Mizuki Nana x T.M.Revolution - Kakumei Dualism -Anime Versio · forum

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-12-27T09:38:33+00:00

Finally pending~ Ready for mods
@GDers Update pls unticked the letterbox etc...~~

Squichu

1,013 posts

Joined November 2012

Squichu 2013-12-29T22:31:45+00:00

heyah ~ mod from my queue.
it's all just suggestions, feel free to ignore what I say. c:

[General]

combo colours - light(er) blue instead of dark blue?
I'm just a bit picky with stuff like this, sorry(!). I don't think that it matches with the other colours nicely.
and cause the video is pretty colourful anyway, it's not that much of a difference.

[623's Easy]
cause this is wip, I don't know if I should mod this. ;n;
just some thoughts on this ~

the slidershapes require getting used to, but they do look nice and match well with each other.
personally, I'd prefer if all sliders with "two parts" (like v-shapes and z-shapes and stuff, hope you know what I mean. ><) were curved.
e.g. those two sliders in the beginning - I'd curve the straight part, cause it looks more aesthetic to me. :3 screenshot
(I think there are only two or three more sliders like this..)
at some points the movement from one object to the next is kinda abrupt, at 00:05:393 (1,2) for example.
it'd flow much nicer if 2 were placed further down, but cause that's not possible, you might want to increse the curve of 1 til it matches.

and that's all, nice diff. c:

[Anre's Normal]
this is a really nice diff as well, not much to say.. ><

are different combo colours intentional? o.o
if it's not I'd suggest to add the same colours as in the other diffs, just for consistency. c:
00:22:369 (3,4) - the movement here feels a bit stiff, move 4 (and following) more to the right?

I died like.. instantly playing Laurier's Insane.. orz - skip, sorry.
(I just can't give any advice/.. on stuff I don't get.. meh. .-.)

Basically the same goes for the Insane.. I didn't die THAT instantly, but still. xD
Just one thing I noticed - the placement of the circles looks rather random to me.
I might be totally wrong but it didn't seem to follow any patterns or something symmetrical or anything.
(exept for the one starting at 01:04:076, that's quite nice.)
personally I prefer clear patterns, but that's up to you. if you wanna look at them and correct the spacing here and there to create simple circles/whatever.. imo it looks better. really, up to you! x3

[Hard]
I liked playing this diff.. imo not much to improve here. :c
only some shapes you might want to correct ~

00:29:686 (3,4) - bend the first part of the slider a bit more so it's not too close to 3.
00:38:613 (2,3,4) - move 3 closer to the others so they form a triangle?
it looks a bit like they were placed like that before and were rearranged then, cause it works perfectly. o,o
00:49:296 (2,3) - the overlap is fine, but imo it looks nicer if done this way: screenshot

and except for nice work on the hitsounds there's nothing to say for Skystar's Insane.

haha, sorry for noob mood, I'm really bad with Insanes. ^__^'
hope it was helpful at some point.. somewhere.. xD
if it wasn't - don't kd, please ~ I don't want them for "trying". :b

and good luck with the mapset!
*squee* c:

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-12-30T06:47:22+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
heyah ~ mod from my queue.
it's all just suggestions, feel free to ignore what I say. c:

[General]
combo colours - light(er) blue instead of dark blue?
I'm just a bit picky with stuff like this, sorry(!). I don't think that it matches with the other colours nicely.
and cause the video is pretty colourful anyway, it's not that much of a difference.
[623's Easy]
cause this is wip, I don't know if I should mod this. ;n; this is finished actually xD
just some thoughts on this ~
the slidershapes require getting used to, but they do look nice and match well with each other.
personally, I'd prefer if all sliders with "two parts" (like v-shapes and z-shapes and stuff, hope you know what I mean. ><) were curved.
e.g. those two sliders in the beginning - I'd curve the straight part, cause it looks more aesthetic to me. :3 screenshot
(I think there are only two or three more sliders like this..)
at some points the movement from one object to the next is kinda abrupt, at 00:05:393 (1,2) for example.
it'd flow much nicer if 2 were placed further down, but cause that's not possible, you might want to increse the curve of 1 til it matches.
and that's all, nice diff. c:

and good luck with the mapset!
*squee* c:

thanks for your modding

I think I fixed all you mentioned, but I am not sure if the sliders you want me to curve are the right one xD, anyway I tried to improve some sliders' look, big thanks!

Coooooode \o\

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Evil_Twilight

587 posts

Joined July 2010

Evil_Twilight 2013-12-30T18:11:13+00:00

From my Queue

[Skystar's Insane]

00:00:711 (1) - 00:01:589 (1) - 00:03:052 (1) - 00:03:930 (1) - 尾巴都加上whistle？
00:00:711 (1,3) - 我會把這兩個位置互換，因為3的音調不一樣感覺比較適合放跳
00:07:442 (x) - clap放這我覺得好聽點，不過你這裡沒放東西
00:08:320 (3) - 尾巴加clap
00:24:857 (3) - 移到x:496 y:232
00:27:198 (3) - 改成note？玩起來比較有停頓的感覺，00:27:345也沒聲音
00:31:589 (2) - 放個跳試試，音調明顯變高
00:53:540 (2) - 移到00:53:686 (x) - ，聽起來比較順
01:08:906 (1) - 轉-10度？
01:28:954 (4) - 我會在這加NC，01:29:540 (1) - 這個就拿掉了

[Laurier's Insane]

00:04:662 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Original soft whistle will be more fits imo.
00:27:052 (3) - Add finish on slider's end.
00:34:223 (5) - Add NC here because you added on 00:30:710 (1) -
00:48:125 (3,4) - Change these to slider and add NC here , try make 00:46:954 (4,5,1,2,1,2) - them speed up(possibly 1.0x, 1.1x 1.2x), it's fun for me /o/
01:23:686 (1) - Move to x:43 y:245
SPOILER
01:29:978 (2,3) - I prefer ctrl + g them, and move 01:30:125 (3) - a little bit left
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:09:052 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make them a star?
00:12:125 (3,4) - Try this
SPOILER
00:13:442 (6,7) - Move to x:300 y:320?
00:14:320 (4) - Change it to a 3/4 slider, it's fit the music imo.
00:25:150 (1) - Add clap on slider's middle.
00:33:052 (2) - Why here has a clap. lol
00:43:296 (2) - Copy-paste 00:42:857 (1) - it.
00:49:589 (4) - Add clap on slider's end.
00:51:930 (4) - ^
00:54:418 (1) - Add clap.
00:56:613 (3) - Use 1.0x here?
01:05:101 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try this
SPOILER
01:29:832 (1) - Add NC here.
01:29:979 (2) - Use finish is more fits imo.

[Hard]

00:07:735 (1) - Make the tail more smooth.
SPOILER
00:40:076 (6,7) - I prefer to maka a reverse on 00:40:076 (6) -
00:49:735 (3) - Move down a bit, don't stack on 00:49:296 (2) -
01:13:588 (5,6) -Ttry this, 01:14:027 (6) - is stack on 01:13:149 (4) - slider's end
SPOILER
01:20:613 (4) - Move the node right a bit.
SPOILER
01:21:344 (1) - 1 grid down to blanket 01:21:198 (5) -
01:29:832 (5) - Add finish on slider's middle.

[Anre's Normal]

00:04:808 (3) - Move to 00:04:662 (x) - , end at 00:05:101?
00:27:052 (2) - Make it parallel with 00:25:881 (6) - , the slider upward will be fit imo.
00:41:540 (4) - Add finish here.
00:51:930 (3) - Perhaps use whistle on slider's middle instead?
01:00:125 (1,2,3) - Try this, and move 01:02:759 (1) - left to make them a triangle.
SPOILER
01:27:930 (5) - Move to x:316 y:96
01:29:832 (5) - Add finish on slider's middle.

[623's Easy]

00:07:735 (1) - 往旁邊移一點
SPOILER
00:45:198 (1) - 把00:42:857 (2,3,1) - 這三個排成三角形？或是跟上面一樣排成一個弧線
01:00:418 (1) - x:288 y:220
01:08:759 (2) - 往後移到01:08:759 (x) - 聽起來比較好
01:09:637 (1,2) - 這兩個尾巴的clap不太好
01:28:661 (2) - 感覺沒跟到什麼東西，改成跟鼓試試

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2013-12-31T06:03:34+00:00

Evil_Twilight wrote:
From my Queue

[623's Easy]
00:07:735 (1) - 往旁邊移一點
SPOILER
00:45:198 (1) - 把00:42:857 (2,3,1) - 這三個排成三角形？或是跟上面一樣排成一個弧線
01:00:418 (1) - x:288 y:220
01:08:759 (2) - 往後移到01:08:759 (x) - 聽起來比較好
01:09:637 (1,2) - 這兩個尾巴的clap不太好
01:28:661 (2) - 感覺沒跟到什麼東西，改成跟鼓試試

All fixed! thanks <3

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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2013-12-31T10:10:32+00:00

Reply to Evil_Twilight

Evil_Twilight wrote:
From my Queue

[Insane]
00:09:052 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make them a star? did some own changes
00:12:125 (3,4) - Try this
SPOILER
Hmmm nope Current one is better I think
00:13:442 (6,7) - Move to x:300 y:320?
00:14:320 (4) - Change it to a 3/4 slider, it's fit the music imo.
00:25:150 (1) - Add clap on slider's middle.
00:33:052 (2) - Why here has a clap. lol
00:43:296 (2) - Copy-paste 00:42:857 (1) - it.
00:49:589 (4) - Add clap on slider's end. No clap sound in the music tho so nope
00:51:930 (4) - ^ ^
00:54:418 (1) - Add clap. ^
00:56:613 (3) - Use 1.0x here?
01:05:101 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try this
SPOILER
01:29:832 (1) - Add NC here.
01:29:979 (2) - Use finish is more fits imo.
[Hard]
00:07:735 (1) - Make the tail more smooth.
SPOILER
00:40:076 (6,7) - I prefer to maka a reverse on 00:40:076 (6) - Current one is also good tho imo this also fits but like mine more
00:49:735 (3) - Move down a bit, don't stack on 00:49:296 (2) - It's not stacking >< made the overlap a bit better --> reference Squirrel's mod
01:13:588 (5,6) -Ttry this, 01:14:027 (6) - is stack on 01:13:149 (4) - slider's end
SPOILER
didn't do it exactly as in the picture but did the stack
01:20:613 (4) - Move the node right a bit.
SPOILER

01:21:344 (1) - 1 grid down to blanket 01:21:198 (5) -
01:29:832 (5) - Add finish on slider's middle.
[/list]

No comment= Fixed~

Thanks for modding!~~~ :3

Reply to Squirrel

Squirrel wrote:
heyah ~ mod from my queue.
it's all just suggestions, feel free to ignore what I say. c:

[General]
combo colours - light(er) blue instead of dark blue?
I'm just a bit picky with stuff like this, sorry(!). I don't think that it matches with the other colours nicely.
and cause the video is pretty colourful anyway, it's not that much of a difference. well fixed it anyways~
Basically the same goes for the Insane.. I didn't die THAT instantly, but still. xD
Just one thing I noticed - the placement of the circles looks rather random to me.
I might be totally wrong but it didn't seem to follow any patterns or something symmetrical or anything.
(exept for the one starting at 01:04:076, that's quite nice.)
personally I prefer clear patterns, but that's up to you. if you wanna look at them and correct the spacing here and there to create simple circles/whatever.. imo it looks better. really, up to you! x3
Ye I map really messy owo but heey everyone has a diffrent style :3

[Hard]
I liked playing this diff.. imo not much to improve here. :c
only some shapes you might want to correct ~
00:29:686 (3,4) - bend the first part of the slider a bit more so it's not too close to 3. fixed
00:38:613 (2,3,4) - move 3 closer to the others so they form a triangle?
it looks a bit like they were placed like that before and were rearranged then, cause it works perfectly. o,o fixed
00:49:296 (2,3) - the overlap is fine, but imo it looks nicer if done this way: screenshotfixed

haha, sorry for noob mood, I'm really bad with Insanes. ^__^'
hope it was helpful at some point.. somewhere.. xD
if it wasn't - don't kd, please ~ I don't want them for "trying". :b

and good luck with the mapset!
*squee* c:

Thanks for modding~~!!! :3

Whyyyyy cant I update

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2014-01-02T03:53:51+00:00

I'm still in tags, ^^
Remove my name, ofc no kds

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2014-01-02T12:51:37+00:00

~~lol woops fixed xD~~
Why cant I update....

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

AnreFM 2014-01-02T15:18:15+00:00

Squirrel wrote:
[Anre's Normal]
this is a really nice diff as well, not much to say.. ><
are different combo colours intentional? o.o umm no lol xD
if it's not I'd suggest to add the same colours as in the other diffs, just for consistency. c:
00:22:369 (3,4) - the movement here feels a bit stiff, move 4 (and following) more to the right?nice catch, fixed
Thanks for the mod Squirrel xDD

Evil_Twilight wrote:
From my Queue

[Anre's Normal]
00:04:808 (3) - Move to 00:04:662 (x) - , end at 00:05:101?umm no, this will emphasize the vocal, and since I didn't follow any vocal on the beginning, this will cause a mislead in the rhythm for the beginners :<
00:27:052 (2) - Make it parallel with 00:25:881 (6) - , the slider upward will be fit imo.yeah looked really nice too, but I can't make it looked good here with the DS restricting xD
00:41:540 (4) - Add finish here.fixed
00:51:930 (3) - Perhaps use whistle on slider's middle instead?fixed
01:00:125 (1,2,3) - Try this, and move 01:02:759 (1) - left to make them a triangle.
SPOILER
I guess I get it.. xD fixed
01:27:930 (5) - Move to x:316 y:96sure, nicer flow here; fixed
01:29:832 (5) - Add finish on slider's middle.fixxed
Thanks for the mod Evil_Twilight! xD

xChippy wrote:
Why cant I update....

bbbecause I haven't turned mine in yet xDD

awawawawa

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go go o3o

Spring Roll

230 posts

Joined April 2013

Spring Roll 2014-01-16T14:53:01+00:00

Hello mod from my queue ~
So many god like mappers (stress

623's Easy

00:37:881 - add a clap
01:09:637 - 试试 drum sampleset
01:10:808 - ^
nice diff..

Anre's Normal

tags are different with other diffs...
00:38:174 (1,2) - not so fixed with the song i think..try this
.
00:41:979 - add a clap
01:02:759 - remove the finish ,add a clap
01:15:344 - add a note
00:58:954 (2) - add a clap
01:01:296 - ^

Hard

o.o when i play this diff i just feel it is a insane diff,not hard.maybe you can use diff names which is between hard and insane ,like hyper and so on
00:33:930 (2) - add a clap
00:37:296 (2) - change to a 1/2 slider start from00:37:442 -
01:01:515 (4) - remove this note
00:19:223 (10) - ^
01:28:808 (2) -
im a picture
00:29:101 (1) - too close to the spinner's end i think ..remove this note
00:08:174 - and00:09:198 - add a clap

Laurier's Insane

01:14:759 (2) - what about move to (180.372)?
00:02:759 (8) - change to a 1/2 slider
00:08:174 (3) - add a clap
Very nice diff .very exciting.xD

Insane

00:05:832 - add a note
00:13:296 (5,6,7) - WTF!
00:37:296 (1) - change to a 1/2 slider start from00:37:442 -
01:25:735 (4,1) - it looks not good when i play,they stack with each other and make the note 4 a little left from where you put it.move the slider to(252.264)
00:09:052 - add a clap
00:08:028 - ^
00:33:198 (3) - add a whistle
01:02:759 - remove the finish and add a clap
00:48:710 (1) - Ctrl+G

skystar's Insane

.nice diff(大拇指

Good Luck~hope this helps

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-01-17T07:45:19+00:00

Spring Roll wrote:
Hello mod from my queue ~
So many god like mappers (stress

623's Easy
00:37:881 - add a clap
01:09:637 - 试试 drum sampleset
01:10:808 - ^ all fixed \o\
nice diff..

Good Luck~hope this helps

感謝>.0/

cooooooooooooooode

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[ Raphael ]

[ Raphael ] 2014-01-22T11:22:02+00:00

Hi~! from my queue!

[623's Easy]

00:13:881 - i feel empty. add slider end on 00:14:320 -
00:18:564 - ^. add something
00:36:125 - add something
01:02:467 - add circle. i can hear vocal
01:25:295 - add slider end on 01:25:588 -

[Anre's Normal]
- 00:04:808 (3) - end on 00:05:247 - . i can hear vocal
  00:13:881 - add something
  01:11:979 (1) - end on 01:12:710 -
  
  [Laurier's Insane]
  - 01:23:686 (1,2) - better blanket
    
    [Insane]
    - 00:32:028 - add circle?
      00:35:979 - add something
      
      [Hard]
      - 00:04:808 - add 2/4 slider
        00:13:076 (2) - move the square on tail to (92,228) for better flow :3
        00:54:418 (3) - move to (204,204) for accurate overlap
        01:25:295 - add 3/4 slider
        
        [Skystar's Insane]
        It is good to me :3
        
        Hope this help :3
        (I suck at modding Hard / Insane mostly ._.)

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2014-01-22T15:26:57+00:00

Spring Roll wrote:
Hello mod from my queue ~
So many god like mappers (stress

Hard
o.o when i play this diff i just feel it is a insane diff,not hard.maybe you can use diff names which is between hard and insane ,like hyper and so on considering the bpm this is pretty much a hard imo, I'll ask some more opinions
00:33:930 (2) - add a clap no clap in music so nope
00:37:296 (2) - change to a 1/2 slider start from00:37:442 - nope catching the violin
01:01:515 (4) - remove this note why? they are following something tho and they are playable
00:19:223 (10) - ^ ^
01:28:808 (2) -
im a picture
fix for now
00:29:101 (1) - too close to the spinner's end i think ..remove this note consider seems okay imo
00:08:174 - and00:09:198 - add a clap no clap in music so nope

Insane
00:05:832 - add a note aight for now
00:13:296 (5,6,7) - WTF! wuuut owo
00:37:296 (1) - change to a 1/2 slider start from00:37:442 - Nope want to catch the violin also
01:25:735 (4,1) - it looks not good when i play,they stack with each other and make the note 4 a little left from where you put it.move the slider to(252.264) aight
00:09:052 - add a clap no clap sound in music tho
00:08:028 - ^ ^
00:33:198 (3) - add a whistle done
01:02:759 - remove the finish and add a clap nope there is cymbal so finish is better
00:48:710 (1) - Ctrl+G hmm aight ;3

Good Luck~hope this helps

@[ Raphael ] cant quote your post orz soo:
Insane
00:32:028 - add circle? no sound to follow
00:35:979 - add something nope I like this vocal break
Hard
00:04:808 - add 2/4 slider nope prefer having a break like this
00:13:076 (2) - move the square on tail to (92,228) for better flow :3 fixed
00:54:418 (3) - move to (204,204) for accurate overlap fixed
01:25:295 - add 3/4 slider just like I have in the start I prefer having this unmapped
Thx for modding both ;3

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-01-23T15:51:01+00:00

Raphael wrote:
Hi~! from my queue!

[623's Easy]
00:13:881 - i feel empty. add slider end on 00:14:320 -
00:18:564 - ^. add something
00:36:125 - add something
01:02:467 - add circle. i can hear vocal
01:25:295 - add slider end on 01:25:588 - really sorry that I think they remain no change ;w; The reason why is the song BPM is really high here, once you placed 1/2 and 1/1 together will be quite hard to catch for newbies, thats why I undermapped those part, I hope you know what I mean, thanks for your effort to mod my diff tho :3!!

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2014-01-25T16:40:21+00:00

Hi there~

[623's Easy]
00:53:393 (1) - How about make curvy slider? (nazi)
01:07:296 (1) - Normal sampleset can make awkward to hear while gamplay. Set the sampleset to Auto and additions to Normal
01:11:978 (1) - ^
01:16:661 (1) - ^

[Anre's Normal]
* If possible, fill the break space with objects? Like other diffs?
* The tags in this diff is different compare to all diff. Please make it consistent

00:41:540 (4) - Clap at tail slider?
00:58:076 (1) - Finish at tai lslider?

[Hard]
00:24:125 (1) - Spacing error? Or it's intentional?
00:33:052 (4) - Why clap sound at head slider?
01:01:515 (4) - Remove this note? So the pattern will follow the vocal clearly?

[Insane]
00:23:247 (3) - Don't place under the slider because people thought that this is (2) instead (3). Move further away from the slider?
00:30:710 (2) - Use distance spacing x1.80? So it make equal between every object in one pattern?
01:06:564 (1) - Spinner here would be acceptable but due to short spinner, this would be having a bad gameplay.... I suggest you to replace with slider or smth
01:25:881 - Maybe add note here for following vocal part?

[Skystar's Insane]
00:08:320 (3) - Use clap instead whistile at head slider
00:09:052 (3) - Add clap at head slider?
00:09:491 (2) - Clap?
00:15:491 (2) - Snap at previous slider's tail slider for making circular flow?
00:40:954 (3) - Add whistle at head slider for hitsound consistency?

[Laurier's Insane]
00:04:662 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Do the Cresendo volume if possible (from lower volume to higher volume)

Nyan~

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-01-30T15:07:36+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hi there~

[623's Easy]
00:53:393 (1) - How about make curvy slider? (nazi) fixed
01:07:296 (1) - Normal sampleset can make awkward to hear while gamplay. Set the sampleset to Auto and additions to Normal
01:11:978 (1) - ^
01:16:661 (1) - ^ nice ideass, fixed all!

Nyan~

thanks

CoooDE

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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2014-02-08T08:20:10+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hi there~

[Hard]
00:24:125 (1) - Spacing error? Or it's intentional? intentional for mini jump
00:33:052 (4) - Why clap sound at head slider? uuuh idk xD
01:01:515 (4) - Remove this note? So the pattern will follow the vocal clearly? done

[Insane]
00:23:247 (3) - Don't place under the slider because people thought that this is (2) instead (3). Move further away from the slider? stacked completely instead
00:30:710 (2) - Use distance spacing x1.80? So it make equal between every object in one pattern? done
01:06:564 (1) - Spinner here would be acceptable but due to short spinner, this would be having a bad gameplay.... I suggest you to replace with slider or smth I'll consider as that slider is kinda for score variation hueheuhue
01:25:881 - Maybe add note here for following vocal part? doesn't feel very good for me OAO

Nyan~

Nyan~. Thanks for modding Leorda~~ :333
now waiting for Yuko,Laurier and Anre :33

Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-02-18T11:19:08+00:00

http://puu.sh/70OC2.osu
thanks for mod!!

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2014-02-18T16:22:24+00:00

thx updated now w8 for Yuko/Anre

Skystar

1,628 posts

Joined May 2011

Skystar 2014-03-18T14:48:05+00:00

Evil_Twilight wrote:
[Skystar's Insane]

00:00:711 (1) - 00:01:589 (1) - 00:03:052 (1) - 00:03:930 (1) - 尾巴都加上whistle？太多
00:00:711 (1,3) - 我會把這兩個位置互換，因為3的音調不一樣感覺比較適合放跳不太順
00:07:442 (x) - clap放這我覺得好聽點，不過你這裡沒放東西為何? 音樂就是在紅線上
00:08:320 (3) - 尾巴加clap no
00:24:857 (3) - 移到x:496 y:232
00:27:198 (3) - 改成note？玩起來比較有停頓的感覺，00:27:345也沒聲音 no
00:31:589 (2) - 放個跳試試，音調明顯變高慢速段的跳其實沒甚麼意思
00:53:540 (2) - 移到00:53:686 (x) - ，聽起來比較順可能理解不同吧我覺得沒問題
01:08:906 (1) - 轉-10度？
01:28:954 (4) - 我會在這加NC，01:29:540 (1) - 這個就拿掉了

Leorda wrote:
[Skystar's Insane]
00:08:320 (3) - Use clap instead whistile at head slider to follow the music, it should be a whistle
00:09:052 (3) - Add clap at head slider? weird
00:09:491 (2) - Clap? nah there's no drum
00:15:491 (2) - Snap at previous slider's tail slider for making circular flow? if you meant 00:15:052 (3) - , then it's too weird for the whole patterns
00:40:954 (3) - Add whistle at head slider for hitsound consistency?

everything without words means applied
http://puu.sh/7A5rn.osu

Xivaxi

133 posts

Joined November 2011

Xivaxi 2014-04-03T14:38:00+00:00

Very very very late from my modding queue! I am sorry! Everything looks good; just some weird looking things that bothered me.

[Easy]
00:10:076 (1) - move to x92 y138 to be more symmetrical and in line with 00:09:198 (2)
00:35:247 (2) - move the endpoint to x152 y140, it makes a cleaner bisect of the other slider
00:40:515 (1) - move this slider to x185 y248 for better blanket
00:41:247 (2) - move this slider to x316 y151 for a cleaner line off the previous slider
00:55:735 (1,2) - These aren't symmetrical. Make a new pair symmetric across the y-axis then rotate over to fix it.

[Normal]
Spacing is somewhat inconsistent throughout. Everything else looks fine for the most part

[Laurier's]
Looks fine

[Insane]
00:14:613 (1) - This might just be a personal preference, but these long and almost straight sliders look ugly. I'd either make them more curvy (zig zag a little if you want to keep the straightness) or make them perfectly straight
00:16:954 (1) - ^
00:18:125 (1) - This slider and 00:19:296 (1) - this one should be roughly the same curvyness, it looks weird as it is now with one overly curvy and one almost not curvy
00:34:223 (3) - Feels better as 3 circles instead of 1 slider, fits the vocals better (and mirrors the last line)
00:50:613 (3,4,5,1) - This can be symmetric, either a square or rhombus or something, the one corner is off, 00:51:052 (1) - this one to x318 y110 or so should work

[Hard]
00:00:711 (1,2) - Try and make these mirrors of eachother despite the length. The short one is almost straight and the long one is curved.
00:16:954 (1) - x437 y97 for a more symmetric pattern, adjust the notes after
00:32:174 (3) - Another almost-straight weird slider, make it zig zagy or curvey

[Skystar]
Looks fine

xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2014-04-21T08:00:17+00:00

Xivaxi wrote:
Very very very late from my modding queue! I am sorry! Everything looks good; just some weird looking things that bothered me.

[Insane]
00:14:613 (1) - This might just be a personal preference, but these long and almost straight sliders look ugly. I'd either make them more curvy (zig zag a little if you want to keep the straightness) or make them perfectly straight
00:16:954 (1) - ^
00:18:125 (1) - This slider and 00:19:296 (1) - this one should be roughly the same curvyness, it looks weird as it is now with one overly curvy and one almost not curvy
00:34:223 (3) - Feels better as 3 circles instead of 1 slider, fits the vocals better (and mirrors the last line)
00:50:613 (3,4,5,1) - This can be symmetric, either a square or rhombus or something, the one corner is off, 00:51:052 (1) - this one to x318 y110 or so should work intentional to have that slight jump o3o

[Hard]
00:00:711 (1,2) - Try and make these mirrors of eachother despite the length. The short one is almost straight and the long one is curved.
00:16:954 (1) - x437 y97 for a more symmetric pattern, adjust the notes after
00:32:174 (3) - Another almost-straight weird slider, make it zig zagy or curvey

No Comment=Fixed
Damn I'm late forgot about this lol, Thanks for modding~~!!! :3

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-05-01T04:31:19+00:00

Xivaxi wrote:
Very very very late from my modding queue! I am sorry! Everything looks good; just some weird looking things that bothered me.

[Easy]
00:10:076 (1) - move to x92 y138 to be more symmetrical and in line with 00:09:198 (2) alright
00:35:247 (2) - move the endpoint to x152 y140, it makes a cleaner bisect of the other slider hmm, I think this will be a bit boring, so keep it ;w; soorryy
00:40:515 (1) - move this slider to x185 y248 for better blanket thank you!
00:41:247 (2) - move this slider to x316 y151 for a cleaner line off the previous slider hmm, this might break the distance consistency a bit, sooo, keep it too qwq
00:55:735 (1,2) - These aren't symmetrical. Make a new pair symmetric across the y-axis then rotate over to fix it. nice one x)

thanks Xivaxi

dont give this up!

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CXu

osu! Alumni

3,558 posts

Joined March 2009

CXu 2014-07-19T18:46:52+00:00

Soon™.

[General]

Correct title is "革命デュアリズム -アニメバージョン-" ("Kakumei Dualism -Anime Version-"). Source: http://puu.sh/aihhh.jpg (dis puush link)
It's fine since they're guest diffs, but consider having the kiai time consistent throughout the diffs?
01:05:099 - Unsnapped green line. Doesn't seem to affect anything, but might as well just snap it properly.

[Insane]

00:11:832 (1,2,3,4) - They don't flow that well tbh, and the vocals seems to hold the same intensity, so that jump between (2,3) doesn't fit imo. Consider doing something else for this part.
00:12:418 (1) - Make this a 1/2 slider with a repeat? You never skip the beat at 00:12:564 -, so yeah.
00:13:442 (6,7) - Might want to put these closer, as they're easily confused to be 1/2's because of 00:11:832 (1,2) - .
00:17:686 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Delete the (8), as these are 5 note streams.
00:20:393 (8) - 00:21:564 (8) - ^
00:40:223 (4,5) - ctrl+g? Zig-zag is cool.
00:41:247 (3) - Probably depends on what you had in mind (ie. having (2,3,4) all pointing up), but ctrl+g seems to have a better curvy flow to me.
00:46:369 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Demsquares.
00:51:052 (1) - 00:53:393 (1) - 1/2 sliders instead? I really like the effect of having a break in the rhythm, like with 00:48:710 (1) -, and I don't quite like skipping that guitar 00:51:198 - .
01:06:564 (1) - Consider dropping the spinner and add a note at 01:06:564 - instead. I get the spinner, but it's really short and I don't think it feels that good to play a spinner here tbh.
01:22:954 (2) - Might as well end this at 01:23:100 - as the vocals end there as well as there being a drumbeat there.

[Skystar's Insane]

00:12:125 (3) - Consider destacking this a little bit, as the time you get to react to the fact that it's a slider and not a note is quite short.
00:24:125 (1) - Not sure why you've decided to go with 3/4 sliders here, as they feel pretty awkward to play and don't really capture the intensity of this part imo. Thre's also the fact that there's no beat at all at 00:24:345 - , and the guitar is ending at 00:24:271 -. I really think you should go with a 1/2 here. Also try volume at 40% so it doesn't sound too quiet.
00:26:467 (1) - Same as above^

[Laurier's Insane]

00:13:296 (1) - Remove 1 repeat from this so it ends on the blue tick.
00:14:467 (5) - Delete this note? Nothing much going on in the song here, and I think having a pause before the song "breaks out" feels pretty nice.
01:06:710 - Move the green line from 01:06:857 - to here?
01:09:198 (3,4) - Consider spacing these out? having them play like a stack kind of kills off the "rushing" feeling from the rest of the chorus.
01:20:686 (3) - Delete this note as the stream begins on the note after this.
01:24:052 (2,3) - Mmm, I'd rather delete that (2), and ctrl+g the (3), as the triple don't really follow anything.

[Hard]

00:12:418 (1) - Shorten this to 00:12:857 - and begin (2) at 00:13:003 - . Also let the repeats end at 00:13:515 - .
00:24:857 (4) - Whistle on end.
00:26:467 (1) - Place this in the middle of the sliders? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1834958
00:58:954 (3) - Shorten this to 1/2. Vocals end at 00:59:101 - .
01:15:198 (2) - Remove 1 repeat from this slider. There's no beat at 01:15:198 (2) -
01:28:661 (2) - Add a whistle on start, and clap on repeat. Consistent with Insane.

[Anre's Normal]

00:04:808 (3) - You should extend this so it begins at 00:04:662 - , following the vocal imo.
00:13:589 (2) - Add a green line and lower the volume a bit for this note.
00:18:857 (5) - Sampleset Auto + whistle.
00:25:296 (5) - With that drum going on every white tick, this feels pretty awkward. You should just shorten this to end at 00:25:589 - .
00:28:808 - Mmm, I'd really like you to map this part. It's a TV Size, so the map is already pretty short. And the easy has this part mapped, so it's pretty odd spread-wise as well.
00:58:076 (1) - Unsnapped green line, making this slider go poof.
01:23:247 (5) - Make this a 1/2 slider to follow the vocals. Plays better as it doesn't feel like you're kinda dragging the slider.

[623's Easy]

01:28:808 (2) - Remove the repeat and just add a 1/2 repeating slider at 01:29:832 - ?

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-07-19T19:19:21+00:00

CXu wrote:
Soon™.

[623's Easy]
01:28:808 (2) - Remove the repeat and just add a 1/2 repeating slider at 01:29:832 - ? Sure! sounds great!

thanks \o\!!

code owo

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xChippy

1,941 posts

Joined August 2011

Topic Starter

xChippy 2014-07-19T20:52:29+00:00

CXu wrote:
Soon™. Yesssss Hue

[General]
Correct title is "革命デュアリズム -アニメバージョン-" ("Kakumei Dualism -Anime Version-"). Source: http://puu.sh/aihhh.jpg (dis puush link)
It's fine since they're guest diffs, but consider having the kiai time consistent throughout the diffs? Up to them~
01:05:099 - Unsnapped green line. Doesn't seem to affect anything, but might as well just snap it properly.
[Insane]
00:11:832 (1,2,3,4) - They don't flow that well tbh, and the vocals seems to hold the same intensity, so that jump between (2,3) doesn't fit imo. Consider doing something else for this part.
00:12:418 (1) - Make this a 1/2 slider with a repeat? You never skip the beat at 00:12:564 -, so yeah.
00:13:442 (6,7) - Might want to put these closer, as they're easily confused to be 1/2's because of 00:11:832 (1,2) - .
00:17:686 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Delete the (8), as these are 5 note streams.
00:20:393 (8) - 00:21:564 (8) - ^
00:40:223 (4,5) - ctrl+g? Zig-zag is cool.
00:41:247 (3) - Probably depends on what you had in mind (ie. having (2,3,4) all pointing up), but ctrl+g seems to have a better curvy flow to me.
00:46:369 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Demsquares.
00:51:052 (1) - 00:53:393 (1) - 1/2 sliders instead? I really like the effect of having a break in the rhythm, like with 00:48:710 (1) -, and I don't quite like skipping that guitar 00:51:198 - .
01:06:564 (1) - Consider dropping the spinner and add a note at 01:06:564 - instead. I get the spinner, but it's really short and I don't think it feels that good to play a spinner here tbh.
01:22:954 (2) - Might as well end this at 01:23:100 - as the vocals end there as well as there being a drumbeat there.
[Hard]
00:12:418 (1) - Shorten this to 00:12:857 - and begin (2) at 00:13:003 - . Also let the repeats end at 00:13:515 - .
00:24:857 (4) - Whistle on end.
00:26:467 (1) - Place this in the middle of the sliders? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1834958
00:58:954 (3) - Shorten this to 1/2. Vocals end at 00:59:101 - .
01:15:198 (2) - Remove 1 repeat from this slider. There's no beat at 01:15:198 (2) -
01:28:661 (2) - Add a whistle on start, and clap on repeat. Consistent with Insane.

Fixed all~~
Thanks for modding wwwww hue

AnreFM

781 posts

Joined September 2012

AnreFM 2014-07-20T04:46:59+00:00

CXu wrote:
Soon™.

[Anre's Normal]
00:04:808 (3) - You should extend this so it begins at 00:04:662 - , following the vocal imo.hmm I did it so that it matches the previous rhythm and to avoid some problem on the notes reading for the players, but it also sounds nice, so fixed! but it'll be the only notes to follow the vocal here ;w;
00:13:589 (2) - Add a green line and lower the volume a bit for this note.ya
00:18:857 (5) - Sampleset Auto + whistle.sure
00:25:296 (5) - With that drum going on every white tick, this feels pretty awkward. You should just shorten this to end at 00:25:589 - .mmm I did it so that it matches the guitar on the background and I really like it, I'll keep this one sorry ;v;
00:28:808 - Mmm, I'd really like you to map this part. It's a TV Size, so the map is already pretty short. And the easy has this part mapped, so it's pretty odd spread-wise as well.ah yes, umm I mapped this one, I hope this won't create yet another problem ><
00:58:076 (1) - Unsnapped green line, making this slider go poof. omg sorry, fixed!
01:23:247 (5) - Make this a 1/2 slider to follow the vocals. Plays better as it doesn't feel like you're kinda dragging the slider.uuu I kinda like the dragging effect, but since you said so, I decide to change it to 2 1/2 beat circles instead to match the powerful vocal on the background, hope it's okay :3

Wheee thanks for the mod CXu! sorry for the few denies though u.u

codecode

osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:革命デュアリズム -アニメバージョン-
Artist:Mizuki Nana x T.M.Revolution
ArtistUnicode:水樹奈々×T.M.Revolution
Creator:xChippy
Version:Anre's Normal
Source:革命機ヴァルヴレイヴ
Tags:op Kakumeiki Valvrave the Liberator Amamiya Yuko Laurier AnreFM Skystar happy623
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Skystar

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Skystar 2014-07-20T10:00:44+00:00

CXu wrote:
[Skystar's Insane]
00:12:125 (3) - Consider destacking this a little bit, as the time you get to react to the fact that it's a slider and not a note is quite short.
00:24:125 (1) - Not sure why you've decided to go with 3/4 sliders here, as they feel pretty awkward to play and don't really capture the intensity of this part imo. Thre's also the fact that there's no beat at all at 00:24:345 - , and the guitar is ending at 00:24:271 -. I really think you should go with a 1/2 here. Also try volume at 40% so it doesn't sound too quiet. the point of the slower 3/4 slider is to emphasize the notes next to it 00:24:418 (1) - as they're slightly stronger than the previous in the music, i think it's fine as is
00:26:467 (1) - Same as above^

also did some changes to some jumps that look not really good now to improve the flow as this map is quite old

chippy: missing hitsounds are in the zip file along with my fixed diff, please release all of them into the map file and that'll work successfully
http://puu.sh/ajeCS/00aff3ec5c.rar

Laurier

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Laurier 2014-07-23T10:18:02+00:00

http://puu.sh/anx7x/c7a95aefa9.osu
all fixed

xChippy

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xChippy 2014-07-23T10:30:58+00:00

everything is up-to-date

Skystar

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Skystar 2014-10-18T13:11:39+00:00

hi

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xChippy 2014-10-18T13:12:56+00:00

wheee

Lynoire

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Lynoire 2015-11-04T19:55:14+00:00

come on guys, dont give up q_q.

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623's Easy

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Hard

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Insane

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623's Easy

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Hard

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