1. Pluviophilia (5.52 stars, 1504 notes)

yugijedi wrote:

Hey em for em!

Pluviophilia (tfck?!) haha

01:06:097 (5,6) - stack them ? because these are really different tones (the whitenoise starts at 01:06:183 - ) and your map needs something hard to read like that would be a good challenge and is not standart. nah i think this way is better

01:15:321 (7,8) - move to (280/204)

01:15:321 (7,8) - move to (354/156)

01:22:476 (6) - change into 1/4 slider because of the snare, for me it was a bit weird here without something on 01:22:562 - :


01:43:080 (1,2) - use spacing 1 to 1,3 here would fit perfect because the snare catches more energy! also with the circular it is not so hard to get.
I like it more my way

02:10:493 (5,1) - fix it like this:


02:16:700 (2) - change into 1/4 slider because that doesn't reflect the rhythm like it is now, maybe move them like this then, a bit like cool square motion:
there is no sound there tho

02:32:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this stream sound exactly like parts before where you did not put streams, there a very distingiushable tones on 1/4, I think you should work with doubles and maybe 02:32:562 (6,7,8,9,10) - this as a 5circle- stream. 02:32:476 (5) - is also not hearable at all so it is not a good idea to put a stream here. every single note of this stream is mapped to something in the music

02:34:459 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - lovely <3 though it is not very interesting

03:50:924 (5,6,7) - no pls no that is so ugly.. make it equal distance or just some consistency

04:45:493 (1,1) - holy shit <3

05:26:355 (3,4,5,6,7) - convert by a normal curve slider, that would be ok but it doesn't appear somewhere else in your map -> quality issue what do you mean?

nice song, good luck~

1. 00:41:355 (5) - its supposed to be a raindrop right? i personally think something like this resembles one a bit more http://puu.sh/iJWYR.jpg its kinda sloppy but you get the idea
2. 01:11:787 (10,1) - either swap this nc or 01:17:304 (1,2) -
3. 01:37:907 (1,1) - i can hear that theres no kick behind these two, but i dont think you should take away the claps for that since the snares are still there. I think it'd be more appropiate to remove the whistles instead, so the snare is less backed up like in the music, very faint difference but is it in the music anyways. or just remove the claps altogether, i think these ones are pretty noisy, you dont use them on other places with the same pattern anyways
4. 02:33:081 - unsnapped green line
5. 03:03:252 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - try ctrl+h this and use (4) as an anchor by putting a placeholder note so you know where it was. I think it plays nice, flow good.
6. 03:06:528 (2,2) - these slider whistles feels kinda random, maybe im just missing something
7. 04:03:080 - make this clickable instead? by extending (2) and reducing (1) you do that here 03:51:700 (1,2) - , i guess you wanna follow that sound at 04:03:080 (2) - but it feels reaaaally weird when you hear such a strong beat just before you click something
8. 04:02:735 (1,2) - and fix blanket
9. 04:38:597 (1,2) - actually really difficult to see that this is 3/4, maybe do something weird magic with the spacing(I dont know how) or nc spam, i think nc spam makes the player pay more attention
10. 04:44:114 (1,2) -
11. 05:39:287 - 05:42:045 - remove these breaks? i think they breaks the suspense. if u decide to do that tho youll need to bump up the hp drain a bit since it reduces it.

Kotonoha wrote:

[Pluviophilia]

1. 00:41:355 (5) - its supposed to be a raindrop right? i personally think something like this resembles one a bit more http://puu.sh/iJWYR.jpg its kinda sloppy but you get the idea oh no haha i didn't want it to be a raindrop!
2. 01:11:787 (10,1) - either swap this nc or 01:17:304 (1,2) -
3. 01:37:907 (1,1) - i can hear that theres no kick behind these two, but i dont think you should take away the claps for that since the snares are still there. I think it'd be more appropiate to remove the whistles instead, so the snare is less backed up like in the music, very faint difference but is it in the music anyways. or just remove the claps altogether, i think these ones are pretty noisy, you dont use them on other places with the same pattern anyways. uhhh i dont understeand what you mean
4. 02:33:081 - unsnapped green line
5. 03:03:252 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - try ctrl+h this and use (4) as an anchor by putting a placeholder note so you know where it was. I think it plays nice, flow good.
6. 03:06:528 (2,2) - these slider whistles feels kinda random, maybe im just missing something
7. 04:03:080 - make this clickable instead? by extending (2) and reducing (1) you do that here 03:51:700 (1,2) - , i guess you wanna follow that sound at 04:03:080 (2) - but it feels reaaaally weird when you hear such a strong beat just before you click something
8. 04:02:735 (1,2) - and fix blanket
9. 04:38:597 (1,2) - actually really difficult to see that this is 3/4, maybe do something weird magic with the spacing(I dont know how) or nc spam, i think nc spam makes the player pay more attention. I think it's easy to see because there are other parts like this in the music, where i used NC every two notes, so it should be easy to see
10. 04:44:114 (1,2) -
11. 05:39:287 - 05:42:045 - remove these breaks? i think they breaks the suspense. if u decide to do that tho youll need to bump up the hp drain a bit since it reduces it. im not too sure about this, i think you'd die with HR

liuyiqiangbu wrote:

From M4M queue.
[pluviophilia]
00:25:838 (2) - this slider can be better.http://puu.sh/iLHbB/62610d8b99.png that picture is broken T_T
00:32:304 (5) - move the slider end to white line i think
00:59:545 (2,3,4,5) - weird whistle
02:20:321 (8,9,10) - imo you should make some movements among the triplet? just like the way you've done before
02:57:907 (1,2,3) - you may try reversing these sliders i prefer my way
03:39:976 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/iLIsQ/67453d16e9.jpg it's more relaxed. i think my way is better
03:43:511 (2) - better towards left
04:03:597 (4,5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/iLIEi/d85132ebef.jpg i think my way flows better
05:25:493 (1) - ctrl G?