- Red words: Should be fixed.
- Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
- Black words : In my opinion.
[Easy] This rhythm have a bit simple
- 名字跟姓氏應該要空一格跟Romanise Artist一樣，所以那中文字應該是打成"阿保 剛"，而不是連在一起。
- WidescreenStoryboard suggest all canceled. (Check yf's Hard diff)
[Normal] CS4 feel have bit small in normal diff,try to reduce to 3 or 3.5 here?
- 00:19:046 (3) - Suggest add a note here,make play this part will be better
- 00:35:200 (4) - 這兒聽起來是音樂節奏比較多的部分，所以可以加多一點節奏，just like this (Don't forget adjust the hitsound) :
- 00:56:546 (4) - The same as 00:19:046 (3)
- 01:10:392 (3) - Sounds like this music is so high part there ,why not add a note here?
- 01:33:469 (4) - Have a downbeat rhythm here,add a note?
- 00:09:238 (7) - At easy diff has been added this note rhythm here,why not add a note for this diff? (Don't forget adjust the hitsound)
- 00:39:527 (2) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.
- 00:41:834 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
- 00:44:142 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
- 00:57:123 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 跟上面一樣情況，應該知道加哪裡吧。
- 01:48:757 (4) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.
- 00:25:969 (1) - Feel this is unnecesary NC here,it doesn't help to read or play this part better,so remove it and 00:27:123 (3) - add a NC here?
- 00:29:431 (1) - Seems missed a finish here?
- 00:35:200 (1) - The same as 00:25:969.
- 01:15:296 (1) - Need to delete this slider,because at hard diff,the spinner end and object space between 1/1 beat there. (So this place at 1/2 rhythm is unsubmitted)
- 01:29:142 (7) - Listen to this part music,seems missed a whistle hitsound?
- 01:44:431 (4,5,6,7) - Feel this note stream have a bit difficult to play at hard diff,maybe can change a 1/2 beat (1 or 2) reverse slider here?
- 01:46:161 (2) - I suggest follow this piano at this part,move to 01:46:017 this to follow it will be played better (This note place white line feel play a bit weird)
- 01:46:450 (3) - Why not add a note follow the piano voice?
- 01:46:594 (4) - The same as 01:46:450 (3).
- 01:50:921 (4) - Make the head move to 01:51:065 here,because the 01:50:632 (3) - the downbeat you follow the head,I think move it can play better.
- 01:52:652 (1) - Add a spinner with the same another diff?