1. Ami's Easy (1.52 stars, 134 notes)
2. Extra (5.37 stars, 629 notes)
3. Hard Collab (3.35 stars, 329 notes)
4. Insane (4.45 stars, 436 notes)
5. Normal (1.83 stars, 137 notes)

Ami wrote:

Why I dont have stars. D:
Thx Kyshiro <333 ^_°

Ami wrote:

Hi baka.

[General]
http://puu.sh/6f70P.jpg @ Storyboard names, baka <3

[Superior]
00:09:341 (3) - move it to x:436 y:224. Looks better for me o3o
00:45:341 (1) - whistle on reverse?
00:55:341 (3) - 00:55:341 (3) - maybe http://puu.sh/6f7ku.jpg? when u change it then maybe http://puu.sh/6f7mH.jpg ? Looks nice, idk why
01:15:341 (2) - http://puu.sh/6f7ss.jpg ?
01:41:341 (4) - maybe at slider's end one grid down?

vdijfg
Insane looks perfect. Sorry for my bad mod
Q_Q <3 bye baka ^_°

• Pretty much perfect

1. 00:52:675 (3) - Sounds better without the whistle, imo
2. 01:25:341 (1) - Moving this slider to x32 y352 seems to look better. Obviously, fix spacing later with (2)
3. 01:42:675 (2,1) - There's something quirky about this blanket but I can't figure it out asfgashjkas

• Very nice but lrn2overlap

1. 00:06:008 (3,1) - isn't overlapping correctly
2. 00:09:341 (3) - Silence the end of this slider? *whenever I say silence, it's 5% volume section*
3. 00:13:675 (1) - Why doesn't this have normal-hitnormal hitsound at the start?
4. 00:42:675 (3) - Also isn't overlapping correctly, but then you fuck up your blanket safdghasjdk
5. 00:53:341 (2) - would be cool if you ended with a whistle :-)
6. 01:18:675 (2) - Moving this to x498 y262 will fix your overlapping
7. 02:05:551 (1) - Silence this sliderend?

• Pretty awesome, your styles fit nicely

1. 00:06:675 (1,2,3) - Silence these sliderends? In the case of (3), ticks sound bad as well
2. 00:36:008 (2,4) - Silence these? BTW I'm not really keep going on with this, just try to silence whenever there's no sound in the music, the hitsound sounds kinda bad
3. 01:55:508 (4) - Why does the end have a whistle instead of the start? D:

• This is the first time ever I see streamjumps done right. Amazing.

1. 01:46:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - nomegusta these are fucking hard to tap
2. 02:08:756 (1) - Nice one . That's cute.

Blue Dragon wrote:

[Ami's Easy]

• Pretty much perfect

1. 00:52:675 (3) - Sounds better without the whistle, imo
2. 01:25:341 (1) - Moving this slider to x32 y352 seems to look better. Obviously, fix spacing later with (2)
3. 01:42:675 (2,1) - There's something quirky about this blanket but I can't figure it out asfgashjkas

[Normal]

• Very nice but lrn2overlap

1. 00:06:008 (3,1) - isn't overlapping correctly
2. 00:09:341 (3) - Silence the end of this slider? *whenever I say silence, it's 5% volume section*
3. 00:13:675 (1) - Why doesn't this have normal-hitnormal hitsound at the start?
4. 00:42:675 (3) - Also isn't overlapping correctly, but then you fuck up your blanket safdghasjdk
5. 00:53:341 (2) - would be cool if you ended with a whistle :-)
6. 01:18:675 (2) - Moving this to x498 y262 will fix your overlapping
7. 02:05:551 (1) - Silence this sliderend?

[Hard Collab]

• Pretty awesome, your styles fit nicely

1. 00:06:675 (1,2,3) - Silence these sliderends? In the case of (3), ticks sound bad as well
2. 00:36:008 (2,4) - Silence these? BTW I'm not really keep going on with this, just try to silence whenever there's no sound in the music, the hitsound sounds kinda bad
3. 01:55:508 (4) - Why does the end have a whistle instead of the start? D:

[Insane]

• This is the first time ever I see streamjumps done right. Amazing.

1. 01:46:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - nomegusta these are fucking hard to tap
2. 02:08:756 (1) - Nice one . That's cute.

not much to say, pretty awesome map, good luck

1. 00:13:341 - 00:13:341 / 01:17:341 - 01:49:341 - Try to place drumbeat every 1/1 (currently you're placing it every 2/1, which feels way too empty)

1. 00:42:675 (1) - Remove NC? Doesn't feel necessary
2. 01:25:341 (1) - Move to x:32 y:356, looks better and overlaps perfectly
3. 01:29:341 (2) - Move to x:448 y:96 (careful to fix next slider spacing)
4. 01:35:008 (2) - Remove whistle to follow music?
5. 01:38:675 (1,2) - Bad overlap (just like abovementioned posts) but you have to fix this yourself, I can't help much here
6. 01:45:341 (2) - Make this straight instead of slightly curved?
7. 02:03:675 (2,4) - Please don't overlap this, it looks very bad

1. AR +1 to cope with fast slider speed
2. 00:11:841 (1,1) - Spacing seems too high for such normal difficulty
3. 00:39:341 (4,1) - Stack maybe? somehow follows music better if you do
4. 01:06:675 (1,2) - ;____; make the 2nd slider like 1st slider pls (copypaste it)
5. 01:17:341 (1) - If you could make this looks less curved like 00:08:008 (2) - it'll be very good
6. 01:42:675 (5) - Add whistle

1. 00:13:508 (1) - Remove pls this seems too hard to hit after the spinner
2. 00:48:008 (4,5) - Ctrl-G these both (but not at the same time), flows better
3. 01:14:008 (3,4) - Why not copypaste.
4. 01:40:341 (2,3) - If you could combine this into slider it'll be way better
5. 02:07:024 (1,2) - stack plsssssssssss follows music atmosphere better i promise yes yes yes pls

1. you sick fuck i love these squeares fuck fuck fuck SQUARES YES
2. 00:27:008 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - not symmetrical enough, make sure to symmetrize it from three sides of the triangle
3. 00:30:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Pls don't stack, this broke flow somehow how about this kind of formation: ۞ (no symbols of it but this is the closest one so you should understand what i mean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11)
4. 01:17:341 - STREAAAAAAAAAAMS YES FUCK IM GONNA RAEP tai.
5. 01:05:591 (2,3) - Plays weird, idk why
6. 02:07:881 (3,1) - Stack with this vagina slider

inverness wrote:

Mod request via forum/in-game

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

General

1. 00:13:341 - 00:13:341 / 01:17:341 - 01:49:341 - Try to place drumbeat every 1/1 (currently you're placing it every 2/1, which feels way too empty)idgi, theres no drumbeats that are being used at 1/1 or 1/2, i think the hitsounds are fine though :c

Ami's Fien Fixed all

1. 00:42:675 (1) - Remove NC? Doesn't feel necessary
2. 01:25:341 (1) - Move to x:32 y:356, looks better and overlaps perfectly
3. 01:29:341 (2) - Move to x:448 y:96 (careful to fix next slider spacing)
4. 01:35:008 (2) - Remove whistle to follow music?
5. 01:38:675 (1,2) - Bad overlap (just like abovementioned posts) but you have to fix this yourself, I can't help much here
6. 01:45:341 (2) - Make this straight instead of slightly curved?
7. 02:03:675 (2,4) - Please don't overlap this, it looks very bad

Super

1. AR +1 to cope with fast slider speed Ok
2. 00:11:841 (1,1) - Spacing seems too high for such normal difficulty I think it's fine tho :c
3. 00:39:341 (4,1) - Stack maybe? somehow follows music better if you do this would ruin the whole placement here :c i think it's fine without stacking tho
4. 01:06:675 (1,2) - ;____; make the 2nd slider like 1st slider pls (copypaste it) can't no room for it hue
5. 01:17:341 (1) - If you could make this looks less curved like 00:08:008 (2) - it'll be very good ok
6. 01:42:675 (5) - Add whistle ok

Exquit fixed all

1. 00:13:508 (1) - Remove pls this seems too hard to hit after the spinner
2. 00:48:008 (4,5) - Ctrl-G these both (but not at the same time), flows better
3. 01:14:008 (3,4) - Why not copypaste.
4. 01:40:341 (2,3) - If you could combine this into slider it'll be way better
5. 02:07:024 (1,2) - stack plsssssssssss follows music atmosphere better i promise yes yes yes pls

For your Ami

1. you sick fuck i love these squeares fuck fuck fuck SQUARES YES !!!!!!!!!!
2. 00:27:008 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - not symmetrical enough, make sure to symmetrize it from three sides of the trianglefix
3. 00:30:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Pls don't stack, this broke flow somehow how about this kind of formation: ۞ (no symbols of it but this is the closest one so you should understand what i mean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11) i kno what you mean but i like it :c works as some kind of lead-in for the stream
4. 01:17:341 - STREAAAAAAAAAAMS YES FUCK IM GONNA RAEP tai.
5. 01:05:591 (2,3) - Plays weird, idk why idk i think it plays fine :c
6. 02:07:881 (3,1) - Stack with this vagina slider hue ok

tfw no gf
good luck anyway, you must rank this you sick fuck
ass

Asphyxia wrote:

General thoughts

1. It'd be cool if you could add a preview point to your Superior difficulty Done
2. Unrankable diff names, pls change fuck you i told you not to point them out hue. fixed
3. Probably not necessary, but if you want, you could add some audio lead in (like ~600) to make it around 2000. unnecessary, osu adds 2000ms by itself
4. Disable widescreen support done except for the hard

Superior

1. 01:11:675 (6) - Not a fan of this placement here, I mean I'd like it more if you would make a downcurve instead. Would feel much better (atleast for me) when playing it, example: would ruin the flow :c
   
   Example

   
2. 01:17:341 (4) - Since the chorus starts here, I'd think a NC would be a pretty good idea. Fixed
3. 01:45:341 (2) - Might be just my personal opinion here, but if you'd give it a bit of more curve? Would look better to me: i like it more how it is :c
   
   Example

   
4. Perfect

Collab Exsdedsffhmlfhmklf

1. I'd give it a +1 HP would ruin the spread, the insane has hp6
2. Fku too perfect

Insane

1. 00:12:008 (1) - This should start earlier, here to be exact 00:11:841 - (for the consistency and that, you know) fixed
2. 00:53:341 (5) - I think you forgot to silence the end of this slider, because it sounds horribru now =( fixed hue
3. Hi I'm perfect

Yeeee, nice mapset! Best of luck for ranking guys!

Charles445 wrote:

Why is technobreak in the tags if this isn't technobreak ver?

- Melody wrote:

♥ ~ Random Mod ~ ♥

♥: Must fix
♥: Suggestion


General ;

♥ I would add this to your song file : http://puu.sh/6EICX.wav ~ Because the sound of the Sliderbody on the calming parts sounds ugly.. Done



Normal ;

♥00:01:342 (1,2) - I think this blanket can be improved more : fixed

SPOILER

♥00:42:008 - Add Whistle ok
♥00:56:008 (1) - x280 y84 , easier for newbies to play & flows a little bit better imo ok
♥00:57:341 (2,3,4,5) - Make these like this :

SPOILER

{Makes more flow between (2) and (3)} ok

♥01:01:341 (1,2) - I don't like this blanket. Move (2) to : x328 y240 I prefer to keep it
♥01:01:341 (1) & 01:04:008 (3) - Blanket :

SPOILER

♥01:05:008 (4) - x233 y208 , because it should be on the same place as 01:01:341 (1) There's 4 seconds in between + this would ruin the blanket
♥01:05:341 (5,6) - This looks better imo :

SPOILER

ok
♥01:21:341 (4,5) - I think they are not similar to each other? They should be similar theyre similar lol
♥01:42:675 (5) - Move the 3rd point to : x160 y160 , for a better blanket the blanket is perfect how it is :c
♥01:50:675 (3) - x460 y92 for a little bit better flow doesn't really matter, but ok



Hard Collab ;


Kyshiro's Parts ;

♥00:02:341 (2) - You should make this round because the other sliders are round too, and it would fit more better I like to have it a bit varied like this
♥00:09:341 (3) - Delete this slider and add only a Circle, because 00:11:341 - here is no Sound anyway You can hear the piano note until there
♥01:40:341 (2) - x460 y256 , it flows better ok
♥02:01:008 (1,2) - Make these Sliders symmetrical : ok

SPOILER

Insane ;


♥00:09:341 (5) - Delete this slider and add only a Circle, because 00:11:341 - here is no Sound anyway Same as before
♥00:27:841 (8) - x100 y320 , this position is more optimal imo I like it how it is :c
♥00:45:341 (1,2,3,4) - This looks better & is more readable :

SPOILER

I think the pattern I used is better and more fun
♥00:58:008 (3,4,5,6,7) - This doesn't flow Supposed to be like this
♥02:05:551 (1) - Slider Tail isn't snapped! It's snapped to the timing from the previous timing point, no real way to fix this
♥02:08:756 (1) - I would make the Slidertick sound lower, it sounds odd ok



That was it. Nice Song & Map. Good Luck, Kyshiro & Ami ♥ ~


Take this :

Ami's Easy ;

♥00:37:008 (3,1) - I would not overlay here, make it like this :

SPOILER

♥00:44:008 (4) - Move this to : x0 y200
♥00:45:341 (1) - Rotate this by +26° & place it to : x336 y200
♥00:54:675 (2) - x380 y184 , it flows better imo
♥00:55:341 (3) - If you removed (2) , remove (3) to : x292 y40 for a triangle & fix the DS if you do this No cause then I have a jump. .3.
♥01:24:008 (2,1) - I don't know if that's okay in an Easy Difficulty, but i would fix that. Maybe it'll be confusing for newbies i think its ok o.o
♥01:28:008 (1,2) - ^^
♥01:38:675 (1,2) - ^^
♥01:37:675 (2) - x320 y188 , for a better flow
♥01:46:675 (1,2) - I would make it like this, for a better flow :

SPOILER

♥01:49:008 (3,1,2) - If you did the suggestion from above, make it like this :

SPOILER

♥01:50:508 (2,1,2) - I wouldn't let a Slider start at a red tick and let it end on a white tick & it sounds not good imo it sounds good o.o
♥01:55:841 (2) - ^
♥01:55:841 (2,3) - This breaks the flow
♥02:01:341 (2,3,1) - Flow :

SPOILER

♥02:04:001 (3,4) - This would be hard to read for newbies

Ami's Parts ;

♥00:50:675 (1) - It's not exactly stacked with the Slider Tail of 00:49:341 (5) - remove (1) to : x395 y276
♥00:52:008 (4) - x108 y168 , to make a row with 00:51:675 (2,3) - and for the flow this looks bad meh >:
♥01:29:341 (1,2,3) - Make a stream with (2) & (3) it looks better and more playable imo / Maybe like this :

SPOILER

♥01:36:341 (2) - x260 y260 , for a better flow
♥01:53:175 (4,1,2) - I like this sry .-.

SPOILER

1. 00:06:675 (1) - This slider should have a S:C1 timing section because the sliderslide is sounding bad here

1. 01:14:008 (3,1) - fix this stack it really hurts my feelings
2. 02:01:008 (1) - This entire section should have S:C1 because of the slider-slide sound

1. 00:30:675 (1) - Shouldn't this be a normal hitsound like the other ones?
2. 00:34:341 (13) - There is a finish here in the other diffs
3. 02:05:551 (1) - I think you should replace this with a note or something to avoid issues with unsnapping as it is

Blue Dragon wrote:

you should really get more mods ): but kk the map is pretty much perfect

[Ami's Easy]

1. 00:06:675 (1) - This slider should have a S:C1 timing section because the sliderslide is sounding bad here

[Hard]

1. 01:14:008 (3,1) - fix this stack it really hurts my feelings Fixed everything but this, dafuq is wrong with this stack o-o
2. 02:01:008 (1) - This entire section should have S:C1 because of the slider-slide sound

[Insane]

1. 00:30:675 (1) - Shouldn't this be a normal hitsound like the other ones?
2. 00:34:341 (13) - There is a finish here in the other diffs
3. 02:05:551 (1) - I think you should replace this with a note or something to avoid issues with unsnapping as it is

Blue Dragon wrote:

but kk the map is pretty much perfect

Stefan wrote:

revivd haaaaaa star

Umi wrote:

yaho o/ here as Ami's request, sorry for delay but you know the reason (@Ami) >3</

Normal

1. 00:06:675 (1,2) - i like those shape but 00:09:341 (3) - this one seem a bit random can't u make a better one ? '-' I don't see how it's random :c
2. 00:38:341 (3,4,1,2,3) - so many change of DS here any reason ? For the shapes + it's not confusing or anything
3. 00:40:008 (1) - whistle on head Okay
4. 01:06:675 (1,2) - make it like this ?
   
   SPOILER

   

Hard collab

- Kyshiro

1. 00:09:341 (3) - NC ? Ok
2. 00:09:341 (3) - i would prefer ctlr g for a better flow here Fixed
3. 00:28:008 (1) - isn't better in this way ?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:32:008 (5) - NC Yeah
5. 00:57:841 (2) - what about use the same shape as 00:57:341 (1) - or vice versa it'll look better though I kind of like what i did here :c

Insane

1. 00:09:341 (5) - what about an "S" curve here ? and also NC I prefer the current form, fixed NC tho
2. 00:16:008 (1) - move it to x:96,y:31 and make it like this ( because you used a jump between those two notes 00:14:508 (7,1) - , so we're expecting for another one after) Fixes
   
   SPOILER

   
3. well same for 00:17:175 (6,1) // 00:25:175 (7,1) - if u could try to put a jump here Fixed
4. 00:22:174 (4,1) - nazi but stack perfectly x) Fixed
5. 01:57:341 (7) - NC Fixed

Short mod

Blue Dragon wrote:

but kk the map is pretty much perfect

gl for rank :3

Ami wrote:

Take my kudosu AH