hey
m4m here
General:
Your mp3 is 320kbps you need to lower this down
ADVANCED:
imo CS is too small for something like advanced
00:14:033 (1,2) - you can improve this to something like http://puu.sh/6nQil.jpg
00:15:359 (4,5) - ^
00:21:159 (4,1) - space this out a little bit http://puu.sh/6nQkY.jpg
00:36:573 (5,7) - how about http://puu.sh/6nQmy.jpg
00:47:180 (5,6) - make them similar? http://puu.sh/6nQoa.jpg
00:51:821 (1,1) - remove nc here
01:24:804 (5,1) - try to remove overlap here
01:26:958 (1,1,1,1) - and this nc, no need
01:37:565 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:33:257 (8) - 296:344 seems more nicer to me
01:44:195 (5) - add note here
Good Luck!
m4m here
General:
Your mp3 is 320kbps you need to lower this down
◾The song's audio file must be of reasonable quality. Try and source mp3 files yourself; ripping them from a streaming video site often results in low quality audio with high file sizes. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps. If you are having trouble acquiring an appropriate audio file, contact one of the more audio-savvy BAT; they will be more than happy to help find an mp3 for you.http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
ADVANCED:
imo CS is too small for something like advanced
00:14:033 (1,2) - you can improve this to something like http://puu.sh/6nQil.jpg
00:15:359 (4,5) - ^
00:21:159 (4,1) - space this out a little bit http://puu.sh/6nQkY.jpg
00:36:573 (5,7) - how about http://puu.sh/6nQmy.jpg
00:47:180 (5,6) - make them similar? http://puu.sh/6nQoa.jpg
00:51:821 (1,1) - remove nc here
01:24:804 (5,1) - try to remove overlap here
01:26:958 (1,1,1,1) - and this nc, no need
01:37:565 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:33:257 (8) - 296:344 seems more nicer to me
01:44:195 (5) - add note here
Good Luck!