smallboat wrote:

1. Red words: Should be fixed.
2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

1. 名字跟姓氏應該要空一格跟Romanise Artist一樣，所以那中文字應該是打成"阿保 剛"，而不是連在一起。 K
2. WidescreenStoryboard suggest all canceled. (Check yf's Hard diff)Changed

[Easy] This rhythm have a bit simple This is basicly becasue of the map was made of the time of old stars and to control difficulty.

1. 00:19:046 (3) - Suggest add a note here,make play this part will be better
2. 00:35:200 (4) - 這兒聽起來是音樂節奏比較多的部分，所以可以加多一點節奏，just like this (Don't forget adjust the hitsound) :
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:56:546 (4) - The same as 00:19:046 (3)
4. 01:10:392 (3) - Sounds like this music is so high part there ,why not add a note here?
5. 01:33:469 (4) - Have a downbeat rhythm here,add a note?

All Fixed..Thx !
[Normal] CS4 feel have bit small in normal diff,try to reduce to 3 or 3.5 here?At that time there is no 3.5... changed to 3.5

1. 00:09:238 (7) - At easy diff has been added this note rhythm here,why not add a note for this diff? (Don't forget adjust the hitsound)
2. 00:39:527 (2) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.
3. 00:41:834 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
4. 00:44:142 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
5. 00:57:123 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 跟上面一樣情況，應該知道加哪裡吧。
6. 01:48:757 (4) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.

All Fixed..Thx !

smallboat wrote:

1. Red words: Should be fixed.
2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
3. Black words : In my opinion.

[yf's Hard]

1. 00:25:969 (1) - Feel this is unnecesary NC here,it doesn't help to read or play this part better,so remove it and 00:27:123 (3) - add a NC here?
2. 00:29:431 (1) - Seems missed a finish here? 这不
3. 00:35:200 (1) - The same as 00:25:969.
4. 01:15:296 (1) - Need to delete this slider,because at hard diff,the spinner end and object space between 1/1 beat there. (So this place at 1/2 rhythm is unsubmitted) 去掉了转盘
5. 01:29:142 (7) - Listen to this part music,seems missed a whistle hitsound?
6. 01:44:431 (4,5,6,7) - Feel this note stream have a bit difficult to play at hard diff,maybe can change a 1/2 beat (1 or 2) reverse slider here?
7. 01:46:161 (2) - I suggest follow this piano at this part,move to 01:46:017 this to follow it will be played better (This note place white line feel play a bit weird) 不了 难跟 而且后面有个声音不知道是1/8还是1/6组合的 不好做
8. 01:46:450 (3) - Why not add a note follow the piano voice?
9. 01:46:594 (4) - The same as 01:46:450 (3). 不了
10. 01:50:921 (4) - Make the head move to 01:51:065 here,because the 01:50:632 (3) - the downbeat you follow the head,I think move it can play better. 没事 为了简化难度
11. 01:52:652 (1) - Add a spinner with the same another diff? 没啥必要.....

smallboat wrote:

Overall looks fine.

Bubbled !

Thx a lot smallboat
/me hugs

1. Audio-leadin 1000 ms.

1. 00:38:661 - Whistle.
2. 00:46:738 (4) - 背景沒高音 建議移除whistle.
3. 00:57:700 (2,2) - Drum clap不舒服啊 還有01:02:315 (2) 基本上他們跟00:39:238 (2,2,2) - 一樣 怎麼有些有音效 有些沒有

1. 01:08:661 (1) - 提議一個更好的排版 避免那少許的overlap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195915
2. 01:10:969 (1,2,3) - 滑條頭用whistle跟finish更能突出重音啊 那個clap太低音啥都聽不到
3. 01:19:334 (2,3) - 這排列有點醜.. 我說的是這部分 http://puu.sh/czHdq.jpg
4. 01:27:123 (1) - 不要開grid snap阿....尤其EZ NM這些用DS的難度 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195935
5. 01:35:200 - Whistle. 以及01:35:632 - 01:37:507 - 01:37:940 - 01:41:834 -
6. 01:38:661 - 為什麼whistle? 好像沒有高音 建議移除 01:44:431 (2) - 01:49:046 - Same
7. 01:42:700 (5,1) - Stack.
8. 01:47:892 - Finish.

1. 00:46:882 - 01:15:007 - Unsnapped green line.
2. 01:10:969 (1,2,3) - Finish+Whistle.
3. 01:15:007 (1,2) - 現在跟前面黏太近 放在右下角是夠位置的阿 懶調整的話就把(1)跟前面的圓圈stack好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195971
4. 01:35:200 - Whistle (maybe with a lower volume). Same for all these: 01:37:507 -
5. 01:38:661 (2) - Remove whistle. Applies also on 01:44:431 - 01:49:046 -
6. 01:51:931 - Clap.

IamKwaN wrote:

[General]

1. Audio-leadin 1000 ms.
   是不是要手动改啊。。

[Hard]

1. 00:38:661 - Whistle. K
2. 00:46:738 (4) - 背景沒高音 建議移除whistle. K
3. 00:57:700 (2,2) - Drum clap不舒服啊 還有01:02:315 (2) 基本上他們跟00:39:238 (2,2,2) - 一樣 怎麼有些有音效 有些沒有
   唔。。我觉得这里有底鼓前面的好像没底鼓。。

[Normal]

1. 01:08:661 (1) - 提議一個更好的排版 避免那少許的overlap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195915 K
2. 01:10:969 (1,2,3) - 滑條頭用whistle跟finish更能突出重音啊 那個clap太低音啥都聽不到 K
3. 01:19:334 (2,3) - 這排列有點醜.. 我說的是這部分 http://puu.sh/czHdq.jpg
4. 01:27:123 (1) - 不要開grid snap阿....尤其EZ NM這些用DS的難度 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195935 我顺带就这段整个重排了;w;
5. 01:35:200 - Whistle. 以及01:35:632 - 01:37:507 - 01:37:940 - 01:41:834 -K
6. 01:38:661 - 為什麼whistle? 好像沒有高音 建議移除 01:44:431 (2) - 01:49:046 - Same其实只是长白。。fixed
7. 01:42:700 (5,1) - Stack.K
8. 01:47:892 - Finish.K

[Easy]

1. 00:46:882 - 01:15:007 - Unsnapped green line. Fixed
2. 01:10:969 (1,2,3) - Finish+Whistle. K
3. 01:15:007 (1,2) - 現在跟前面黏太近 放在右下角是夠位置的阿 懶調整的話就把(1)跟前面的圓圈stack好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195971 K
4. 01:35:200 - Whistle (maybe with a lower volume). Same for all these: 01:37:507 - K
5. 01:38:661 (2) - Remove whistle. Applies also on 01:44:431 - 01:49:046 - K
6. 01:51:931 - Clap.K