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[General]
That source is huuuuuge. That is all.
Add a new red line at offset 264907 178.00 BPM. That last note is 1/8 off.
[Normal]
OD +1 should be safe. I like this better with smaller circles, but it might be a bit dangerous since it's the easiest of the set.
Overall a nice map though.
[Hard]
AR 8 OD 5? :/ Especially after the Normal that had AR 4 OD 2, this is a big step up. should set this to AR 7, OD 6. It's still a huge gap, but I got tentative okay's on the spread if this happens.
01:26:045 (3,1,2) - Whoa, the spacing here is pretty ambiguous. I'd keep the spacing the same amongst these three.
02:42:057 - Can you make this volume transition smoother? It's quite noticeable right now and sounds strange.
02:54:866 (3,1) - You should add finishes on these too
[Insane]
00:51:495 (1,2) - This was kind of strange to encounter as a stack.
01:01:607 (3,4,5) - These are snapped incorrectly. They should be ending on 1/3 snap. Was weird hit hit 1/4 with that 1/3 line going under the slider.
01:03:124 (3,4,5) - This triple feels kind of random. There aren't any other triples until 01:19:135 (4,5,6) - and even that one is in a completely different place. If you used them a little more consistently it would feel better as a translation of the song itself instead of the pattern which seems to be the case here. I won't point any others out, but it is weird to come across them. Same thing happens at 02:10:371 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - . You got 02:13:068 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - at least, and keeping them in a stack would be fine if you had all the other 1/6 parts in the correct snap since it won't be nearly as much of a surprise.
01:25:034 (2,3) - Move down and right two grids to adjust for stacking
03:19:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could you maybe accent the vocals with hitsounds here? Switching from the 1/3 rhythm to the 1/2 rhythm while the 1/3 piano part is still going is really confusing. Having the hitsounds there to change what the player is listening to should help ease this transition.
That source is huuuuuge. That is all.
Add a new red line at offset 264907 178.00 BPM. That last note is 1/8 off.
[Normal]
OD +1 should be safe. I like this better with smaller circles, but it might be a bit dangerous since it's the easiest of the set.
Overall a nice map though.
[Hard]
AR 8 OD 5? :/ Especially after the Normal that had AR 4 OD 2, this is a big step up. should set this to AR 7, OD 6. It's still a huge gap, but I got tentative okay's on the spread if this happens.
01:26:045 (3,1,2) - Whoa, the spacing here is pretty ambiguous. I'd keep the spacing the same amongst these three.
02:42:057 - Can you make this volume transition smoother? It's quite noticeable right now and sounds strange.
02:54:866 (3,1) - You should add finishes on these too
[Insane]
00:51:495 (1,2) - This was kind of strange to encounter as a stack.
01:01:607 (3,4,5) - These are snapped incorrectly. They should be ending on 1/3 snap. Was weird hit hit 1/4 with that 1/3 line going under the slider.
01:03:124 (3,4,5) - This triple feels kind of random. There aren't any other triples until 01:19:135 (4,5,6) - and even that one is in a completely different place. If you used them a little more consistently it would feel better as a translation of the song itself instead of the pattern which seems to be the case here. I won't point any others out, but it is weird to come across them. Same thing happens at 02:10:371 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - . You got 02:13:068 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - at least, and keeping them in a stack would be fine if you had all the other 1/6 parts in the correct snap since it won't be nearly as much of a surprise.
01:25:034 (2,3) - Move down and right two grids to adjust for stacking
03:19:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could you maybe accent the vocals with hitsounds here? Switching from the 1/3 rhythm to the 1/2 rhythm while the 1/3 piano part is still going is really confusing. Having the hitsounds there to change what the player is listening to should help ease this transition.
Hi! Just stopping by to say that I loved the map, Laurier so pro as usual =w=
One thing I wanted to point out is that I don't think the 1/6 circles in Insane should be stacked. I'm talking about 02:13:068 (3,4,5,6,7,8) and 02:58:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6). The rhythms are really hard to get the first time, and those are the only spots where the rhythm is 1/6. I think it'd be better to make them repeating sliders or something D:
One thing I wanted to point out is that I don't think the 1/6 circles in Insane should be stacked. I'm talking about 02:13:068 (3,4,5,6,7,8) and 02:58:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6). The rhythms are really hard to get the first time, and those are the only spots where the rhythm is 1/6. I think it'd be better to make them repeating sliders or something D:
Topic Starter
I changed 1/3 patterns and I keep triples. I like this tripls ><Garven wrote:
[General]
That source is huuuuuge. That is all.
Add a new red line at offset 264907 178.00 BPM. That last note is 1/8 off. ok!
[Normal]
OD +1 should be safe. I like this better with smaller circles, but it might be a bit dangerous since it's the easiest of the set. ok!
Overall a nice map though.
[Hard]
AR 8 OD 5? :/ Especially after the Normal that had AR 4 OD 2, this is a big step up. should set this to AR 7, OD 6. It's still a huge gap, but I got tentative okay's on the spread if this happens. ok!
01:26:045 (3,1,2) - Whoa, the spacing here is pretty ambiguous. I'd keep the spacing the same amongst these three. changed
02:42:057 - Can you make this volume transition smoother? It's quite noticeable right now and sounds strange. ok
02:54:866 (3,1) - You should add finishes on these too added
[Insane]
00:51:495 (1,2) - This was kind of strange to encounter as a stack. make a parfect stack
01:01:607 (3,4,5) - These are snapped incorrectly. They should be ending on 1/3 snap. Was weird hit hit 1/4 with that 1/3 line going under the slider. changed
01:03:124 (3,4,5) - This triple feels kind of random. There aren't any other triples until 01:19:135 (4,5,6) - and even that one is in a completely different place. If you used them a little more consistently it would feel better as a translation of the song itself instead of the pattern which seems to be the case here. I won't point any others out, but it is weird to come across them. Same thing happens at 02:10:371 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - . You got 02:13:068 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - at least, and keeping them in a stack would be fine if you had all the other 1/6 parts in the correct snap since it won't be nearly as much of a surprise.
01:25:034 (2,3) - Move down and right two grids to adjust for stacking ok
03:19:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could you maybe accent the vocals with hitsounds here? Switching from the 1/3 rhythm to the 1/2 rhythm while the 1/3 piano part is still going is really confusing. Having the hitsounds there to change what the player is listening to should help ease this transition. changed hit sounds
thanks for mod!!
Clarified a few more things in IRC. We're good to go now! Rebubbled!
[General]
How about if you use this BG http://puu.sh/6IMET.png? Without the letterbox looks better, imo.
[Insane]
00:51:495 (1,2) - This kinda threw me off, because everything is so jumpy, never thought this was 1/2 notes. Would be awesome if you separate it more, just like the rest. Example: http://puu.sh/6IJJC.jpg
01:22:506 (1,2) - This part keeps throwing me off, If you Ctrl+G these two, I think will feel better while playing, so is the same these stacks you did on the rest of the map, that where awesome: 00:43:573 (2,3) - 00:58:405 (2,3) - 00:59:753 (2,1) -01:06:832 (3,4) -01:27:057 (2,3) - ,etc. (If you do this, you should remove 01:23:012 (3) - and stack the next slider (01:23:180 -) under 01:22:675 (2) - and fix spacing)
03:56:887 (1,2) - Same as above
[Hard]
00:49:388 (3,4) - These would be easier to read if you do this: http://puu.sh/6IL7M.jpg (this way is easier to tell are 1/4 notes)
01:12:057 (2,3,1)- Can you make spacing between 2 and 3, shorter than spacing between 3 and 1?
03:19:135 (2) - Why dont you here, add another slider like this 03:19:472 (3) - , feels kinda empty
04:21:831 (3) - how about a 1/2 slider with a repeat here, instead of this 1/1
How about if you use this BG http://puu.sh/6IMET.png? Without the letterbox looks better, imo.
[Insane]
00:51:495 (1,2) - This kinda threw me off, because everything is so jumpy, never thought this was 1/2 notes. Would be awesome if you separate it more, just like the rest. Example: http://puu.sh/6IJJC.jpg
01:22:506 (1,2) - This part keeps throwing me off, If you Ctrl+G these two, I think will feel better while playing, so is the same these stacks you did on the rest of the map, that where awesome: 00:43:573 (2,3) - 00:58:405 (2,3) - 00:59:753 (2,1) -01:06:832 (3,4) -01:27:057 (2,3) - ,etc. (If you do this, you should remove 01:23:012 (3) - and stack the next slider (01:23:180 -) under 01:22:675 (2) - and fix spacing)
03:56:887 (1,2) - Same as above
[Hard]
00:49:388 (3,4) - These would be easier to read if you do this: http://puu.sh/6IL7M.jpg (this way is easier to tell are 1/4 notes)
01:12:057 (2,3,1)- Can you make spacing between 2 and 3, shorter than spacing between 3 and 1?
03:19:135 (2) - Why dont you here, add another slider like this 03:19:472 (3) - , feels kinda empty
04:21:831 (3) - how about a 1/2 slider with a repeat here, instead of this 1/1
Topic Starter
thanks for mod ^^Lissette wrote:
[General]
How about if you use this BG http://puu.sh/6IMET.png? Without the letterbox looks better, imo. wow thanks!!
[Insane]
00:51:495 (1,2) - This kinda threw me off, because everything is so jumpy, never thought this was 1/2 notes. Would be awesome if you separate it more, just like the rest. Example: http://puu.sh/6IJJC.jpg I want to keep this way. I talked with Garven already about this.
01:22:506 (1,2) - This part keeps throwing me off, If you Ctrl+G these two, I think will feel better while playing, so is the same these stacks you did on the rest of the map, that where awesome: 00:43:573 (2,3) - 00:58:405 (2,3) - 00:59:753 (2,1) -01:06:832 (3,4) -01:27:057 (2,3) - ,etc. (If you do this, you should remove 01:23:012 (3) - and stack the next slider (01:23:180 -) under 01:22:675 (2) - and fix spacing)
03:56:887 (1,2) - Same as above ok, changed
[Hard]
00:49:388 (3,4) - These would be easier to read if you do this: http://puu.sh/6IL7M.jpg (this way is easier to tell are 1/4 notes) ok
01:12:057 (2,3,1)- Can you make spacing between 2 and 3, shorter than spacing between 3 and 1? um..its ok imo
03:19:135 (2) - Why dont you here, add another slider like this 03:19:472 (3) - , feels kinda empty ok changed
04:21:831 (3) - how about a 1/2 slider with a repeat here, instead of this 1/1 i feel my way is better.
Great, ranked!
congratulations!
Congrats 
Congratz!
litoluna wrote:
Congratz!
still needs more Laurier <3
gratss <33
gratss <33
omedeto~
Congrtaz!! Laurier-san 
Topic Starter
Arigato!
Satellite wrote:
litoluna wrote:
Congratz!
yea
I didn't notice that this map had been ranked. OMG10nya wrote:
still needs more Laurier <3
gratss <33
Anyway, Congratulation!
osu! Need more Laurier
Such beautiful song...;w;!
Congrats!
Congrats!