1. Insane (4,68 stars, 202 notes)
2. Normal (3,84 stars, 152 notes)

Mafiamaster wrote:

Change BPM to 112
Resnap aftewards.

Normal~
00:13:74 (6) - Move this to the blue tick like you did with the previous combos. Make sure to move farther away if you do change it. - fixed
00:47:76 (6) - New combo. - fixed
01:09:46 (8) - Move this forward by a 1/4 tick. Make sure to shorten to white tick. - fixed
01:27:00 (6) - Move back to white tick. - its on a white :O

Hard~
Now change BPM to 112
And fix everything that goes off-sync. - fixed

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
00:33:083 (8) - New combo. -fixed

Insane~
00:22:045 (7) - This note is too close to 6
00:27:041 (5) - Move this farther from the purple combo 1. Possible placement would be to the right of 2 in the purple combo considering the distance snap.-fixed
00:28:061 (7,8,9,10) - Even the spacing out like 00:28:021 (4,5,6).-fixed
00:33:083 (8) - New combo.-fixed
00:51:092 (9) - Move closer to the 6-8 stack.-fixed


It's ok. You almost got it. -cool ;]

Pasonia wrote:

Preview points missing from both difficulties.

00:53:660 is a good place to set the preview imo.-fixed

My personal take on this map is that although it fulfills the criteria for starring at least, there are issues with spacing and design that don't affect map elements, but affects the feel of this map, and that for an insane it wasn't that fun at all, because of the somewhat atrocious circle size and spacing.Well, I dont know how to make hard maps without using spacing and small circles so it stays...maybe i wont have to use it when ill become a better mapper

Normal

00:31:696 (1,2,3) - 1-2 spacing is shorter than 2-3 spacing. Pull 3 downwards so it is closer to 2.
-fixed

Insane

00:50:446 (3,4) - Make this a slider instead.-fixed
00:56:740 (6) - Stack on top of slider 5's end-fixed
00:57:008 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - I suggest removing this stack altogether, and similar stacks, but this is only a suggestion and it doesn't mean you HAVE to remove it. I suggest because it doesn't really fit a song of a smooth flowing nature like this, and apparently is only meant to unfairly up the difficulty of this map.-stack stays
01:04:910 (13) - Relating to the stack and the slider, I think it's very difficult to see the timing for 13. I suggest you create a 1/2 stream, instead of stacking with 12 which makes this very hard to spot.-moved 13
01:12:678 (5) - I suggest you new-combo this because of its jumpy nature instead.-fixed
01:21:249 (9,10,11) - stack 10 and 11 properly behind 9.-fixed

Starred once again just because of the tune. The SB was okay, unfortunately it does come across as a bit "weird", but that's a personal comment so no offence intended.

JarJarJacob wrote:

+40 offset. Seriously, now.