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Mai Nakahara & Ai Shimizu - Secret Dolls

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gdeath
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gdeath
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年10月29日 at 12:14:28

Artist: Mai Nakahara & Ai Shimizu
Title: Secret Dolls
Source: Strawberry Panic
Tags: Strawberry Panic Ending Theme
BPM: 130
Filesize: 6180kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Boring (2.48 stars, 95 notes)
  2. Challenging (4.96 stars, 495 notes)
  3. Relaxing (4.39 stars, 318 notes)
Download: Mai Nakahara & Ai Shimizu - Secret Dolls
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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8th Beatmap

Lily~Lily~

中原麻衣&清水 愛「秘密ドールズ」

Anime : Strawberry Panic - Ending Theme
Last edited by Gens , edited 17 times in total.
Cyril Scarlet
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Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
I like Nakahara Mai & JUMP MAP ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ !!
gdeath
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gdeath
thx for your star.S i R i R u >,<
miccoliasms
491 posts
Joined April 2009
miccoliasms
awesome :oops:

I listened to this song by live "Lantis Festival" last month.
And I came to like this song XD

nice map :lol:
orioncomet
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orioncomet
>O<~☆ gdeath GO Go! ~
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Overall~
I would just rename the source to "Strawberry Panic" or maybe even "Strawberry Panic ED". Having the hyphen looks eww.
Maybe even put spaces in between the "&" symbol in "Nakahara Mai&Shimizu Ai"

Boring~
00:40:97 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish at the end of this slider.

Relaxing~
00:30:36 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Suggestion: The second half of this at 01:42:36 (4,5,6,7,8) sounds better than these.
00:32:66 (1) - Suggestion: Add whistle instead of finish.
00:33:59 (3) - ^
00:34:05 (4) - Suggestion: Then add a finish here.
00:35:89 (4) - Add a whistle at the end of slider.
00:55:97 (5,6) - Stack on 2.

Challenging~
Great! I like when girls are about to kiss (*.* )
gdeath
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gdeath
Mafiamaster <<-- All fixed!thx for your nice modding <3
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
You have 2 osb files, please remove one of them

Boring:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:24:82 (1) - remove new combo
00:29:43 (1) - it fits better with your style to remove this new combo, but I do understand the combo would be quite long this way.
00:32:66 (1) - I really don't like how this combo has only one line of instraments while the ones after it have 2.

Relaxing:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
02:05:20 (8) - this double repeat slightly threw me off

Combo mod:
00:17:43 (3) - Since you put a new combo for each line of lyrics, you might want to add one here. 9also you might want ot be consistent with 01:36:82 (1))
00:24:82 (3) - ^
01:29:43 (3) - ^
02:03:82 (4) - new combo for new line of lyrics
02:18:59 (4) - ^

Challenging:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:17:43 (6) - new combo for ne w line of lyrics and to be consistent with the rest of the map
00:18:82 (1,4) - remove new combo and add a new combo to 4 since you usually add instrument snaps to the end of the previous combo

Nice and fun map. Star.
gdeath
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gdeath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
happy30
Featured Artist
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happy30
Nothing wrong, actually.
I only don't like the normal clap.

Maybe replace the normal-hitclap with a soft-hitclap? :)
gdeath
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gdeath
happy30 <<---thanks for your checking my map.however i dont wanna change it.coz i think normal-clap is suitable.
and there is a little places used normal-clap.
dkey
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dkey
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Yes_old
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Joined May 2009
Yes_old
challenging
00:54:59 (3) - clap end
00:55:28 (5) - ^
02:12:59 (2) - whistle
02:12:82 (4) - ^
02:17:66 (4) - i dont like clap here :/
02:18:82 (2) - clap
02:21:36 (3) - clap end?
02:22:28 (5) - clap return
02:29:55 (8) - nazi spacing

boring
00:37:74 (3) - new combo
00:48:82 (5) - ^

relaxing
00:47:20 (2) - remove this note?
01:39:59 (3) - might be confusing because the (1,2) had only 1 repeat

cool map!
Lissette
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Lissette
Hi!

Boring
00:47:43 (3) - remove

Challenging
Suggestions
00:12:82 (7) - end point at 00:13:16 and....
00:13:28 (8) - remove
02:24:24 (8) - remove and.....
02:24:47 - add note, 02:24:59 - add note

Have a Star! I like it ^^
gdeath
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gdeath

Yes wrote:

challenging
00:54:59 (3) - clap end refused
00:55:28 (5) - ^ refused
02:12:59 (2) - whistle refused
02:12:82 (4) - ^ refused
02:17:66 (4) - i dont like clap here :/ done
02:18:82 (2) - clap refused
02:21:36 (3) - clap end? done
02:22:28 (5) - clap return done
02:29:55 (8) - nazi spacing done

boring
00:37:74 (3) - new combo refused
00:48:82 (5) - ^ refused

relaxing
00:47:20 (2) - remove this note? refused
01:39:59 (3) - might be confusing because the (1,2) had only 1 repeat refused

cool map!

thx^^

Lissette wrote:

Hi!

Boring
00:47:43 (3) - remove refused

Challenging
Suggestions
00:12:82 (7) - end point at 00:13:16 and.... u r right.however if you listen carefully,you also can hear the accent on 00:13:28.so both you and i are right ^^
00:13:28 (8) - remove ^
02:24:24 (8) - remove and..... ^
02:24:47 - add note, 02:24:59 - add note ^


Have a Star! I like it ^^
thx lool
satosid <<--- star thx >w<
DeadAlready
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DeadAlready
gd <3
stared >w</
gdeath
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gdeath
5item~star thx :3
Starrodkirby86
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Pretty feisty song~

[Boring]:
00:44:66 (1,2) - Such a big jump...Maybe you can make the spacing a bit smaller, or make a new combo on (2)...XD

I don't know if the ED is really needed in the Source. If you can remove it, that would be awesome, I guess. You can always put ED or ending in tags anyway. ^^
gdeath
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gdeath
all fixed.^^
thx.kirby~
Starrodkirby86
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Then here you go!

Nice job on [Challenging]. ^w^
tieff
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tieff
Ranked!

But, man, you can map it better. =(
gdeath
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gdeath
Surprised!when i'm sleeping,you ranked it.
thank you.tieff. >▽<

tieff wrote:

But, man, you can map it better. =(
Indeed.when i mapped 'boring',i'm kinda lazy.so i did not pretty good on it.however other diffs are really nice.

i have spent much time in making this map.its still not enough,i guess.afther thinking a while,i can do better as you said.

i'll try my best to map my each map later.and...Say goodbye to"LAZINESS".

thank you.tieff.really thx.
Mystearica
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Because you are sort of my friend, I'll tell you what I thought about Challenging. I had just played it.

I'd say the majority is ok. But again you have those triplets that aren't necessarily making sense, they just felt like filler. I don't really know what kind of rhythm you're trying to create with that difficulty. I played this song on a couple other music games and I can play this on the piano myself, so I'm fairly familiar with it. Challenging just felt like a clickfest to me, I don't really know what's going on but circles are spawning so I just click them with eyesight reading.

Oh what the hell I've played the other 2 difficulties too so whatever.

I thought Relaxing was much better, but you could've arranged it better and maybe used more hitsounds. The latter didn't bother me much though. Arrangement is a good issue to explore though.

Boring was fine.

Seems like you're better at making Normal and Easy than Hard/Insane. You like to use a lot of triplets/streams/huge sudden jumps in your Hard/Insane maps, but those aren't the only things that make a map hard. You shouldn't put huge jumps just to make your map harder, there are other things that you should be looking into. Arrangement can help you a lot there.

I don't know if you've been influenced by my maps, since I liked to use some senseless triplets and sudden jumps before, but I'm trying to get out of that now. Just follow the music and be natural, adding triplets/streams where the music doesn't really have anything going on or placing huge jumps can destroy the flow of your map.

Well I hope this will be of some help to you and I hope that you will bring out some great maps in the future.
v2b
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Mystearica
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v2b wrote:

五十步笑百步
The pot sure is calling the kettle black.
gdeath
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gdeath
As i said before,i had tried my best on this map.

i love patterns, hitsounds and everything of this map.its my favourite one.

you can not imagine how much time i spent.

of course,you can express your opinion and i'm also welcome any suggestion.

however i hope you may PM me or tell me on IRC except that there are big problems in my map.
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