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Natsumi Kiyoura - Tabi no Tochuu

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Weinmagier
41 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Weinmagier
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Dienstag, 27. Oktober 2009 at 15:49:50

Artist: Natsumi Kiyoura
Title: Tabi no Tochuu
Source: Spice and Wolf
Tags: Spice and Wolf opening op
BPM: 172
Filesize: 6694kb
Play Time: 04:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,56 stars, 477 notes)
  2. Normal (3,12 stars, 278 notes)
Download: Natsumi Kiyoura - Tabi no Tochuu
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My 4th Beatmap

Natsumi Kiyoura - Tabi no Tochuu
Spice and Wolf opening (full ver.)

Normal ( Dangaard )
Hard ( Weinmagier )

<Hard>
Edit1: Mystearica (general modding)
Edit2: Mafiamaster/Alace (spacing)
Edit3: Alace,Kiou?,Quintitem (timing)
Edit4: Starrodkirby86 (nazi changes)
Edit5: Card N'FoRcE
Edit6: JarJarJacob
Edit7: whymeman
Edit8: Derekku Chan
Edit9: MaxwellDemon
Last edited by Weinmagier , edited 19 times in total.
Mystearica
Mystearica
Nice anime and nice song, one of my favorites ^_^

[Hard]

I feel it's arranged too straight and squareish, try to use more patterns if you can and possibly more variance in slider shape.

Use a silenced slidertick sound sample, I think it sounds better that way.

00:23:62 - redo this break, it lengthens
01:15:95 (4) - new combo here possibly
01:20:83 (3) - lower volume on this clap
01:37:58 (5) - ^
01:39:67 (3) - ^
01:41:06 - maybe add a note here or add 2 to make that a 7 stream, I think adding 1 sounds better
01:41:76 (8) - slightly lower volume on this
01:43:85 (4) - ^
01:45:95 (3) - ^
01:48:04 (3) - ^
01:53:62 - redo this break, it shortens
02:09:32 (1,2,3,4) - maybe incremental volume here as the vocals kind of do that, it's a bit hard to hear
02:44:90 - redo this break, it shortens by a tiny bit
03:06:18 (1) - sounds a bit awkward in my opinion
03:11:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think incremental volume here would be a great effect
03:15:60 (1) - sounds really sudden
04:06:18 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I thought this part didn't sound great
04:08:27 (1) - sounds very sudden
04:12:81 (1,2) - kind of odd sounding to me
04:25:02 (8,9,10) - again I didn't like how this sounded, it's very loud and fast but the song is slow paced
04:31:30 (3) - this as well
04:39:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - definitively add volume control on this part along with the music
04:46:30 (10) - add a 30% soft finish here to ride out with the music

Dan's Normal is good, keep it going!

Fairly good work~
Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Gabi
i really liked this :3 very nice song and relaxing beatmap set.
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard
fumoffu star :3
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Only thing that bugged me...

Normal:

The hit circles under the ends of sliders that lasted more than one beat felt weird and unintuitive. With that big of a gap, there's no reason to move them out from under there, would actually make the map much easier.

Here, have a star. <3
pete2528
412 posts
Joined March 2009
pete2528
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Hard~
04:41:41 (7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Imo, it's too repetitive and should be placed in a different location.

That's practically all I've found that bothered me. NICE JOB!

Why does Normal get the cuter background instead of Hard DDD:
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
goooood
<Hard>
see the .osu
you can try to make a patten like this

Download: Natsumi Kiyoura - Tabi no Tochuu (Weinmagier) [lol].osu
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
nice map you got here :D
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
Fabulous.
Feel free to pop.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
Me kiouonesana and quint got +17ms to offset
we should test it
Weinmagier
41 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Weinmagier
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,739 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
- Normal:
I think someone will complain about the "jumps" in this diff (the easier one). I'm pretty neutral about them, anyway.
I'd start kiai at 3:19:109 instead of 3:18:0620 (up to you, anyway :P ); also, don't you think that this kiai section is pretty long? Hard has shorter kiai sections.

- Hard:
00:17:01 (6) - new combo?
00:30:62 (6) - new combo... maybe? Actually it seems quite badly placed to me, it feels weird. D:
01:48:06 (3) - please stack this under the slider (just place it again to stack better :P )
04:05:15 (3) - i'd add new combo here and remove it at 04:05:67 (1)

Good map and relaxing song ^^
Weinmagier
41 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Weinmagier
Done!
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
very good beatmap :)


star
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
I approve.
kingoffoxes
8 posts
Joined July 2009
kingoffoxes
star
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,739 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
....Ah....
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
Star! *w*
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Remove all kiai points that aren't on the final chorus.

Hard:

01:19:10 - Set audio preview.
Weinmagier
41 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Weinmagier
<normal> (asked dangaard) there won't be any changes
<hard> done
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Normal]

00:41:08 (2) - Fix the end point of this slider. Its not snapped to anything.
04:26:08 - The kiai was left on after the map ended.

[Hard]

00:59:22 (4,5,6) - The spacing between the notes here is not equal.
01:00:27 (6,1) - Slightly too close together.
01:29:22 (3,1) - Too far apart when you check the spacing between 01:28:17 (2,3).
03:13:17 (5,6) - Looks a bit too far apart.
04:18:76 (4,1,2,3) - I've noticed this wasn't squared in evenly altogether.


Overall: The map is not bad at all. It just needs some things to be checked on. There seems to be some places in hard where the distance snap was not accurate with that would have to be checked on. It might make it easier to use the alt + shift to for -/+ .01 on the distance snap rate to even it out.
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard

whymeman wrote:

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~
I think this is quite detailed already :O
Weinmagier
41 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Weinmagier
Done!
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
Woo! A 3/4 map x3

[Normal]
03:51:89 (1) - Kinda close (in time) to the end of the spinner xp
Kinda jumpy, but it's fine.

[Hard]
*A bit easy for 10.5M points, but w/e
*Offset or something feels behind towards the end but I can't put my finger on it...
00:38:99 (7,1) - Align these please. (7) isn't even snapped to grid o_o;
01:20:15 - Expected a note here
01:22:24 (and other open white tick spaces after this) - ^ Just a suggestion, as it sounded a bit empty to me, but I don't want to mess with your style :3
01:43:17 (2) - Stack this on (1) better please xp
02:23:99 (5,6) - Unrankable (can't really tell which is the slider and which is the circle)
02:25:03 (8,9) - ^
03:13:17 (5,6) - Move 6 a bit so that it's the same spacing as (2,3) </nazi>
03:56:08 (1) - Align with previous (2) :3
04:25:03 (8) - Align with previous (6) :3
04:31:31 (3,4) - Stack a bit better

Very cute map o3o
Weinmagier
41 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Weinmagier
Done!


Derekku Chan wrote:

*Offset or something feels behind towards the end but I can't put my finger on it...
i already asked for help^^

Alace wrote:

Me kiouonesana and quint got +17ms to offset we should test it
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
No problems found ^^
I could completely imagine a Storyboard where it slowly fades into a sunset for this difficulty. If you like the idea, maybe I could help you make it?

[Hard]
02:31:31 (1) - Maybe this could be between (2)'s curve a little more?
04:46:66: Add a silent timing section here.

Great beatmap! Starred
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
The map is long...... so what?

Bubbled.
Weinmagier
41 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Weinmagier
thx for bubble
and mod (Azure_Kyte).
There won't be any changes.
MaxwellDemon
osu! Alumni
903 posts
Here since the beginning
MaxwellDemon
[Hard]

01:37:24 (4) - Too close to 3... breaks the flow of the map. :<
04:46:31 (6) - A slow slider would work really well here.

Let me know whether you go through these changes~ Once you have decided, I'll gladly rank it. XD

But for now, I'll pop this bubble. XD
Weinmagier
41 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Weinmagier
Done!
Agnes
osu! Alumni
1,153 posts
Joined July 2009
Agnes
I love you for mapping this song. I really do.

[Normal]

No errors.

[Hard]

No errors.

Overall, awesome map. I've had my eye on it for some time without even realizing it. Star'd.
MaxwellDemon
osu! Alumni
903 posts
Here since the beginning
MaxwellDemon
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Gabi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
Good job. This map was very smooth to play and not so over-the-top insane as maps seem to be nowadays. Good job.
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
nice map :D
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