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The Children - MY WINGS

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DJPop
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 11 ตุลาคม 2552 at 17:43:53

Artist: The Children
Title: MY WINGS
Source: Zettai Karen Children
Tags: hirano aya shiraishi ryouko tomatsu haruka akashi kaoru nogami aoi sannomiya shiho
BPM: 159.98
Filesize: 6649kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.06 stars, 248 notes)
  2. Hard (4.88 stars, 526 notes)
  3. Normal (4.2 stars, 385 notes)
Download: The Children - MY WINGS
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44th beatmap.

Zettai Karen Children (OP2).
Artist "The Children" is shortened from "Hirano Aya & Shiraishi Ryouko & Tomatsu Haruka".
The maps' styles are similar to previous one.


EDIT 4: 11 Oct 2009
- Fixed notes & hitsounds.
- Fixed timing.

EDIT 3: 10 Oct 2009
- Fixed offset.
- Fixed notes in Insane.
EDIT 2: 24 Sep 2009
- Fixed Break Times.
Cyril Scarlet
รอคนทำเพลงนี้มานานละ !

แปลก เจป๊อปไม่ทำ dif นรก >v<
v2b
8-)
orioncomet
แน่นอนมาก :P

DJPop > Baka )= เอาคืนจากแมพฮินะของลุงอาม

>S i R i R u : ทำไม่ได้อ่ะดิ ถ้าทำคะแนนเกินพิกัดแน่ lol
NoHitter
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Topic Starter
DJPop

NoHItter wrote:

Overall:
kiai time: 03:16:321 - 03:28:135 ; 03:28:322 - 03:43:420;
I don't use Kiai times with Zettai Karen Children's maps.

Easy
00:58:303 - This slider sounds weird. Try making it end at 00:59:261 and adding a note at 00:59:636.
Fixed.
02:49:880 - Suggestion: Add note here. It makes it sound better.
Fixed.

Normal
02:48:755 - This would look better if the end of the previous slider i in the middle of this one.
Fixed.
jericho2442
ok first off, these are great maps as allways from you :D

only a few bit of advice
only use these if you want :)

[Easy]

01:05:429 (3) lil too tricky for easy and it sounds better with this note deleated
02:18:751 (2) ^
02:54:005 (1) this note is very blind for a easy, maybe move the whole combo a lil bit to the right?

[normal]
pretty much perfect to me :)

[Hard]
<33 if theres problems in here i aint good enough to find them :)

love the maps and starring, i hope it gets ranked fast XD
Topic Starter
DJPop

jericho2442 wrote:

[Easy]

01:05:429 (3) lil too tricky for easy and it sounds better with this note deleated
No, it snapped to the sounds in BGM.
02:18:751 (2) ^
^
02:54:005 (1) this note is very blind for a easy, maybe move the whole combo a lil bit to the right?
Not perfectly overlapped so the circle is visible :3

love the maps and starring, i hope it gets ranked fast XD
Thx, but I think it's impossible in these days =_="
jericho2442
O_o my star didnt apply, restarring this greatness :)
Mafiamaster
Easy~
Redo both breaks in Easy. They'll shorten tremendously ;_;

Normal~
Same as Easy. Redo breaks. They'll shorten a lot ;_;

Hard is fine~
^,^
Diasios
Custom colours: orange, dark blue, purple and sky-blue

Easy:

it's ok

Normal:

it's ok

Hard:

it's ok

i don't see any problems, starred~
Topic Starter
DJPop

Mafiamaster wrote:

Redo both breaks in Easy. They'll shorten tremendously ;_;
Fixed.

xxheroxx wrote:

Custom colours: orange, dark blue, purple and sky-blue
I want to use the same as previous Zettai Karen Children maps.
livender
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Bass
Hi ;3 Sorry for delay

Easy
03:06:94 (3) - up a 1 tick
03:07:31 (4) - ^
03:07:88 (5) - left a 1 tick

Normal
03:45:38 (2) - right a tick
03:51:57 (3) - ^

Hard:
Fine

Star =3
saymun
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Wizard Of Orz
[Easy]
nothing wrong

[normal]
nothing wrong

[hard]
01:01:116 - maybe a finish here?

star
arien666
I don't think there's any problems. :3
Umm...

Star this and I hope that it will be ranked :3
ztrot
........
PicoLo
~Star. ;)
gdeath
i meet loli's song again xD
Crazy Jay
wow,awesome map
xierbaliti
:)
Cyclone
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Topic Starter
DJPop

Cyclone wrote:

Just a few minor things:

Offset -5ms. Check each section carefully after making this change.
Fixed & rechecked.
Make the blue combo color a little bit brighter.
Fixed.

[Hard]
01:29:99 (1) - I can find no logic behind why this is a slider at all. If you have to silence the end point, then it probably shouldn't be a slider at all. In fact, it sounds similar to the very first note in the song, and that did not use a slider. So why use one here?
It's one of my new technique, using a slider as a long note like in many beat games did, example: StepMania, EZ2ON, EZ2DJ.
These game have long note system that don't need to release the button exactly when the long notes end.
For the 2nd question, I wanted to make the patterns a bit different between the 1st and 2nd part which have similar rhythm.

03:16:32 - I'm a little uncomfortable with these sliders as well for similar reasons as above. Also these feel a bit longer than they should be, but that may be because of how slow the sliders are in the first place.
Answered above.

[Easy]
02:13:50 (1) - Feels like this should start 1/2 earlier to me.
I'd like to leave it which snapped on the cymbal sound.
03:28:31 (1,2) - Spacing here is inconsistent with the entire rest of the map.
Made it by mistake =_=" Fixed.
Cyclone
Just would like to point out there are unsnapped notes on [hard]. AIMod picks them up. They aren't off by much, but i still think they should be snapped. Careful when you resnap though, since it'll mess with those spinners (which i'm a bit uncomfortable with, but i seem to 300 them without a problem.)
Topic Starter
DJPop

Cyclone wrote:

Just would like to point out there are unsnapped notes on [hard]. AIMod picks them up. They aren't off by much, but i still think they should be snapped. Careful when you resnap though, since it'll mess with those spinners (which i'm a bit uncomfortable with, but i seem to 300 them without a problem.)
All fixed. Thanks for warning me :D
Cyclone
Er, There wasn't anything wrong with easy and normal, yet i got updates for them. Did you do anything to them?

EDIT: I also just noticed the last timing sections makes the osu circle on the main menu go off. I counted them as being a half measure off. You may not be able to do anything about the slow section, but please consider changing the last one.
Topic Starter
DJPop

Cyclone wrote:

Er, There wasn't anything wrong with easy and normal, yet i got updates for them. Did you do anything to them?
Just make sliders more symmetrical.

Cyclone wrote:

EDIT: I also just noticed the last timing sections makes the osu circle on the main menu go off. I counted them as being a half measure off. You may not be able to do anything about the slow section, but please consider changing the last one.
Fixed, it should work fine now :D
Cyclone
Alright, assuming I didn't miss anything.
Mafiamaster
Everything seems to check out~
Another great DJPop map.
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