1. Another (5 stars, 384 notes)
2. Beginner (2.44 stars, 83 notes)
3. Hyper (4.95 stars, 231 notes)
4. Light Another (5 stars, 264 notes)
5. Standard (4.29 stars, 132 notes)

Beginner - 100% Done
Standard - 100% Done
Hyper - 100% Done
Light Another - 100% Done
Another - 100% Done

dekutai wrote:

Short and nice song, will do something later.

<3 xi
You're nice mapper, i think we can do something gether.

caren_sk wrote:

good work !!

1. i ask me if you did all diffs or not because ''LiCa's Extra and Light Another'' seems guest diffs for me, if this 2 diffs are made by you remiove LiCa and Light from the diff names if this 2 diffs are made by someone alse add those 2 mappers into tags
   

1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:47:920 - snap to 00:47:989

1. 00:55:264 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).

1. 00:34:385 (1) - NC is not needed here
2. 00:47:239 (7,1) - try to make this jump a bit smaller
3. 00:50:239 (1) - try a shape like this for this slider:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:50:689 (2,3,4,1) - try something like this here:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
5. 00:58:339 (2,3) - ctrl+g is better
6. 01:16:826 - don't let start your break here resnap it and the same with the others
7. 01:21:439 (1,1,1) - don't place this 3 notes randomly keep something like:
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

1. 02:07:489 (3) - Move x24 y80 better.

1. 00:42:439 (2) - add whistle on head.
2. 00:45:139 (5) - ^
3. 00:47:089 (5) - missing clap? I guess not fit clap...
4. 01:06:889 (6,7) - change slider? I guess Anti-jump this.
   
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5. 01:45:139 (6,1) - It is hard to see. change this?
   
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6. 02:13:864 (1,1) - remove Nc.
   
7. 02:14:089 (3) - Move x138 y309 better, because DS*1.69
   and 02:14:389 (1) - Move x240 y217 better.
   
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Good luck ~

1. Widescreen Support is enabled for every diff except Another. I would toggle it off for all difficulties because you're not using any storyboard elements.
2. Your preview point (114345) appears unsnapped for me. I would snap it to 01:54:289 for all difficulties.

1. 00:40:641 (1) - This slider is slightly unsnapped.
2. 00:44:839 (3) - This could have a whistle on the tail because of how it was used for 00:40:339 (4).
3. 00:55:039 (5) - I would NC for the new measure, also fits the music pretty well.
4. 01:56:239 (1,3) - Try to avoid overlaps like these. Under low AR like it can make placement look cluttered.

1. 00:51:289 (3) - Whistle on the head sounds appropriate considering its use for 00:48:889 (3).
2. 00:58:789 (3) - This could blanket better with the middle slider-point at x:396 y:40 and end slider-point at x:449 y:97
3. 00:58:939 - It appears that this green line, as well as 00:59:014 are not serving any purpose because there isn't a slidertick here so the lines aren't actually changing anything. I would delete them.
4. 00:58:789 (3) - Sort of a follow up to the previous suggestion. If you want to have a clap on 00:58:939 you can simply just change this slider to 1/1 and have it start there. This would even be consistent with how you used a 3/2 gap in the rhythm for 01:02:839 (2,3):
   Example

   
5. 01:07:039 (4) - Perhaps a NC here since you're flashing kiai, it would be nice to have it on a new combo. You can remove the NC on 01:08:389 (1) and add a NC to either 01:09:139 (5) or 01:09:289 (6) to accommodate for this.
6. 01:58:639 (6) - NC here as this combo is quite long if you compare it to most combos in this map, they don't exceed 6 objects.
7. 02:07:039 (5) - Same as above.
8. 02:08:239 (7,8,1) - I feel like the placement here could be neater. You can make a nice triangle formation by stacking 02:09:139 (8) on the tail of 02:07:639 (6) and the head of 02:09:439 (1) at the previous location of 02:06:739 (4). This might take some work on the distance snap for the proceeding notes so I provided a coded example if you would like to use it (Please let me know if the code is incorrect):
   Example

   46,159,128239,2,0,L|61:60,2,100,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   51,259,129139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   136,208,129439,6,0,P|185:200|234:208,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   236,108,130039,2,0,P|278:133|310:171,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   376,96,130639,2,0,P|392:142|392:192,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   492,184,131239,2,0,P|474:230|416:272,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   

1. 00:42:139 (5,1) - The large spacing between these two makes it difficult to predict a slowdown for anyone that's never heard this song or played the map. Consider reducing the spacing between these two notes.
2. 00:51:739 (4,5,6) - I get a sense of discomfort every time I play this combo because of how rigid the movement feels having to hit a stack after a really sharp and quick back-and-forth motion. I think it would be nice to position like this so you can get a comfortable jump distance like you had for 00:53:689 (4,5) which is a similar sounding part.
   Example

   
   
   Alternatively you could try something like this:
   
   
3. 01:44:839 (5) - Definitely consider a clap here because of the identifiable sound in the music, also it feels really empty with a hitsound.
4. 01:59:539 (4,1) -Try to avoid this kind of spacing for this level of difficulty. You have the same jump distance for both a 1/1 and 1/2 gap in the timeline which is tough to read. The spacing between 01:59:239 (3,4) should be noticeably larger.
5. 02:01:039 (1,3) - Looks like you were going for symmetry here but if you CTRL-H either of them you'll notice it's not quite perfect.
6. 02:01:639 (3) - This can certainly blanket better judging by the following note's approach ring.

1. 00:51:289 (3) - Should be a whistle on the head as you used it for a similar sound on 00:48:889 (4).
2. 00:42:739 (4,5,6,7) - This snapping is incorrect. The music is in 1/6 here.
3. 00:33:935 - The green line here is unnecessary as it's not inheriting anything unique from the red line. Either delete or make use of it.
4. 01:11:389 (6) - Are you sure about this reversing in 1/8? I've listened to this part on slow playback countless times and i'm not cluing in to any identifiable sound that warrants 1/8 snap. I recommended changing this to a reverse 1/4.

Trust wrote:

hi, sorry for the delay! NP

Red: Unrankable
Blue: Highly recommended/very questionable
Black: Suggestion
[General]

1. Widescreen Support is enabled for every diff except Another. I would toggle it off for all difficulties because you're not using any storyboard elements. Fixed
2. Your preview point (114345) appears unsnapped for me. I would snap it to 01:54:289 for all difficulties. Fixed

[Beginner]

1. 00:40:641 (1) - This slider is slightly unsnapped. Fixed
2. 00:44:839 (3) - This could have a whistle on the tail because of how it was used for 00:40:339 (4). Fixed
3. 00:55:039 (5) - I would NC for the new measure, also fits the music pretty well. Fixed
4. 01:56:239 (1,3) - Try to avoid overlaps like these. Under low AR like it can make placement look cluttered. I agree that, but i want to keep current pattern since i think the head and tail(reverse arrow) of slider 01:56:239 (1) is visible that newbies can notice that overlap

[Standard]

1. 00:51:289 (3) - Whistle on the head sounds appropriate considering its use for 00:48:889 (3). Fixed
2. 00:58:789 (3) - This could blanket better with the middle slider-point at x:396 y:40 and end slider-point at x:449 y:97 Fixed
3. 00:58:939 - It appears that this green line, as well as 00:59:014 are not serving any purpose because there isn't a slidertick here so the lines aren't actually changing anything. I would delete them. Fixed
4. 00:58:789 (3) - Sort of a follow up to the previous suggestion. If you want to have a clap on 00:58:939 you can simply just change this slider to 1/1 and have it start there. This would even be consistent with how you used a 3/2 gap in the rhythm for 01:02:839 (2,3):
   Example

   
   Good advice but i think current rythm is ok according to several test plays
5. 01:07:039 (4) - Perhaps a NC here since you're flashing kiai, it would be nice to have it on a new combo. You can remove the NC on 01:08:389 (1) and add a NC to either 01:09:139 (5) or 01:09:289 (6) to accommodate for this. Fixed
6. 01:58:639 (6) - NC here as this combo is quite long if you compare it to most combos in this map, they don't exceed 6 objects.Fixed
7. 02:07:039 (5) - Same as above. Fixed
8. 02:08:239 (7,8,1) - I feel like the placement here could be neater. You can make a nice triangle formation by stacking 02:09:139 (8) on the tail of 02:07:639 (6) and the head of 02:09:439 (1) at the previous location of 02:06:739 (4). This might take some work on the distance snap for the proceeding notes so I provided a coded example if you would like to use it (Please let me know if the code is incorrect):
   Example

   46,159,128239,2,0,L|61:60,2,100,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   51,259,129139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   136,208,129439,6,0,P|185:200|234:208,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   236,108,130039,2,0,P|278:133|310:171,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   376,96,130639,2,0,P|392:142|392:192,1,100,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   492,184,131239,2,0,P|474:230|416:272,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   Fixed. Thank you

[Hyper]

1. 00:42:139 (5,1) - The large spacing between these two makes it difficult to predict a slowdown for anyone that's never heard this song or played the map. Consider reducing the spacing between these two notes. Fixed
2. 00:51:739 (4,5,6) - I get a sense of discomfort every time I play this combo because of how rigid the movement feels having to hit a stack after a really sharp and quick back-and-forth motion. I think it would be nice to position like this so you can get a comfortable jump distance like you had for 00:53:689 (4,5) which is a similar sounding part.
   Example

   
   
   Alternatively you could try something like this:
   
   
   Chose first one
3. 01:44:839 (5) - Definitely consider a clap here because of the identifiable sound in the music, also it feels really empty with a hitsound. Fixed
4. 01:59:539 (4,1) -Try to avoid this kind of spacing for this level of difficulty. You have the same jump distance for both a 1/1 and 1/2 gap in the timeline which is tough to read. The spacing between 01:59:239 (3,4) should be noticeably larger. Fixed. i put slider 4 next to slider 1
5. 02:01:039 (1,3) - Looks like you were going for symmetry here but if you CTRL-H either of them you'll notice it's not quite perfect. idk why it is
6. 02:01:639 (3) - This can certainly blanket better judging by the following note's approach ring.Tried to make better blanket!

[Another]

1. 00:51:289 (3) - Should be a whistle on the head as you used it for a similar sound on 00:48:889 (4). Fixed
2. 00:42:739 (4,5,6,7) - This snapping is incorrect. The music is in 1/6 here. Yes, actually changing 1/4 ->1/6, i asked to users(BATs, other players and mappers...), they agreed current 1/4 because it plays naturally well. Same as 01:54:589 and 01:56:239
3. 00:33:935 - The green line here is unnecessary as it's not inheriting anything unique from the red line. Either delete or make use of it. Fixed
4. 01:11:389 (6) - Are you sure about this reversing in 1/8? I've listened to this part on slow playback countless times and i'm not cluing in to any identifiable sound that warrants 1/8 snap. I recommended changing this to a reverse 1/4. Hmmm..i can hear 1/8 sound here xD

Skipped Light Another because i'm sleepy.Very impressive Insane diff, it was fun! I hope this helps~
Best of luck!

Thanks for modding! It helped a lot as well xD