste 01:48:957 (3,4) and rotate 180 to make 01:49:578 (5,1). This way there's a little fun jump from 4 to 5, and then 5 leads into the 01:49:785 (1) kickslider which maintains the flow. Then move 01:50:406 (2) to blanket with the 1 slider, and distance from 2 to 01:50:819 (3) should be ok kk

02:02:819 (7,1) - bad flow here. 1 slider should turn the other way. try: fak reading this mod made me realize how ugly my patterns are on insane. brb gunna farking rearrange the whole diff

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This will create better flow while keeping your triangle pattern. careful not to overlap 02:04:681 (1)

[Hard]

00:11:302 (3,1) - ahhhh... these sliders should have been the same. it would have made such pretty symmetry ;-; you COULD try something like

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and then move 00:13:785 (1,2,3,4,1) accordingly. (the only thing that would be affected is the distance 00:15:440 (1,2). which is not a big deal at all) brilliant. fixed

00:19:371 (2) - very subtle: slider head to 168,264. this will make 00:18:543 (3,1,2) a triangle, which is much more pretty in my opinion. k
00:39:233 (2,4) - too close. 4 goes to 136,264 kk

00:41:302 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - distance? maybe move 00:42:957 (4,1,2,3) - left a little i dont understand lel

01:19:992 (1,2,3,4) - right now 01:19:992 (1,2) and 01:20:819 (3,4) appear to look too close while 01:20:406 (2,3) appear too far. make it so that they appear to look the same distance apart by ignoring distance snap.

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then fix 01:21:647 (1) obviously k

02:03:440 (2,3) - i think these should blanket. I don't see why they shouldn't k

[pkmnyab's Normal]
fine lies ;o

[Easy]

00:42:337 (2,3) - for some reason these appear closer than the rest. I think 00:42:337 (2) one grid down to 352,240 k
03:02:612 (2,4) - maybe make these blanket? No one will ever notice when they actually play, but just because...you know..prettiness k


I skipped lunch to mod this ;w; I hope you're happy yes im happy <3

Kibbleru wrote:

00:41:302 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - distance? maybe move 00:42:957 (4,1,2,3) - left a little i dont understand lel

Kibbleru wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]
fine lies ;o