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luxoDeh
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omg what happened xD
ok, I hope anre is alive >.<
AnreFM
*descended from hell*

Desperate-kun wrote:


  • Anre's Normal
  1. I'd recommend you to use slidertick hitsounds as well, to cover all the claps. I don't like slidertick hitsounds at all, but in this song they fit quite well for some reason. Also, the Easy uses so many of them, so it seems weird when you can hear all those claps in the Easy but not in the Normal.mm suree
  2. I think CS 3.5 is essential for the spread, to make this harder. It fits perfectly between Easy & Hard. yeah, great Idea!
  3. Then, I'd go with AR 5 (it fits your relatively high density really well). The OD can be set to 4.alrighty
  4. 00:29:809 (4) - I'd replace this slider with a 1/1-slider + circle, so that you don't ignore the strong vocal (+ clap sound) at 00:30:196 - http://puu.sh/c05SB/3d6c32f309.jpgya
  5. 00:54:583 (3) - Nazi ofc, but move it to 43|289 to improve this blanket (currently it is really, really off).lol sorry about that
  6. 02:09:680 (1) - This object is almost not audiable, please turn the volume up by around 15%.yeah, sure
  7. 03:27:873 (1) - You need atleast 2/1 of recovery time after a spinner in Normal diffs. I'd just extend it until 03:30:970 and remove the last two objects.okay then
  8. You got quite a few spacing errors or inconsistencies in your map that don't really make sense to me. I'd go through the map again, click every second object and see if the spacings are correct. Sometimes it varies from 0.9x to 1.1x, although 1.0x is supposed to be your main spacing.yeah I noticed this too x.x I've checked the map again thoroughly I hope there aren't any of those left orz
Um I've also changed a few parts that I find a bit unfitting, I hope that doesn't cause more problems >.<

Anyway thank you Nao! :)

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Title:Setsuna Plus
TitleUnicode:刹那プラス
Artist:Kano
ArtistUnicode:鹿乃
Creator:luxoDeh
Version:Anre's Normal
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Tags:MikitoP みきとP vocaloid moment utaite cover Hatsune Miku 初音ミク Miwasiba みわしいば AnreFM
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Topic Starter
luxoDeh
yeeeee anre is alive :D
Updated :3
Sakura
[Insane]
00:37:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - Feels empty. Try using sliders to follow the vocals, also you could add a note on 00:38:131 Ex: (Making 2 into a slider that ends there)
00:39:293 (1) - Extend by 1/2 the lyric of "Gaa" ends 1/2 later. (or you could add a repeat, that works too) if you extend you could make something combined with: 00:38:712 (5) (Actually a repeat makes it flow better).
00:46:841 (1) - Why use a slider here? You can slow the map down anyway and you can map the lyrics without issue.
01:45:293 (4) - If you're following the lyrics this should be a slider that ends 1/2 later.
02:25:357 (4,5,6,7,8) - This is an overmap, unless you're planning to fit these with the background instrument which isn't a good idea because the background instrument is pretty repetitive throughout the whole song to begin with.
02:28:260 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same as above.
02:31:551 (4,5,6,7,8) - Same
To be honest this whole section feels pretty soft and you're kind of pushing it for the sake of having something difficult "because insane" if this part of the song is softer then mae something softer, simple.
02:34:454 (5,6,7,8,9) - You know already /o/
02:46:841 (3,4,5,6,7) - Unless you're working on a triplet only section this is the most awkward gap i've seen xD
02:53:809 (1) - Having a new combo right before a break is really awkward even if it's a new measure, the player gets 2x hp boost from the 2 notes.

[Hard]
00:02:131 (1,2,3,4) - The tone of the song changes around 00:03:293 (4) I'd really suggest change of pattern when the tone changes so it flows better with the music.
00:06:196 (6) - For the same reason this could go into the next pattern instead.
00:44:519 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't suggest a reverse flow here in a hard, but up to you.
00:44:131 (2) - Could turn into a 1/2 slider to follow the vocals better.
00:55:357 (8,9) - Instead of this another curve slider feels better for the triple held lyric and it flows better from your previous 2 siders "Ki" "Tan" Ga" see?
01:04:648 (9,10) - Same as above as per the lyrics "A" "Ge" "Te"
01:07:744 (8,9) - Yeah same as above.
01:37:164 - Add a note, in fact you could turn 01:36:389 (1,2) into a slider, make 01:36:777 (3) into a 1/2 slider and put a note there if you wanna follow the lyrics, but the space feels so empty so at least the initial suggestion is recommended.
01:51:099 (8,9) - You probably know what im going to say so i may as well say that i'm going to suggest it for all of these and avoid typing a long wall /o/
02:53:809 (1) - Same suggestion as Insane.

[Anne's Normal]
Please use the same combo colors as in the other difficulties.
Please end kiai time at the same exact time than on the other diffs: 03:27:873
02:05:809 (4) - Make a repeat slider like the previous ones?

[Easy]
00:21:293 (5) - I think a circle or 2 fits here better with the way you were mapping this pattern.
00:32:906 (3) - Here too

My main issue with this mapset is that you seem to be following the lyrics and then suddenly switch to a pattern that doesn't follow them, you should really look into that, nice song tho! Good Luck!
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Sakura wrote:

[Insane]
00:37:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - Feels empty. Try using sliders to follow the vocals, also you could add a note on 00:38:131 Ex: (Making 2 into a slider that ends there) ok here
00:39:293 (1) - Extend by 1/2 the lyric of "Gaa" ends 1/2 later. (or you could add a repeat, that works too) if you extend you could make something combined with: 00:38:712 (5) (Actually a repeat makes it flow better). I added a note instead of a repeat
00:46:841 (1) - Why use a slider here? You can slow the map down anyway and you can map the lyrics without issue. hm.. yes but no, I would like to keep that slider
01:45:293 (4) - If you're following the lyrics this should be a slider that ends 1/2 later. no, I hear nothing in there
02:25:357 (4,5,6,7,8) - This is an overmap, unless you're planning to fit these with the background instrument which isn't a good idea because the background instrument is pretty repetitive throughout the whole song to begin with. no. I think this is ok. the background music is not repetitive in that part. you can clearly hear the repetitive drums only sometimes (where I put the streams) so I won't change and I don't think it's overmap. I could be wrong but I don't want to change now.
02:28:260 (5,6,7,8,9) - Same as above.
02:31:551 (4,5,6,7,8) - Same
To be honest this whole section feels pretty soft and you're kind of pushing it for the sake of having something difficult "because insane" if this part of the song is softer then mae something softer, simple.
02:34:454 (5,6,7,8,9) - You know already /o/
02:46:841 (3,4,5,6,7) - Unless you're working on a triplet only section this is the most awkward gap i've seen xD fixed that part
02:53:809 (1) - Having a new combo right before a break is really awkward even if it's a new measure, the player gets 2x hp boost from the 2 notes. I don't see what's wrong with it

[Hard]
00:02:131 (1,2,3,4) - The tone of the song changes around 00:03:293 (4) I'd really suggest change of pattern when the tone changes so it flows better with the music. yes but I didn't change for now
00:06:196 (6) - For the same reason this could go into the next pattern instead. not here
00:44:519 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't suggest a reverse flow here in a hard, but up to you. no change
00:44:131 (2) - Could turn into a 1/2 slider to follow the vocals better. no, I don't here anything in there
00:55:357 (8,9) - Instead of this another curve slider feels better for the triple held lyric and it flows better from your previous 2 siders "Ki" "Tan" Ga" see? ok here. I changed this thing for the first kiai because I felt like it was the one wich deserved some changed, but the rest of the song I felt ok with that.
01:04:648 (9,10) - Same as above as per the lyrics "A" "Ge" "Te"
01:07:744 (8,9) - Yeah same as above.
01:37:164 - Add a note, in fact you could turn 01:36:389 (1,2) into a slider, make 01:36:777 (3) into a 1/2 slider and put a note there if you wanna follow the lyrics, but the space feels so empty so at least the initial suggestion is recommended. I added a note but I'm not sure of the spacing
01:51:099 (8,9) - You probably know what im going to say so i may as well say that i'm going to suggest it for all of these and avoid typing a long wall /o/
02:53:809 (1) - Same suggestion as Insane. same to me too xD

[Easy]
00:21:293 (5) - I think a circle or 2 fits here better with the way you were mapping this pattern. no because I don't want to add circles that make this diff harder
00:32:906 (3) - Here too ^

My main issue with this mapset is that you seem to be following the lyrics and then suddenly switch to a pattern that doesn't follow them, you should really look into that, nice song tho! Good Luck!
Thank you for mod! :)
Anyway for the fact of lyrics and music, I never really get all this pressure (sometimes) of some modders about this. I think that some songs have both of them really close to each other, in the meaning that where there is a beat there is also the vocals, so there isn't really some part where you clearly see that I'm mapping on vocals or not, or at least not on this song/map. And anyway while mapping this song I always thought more about beats than vocals.
Myxo
Recheck~ No kudosu!

[Easy]

  1. 00:00:390 (1,2) - Spacing between these is significantly higher than your overall spacing, please fix it.
    00:40:648 (5,1) - Swap NCs please, since the rest of the map uses downbeat-NCing
[Hard]

  1. 00:02:131 (1) - Remove NC for consistency in this section (every 2 measures)
  2. 00:03:293 (4,1) - Swap NCs here if you want to avoid 10x combo when you fixed the above ^
  3. 01:54:583 (10,1) - This jumps still feels too extreme D: Try to reduce it a bit by change the slidershape maybe?
  4. 02:06:970 (9,1) - Same about this one.
[Insane]

  1. 01:10:841 (3) - You have to change this though :D There are skins with solid hitbursts, like the old standard skin. Those are not transparent. Osu still supports those skins, so they map have to fit these criteria. The hitburst from 01:09:873 (1) will still be visible later, so the reverse arrow can't be seen when you use such a skin. You have to change it so that the reverse arrow is not at the exact same position of (1)'s slidertail.
  2. 01:35:422 (2,3,4) - The huge linear slow-down is weird to play. Something like this would work better: http://puu.sh/cFwoK/70376b5239.jpg
What Sakura wrote about Anre's colours + kiai should be considered, although I even prefer his settings D:
Otherwise, I'll ask around about the diff spread again, probably (and in my opinion) some more will need to change in the Hard...
Topic Starter
luxoDeh

Desperate-kun wrote:

Recheck~ No kudosu!

[Easy]

  1. 00:00:390 (1,2) - Spacing between these is significantly higher than your overall spacing, please fix it.
    00:40:648 (5,1) - Swap NCs please, since the rest of the map uses downbeat-NCing
[Hard]

  1. 00:02:131 (1) - Remove NC for consistency in this section (every 2 measures)
  2. 00:03:293 (4,1) - Swap NCs here if you want to avoid 10x combo when you fixed the above ^
  3. 01:54:583 (10,1) - This jumps still feels too extreme D: Try to reduce it a bit by change the slidershape maybe?
  4. 02:06:970 (9,1) - Same about this one.
[Insane]

  1. 01:10:841 (3) - You have to change this though :D There are skins with solid hitbursts, like the old standard skin. Those are not transparent. Osu still supports those skins, so they map have to fit these criteria. The hitburst from 01:09:873 (1) will still be visible later, so the reverse arrow can't be seen when you use such a skin. You have to change it so that the reverse arrow is not at the exact same position of (1)'s slidertail.
  2. 01:35:422 (2,3,4) - The huge linear slow-down is weird to play. Something like this would work better: http://puu.sh/cFwoK/70376b5239.jpg
What Sakura wrote about Anre's colours + kiai should be considered, although I even prefer his settings D:
Otherwise, I'll ask around about the diff spread again, probably (and in my opinion) some more will need to change in the Hard...
All fixed, thank you :) waiting for anre now
AnreFM

Sakura wrote:

[Anre's Normal]
Please use the same combo colors as in the other difficulties.sure
Please end kiai time at the same exact time than on the other diffs: 03:27:873I.. somehow prefer mine for this one; both the background music and the video here feels really powerful thus making the starry effect the cursor made when spinning actually matches well with it, gonna keep this one for now
02:05:809 (4) - Make a repeat slider like the previous ones?Eh I actually intentionally made this one different from the previous one to create a kind of a follow up flow for the next slider, I think it goes well with the vocal too(it has a higher pitch) so I hope you can understand owo
And oh I don't know why I haven't bring this up but you can add the tags 'zaregoto klein' since this song is featured in there, here's for more information; http://www.amazon.co.jp/戯言クライン-鹿乃/dp/B00DS0Q6HK ovo

and Thanks again for the checks Sakura and Nao :D
Topic Starter
luxoDeh
OOK all updated now
and thank you, anre, for the tag :)
Myxo
Normal has Widescreen Support enabled. Please disable it.

The more major thing:
I've asked several BATs and we came to the conclusion that the main issue with the Hard are the streams. They make the difficult more difficult than it should be. Best solutions would be to replace all streams with repeated sliders. If you don't want to do this, you can just lower the spacing to ~0.4-0.5x, that would also help.
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luxoDeh

Desperate-kun wrote:

Normal has Widescreen Support enabled. Please disable it.

The more major thing:
I've asked several BATs and we came to the conclusion that the main issue with the Hard are the streams. They make the difficult more difficult than it should be. Best solutions would be to replace all streams with repeated sliders. If you don't want to do this, you can just lower the spacing to ~0.4-0.5x, that would also help.
fixed the widescreen support
and replaced the streams with something else :)
Myxo
Bubbled (ノ 'ω')ノ
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luxoDeh

Desperate-kun wrote:

Bubbled (ノ 'ω')ノ
Thank youuuuuu :D :D :D
Sakura
[Hard]
Kind of a bunch of spacing changes that are awkward like 02:47:809 (2) and 02:48:777 (5) (I mean if you move the whole 02:47:809 (2,3,4) to fit the spacing of 2, you can also fix the spacing of 5 and flows exaclty the same). Other notable example is the mini jump here: 02:50:906 (2)
The others seem to fit the music better.

[Anre's Normal]
Combo colors should be the same as the other diff, also on that note.

There's 2 similar combo colors in a row (twice actually) when you adjust the combo colors to those of the other diffs, it should be fine tho anyways. (I suggested this in my previous mod and you said "sure" but it's not fixed wth?), if you still wish to keep this color scheme then swap them around so both blues arent in a row (nor both oranges)

[Easy]
00:48:583 (2,1) - Don't use a 3/2 rythm on the eaisest difficulty. Try this fix:


Sorry but gotta pop this >_<
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luxoDeh

Sakura wrote:

[Hard]
Kind of a bunch of spacing changes that are awkward like 02:47:809 (2) and 02:48:777 (5) (I mean if you move the whole 02:47:809 (2,3,4) to fit the spacing of 2, you can also fix the spacing of 5 and flows exaclty the same). Other notable example is the mini jump here: 02:50:906 (2)
The others seem to fit the music better. hm... I felt right with them. (also talked ingame about this

[Easy]
00:48:583 (2,1) - Don't use a 3/2 rythm on the eaisest difficulty. Try this fix:
fixed

Sorry but gotta pop this >_<
Ook! Thank you :) (waiting for anre to check)

edit: fixed also the combo color in anre's diff :)
AnreFM
@Sakura I don't know but I'm pretty sure I've fixed the combo colors last time e.e anyway thank you for the check :D
Sakura
Ok rechecked those, so

Rebubbled!
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luxoDeh

Sakura wrote:

Ok rechecked those, so

Rebubbled!
Thank you :)
Myxo
;www;
Go go go!
Low
why is the artist still Kano? Kano should not be the artist due to the fact that she's a utaite (VOCALOID). the correct artist should be "MikitoP", the composer of this song. i pointed this out months ago and it was not changed.

http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/Mikito-P
http://utaite.wikia.com/wiki/Kano
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luxoDeh

Low wrote:

why is the artist still Kano? Kano should not be the artist due to the fact that she's a utaite (VOCALOID). the correct artist should be "MikitoP", the composer of this song. i pointed this out months ago and it was not changed.

http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/Mikito-P
http://utaite.wikia.com/wiki/Kano
yes, but Lanturn told me that for utaite the correct artist title should be the singer name, and not the composer. Look here t/176790/start=45

also if you look here https://osu.ppy.sh/s/180366 this is the latest ranked map of Hanatan. She is an utaite too, and the song is from vocaloid, but the artist name is still Hanatan.
Nyxa
Not a fan of the sliders ending on strong beats but otherwise nice map.
Shohei Ohtani
Lanturn if the metadata is wrong I'm going to legit cry.

Insane:
00:56:712 (3,4,5) - Would prefer some drum hitsounds here
00:58:260 (3,4,5) - Like drumfinish here
01:01:551 (3,4,5,6,7) - Like this is the perfect time to use some of that cool snare sample you have but you're like "nope"

^Apply that to all other choruses, and all other diffs if applicable.

After that, I'll be fine to rank it.
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luxoDeh

CDFA wrote:

Lanturn if the metadata is wrong I'm going to legit cry.

Insane:
00:56:712 (3,4,5) - Would prefer some drum hitsounds here
00:58:260 (3,4,5) - Like drumfinish here
01:01:551 (3,4,5,6,7) - Like this is the perfect time to use some of that cool snare sample you have but you're like "nope"

^Apply that to all other choruses, and all other diffs if applicable.

After that, I'll be fine to rank it.
Ook! I tryed to change this :)
I rechecked the metadata.. there should not be any problems.. I really don't want to unrank for that >.<
Shohei Ohtani
Great job kids!!
Koiyuki
gratz~
i love kano's version :D
Sakura
Nice! Congrats!
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luxoDeh
Yeee! Thank youuu! :D (finally this beautiful song can be ranked! ^.^)
Mint
Congrats luxoDeh!

Great mapset and this song is so good ;_;
Myxo
Yaaaaaaaaaay finally! o3o
AnreFM
Yaaaaaay! Gratz Luxo! <3
Lanturn
Hurray! I can't believe how long ago it was since I modded this map. Congrats on the rank!
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luxoDeh
Thank you everyone! :D This map finally made it! ^.^
and gratz also to Anre for his gd :3
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