Hello, from my queue~
[Hard]
00:11:719 (1,2,3) - maybe spread it?
00:18:501 - add note here like other patterns before?
00:32:294 - ^
00:33:788 (9) - seriously? this is unreadable
00:48:961 (2) - slider's end stacked with 00:48:271 (1) - tail, make it separate futher from (1)
01:04:823 (5) - NC here
01:53:789 (1) - remove NC here and add NC on 01:54:478 (3) - because you add NC in start of lyric
01:59:651 - add note here
02:05:168 (5) - add NC here, imo combo is too long
02:11:030 (6) - ^
02:19:651 (3,4,5) - make it like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1508561 the slider flow better like this
02:25:168 (3) - remove clap on slider's start
02:27:582 (7) - NC here, you add nc at humming part
02:46:202 (1,2) - these sliders sounds weird, split them to follow phrase or drum
02:48:616 (3) - NC here
02:51:719 (1,2) - same as 02:46:202 (1,2) -
02:54:133 (3) - NC here
02:54:133 (3,4,5,6,7) - just a suggestion, imo 1/2 notes here looks plain so consider to follow drum here and don't just use slider, use some notes.
02:57:237 - also highly recommended to start kiai with new note, so consider to make (7) slider shorter
02:57:237 - 03:19:306 - imo most plain kiai in whole section, almost no 1/6 notes. because it's the last kiai, maybe consider to make it harder or at least same difficulty as other kiai section?
03:17:237 (6) - nc here
comment: pretty good, but some 1/6 notes not follow music well. there're some part that follow lyric, but there're some other that I not understand what it is follow. and there're much slider ended at big white tick. it follow lyric, but there're gap that could be filled because white tick is start of new beat in music. also check NC consistency, if you follow lyric, just continue your NC like that in whole diff.
[Normal]
since there's so much overlap here, I guess AR (Approach Rate) 5 is ok for readability
01:15:168 (5) - remove whistle at slider's tail
02:42:064 (2) - remove clap at slider's tail
02:51:719 (1,2,3,4) - er... not really like this flow. put 4 somewhere else and change its shape?
comment: those overlaps... some looks good but some not
also those stack ruin flow sometimes like 02:01:720 (5,1,2) - I prefer to unstack slider (2) from slider (5)'s tail
that's all, hope it'll help. if there's any question, just ask me