Jet - Are You Gonna Be My Girl · forum

Mashley

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

Mashley 2009-09-05T19:46:43+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 02 October 2009 at 07:32:51

Artist: Jet
Title: Are You Gonna Be My Girl
BPM: 205
Filesize: 2397kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

Insane (4.88 stars, 199 notes)
LuigiHann's Hard (4.66 stars, 179 notes)
Normal (3.35 stars, 88 notes)

Download: Jet - Are You Gonna Be My Girl
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Originally LuigiHann's map, he gave it to me. Finished...

Last edited by Mashley 2009-10-02T06:32:56+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

yeahyeahyeahhh

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Joined December 2008

yeahyeahyeahhh 2009-09-16T15:30:30+00:00

Insane:
00:09:97 (5,6) - I think this would sound/play more true to the guitar (since you're following that) if it was a stack of 4 notes. So 00:09:82 (5,6,7,8) - First notes on 00:09:82, end at 00:10:27. Even though you do it when the drums come in I think it would still be nice to have here being an insane and play better imo. Kinda like in LH's hard
00:12:33 (5,6) - ^
00:14:67 (5,6) - ^
00:16:58 - Add a note here?

Hard:
Fine

Normal:
Fine

Good stuff, Jet is badass.

0_o

2,155 posts

Joined December 2008

0_o 2009-09-16T16:08:48+00:00

* = personal suggestion
Normal
*00:24:54 (1) - End it 1/2 earlier, add a whistle and add a beat 2 white ticks later?
*00:33:68 (1) - whistle?
*00:47:39 (5) - ^
01:03:47 (1,2,3) - ^
01:25:88 (1) - Either move this ahead a white tick or put another beat on the next white tick, it sounds awkward where it ends now
More whistles in general would be nice

Luigi's Hard
~

Insane
00:23:39 (6) - Move this back 6 and add a beat at 00:23:53 (x) and maybe 00:23:82 (x)
*00:24:54 (1) - Same as Normal
00:33:11 (7) - Shorten to the white tick
00:44:53 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a deathstack, it actially plays a lot better (and its more fun

)
*00:40:24 (x) - Add a beat with a whistle?
00:54:24 (1) - End 1/1 earlier
01:08:80 (5) - Move this back 1/2 and add a beat at 01:09:23 (x)
01:23:96 (1) - Caught me off guard, anyone who misses this will get HAMMERED by the tick rate.
could probably use more whistles too

It's great to mod some real music for once

*

blissfulyoshi

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Joined July 2008

blissfulyoshi 2009-09-17T15:33:29+00:00

Normal:
01:00:45 (2) - isn't this supposed to be snapped to the whole note?
01:02:67 (2) - ^

Hard:
01:22:79 (1) - remove new combo?

Insane: fine

Great map. Star.

LuigiHann

Resident Skinner

4,432 posts

Here since the beginning

LuigiHann 2009-09-17T16:05:29+00:00

Normal:
01:05:67 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - could be broken up with a couple sliders, like at the third note of each combo
01:13:94 (1) - is a little annoying, could just be a wobbly-looking non-repeat slider for more fun

Hard - greatest map of all time

Insane - it's okay

all you get is a star

Shinde

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707 posts

Joined April 2009

Shinde 2009-09-18T07:11:08+00:00

I only played Luigi's and I liked it a lot. I really love this song too.

It freaks me out when he sings in only my left earphone. T_T Suprisingly, I don't think I've played a song yet on Osu that's done the one speaker thing.

Now I wanna hear this on the radio, it's been a couple years. Ah, good times.

NoHitter

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Joined June 2009

NoHitter 2009-09-18T15:15:02+00:00

Suggestions:

Normal
01:14:800 - Shorten this slider to 01:15:085
01:15:656 - Move this to 01:15:514
01:16:370 - Move this to 01:16:277
01:16:798 - Add note here.
01:17:083 - ^

Jarby

2,963 posts

Joined August 2008

Jarby 2009-09-19T10:43:34+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Matma Rex

586 posts

Joined March 2009

Matma Rex 2009-09-20T12:02:19+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Xgor

Elite Mapper

2,534 posts

Joined April 2009

Xgor 2009-09-20T18:14:27+00:00

Great map

(Can't find any faults in standard osu or CTB)
The only thing i found is that it sounds much better with the slider tick rate at 1 on Normal.
*star*

XepherX3

625 posts

Joined September 2008

XepherX3 2009-09-23T17:23:03+00:00

first offset > 2.195

overall of map pretty cool

[Normal and Insane]
add a beat here 01:26:219(*) (maybe remove claps and finish)

[luigihann's Hard ]
place a beat here 01:25:882(*) (maybe remove claps and finish)
and here 01:26:219(*),(maybe remove claps and finish)
start spinner here 01:26:387(*) end it on 01:30:680

starred

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-09-23T19:47:48+00:00

Normal:

it's ok

Luigihann's hard:

nice

Insane:

niceee

Beautiful song, and I don't see any problems

starred~

Lokamp

2,530 posts

Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2009-09-23T20:09:58+00:00

Normal
01:05:386 - kiai time from here until the end
01:26:32 - new beat

LuigiHann's Hard
00:26:26 (4) - move it a bit to the left

Insane
no problems!

Star 4 this jewel de-graved! ^^

Kurai

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7,734 posts

Joined March 2009

Kurai 2009-09-25T15:36:38+00:00

Hi

[Normal]
01:26:219 Make a Slider to 01:27:230

[LuigiHann's Hard]
01:25:882 [1] Move this Spinner one beat later and create a circle here.

[Insane]
01:26:219 Make a Slider to 01:27:230

Good Map ^^

☼Star☼

Ephemeral

Inland Empire

3,945 posts

Joined April 2009

Ephemeral 2009-09-26T07:30:39+00:00

Timing: NO
Offset: NO

[Normal]
00:15:25 (1) - Weird design. You could probably make that a figure of eight if you wanted to be reeeeally classy.
[I did it for you:
432,304,15258,6,0,B|464:272|496:232|440:192|424:144|344:168|304:152|320:144|264:88|264:48|312:16|376:16|416:48|488:80|408:136|296:256|392:288|464:320,1,640,0|4]
00:42:82 (5) - Insert a break after this.
01:25:88 (1) - Put this in the center.

[LuigiHann's Hard]
00:25:11 (2) - Shift bezier point to mid and draw end point to minimum possible point in parallel with origin point
00:25:83 (3) - Equalize the mid bezier point (shift up a unit)
00:27:68 (3) - Draw mid bezier point two units to the left
00:28:39 (5) - Draw mid bezier point up one unit
00:29:68 (3) - Shift mid bezier point down by two units and right by one, align end bezier to minimum possible point
00:33:96 (2) - Draw mid bezier point to the left and up by one unit
01:10:51 (3) - Draw mid bezier up by one unit and to the right by one unit
01:11:66 (5) - Draw mid bezier up by one unit
01:15:08 (2) - Just align the bezier points to a right angle, have end at minimum possible point
01:19:65 (3) - Draw mid bezier up by one and to the left by one

[Insane]
01:09:94 (1) - Mid up by one, left by one

Cool map. LH's diff is a bit of a SLIDER MONSTROSITY as far as construction goes but aside from that it's pretty good.

Certainly a ranking candidate. The timing sections made me laugh.

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-09-26T13:06:27+00:00

Normal
00:47:604 - fix break, it doesn't end right

LuigiHann's Hard
Nothing ;_;

Insane
00:47:533 - fix break

kk, nothing really bad with this map, just a suggestion, maybe u can take away some of the timing sections that aren't used in some diffs, unless i'm right and they are in used, like the one at the very end of the map :O

p.s. don't give me kudosu if nothing useful , map was a bit too perfect