Raiku here!
Going to help with the playability a bit, I love maps of this bpm and I have a few suggestions on how to improve the flow!
[Kiiwa]
00:26:340 - I feel as if a little bit more spacing between the triples really accentuates the fact that they are seperate and should be played as such.
00:31:483 - I felt the same should be repeated here.
00:38:512 - New combo here. Easier on the eyes to section into chunks.
[Dance]
00:10:740 (5) - Notice the 1-3-5 combo note line of progression in my change, for the player this sort of continuity is subconscious but strictly important or it will cause frustrating misses. What I did was move slider 5 above slider 3 just as slider 3 is above slider 1 (http://puu.sh/5zykp.jpg).
00:25:740 (7) - The note that was stacked under the slider should be between the 2 sliders to promote flow (http://puu.sh/5zyo1.jpg).
00:27:797 (2) - Similarly, here (http://puu.sh/5zyrd.jpg).
00:36:283 - The slider entering the curvy slider should be attatched as such (http://puu.sh/5zyBr.jpg), since the angle of the triple leading into it goes into the corner. It flows better to arc out of that corner into a curve which is then connected by a note into the last slider in that combo (http://puu.sh/5zyAC.jpg).
01:34:997 (2) - I moved the circle under the slider to inbetween the notes so you curve into the next section of fast sliders, creates better flow (http://puu.sh/5zyKm.jpg).
02:17:254 - Made a change to this pattern as I felt as it was just didn't flow very nicely and didn't do that part of the melody justice, I edited it as such (http://puu.sh/5zyZo.jpg), and then moved the top 2 sliders to cascade downwards into the slider 3 which I moved up slightly to fit them better (http://puu.sh/5zz22.jpg). I also moved circle 4 evenly in between slider 3 and the slider of the next combo to form a nice flowy yellow combo circle line (http://puu.sh/5zz6A.jpg) \;D/.
02:26:426 (4) - Moved this up a little so it was dead centre (http://puu.sh/5zzdy.jpg).
02:38:512 (1) - New combo here.
I had a lot of fun modding this, can't wait to test when its finished and its great fun on hidden too! Good luck and keep me posted!
Going to help with the playability a bit, I love maps of this bpm and I have a few suggestions on how to improve the flow!
[Kiiwa]
00:26:340 - I feel as if a little bit more spacing between the triples really accentuates the fact that they are seperate and should be played as such.
00:31:483 - I felt the same should be repeated here.
00:38:512 - New combo here. Easier on the eyes to section into chunks.
[Dance]
00:10:740 (5) - Notice the 1-3-5 combo note line of progression in my change, for the player this sort of continuity is subconscious but strictly important or it will cause frustrating misses. What I did was move slider 5 above slider 3 just as slider 3 is above slider 1 (http://puu.sh/5zykp.jpg).
00:25:740 (7) - The note that was stacked under the slider should be between the 2 sliders to promote flow (http://puu.sh/5zyo1.jpg).
00:27:797 (2) - Similarly, here (http://puu.sh/5zyrd.jpg).
00:36:283 - The slider entering the curvy slider should be attatched as such (http://puu.sh/5zyBr.jpg), since the angle of the triple leading into it goes into the corner. It flows better to arc out of that corner into a curve which is then connected by a note into the last slider in that combo (http://puu.sh/5zyAC.jpg).
01:34:997 (2) - I moved the circle under the slider to inbetween the notes so you curve into the next section of fast sliders, creates better flow (http://puu.sh/5zyKm.jpg).
02:17:254 - Made a change to this pattern as I felt as it was just didn't flow very nicely and didn't do that part of the melody justice, I edited it as such (http://puu.sh/5zyZo.jpg), and then moved the top 2 sliders to cascade downwards into the slider 3 which I moved up slightly to fit them better (http://puu.sh/5zz22.jpg). I also moved circle 4 evenly in between slider 3 and the slider of the next combo to form a nice flowy yellow combo circle line (http://puu.sh/5zz6A.jpg) \;D/.
02:26:426 (4) - Moved this up a little so it was dead centre (http://puu.sh/5zzdy.jpg).
02:38:512 (1) - New combo here.
I had a lot of fun modding this, can't wait to test when its finished and its great fun on hidden too! Good luck and keep me posted!