solfa feat. Chata - Miracle infinity · forum

Melophobia

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Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-01-02T07:10:05+00:00

15:22 Fycho: btw do you have time to test my map now^^?
15:23 Melophobia: ofc
15:23 *Fycho is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/333458 solfa feat. Chata - Miracle infinity]
15:23 Melophobia: Insane?
15:23 Fycho: yes
15:25 Fycho: and I don't know if the video is nsfw since I removed it orz...
15:25 *Melophobia is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/333458 solfa feat. Chata - Miracle infinity [Insane]]
15:27 Melophobia: k im bad
15:27 Fycho: /w.\
15:29 Melophobia: *okay*
15:30 Melophobia: cant really stream cuz its way too cold here..
15:30 Fycho: so cold0.0
15:31 Melophobia: 00:42:063 (2,3) - doesnt flow well imo
15:31 Melophobia: because of its direction
15:32 Fycho: 1/1 spacing flow is not that more important than 1/2 imo
15:32 Fycho: to match the stress
15:33 Melophobia: hmm
15:34 Melophobia: mb thats because
15:34 Melophobia: 00:42:063 (2) - is too cornered
15:34 Melophobia: move it downward and it flows better imo
15:34 Melophobia: meh if you think its not important thats ok then
15:35 Fycho: ok moved a little
15:36 Melophobia: 01:24:230 (6,7,1) - hard to hit
15:37 Melophobia: id replace 6 and 7 with a slider
15:37 Melophobia: up to you tho
15:38 Fycho: I played and found that not hard to hit
15:42 Melophobia: 01:11:563 (2,3) - mb this could flow better by curving the slider in the opposite direction?
15:42 Melophobia: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1219351
15:42 Melophobia: no big difference
15:44 Melophobia: 01:16:480 (7) - id remove this circle
15:44 Melophobia: using 2 triplets in a row plays bad for me
15:45 Melophobia: 01:28:897 (2) - newcombo here instead of (1)
15:46 Melophobia: btw ask multiple bats about the stack leniency
15:47 Melophobia: i'd say no for this usage
15:47 Fycho: so stack leniency 7?
15:48 Melophobia: or you should manual-stack many 1/1 stack patterns
15:49 Melophobia: indeed some patterns such as 01:31:230 (1,2) - are looking better with stack leniency 5
15:49 Melophobia: so ask other staff first
15:50 Fycho: ok
15:50 Melophobia: 00:08:480 (4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - how about increasing volume setting gradually?
15:51 Melophobia: like 20% => 30% => 40% ...
15:52 Fycho: ok
15:53 Fycho: in fact the volume in music seems the same
15:54 Melophobia: by doing that you can even manipulate it tho
15:54 Melophobia: and it fits nicely with ur pattern
15:55 Melophobia: 00:17:063 (3,1) - btw hard to hit for tablet players like me
15:55 Melophobia: just my opinion
15:56 Melophobia: 00:17:397 (1,2,3) - flows bad
15:56 Melophobia: due to its direction and inconsistent spacing
15:57 Fycho: fixed the spacing
15:58 Melophobia: 01:06:563 (3) - newcombo here?
15:58 Fycho: ok
15:58 Melophobia: 01:19:230 (1,2) - i like this btw
15:58 Fycho: forgot it lol
15:59 Fycho: thanks..
16:00 Melophobia: 01:37:897 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - u can also consider using the gradually increasing volume here
16:00 Melophobia: more suitable for the last of this difficulty imo
16:00 Melophobia: just suggestion
16:01 Fycho: ok use 50% for the first four and 60% for the rest
16:01 Melophobia: cool
16:01 Melophobia: and thats all
16:02 Fycho: wo!thanks for suggestions^
16:07 Fycho: post it to forum if you don't mind and I will give u kd
16:07 Melophobia: k

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2014-01-03T12:55:45+00:00

melo wants me to recheck this, cuz he's busy these days

changelog

[insane]
00:08:563 (1) - added nc
00:08:563 - added green section to make the volume changing more smoothly
01:06:563 (1) - added nc
01:08:897 (2) - changed rhythm from 3/4 to 1/2
01:11:730 (3,1) - changed arc direction for better flow
that's all

nothing wrong, bubble fixed
melo might rank this when he has time

grumd

1,790 posts

Joined October 2010

grumd 2014-01-04T12:29:06+00:00

— Laurier's Insane

00:31:647 (3) - Remove this note, no sound in the music under it
00:31:147 - Add a note here instead, make it a triple. Listen at 50% to hear the sounds if you're not sure.
00:24:480 - 00:27:147 - 00:29:813 - 00:35:147 - 00:37:813 - 00:40:480 - You might want to add notes at these places for the bass sounds. Feel free to refuse though.

— Insane

00:16:397 (1) - 1 grid up for proper spacing :v
00:58:563 (4) - Move the end point 1 grid down :v
01:31:397 - Please remove this note. It has a very bad rhythmical positioning. The climax sound at the downbeat, 01:31:230 - , askes for a pause afterwards, so this note is very distracting and unneeded. It should be removed.
You might also want to add triples at the bass sounds at these places (as I suggested in Laurier's Insane: 00:24:480 - 00:27:147 - 00:29:813 - 00:35:147 - 00:37:813 - 00:40:480 -

— Hard

00:38:397 - Might add a note here? Would make a good transition.
01:21:897 (1,2,3) - If you listen to the vocals here, you'll see that you don't have a vocal on 01:22:063 - but you have a vocal sound on 01:22:397 - . Swapping some objects will make the rhythm better: http://puu.sh/6984i.jpg

— Normal

AR is really low compared to the slider speed. I'd like to see AR+1 here. But do as you want, both choices are fine.
00:41:563 - Very important: add a note here. Otherwise this transition from white ticks to red ticks is not that easy to read and will cause many combo breaks.
00:48:397 - Add a note here?
01:31:230 (1) - This is a kind of anti-jump, quite confusing to play, players might think it's a small jump or 3/4 rhythm. Place (1) farther,at 0.8x distance. Like that for example: http://puu.sh/698l2.jpg
And even better add a note at 01:30:897 -
01:33:897 (1) - Same, place it at 0.8x
01:38:563 (4) - The last repeat is quite unexpected, I expected a triple here.
This slider is actually a problem. Look, 01:39:230 - this point is meant as a part of a stream from 01:38:563 - to 01:39:230 - . But what's the problem, spinner start can't be a fully-functional note. It doesn't need a click from the player and it doesn't have a sound in-game. This is just a place when the spinner appears. If you want to make it a stream, do it like that: http://puu.sh/698rx.jpg
Otherwise just remove the extra repeat: http://puu.sh/698sq.jpg

Laurier

1,785 posts

Joined February 2011

Laurier 2014-01-04T12:41:44+00:00

grumd wrote:
— Laurier's Insane
00:31:647 (3) - Remove this note, no sound in the music under it　　nope I follow the vocal here
00:31:147 - Add a note here instead, make it a triple. Listen at 50% to hear the sounds if you're not sure. the sound is very small. I don't think that need a note
00:24:480 - 00:27:147 - 00:29:813 - 00:35:147 - 00:37:813 - 00:40:480 - You might want to add notes at these places for the bass sounds. Feel free to refuse though.
^ same

thanks for mod.

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-01-04T12:50:40+00:00

grumd wrote:
— Normal
00:48:397 - Add a note here? no, I want to keep it > >

Others all fixed, also AR+1
thanks~

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282,165,86230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Fycho 2014-01-04T12:55:22+00:00

grumd wrote:
— Insane
00:16:397 (1) - 1 grid up for proper spacing :v ok
00:58:563 (4) - Move the end point 1 grid down :vok
01:31:397 - Please remove this note. It has a very bad rhythmical positioning. The climax sound at the downbeat, 01:31:230 - , askes for a pause afterwards, so this note is very distracting and unneeded. It should be removed.I don't think so.Firstly,01:31:397 - here is a drum in music,secondly,the rhythm is the same as01:32:563 - 01:32:730 - 01:33:897 (1,2) - 01:36:563 (1,2) - ,they are two note and jump at01:31:397 (2) - pause at01:31:563 - play good for me,if removing that note or changing to another rhythm like sliders,it's really strange and weird for me ,sorry
You might also want to add triples at the bass sounds at these places (as I suggested in Laurier's Insane: 00:24:480 - 00:27:147 - 00:29:813 - 00:35:147 - 00:37:813 - 00:40:480 -sorry，I prefer vocals and jump/pause here.
— Hard
00:38:397 - Might add a note here? Would make a good transition. ok,added
01:21:897 (1,2,3) - If you listen to the vocals here, you'll see that you don't have a vocal on 01:22:063 - but you have a vocal sound on 01:22:397 - . Swapping some objects will make the rhythm better: http://puu.sh/6984i.jpgTo be honest,I prefer follow drums here,like01:07:397 (1,2) - 01:12:563 (1,2) - these rhythm.I played the entire kiai continually and found there is not strange.

thanks！