1. Hard (4.7 stars, 396 notes)
2. Insane (4.91 stars, 486 notes)
3. Lizbeth's Normal (3.91 stars, 166 notes)

Mafiamaster wrote:

All difficulties~
-20 to offset. (23,142) Then resnap.Fixed

Hard~
01:53:94 (1) - Suggestion: Imo, it would sound better if the finish sound was on the spinner before this note instead of on this note.yeah, sounds better
03:04:14 (3,4,5,6) - Stack right on top of the endpoint. During gameplay, it looks kind of sloppy atm. Fixed

Insane~
I see some parts that look a lot like Hard.
Redo both breaks. They'll lengthen a bit.
01:21:19 (1,2,3,4,5) - Can you make this evenly spaced? ;_;
02:50:02 (2) - Remove finish
02:50:82 (2) - ^
Fixed

I hope some of your Tsubasa maps can get ranked soon ._.
Since you know... you and Lizbeth have a lot pending.yeah T.T

eee wrote:

I'm guessing hitsounds weren't added, soooo, not hitsound mod She will add it soon
[Lizbeth]
00:20:04 (4) - new combo, cause a couple of seconds later has them like this.
00:44:59 (4) - ^
01:13:03 (1) - remove new combo
Fixed

[Hard]
fix breaks Fixed
I can't even find the slightest of problems

[Insane]
01:06:79 (1) - finish? Nice, done n_n
02:34:46 (1) - remove new combo? Fixed
02:34:02-02:46:538 - I love this part Thanks n///n

this map was pretty cool, have a star, I liked it

lesjuh wrote:

01:49:53 (1,1,1,1,1) - Watch autoplay carefully. Spinners where autoplay can't get 2000 points on are unrankable. fix this.

gdeath wrote:

'cos my study,i'm late >w<

[Overall]
how about cancel Countdown?i never use it x.x~nazi~

[Lizbeth's Normal]
00:25:09 (4) - move 1 grid to the right(level 3)~nazi~
01:03:66 (1) - I'd make this spinner totally quiet

[Hard]
01:03:75 (1) - I'd make this spinner totally quiet
01:44:96 (3) - move 1 grid to the left and 1 grid to the up~nazi~
01:26:35 (1) - make it start on 01:26:25
02:17:49 (2,2) - whistle?
02:27:42 (2) - ^
02:44:76 (1) - how about add finish on the end of slider?
03:23:14 (3,4) - move 1 grid to the right(level 3)~nazi~(are you intentional?)

[Insane]
00:48:95 (8) - reinsert break
01:26:35 (1) - make it start on 01:26:25

i like this song~
starry*

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Another Tsubasa incredible map ^^

//Lizbeth's Normal//

1. 00:43:791(3) - Just a detail but it's better turn this slider to the other side.
2. 01:32:492(1) - I think that this clap section is really cool, but¹ would be better if you used on similar parts too. But² I now that this is not possible because not every note on the similar parts are on the white tick. BUT³, It may be possible if you only use the half of the claps. This way, you are gonna be able to use clap section on the rest of the song ^^

I'll let lizbeth decide this, BUT sounds cool to me XD

//Hard// -Nice circles on the beggining

1. 02:49:635(1,2,1,2,3) - too mach finishes ona soft part =/ Fixed finishes here
2. 03:26:648(3) - Unnatural sliders, I think. I breaking the new combo that should be there. Isn't better take it off and make normal notes (or more sliders, at last?)I like this part :p

//Insane// - FUN!

1. No probs here :]

really cool \o/

*star*

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

[hard]

02:01:71 - add a note here .
02:01:90 - add a 1/2 beat slider.
02:03:07 (5) - delete this note.and this spinner 02:03:07 (5) start at 02:03:07.
02:04:14 - this spinner start at 02:04:245, finish at 02:05:609 . sounds better . right?
02:43:20 (11) - right 1
02:51:68 (2) - delete..02:51:87 (4) - delete. and replace that 3 notes. thanks

[insane]

01:25:09 (3,4) - down some grids.
01:25:86 (5) - place it at mid. looks fine .
02:01:90 - do here like [hard] if you want .
02:13:01 (4) - i think this one . 3 times return is better . because 02:13:79 (5) - is there.
02:20:41 - add a note .
02:20:60 - ^

if you change what i said . plz post.

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

Another Tsubasa incredible map ^^

//Lizbeth's Normal//
01:32:492(1) - I think that this clap section is really cool, but¹ would be better if you used on similar parts too. But² I now that this is not possible because not every note on the similar parts are on the white tick. BUT³, It may be possible if you only use the half of the claps. This way, you are gonna be able to use clap section on the rest of the song ^^[/list]

v2b wrote:

insane:
01:10:86 (2,3,4,5,6) - hard to read,maybe dont stack all of them? i like them stacked >.<
02:27:03 (1,2) - wrong spacing Fixed


star

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 1315 and resnap.

Other than that, is it just me or is there a lack of hitsounds?

Nharox wrote:

Btw. there isn't a big difference between [Hard] and [Insane]. Some spots have the same spacing with less jumps, only 55 less objects and still 21 spinners. Remove some of the streams and go through the map again. I'd change that, not sure what BATs say.

Takuma wrote:

You should probably follow Nharox's post, but either way I'm willing to bubble this. If you DO decide to change what he said, call me back and I'll rebubble this.

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

01:38:032 (6,1) - Spacing.

[Insane]

02:58:058 (1,2,3) - I found this spacing a bit hard to read.
03:23:091 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Fix and I'll bubble. :3

osuplayer111 wrote:

After the fix on Normal, now there is a new problem.

01:40:027 (3,1) - This is like a jump for a normal and isn't ok. Fix this spacing and I'll bubble definitely.