Abo Takeshi - Firefly · forum

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-04-20T08:21:55+00:00

Ok fixed many of them. thank you all!!

osu file format v12

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Artist:Takeshi Abo
ArtistUnicode:阿保剛
Creator:Troogle
Version:yf's Hard
Source:Memories Off 2nd
Tags:Shirakawa Hotaru original soundtrack OST visual novel KID 5pb yf_bmp
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Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2014-04-24T13:04:32+00:00

hello mod from game PM.

Easy

00:57:381 (2) - 滑条头有个很轻的鼓声，试试选中滑条头，然后把左上角的sampleset改成drum（觉得太重可以降低音量
00:59:688 (2,2) - ^
好像也没什么问题了

Normal

00:16:419 (1,2,3,4) - 四个头部可以组成正方形
00:56:804 (1) - 滑条尾同EZ
01:23:631 (2,3) - 这两个拉开点不要重叠
01:32:573 (4,1) - 没包好？
01:34:881 (3,4) - ^，没有平行各种不舒服

yf's Hard

00:55:794 (7) - 感觉放成两个note比较好，现在这边对于hard有点混乱
00:57:381 (2) - 这个鼓声不加点drum音效么
00:59:689 (2,2) - ^
下面美丽

hope this helps

eeezzzeee

979 posts

Joined August 2013

eeezzzeee 2014-04-27T20:33:24+00:00

Hi, from modding queue.
Sorry this is very late!

[Easy]
00:08:919 (3) - add clap
00:10:073 (1) - ^
00:47:573 (2) - nc
01:17:573 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:25:650 (5) - nc
00:45:265 (2,3) - to make these curve the same way.
- change (2) the middle point to x444 y269 and the end point to x424 y348
- OR change (3) middle point to x424 y172 and end point to x328 y148
01:23:631 (2) - add clap at 2nd hit of the slider

[yf's Hard]
00:07:477 (4) - add clap at 2nd hit of the slider
00:25:650 (1,3) - nc on (3) instead of (1)
00:33:727 (1,2,3) - only 1/4 time between them so try moving it closer
00:34:881 (1) - remove nc
01:42:958 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - suggestion for hitsounds, try adding a clap at the end of (1), whistle at (3), and whistle at the end of (8)

That's all. Nice and relaxing song, and great map! Have a star

Best of luck

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-05-05T14:54:48+00:00

from in-game

General

Add an audio lead-in of 2000 ms manually because the current one is too short.
Would u please change the combo colors? It doesn't match with the color tone of the background :c
The Artist should be 'Abo Takeshi' instead.
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean).

yf's Hard

為甚麼每次我都覺得yf的hitsounds好大聲 :c 減個10-20%?
00:30:554 (4) - 這blanket有改善空間
00:32:573 (4) - 頭有個好響亮的高音,whistle好像不錯
00:34:881 (1) - 為甚麼要NC!!
00:44:688 (1) - yf的NC pattern駿馬不理解,在00:45:265 (3)NC才對阿
00:52:188 (5) - ^ ;w;
00:56:083 - 這個音漏了我感覺有點空,然後前面的節奏有點錯手指,打得不舒服,CTRL+G 00:55:073 (4,5,6,7)這些就好;00:56:660 - 這個也是漏得好明顯,因為歌曲本身比較靜,漏音讓我打得有點錯愕
01:10:650 (5) - NC :c
01:24:929 (2) - This is overmapping!!!
00:25:650 (1) - 不需要NC,都不是跳;在00:26:804 (3)NC吧
01:26:515 (8,9) - 我有點糾結,中間藍線是沒音的,有overmap的嫌疑 :c 這樣會不會比較好啊?
SPOILER
01:27:237 (2) - 其實這個是不是1/6
01:42:958 (1) - 這clap是故意漏的?
01:50:602 (4) - ;w;這藍線又是沒音
SPOILER
不想摸音效 >_> QwQ

Normal

Reduce OD by 1 to make the setting of the whole mapset clean.
00:06:323 (5) - blanket能改善!
00:46:419 (3) - 這種stack在N來說真的比較難接受
01:06:035 (1,2) - blanket please ;w;
全部blanket check一遍吧,有改善的空間喔
01:18:727 (1,2,3) - 這三個的排列有點不順眼,試試這樣:
SPOILER
01:24:496 (3) - overlap了少許,spread開會整潔一點
音效不摸啦駿馬好懶怎麼辦 \:D/

Easy粗略看了一遍沒什麼

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-05-30T14:15:21+00:00

mostly fixed thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 03 Firefly.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38067
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 111192
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Firefly
TitleUnicode:Firefly
Artist:Takeshi Abo
ArtistUnicode:阿保剛
Creator:- [ Google ] -
Version:yf's Hard
Source:Memories Off 2nd
Tags:Shirakawa Hotaru original soundtrack OST visual novel KID 5pb yf_bmp troogle
BeatmapID:369146
BeatmapSetID:142953

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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80,88,45265,6,0,P|132:68|196:68,2,114,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,164,46419,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,276,46852,2,0,L|32:288,3,38,8|2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,319,47573,6,0,P|192:340|249:337,1,114,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,328,48150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,296,48438,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,296,48727,2,0,P|416:280|472:296,2,114,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,252,49881,6,0,L|304:172,1,76,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,156,50313,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,136,50458,2,0,L|360:56,1,76,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,60,51035,2,0,P|424:68|468:44,2,114,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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96,160,53342,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,160,53919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,224,54208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,272,55650,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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416,128,57381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,52,57670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,112,57958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,128,58247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,68,58535,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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220,52,59689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,72,59977,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,128,60266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,60843,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,180,61131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,239,61420,6,0,P|231:260|174:263,1,114,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,260,61997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,240,62285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,184,62574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,260,62862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,316,63150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,316,63439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,316,63727,6,0,P|132:336|196:336,2,114,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,240,64881,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,128,65314,2,0,L|32:116,3,38,8|2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,84,66035,6,0,P|191:63|248:66,1,114,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,76,66612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,108,66900,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,108,67189,2,0,P|416:124|472:108,2,114,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,152,68343,6,0,L|304:232,1,76,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,248,68775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,268,68920,2,0,L|360:348,1,76,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,344,69497,2,0,P|424:336|468:360,2,114,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,300,70650,6,0,L|216:292,1,76,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,264,71083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,236,71227,2,0,L|96:244,1,76,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,244,71804,5,6,0:0:0:0:
4,112,72237,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,112,72381,2,0,L|0:152,1,38
16,172,72670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,140,72958,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73246,12,0,74688,0:0:0:0:
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444,144,75265,6,0,L|436:244,1,95,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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180,196,76419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,196,76708,2,0,P|164:248|172:292,1,95,6|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,252,77285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,77573,6,0,P|348:104|320:44,1,142.5,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,28,78150,2,0,P|264:68|284:132,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,176,78727,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,176,79015,2,0,P|468:176|512:200,2,95,6|8|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,184,79881,6,0,P|291:150|276:105,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,152,80458,2,0,P|180:106|189:60,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,180,81035,2,0,P|92:225|101:271,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
8,276,81612,2,0,P|20:321|52:356,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,368,82188,5,2,0:0:0:0:
204,368,82477,1,4,0:3:0:0:
204,368,82765,2,0,L|212:272,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,273,83198,1,4,0:3:0:0:
211,273,83342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,200,83631,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,108,83919,2,0,L|288:56,2,47.5,8|4|0,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,84496,6,0,P|396:192|456:196,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,197,85073,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,104,85362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,104,85506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,104,85650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,276,85938,2,0,L|360:372,1,95,6|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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132,108,88246,1,6,0:3:0:0:
272,132,88535,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,60,88823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,40,89112,6,0,P|256:104|308:160,1,142.5,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,172,89688,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,172,89977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,248,90265,2,0,L|444:152,1,95,0|6,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
364,268,90842,2,0,L|383:361,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,272,91419,6,0,P|220:276|180:260,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,244,91852,1,4,0:3:0:0:
140,220,91996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,92,92285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,84,92429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,88,92573,2,0,P|303:88|348:73,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
372,60,93006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,56,93150,1,10,0:0:0:0:
428,64,93294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,93438,1,4,0:3:0:0:
452,80,93727,6,0,P|424:144|440:212,1,142.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,324,94881,2,0,P|464:340|420:328,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
422,329,95313,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,329,95458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,360,95746,6,0,P|238:349|194:365,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96323,1,4,0:3:0:0:
116,312,96612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,216,96900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,97188,6,0,P|96:120|24:104,1,142.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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220,36,98342,6,0,P|268:44|312:24,1,95,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,98919,2,0,P|365:102|393:63,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-10-25T06:24:50+00:00

Well after a loooooong time, I decide to rank this map

AliomLoung

AliomLoung wrote:
谷歌>w< 說好的mod!!!

[Easy]
00:00:265 (1,2) - 沒包好!K
00:17:573 (1) - 刪除NC?K
01:31:419 (1) - 這邊的NC移到01:29:112 (5) - 這邊?K
01:40:650 (4) - NC?K

[Normal]
00:06:323 (5,6) - blanket? K
00:30:265 (1,2) - ^ K

泥萌都好會做圖QAQ MOD還有點不成熟><
祝早日rank
结果被我坟了这么久TAT

谢谢mod~

Squirrel

Squirrel wrote:
hellow!
mod from my queue ~ :3
~~kinda late, sorry about that~~

[Easy]
plays nicely, just some minor suggestions -
00:07:188 (1) - delete NC?K
and move NC from 00:08:919 (1) - to 00:10:073 (2) -
00:47:573 (2) - movement feels nicer if this is reversed, you had to change 00:49:881 (3) - then, as wellHmmm..I think current one is enough
00:52:188 (1,3) - stack correctlyK
01:26:227 (2) - move to 376|124 for improved movementK
[Normal]
increase AR, atm you have a 3/3/7 spread, which doesn't make much sense.. o.o It was a stupid mistake...fixed
00:05:169 (2) - middle anchor too close to 00:05:746 (3) - K
00:06:323 (5) - move to 416|200, DS is slightly off Rearranged this part
00:29:112 (3) - I'd prefer stack with 00:30:265 (1) - here, cause atm 3 is placed 'against' the movement 00:28:246 (2) - indicates Rearranged this part
00:30:554 (2) - last anchor is too far away K
00:32:573 (1,2) - maybe you wanna try some different shapes here?
that way you add some variety and if the shapes face each other you improve the flow as well

The puush gone missing Q_Q
00:45:265 (2,3) - I'd prefer if you don't stack them but place 3 further up and bend in the other direction
Fixed
00:48:727 (3,1) - blanket, middle anchor too close K
00:51:035 (3,1) - ^ K
01:02:573 (2,3,4) - ^ K
01:07:188 (2) - if you reverse this the movement is improved by a lot, you had to change up the following then, tho K
01:23:631 (2,3) - overlap doesn't look nice, imo, place 3 further down? K
01:32:573 (4,1) - refine blanket K
01:34:881 (3,4) - ^ K
01:49:881 (1,2) - ^ K
hmh, that's all I can say, nice mapset! owo
Thx a lot www
and good luck! *squee*

Thx for your mod :3

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Hey, mod from queue
Normal
00:01:419 - 00:06:035 Shouldn't the NC pattern be going like this?
The Combo break should be happening between every stanza (shown as the bit white tick mark).

00:10:650 (2) - NC instead of 00:09:785 (1) - . Again, here is how the NC breaks should appear for 00:09:785 - 00:15:265

I'll leave the rest for you to figure out.

Pretty much the combo break should be occurring in this pattern:

Sorry but I think the current NC is fine...
Easy
00:01:419 (2) - NC, because it appears in a new stanza, where the music officially starts. 00:00:265 (1) - is more like a sub-intro.

00:10:650 (2) - NC instead of 00:10:073 (1) - .

Okay, so in this diff (due to the low number of hit objects) you'r NC pattern should go something like this:

I think the current NC is fine...
00:36:035 (1) - Consider re-angling it a bit. It looks weird how it's tail is closer to the previous note, then the actual head itself.
Thx for pointing it out..though I didn't want to fix it since it leaves enough time for people to react.(also the tail is the reverse so I think it's fine)

Neat mapset Good luck!

Thx

Alarido

Alarido wrote:
Free Mod from The Coffee Party Free Mods
(See the requesting post)
[Normal]
♥ Nice rhythms and hitsounds
00:06:323 (5) - You can make the blanket better by moving the last node by 1 grid left and 1 grid down.K
00:12:092 (2) - For same reason, move the 2nd node by 1 grid right, and also snap the 3rd (last) node on grid (x:436 y:56).K
00:16:708 (2) - For same reason, snap the 2nd node at the grid (x:416 y:192) and also the 3rd node (x:448 y:212).K
♥ 00:19:015 (1) - The blanket here feels good (:
00:23:342 (1,2,3,4) - You can improve this pattern by making it a bit more regular, like → http://puu.sh/8dslw.jpg (note how, after the fix, the approach circle touches all objects at same time; so you can use it for alligning blankets and circle patterns like this). I'll give the code, since the fix is quite complex:
96,136,23342,5,0,0:0:0:0:
59,65,23631,2,0,P|96:56|128:64,1,72,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,132,24208,2,0,P|170:166|149:195,1,72,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,208,24785,2,0,P|32:184|20:156,1,72,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Fixed.. Really thx for the code ><!
00:25:650 (5) - Try blanketing this around 00:24:208 (3)'s head. Since it depends on the prior mod (that may be applied or not), I can't give the specific coordinates.K
00:26:804 (6) - Rotate it by 19 degrees clockwise, with Selection Centre checked (like here → http://puu.sh/8dsBr.jpg), so it'll blanket better with the next object. K
00:30:554 (2) - Move the 2nd dot to y:180, then move the 3rd dot to x:432 y:212, so the blanket will get fixed.
00:30:265 (1,3) - They aren't stacked perfectly. You can delete (3) and re-copy it from (1) or vice-versa.
Rearranged this part
00:48:727 (3) - Move the middle node by 1 grid left to curve it a bit more. K
00:51:035 (3) - For same reason, snap the middle node on x:368. K
01:24:496 (3) - Move to x:244 y:244, so you'll fix the overlaps. K
01:32:573 (4) - Move the 2nd node by 2 grids down, then move the last node to 3 grids right, for better blanketing.K
01:34:881 (3) - Move the middle node to x:292 y:300, for same reason. K

[Easy]
* Nothing to point out as mod. I just noticed here the slidertick-sound is the same intensity (volume) as of the hitnormal. It gives a good effect on the rhythms ♥ although it may be pointed by further modding or even by a BAT member.
Thx for that
Well, after some polishing and a few mods more, it can get ranked (:

Att.

Really thx for this mod :3

Spring Roll

Spring Roll wrote:
hello mod from game PM.

Easy
00:57:381 (2) - 滑条头有个很轻的鼓声，试试选中滑条头，然后把左上角的sampleset改成drum（觉得太重可以降低音量
00:59:688 (2,2) - ^
唔。。我觉得要改的话有点多。。先这样吧
好像也没什么问题了

Normal
00:16:419 (1,2,3,4) - 四个头部可以组成正方形姑且改了改
00:56:804 (1) - 滑条尾同EZ同Easy
01:23:631 (2,3) - 这两个拉开点不要重叠 K
01:32:573 (4,1) - 没包好？K
01:34:881 (3,4) - ^，没有平行各种不舒服 K

hope this helps

谢mod

eeezzzeee

eeezzzeee wrote:
Hi, from modding queue.
Sorry this is very late!

[Easy]
00:08:919 (3) - add clap K
00:10:073 (1) - ^ K
00:47:573 (2) - nc Nope
01:17:573 (4) - ^ K

[Normal]
00:25:650 (5) - nc K
00:45:265 (2,3) - to make these curve the same way. Rearranged this part
- change (2) the middle point to x444 y269 and the end point to x424 y348
- OR change (3) middle point to x424 y172 and end point to x328 y148
01:23:631 (2) - add clap at 2nd hit of the slider K

Best of luck

Thx

IamKwaN

IamKwaN wrote:
from in-game

General
Add an audio lead-in of 2000 ms manually because the current one is too short.
audio lead-in beautiful
Would u please change the combo colors? It doesn't match with the color tone of the background :c
The Artist should be 'Abo Takeshi' instead.
Ranking Criteria wrote:
Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean).
Fixed Thx!

Normal
Reduce OD by 1 to make the setting of the whole mapset clean.
00:06:323 (5) - blanket能改善! 这段重排了
00:46:419 (3) - 這種stack在N來說真的比較難接受重排+1
01:06:035 (1,2) - blanket please ;w; K
全部blanket check一遍吧,有改善的空間喔 QvQ
01:18:727 (1,2,3) - 這三個的排列有點不順眼,試試這樣:
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Q_Q图美丽
01:24:496 (3) - overlap了少許,spread開會整潔一點 K
音效不摸啦駿馬好懶怎麼辦 \:D/

Easy粗略看了一遍沒什麼

Thx KwaN www

yf_bmp

yf_bmp wrote:

mostly fixed thanks!

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364,268,90842,2,0,L|383:361,1,95,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,272,91419,6,0,P|220:276|180:260,1,95,6|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,244,91852,1,4,0:3:0:0:
140,220,91996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,92,92285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,84,92429,1,4,0:3:0:0:
256,88,92573,2,0,P|303:88|348:73,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
372,60,93006,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,56,93150,1,10,0:0:0:0:
428,64,93294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,80,93438,1,4,0:3:0:0:
452,80,93727,6,0,P|424:144|440:212,1,142.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,244,94592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
512,324,94881,2,0,P|464:340|420:328,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
422,329,95313,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,329,95458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,360,95746,6,0,P|238:349|194:365,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
116,312,96323,1,4,0:3:0:0:
116,312,96612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,216,96900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,80,97188,6,0,P|96:120|24:104,1,142.5,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,80,97765,2,0,P|40:44|88:48,1,95,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,36,98342,6,0,P|268:44|312:24,1,95,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,98919,2,0,P|365:102|393:63,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,176,99496,2,0,P|428:224|408:268,1,95,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
504,276,100073,2,0,P|486:321|447:349,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,372,100650,6,0,P|302:343|286:299,1,95,6|4,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
286,299,101083,1,2,0:0:0:0:
286,299,101227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,204,101515,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,204,101660,1,4,0:3:0:0:
300,204,101804,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,102092,1,4,0:3:0:0:
152,236,102381,1,10,0:0:0:0:
152,236,102525,1,4,0:3:0:0:
152,236,102669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,324,102958,6,0,P|246:249|216:164,1,190,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,103679,1,4,0:3:0:0:
216,164,103823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104112,1,4,0:3:0:0:
172,80,104256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,80,104688,2,0,L|164:32,2,47.5,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,84,105265,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,168,105842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,106419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,200,106708,1,6,0:3:0:0:
488,156,106996,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,252,107285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,348,107573,5,4,0:0:0:0:
348,308,108006,1,4,0:3:0:0:
348,308,108150,2,0,P|304:328|256:324,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
136,248,108727,2,0,P|182:250|225:231,1,95
344,152,109304,2,0,P|297:154|254:135,1,95,8|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
156,32,109881,5,4,0:2:0:0:
320,40,110169,1,4,0:3:0:0:
320,40,110313,2,0,L|368:48,1,47.5
392,32,110602,2,0,L|444:40,1,47.5
344,152,111035,5,4,0:3:0:0:
212,208,111323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,208,111467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,208,111612,2,0,P|196:163|203:117,2,95,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-10-29T13:41:09+00:00

Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]

名字跟姓氏應該要空一格跟Romanise Artist一樣，所以那中文字應該是打成"阿保剛"，而不是連在一起。
WidescreenStoryboard suggest all canceled. (Check yf's Hard diff)

[Easy] This rhythm have a bit simple

00:19:046 (3) - Suggest add a note here,make play this part will be better
00:35:200 (4) - 這兒聽起來是音樂節奏比較多的部分，所以可以加多一點節奏，just like this (Don't forget adjust the hitsound) :
SPOILER
00:56:546 (4) - The same as 00:19:046 (3)
01:10:392 (3) - Sounds like this music is so high part there ,why not add a note here?
01:33:469 (4) - Have a downbeat rhythm here,add a note?

[Normal] CS4 feel have bit small in normal diff,try to reduce to 3 or 3.5 here?

00:09:238 (7) - At easy diff has been added this note rhythm here,why not add a note for this diff? (Don't forget adjust the hitsound)
00:39:527 (2) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.
00:41:834 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
00:44:142 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
00:57:123 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 跟上面一樣情況，應該知道加哪裡吧。
01:48:757 (4) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.

[yf's Hard]

00:25:969 (1) - Feel this is unnecesary NC here,it doesn't help to read or play this part better,so remove it and 00:27:123 (3) - add a NC here?
00:29:431 (1) - Seems missed a finish here?
00:35:200 (1) - The same as 00:25:969.
01:15:296 (1) - Need to delete this slider,because at hard diff,the spinner end and object space between 1/1 beat there. (So this place at 1/2 rhythm is unsubmitted)
01:29:142 (7) - Listen to this part music,seems missed a whistle hitsound?
01:44:431 (4,5,6,7) - Feel this note stream have a bit difficult to play at hard diff,maybe can change a 1/2 beat (1 or 2) reverse slider here?
01:46:161 (2) - I suggest follow this piano at this part,move to 01:46:017 this to follow it will be played better (This note place white line feel play a bit weird)
01:46:450 (3) - Why not add a note follow the piano voice?
01:46:594 (4) - The same as 01:46:450 (3).
01:50:921 (4) - Make the head move to 01:51:065 here,because the 01:50:632 (3) - the downbeat you follow the head,I think move it can play better.
01:52:652 (1) - Add a spinner with the same another diff?

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-10-29T18:34:38+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
名字跟姓氏應該要空一格跟Romanise Artist一樣，所以那中文字應該是打成"阿保剛"，而不是連在一起。 K
WidescreenStoryboard suggest all canceled. (Check yf's Hard diff)Changed
[Easy] This rhythm have a bit simple This is basicly becasue of the map was made of the time of old stars and to control difficulty.
00:19:046 (3) - Suggest add a note here,make play this part will be better
00:35:200 (4) - 這兒聽起來是音樂節奏比較多的部分，所以可以加多一點節奏，just like this (Don't forget adjust the hitsound) :
SPOILER
00:56:546 (4) - The same as 00:19:046 (3)
01:10:392 (3) - Sounds like this music is so high part there ,why not add a note here?
01:33:469 (4) - Have a downbeat rhythm here,add a note?
All Fixed..Thx !
[Normal] CS4 feel have bit small in normal diff,try to reduce to 3 or 3.5 here?At that time there is no 3.5... changed to 3.5
00:09:238 (7) - At easy diff has been added this note rhythm here,why not add a note for this diff? (Don't forget adjust the hitsound)
00:39:527 (2) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.
00:41:834 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
00:44:142 (2) - The same as 00:39:527 (2).
00:57:123 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 跟上面一樣情況，應該知道加哪裡吧。
01:48:757 (4) - Recommended add a note for this point,I feel that really fit the playing here.
All Fixed..Thx !

Thx smallboat

Waiting for yf_bmp's response...

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-10-30T06:35:23+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Red words: Should be fixed.
Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my opinion.

[yf's Hard]
00:25:969 (1) - Feel this is unnecesary NC here,it doesn't help to read or play this part better,so remove it and 00:27:123 (3) - add a NC here?
00:29:431 (1) - Seems missed a finish here? 这不
00:35:200 (1) - The same as 00:25:969.
01:15:296 (1) - Need to delete this slider,because at hard diff,the spinner end and object space between 1/1 beat there. (So this place at 1/2 rhythm is unsubmitted) 去掉了转盘
01:29:142 (7) - Listen to this part music,seems missed a whistle hitsound?
01:44:431 (4,5,6,7) - Feel this note stream have a bit difficult to play at hard diff,maybe can change a 1/2 beat (1 or 2) reverse slider here?
01:46:161 (2) - I suggest follow this piano at this part,move to 01:46:017 this to follow it will be played better (This note place white line feel play a bit weird) 不了难跟而且后面有个声音不知道是1/8还是1/6组合的不好做
01:46:450 (3) - Why not add a note follow the piano voice?
01:46:594 (4) - The same as 01:46:450 (3). 不了
01:50:921 (4) - Make the head move to 01:51:065 here,because the 01:50:632 (3) - the downbeat you follow the head,I think move it can play better. 没事为了简化难度
01:52:652 (1) - Add a spinner with the same another diff? 没啥必要.....

谢船业, 没回复的就是fixede

@谷谷感觉有挺多音效有延时的我剪了下(没改别的) 音效也更新下吧
http://puu.sh/cvZx8/a9bc6d76a6.zip

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-10-30T17:35:26+00:00

updated

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-10-31T16:50:12+00:00

Overall looks fine.

Bubbled !

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-10-31T16:56:28+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Overall looks fine.

Bubbled !

Thx a lot smallboat
/me hugs

Crystal

Former osu!catch Champion: 2018

1,122 posts

Joined June 2012

Crystal 2014-11-01T11:43:29+00:00

>.<

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-11-01T11:51:44+00:00

Fix the tags,so reb it.

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-11-02T03:18:33+00:00

[General]

Audio-leadin 1000 ms.

[Hard]

00:38:661 - Whistle.
00:46:738 (4) - 背景沒高音建議移除whistle.
00:57:700 (2,2) - Drum clap不舒服啊還有01:02:315 (2) 基本上他們跟00:39:238 (2,2,2) - 一樣怎麼有些有音效有些沒有

[Normal]

01:08:661 (1) - 提議一個更好的排版避免那少許的overlap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195915
01:10:969 (1,2,3) - 滑條頭用whistle跟finish更能突出重音啊那個clap太低音啥都聽不到
01:19:334 (2,3) - 這排列有點醜.. 我說的是這部分 http://puu.sh/czHdq.jpg
01:27:123 (1) - 不要開grid snap阿....尤其EZ NM這些用DS的難度 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195935
01:35:200 - Whistle. 以及01:35:632 - 01:37:507 - 01:37:940 - 01:41:834 -
01:38:661 - 為什麼whistle? 好像沒有高音建議移除 01:44:431 (2) - 01:49:046 - Same
01:42:700 (5,1) - Stack.
01:47:892 - Finish.

[Easy]

00:46:882 - 01:15:007 - Unsnapped green line.
01:10:969 (1,2,3) - Finish+Whistle.
01:15:007 (1,2) - 現在跟前面黏太近放在右下角是夠位置的阿懶調整的話就把(1)跟前面的圓圈stack好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195971
01:35:200 - Whistle (maybe with a lower volume). Same for all these: 01:37:507 -
01:38:661 (2) - Remove whistle. Applies also on 01:44:431 - 01:49:046 -
01:51:931 - Clap.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-11-04T01:54:09+00:00

帮我改阿

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Nepu 2014-11-06T11:02:11+00:00

Sorry for being late...really busy recently.

IamKwaN wrote:
[General]
Audio-leadin 1000 ms.
是不是要手动改啊。。
[Hard]
00:38:661 - Whistle. K
00:46:738 (4) - 背景沒高音建議移除whistle. K
00:57:700 (2,2) - Drum clap不舒服啊還有01:02:315 (2) 基本上他們跟00:39:238 (2,2,2) - 一樣怎麼有些有音效有些沒有
唔。。我觉得这里有底鼓前面的好像没底鼓。。
[Normal]
01:08:661 (1) - 提議一個更好的排版避免那少許的overlap https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195915 K
01:10:969 (1,2,3) - 滑條頭用whistle跟finish更能突出重音啊那個clap太低音啥都聽不到 K
01:19:334 (2,3) - 這排列有點醜.. 我說的是這部分 http://puu.sh/czHdq.jpg
01:27:123 (1) - 不要開grid snap阿....尤其EZ NM這些用DS的難度 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195935 我顺带就这段整个重排了;w;
01:35:200 - Whistle. 以及01:35:632 - 01:37:507 - 01:37:940 - 01:41:834 -K
01:38:661 - 為什麼whistle? 好像沒有高音建議移除 01:44:431 (2) - 01:49:046 - Same其实只是长白。。fixed
01:42:700 (5,1) - Stack.K
01:47:892 - Finish.K
[Easy]
00:46:882 - 01:15:007 - Unsnapped green line. Fixed
01:10:969 (1,2,3) - Finish+Whistle. K
01:15:007 (1,2) - 現在跟前面黏太近放在右下角是夠位置的阿懶調整的話就把(1)跟前面的圓圈stack好了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2195971 K
01:35:200 - Whistle (maybe with a lower volume). Same for all these: 01:37:507 - K
01:38:661 (2) - Remove whistle. Applies also on 01:44:431 - 01:49:046 - K
01:51:931 - Clap.K

updated.