1. Hard - 7Key (3.31 stars, 1520 notes)
2. Normal - 7Key (1.87 stars, 857 notes)

lZenxl wrote:

Mod from Quehue

Column thing : |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

You could really map the last portion, ending the song at the chorus seems a bit too abrupt i think so, already changed mp3

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Hard

Note Placement

Pitch Relevancy : 00:02:802 (2802|5,3561|4,4320|6,5080|3,5839|4) - Move to 4 6 5 7 5, respectively
^ : 00:05:080 (5080|6,10396|2,11156|0) - Move to 1 3, repectively can you explain more ?

Missing Notes: 01:07:928 - 1/4 stream here? map to synths in music i think there's no beat here
Missing Notes: 02:22:358^

Music Relevancy: 02:55:966 - Some of the notes in the section after this time should be LNs due to the nature of the synth, I suggest to change some of them fixed

Overmapping

Unsystematic Mapping: 03:04:890 (184890|5) - Since you were mapping to the synths, I think this is an overmap for this section since no synths are heard here fixed

Note Count

Note Count Inconsistency: 02:54:257 - Add a note here since you used 02:54:637 (174637|4,174637|0,174637|1) - 3 note chords for this
02:54:274 (174274|0,174274|4) - and 02:55:413 (175413|6,175413|2) - using 2 note, what is for opening and ending so i think i didn't add yet

SV Check

No Problem, very smooth

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems except hitsounding wait lol

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

Left Hand Bias: I see that you are using 00:37:738 (37738|1,37786|2,37833|3,37881|4,37928|5) - 5 note streams very frequently around the chart, while playing I noticed that most of these occur on columns 1 2 3 4 5 and 6 only, I suggest to move some right to fix the bias fixed

Repitetive Patterns:A lot of Ctrl+C and Ctrl+V and Ctrl + H, I suggest to change the patterns a bit more or else you might appear as being lazy
mostly i do with that, but i change some note into different pattern for enjoyment, why i do this ? because music tension really same (yeah at least it needed more various pattern)

Normal

Note Placement

Pitch Relevancy: 00:11:915 (11915|1) - Move to 7 fixed
Music Relevancy: 03:32:422 (212422|5) - If you are mapping for the vocals, this should be an LN not following vocal

Overmapping

None! lol

Note Count

Note Count Inconsistency: 01:12:675 (72675|2,72675|5,73055|1,73055|4) - I don't get the 2 chords here, the song does not suggest a need for emphasis this note 01:13:072 (73072|1,73072|4) - is the weird. fixed.. first double note is for finish sound
^: 02:00:523 (120523|5,120523|3,120903|5,120903|1,121283|4,121283|6,122042|1,122042|3,122422|5,122422|1) - ^ adding note, just randomly stuff following vocal tension lol
^: 02:06:979 (126979|6,126979|5) - ^ fixed, now should be follow guitar ( If you are mapping to the guitar, you should emphasize every note that has the guitar )

SV Check

SV in Normal?
- I guess it is possible since the SVs are very smooth wait for another modding

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems except hit sound

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

Repitetive Patterns: 01:06:979 (66979|5,66979|6,67358|4,67358|3,67738|1,67738|2,68118|0,68118|1,68498|6,68498|5,68877|3,68877|4,69257|1,69257|2,69637|1,69637|0) - These patterns repeat itself even though the song does not suggest a repeating synth or vocal pitch. please make a new pattern
^: 02:21:409 fixed
(141409|0,141409|1,141789|3,141789|2,142169|5,142169|4,142548|6,142548|5,142928|0,142928|1,143308|3,143308|2,143688|5,143688|4,144067|5,144067|6) - fixed^

Good flow for the the hands overall, no problems found in that aspect

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi Reiko, there are mods for your mania chart as you requested ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
Normal

Inside :3

00:08:705 and 00:08:894 - I can't understand why there's no at least one note according to the beat, I suggest you to add them to 3rd column added to 1st and 4th

00:11:173 (11173|5) - I suggest you to move this note to 4th column, it'll be more comfortable transition between your previous note in 2nd column and next going note in 6th column fixed

00:20:287 (20287|0) - you need to move this note closer to next going note, now placed too far from it, keep distance balance in your patterns, I think you can move it to 2nd column, it'll be suitable with your pattern here fixed move to 2nd

00:26:173 (26173|1) - umm...move this note to 2nd column too, it'll be more suitable position for it, keep distance correctly and also it'll be more comfortable to press after your previous chord fixed, so it not pressing 00:25:413 (25413|1) - again

00:29:401 (29401|1) - move this note to 2nd column again, why? look - the distance between your previous pair of notes is two columns, between your next going notes two columns too and for this one you have three, make it balanced fixed

00:35:856 - you can add one more note here according to additional sound which goes here (only suggestion for NM) added

00:43:262 (43262|6) - oh...there's no double beat or repeating back ground sound, move this note to 5th column, it'll be more suitable with your next going chord too fixed

00:50:856 (50856|4) - I think you can move this note to 2nd column and open next going chord by moving 00:51:046 (51046|3) - to 4th column to accent here double beat correctly, like you did it previously fixed, some section need various pattern

00:55:413 (55413|0) - same reason like for 43sec, but mirrored, sounds there are different fixed

01:01:869 (61869|5,62249|2) - I suggest you to switch the places for these LNs to 2nd and 4th columns accordingly, it'll be more suitable with your next going pattern i think this better

01:31:679 (91679|3) - you can open your chord here and move this note to 2nd column to connect here your chords correctly fixed

02:04:527 (124527|5,124907|4) - I suggest you to move these notes to 6th and 5th columns accordingly and perform here double stair transition, it'll be more comfortable to play with your previous pattern moved

02:14:781 - you can add one more note here according to the beat, it wouldn't be hard for player but it's good suitable with the song previous player will comfortable with drum sound, if i adding this seems bad

02:23:705 (143705|4,144084|5) - move these notes to 3rd and 4th columns and open these chord, see? same double stair patterns, use them here, it'll be more comfortable fixed like before

02:35:097 (155097|6) - keep distance, move this note to 4th column, don't place it too far fixed

02:51:426 - back cymbal sound here, add one more note to accent it, add to 3rd column for example you read my mind >///< fixed to 3rd

Hard

Inside :3

00:05:856 (5856|4) - move this note to 5th column, it'll be more correct ending for this part, make it symmetrical didn't fix

00:30:160 (30160|1) - I suggest you to move this note to 2nd column according to your pattern here, check the distance between notes and keep it see this pattern 00:30:160 (30160|1,30350|5,30540|1,30730|4,30920|0,31110|4) -

00:31:110 (31110|4) - and this one move to 3rd column to end your note transition here correctly, it'll be suitable with your next going pattern here too fixed

00:37:755 - here I suggest you to use this pattern, it's more comfortable to play such stream here rather than alternation fixed, but will be changed to previous again if didn't fit

00:54:654 (54654|1) - this note is too far from next going note, move it closer, at least to 2nd column, it'll be suitable with your next going pattern here too move to 3rd

00:57:502 (57502|1) - and this one move to 2nd column too, perform comfortable transition here between 6th>4th>2nd>0 columns fixed

01:00:540 - additional cymbal sound here, you need to accent it and re-arrange your previous triplet here according to the sound i want to add this but then system will be read as Insane ;w; so i won't add it yet

From 01:05:097 to 01:06:046 - this half alternated pattern look ruined, I suggest you to use this one, it'll be more comfortable to play here and suitable according to the song this already better

01:15:730 (75730|4) - I suggest you to move this LN to 3rd column and add ending note here 01:16:869 to 5th column according to the sound, it'll be more suitable with the song didn't move but adding note

01:22:565 (82565|6,82660|3) - move these notes to 3rd and 5th column accordingly, it'll be more suitable transition before your next going chord here this already better

02:09:844 (129844|5) - I think it'll be more comfortable it you move this note to 4th column and use stair pattern after your chord here 02:09:274 (129274|6,129654|5,129844|5,130224|6) - <- this had same pattern like 00:54:844 (54844|0,55224|1,55413|1,55793|0) -

02:21:046 (141046|1) - maybe you're follow the beat in this column, but I recommend you to move it to 2nd column, it'll be more suitable with your previous and next going patterns here following vocal, moved

02:23:894 - missed beat here, I suggest you to add one more note to 4th column here, it'll be good suitable with your next going stair pattern didn't add yet

02:58:831 (178831|0,178926|5) - move these notes to 4th and 3rd columns accordingly and perform here more comfortable triplet, now these notes are too far from each other i think this already better

General

Inside :3

Mapset: transition between NM and HD looks fine, so it's suitable for rank or if it'll be a problem, you can make 7K EZ diff. i didn't need other difficult yet, planning for ranked with 2 diff
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AiMod: there's a problem with Letterbox in NM diff, check it and fix. And there's a conflict in NM diff with SV changes, I think they are unnecessary for normal diff, it'll be really uncomfortable for average player, but it's optionally for you. just waiting other respond

Good job! Don't forget about hitsounding ^w^
Good luck :3/

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello Reiko~ Here is mod by request~
Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7
[General]
Turn off Letter Box in Hard already turn off
[Normal]
HP7 or OD7 no change yet
00:27:122 - Move to 3 and Add a Note at 1 in the same time added
00:35:856 (35856|1) - Change to Hold,end at 00:36:236 - added
00:36:236 (36236|5) - Change to Note no change
00:43:072 (43072|5,43262|5) - Move to 5 and 7 no change
00:48:388 - Add a Note added
00:48:768 - Remove a Note removed
00:55:224 (55224|1,55413|1) - Move to 3 and 1 no change
01:22:755 - Add a Note at 6 add in 4th
01:39:844 - Suggest this---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1252717 re-arrange to another way
01:53:325 (113325|1) - Change to Hold,end at 01:53:705 - actually it should be this note 01:53:135 (113135|3) - , no change
02:03:958 (123958|0) - Move to 5 or 7 move to 6th
02:04:527 (124527|6) - Move to 3 moved
02:22:945 (142945|0) - Move to 2 keep this
02:55:603 (175603|2) - Move to 5 no change
03:32:059 - Add a Note at 4 didn't add
03:32:439 (212439|5) - Change to Hold,end at 03:33:958 - i feel i already add hold before, added
03:33:958 (213958|1) - Remove or Change to Note
I suggest you end 03:58:262 - i will do if modder tell same
or end 04:10:413 -

[hard]
HP8 or HP8 OD8
00:19:907 - Suggest this ---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1252742 didn't sense any beat like that
00:26:363 (26363|5) - End at 00:27:122 - no change
00:44:781 - Add a Note at 3 added
00:50:287 - Add a Note at 4 didn't add
00:56:932 - Add a Note at 7 added
01:06:236 (66236|1) - Move to 1 no change
01:06:331 - Add a Note at 4 no change
01:22:755 - Add 2 Notes at 1 and 3 add 1 note at 2nd
01:34:907 - Add 2 Notes at 5 and 7 add 1 note at 6th
01:51:236 (111236|0) - Move to 2 and Add a Note at 4 no change
01:51:426 (111426|3,111616|5) - Move to 5 and 7 no change
01:59:211 - Add a Note added
02:20:762 - Add a Note at 4 no change
02:20:951 - Add a Note at 6 no change
02:37:186 - Add a Note at 7 added at 6th
02:56:553 (176553|2) - End at 02:56:932 - as i hear the "eurobeat" sound doesn't long after all
02:57:312 (177312|5) - End at 02:57:692 -
02:58:072 (178072|3) - End at 02:58:451 -
02:58:451 (178451|6) - End at 02:58:831 -
03:04:148 (184148|5) - End at 03:04:527 -
03:06:521 - Add a Note at 6 added
03:25:793 - Add 2 Notes at 1 and 3 added at 2nd
03:33:958 (213958|4) - Remove or Change to Note
I suggest you end 03:58:262 -
or end 04:10:413 -

Nice work,Good Luck~

Thanks for mod

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hi Reikosaka, maybe it's a little late >_>
here's my mod. I hope it's helpful ( and comfortable )

[Normal]
*Easy/Normal contains to much speed changes ( AiMod says ). It is rankable ?

*00:36:996 (36996|0) - strange sound. I think you should move it to 00:36:806 - in the same column actually not strange sound because following kick sound 00:36:236 (36236|5) - now change to note. moving to 00:36:806 - will result confused to the intro beat

*00:37:375 (37375|4) - move to 3nd or 4th column moved

*01:32:249 (92249|4) - move to 3rd column, to make it better moved to 4th

*01:34:337 (94337|3) - move to 3rd column ( fit with the next pattern ) moved

*01:51:426 (111426|6) - same issue as the 00:36:996 (36996|0), move it to 01:51:236 - in the same column this should be same like previous issue

*01:56:173 (116173|3) - i think i must be deleted because the diff is Normal not too hard as normal, keeping this

*03:09:654 (189654|2,189654|1) - if this is for a vocal songs, keep this. If this is for a support pattern in 03:08:894 (188894|2,188894|1,189084|4,189084|5,189274|2,189274|1,189464|4,189464|5) - then, i think it's no need to be place there. this following beat, should keeping this

[Hard]
*00:27:122 - i think should add a circle in there, because a sound in here is loudly xD this intro sound is same like end first kiai time, keep this

*00:14:211 (14211|4) - the slider should start in 00:14:591 - i don't know the name of this beat, i following smooth beat

*01:28:167 - add circle in 6th column adding and re-arrange pattern

*03:10:034 - add circle in 7th column adding and re-arrange pattern

Anyway, this is nice mapset. Some pattern especially in Hard diff, makes me confused to mod them properly.
Good luck with this map

17VA wrote:

[hard]

00:02:819 - add 4 no

00:08:705 (8705|1,8894|1,8894|4) - move left? no

00:48:958 - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268594 leaving 4th note will make play not enjoyful

02:05:667 - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268600 changed to another way

02:49:527 - add 5 no

02:51:426 - add 3 added

02:52:375 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268603 how about this? what's the purpose with that double? didn't fix

02:55:413 - hum... strong beat https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268606 feel better with this kind pattern

02:56:553 (176553|2,177312|5,178072|3,178451|6) - why this longnotes are too short? i put hold note short for just loudest sound

03:03:008 - looks awkward... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268613 fixed

03:08:135 (188135|2) - delete, no beat deleted

03:32:439 - how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268627 good, fixed with stream

[normal]

you should following the beats. yeah, dynamics.

strong or weak / little-strong / weak / little strong // strong or weak ~~ loop

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268656 i don't understand with this

yeah, there are some variables. but you following this dynamics in principle,

this beatmap will be much better.

00:43:072 (43072|5) - move 7, too hard for normal. double press can ruin accurary. fixed

00:49:527 (49527|5) - move 5. same reason fixed

00:50:856 (50856|2) - move 1 no

00:55:224 (55224|1) - move 1 no

01:06:996 (66996|6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268677 fixed

01:18:768 (78768|1) - huum...http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268679 no

01:20:287 (80287|2) - add 1 added

02:09:654 (129654|5) - move 5 moved

02:21:426 (141426|1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268686 no

02:30:160 - how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268688 you say double press can ruined accuracy this even spacing note, no

02:45:350 (165350|5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268689 no

02:46:869 - how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268690 no

02:55:413 - how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268694 no

03:04:907 (184907|5,185097|6) - delete and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268699 re-arrange have a sound

03:17:249 - if following vocals,.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1268701 absolutely follow beats

03:33:958 (213958|1) - delete and add 5 delete and fixed

Taiwan-NAK wrote:

Line : 1-2-3-4-5-6-7

Normal

02:38:894 - Add a note doesn't needed

Hard

00:05:097 (5097|2) - Move to 1 fixed
01:08:515 - Add doesn't needed
01:08:894 - ^ same reason
01:09:274 - ^ same reason
01:16:869 - Add at 3 ^
01:44:401 - Add LN to 01:45:160 - End changed note to LN
02:52:565 (172565|6) - Move to 3 moved

Sorry for my stupid mod im have no idea about NM diff

Pretty Song . Good Luck

YunoFanatic wrote:

Ill try to change myself. ill mod with its meaning.

1234567
Hi from queue~!

Normal

-00:27:882 (27882|0) - this note should be moved to 2, its makes more sense for the pattern and will be fitting on 00:28:262 (28262|5,28641|3) - moved
-00:30:920 (30920|5) - seems a bit ugly. move this note to 7 it can help your patter improve. and try this. move 00:31:679 (31679|6) - to 6 so it can be read well pattern doesn't seems ugly if can be enjoyable i think
-00:31:679 (31679|6) - ^ do that first. 00:32:819 (32819|0) - this move it to 3 it can really improve the pattern and follow more of the flow. i think this already fit
-00:36:996 (36996|0) - move to 7th more fitting for the pattern and you already placed a note on 00:35:856 (35856|0) - same reason
-00:42:312 (42312|5) - move to 7th the pattern will be ok if you follow this. you made the pattern uncomfortably and you stopped the flow. not only follow drum also follow vocal "mo-na-bo" sound 00:41:553 (41553|5,41553|2,41932|3,41932|5,42312|4,42312|5) -
-00:43:072 since you added a note here its very comfortable if you added a note on 00:44:021 and you can start the pattern again.doesn't sense trance beat
-00:50:856 (50856|2) - this beat is strong enough to add a new note on the side.added
-00:54:464 (54464|1) - i still dont know why are you stopping the flow. move to 7 00:53:705 (53705|1,53705|4,54084|1,54084|3,54464|1,54464|2) - "hi-na-do" shiro ~
-01:01:679 (61679|1) - this note to 1. it should be good for the pattern. or move 01:00:920 (60920|6) - to 6 because youve done it on 01:03:008 (63008|1,63198|3,63388|5) - moved
-01:11:932 (71932|0) - seems ugly for me. dont know why maybe place it on 3 i don't know why too
-01:21:046 (81046|5) - move to 5th column. Its way more fitting cause the pattern is going to the right. i think not
-01:35:477 add note plz its more good as i can hear there's no extra sound like hit-finish
-02:00:160 (120160|5,120540|3,120540|5,120920|1,120920|5,121300|6,121300|4) - inconsistent pattern. try copying 02:01:679 (121679|1,122059|1,122059|3,122439|5,122439|1,122819|0,122819|6) - it way more fitting though. i think not cause i use same pattern with mirroring

Hard

-00:05:097 (5097|3) - a throwoff placement, place this on 6 because 00:02:819 (2819|5,3578|4) - and 00:02:819 (2819|1,3578|2,4337|1,5097|2) - i make every column filled with note in 4/4 beat
-00:24:844 (24844|4) - go 1/4 here until 00:25:034 since ive seen you already placed 1/4 add here to!. 1/4 sound too little, hard for notice
-01:05:097 (65097|6,65192|0,65287|5,65382|2,65477|6,65572|0,65667|3,65762|5,65856|1,65951|4,66046|6,66141|3,66236|1,66426|6,66521|3) - since this is just hard, i just request that you can make cleaner and better pattern here, just for me i think this pattern is way to hard to read for hard maybe try some stacked up pattern to
-02:19:432 im pretty sure you missed a beat here. added
-02:20:762 ^ from 02:20:667 - the previous beat already gone so i follow kick sound like this 02:20:667 (140667|1,140856|4,141046|2,141046|6) -
-02:27:122 (147122|3) - add note beside it. little re-arrange, added

GL! ^^