1. Disconnected (4,15 stars, 562 notes)
2. Hard (2,81 stars, 433 notes)
3. Insane (3,35 stars, 553 notes)
4. Minao's Normal (1,92 stars, 335 notes)

What I think you should keep (because it's good)

1. The hitsounds are perfect, in my opinion. You did a very good job of making the player feel like they are playing the song, not just clicking circles that happen to land on beat.
2. Slider speed and distance snap fit really nicely.

The actual mod

1. Don't spam kiai time. This can be very distracting to the player. Minao's difficulty handled kiai time pretty well.
2. Holy mother of bookmarks; I understand you would want to pinpoint a couple of key areas in the song, but having bookmarks almost every second is not a very intuitive use of them.
3. Add some tags! They help people find maps they're looking for, and your map will gain some publicity as well.
4. Add Minao to the tags. When you have guest difficulties, it is required to tag them to make sure credit is given to the mappers accordingly.
5. The mp3's bitrate is labeled as 0kbps. I don't think that's actually possible, so your mp3 is probably corrupted in one way or another. You can try re-downloading it (or however you got hold of it) and use one of those online file converters, but if that doesn't work, just find another source for the mp3. I'm sure there are many.
6. Use or delete h.png, because currently, it's just sitting there and taking up space.
7. ^ k.png
8. ^ n2.png
9. Inherited points get kinda wacky sometimes (insane difficulty). I'll try to point out most of them, so you know what I mean.
10. Inherited point at 00:28:303 should be snapped to 00:28:288
11. 00:52:663 and 02:52:663 have inherited points that do nothing. Maybe this was unfinished, but if not, remove them.

1. 00:59:225 (9) This slider is absolutely insane. Consider making the beat snap divisor 1/8 instead of 1/16.
2. 00:59:225 The inherited points for this measure don't really serve a purpose. Consider removing them, or at least make the sound difference a little bit more noticeable, while changing beat snap from 1/16 to 1/8.
3. 02:35:319 (2) Slider end is unsnapped. Use 1/4 or 1/8 snap, whatever you prefer.
4. 02:35:319 Inherited points here aren't really needed, and they don't make a huge difference anyway. Either buff the effect of these or just remove them.
5. 02:59:225 (9) Everything I said about 00:59:225 (9) applies here too.
6. 02:59:225 Everything I said about 00:59:225 applies here too.
7. 01:06:139 (4) These 2 notes felt kinda awkward. I feel like spacing them apart would be an improvement.
8. 01:21:139 (4) ^
9. 01:54:303 (6) Make this a repeating slider or 3 notes to fit the rest of the melody.
10. 02:30:397 (10) This note can be very hard to hit because of the time gap after the stream. Not necessarily something that requires a change, however.
11. 02:37:897 (10) ^
12. 02:44:225 - 02:45:163 I think something should be here, but that's probably just my preference. Consider adding repeating slider or streams here, though.
13. 03:06:139 (4) and 03:21:139 (4) have the same feel as 01:06:139 (4) but I like it here better because it creates diversity between the first and second melody.
14. 00:51:725 (6) Off the grid.
15. 01:04:616 (7) ^
16. 01:11:413 (8) ^
17. 01:25:241 (5) ^
18. 01:36:256 (7) ^
19. 02:51:725 (6) ^
20. 03:04:616 (7) ^
21. 03:25:241 (5) ^
22. 03:36:256 (6) ^

AndreasHD wrote:

Hey! this song is so good omgomgomg!!

I need to mod just a little bit

[General]
* Soooooooooo many bookmarks, they are extremly overused. Im not sure if that takes any space, but you should remove them anyway, cuz why not.

* add Minao to tags, so that people can search up the name and find this map. Make sure to tag it in all difficulties.

* 00:52:663 Remove this inheriting section because it's for no use.

* 02:52:663 You have an un-used inheriting section here aswell, why not remove it:)

* It says that your mp3 file is 0 kbps ...never seen that before o.o it need's to be between 128 -192 kbps.

* I would love to see the title passing by at this point 00:31:569 try to make it happen!

* Your Insane difficulty also have "H" icon on website, try making it "I" for Insane.

* OD (Overall Difficulty) set to 8 Doesnt really call for OD 8



[Insane]

01:16:100 (1) - I didnt like your stack here, try to space it out instead.

01:41:413 (8) - NC

01:42:350 (1) - ^

01:54:303 (6) - Instead of just a slider, the music asks for 3 notes. do you hear it? ..No D:

02:30:397 (10) - Spare it out, looks better, and feels better to play.

02:37:897 (10) - ^

02:33:913 (7) - NC Nah

02:41:413 (7) -

02:47:038 (5) -

02:47:741 (3) - Remove NC

02:48:913 (6) - NC

02:49:616 (1) - Remove NC

02:50:788 (5) - And so on.

02:54:303 (1) - You dont need new combocolor here It's there to indicate new spacing

03:07:428 (1) - I would remove this NC and make it here instead -> 03:07:663 (2) -


Cool mapset, even though I wish your Insane diff was harder, since as it is, it's very close to Hard.. anyway, good luck with ranking and suff

Cl8n wrote:

I love the song and the direction this map is taking! Hope this will be useful~

What I think you should keep (because it's good)

1. The hitsounds are perfect, in my opinion. You did a very good job of making the player feel like they are playing the song, not just clicking circles that happen to land on beat.
2. Slider speed and distance snap fit really nicely.

The actual mod

[General]

1. Don't spam kiai time. This can be very distracting to the player. Minao's difficulty handled kiai time pretty well.
2. Holy mother of bookmarks; I understand you would want to pinpoint a couple of key areas in the song, but having bookmarks almost every second is not a very intuitive use of them.
3. Add some tags! They help people find maps they're looking for, and your map will gain some publicity as well.
4. Add Minao to the tags. When you have guest difficulties, it is required to tag them to make sure credit is given to the mappers accordingly.
5. The mp3's bitrate is labeled as 0kbps. I don't think that's actually possible, so your mp3 is probably corrupted in one way or another. You can try re-downloading it (or however you got hold of it) and use one of those online file converters, but if that doesn't work, just find another source for the mp3. I'm sure there are many.
6. Use or delete h.png, because currently, it's just sitting there and taking up space.
7. ^ k.png
8. ^ n2.png
9. Inherited points get kinda wacky sometimes (insane difficulty). I'll try to point out most of them, so you know what I mean.
10. Inherited point at 00:28:303 should be snapped to 00:28:288
11. 00:52:663 and 02:52:663 have inherited points that do nothing. Maybe this was unfinished, but if not, remove them.

[Insane]

1. 00:59:225 (9) This slider is absolutely insane. Consider making the beat snap divisor 1/8 instead of 1/16.
2. 00:59:225 The inherited points for this measure don't really serve a purpose. Consider removing them, or at least make the sound difference a little bit more noticeable, while changing beat snap from 1/16 to 1/8.
3. 02:35:319 (2) Slider end is unsnapped. Use 1/4 or 1/8 snap, whatever you prefer.
4. 02:35:319 Inherited points here aren't really needed, and they don't make a huge difference anyway. Either buff the effect of these or just remove them. Without the 5% volume one this'd sound like crap :L
5. 02:59:225 (9) Everything I said about 00:59:225 (9) applies here too.
6. 02:59:225 Everything I said about 00:59:225 applies here too.
7. 01:06:139 (4) These 2 notes felt kinda awkward. I feel like spacing them apart would be an improvement. Streams and triples have low spacing, so doubles do, too
8. 01:21:139 (4) ^ ^
9. 01:54:303 (6) Make this a repeating slider or 3 notes to fit the rest of the melody. What'd that change?
10. 02:30:397 (10) This note can be very hard to hit because of the time gap after the stream. Not necessarily something that requires a change, however.
11. 02:37:897 (10) ^
12. 02:44:225 - 02:45:163 I think something should be here, but that's probably just my preference. Consider adding repeating slider or streams here, though. I feel a short break is well needed here
13. 03:06:139 (4) and 03:21:139 (4) have the same feel as 01:06:139 (4) but I like it here better because it creates diversity between the first and second melody.
14. 00:51:725 (6) Off the grid. That's perfectly on grid o-o
15. 01:04:616 (7) ^ ^
16. 01:11:413 (8) ^ ^
17. 01:25:241 (5) ^ This isn't offscreen with 4:3 resolution so it's fine
18. 01:36:256 (7) ^ Not offgrid
19. 02:51:725 (6) ^ ^
20. 03:04:616 (7) ^ ^
21. 03:25:241 (5) ^ This isn't offscreen with 4:3 resolution either so it's fine too
22. 03:36:256 (6) ^ Not offgrid either

Best of luck with your map! I love it so far!

dinopwn wrote:

General
A Kiai time at 59:674 would be nice, same with 3:00:163

Normal
00:28:053 (3) - I dont' hear any rythym that matches this. I think that replacing it with a half note and a 1 and half slider would be better. I don't get it...
00:37:663 (2) - The slider end is somewhat out of the playfield. I don't think it's an important matter if it's the end of a reversed slider so I keep it
00:39:303 (4,5,6) - Pattern is confusing, #5 slider end is kind of out of playfield.^
00:42:584 (3) - Replacing the whistle with a clap would be better. Changed
00:42:584 (3) - Placing notes under sliders in low AR is confusing to new/intermediate players. I don't see how it is under a slider
01:24:538 (5) - Out of playfield
01:50:319 (1) - ^ Changed
01:50:319 (1,4,5) - slider is partially overlapping each other, consider rotating #5 Changed with previous change
02:19:850 (2) - Out of playfield
02:22:663 (1) - ^ Not that much...
02:38:600 (2) - ^
02:38:600 (2) - Slider shape is weird in a bad way, and kind of out of playfield too I like it!
02:56:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Might be a little too difficult for a normal I think it's okay for a Normal, and it's a funny thing to do
03:43:991 (6) - flip horizontally please, #1 is covered. It's the same thing for 01:43:991 (5,1) ; I keep it beacause I like the movement made by the mouse/pencil to play this pattern.

ReallyFastCat wrote:

[Normal]
02:34:850 (3) - End is not snapped Fixed
00:26:413 to 00:29:694 - This part feels really weird to me, but I don't really know why I don't know either lol

VeronicaTheFox wrote:

Normal:

00:13:288 (1) - Add spinner ending here 00:14:694 - .
03:52:194 (7) - New combo should start here.

Hard:

00:25:944 (5) - Reposition to x: 316 y: 96.
00:26:178 (6) - Move down to y: 156.
01:22:194 (6) - Start the nc here.
01:30:163 - to 02:00:045 - Make this one solid kiai time. But fountains are cool ):

Insane:

I only saw the kiai time problem. Yeah same

1. This mapset needs epilepsy warning
2. I prefer to use other colours
3. I think spamming Kiai Time isn't really needed. Still, if you want to keep it, why not spam it in normal too?
4. Preview point is in weird place, change its place to 01:29:225

1. 01:24:538 (5) - unnecessary overlap, try to change its place above or somewhere else.
2. 01:44:694 (1) - ^ same again, It would be better like this:
   img

   
   or whatever you want to do for it
3. 02:17:975 (5) - ^
4. 02:41:647 (2) - ^
5. 03:24:538 (5) - ^
6. 03:39:538 (6) - I think this is okay
7. 03:44:694 (1) - overlaps aren't nice

1. Time point at 00:14:694 , if spinners volume is 5%, why not then whole spinner. Change timing point to 00:14:928 so it sound no weird
   Didn't find anything else ^_^

VeronicaTheFox wrote:

Normal:
00:13:288 (1) - Add spinner ending here 00:14:694 - . I prefer not, I like the beginning without a spinner.
03:52:194 (7) - New combo should start here. I reworked the combo colors for more constancy

smsh150 wrote:

[Normal]

1. 01:24:538 (5) - unnecessary overlap, try to change its place above or somewhere else. Changed
2. 01:44:694 (1) - ^ same again, It would be better like this Changed
3. 02:17:975 (5) - ^ I keep those 2 ones because I like it a lot
4. 02:41:647 (2) - ^
5. 03:24:538 (5) - ^ Changed
6. 03:39:538 (6) - I think this is okay
7. 03:44:694 (1) - overlaps aren't nice Changed

!!! Those overlaps, which go through from midpoint are nice !!!
+ Changed the preview point as suggested

1. First of all, very nice song. Nothing to do with mod, but still.
2. I'm not competent at all for Normal, so I trust Minao on this one.
3. I had a look at the three other diffs. Disconnected's mod is just below (5 most important suggestions are in bold).
4. I didn't like your insane much, and I suggest switching to AR8 or 8,5, because just like Zeonive, I (personally) can't read AR9 with such a low density. Didn't go any further on this diff.
5. Hard is absolutely perfect. AR8 +DT matches my current playing skills, so that's what I do most, and this Hard is one of the map I play the most. Feels really amazing (NB : after having a look at some of your others beatmaps, I'm rarely a big fan of your insanes, however all your hards are amazing)
6. Focus a bit on avoiding copy paste, not very pleasant in some parts.
7. Try changing combo colours. Your background is very nice, you could do something very attractive. There's a note on this at the end of the mod.

1. 00:25:709 (4) - NC
2. 00:26:413 (1) - Remove NC if you focus on consistency, keep NC if you prefer having an esthetic contrast with triangle (I'd keep it).
3. 00:28:288 (5) - NC. Single note alone in combo is OK if you have the right combo colours, it's the beginning of "Dsiconnected" and doesn't have much to do with the previous slider (the apparent link is made by your choice of a spinner instead of mapping "Disconnected")
4. 00:52:663 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Consider stacking perfectly pairs instead of shifting the second one a bit. This is currently not very pleasant nor to play or to look at.
5. 00:59:225 (9) - Consider splitting up this in order to bring out the "Dis-con-nec-ted" in the background. An example could be (in 1/8) : Single note - 3 ticks reverse slider - Single note - 3 ticks reverse slider - Single note. The contrast with the half beat silence will be nice. Playing with hitsound could be great to add diversity.
6. 01:01:100 (4) - NC possible for esthetic contrast between two exact same patterns
7. 01:03:444 (3) - NC
8. 01:04:850 (9) - If you focus on consistency, make the same NC choice as 01:01:100. Otherwise if you prefer esthetic, you can keep no NC for same colours-same sliders, or NC to make a contrast between (7,8) and (9,10). I personally like having NC at 01:01:100 and no NC here, producing a little "unexpected" effect
9. 01:07:428 (5) - Depending on how you feel the music, NC here and remove next NC if you think (5) belongs to next part, or keep it this way if you think it marks the end of the previous part. (I'd NC)
10. 01:08:600 (4) - Depending on your previous choices, NC or don't for consistency, but there's no esthetic solution here.
11. 01:10:944 (4) - NC here and remove NC at 01:11:413 (1). Imo you should avoid having a NC at the end of a stream, except when the stream belongs clearly to the previous part (not the case) and is not there to stress the beginning of a new "sentence" (which is the most frequent use of short streams [3-4-5 notes], and precisely the aim of this one).
12. 01:12:350 (3) - Nc possible for consistency, depending on your choices.
13. 01:13:053 - This seems to me like a poor place for a spinner. You already placed quite some spinners in the map, and this could be a great part if mapped correctly. Spinner is still possible, but hurts a bit.
14. 01:18:444 (5) - Apply the same decision as to 01:10:944 (4)
15. 01:19:850 (3) - See 01:04:850 (9)
16. 01:20:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep the rhythm if you want, but please change the pattern. Unpleasant "already did this" feeling.
17. 01:22:663 (1,2,3,4) - This is great. Very pleasant to see and to play.
18. 01:25:944 (5) - Apply the same decision as to 01:10:944 (4)
19. 01:29:225 - Two beats long silence fits perfectly the music and creates some cool effect, but doesn't feel great after a spinner. One option is replacing the spinner by a very low SV slider lasting just as long. However, it is still frustrating not to play the "Disconnected". That's why I'd choose to shorten the spinner of 1/4 of a beat (finishing on blue tick), to silence the end-hitsound of the spinner (sacrifices have to be made) and to do something cool and dynamic with 1/4 beat sliders, something like below (if you do so, I suggest keeping NC on each slider, that really makes a disconnected effect)
    
20. 01:31:100 (4) - NC possible for consistency (depending on choices) or esthetic, just like 01:01:100 (4).
21. 01:36:022 (6) - NC possible. "Unexpected" effect.
22. 01:40:944 (6) - NC here and remove NC at 01:41:413
23. 01:40:944 (6,7,8,9,1) - Pure esthetic suggestion, you could accompany the music by making the stream start from bottom to top, could be cool. Still absolutely unnecessary.
24. 01:46:100 (5) - You know the stuff. But here, figure is not purly symmetrical thanks to (1), so you can change usual choice.
25. 01:52:194 (9) - See 01:07:428 (5)
26. 01:55:944 (6) - NC here and remove NC at 1:56:413 (1)
27. 02:00:163 - Background pulsing during break is very nice.
28. 02:11:413 - The dubstep part (until 02:43:991) would need a remap in my opinion. This is currently the hardest diff on this map, and I think you don't play enough with things like Slider Velocity or 1/4 beat sliders, two elements that are usually crucial in dubstep maps. If you want examples, have a look at Meg & Dia - Monster (DotEXE Remix) mapped by nold_1702, especially the hardest diffs. Anyway, if you wanna keep it this way, it's your map, it's your choice. Once more, it's not a question of bad rhythm, it's just... frustrating. Following points of the mod will focus on your current map, rather than on remapping this part, which is up to you.
29. 02:11:413 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You could NC every slider, it's consistent with the song and one more time, pretty cool "disconnected" effect.
30. 02:18:678 (5,6,1) - Current NC pattern is OK, but I think you should rather NC (5) and remove NC on (1), the triple doesn't belong to previous combo and is here purely for stressing (1).
31. 02:19:850 (2) - NC here depending on previous choice
32. 02:21:491 (2) - Possible NC here. The slider alone in combo doesn't hurt.
33. 02:26:178 (4,5,1) - See 02:18:678 (5,6,1)
34. 02:28:991 (2) - Apply same decision as to 02:21:491 (2)
35. 02:30:163 (1,2) - You could space out a bit more, and make it look not symmetrical. Would be a bit more challenging.
36. 02:33:678 (6,7,1) - See 02:18:678 (5,6,1)
37. 02:35:670 (5,1) - This NC choice is not very consistent, but looks fairly great. Up to you.
38. 02:37:663 (1,2) - Constant symmetry is requested in low diffs, but in insane ones it ends up being a bit boring. You could also space out a bit more, same reason as previously.
39. 02:39:538 (1,2) - This pattern is perfect. You should use it (just a bit, don't wanna get disgusted) more frequently.
40. 02:41:178 (6,7,1) - See 02:18:678 (5,6,1)
41. 02:43:288 (7) - NC
42. 02:44:225 - Break is OK, but could be a very jumpy attractive part. You decide.
43. 02:52:663 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Try not using the same pattern as first time. Tastes copy paste too much. It was OK for the previous one, but here repetition is boring. If you still keep it this way, see 00:52:663 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). There's anyway in the rest of the map quite nothing new, so just consider previous notes. I'm not a huge fan of CTRL+C CTRL+V of this scale, but it still matches the music, which is also repetitive.
44. 03:30:163 - Last but not least, this last part is slightly different from the previous ones (rhythm on higher notes on the background). If this is definitely your hardest diff, you could have made something up to mark this difference, would have dynamized the end of the map.

1. Use custom combo colors which fits the music.

1. Use stack leniency of 7.
2. 00:43:053 (1) - Recovery time too short. Replace beats similar to this one:
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:56:413 (1,2,3,4) - Reconstruct this pattern as this is not distance snapped.
4. 00:58:288 (1) - Recovery time too short. Replace beats similar to this one:
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:58:288 (1) - ^
6. Just make sure your Normal will be under 2.0 star diff after adjusting it.

1. 02:35:319 (2) - Why 1/16sliders? You'll got red warning when you do that. Replace with circle.
2. 02:59:225 (9) - Why 1/16sliders? Just replace with spinner or reduce to 1/8.