1. 00:24:371 (3,1) - consider stacking?
2. 00:28:062 (3,4,5,6) - kinda hard to read
3. 00:31:292 (3) - when it gets to this part, i feel like you need a way to emphasize more, yes, although it is mapped out, i feel like there are ways that you can emphasize this loud base drum sound. For example, you can make them sliders or something, otherwise, you can make a certain pattern that emphasizes these sounds better.
4. 00:46:057 (4) - again, i feel like these are not emphasized enough, they seem "hidden" within the patterns
5. 00:41:212 (7,7) - stack better
6. 00:47:210 - you didnt even map such a strong sound here
7. 00:56:669 (2) - just a tip, when you have sliderpoints like this going every where and such, you can ctrl g the slider and it will autofix all your messy slider points , when i first discovered this i was like omgaslkjdsahas.
8. 01:02:206 (2,3,4,5,6) - you could make this into a short stream instead of stacking i think
9. 01:00:129 - also rhythm is pretty boring at this part, hopefully u can add a few sliders or something to make it interesting
10. 01:12:356 (6,7) - jumps get dramatically bigger here without a good reason
11. 01:39:579 (4,6) - not the prettiest overlap
12. 02:15:106 (8) - i feel like you can stack this to somewhere other than a note in the middle of a stream lol
13. 02:16:144 (2) - how bout this?
    
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14. 02:19:951 - add circle

1. 00:33:138 - same issue as with ringating's insane, you could emphasize these better
2. 00:34:291 (9) - the end of a triplet doesn't really emphasize such a strong sound well
3. 00:43:058 (4) - u should use red anchors
4. 00:46:979 (6) - passive slider doesn't really fit here (passive slider; strong sound at end)
5. In general the rhythm is pretty boring, but I guess I'm in no position to say that xD, bleh we chose horrible songs to map i guess lol?
6. 01:51:806 - this sound should be mapped with a circle not a slider tail
   (note be sure to read a bit from the GD mod too because you have some same mistakes)
7. 01:55:958 - add note?
8. 01:56:189 (3,4) - passive slider
9. 02:13:491 - SV change a bit too dramatic compared to the changes in the music

1. 00:15:835 - for the first little section here, i noticed that you did use some variety in your rhythm with sliders and such but changes in rhythm should have a pattern too, not just randomly. or you can gradually change it thats fine too
2. 00:33:138 - same issue as with insane and probably will apply to normal/easy too
3. 00:42:135 (2) - again the thing about passive sliders
4. 01:05:666 (1) - sv change makes no sense
5. 01:27:813 - put circle here instead
6. 02:43:482 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm
   
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   many repetitive mistakes not gunna state them ._.

1. 01:00:129 - i got a lag spike when i reached this part remap
   lol jk
2. 01:11:895 (2) - start this slider 01:12:126 - stronger sound here
3. 01:30:120 (2,3,4) - hard for beginners
4. 01:31:504 - like repetitive mistakes man... cmon map these out plz

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  Hmm easy seems fine

Kibbleru wrote:

[Ringating's insane]

1. 00:24:371 (3,1) - consider stacking? note 2 is stacked on it, with 1 and 3 symmetrically spaced from it
2. 00:28:062 (3,4,5,6) - kinda hard to read fixed
3. 00:31:292 (3) - when it gets to this part, i feel like you need a way to emphasize more, yes, although it is mapped out, i feel like there are ways that you can emphasize this loud base drum sound. For example, you can make them sliders or something, otherwise, you can make a certain pattern that emphasizes these sounds better. something this broad would require an entire remap, and I don't think it's a huge enough problem for that (will keep in mind if I make other maps, though)
4. 00:46:057 (4) - again, i feel like these are not emphasized enough, they seem "hidden" within the patterns ^
5. 00:41:212 (7,7) - stack better fixed
6. 00:47:210 - you didnt even map such a strong sound here was following vocals. If I went out of my way to map every single deep drum beat it would get repetitive.
7. 00:56:669 (2) - just a tip, when you have sliderpoints like this going every where and such, you can ctrl g the slider and it will autofix all your messy slider points , when i first discovered this i was like omgaslkjdsahas. :o neat, thanks for the tip
8. 01:02:206 (2,3,4,5,6) - you could make this into a short stream instead of stacking i think fixed
9. 01:00:129 - also rhythm is pretty boring at this part, hopefully u can add a few sliders or something to make it interesting having a slider represent 2 notes would make them seem like they should sound different, but none of those 7 notes are unique in the song so I don't think it's necessary
10. 01:12:356 (6,7) - jumps get dramatically bigger here without a good reason fixed
11. 01:39:579 (4,6) - not the prettiest overlap fixed w/ some stacking on other things
12. 02:15:106 (8) - i feel like you can stack this to somewhere other than a note in the middle of a stream lol it's not arbitrary, really. That note is the point of inflection for the stream's curve, and I think that makes it significant enough to stack on
13. 02:16:144 (2) - how bout this? fixed
    
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14. 02:19:951 - add circle fixed

pishifat wrote:

on your left, you'll see me being retarded while trying to map

on your right, you'll see nominators placing bubbles and hearts

Xinely wrote:

why not