This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月28日 at 19:05:01

Artist: EBTC
Title: Lang Zhu Qian Qiu Feng
Source: 霹靂震寰宇之兵甲龍痕
Tags: pili 擎海潮 孫敬凡 eric sun billow on eternal peak everything but the culture chinese classical 古風 中國風 布袋戲
BPM: 125.07
Filesize: 3737kb
Play Time: 01:52
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.39 stars, 107 notes)
2. Hard (4.91 stars, 280 notes)
3. Normal (4.22 stars, 172 notes)

Download: EBTC - Lang Zhu Qian Qiu Feng
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thx for all modders!~
battle theme of a male character from Pili puppetry series, whose name is 擎海潮(Qing Haichao), he is one of my favorite Pili characters.
一舉鯨濤快哉風，世浪翻袖中。古今誰人堪伯仲？千秋雪，半夕蝶夢。
無非文化（Everything But The Culture）- 浪逐千秋峰 (Billow on the Eternal Peak) - 擎海潮武戲曲
作/編曲：孫敬凡 笛：黃治平 收錄於『霹靂英雄音樂精選二十八』
BG pic by 細碎的小情緒(百度ID), thx!~

不打算做一个overmap的insane吗？有管弦乐还有00:05:128 - 00:06:807 - 一排的话可以往死里下连打？

only check

[hard]

空了好多音，hard应该是能完全体现这个曲子的难度吧，不要空掉类似00:02:850 - 这样明显的音比较好，可以把normal里面的空掉来体现区分度

finish + whistle + * + clap 好像是你在hard和normal里面的音效下法，太拘谨了点，这个曲子还是有变奏的，特殊的比如00:27:796 - ，这里不下clap的话，那00:27:436 - 的clap就是个错误

00:15:083 - 你忘了tick的音效 吧……

00:08:606 - finish 比较顺耳

00:22:519 - ^

00:22:998 - ^

00:55:380 - 可能漏了note……对比normal的话

[normal]

00:14:123 (3) - prev ：1.18

01:21:765 (1) - prev ：0.92

其实就是为了这两个东西才写mod我会乱说？

normal的音效如果是和hard一致的话……那么对比一下这些不一样的地方

00:56:340 -

01:17:448 -

01:41:314 -

[easy]

距离美丽

zengdaen wrote:

你爲什麽這麼觸

因為我愛得深沉 嚇，剛發現有顆星！#_# 謝謝你啦～

Hello; modding from Indonesia Modding Team's queue here.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy

1. 00:03:089 (1) - A whistle fits with the instrument being played here than a finish, IMO.
2. 00:07:887 (2,3,1,2) - This is just a matter of preference, actually, but maybe try to make the flow here less linear to make it smoother, like this?
3. 00:51:542 (2,3) - The flow looks a bit too linear... Try this?

>Normal

1. CS4 is too small for a Normal diff... I'd recommend CS3, but since you already had all these notes arranged, just leave them as is if you wish. Just warning that CS4 might be a little too much for Normal.
2. 00:00:931 - Maybe you should start to add a note here, since the instrument is pretty loud and it'd be a nice way to kick off the map. I didn't recommend to add one in the Easy diff since it might be a little awkward there, but it should be nice to have one in this diff.
3. 00:30:914 (2,3) - Move (2) to (420,160) and (3) to (352,24)? Should make the flow better. The current positioning makes it kinda messed up...
4. 00:47:225 - Place a whistle here instead of at 00:47:704. The sound of the whistle suits the instrument here better than that one.
5. 01:10:012 (1) - I'm not sure what are you trying to follow with this spinner... Try moving it to 01:10:252?
6. 01:13:610 (1) - Remove the NC here? It's supposed to be in the same combo as 01:12:171 (1,2), since we haven't been switching to the next stanza yet at this point.
7. 01:42:874 (1) - It would fit better with the atmosphere of the song if you stacked this above 01:43:113 (2)'s head instead of below 01:41:914 (2)'s, since the instrument is strong, and stacked notes won't really work well for that.

>Hard

1. AR6 and OD6 should be enough for something like this. Setting them at 7 is a little too extreme. AR7 at 125.07 BPM + 1.80 SV makes the approach rate slightly too fast, and OD7... is just too strict, considering there will be a few short streams here.
2. 00:00:931 - Same as Normal. I'm also afraid that 00:01:171 (1) can be mistakenly read as being at 00:00:931, and will make players hit the note too early despite of the approach circle.
3. 00:07:167 - Add a note here so the players can feel and understand the rhythm better? I know what are you mapping to with the two notes, but they might cause awkwardness while playing because of their somewhat unusual rhythm.
4. 00:08:606 (7,1) - A jump would be nice to emphasize the strong instrument at 00:08:846 (1).
5. 00:11:845 (4) - Move this note to 00:11:605? The instrument is stronger there, and leaving that tick empty would make players confused because the music at 00:11:845 is weak compared to 00:11:605, and yet they have to hit something here instead of at that one.
6. 00:16:522 (1) - Not quite sure with the flow here. It looks and feels forced. Try this?
7. 00:22:279 (6,1) - Uh, swap NC to follow the rhythm/stanza of the song? Trying to make the combo here to be pattern-based won't work well because of the music.
8. 00:24:198 (4) - NC this for the same reason as the suggestion above?
9. 00:39:549 (1) - Move the node on the tail to (64,52) to create a nice blanket with 00:40:269 (2)?
10. 01:08:093 (6,1) - Same as 01:42:874 (1) in the Normal diff.
11. 01:15:769 (4,1) - It's quite jarring to see a jump as big as this, and then there isn't any jump as big as this anymore later, even though the instrument here is relatively weak. Consider making it smaller.

Not much to say. I don't really like the flow in some places because they can be too straight at times, and it'll need players to move their cursor in a straight line too, which is usually not comfortable, but other than that, I'm okay with this.

Good luck on the way

Hinsvar wrote:

Hello; modding from Indonesia Modding Team's queue here. hi~

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy

1. 00:03:089 (1) - A whistle fits with the instrument being played here than a finish, IMO. ok,fixed
2. 00:07:887 (2,3,1,2) - This is just a matter of preference, actually, but maybe try to make the flow here less linear to make it smoother, like this? fixed
3. 00:51:542 (2,3) - The flow looks a bit too linear... Try this? fixed

>Normal

1. CS4 is too small for a Normal diff... I'd recommend CS3, but since you already had all these notes arranged, just leave them as is if you wish. Just warning that CS4 might be a little too much for Normal. sorry,prefer the original
2. 00:00:931 - Maybe you should start to add a note here, since the instrument is pretty loud and it'd be a nice way to kick off the map. I didn't recommend to add one in the Easy diff since it might be a little awkward there, but it should be nice to have one in this diff. it seems unrankable to put a note before the red line,but i will find way to fix it if another person point the same issue
3. 00:30:914 (2,3) - Move (2) to (420,160) and (3) to (352,24)? Should make the flow better. The current positioning makes it kinda messed up... ok,fixed
4. 00:47:225 - Place a whistle here instead of at 00:47:704. The sound of the whistle suits the instrument here better than that one. fixed
5. 01:10:012 (1) - I'm not sure what are you trying to follow with this spinner... Try moving it to 01:10:252? ok,fixed
6. 01:13:610 (1) - Remove the NC here? It's supposed to be in the same combo as 01:12:171 (1,2), since we haven't been switching to the next stanza yet at this point. you're right,fixed
7. 01:42:874 (1) - It would fit better with the atmosphere of the song if you stacked this above 01:43:113 (2)'s head instead of below 01:41:914 (2)'s, since the instrument is strong, and stacked notes won't really work well for that. ok,fixed

>Hard

1. AR6 and OD6 should be enough for something like this. Setting them at 7 is a little too extreme. AR7 at 125.07 BPM + 1.80 SV makes the approach rate slightly too fast, and OD7... is just too strict, considering there will be a few short streams here. changed OD to 6 but keep AR7,AR6 is too slow for a hard diff i think
2. 00:00:931 - Same as Normal. I'm also afraid that 00:01:171 (1) can be mistakenly read as being at 00:00:931, and will make players hit the note too early despite of the approach circle.
3. 00:07:167 - Add a note here so the players can feel and understand the rhythm better? I know what are you mapping to with the two notes, but they might cause awkwardness while playing because of their somewhat unusual rhythm. ok,added
4. 00:08:606 (7,1) - A jump would be nice to emphasize the strong instrument at 00:08:846 (1). ok,fixed
5. 00:11:845 (4) - Move this note to 00:11:605? The instrument is stronger there, and leaving that tick empty would make players confused because the music at 00:11:845 is weak compared to 00:11:605, and yet they have to hit something here instead of at that one. ok,fixed
6. 00:16:522 (1) - Not quite sure with the flow here. It looks and feels forced. Try this? changed slider's shape but keep the position
7. 00:22:279 (6,1) - Uh, swap NC to follow the rhythm/stanza of the song? Trying to make the combo here to be pattern-based won't work well because of the music. ok,fixed
8. 00:24:198 (4) - NC this for the same reason as the suggestion above? ^
9. 00:39:549 (1) - Move the node on the tail to (64,52) to create a nice blanket with 00:40:269 (2)? ok,fixed
10. 01:08:093 (6,1) - Same as 01:42:874 (1) in the Normal diff. ok,fixed
11. 01:15:769 (4,1) - It's quite jarring to see a jump as big as this, and then there isn't any jump as big as this anymore later, even though the instrument here is relatively weak. Consider making it smaller. ok,fixed

Not much to say. I don't really like the flow in some places because they can be too straight at times, and it'll need players to move their cursor in a straight line too, which is usually not comfortable, but other than that, I'm okay with this. you're right,i will try to improve those parts

Good luck on the way

thx a lot for your mod and star!~

Hi hi! Bonus from Indonesian Modding Team \o/

Here we go



[General]

1. Offset is a bit too early. Try 1150 (-21 of the current), don't forget to resnap all notes and the green lines after applying~ btw when I use that offset, I only got 4-9ms late, so you might want to test it a bit more :3

[Hard]

1. 00:00:931 - Well, the fact that the first beat in the music is actually here(and a very strong one on that), make me feel a bit weird when I play this for the first time. The beat here feels ignored imo, despite that it is a really strong beat. I really suggest you to add a circle here, maybe one that stacked with 00:01:171 (1) -, because it make a bit confusing rhythm on what rhythm is currently followed because you decided to leave it blank here o.o
   00:04:409 - Since there are triplet on 00:02:130 (3,4,5) -, and the beat is still really strong(emphasized with the 00:03:089 (6) - ), I think it will be better if you insert a triplet here too imo. The rhythm will become much better, since the koto has a triple beat there, so you might want to make the note denser there, and also I was expecting this rhythm has a triplet when I played it too :b. The rhythm should become like this then http://puu.sh/5Z0lN.jpg
2. 00:06:927 (1,2,3) - In opposite of above; I don't really think this part has a triple beat imo, the heavy beat only occured on 00:06:927 (1,2) -, whilst not on (3) imo. So yeah, try to remove (3) to avoid using unecessary note.
   00:12:084 - As in 00:04:409 - about the triplet :3 Yeah, since the koto here is quite loud and you're currently following it, how about making it a triplet here too? owo
3. 00:16:522 (1) - Hmm, didn't really like the flow on this jump imo. The jump fits because the beat here is powerful, though the flow isn't really good imo :'D But I don't think you can change it without making a really big changes to other notes, so yeah, If you can, you might want to make the flow here better by either using a circular flow or other ones
4. 00:19:880 (4) - The flow is good and follows the rhythm nicely, but how about using ctrl+g here? It will make a small jump and the flow will become circular thoughtout the 00:19:400 (3,4,1) - :3 And also, since this is the hardest diff on the mapset, you might want to make it harder a bit :b
5. 00:26:836 (5,6,7) - Eh, I feel the rhythm here a bit weird and quite unfit with the music imo. You see, melody wise, 00:27:076 (6) - should be a 1/2 slider, not a 3/4, And then 00:27:436 (7) - is the 3/4 one; you make them the opposite lol :b So yeah, I think the rhythm should be like this then http://puu.sh/5Z0L7.jpg
6. 00:29:954 (1,2,3,4) - Considering that the flow throughout the mapset is continously flowing and I think it fits, having this kind of stack kinda broke the flow imo. You see, you haven't use this kind of stack too before this one right? I'd suggest to unstack 00:29:954 (1) - with the rest of the triplet and the 1/1 slider, since it feels a bit weird when played imo ):
7. 00:36:191 (2,3) - Ah, isn't really problem here, but I think you can change this part a bit for better readability ovo See, you usually use this kind of stack (circle fully stacked with slider tail), when it is either; 3/4 slider + 1 circle on blue tick or 3/4 slider + triplet. So, since this part isn't like those two, I recommend you to unstack (3) to avoid confusing read element imo. You don't really have to unstack it fully though, just stacking it a bit should make a difference owo like this http://puu.sh/5Z13h.jpg
8. 00:39:549 (1) - I think this part can be made more interesting than a single 1/1 slider imo, you can try to use a rhythm like 3/4 slider = circle on the blue tick, similar like what you did in the later parts on 00:43:387 (1,2) -, And I also think it fits better owo
9. 00:47:944 (3,4) - Hmm I think the shape can be improved here too ovo How about using 00:47:944 (3) - to blanket 00:48:664 (4) -, rather than not connecting them at all like the current one, like this;
   
   here

   

   144,40,48664,2,0,L|240:40,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   328,40,49144,6,0,P|376:120|456:160,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:  

10. 00:55:860 (1,2,3) - For a part that goes to break, I think these notes feel a bit not too intense imo, It kinda dampen the powerful beat too :< You can try changing 00:56:340 (2) - to a triplet that goes to 00:56:340 (2) -, the note should feel more powerful there, because player will tap more rather than following only a 1/2 sliders :b The rhythm should go like this http://puu.sh/5Z1kP.jpg
11. 01:11:211 (3,4) - Hmm, comparing with other sliders that use this rhythm (2 connecting sliders stacked), you usually shaped them nicely and neat, but this one isn't lol ouo How about using this shape, it should do at least better than the current one imo
    
    Like this one?

    

    304,200,71211,2,0,P|316:252|384:304,1,135
    376,302,71691,2,0,L|480:294,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

12. 01:36:397 - Eh why do you leave this blank? Since the rhythm doesn't show any sign that you should stop, leaving this blank here feels a bit weird imo. Moreover, the drum(?) in the background music has a triplet too. Though if you want to add only a circle, it's fine since anything other than blank should do ouo
13. 01:38:316 - I really recommend you to NC here. It doesn't really follow your NC pattern but, you see; the note at 01:38:076 (3) - really emphasizing the rhythm to stop there (similar on other parts) and the fact that you stack them (01:38:316 (4,5,6) - ) make the notes kinda unexpected, or at least it is for me :b So yeah, consider NCing there since I also like the note division owo (3 by 3)
14. 01:40:955 (1,2,3,4) - lol How about making a nicer shape for these two (similar like I suggest at 01:11:211 (3,4) - :b), since these two are mirroring each other and making them shaped nicer should make your map visibly better owo
15. Nice hard here! this kind of hard can be played by anyone-even a few beginners, and that's really nice ovob Although, as kak Hinsvar said, some parts has a few unnatural pattern and therefore make the play less enjoyable, like the huge jump in 00:16:522 (1) -, it has 3.75 range and considering the jumps you used on other parts are rather small compared to this, this one feels really awkward to play, unfortunately :'D Though aside from that, it's cool and all for your first map OwO

[Normal]

1. 00:00:931 - As in the Hard; Consider adding note here
2. 00:12:684 (1) - I noticed the pattern that you used on this diff. is like; Sharp turns or straight slider for notes that followed the drum, and curvy slider for notes that followed the koto (or something like that :b). So yeah, Since this one is following the koto, consider making it curvy for consistency owo like this one http://puu.sh/5Z27M.jpg
3. 00:27:076 (2,1) - If you're following the powerful note here, I think the current doesn't fit really well with it imo :< The beat at 00:27:436 - isn't emphasized by how you arranged the current rhythm, and the powerful beat is there too. So yeah, consider emphasizing them better by using a 3/4 repeat slider. That way, the powerful beat should be all covered :3 like this http://puu.sh/5Z2eR.jpg
4. 00:29:715 - You might want to add a note here, as the beat is quite powerful here, and also considering that you use a slider on 00:29:954 (1) - which practically follow the same rhythm, you can add a circle to emphasize following the beat better here.
5. 01:10:252 (1) - This spin feels a bit weird imo. I don't really get what you're following for this one and this one is also a bit too short for a normal ouo How about making it a full 1/1 spin? You can lengthen the spin to 01:11:211 -, and it will also give more time for the beginner to spin :3

[Easy]

1. 00:13:164 (1) - Hmm this spin feels a bit off imo. Aside from that ot is a bit too short for beginners, It stiill doesn't really following anything from the background music too imo, it will be confusing for beginners :< So yeah, consider making this spin to a considerable rhythm, like full 1/1 beat to 00:15:562 -, that way, beginner should be able to grasp the rhythm better :3
2. 00:27:076 (2) - Even if you use a simple rhythm, if it isn't really following some powerful beat in the background, it can make beginners stumble lol :b Like this one, the powerful rhythm supposedly use a 3/4 repeat rhythm, not a 1/2 one owo So yeah, consider changing this one~
3. You may notice that I haven't go all out on the Easy and Normal diff yet owo, You see, the patterns aren't bad and there's nothing unrankable there, but some parts still can be improved much imo. The flow and the usage of sliders and circles are a bit weird sometime u.u Though if I tell you to change that, I'll ended up changing too much :'D So yeah, I'm sure many people will give you lighter suggestions on it! :3

ouo Hope that helps o/

Cool song and Nice map, have a star! ヾ(´･ω･｀)ﾉ

Hello, From my Modding Queue ~

• Easy

1. NC
   00:12:684 (4) - Is this NC necessary ?
   
2. Hitsound
   00:22:998 (2) - Finish at the head
   
3. Placements
   00:29:954 (1,2) - Try this patern :
   
   SPOILER

   
4. Rythm
   Nothing to say

• Normal

  Circle Size = 3 (easier for beginners)

1. NC
   01:11:691 (1,2) - Is this NC necessary ?
   01:23:684 (1) - ^
   01:52:468 (1) - ^
   
2. Hitsound
   Nothing to say
   
3. Placements
   00:13:644 (2,3,4,5) - Strange patern =/
   00:19:880 (4,1) - Better blanket please
   00:47:225 (1) - ^
   
4. Rythm
   Nothing to say

• Hard

1. NC
   01:48:390 (1,1) - Necessary ?
   
2. Hitsound
   Nothing to say
   
3. Placements
   00:10:765 (1,2) - For these paterns, please try that :
   
   SPOILER

   
   00:14:363 (7,1) - Too long jump
   00:16:282 (6,1) - ^
   00:25:637 (4,1) - ^
   00:46:985 (4,1) - ^
   01:11:691 (4,1) - ^
   01:15:769 (4,1) - ^
   ...And more
   
4. Rythm
   00:02:130 (4,5,6) - I think you should make 5 circle (add one at 00:01:890 and one at 00:02:010)

I hope it'll be helpful ^w^

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hello, From my Modding Queue ~ hi~

• Easy

1. NC
   00:12:684 (4) - Is this NC necessary ? ok,removed it,though the note is on long white line
   
2. Hitsound
   00:22:998 (2) - Finish at the head added whistle instead
   
3. Placements
   00:29:954 (1,2) - Try this patern : ok,fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. Rythm
   Nothing to say

• Normal

  Circle Size = 3 (easier for beginners) prefer the original,sorry

1. NC
   01:11:691 (1,2) - Is this NC necessary ? here NC is necessary i think,there are same patterns behind
   01:23:684 (1) - ^ ok,removed it
   01:52:468 (1) - ^ ^
   
2. Hitsound
   Nothing to say
   
3. Placements
   00:13:644 (2,3,4,5) - Strange patern =/ well,fixed it
   00:19:880 (4,1) - Better blanket please changed a little……
   00:47:225 (1) - ^ fixed
   
4. Rythm
   Nothing to say

• Hard

1. NC
   01:48:390 (1,1) - Necessary ? removed it
   
2. Hitsound
   Nothing to say
   
3. Placements
   00:10:765 (1,2) - For these paterns, please try that : prefer the original,this kind of 3/4 slider and 1/4 slider is easy to recognize when playing i think
   
   SPOILER

   
   00:14:363 (7,1) - Too long jump this is a hard diff,some jumping pattern will make it not so boring to play,so…keep the original
   00:16:282 (6,1) - ^
   00:25:637 (4,1) - ^
   00:46:985 (4,1) - ^
   01:11:691 (4,1) - ^
   01:15:769 (4,1) - ^
   ...And more
   
4. Rythm
   00:02:130 (4,5,6) - I think you should make 5 circle (add one at 00:01:890 and one at 00:02:010)

umm……prefer the original

I hope it'll be helpful ^w^

thx for your mod!~

Hi, mod from queue ~ c:
first: that song is awesome! owo
second: this is just suggestions, feel free to ignore everything. xD

[Easy]
well, I played the map first before I looked at it (like everyone I guess) and it does make an extremely stiff impression. o.o
I'm just pointing this out, cause I think it's nice to know what other people think of it as a whole. Don't want to sound rude or anything! >o<
some other things ~

1. 00:01:171 (1) - instead of one cirlce, use a slider starting at the red timing point before?
   it matches so well imo.. .o.
2. 00:05:008 (1) - this one's too short. x:
   it matches well with the rhythm and all, but beginners can't spin that fast.
   most likely they don't even have enough time to realize that there is a spinner, yet complete it.
   and that's extremely frustrating for people who just started playing. :c
3. 00:06:927 (1) - it might be better to not place this at the center of the playfield, cause it's hard to read.
   actually I'm not that sure, cause with the "new" skin the approach cirlce doesn't overlap with the spinner circle, but many people are using the old skin/custom skins.. beginners rarely do, though.. Idk. Might be better to leave it as it is and only change it if a BAT tells you to. xD
   the same applies to some other cirlces after spinners as well..
4. 00:09:326 (2,1,2) - this is too linear imo. you have a really nice curve at 00:07:887 (2,3,1,2) - why not use something similar again?
5. 00:18:441 (1,2,1) - movement doesn't feel good here. it's okay from 1 to 2, you can improve it though.
   you could eg rotate 00:17:481 (3) by 45° and it's easier to play (imo).
   and maybe you want to place the last slider - 00:20:360 (1) - differently, cause it doesn't match with the movement direction the former slider indicates.
   there are some more parts you could improve, like 00:41:468 (1). you could place it a bit more to the right to form a triangle with 00:40:029 (2,3) or place it further left of 00:40:988 (3) to make the movement smoother.
   I'll just write the other parts down, I think you get what I mean in general, so if you have a question what I mean exactly, just pm me or try to catch me ingame.. :
   00:42:427 (2,1,2)
   01:07:373 (2,1)
   01:16:009 (1,2,1)
   01:18:887 (2,1)
   01:37:597 (2,1)

[Normal]
I'm a bit surprised that you use CS4. o.o it's just that the song is definitely Insane material, so I wanted to point out anyway that you really really should think about adding an Insane! personally, I'd love an Insane on this mapset, I just have the feeling it could be sooo awesome. >w<
and if you don't want to map it youself you could always look for someone to make a GD!
anyway, I think if you decrease CS you could get a nicer diff spread, but that's ofc up to you. c:

1. just some movement issues, I think you could improve:
   00:11:725 (3,4,1)
   00:27:076 (2,1)
   00:46:265 (2,3,1)
   01:27:522 (3,4,1)
   01:31:360 (1,2)
2. 00:52:502 (3,1) - these two look extremely close to each other, maybe place the middle a biiit further down?
3. 00:55:860 (3) - Ctrl + G, so it matches better with the movement of 00:54:900 (1,2)

[Hard]
I get the feeling your mapping style is great for Hard diffs. o,o I liked playing it.
two suggestions:

1. 00:15:562 (3,4,5,6) - place 6 at the same place as 4, not as 3?
   I just like back-forth movements.. xD
2. 00:38:590 (3) - Ctrl + G?
   it's an extra jump, but oh well. o,o

nuffin more to say, great diff! c:

Overall this look really good already, good luck getting this ranked! :3
And plaese think about an Insane.. really.. so much potential..! '^'

Hope I was helpful at some point ~
*squee*

Hi! From mod queue.

Note: My mod stacked with Squirrel because the mapper asked me to post it. Some of element may the same with Squirrel's.

[Overview]

1. An inherited timing point. You don't have to use 2 timing point. Because the music begins on beat 4 bar 0. (1 beat before bar 1 start. Half beat, actually.) So you can take out the first inherited timing point without causing any issue.
2. A background image. It's 1280 * 719. Consider stretch a little bit. (1280 * 720 would be fine.)

[Easy]

1. 00:28:035 (1) - Too tough for a beginner player?
2. 01:12:171 (1,2,1,2) - These one too.
3. 01:19:846 (1,2,1,2) and the other similar pattern - I don't think that a 1/2 note is a good idea in Easy difficulty. Because a beginner player click/tap slowly. And they mostly follow a white beat. You can take a quick look here: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
4. 01:00:657 (1,2,1,2) - remove these if you want a longer break. (Actually you should because it's the same break with the other difficulty.)

[Normal]

1. 01:12:171 (1) - Remove NC
2. 01:13:610 (3) - NC here.
3. 01:14:090 (1) - Remove NC

[Hard]

1. 00:21:319 (3,4) - Sounds a little weird. Maybe replace a slider tail at 4?
2. 00:22:998 (3) - How about change it into this?: http://puu.sh/63eHN.jpg (Horizon flip - Vertical flip - Reverse Selection)
3. 01:42:393 (4) - Object end isn't snap.

This beatmap is pretty well arranged. Only Easy difficulty is need to be fixed. No, you don't need two inherited timing point, just use the second one is okay.

Sorry for not much modding. I myself can't find many problem in this map. (And I'm suck at reading pattern too. )

Good luck!

Squirrel wrote:

Hi, mod from queue ~ c: hi~
first: that song is awesome! owo thx!~
second: this is just suggestions, feel free to ignore everything. xD

[Easy]
well, I played the map first before I looked at it (like everyone I guess) and it does make an extremely stiff impression. o.o
I'm just pointing this out, cause I think it's nice to know what other people think of it as a whole. Don't want to sound rude or anything! >o<
some other things ~

1. 00:01:171 (1) - instead of one cirlce, use a slider starting at the red timing point before?
   it matches so well imo.. .o. ok,fixed
2. 00:05:008 (1) - this one's too short. x:
   it matches well with the rhythm and all, but beginners can't spin that fast.
   most likely they don't even have enough time to realize that there is a spinner, yet complete it.
   and that's extremely frustrating for people who just started playing. :c ok,make it end at 00:06:448
3. 00:06:927 (1) - it might be better to not place this at the center of the playfield, cause it's hard to read.
   actually I'm not that sure, cause with the "new" skin the approach cirlce doesn't overlap with the spinner circle, but many people are using the old skin/custom skins.. beginners rarely do, though.. Idk. Might be better to leave it as it is and only change it if a BAT tells you to. xD
   the same applies to some other cirlces after spinners as well.. seems we have opposite opinion :/ i just think if a note behind a spinner is far away from centre,that may be hard to read,so,keep the original
4. 00:09:326 (2,1,2) - this is too linear imo. you have a really nice curve at 00:07:887 (2,3,1,2) - why not use something similar again? ok,fixed
5. 00:18:441 (1,2,1) - movement doesn't feel good here. it's okay from 1 to 2, you can improve it though.
   you could eg rotate 00:17:481 (3) by 45° and it's easier to play (imo).
   and maybe you want to place the last slider - 00:20:360 (1) - differently, cause it doesn't match with the movement direction the former slider indicates. changed 3
   there are some more parts you could improve, like 00:41:468 (1). you could place it a bit more to the right to form a triangle with 00:40:029 (2,3) or place it further left of 00:40:988 (3) to make the movement smoother.
   I'll just write the other parts down, I think you get what I mean in general, so if you have a question what I mean exactly, just pm me or try to catch me ingame.. :
   00:42:427 (2,1,2)
   01:07:373 (2,1)
   01:16:009 (1,2,1)
   01:18:887 (2,1)
   01:37:597 (2,1)

ok,i will try to improve these parts,already fixed some

[Normal]
I'm a bit surprised that you use CS4. o.o it's just that the song is definitely Insane material, so I wanted to point out anyway that you really really should think about adding an Insane! personally, I'd love an Insane on this mapset, I just have the feeling it could be sooo awesome. >w<
and if you don't want to map it youself you could always look for someone to make a GD! umm……i may think about that :3
anyway, I think if you decrease CS you could get a nicer diff spread, but that's ofc up to you. c:

1. just some movement issues, I think you could improve:
   00:11:725 (3,4,1)
   00:27:076 (2,1)
   00:46:265 (2,3,1)
   01:27:522 (3,4,1)
   01:31:360 (1,2) yeah,i will make them better
2. 00:52:502 (3,1) - these two look extremely close to each other, maybe place the middle a biiit further down? ok,moved
3. 00:55:860 (3) - Ctrl + G, so it matches better with the movement of 00:54:900 (1,2)

prefer the original

[Hard]
I get the feeling your mapping style is great for Hard diffs. o,o I liked playing it. thx
two suggestions:

1. 00:15:562 (3,4,5,6) - place 6 at the same place as 4, not as 3?
   I just like back-forth movements.. xD then 6 will be too far away from next note……prefer the original
2. 00:38:590 (3) - Ctrl + G?
   it's an extra jump, but oh well. o,o

seems fine,ok
nuffin more to say, great diff! c:

Overall this look really good already, good luck getting this ranked! :3
And plaese think about an Insane.. really.. so much potential..! '^'

Hope I was helpful at some point ~
*squee*

thx for your mod!~

CTs-Th wrote:

Hi! From mod queue.

Note: My mod stacked with Squirrel because the mapper asked me to post it. Some of element may the same with Squirrel's.

[Overview]

1. An inherited timing point. You don't have to use 2 timing point. Because the music begins on beat 4 bar 0. (1 beat before bar 1 start. Half beat, actually.) So you can take out the first inherited timing point without causing any issue. seems every diffs' timing point(red lines) must be same in ranking rules.anyway i've changed first note to a slider by Squirrel's mod :3
2. A background image. It's 1280 * 719. Consider stretch a little bit. (1280 * 720 would be fine.)

ok,fixed it

[Easy]

1. 00:28:035 (1) - Too tough for a beginner player? you're right,fixed
2. 01:12:171 (1,2,1,2) - These one too.
3. 01:19:846 (1,2,1,2) and the other similar pattern - I don't think that a 1/2 note is a good idea in Easy difficulty. Because a beginner player click/tap slowly. And they mostly follow a white beat. You can take a quick look here: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy but if don't do that,the rhythm pattern will be a mess……i may think about how to fix this issue
4. 01:00:657 (1,2,1,2) - remove these if you want a longer break. (Actually you should because it's the same break with the other difficulty.)
   it already has a breaktime before……so don't remove

[Normal]

1. 01:12:171 (1) - Remove NC
2. 01:13:610 (3) - NC here.
3. 01:14:090 (1) - Remove NC it's a designed and specially NC pattern,prefer the original……if more other people point out that,i may fix

[Hard]

1. 00:21:319 (3,4) - Sounds a little weird. Maybe replace a slider tail at 4? umm……prefer the original
2. 00:22:998 (3) - How about change it into this?: http://puu.sh/63eHN.jpg (Horizon flip - Vertical flip - Reverse Selection) seems fine,fixed
3. 01:42:393 (4) - Object end isn't snap. how could this happen 0.0,anyway fixed(perhaps :/ seems i must need to get an AIBat

This beatmap is pretty well arranged. Only Easy difficulty is need to be fixed. No, you don't need two inherited timing point, just use the second one is okay.

Sorry for not much modding. I myself can't find many problem in this map. (And I'm suck at reading pattern too. )

Good luck!

thx for your mod!~

zengdaen wrote:

不打算做一个overmap的insane吗？有管弦乐还有00:05:128 - 00:06:807 - 一排的话可以往死里下连打？ 你是第二个说要有insane的人……感觉暂时没思路，本着为道友服务的原则还是希望起初的几张图善良点= =……不过也说不准哪天就找人做个GD得了（趴

only check it's a mod indeed!

[hard]

空了好多音，hard应该是能完全体现这个曲子的难度吧，不要空掉类似00:02:850 - 这样明显的音比较好，可以把normal里面的空掉来体现区分度 好的，那里加上了

finish + whistle + * + clap 好像是你在hard和normal里面的音效下法，太拘谨了点，这个曲子还是有变奏的，特殊的比如00:27:796 - ，这里不下clap的话，那00:27:436 - 的clap就是个错误 嗯，貌似确实……加上了

00:15:083 - 你忘了tick的音效 吧…… 还是尽量避免使用tick音效……（趴 少数的失音无伤大雅

00:08:606 - finish 比较顺耳 嗯，added

00:22:519 - ^ 这里感觉突兀，没加

00:22:998 - ^ 加了whistle……

00:55:380 - 可能漏了note……对比normal的话 ok,added

[normal]

00:14:123 (3) - prev ：1.18 改了惹……其实做的时候就比较在意，但感觉看上去不是很显orz……

01:21:765 (1) - prev ：0.92 你眼果然够尖……fixed

其实就是为了这两个东西才写mod我会乱说？

normal的音效如果是和hard一致的话……那么对比一下这些不一样的地方

00:56:340 - 还是避免使用tick音效，继续趴……

01:17:448 - 刻意空拍……不是不能加但排列改起来会很抓狂，暂时保留之……

01:41:314 - tick……同上上

[easy]

距离美丽 这……同觉得美丽，我最好还是多问问新手玩家的感想orz

thx for your mod!~

From my Queue

[Hard]

1. 00:11:245 (2) - 右移到x:81 y:120，雖然玩得時候看不太出來不過我有強迫症
2. 00:13:644 (3,4,5) - 沒有包好
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:14:603 (1) - 把這個改成note後面的slider往前移，00:14:843 (2) - 這裡其實沒有音
4. 00:14:723 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這邊剛好能弄個星星，擺成這樣玩起來也順一點（那個slider我隨手拉的你看看就好）
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:18:201 (4) - 往下移，讓00:17:481 (3,4,1) - 這三個變成一個V
6. 00:18:441 (1) - 這slider對我來說不太好看阿，拉點酷炫的試試
7. 00:23:718 (4) - 加個note和clap？
8. 00:26:117 (1) - 跳得稍微遠了點
9. 00:28:755 (3) - 弄個折返？
10. 00:39:069 (4,5,6) - 移到x:392 y108或是00:38:590 (3) - 弄個折返
11. 00:52:981 (1,2,3) - 擺個形狀唄，三角形什麼的
12. 01:16:488 (2) - 疊好
13. 01:22:245 (2) - ^
14. 01:37:836 (2,3,1,2,3) - 這邊跳得不是很好看
15. 01:41:434 (2) - 疊好
16. 01:43:113 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 弄個六角形？
    SPOILER

    

[Normal]

1. 00:51:782 (2) - 尾巴的描點往上移一格
2. 00:55:860 (3) - x:260 y :228，在順時針轉30度
3. 01:06:414 (1) - 左移一格
4. 01:17:448 (x) - 加個note或前面的slider弄折返，記得加clap
5. 01:23:684 (4) - 往右往上一格
6. 01:52:228 (4,5) - 順著slider往上擺吧
   SPOILER

   

[Easy]

1. 00:49:623 (2) - 描點往中間一點
   SPOILER

   

看起來沒什麼問題
就是間距有點太近了
不過這只是我個人的感覺而已

Evil_Twilight wrote:

From my Queue

[Hard]

1. 00:11:245 (2) - 右移到x:81 y:120，雖然玩得時候看不太出來不過我有強迫症 好細緻……移是移了但試打的時候感覺好像又有點偏，又移回來了，汗……
2. 00:13:644 (3,4,5) - 沒有包好 fixed
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:14:603 (1) - 把這個改成note後面的slider往前移，00:14:843 (2) - 這裡其實沒有音 暫時保留
4. 00:14:723 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這邊剛好能弄個星星，擺成這樣玩起來也順一點（那個slider我隨手拉的你看看就好）因上面未改，此處也暫留
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:18:201 (4) - 往下移，讓00:17:481 (3,4,1) - 這三個變成一個V fixed
6. 00:18:441 (1) - 這slider對我來說不太好看阿，拉點酷炫的試試 換了個，就是不知酷不酷炫……
7. 00:23:718 (4) - 加個note和clap？ 好的
8. 00:26:117 (1) - 跳得稍微遠了點 挪得稍近了點
9. 00:28:755 (3) - 弄個折返？ 比較難搞，後面的排列啥的，暫時保留……
10. 00:39:069 (4,5,6) - 移到x:392 y108或是00:38:590 (3) - 弄個折返 改位置了
11. 00:52:981 (1,2,3) - 擺個形狀唄，三角形什麼的 保留……
12. 01:16:488 (2) - 疊好 挪了挪
13. 01:22:245 (2) - ^
14. 01:37:836 (2,3,1,2,3) - 這邊跳得不是很好看 改了
15. 01:41:434 (2) - 疊好 同挪
16. 01:43:113 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 弄個六角形？ 改了另一種跳
    SPOILER

    

[Normal]

1. 00:51:782 (2) - 尾巴的描點往上移一格 fixed
2. 00:55:860 (3) - x:260 y :228，在順時針轉30度 fixed
3. 01:06:414 (1) - 左移一格 fixed
4. 01:17:448 (x) - 加個note或前面的slider弄折返，記得加clap 加了note
5. 01:23:684 (4) - 往右往上一格 fixed
6. 01:52:228 (4,5) - 順著slider往上擺吧 fixed
   SPOILER

   

[Easy]

1. 00:49:623 (2) - 描點往中間一點 fixed
   SPOILER

   

看起來沒什麼問題
就是間距有點太近了
不過這只是我個人的感覺而已 啊啊你萌都這麼說，看來我有必要考慮re一下easy……

謝謝mod!~ 如果看到回復了能不能順便求個MU~ 0v0

From Klaun's modding queue!

Hello, I'm just a Clown modding your map

[General]
- All is fine!

[Easy]
- Also I would use 1,0 distance spacing but it's ok.
- I would lower everthing except CS by 1 point
- 00:05:008(1) - I would put a slider here, but it's only my suggestion!
- 00:26:117(1) - 2 grids up
- All in all - Nice diff.

[Normal]
- 00:55:860(3) - Maybe rotate this slider by 45° clockwise? My suggestion only
- This diff is great, I feel so useless because I couldn't find anything

[Hard]
- 00:05:608(1) - Is this spinner necessary?
- 00:10:765(1,2) - Maybe this: http://puu.sh/65OMd.JPG
- Sorry for short mod, that's all I could find. Good mappers > Good modders DD:

[Your map has been modded by Klaun]

From modding queue
[Easy]
00:05:008 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time.
00:42:427 (2) - v
[Normal]
Good map just one complaint the velocity speed needs to be decreased.
[Hard]
00:39:069 (4,5,6) - spread out
That is it good luck ranking.

Mod from The Tarifying Modding Queue

[Easy]

[Normal]

AR-1
[Hard]

Anyways pretty decent map Good Luck!

Hello, from my modding queue

I'm so sorry, but i didn't find anything wrong in your beatmap, in each difficulty. Like i said, i'm just a noob. Terribely sorry, to make you loose your time.

Klaun wrote:

From Klaun's modding queue!

Hello, I'm just a Clown modding your map

[General]
- All is fine!

[Easy]
- Also I would use 1,0 distance spacing but it's ok. changed distance spacing to 0.9 and re-placed most of the notes
- I would lower everthing except CS by 1 point OD-1
- 00:05:008(1) - I would put a slider here, but it's only my suggestion! prefer the original
- 00:26:117(1) - 2 grids up ^
- All in all - Nice diff. thx~

[Normal]
- 00:55:860(3) - Maybe rotate this slider by 45° clockwise? My suggestion only prefer the original
- This diff is great, I feel so useless because I couldn't find anything

[Hard]
- 00:05:608(1) - Is this spinner necessary? yes,i think it's need to put a spinner here cause of the background music
- 00:10:765(1,2) - Maybe this: http://puu.sh/65OMd.JPG prefer the original
- Sorry for short mod, that's all I could find. Good mappers > Good modders DD:

[Your map has been modded by Klaun]

thx for your mod!~

zorefire wrote:

From modding queue
[Easy]
00:05:008 (1,1) - Not enough recovery time. ok……shortened the spinner before
00:42:427 (2) - v

pic

prefer the original
[Normal]
Good map just one complaint the velocity speed needs to be decreased. then will be a huge work to do……i may consider that
[Hard]
00:39:069 (4,5,6) - spread out ok,fixed
That is it good luck ranking.

thx for your mod!~

Tari wrote:

Mod from The Tarifying Modding Queue

[Easy]

1. 00:07:887 (2,3) - Turn to slider?, the beats your trying here aren't the key notes, so they might be slightly harder to hit, its possible to hit, but I think its better to use slider here, since the beats here aren't as represented, Sliders should be put them, to have some leniency upon them, maybe try this slider shape? http://puu.sh/66a8t.jpg ok,fixed
2. 00:20:360 (1) - Move to y:112 for symmetry reasons? it'll make your map more cleaner, make sure you move your other notes as well to fix the spacing, like this : http://puu.sh/66afn.jpg , The spacing will hardly change. cause i've turned distance spacing from 0.8 to 0.9 in Easy diff,most of the positioning changed,it seems just like this pattern now anyway
3. 00:31:394 (4) -Distance snap? Almost touching, maybe increase DS here a little bit? (its just a little bit off, so I don't think it will be an issue anyways
4. 00:45:306 (1) - Curve the slider a little bit? it flows better, because straight slider makes the flow to next note a little broken. Try something like this if you want : http://puu.sh/66atO.jpg seems fine,fixed
5. 01:37:597 (2) - Little read to read, and the end of the slider is blocked, perhaps if you curve it less, it'll be easier to read for newbies. like this : http://puu.sh/66aEG.jpg would be much better for me ok,fixed
6. 01:39:036 (1) - The slider is shaped weird and doesn't look at its best maybe if you curve it more and curve it the opposite side it'll look more brighter, like this : http://puu.sh/66aOp.jpg fixed
7. 01:49:110 (2,3) - Flows little bad here, maybe put it where the slider suggests and put it in front of the slider, like this : http://puu.sh/66aTn.jpg it requires no other spacing changes, just change placement of circle 3 umm……prefer the original

[Normal]

AR-1 to keep a reasonable difficulty spread(easy-ar3 and hard-ar8),i prefer ar5 here

1. 00:03:809 - I think you should add a note here, that instrument here is pretty strong and deserves to have a note to represent for that instrument. , make sure you stack it. like this : http://puu.sh/66b4N.jpg ok,added
2. 00:08:606 - ^ same as above, add note and stack like this : http://puu.sh/66b80.jpg ^
3. 00:31:873 (1) - Curve it? and make it look like this : http://puu.sh/66bgC.jpg Looks much much better to me fixed
4. 01:15:529 (3,4) - Change to slider? like this: http://puu.sh/66bn2.jpg would be better! prefer the original
5. 01:10:012 - You should add a note here, it feels more better to me. ok,added
6. 01:38:556 (4,5) - Perhaps you can change this one into a slider too, to match with the previous slider change, and it plays much better if you do so here like this : http://puu.sh/66hYK.jpg umm……prefer the original
7. 01:41:914 (2) - Maybe add a finish to start? added finish2 at 01:42:874 (1)

[Hard]

1. 00:03:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe try this arrangement. http://puu.sh/66i85.jpg It looks much better to me and is a simple nice flow pattern prefer the original blanket pattern
2. 00:12:444 (7) - I think you missed a finish here, its not consistent with 00:08:606 (6) - to say the very least. ok,added
3. 00:15:802 (4) - Maybe add a clap here. ^
4. 00:19:400 (3) - Clap to the end of the slider? ok,added a volume decrease one
5. 00:27:076 (6) - Finish sounds nice here at the start ok,fixed
6. 00:34:992 (4) - Clap sounds nice here. added
7. 00:36:910 (4) - Same here, clap sounds nice actually i don't think there is a clap sound in background music here,even a slight one……
8. 00:38:590 (3) - Clap to the end of the slider too added
9. 00:42:667 (6) - Clap to the start ^
10. 00:50:103 (3) - To the end of the slider add clap ^
11. 00:53:941 (3) - To end of slider add clap >.> ^
12. 01:09:532 (4) - Orz, I think you know where to put claps by now yeah,i know that 0v0 also added in Normal diff

Anyways pretty decent map Good Luck!

thx a lot for your mod!~

Winek wrote:

Hello, from my modding queue

I'm so sorry, but i didn't find anything wrong in your beatmap, in each difficulty. Like i said, i'm just a noob. Terribely sorry, to make you loose your time.

there is no need to say sorry,i believe that you've tried,so,thank you all the same~

Mod from my queue

after a first glance, this map looks really nicely done. Let's see if I can actually find anything. Note that mostly anything I mod here is just ideas or suggestions. You really don't have any noticeable errors.

[General]
Source:
Is the source really "Pili Series" or is it just "Pili" | http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pili_(TV_series) | just labels it as "Pili" but I'm not sure if this is the same thing or not. If you wanted, you could use 霹靂 as the source and have Pili in the tags.

Romanised Artist:
Shouldn't this be "Everything But The Culture" (Apparently they write "But" and "The" in capitals on their website. | You have it in your description, but not the tags or anything. I'm not very good with chinese but do they prefer EBTC or Everything But The Culture? I looked on the website and the logo at the top says it in full. http://www.ebtc.com.tw/ | If you look at an artist profile, they're listed under "Everything But The Culture" | If you plan on using just EBTC, at least add Everything But The Culture to the tags

Tags:
Remove: Pili or 霹靂 | whatever one you use as the source.
Everything But The Culture or EBTC | Depends what you choose to use.

I'm not sure who, but on the site, it looks like there is a bunch of different composers. Do they compose their own music or are they one whole band? Maybe add the name of the person who actually composed this. (I can't find who did this song)

Hitsounds:
Blank .wav file for the silder slide? | http://puu.sh/67tgz | Your song would sound much better without the scratchy noises from the soft sampleset. | Add one for both SC:2 and SC:1

Sorry I can't be much more help. I'm not good at all with Chinese.. Hopefully something can help though.

[Easy]
HP:2? | Why not? It'll lower the difficulty a bit for new players | From fail, it takes a 42 combo of all 300s on HP3 to fill the gague back up to full. It takes a 34 combo on HP2.

1. 00:00:931 (1,1) - How about moving these to x256 y216 so you'll have the correct distance snap between the (1) circle and the upcoming (2) slider
2. 00:06:927 (1) - whistle instead of finish? It works nicely with 00:03:089 (1) - It's kind of a bit early to be using this finish here as this is a measure before the correct upcoming section that you've been using finishes on.
3. 00:07:887 (2) - Maybe start this 1/2 earlier? This slider actually doesn't hit anything audible in the song on the head.
4. 00:13:164 (1) - Have you considered ending this 1/2 later on the first clap and where the shamisen(?) ends?
5. 00:26:117 (1,2) - Give a bit more curve to the (1) so you can move the (2) a bit further down. | http://puu.sh/67xoY.jpg | The reason is because the look of (2) and (3) doesn't really have any flow to it. This gives a bit more direction and generally feels/looks nicer.
6. 00:27:076 (2) - any reason why you don't have claps on all three points to this? I feel the head could at least use one.
7. 00:52:981 (1) - I feel like there is a bit too many spinners in this map. something like this could easily be changed to something like this if you wanted | http://puu.sh/67xKy.jpg | or you could use the upcoming pattern at 00:54:900 (1,2,3) - as well.
8. 00:56:819 - to 01:00:177 - Any reason why you skipped mapping this section? Actually after looking at all of your diffs, you have your break here. I would suggest being consistent if possible and have this as a break, and map back at 00:33:792 - | This means removing the notes up until 01:04:495 (1) -
9. 01:01:617 (2) - Clap on the reverse. | Double clap hit here, and really should be mapped.
10. 01:05:455 (3,2) - shouldn't these two be switched to catch the claps? (reverse slider where (3) is and 1/1 slider where (2) is)
11. 01:09:292 (3) - You can also convert this into a 1/2 reverse as well if you want and add another clap. Just adds a bit of variety and follows the music better.
12. 01:16:968 (2,1) - Move either the (2) up or the (1) down. The (1) feels like it should be a bit lower than the (2) but you have it almost horizontal from each other.
13. 01:22:485 (2) - x408 y112 for better looks/flow
14. 01:28:482 (3) - 01:36:157 (2) - Claps on the reverse?
15. 01:33:279 (1,2) - Just a small suggestion. | http://puu.sh/67zQj.jpg | Doing something like this will make it look quite a bit nicer. right now you kind of have a poor angle on the (2) and the (1) could probably work fine perfectly horizontal. Again, just an idea.
16. 01:39:995 (2,1,2,3) - Drag all of these, with DS on to around x356 y356. | Then reposition the second (2) so it goes off the top left end better of the (1)'s tail. | http://puu.sh/67AlW.jpg | After that, reposition the (3) wherever you feel it fits best.
17. 01:47:671 (3) - If you've been using the clap suggestions I've said, then this is a good spot to use a reverse slider as well. and maybe remove the reverse on 01:49:110 (2) - if you wanted.

Nice difficulty :3

[Normal]
This normal is nicely designed for the most part.

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Spinner New Combo | You'll get asked to do this eventually, so might as well.
01:48:390 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.

1. 00:00:931 (1,2) - since this is still a normal, How about using a slider here instead? Hitting the first note (as a circle) of a song without any music playing before is really frustrating sometimes. Especially since the first circle is a lead-in.
2. 00:04:529 (4) - to catch both the horn thing, and the shamisen, maybe end this 1/2 earlier and add a circle where the tail used to be at 00:05:008 - or just turn this into a 1/2 reverse slider.
3. 00:07:647 (2) - I'm wondering about this tail. It doesn't really land on anything. if you extend it 1/2 further it hits those drums. Just an idea but maybe try this? | http://puu.sh/67VmR.jpg
4. 00:12:444 (4,1) - Maybe stack the (4) on the (1) and then move them into Distance Snap range? | This is mostly just because of the sharp angle you have going from (3) -> (4) -> (1)
5. 00:21:319 (2,3) - (2) x124 y52 | (3) x104 y124 | This does ruin the x136 you've been following, but it does create a little better flow. Either way is fine, just wanted to give an alternative option if you don't like how straight it looks.
6. 00:26:117 (1,2) - how about having these the same angle? Control+G the (2) and stack it on the (1). Adjust the tail to end of either (1) or (2) and then control+g and place (2) back to where it used to be | http://puu.sh/67WgU.jpg | Not sure if you want them to be similar, but the idea is there if you want to use it.
7. 00:32:833 (3,1) - 0.88 distance gap?
8. 00:49:144 (1,2,3) - How about turning the (3) into a reverse slider to help catch the double clap? You could also reposition the (1,2,3) to look a bit better as well. | http://puu.sh/67WF4.jpg is something I came up with while still trying to be similar to what you had before.
9. 00:51:063 (1,3) - I'm actually worried this might not pass for a normal. The reason being is that the first slider doesn't even have time to fade before the next one appears which can make it really hard to read for some people. Don't change it just yet, but maybe ask a BAT what they think. Me myself, I'm pretty sure this won't pass in a Normal.
10. 00:55:860 (3) - nazi. Drag the middle node out a hair so the ends don't overlap
11. 01:06:414 (1) - nazi. Drag to x232 y200 to make a better triangle.
12. 01:16:728 (2,3,4) - Move the (2) down a bit | Move the (3) to up a bit | and then adjust the (4) to Distance Snap... or just make it something similar to this. http://puu.sh/67X8c.jpg | The reason being is that the angle from (3,4) is way to sharp, and it doesn't flow nice at all. Having the gradual increase here between each note makes it a bit less awkward.
13. 01:20:566 (2,3) - Swap the slider and the circle placements on the timeline. fits the music much better. | http://puu.sh/67Xdm.jpg | You can add a clap on (2)'s end as well if you want.
14. 01:29:441 (1,2) - I was really hoping you'd follow the music a bit better here. 3/4 reverse slider would suit the song so much better. | http://puu.sh/67Xlm.jpg
15. 01:37:117 (1,2,3) - ^
16. 01:48:630 (1,3) - One last thing. I'm not really a big fan of how the angles coming off these notes are. I feel the (1) should be a bit lower (coordinate with 01:47:671 (3,4) - a bit) and possibly the (3) would be better if approached from below instead of above?

This normal is really nice as well

[Hard]
Really nice map. The only thing that really bugs me is the one 1/4 slider that doesn't really fit.

1. 00:04:289 (3,4,5) - how about following the shamisen here? turn the (3) into a reverse 1/4 slider ending at (4)? and then moving the (5) to where the (4) used to be?
2. 00:08:846 (1,2) - Take a slider and do this on an open spot on the timeline: http://puu.sh/67YGF.jpg | Basically draw a line from (1) past (2) and then adjust (2) so it gets the correct angle. | Don't forget to delete the slider afterwards XD | This just basically creates a proper angle so the (2) reverse slider can compliment (1,3) better. Basically right now it looks like this | http://puu.sh/67YQu.jpg
4. 00:09:806 (4,5,6,7,8) - Place a slider on (4) and draw a slider similar to the shape you currently have, ending at the same spot (8) is| http://puu.sh/67Z7q.jpg | Delete (5,6,7,8) | Click the slider and go to Compose -> Convert Slider to Stream | This basically creates 1.00 distance snapped circles between each note. You currently have a few notes placed with 0.91 1.09 apart etc... Try using this technique on all the streams you make so they can be properly spaced.
5. 00:14:603 (1,2) - You only use this once through your whole map and it seems really uncalled for. I honestly think this would play better as two circles or just one 1/2 circle. Also, this jump seems a bit too excessive for a hard, and maybe because the music right now really doesn't suit it. Maybe you can move the previous (7) a bit closer?
6. 00:26:476 (3) - honestly this 1/4 part would sound better placed at 00:25:997 - to follow the music, but you'd have to do a lot of rearranging.
7. 00:40:508 (3,5) - how about making the (5) symmetrical with the (3)'s tail? This would also make (6) symmetrical with the head of (3) if done right.
8. 00:46:025 (2,3) - blanket could be much better on this. | While it won't be perfect, try putting the Red node at x408 y216 | the 2nd white node at x464 y240 and readjust as you see fit.
9. 00:47:465 (2) - nazi. Drag the tail to x148 y336 for a bit more balance. (Try drawing a slider from the tail end and see how much you cover on each side of the circles.. Not 100% accurate but it gives a good estimate) | This is what you currently have | http://puu.sh/67ZHe.jpg
10. 00:50:583 (5) - nazi. with both Grid Snap and Distance Snap on. Shift+Click the note and drag. so you get 1.02 DS instead of 1.07 in these 1/4 notes.
11. 00:52:502 (6,7,1) - Since you have a gap between (7,1) why not try moving the (6) a bit lower, and the (7) a bit further up? | http://puu.sh/680b6.jpg to emphasize on the jump a little more.
12. 00:54:421 (4,5,6,7,8) - again, try to make a converted slider stream here so all of the notes are evenly spaced. These range from 0.96 to 1.07 in spacing so it's quite a bit.
13. 00:56:340 (3) - clap on tail?
14. 01:22:725 (3,4,5,6,7) - ranges from 0.96 to 1.08 | again, convert a slider to stream here.
15. 01:31:360 (1,5) - how about making (5)'s head a vertical flip of (1)? It will end up being 1.01 DS so you won't have to adjust anything
16. 01:34:958 (5) - even distance spacing? | Try x160 y176 for 1.71 DS
17. 01:37:117 (1,2) - Not sure on this rhythm choice here. You've been doing lots of 3/4 sliders with a circle or slider after it for parts of the song similar to this... so why not here as well?
18. 01:42:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/680ti.jpg | Self explanatory. Try to use this technique to improve on a pattern like this | Tips: Draw one slider, and then copy + paste and horizontally flip it so it'll be even. Place them on the blue ticks so you don't have to delete any circles.. Delete them afterwards of course :p

That's it. Really nicely designed Hard. Hopefully something in here can be useful.. Only use what you like as they are mostly just ideas/suggestions.


Take a

from my modding queues~

tellertheworld wrote:

from my modding queues~ hi~

hard

00:03:809 (1) - ( 00:04:049 (2,3,4,5,6) - 是古爭音組 而這個有點不同 可以試試放另外一處或者和00:04:049 (2) - 重疊) 暫時保留
00:07:887 (4) - x:60 y:107 流順性問題 ok,fixed
00:11:245 (2) - X:81 Y:120 fixed
00:40:508 (3) - 不應該用SLIDER 突顯不了後面的木笛長音 可以00:40:269 (2,3) - ctrl+g ok,fixed
01:08:333 (1) - 這個是古爭的兩震音 可以試試短的反彈slider 暫時保留
01:16:488 (2) - X:126 Y:121 fixed
01:22:245 (2) - X:401 Y:77 fixed
01:23:684 - 可以放個圈/ slider 2/4在這裡 後面的spinner壓後但在現在同樣的地方完結 ok,fixed
01:30:401 - 這個位是重音 應在這位放個圈 如果放了圈的話應刪01:30:640 (3) - * 保留
01:32:319 (4) - 這個節奏有點奇怪 節奏上是可以這樣改，就是排列難辦，等我想想……

試試這個節奏- 01:37:357 - ^ 唔，保留

試試這個節奏- 01:32:679 - ^ (與你風格不同 試試用你的風格改一改) ^
01:38:316 (1) - 可刪除 前面重音 高潮段還是希望節奏滿一些，雖然感覺刪了也還不錯但是……未刪 QvQ



*節奏重音 建議加一點(圈/開始slider): (可無視)
00:11:605 - 這裡加上了
00:15:323 -
00:27:796 -
00:39:909 -
00:51:782 -
01:18:287 -
01:21:526 -
01:31:720 -
01:32:080 -
01:39:395 -

方向角度沒有太大問題
但節奏覺得有時與音不協調 需要注意
重疊有點不到位
中樂只有5個音? 不同樂器放的slider和圈的方式有點分別 可以突顯歌的節奏喔~
加油喔~ 好小中樂map

謝謝mod!~

Hi~
M4M!
They're mainly suggestions, feel free to ignore them but tell me the reason so I'll do better next time.

General
古风点赞!!
fine.

Easy
00:05:008 (1) - 转盘的音感觉有点空,考虑soft whistle.
00:27:076 (2) - 不太好读 Easy可能不适合放
01:07:373 (2) - reverse漏了一个clap
01:18:887 (2) - ^

Normal
作为N来说1/2有点多..有点像hard了,不过bpm低,应该没问题?
00:06:927 (1,2) - 我建议从右边开始,因为前面那段是左边.
00:23:958 (4) - 往右移一点 好看
00:36:671 (2,3,4) - 做成reverse滑条吧 感觉有点难
00:38:590 (2,3,4) - ^
01:44:792 (1) - 加个note然后把spinner移到01:44:792 - 开始,结束时间不变

Hard
00:16:522 (1) - Ctrl+G
00:37:150 (5,6,7) - Spacing
00:52:981 (1,2) - 我还是建议用00:37:630 (1,2) - 这种节奏
01:38:076 (3,1) - 2.48x的跳... Hard里柑橘不用这么大把
01:43:113 (1) - NC

Hard的难度有点尴尬,比一般的hard难,节奏密度又够不上Insane.建议多做一个Insane.感觉还有不少节奏可以挖掘,01:23:924 (1) - 比如这个转盘.考虑overmap来做。

总体感觉Normal和Hard偏难,跟Easy的gap比较大。要不把Normal和Hard稍微弄简单点再加个Insane?
音效很厉害,我身为音效盲只能崇拜_(:з」∠)_不过音量上感觉可以再大声点,现在打起来实感不太够

Good luck!

看看看看……又是一个insane难度的建议

我觉得吧……你老是说弄人性点服务道友，难道你希望你道友DTHD完你的hard就放那不动了吗，弄个insane吧少年！……不对不对……少女！……overmap是osu的习俗恶俗~~

Oracle wrote:

Hi~ hi~
M4M!
They're mainly suggestions, feel free to ignore them but tell me the reason so I'll do better next time.

General
古风点赞!! 谢谢～
fine.

Easy
00:05:008 (1) - 转盘的音感觉有点空,考虑soft whistle. 那里本来就没有音的说……
00:27:076 (2) - 不太好读 Easy可能不适合放 这里如果要是换别种节奏那就照顾不到曲子本身了……会考虑一下
01:07:373 (2) - reverse漏了一个clap 其实是每隔一节在第三红线上出clap，应该是在01:05:694那里，会考虑把两个滑条换掉
01:18:887 (2) - ^ 道理同上

Normal
作为N来说1/2有点多..有点像hard了,不过bpm低,应该没问题?
00:06:927 (1,2) - 我建议从右边开始,因为前面那段是左边. 这个要改后边一长串可就难了，于是索性把前面那点扔右边了。不错的建议
00:23:958 (4) - 往右移一点 好看 fixed
00:36:671 (2,3,4) - 做成reverse滑条吧 感觉有点难 原地好像也不太难吧……前面已经是折返滑条了这里就想有点变化，不过会考虑改掉
00:38:590 (2,3,4) - ^
01:44:792 (1) - 加个note然后把spinner移到01:44:792 - 开始,结束时间不变 ok,fixed

Hard
00:16:522 (1) - Ctrl+G fixed
00:37:150 (5,6,7) - Spacing lol这里还真是，fixed
00:52:981 (1,2) - 我还是建议用00:37:630 (1,2) - 这种节奏 这里换跟轨了的说，跟的管弦乐（？），因为这里笛音是个长尾音，4/3已经不太合适了
01:38:076 (3,1) - 2.48x的跳... Hard里柑橘不用这么大把 ok,fixed
01:43:113 (1) - NC 暂时保留

Hard的难度有点尴尬,比一般的hard难,节奏密度又够不上Insane.建议多做一个Insane.感觉还有不少节奏可以挖掘,01:23:924 (1) - 比如这个转盘.考虑overmap来做。

总体感觉Normal和Hard偏难,跟Easy的gap比较大。要不把Normal和Hard稍微弄简单点再加个Insane? 个人经验还不太够，想再多练练再去尝试overmap :3
音效很厉害,我身为音效盲只能崇拜_(:з」∠)_不过音量上感觉可以再大声点,现在打起来实感不太够

Good luck!

回复得晚了点，抱歉哈，谢谢你的mod!~

zengdaen wrote:

看看看看……又是一个insane难度的建议

我觉得吧……你老是说弄人性点服务道友，难道你希望你道友DTHD完你的hard就放那不动了吗，弄个insane吧少年！……不对不对……少女！……overmap是osu的习俗恶俗~~

你以为我道友都那么触啊，上手就DTHD咧…… →_→

Hi ,

Here is the promised mod:

[Easy]
Rhythm

1. 00:06:927 (1,2) - The 3/2 gap are not really liked by beginner player since it's a little bit more difficult to play by them. That's why i would suggest to use this rythm:
   
   I also think this rhythm is better since each slider follow it's on instrument. (Where, in your case, 00:07:647 (2) follow a particuliar instrument at the start and another one at the end)
2. 00:24:198 (1) - Maybe turn this into a 1/2 beat slider starting from 00:23:958. Not only because of the 3/2 gap this time but also because the note at 00:23:958 is quite powerful and also simillar to those you follow with 00:22:279 (1,2) so skipping it feels weird while playing.
3. 01:16:728 - I don't really understood while you skipped this note and 01:18:67. They are reall powerful and again it feel weird not playing them. Especially because 01:16:968 (2,2) follows a way more quiet instrument.
4. 01:29:441 (1,2) - Maybe change it like this? I think the notes at 01:29:801 and 01:30:161 are worth being played.
   
5. 01:37:117 (1,2) - ^ (Besides the music is the same than at 01:29:441 but the rhythm you follow is different here oddly)

[Normal]
Rhythm

1. 00:05:488 (1) - Since it's a normal and not an easy i think you can start the spinner 1/2 beat earlier.
2. 00:31:633 - Add a note. The note in the music is one of those you followed at 00:26:117 (1,2,1) so why not here too?
3. 01:23:444 (3) - I think you should remove this note or add one at 01:21:526. Because when i hear the song i hear 01:19:846 to 01:21:526 and 01:21:765 to 01:23:444 i hear the same rhythm si imo the notes 01:21:526 and 01:23:444 should be either both played ot not played.
4. 01:28:242 - Add a note? Look at 01:35:198 (1,2,3,4). Same thing musically and you put one here! So by consistancy there should be one at 01:28:242 too.
5. 01:32:319 (3) - I think you should modify the rhythm here because there is a note right at the middle of the slider that you skipped.

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:31:873 (1) - Maybe cruve it a little bit more in order to have a smoother flow from 1 to 2.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:50:070 (3) - (nazi) Move the 2nd slider point 1 grid left for a better blanket.
3. 01:50:549 (1) - Same as 00:31:873 (1).

[Hard]
Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:03:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Even if most of the 1/4 in your map follow the drum i still think that you should add a note at 00:04:409. Besides, i also think you can avoid the back and forth 00:04:529 (5,6,7) which doesn't have a really good flow imo. Maybe you could finish your pattern like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   (and move 00:03:809 (1) where you prefer)
2. 00:39:309 (6,1) - the jump should be made differently imo. Jump x2 in a map with a ds of x1 is quite hard for usual hard players so when you are in a situation like this with the flow of the jump really weird it's really difficult to play. I think you can keep your x2 jump but improve the flow here making the jump more pleasant to play but still just as difficult. Maybe something like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   (and move 00:39:549 (1) further away from 00:39:309 (6) in that case)
3. 00:50:823 (6,1) - Why no jump x2 like at 00:46:985 (4,1)? It's the same powerful notes!
4. 01:06:414 (1,2) - Usually you put jump x2 in your map wich match powerful notes in the music but oddly you have one here but nothing strong in the music.
5. 01:21:286 (4,1) - x2.87.... This jump is a little bit exagerated compared to the others. It's just a hard. You use nearly all the time jump x2 so having suddenly a jump x2.87 is really strange and hard to play!
6. 01:35:678 (2,3) - ^
7. 01:36:637 (4,1) - No jump here? Come on! These note are quite powerful!
8. 01:40:955 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ok those jump are more understandable. Even if still think they are a little bit too exagerated they are quite justified by the song. But still think 01:21:286 (4,1) and 01:35:678 (2,3) are not.

Pretty cool and interesting mapset! Here, take my star ^^
And Good luck!

rezoons wrote:

Hi , hi!~

Here is the promised mod:

[Easy]
Rhythm

1. 00:06:927 (1,2) - The 3/2 gap are not really liked by beginner player since it's a little bit more difficult to play by them. That's why i would suggest to use this rythm: seems fine,fixed
   
   I also think this rhythm is better since each slider follow it's on instrument. (Where, in your case, 00:07:647 (2) follow a particuliar instrument at the start and another one at the end)
2. 00:24:198 (1) - Maybe turn this into a 1/2 beat slider starting from 00:23:958. Not only because of the 3/2 gap this time but also because the note at 00:23:958 is quite powerful and also simillar to those you follow with 00:22:279 (1,2) so skipping it feels weird while playing. you're right,fixed
3. 01:16:728 - I don't really understood while you skipped this note and 01:18:67. They are reall powerful and again it feel weird not playing them. Especially because 01:16:968 (2,2) follows a way more quiet instrument. adding these two notes at red lines may be a bit hard for an easy diff, i will consider that
4. 01:29:441 (1,2) - Maybe change it like this? I think the notes at 01:29:801 and 01:30:161 are worth being played. ok,fixed
   
5. 01:37:117 (1,2) - ^ (Besides the music is the same than at 01:29:441 but the rhythm you follow is different here oddly) here prefer the original, cause i want to make the mapset with more different rhythm patterns

[Normal]
Rhythm

1. 00:05:488 (1) - Since it's a normal and not an easy i think you can start the spinner 1/2 beat earlier. ok,fixed
2. 00:31:633 - Add a note. The note in the music is one of those you followed at 00:26:117 (1,2,1) so why not here too? changed it to a 1/2 slider
3. 01:23:444 (3) - I think you should remove this note or add one at 01:21:526. Because when i hear the song i hear 01:19:846 to 01:21:526 and 01:21:765 to 01:23:444 i hear the same rhythm si imo the notes 01:21:526 and 01:23:444 should be either both played ot not played. umm……keep the original
4. 01:28:242 - Add a note? Look at 01:35:198 (1,2,3,4). Same thing musically and you put one here! So by consistancy there should be one at 01:28:242 too. not add here, that will be a bit dense rhythm
5. 01:32:319 (3) - I think you should modify the rhythm here because there is a note right at the middle of the slider that you skipped. will consider that

Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:31:873 (1) - Maybe cruve it a little bit more in order to have a smoother flow from 1 to 2. fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:50:070 (3) - (nazi) Move the 2nd slider point 1 grid left for a better blanket. fixed
3. 01:50:549 (1) - Same as 00:31:873 (1). fixed

[Hard]
Placement/Aesthetic

1. 00:03:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Even if most of the 1/4 in your map follow the drum i still think that you should add a note at 00:04:409. Besides, i also think you can avoid the back and forth 00:04:529 (5,6,7) which doesn't have a really good flow imo. Maybe you could finish your pattern like this: added note, but keep the pattern
   
   SPOILER

   
   (and move 00:03:809 (1) where you prefer)
2. 00:39:309 (6,1) - the jump should be made differently imo. Jump x2 in a map with a ds of x1 is quite hard for usual hard players so when you are in a situation like this with the flow of the jump really weird it's really difficult to play. I think you can keep your x2 jump but improve the flow here making the jump more pleasant to play but still just as difficult. Maybe something like this? ok,fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
   (and move 00:39:549 (1) further away from 00:39:309 (6) in that case)
3. 00:50:823 (6,1) - Why no jump x2 like at 00:46:985 (4,1)? It's the same powerful notes! adding too many jump patterns is not so good i think……prefer the original
4. 01:06:414 (1,2) - Usually you put jump x2 in your map wich match powerful notes in the music but oddly you have one here but nothing strong in the music. no change here
5. 01:21:286 (4,1) - x2.87.... This jump is a little bit exagerated compared to the others. It's just a hard. You use nearly all the time jump x2 so having suddenly a jump x2.87 is really strange and hard to play! ok,fixed
6. 01:35:678 (2,3) - ^ fixed
7. 01:36:637 (4,1) - No jump here? Come on! These note are quite powerful! prefer the original
8. 01:40:955 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ok those jump are more understandable. Even if still think they are a little bit too exagerated they are quite justified by the song. But still think 01:21:286 (4,1) and 01:35:678 (2,3) are not. i will consider that

Pretty cool and interesting mapset! Here, take my star ^^
And Good luck!

thx a lot for your helpful mod and star!~

from my queue
不好意思來晚了，這幾天稍稍有點懶 =v=

[General]

[Hard]
00:05:608 (1) - 從00:05:728 開始
00:06:927 (1,2) - 我建議用滑條，因為很像1/2節奏，容易誤讀。
00:39:549 (1) - 弄成3/4slider再加一個note，因為覺得00:39:909 有音
01:07:373 (3,4,5,6) - 不如弄成一個正方形
01:37:117 (1,2) - 節奏不太對很好的圖

[Normal]
cs-1? 還有sv略快
01:37:117 (1) - 3/4音
01:44:553 (5) - 最好不要疊在下面，這對nm來說比較難

[Easy]
00:41:468 (1,2) - blanket好一點吧，現在這樣不上不下的不好看
01:12:171 (1,2) - 1/2銜接最好不要在最低難度出現
01:14:090 (1,2) - ^
01:19:846 (1,2) - ^
01:21:765 (1,2) - ^
相同的地方就不說了

整體是張不錯的圖
GL！

615915887 wrote:

from my queue
不好意思來晚了，這幾天稍稍有點懶 =v= 没关系，来了就好

[General]

[Hard]
00:05:608 (1) - 從00:05:728 開始 这里本来是这样的，但被AIBAT挑出时间过短，没办法就提前了点
00:06:927 (1,2) - 我建議用滑條，因為很像1/2節奏，容易誤讀。 啊？感觉这二连还挺好认的，不过既然这么说了那就改成滑条好了
00:39:549 (1) - 弄成3/4slider再加一個note，因為覺得00:39:909 有音 唔，这里先保留，试着改了改觉得不是很顺手……
01:07:373 (3,4,5,6) - 不如弄成一個正方形 斜向的平行flow感觉好一些，就先不改啦
01:37:117 (1,2) - 節奏不太對

試試這樣？

这里节奏确实不太对，换成3/4折返滑条了
很好的圖 谢谢～

[Normal]
cs-1? 還有sv略快 感觉还行
01:37:117 (1) - 3/4音 这里不是很好改，后面的排列啥的，我再想想
01:44:553 (5) - 最好不要疊在下面，這對nm來說比較難 fixed

[Easy]
00:41:468 (1,2) - blanket好一點吧，現在這樣不上不下的不好看 这里本意就不是要包的说，挪了下试试要包的话离很近更不好看，我再想想
01:12:171 (1,2) - 1/2銜接最好不要在最低難度出現 这些地方要不这样真不知该咋整了，古筝音和笛音那么明显，别的节奏会显得很odd，俩滑条接大概也不算很难，吧……orz
01:14:090 (1,2) - ^
01:19:846 (1,2) - ^
01:21:765 (1,2) - ^
相同的地方就不說了

整體是張不錯的圖
GL！

谢谢你的mod！～

砸了3PC……提点均衡难度的建议

连打实在太远，降点距离感觉顺点，后面那个加间距的跳不太人道，最后两个跳弄近点吧，你不希望这是个平时随手连到梗断成屎的图吧，高潮难度太低，建议用note换滑条或者距离改用1.2或者SV*1.1。

顺便一提……NC略喜感……

zengdaen wrote:

SPOILER

砸了3PC……提点均衡难度的建议

连打实在太远，降点距离感觉顺点，后面那个加间距的跳不太人道，最后两个跳弄近点吧，你不希望这是个平时随手连到梗断成屎的图吧，高潮难度太低，建议用note换滑条或者距离改用1.2或者SV*1.1。

顺便一提……NC略喜感……

how old are you 为何要开DT，不谙风情之人……【大雾
这么低的BPM，连打那样还好啦……KIAI TIME我记得我用的是1.4间距啊orz 那个加间距跳，不开DT的话很简单的啦，就说你不要自虐嘛 /.\
NC不是按一db一NC来的么，喜感何在……如果是没有照顾到排列上的pattern的话，这是喜感的原因？……

[General]

1. 你好啊，这图还行啊，有潜力！

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[Easy]



[Normal]

[Hard]

1. ~

音效不错，继续加油，这图要是咱的话就给你过了

不过这个图最大的缺点就是1/4过多,有些地方原来音乐的节奏没有表现出来，虽然用1/4碾压没啥问题.....还有些小小的细节问题需要处理，总体不错

Rotte wrote:

[General]

1. 你好啊，这图还行啊，有潜力！

谢谢^ ^

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[Easy]

No Problem

• Rhythm

• Sound Effect

[Normal]

• Rhythm

1. 00:28:035 (1,2) - 2有些难看，和1组合起来的话。 嗯，把2的弧度整小点了
2. 00:51:782 (2,3) - 3的最适flow位置是184|220左右，原先这样有些不好看呐而且flow也不太好。 这里原先3是叠在那个折返滑条上的，但怀疑unrankable，所以就改成这样了……试了试放在那不太好改后面的排列啥的，我再想想吧
3. 01:21:765 (1) - 这样试试看，既美观打起来又舒服。 嗯，确实，fixed

• Sound Effect

1. ~

[Hard]

1. ~

• Rhythm

1. 00:22:998 (3) - 有点丑 改成别的形状了
2. 00:52:022 (3,4,5) - 这个overmap有些不好，音乐本身一点声音都没，如果一定要加，建议添加个音效会好听些，不然打起来只会觉得突然一座山压过来的感觉。 ok, 把4删掉了

• Sound Effect

1. 00:06:927 - whistle去掉 这里突出一下高音，另两个难度也是这样，就先保留

音效不错，继续加油，这图要是咱的话就给你过了

不过这个图最大的缺点就是1/4过多,有些地方原来音乐的节奏没有表现出来，虽然用1/4碾压没啥问题.....还有些小小的细节问题需要处理，总体不错

谢谢你的mod和星！～

早安 From queue

[General]
图好 没啥可说的了 以下都是我的个人意见 有破坏整体感的请尽管无视没关系

[Easy]

01:23:684 (1) - 拉到01:27:042 - 结束

[Normal]

00:00:931 (1,2) - 做成一个在上面一个在下面是不是更好
00:53:941 (2) - 这个我感觉应该下在前面的红线上……
00:54:900 (1,2,3) - 总觉得现在的下法有点浪费2/3

[Hard]

00:00:931 (1,2) - 同normal 拆开放
00:11:605 (3,4) - 换成1/4滑条之后只用点蓝线那一下 我感觉更合曲
00:44:106 (3,4,5,6) - 往下挪一点
01:23:444 (8) - nc？

确实没啥好提的啊 完成度很高了 找个人泡一泡吧

Eggache0 wrote:

早安 From queue hi~

[General]
图好 没啥可说的了 以下都是我的个人意见 有破坏整体感的请尽管无视没关系

[Easy]

01:23:684 (1) - 拉到01:27:042 - 结束 ok, fixed

[Normal]

00:00:931 (1,2) - 做成一个在上面一个在下面是不是更好 嗯，也行，fixed
00:53:941 (2) - 这个我感觉应该下在前面的红线上…… 这里先保留
00:54:900 (1,2,3) - 总觉得现在的下法有点浪费2/3 好建议，把前面那三个改成折返滑条了

[Hard]

00:00:931 (1,2) - 同normal 拆开放 hard就不拆啦，ar8也比较好读
00:11:605 (3,4) - 换成1/4滑条之后只用点蓝线那一下 我感觉更合曲 嗯，可以，fixed
00:44:106 (3,4,5,6) - 往下挪一点 fixed
01:23:444 (8) - nc？ 感觉好像没必要的样子……

确实没啥好提的啊 完成度很高了 找个人泡一泡吧 嗯，再等等吧，还可以完善一下～^ ^

谢谢你的mod!~

offset -747 别两条线了……
[Easy]
00:31:873 (1) - Start at 00:31:633 - end at 00:34:752 -
[Normal]
Nothing
[Hard]
00:22:327 (3) - 提前到00:05:008 -
01:42:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 过难
……先这样吧

ts8zs wrote:

这是野生的mod君吗 lol，还是从Narcissu的queue里做M4M来的……总之，能来看这么冷门的曲子的图很感谢
offset -747 别两条线了…… 试了一下貌似unsnap的绿线会很多，就先这样吧，之后如果有BAT挑的话再改
[Easy]
00:31:873 (1) - Start at 00:31:633 - end at 00:34:752 - 提前了，结束时间没变
[Normal]
Nothing
[Hard]
00:22:327 (3) - 提前到00:05:008 - 这一条……看不太懂啊 ;w; 是不是note复制错了……
01:42:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 过难 还好啦，我这种的都能轻松过，看着难实际上在这么低的BPM下并不算难……再不整点跳啊啥的这图真的会很无聊
……先这样吧

谢谢mod～

华语mapper 加油> <...

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

华语mapper 加油> <...

谢谢支持～ *^_^*

Ello, mod from queue
Damn. Now this is some fine music you don't often see every day on osu! I absolutely love your taste in music!
Take my star ~ Good luck!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod from queue hi~

[General]
*BG should be 1366x768 or 768 in dimension for best quality image during game play. can't find larger-sized one of this BG pic

[Easy]
00:27:076 (2,1) - slightly too close to each other. Shift 00:28:035 (1) - and you'll see it. ok, fixed
00:35:711 (1) - Feel free to add a note here to hit the loud strum of that stringed instrument heard in the music. prefer to keep this break time, no change
00:43:867 (2,1) - Why not create a blanket here? Blankets usually help create a smoother flow within the objects. fine idea, fixed
01:46:711 (3) - NC umm……here before a spinner, so no change

[Normal]
00:14:603 (1,2) - Sliders are just slightly too far apart. ok, fixed
00:44:106 (2) - Move more to the left, and shift 00:44:346 (3) - up a bit so the flow isn't a dull straight line across the objects 00:43:387 (1,2,3) - nice, fixed

01:27:522 (3) - NC, since it's the first object to appear in Kai. ok, added
01:52:468 (5) - NC? the last note, perhaps don't need NC, so no change

[Hard]
AR - 1? no, ar8 is easier to read
01:14:809 (2,3) - Try swapping the notes, so that the slider starts after the hit circle instead. Sounds better imo. You can even turn 01:14:809 (2) - and 01:15:769 (4) - into a 1/2 slider after placing 01:14:809 (2) - on 01:15:529. seems fine, fixed
01:48:630 (2) - NC, since it's first object to appear at the end of Kai. maybe a little weird, no change

Damn. Now this is some fine music you don't often see every day on osu! I absolutely love your taste in music! glad that you like this song~
Take my star ~ Good luck!

thx a lot for your mod and star!~

There are many other cool BG's that you could also use for this song Here's some that I managed to find for this map. Try them out, and see if you like any of them:





But if you're really content on keeping your current BG, then by no means am I going to force you to use the ones above.

No kuds. Hope this map gets ranked soon!

@10crystalmask01
wow, i'm really surprised and curious how could you find these Pili pics!! this TV series isn't famous at all even in Chinese area. thx a lot for your BG help!~ but as you see, this song is a character's theme song, that character's name is Qing Haichao (擎海潮 in Chinese), the one on the current BG. these three pics you found are from Pili series indeed, but all of them aren't Qing Haichao himself, two of them are Jian Zi Xian Ji (剑子仙迹 in Chinese) and the other one is Wu Mengsheng (无梦生 in Chinese). i know maybe they are look like the same one in eyes of people who don't know much about this series. so as the reason, i may keep the current BG thank you all the same!~ through mapping such songs from Pili to make more people try to know about this cool series, i'm really glad.

拯救华语乐坛

用sampleset和additions可以节约绿线

hard

00:11:125 - 这里可以拆一个圈出来
01:23:684 (9) - 可以做个跳
01:35:678 (2,3,4) - 不是很顺畅

normal

01:18:647 (2,3) - 01:31:360 (1,2) - 没对齐

easy

00:08:606 - 这里不爽，00:06:927 (1) - 折返，00:08:606 - 加个1/2滑条
01:31:360 (1) - 剪短1/4
01:37:117 (1,2) - 换成3/4折返，01:38:076 - 1/1
01:40:955 (1,2) - 两个3/4折返
音效方面可以利用slidertick，http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av673230/index_3.html，跳至8分钟

liangv587 wrote:

拯救华语乐坛 好

用sampleset和additions可以节约绿线 啊我煞笔了，下来研究研究……

hard

00:11:125 - 这里可以拆一个圈出来 ？不是很明白
01:23:684 (9) - 可以做个跳 好，那就让它小跳了一下，并加了NC
01:35:678 (2,3,4) - 不是很顺畅 这里可能跳得稍大了点……把3叠到2的尾部上了，不知道会不会好点

normal

01:18:647 (2,3) - 01:31:360 (1,2) - 没对齐 还真是，fixed

easy

00:08:606 - 这里不爽，00:06:927 (1) - 折返，00:08:606 - 加个1/2滑条 嗯，好主意啊，fixed
01:31:360 (1) - 剪短1/4 嗯……还是不要了吧
01:37:117 (1,2) - 换成3/4折返，01:38:076 - 1/1 试了一下，虽然节奏会大有改观但排列会很难搞orz，暂时保留
01:40:955 (1,2) - 两个3/4折返 那样在easy里可能偏难吧……先保留
音效方面可以利用slidertick，http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av673230/index_3.html，跳至8分钟 嗯，就像irc里我说的，尽量避免tick音效吧

谢谢mod！～

Hi Akabato.
I checked the map and found no unrankable issues. Thus, I'm giving this map a chance!
Have a bubble and good luck!

wow, thx a lot Ike!

Finally this is bubbled <3

I really love the amazing job you did with this map. Really looking forward to seeing this ranked!

Lanturn wrote:

Finally this is bubbled <3

I really love the amazing job you did with this map. Really looking forward to seeing this ranked!

really thanks for your support Lanturn!~ without your helpful mod, this map won't be improved so much

瞎了你们都疯狂泡图 苦苦

Oracle wrote:

瞎了你们都疯狂泡图 苦苦

撞大运要到了bat的M4M…… 要不真不知道还要等多久，老实说，这样的曲子找mod并不容易…… D:

Akabato wrote:

@10crystalmask01
wow, i'm really surprised and curious how could you find these Pili pics!! this TV series isn't famous at all even in Chinese area. thx a lot for your BG help!~ but as you see, this song is a character's theme song, that character's name is Qing Haichao (擎海潮 in Chinese), the one on the current BG. these three pics you found are from Pili series indeed, but all of them aren't Qing Haichao himself, two of them are Jian Zi Xian Ji (剑子仙迹 in Chinese) and the other one is Wu Mengsheng (无梦生 in Chinese). i know maybe they are look like the same one in eyes of people who don't know much about this series. so as the reason, i may keep the current BG thank you all the same!~ through mapping such songs from Pili to make more people try to know about this cool series, i'm really glad.

Ahh, I see now. How interesting
Now I'm wondering if I can watch the show with English subs.

BeatofIke wrote:

Hi Akabato.
I checked the map and found no unrankable issues. Thus, I'm giving this map a chance!
Have a bubble and good luck!

Yes, now someone grab another BAT to check this beatmap

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Consider this a random bubble check, popping because timing is wrong.

[General]
Timing is way off, set 1190 as offset, no need to put a negative one. You must fix this in order to rebubble.
Maybe make the combo colors a bit darker so they are easier to see.

[Hard]
00:00:931 (1,2) - I suggest to use a slider here, the speed hasn't been stablished so this may be a bit annoying for some players.
00:01:890 - Add two notes in 1/4 here? it feels a bit weird ignoring this one as you mapped similar streams in the rest of the song, not a must tho.
00:05:008 (7,1) - Remove (7) and begin the spinner in 00:05:008? It'd make more sense with the instrument you're following here.
00:10:765 (1) - I'm really sure you should use the 1/3 beat snap divisor for the end of this.
00:21:319 (3) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here.
00:56:340 (3,4) - Reverse (Ctrl+G) the slider so you keep an ↑ ↓ ↑ motion for this pattern, if you do, don't forget to move (4) so you keep spacing consistent.
01:11:211 (3) - How about using a 1/4 triple instead this slider, it'd match nicely the song, imo.
01:21:765 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here.
01:23:684 (9) - Remove NC?
01:29:441 (1) - Use a 3/4 slider with a repeat like you did in 01:37:117 (1)? It'd play better imo.
01:31:360 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here with that wind instrument.
01:32:319 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:04:529 (4) - Use a 1/2 slider here and begin the spinner in 00:05:008, so it follows better the instrument you're mapping here.
01:10:252 (1) - You may want to use a slider here, the spinner is a bit short here in my opinion.

[Easy]
Your combos are too short here, you may want put a NC each 2 downbeats (large white ticks).
00:05:008 (1) - You may want to change this for a slider, the next object is a bit close so beginners may not be able to recover in time.
00:13:164 (1) - Same about this spinner, you remove 00:12:684 (4) and begin the spinner there, and end it in 00:15:562.
01:23:684 (1) - End this spinner in 01:26:563 so you give beginners the time to recover.
01:43:353 (1) - Maybe use a slider instead.

Simple but effective , poke me when you're done.

DakeDekaane wrote:

ヽ(´□｀。)ﾉ

Consider this a random bubble check, popping because timing is wrong.

[General]
Timing is way off, set 1190 as offset, no need to put a negative one. You must fix this in order to rebubble. ok, fixed offset and all timing lines
Maybe make the combo colors a bit darker so they are easier to see. i choosed #2, thx for your advice~

Suggestion 1

Combo1 : 185,113,113
Combo2 : 255,165,43
Combo3 : 108,108,255

Suggestion 2 (a bit brighter than 1)

Combo1 : 179,98,98
Combo2 : 255,174,64
Combo3 : 108,108,255

[Hard]
00:00:931 (1,2) - I suggest to use a slider here, the speed hasn't been stablished so this may be a bit annoying for some players. ok, fixed
00:01:890 - Add two notes in 1/4 here? it feels a bit weird ignoring this one as you mapped similar streams in the rest of the song, not a must tho. since it's the beginning part of the song, so don't want to make the rhythm concentrated, keep the current notes
00:05:008 (7,1) - Remove (7) and begin the spinner in 00:05:008? It'd make more sense with the instrument you're following here. umm……prefer to keep the pattern here, no change
00:10:765 (1) - I'm really sure you should use the 1/3 beat snap divisor for the end of this. ok, fixed
00:21:319 (3) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here. ok, fixed
00:56:340 (3,4) - Reverse (Ctrl+G) the slider so you keep an ↑ ↓ ↑ motion for this pattern, if you do, don't forget to move (4) so you keep spacing consistent. actually the downward sliders here are want to follow the music, the sound of drum has a pitch-down trend here. so keep the current pattern
01:11:211 (3) - How about using a 1/4 triple instead this slider, it'd match nicely the song, imo. prefer the original
01:21:765 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here. ok, fixed
01:23:684 (9) - Remove NC? ok, removed
01:29:441 (1) - Use a 3/4 slider with a repeat like you did in 01:37:117 (1)? It'd play better imo. want to make the rhythm more various, so keep the current notes
01:31:360 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better here with that wind instrument. ok, fixed
01:32:319 (4) - ^ here want to keep the current pattern

[Normal]
00:04:529 (4) - Use a 1/2 slider here and begin the spinner in 00:05:008, so it follows better the instrument you're mapping here. ok, fixed
01:10:252 (1) - You may want to use a slider here, the spinner is a bit short here in my opinion. ok, fixed

[Easy]
Your combos are too short here, you may want put a NC each 2 downbeats (large white ticks). ok, fixed
00:05:008 (1) - You may want to change this for a slider, the next object is a bit close so beginners may not be able to recover in time. ok, fixed
00:13:164 (1) - Same about this spinner, you remove 00:12:684 (4) and begin the spinner there, and end it in 00:15:562. ok, fixed
01:23:684 (1) - End this spinner in 01:26:563 so you give beginners the time to recover. ok, fixed
01:43:353 (1) - Maybe use a slider instead. here want to keep the spinner, but made it begin at 01:43:132 (1/2 beat early than before), and deleted the circle after it to make sure there has enough recover time

Simple but effective , poke me when you're done.

thx a lot for your mod!~ updated

Alright have your bubble back.

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DakeDekaane wrote:

Alright have your bubble back.

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thx!~ :3

;_;

A pity you didn't include the video. It's pretty neat.

Considering the wip rule at t/142383 you might want to change the Artist/title to a romanized version of the Chinese, unless this is the official English title. You can put the English title in the tags if you wish.

[Hard]
I'm thinking AR -1 works well for this map. If not, OD +1.
00:22:298 (1,2,3) - This part would be awesome with some jumps
01:15:788 (4,1) - This jump was kind of sudden and harsh compared to the rest of the map. Maybe reposition 3 and 4 so that it's moving towards the left

UnderminE wrote:

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Garven wrote:

A pity you didn't include the video. It's pretty neat.

Considering the wip rule at t/142383 you might want to change the Artist/title to a romanized version of the Chinese, unless this is the official English title. You can put the English title in the tags if you wish. since the artist has official english name (check the official site here: http://www.ebtc.com.tw ), so i just changed the song's title

[Hard]
I'm thinking AR -1 works well for this map. If not, OD +1. OD+1, i think AR8 may be easier to read
00:22:298 (1,2,3) - This part would be awesome with some jumps ok, changed pattern
01:15:788 (4,1) - This jump was kind of sudden and harsh compared to the rest of the map. Maybe reposition 3 and 4 so that it's moving towards the left ok, fixed

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thx for your mod!~ updated

I dig it.

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Congratulations!

Garven wrote:

I dig it.

thx a lot, Garven!~

Lanturn wrote:

wowowow finally. Congrats!!!!!

thx, Lanturn!~ there is your effort indeed!

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Congratulations!

thx!~

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