Winek
Thx for mod>.< really helpful !!Winek wrote:
Hello! Coming from No Dap's Form Q.
I really like the song o3o[Easy]
- Your easy seems clear, But really, it misses notes at the beggining, as they break all the clap chain.
- 00:09:509 (1) - This note seems completely awkward and out of the rythm... Please, change the position, I suggest removing it, and placing a note at 00:08:932 and 00:10:086 . It will feels better than the current awkward note, as it break (constant) , my english is not perfect o3o Fixed :3
- 00:15:278 (1) - This note would totally feel better without reversearrow. Instead, place a simple circle. I would eeven see a simple 1/1 slider instead of 2/1.Fixed :3
- 00:34:894 (3) - That's about the same problem as upper there. Breaks (constant) again, so just place a note on the two white tick between the note. Didn’t quite unterstand...sorry><
- 00:44:702 (1,2) - Well, please Swap NC. You should new combo mostly on on downbeats. You might make some exeption such as SV change, but most will land on downbeats. (Not all <.<)Here I put NC mostly because it's a long combo(>5 in easy) Fixed as well
- 00:47:586 (1,1,1) - I do not see the use of these NCs. Please remove them.Fixed :3
- 00:56:240 - Add a note here? It breaks the (constant)no ><
- 01:22:201 (3) - I'm not sure but it miss a whistle here. Leaving blank feel.. ughK
- 01:51:913 (1) - This spinner feel random, while the ending is just a tune down of original music, so i'd rather remove it.Personally I like spinner...
Feedback
The diff is well made; But you miss some opportunity of doing blankets, that's something that could mmake your map prettier. Overall is good.[Normal]Good luck on your map! I hopes i helped!Feedback
- 00:04:894 - I feel there should really be a note here. You see, you added one at 00:02:586 (1) and some other place. if you meet similar areas, try to add a not there.K
- 00:06:336 (4,5) - Little overlap, Try to blanket well? It helps make the map prettier.re-arranged :3
- 00:30:279 (1,3) - Give us a stack!K
- 00:32:586 (1,2) - This doesn't feel good at all. I mean 00:36:048 (1,2) those feels good, but not these. Convert them into simple 1/1 sliders, please..I would keep for now><
- 00:46:432 (1) - Why NC? It serve nothing.Fixed
- 00:53:932 (3) - That drum hitsound feels awkward, It really prefer a soft one.K
- 01:23:644 (2,3) - Please move them a bit so that they can avoid overlap. Same little situation for 01:28:259 (2,3)K
- 01:51:048 (1) - Same as Easy, this spinner look too random. I suggest removing it. Personally I like spinner...
Seems rather fine to me, it was my favorite from all.
kamisamaaa
谢谢mod>.<!!kamisamaaa wrote:
from my queue~
[normal]
00:04:881空的很违和 加个note重叠到滑条脑袋吧K
00:05:169 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这一坨挤成一堆了 你用cs4就应该为了能更舒展才对 结果往一堆挤。那还不如用大圈呢修了
01:29:112 (3) - 凸的方向换一下。。难受死了为何要换。。。
01:38:342 (2,3) - 。。。。。。。。。= =?
感觉就是小圈没必要 版面基本就利用了中间那一块 下面就没有note
然后过分blanket。。。其实没必要 注意flow要好 别光blanket额谢谢提醒><不过我觉得flow还好?
[easy]
00:12:958 (3,1) - 别遮挡删了
00:29:112 (2,1,2,1,2) - easy这么放肯定会被喷出翔的。。。看情况
00:36:035 (1) - 这个节奏不对 怎么听都觉得这样才对节奏的确是这样的。。这里只是试图混过去。。
00:45:265 (2) - ctrl+G flow比较好K
01:49:881 (1) - 这个节奏也是3/4折返额试图混的结果。。。
Raphael
Thx for mod~[Raphael] wrote:
Hi~! from my queue!
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:49:881 (1) - remove NC.K
00:52:188 (1,3) - stack completelyK
01:15:842 (3) - move to (198,312) for triangleK
01:15:842 (3,5) - stack completelyK
- 00:06:323 (4,5) - try blanket rearranged
00:30:265 (1,3) - try overlap rearranged
00:36:035 (1,2,1) - better blanket K
00:47:573 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - avoid back and forth pattern. it is bored D: hmmmm><
01:23:631 (2,3) - remove that overlap lightly K
01:28:246 (2,3) - ^ rearranged
Sweet Vanilla
谢谢mod>.<~!!Sweet Vanilla wrote:
谷歌妹妹 说好的来看图这么晚 对不起> < 没有问题啦~我也懒wwwmodding
好清新的曲子~ 挺喜欢的
[General][Normal]
- 音效里面normal-sliderslide.wav和normal-slidertick.wav中只能选一个无声哦
- 曲子没有kiai咩 还是要加一点的吧 不过这么轻柔的曲子也没关系 > < (个人感觉kiai一闪一闪的感觉还挺有节奏感的)> <实在找不到地方加kiai
- widescreen support还是建议不要开 因为这会占用sb load (有人认为这没有关系 的确没有但是真的没必要> <关掉了
[Easy]
- 00:06:323 (4,5) - 这个overlap不太好看...blanket怎么样呢?
这里重排了- 00:21:035 (1,3) - 00:30:265 (1,3) - 这两个为了整洁可以叠起来normal这一点的间接覆盖应该没有问题的K
- 00:46:419 (1) - 这个覆盖不太好 新手会挺困扰的keep><
- 01:53:631 - 做声音渐小的话这里空出来的部分感觉不能理解呢我脑残的以为osu会自动渐弱了;w;
这个曲子mapset好像还要改改 不过音效做的不错呢> < 加油
- 00:00:265 (1) - 这里不太好哦 因为后面24拍子的白线都没有摆 但是第一个note的节奏一般都代表后面的节奏 所以第一个滑条在这里00:00:842 - 放了音会让新手非常困扰的 而且 easy 一般大家都喜欢map24拍而不是13拍哦先留着了。。。
- 后面挺好啦QvQ
ZZHBOY
谢mod~ZZHBOY wrote:
[Easy]
00:03:150 (3,5) - 总感觉overlap在easy里不好..
00:30:842 (2) - 你跟的是乐器所以感觉应该在这里nc 其它地方也一样
01:52:188 - 转盘这里开始啊啊啊 K
[Normal]
00:06:323 (4,5) - overlap丑改惹
00:36:035 (1,2) - 这里弧度可以大一点blanket起来美观些^
00:44:688 (1,2) - 没blanket好^
01:19:015 - 感觉drum音效不适合这个曲 /.\
01:51:035 - 这里也是可以拉一个1/1滑条然后下一个长白线起转盘 K
不喜欢CS4的N...
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