1. Hard (4.69 stars, 669 notes)
2. Insane (4.91 stars, 951 notes)
3. Normal (3.1 stars, 340 notes)

Lecana wrote:

Cralis⇒Clarisだと思われますます！

1. I think add note on 00:20:652 and 00:20:989 is more fit the song and more playable. you can make it stack with the old two note or new pattern ><
2. nazi here, move 00:24:866 (3) to 409|183 for perfect stack :3
3. 00:24:866 (3) - move to 230|267 for ^
4. what about add clap on 00:39:023 (7) head instead of whis?
5. 00:45:933 (5) - move to 164|342 perfect stack.
6. hmm 01:01:607 (3,4,5) is the only part that you not use streams, maybe change it to same with other? the stream is better fit too imo.
7. 01:11:382 (1) - make it more stack? its too obvious ff you not intentional.
8. 01:25:034 (2,3) - ^
9. 02:23:686 (4) - move to 240|252? better blanket.
10. 03:57:393 (3) - NC?
11. 04:03:123 (4) - move to 173|182
12. 04:09:528 (2) - move to 140|257

1. 00:08:012 (3) - maybe change to thisrhythm? more fit imo :X
2. 00:50:652 (2) - better blanket?
3. 02:28:068 (3) - better stack
4. 02:40:371 (4) - ctrl+g is more flow here
5. 03:42:056 (1,2) - better blanket?
6. 04:03:292 (3) - move to 124|248 for better blanket

1. 00:39:360 (1) - move tail to 360|204 for better blanket.
2. 01:34:641 (1) - maybe remove NC here? beginner see (1) 2 note can get confuse imo.
3. 03:07:675 (1,2,1) - make them more balance blanket? like this
   

   171,191,187675,6,0,P|241:158|310:196,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   236,248,188686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   164,300,189023,6,0,P|236:340|304:308,2,160,2|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 03:15:764 (1) - move to 258|311
5. 04:14:078 (1) - move tail to 232|298?

1. sourceに"劇場版 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ[新編]叛逆の物語"を追加
   Tagsにもローマ字読みで追加しても良いと思います。

1. 00:51:495 (1) - 00:50:821 (2) - をblanketしたほうが綺麗にみえたのでどうでしょうか。
2. 01:37:675 (1) - 1grid右にずらしてx336に移動すると丁度1.10になると思います。
3. 03:20:652 (2) - 始端にWhistle付けてもいいと思います。

• 
  流れよくて特になかったです。
  nice map!

1. 02:58:910 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - pianoの音をとっているならここは1/3で置かないとBack音に合わないと思います。
   
2. 03:19:135 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
   
3. 04:04:387 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
   

• Nice map as usual Laurier, so maybe I'll just have to throw up a little suggestion XD

1. Um.. I'm not sure for the source written in japanese (or is it a new rule?), personally I prefer the english source since not many people can read japanese. If you consider this, you could put the japanese source in tags field instead
2. Please add some tags (mahou shoujo movie opening etc.) I think you know better than me

1. 00:35:989 (4) Blanket it better with (2)
2. 00:36:663(1,2,3,4,5) I don't think this consecutive repetition pattern fits here. Well, it's indeed fun to play, but the music doesn't provide it since the music itself is keeping a constant tone and volume
3. 01:02:028 (4,5) Is it intentional not to put these straight with (3)?
4. 01:12:731 (1,2) I think it's important to make a 1/4 slider jump to be leaned up to each other, so it would flow better. In addition, I think you should move
5. 01:11:888 (2) to x:224 y:48 so that it can be stacked well with 01:12:899 (2)
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:14:416 (1) Why not try to stack it with the shadow of 01:12:394 (5)? I'm sure I heard a rise of tone on the slider tail, so it would be better to make a little jump between this slider and the next circle
7. 01:18:798 (3) Try to ctrl+g, since I'm sure the volume rises on the triplet 01:19:135 (4,5,6) instead of (3), so I think it's more reasonable to make a jump to the triplet instead
8. 02:15:933 (3,4,5) Make a proper triangle? I think (5) doesn't need to be stacked. Inststead, it's better to stack 02:16:944 (2) to the new position of (5)
9. 02:24:191 (1,2,1) Lean it to each other, and it's better to curve the 1/2 slider a bit to make a better flow
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 02:35:315 (1,2) How about this? But well, I think you can do better than this
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 03:39:022 (1,2,1) Hm.. not sure about this, somehow it's quite tricky to play
12. 04:06:831 (3) Curve it better so it can blanket with 04:07:505 (5)?
13. 04:21:157 (1,2) lol somehow this antijump feels so sudden. Well, up to you if you wanna keep it
14. 04:23:516 (4) Maybe ctrl+g

1. 00:35:315 (1) Curve it a little?
2. 00:39:866 (2,3) I think it's better if these not be stacked since the vocal in this part is rising gradually
3. 01:00:259 (1,2,3,4) Just wondering why you even need 3 anchor here, I think 2 are enough
4. 01:12:394 (3) I prefer make the rhythm similar with 02:23:517 (3,4,5) sounds nicer to me
5. 01:34:641 (1,3) You sure don't want to make these symmetrical?
6. 01:43:236 (3) Two anchor is enough
7. 01:43:236 (2) ^
8. 01:54:191 (2,3) Maybe ctrl+g, it will make an interesting flow, here's an illustration, maybe you can adjust it a little later
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 03:35:988 (3,4) Two anchor is enough
10. 04:20:146 (2,3) ^
11. 04:21:831 (3) I'm sure this section has the same rhythm with 04:22:505 so why it's being a 1/1 slider while the other's being a 1/2 slider?

1. 00:09:698 (2) Somehow the slidertick here sound a little noisy, silence it?
2. 00:51:495 (1) Nazi, move the slider tail 1 grid upward
3. 01:05:989 (2) Two anchor is enough
4. 02:09:697 (1) I think it's better to use soft slidertick-3 instead, the recent slidertick sounds noisy
5. 02:31:944 (2) Two anchor is enough
6. 02:32:618 (1,1) Well, somehow the rhythm emptiness here doesn't sound good, see 01:21:158 for reference
7. 03:11:719 (1) Two anchor
8. 03:23:180 (3) ^
9. 03:35:651 (2) ^
10. 03:44:415 (2) Two anchor or curve it more like the next (2)

El SolarBeam wrote:

my mod as promised~
sorry I can't mod hitsound since I'm suck at it

[General]

[list]Nice map as usual Laurier, so maybe I'll just have to throw up a little suggestion XD
[*]Um.. I'm not sure for the source written in japanese (or is it a new rule?), personally I prefer the english source since not many people can read japanese. If you consider this, you could put the japanese source in tags field instead

[Insane]

[*]01:02:028 (4,5) Is it intentional not to put these straight with (3)?
[*]01:18:798 (3) Try to ctrl+g, since I'm sure the volume rises on the triplet 01:19:135 (4,5,6) instead of (3), so I think it's more reasonable to make a jump to the triplet instead
[*]04:06:831 (3) Curve it better so it can blanket with 04:07:505 (5)?

[Hard]



[Normal]

[*]00:51:495 (1) Nazi, move the slider tail 1 grid upward

this is a good map, so it's better to rise the priority a little~
have my star o/

sammy711 wrote:

いい譜面です！　まぁ...ローリエさんの譜面にはちょっと見えませんね...

01:12:731 (1,2) - いつから1/4sliderを使い始めたのでしょう>.>
素晴らしい感じですけど　以前の譜面にはこんなもの　見たことありませんから、今度初めて出るのがちょっと妙な感じ
この前はローリエさんが絶対1/4slider使わないと判断しました0 0


また1/3noteが出るのも驚きましたΣ(ﾟдﾟlll)　これもこの前出たことの少ない配置ですね

これからローリエさんの譜面にもっと面白い配置が出るのを期待します　>.<

1. 検索機能としては今のtagでも十分ですが、tags suggetionとして一応これも:
   Puella Magi
   movie
   rebellion
2. combo colourの１と２は見分けにくいような・・・

1. 00:02:956 (3) - end at 00:03:630 低速なので出だしだけは1/1rhythmがありがたい
2. 01:22:675 (1) - delete and add a note at 01:23:180- rhythm取りが難しいので（下手でごめん・・・）
3. 01:56:214 (1) - move to x:137 y:258 (stack corretly)
4. 02:36:326 (2) - move to x:296 y:29 (^)

1. 00:20:484 (5) - NC
2. 01:35:821- add a note
3. 01:42:731 (1) - x:34 y:320 (stack corretly)
4. 02:38:517 (2) - x:276 y:146 (^)
5. 02:40:371 (4) - Ctrl+G. 次のspinnerまでの間隔が短いのでendが中央に近いとやりやすいです
6. 03:08:686 (5) - x:426 y:203 (stack corretly)
7. 03:21:495 (2) - x:308 y:112 (^)
8. 03:33:966 (1) - x:184 y:199 (^)
9. 03:35:314 (1) - x:184 y:199 (^)
10. 03:42:898- remove clap?

1. 01:21:495 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - star-pattern どうでしょう？
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   29,166,81495,2,0,L|37:255,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   135,342,81832,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   107,211,82000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   53,334,82169,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   170,266,82337,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   53,334,82506,5,12,0:0:0:0:
   29,166,82675,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   53,334,83012,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   135,342,83180,2,0,P|169:351|213:338,1,67.5000025749208

2. 01:24:528 (1,2,3) - 意図的にずらしてます？
3. 03:24:866 (6) - x:255 y:140 (stack corretly)
4. 03:24:697 (5) - x:184 y:31 (^)　(これは離れているのでどうでもよいかも)
5. 04:07:337 (4) - x:142 y:257 (^)
6. 04:23:179 (3,4) - どっちかCtrl+G

1. tagに"opening""movie"を追加

1. 00:02:282 (2) - NC
2. 01:05:989 (2) - 真ん中の点の削除？
3. 01:10:034 (1) - 真ん中の点が中心から少しずれてます
4. 01:11:045 (2) - 終尾にfinish
5. 02:22:843 (1) - finish
6. 02:38:012 (1) - 中心をx:288 y:224辺りでもいいと思います
7. 03:06:326 (1) - ここのslidertickをCustom4に
8. 03:36:325 (1) - clap
9. 03:37:337 (4) - 終尾にfinish
10. 04:14:078 (1) - 中心をx:120 y:300辺りでもいいと思います

1. 01:11:382 (4) - finish
2. 02:22:169 (2) - clap
3. 02:22:506 (3) - ^
4. 02:22:843 (1) - finish
5. 02:28:068 (3) - ここのslidertickをCustom4に
6. 03:23:854 (1) - finish
7. 03:36:662 (1) - 終尾にclap
8. 03:37:674 (3) - finish

1. 00:11:720 (3) - clap
2. 01:10:708 (2) - ^
3. 02:22:169 (2) - ^
4. 04:14:584 (3) - ^

Wafu wrote:

Here is 192kbps mp3, you should replace it since you have only 128kbps what is lowest rankable quality, while 192kbps highest rankable. https://db.tt/qv5xDRVf (no need to change offset, because it starts on the same position as original bpm)

However, your current timing is wrong. Your first red point is on 00:00:597. It is wrong, because downbeat isl moved on 00:03:294 etc., what is wrong, because you can hear that nothing what could be downbeat is not here. Real downbeats are: 00:01:608, 00:04:305, you can also here these are louder than other places and there is emphasized bell sound, which is on every downbeat. It means real offset should be -1088. However, if you think negative offset is bad, just make another red line on 00:01:608, but negative offset is correct here. It should be fixed, because there is low amount of red points, others are okay, this is only one that is wrong, and also it afflicts taiko, osu!mania and nightcore mode.

If you won't fix this, please, make me a favour and give me a reason that is not: "I think it's okay." If you don't understand me, ask me about it, I can explain more.

No kd for this post.

Garven wrote:

[General]
That source is huuuuuge. That is all.
Add a new red line at offset 264907 178.00 BPM. That last note is 1/8 off. ok!

[Normal]
OD +1 should be safe. I like this better with smaller circles, but it might be a bit dangerous since it's the easiest of the set. ok!
Overall a nice map though.

[Hard]
AR 8 OD 5? :/ Especially after the Normal that had AR 4 OD 2, this is a big step up. should set this to AR 7, OD 6. It's still a huge gap, but I got tentative okay's on the spread if this happens. ok!
01:26:045 (3,1,2) - Whoa, the spacing here is pretty ambiguous. I'd keep the spacing the same amongst these three. changed
02:42:057 - Can you make this volume transition smoother? It's quite noticeable right now and sounds strange. ok
02:54:866 (3,1) - You should add finishes on these too added

[Insane]
00:51:495 (1,2) - This was kind of strange to encounter as a stack. make a parfect stack
01:01:607 (3,4,5) - These are snapped incorrectly. They should be ending on 1/3 snap. Was weird hit hit 1/4 with that 1/3 line going under the slider. changed
01:03:124 (3,4,5) - This triple feels kind of random. There aren't any other triples until 01:19:135 (4,5,6) - and even that one is in a completely different place. If you used them a little more consistently it would feel better as a translation of the song itself instead of the pattern which seems to be the case here. I won't point any others out, but it is weird to come across them. Same thing happens at 02:10:371 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - . You got 02:13:068 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - at least, and keeping them in a stack would be fine if you had all the other 1/6 parts in the correct snap since it won't be nearly as much of a surprise.
01:25:034 (2,3) - Move down and right two grids to adjust for stacking ok
03:19:809 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Could you maybe accent the vocals with hitsounds here? Switching from the 1/3 rhythm to the 1/2 rhythm while the 1/3 piano part is still going is really confusing. Having the hitsounds there to change what the player is listening to should help ease this transition. changed hit sounds

Lissette wrote:

[General]
How about if you use this BG http://puu.sh/6IMET.png? Without the letterbox looks better, imo. wow thanks!!

[Insane]
00:51:495 (1,2) - This kinda threw me off, because everything is so jumpy, never thought this was 1/2 notes. Would be awesome if you separate it more, just like the rest. Example: http://puu.sh/6IJJC.jpg　I want to keep this way.　I talked with Garven already about this.
01:22:506 (1,2) - This part keeps throwing me off, If you Ctrl+G these two, I think will feel better while playing, so is the same these stacks you did on the rest of the map, that where awesome: 00:43:573 (2,3) - 00:58:405 (2,3) - 00:59:753 (2,1) -01:06:832 (3,4) -01:27:057 (2,3) - ,etc. (If you do this, you should remove 01:23:012 (3) - and stack the next slider (01:23:180 -) under 01:22:675 (2) - and fix spacing)
03:56:887 (1,2) - Same as above　ok, changed

[Hard]
00:49:388 (3,4) - These would be easier to read if you do this: http://puu.sh/6IL7M.jpg (this way is easier to tell are 1/4 notes) ok
01:12:057 (2,3,1)- Can you make spacing between 2 and 3, shorter than spacing between 3 and 1? um..its ok imo
03:19:135 (2) - Why dont you here, add another slider like this 03:19:472 (3) - , feels kinda empty ok changed
04:21:831 (3) - how about a 1/2 slider with a repeat here, instead of this 1/1 i feel my way is better.

litoluna wrote:

Congratz!

Satellite wrote:

litoluna wrote:

Congratz!

10nya wrote:

still needs more Laurier <3

gratss <33