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Giga-P - Okochama Sensou

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tutuhaha
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tutuhaha
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 星期三, 26 二月, 2014 at PM 3:40:36

Artist: Giga-P
Title: Okochama Sensou
Tags: Children War Kagamine Len Rin Angelhoney vocaloid Irreversible Kyshiro
BPM: 175
Filesize: 22018kb
Play Time: 03:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. AngelHoney's ExtrA (5 stars, 1029 notes)
  2. Easy (3.14 stars, 250 notes)
  3. Extra (5 stars, 846 notes)
  4. Hard (4.91 stars, 627 notes)
  5. Kyversible's Insane (5 stars, 721 notes)
  6. Normal (4.38 stars, 348 notes)
Download: Giga-P - Okochama Sensou
Download: Giga-P - Okochama Sensou (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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so funny
Dance:100%
Hard:100%
Normal:100%
Easy:100%
Irreversible X Kyshiro:100%
AHO:100%
Last edited by tutuhaha , edited 48 times in total.
Kodora
Kodora
first

(ノ￣▽￣)ノ ✰
HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
2nd!
Raiku
238 posts
Joined April 2012
Raiku
Raiku here!

Going to help with the playability a bit, I love maps of this bpm and I have a few suggestions on how to improve the flow!

[Kiiwa]

00:26:340 - I feel as if a little bit more spacing between the triples really accentuates the fact that they are seperate and should be played as such.

00:31:483 - I felt the same should be repeated here.

00:38:512 - New combo here. Easier on the eyes to section into chunks.

[Dance]

00:10:740 (5) - Notice the 1-3-5 combo note line of progression in my change, for the player this sort of continuity is subconscious but strictly important or it will cause frustrating misses. What I did was move slider 5 above slider 3 just as slider 3 is above slider 1 (http://puu.sh/5zykp.jpg).

00:25:740 (7) - The note that was stacked under the slider should be between the 2 sliders to promote flow (http://puu.sh/5zyo1.jpg).

00:27:797 (2) - Similarly, here (http://puu.sh/5zyrd.jpg).

00:36:283 - The slider entering the curvy slider should be attatched as such (http://puu.sh/5zyBr.jpg), since the angle of the triple leading into it goes into the corner. It flows better to arc out of that corner into a curve which is then connected by a note into the last slider in that combo (http://puu.sh/5zyAC.jpg).

01:34:997 (2) - I moved the circle under the slider to inbetween the notes so you curve into the next section of fast sliders, creates better flow (http://puu.sh/5zyKm.jpg).

02:17:254 - Made a change to this pattern as I felt as it was just didn't flow very nicely and didn't do that part of the melody justice, I edited it as such (http://puu.sh/5zyZo.jpg), and then moved the top 2 sliders to cascade downwards into the slider 3 which I moved up slightly to fit them better (http://puu.sh/5zz22.jpg). I also moved circle 4 evenly in between slider 3 and the slider of the next combo to form a nice flowy yellow combo circle line (http://puu.sh/5zz6A.jpg) \;D/.

02:26:426 (4) - Moved this up a little so it was dead centre (http://puu.sh/5zzdy.jpg).

02:38:512 (1) - New combo here.

I had a lot of fun modding this, can't wait to test when its finished and its great fun on hidden too! Good luck and keep me posted!
AllStar12
488 posts
Joined January 2013
AllStar12
Test play here
Note: Only test played 2~3 times for Dance and Kiiwa Difficulty.

[Dance]
Would also like to point out:
00:31:826 (2,3,4,5) - This part I'm pretty sure if I was fast enough or react much faster I would've probably have no problem with it but I felt that the distance snap for slider then circle was too strict, maybe lower it by 0.10~0.20? But hey it's suppose to be that hard anyway. Just wanted to point that out.
Results
1st Attempt:


2nd Attempt:

[Irreversible]
GG hahahah ( ՞ਊ ՞ )b
Result
1st Attempt:

[Kiiwa]
Result
[list]1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:

3rd Attempt:

Overall, keep up the good work you three(yes you too Irreversible hahah), actually like the intensity the beatmaps brought to me and expect more in the future. Can definitely will mod this if you guys want me to when it's finished. Like the song now and never heard of it till now haha ^^
Irreversible
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Irreversible
LOL Well thanks for the nice Feedback so far haha
tutuhaha
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Topic Starter
tutuhaha

AllStar12 wrote:

Test play here
Note: Only test played 2~3 times for Dance and Kiiwa Difficulty.

[Dance]
Would also like to point out:
00:31:826 (2,3,4,5) - This part I'm pretty sure if I was fast enough or react much faster I would've probably have no problem with it but I felt that the distance snap for slider then circle was too strict, maybe lower it by 0.10~0.20? But hey it's suppose to be that hard anyway. Just wanted to point that out.
Results
1st Attempt:


2nd Attempt:

[Irreversible]
GG hahahah ( ՞ਊ ՞ )b
Result
1st Attempt:

[Kiiwa]
Result
[list]1st Attempt:

2nd Attempt:

3rd Attempt:

Overall, keep up the good work you three(yes you too Irreversible hahah), actually like the intensity the beatmaps brought to me and expect more in the future. Can definitely will mod this if you guys want me to when it's finished. Like the song now and never heard of it till now haha ^^
Thankyou for test play XDDDDDDDDDDDD
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
感覺我該多練了.. :o 臥艸

短短IRC
11:17 smallboat: 00:43:997 (1,3) - 恩? 這個不對稱我覺得有點不太好看
11:18 smallboat: 00:26:340 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這兩個三連有點卡手，個人意見
11:18 tutuhaha: 好滴这个到时候考虑一下怎么搞
11:18 smallboat: 恩~
11:26 smallboat: 01:02:683 (6,7) - 感覺 ctrl+g 比較順
11:27 tutuhaha: 这个..考虑下
11:28 smallboat: 030 01:27:369 (3) - 這個不完全疊上去嗎?
11:29 tutuhaha: 这个可以
11:29 smallboat: 所以不疊?
11:33 tutuhaha: 叠了
11:33 smallboat: 01:32:512 (4) - 設個 ctrl +g 突然轉向下 ww?
11:37 tutuhaha: ............太坑Orz
11:41 smallboat: XD
11:42 smallboat: 02:59:083 (5) - 這個我剛點的不順手 @_@，移到(272|260)看看?
11:45 smallboat: 03:18:112 (3) - 可以看看 ctrl+g
11:45 smallboat: 03:22:740 (5) - 這個音到這邊有變，NC吧?
11:48 tutuhaha: 272260辣够改了
11:49 smallboat: @@?
11:50 smallboat: 是不改的意思?
11:50 tutuhaha: nc那个为了和前面比较统一就没改
11:50 smallboat: 好
11:51 smallboat: 差不多沒了
11:51 tutuhaha: ctrl+g那个是因为和前面的梗保持一致这里再+g一下就太坑人的感觉
11:51 tutuhaha: 好滴谢谢
11:51 smallboat: 也是
11:51 smallboat: ww
11:51 tutuhaha: 你可以去post坑KD:DDDDD
11:51 smallboat: :D
11:51 smallboat: 有改到什麼嗎
11:52 tutuhaha: 有呀
11:56 smallboat: 喔喔
11:56 smallboat: 等下PO
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
试听时觉得有点搓 , 但是听了完整表示不错

我接的 , 不过也许会尝试点新梗 :3
_none_old
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Joined April 2010
_none_old
it's just say : The English Title is Children's War

Preview Point : 00:50:584
tutuhaha
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Topic Starter
tutuhaha

AngelHoney wrote:

试听时觉得有点搓 , 但是听了完整表示不错

我接的 , 不过也许会尝试点新梗 :3
要是在我做完全部diff后你还木有交我就把你啪啪啪掉

Mania Vocaloid wrote:

it's just say : The English Title is Children's War

Preview Point : 00:50:584
I will add this title when all diff finish
Thanks
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gfcjyb
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gfcjyb
支持！这是下半年最好的V+曲之一了
AngelHoney
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Joined May 2009
AngelHoney

tutuhaha wrote:

AngelHoney wrote:

试听时觉得有点搓 , 但是听了完整表示不错

我接的 , 不过也许会尝试点新梗 :3
要是在我做完全部diff后你还木有交我就把你啪啪啪掉
那看来之能明年见啦>////<
MuYOwO
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MuYOwO
不开降低难度的mod根本过不了啊TAT
地图+曲子赞！希望早日能rank
Mystyk
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Mystyk
Hey!
I played the Hard diff, and I enjoy it! I also like the song, good luck with the mapset!
I want to mention though that it would be better if you placed some of the objects a bit differently, because some of them are out of MY screen:
02:19:312 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1151594
02:24:798 (3) -
I think that was all I noticed, I hope you'll fix it :P Still very nice mapset!
*gives you stars*
tutuhaha
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Topic Starter
tutuhaha

Mystyk wrote:

Hey!
I played the Hard diff, and I enjoy it! I also like the song, good luck with the mapset!
I want to mention though that it would be better if you placed some of the objects a bit differently, because some of them are out of MY screen:
02:19:312 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1151594
02:24:798 (3) -
I think that was all I noticed, I hope you'll fix it :P Still very nice mapset!
*gives you stars*
OK I will think about that XD
Thankyou
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Don't Forget to rename
Kiiwa - Kiiwa's Insane
Irreversible - Irre's Insane
Dance - Insane
Silver Crow
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Joined May 2011
Silver Crow
come for the que o f the M4M

Extra:

打起來好爽 找不到問題;w;

Hard:

00:46:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - 覺得這種跳在hard裡顯得有點過難
00:57:026 - 這一部分這樣怎麼樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1157104
01:02:683 (6,7) - 換成slider?
01:41:597 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 感覺跳太難
01:31:312 - 這邊改成這樣怎麼樣?然後5號note的位置是slider6的開頭的(http://puu.sh/5Gd5u.jpg)
01:57:541 (6,7) - slider?
02:11:769 - 稍為移成這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1157120
03:05:598 (2,3,4,5) - 2和3疊起來,4 5 6排成3角形感覺如何?(因為2,3聲調感覺一樣 456有慢慢加高)
03:17:597 (1,2,3,4) - 換成兩個來回的小slider?

normal跟easy看了看也不知道要怎麼給意見
感覺沒問題

Mod得很爛 m4m要不要接受看2ha姐

圖很棒 祝早日rank!
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney


AHO发来贺电 完成一半以上了
SkyDevil
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Joined October 2010
SkyDevil
uuuuuu I wanted to map this but other mappers are so much faster @ A @;;;; orzorzorz

btw post 1500
eniyan
107 posts
Joined September 2011
eniyan
Hi From your queue!

M4M

[Easy]

General

Placement
  1. 03:12:112 (1,2) - I felt that this placement was strange. How about in this way?
    Form&Placement


    If you adopt my suggestion, you should move 03:14:169 (3,4)
Rhythm

Hitosound
03:18:969 ~ 03:29:597 - I felt that you should add clap in this time in all dif.

[Normal]

General
no problem
Placement
noproblem
Rhythm
no problem
Hitosound
  1. 03:29:597 (4) - add finish
[Extra]

General
no problem
Placement
  1. 00:53:769 (2) - Ctrl＋g
  1. 02:54:454 (1,2) - How about in this way?
    Form&Placement
Rhythm
no problem
Hitosound
02:04:740 (1) - remove finish by the head

[Hard]

General
noproblem
Placement
no ploblem
Rhythm
  1. 03:09:712 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - How about in this way?
    Rhythm&placement

Hitosound
no problem




Umm...I was not able to find the point that I could point out very much...
I feel this is very good mapset!
I shoot a kudosu!
tutuhaha
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Topic Starter
tutuhaha

AngelHoney wrote:



AHO发来贺电 完成一半以上了
tutuhaha发来贺电，恭喜aho入选十大最佳感动mapper，说到深处，情不自禁，潸然泪下，不能多说Q_,Q（抽搐）
AruOtta
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Joined May 2012
AruOtta
Hi, M4M from your queue ^w^

[Easy]
00:34:397 (1) - Try something like that :
SPOILER
00:35:769 (4) - Maybe blanket with (3) ?
01:02:512 (2) - Better blanket with (1) please
01:03:883 (1) - ^ with (2)
01:05:254 (2) - ^ with (3)
01:57:369 (2,1,2) - Same blanket patern as above
02:35:083 (1) - Blanket with (3)
03:03:197 (1) - x:348 y:76, 03:04:569 (2) - x:328 y:196 and 03:05:597 (3) - x:444 y:152
03:13:140 (2) - The construction line should be in the slidertick :
SPOILER

[Normal]
01:01:826 (1,2) - Just a little bit better blanket =3
01:41:597 (3,4,5) - Try that :
SPOILER
01:57:370 (2) - Also same as above for the blanket
03:13:826 (4,2) - There's an overlapping =/
03:17:597 (1) - Blanket with previous combo's (2)

[Hard]
00:09:283 (4) - x:256 y:272
01:04:397 (1) - Better blanket with (2)
01:06:969 (1) - ^
01:59:255 (1) - ^
02:01:827 (1) - ^

[Extra]
00:13:483 - No circle here ?
That's it, just there's many overlapping in this diff. =/

Hope it'll be helpful ^w^
Ikaros_F
88 posts
Joined December 2012
Ikaros_F
Hello,哈哈

[Extra or Dance?]
00:33:712 (4,1,2,3) - 我把3移动到→ http://puu.sh/5L1NV
00:34:826 在这里加一个note变成三连呸，不知道算不算ovemap._.
00:43:483 (3) - http://puu.sh/5L1YE 弄成这种滑条会不会好一点呢，我画的很难看啊，差不多就这意思
01:03:712 (3,4) - 这2换成一个短滑条感觉爽一点
01:04:740 (2,3) - ↑
02:32:340 (1,2) - 这里以及后面的二个单点可以用下滑条互换
03:21:026 (4,5,6,7) - 我改变了一下位置._. http://puu.sh/5LcQB

[Hard]
01:11:083 (5) - 把它移到x,y(252,52)
02:05:941 (5) - 意思和上面的差不多._.把它往下移一点，感觉这样的单点不舒服._.
02:09:712 (2) - 要不改成一个到红线的滑条后面加2个note

我太水，normal和easy都找不出什么

就mod到这里啦,good luck :) :) :)
No_Code_old
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No_Code_old
頑張ってください
Irreversible
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Irreversible
i'm working on it !!! xD
captin1
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captin1
wat how could I forget to star this

gogo amazing song amazing map owo
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare
Hey, I noticed kradness and Reoul's version of the video, although the differences are subtle, theres a few differences between the PV. The singer's names were changed, the characters have changed hairstyle and eyes. That's pretty much it. Although if you want to keep it, it works either way :3
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney


快...快....快好了.....
AngelHoney
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Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
差最后音效了 明后天肯定能好了!

WILL BE DONE!
AngelHoney
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Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
http://puu.sh/6mNdR.rar

暂定先这样 ,有些排列以及一些1/6等上传后多找点人试下在确定 (加了3个音效档别忘了哦:3

总的来说终于完工了 皆大欢喜 yeah \:D/

果然我的作图速度还是比BAT快的嘛=3=


SPOILER
17:49 AngelHoney: 正好等下你有空没 , 我欠2ha的这个快完成了 等下来试试o.o?
18:01 AngelHoney: 操蛋
18:01 AngelHoney: 你不爱我了
18:13 Heatherfield: .
18:13 Heatherfield: 买饭去了
18:13 AngelHoney: 盒饭去买盒饭了o.o
18:14 Heatherfield: 先发link 我下载无比慢
18:14 AngelHoney: 我传推推
18:16 AngelHoney: http://puu.sh/6mLS8.osz
18:16 AngelHoney: 看看ok否 (奇怪 突然上传好快..
18:16 AngelHoney: 好了叫我:D
18:16 Heatherfield: 好 我吃拉面
18:16 AngelHoney: 尼玛
18:17 AngelHoney: 至少10~15分钟么
18:17 AngelHoney: 是的话 我先找别人了
18:17 Heatherfield: 2分钟
18:17 AngelHoney: 好 那等你
18:18 Heatherfield: 吃完了
18:18 AngelHoney: k
18:18 AngelHoney: 上吧
18:18 Heatherfield: 我插板子
18:19 AngelHoney: 嗯
18:19 Heatherfield: oh no 出盘不见了
18:20 Heatherfield: 我找一下
18:20 AngelHoney: 嗯
18:21 AngelHoney: 对了 出盘是什么
18:26 Heatherfield: 出盘触盘
18:26 Heatherfield: 找到了
18:26 Heatherfield: 等我改下映射
18:26 AngelHoney: 哦
18:29 Heatherfield: 刚从外面回来手好冷啊
18:29 AngelHoney: 嗯 看出来了..
18:29 Heatherfield: 等我裹起卫生纸
18:29 AngelHoney: 各种手滑..
18:33 AngelHoney: 求喷o_o
18:33 Heatherfield: o_o
18:33 Heatherfield: 有个折返比较复杂的地方有点难读
18:34 AngelHoney: 01:49:140 (5,6,7,8,1) - 这种?
18:34 AngelHoney: 01:55:312 (1,2,3,4) - 还是这种?
18:35 Heatherfield: 01:55:312 (1) -
18:35 Heatherfield: 这一串
18:35 Heatherfield: 前面那种还好
18:35 AngelHoney: 噢噢
18:35 Heatherfield: 不过多打两次应该也可以
18:35 AngelHoney: 这个我想办法换个排列
18:39 AngelHoney: 0.0
18:39 AngelHoney: 我掉线了?
18:42 AngelHoney: 尼玛 开代理总算回来了
18:47 Heatherfield: ,
18:47 Heatherfield: 00:41:254 (1) -
18:47 Heatherfield: 这个跳好大 怪怪的
18:47 AngelHoney: 哦草 没发现:D
18:47 Heatherfield: :D..
18:48 AngelHoney: 又要改排列了 烦o.o
18:48 AngelHoney: 还有什么特别难读or难打的 我都改下:3
18:49 Heatherfield: 02:51:454 (16,1) -
18:49 AngelHoney: D:
18:49 Heatherfield: 前面一直是串 打到这还有点难接
18:49 AngelHoney: 那我改近一点ovo
18:49 AngelHoney: 有哪里的1/6难打or难读的么
18:50 AngelHoney: 自己下的 打不动 所以吃不准啊o_o
18:50 Heatherfield: 都很难打啊 :D
18:50 AngelHoney: 哦草
18:51 AngelHoney: 01:49:826 (1,2,3) -
18:51 AngelHoney: 这个如何
18:51 AngelHoney: 看你打了几次都挺难的貌似?
18:51 Heatherfield: 还可以
18:51 AngelHoney: ok
18:52 Heatherfield: 01:48:283 (6,1) -
18:52 Heatherfield: 反倒是这种我一下可能反应不过来
18:52 AngelHoney: 这个一改就要大改了>_>
18:52 Heatherfield: 不过都可以多打几遍应该记住就好了
18:52 AngelHoney: 我把newcombo改过来先
18:53 Heatherfield: 01:20:683 (6,7,8,1) - 这个前面这里好像有一些1/3耶 打的时候就听出来 觉得怪怪的
18:54 Heatherfield: 别的都没什么了大概
18:54 AngelHoney: 1/3和1/4合用实在是 太没人性了 所以就保持全1/4 >_>
18:55 AngelHoney: 噢噢 好的 我现在好好改下排列 谢谢盒饭:D
18:56 Heatherfield: v+实在是精神污染 我得去打点治愈的
18:57 AngelHoney: http://puu.sh/6mMYe.jpg
18:57 AngelHoney: 对了 这里要改么
18:57 AngelHoney: 01:24:626 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3) -
18:57 AngelHoney: 是否需要拉近一点?
18:58 AngelHoney: or 合并01:24:797 (9,10) - 或者去10 ? 还是o.o
18:58 AngelHoney: 那种会更顺手?
18:58 Heatherfield: 哦操原来这里是1/4
18:58 Heatherfield: 难怪狂断
18:59 Heatherfield: 近一点吧
18:59 AngelHoney: 0.0
18:59 Heatherfield: 其实slider中间蓝线有音
18:59 Heatherfield: 要不然你把slider缩短
18:59 Heatherfield: 10移前面1/4
19:00 AngelHoney: 啊?
19:00 Heatherfield: http://puu.sh/6mN3y.jpg
19:01 Heatherfield: 随便你啦 你看怎么好看就怎样
19:01 AngelHoney: ok :D
AngelHoney
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Joined May 2009
AngelHoney


哦草 果然无法超越
AllStar12
488 posts
Joined January 2013
AllStar12
Testplay Request:

Result

Was quite fun to play, tested several times(continuing) which most of it I failed due to one part:

[*] Parts such as 02:21:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I kept failing after reaching at 02:37:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) due to the Health Drain Orz. Just wanted to say this, that's all. As for combos I've been getting 300~500 till it breaks due me failing sometimes the part I mentioned. Still I liked this difficulty indeed ^^.

( ノ՞ਊ ՞ )ノ rank it faster tutuhaha!~

Will edit this again if I do manage to beat it without fail :S
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney

AllStar12 wrote:

Testplay Request:

Result

Was quite fun to play, tested several times(continuing) which most of it I failed due to one part:

[*] Parts such as 02:21:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I kept failing after reaching at 02:37:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) due to the Health Drain Orz. Just wanted to say this, that's all. As for combos I've been getting 300~500 till it breaks due me failing sometimes the part I mentioned. Still I liked this difficulty indeed ^^.

( ノ՞ਊ ՞ )ノ rank it faster tutuhaha!~

Will edit this again if I do manage to beat it without fail :S
oh! thx so much! i will try to change the spacing !! i mean closer ;p
AllStar12
488 posts
Joined January 2013
AllStar12

AngelHoney wrote:

AllStar12 wrote:

Testplay Request:

Result

Was quite fun to play, tested several times(continuing) which most of it I failed due to one part:

[*] Parts such as 02:21:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I kept failing after reaching at 02:37:826 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) due to the Health Drain Orz. Just wanted to say this, that's all. As for combos I've been getting 300~500 till it breaks due me failing sometimes the part I mentioned. Still I liked this difficulty indeed ^^.

( ノ՞ਊ ՞ )ノ rank it faster tutuhaha!~

Will edit this again if I do manage to beat it without fail :S
oh! thx so much! i will try to change the spacing !! i mean closer ;p
hmm don't really think spacing is the real problem, more of having new combos there such as every 4 NC on parts such as 02:21:369 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I should say but first find as many solution and pick out the best one :B. The jumping were perfectly fine. (My opinion)

Edit: You could keep it the way it is as of now till you get more feedback about your Extra difficulty
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Hi~

M4M~

If you dont like suggestions juz ignore

[General]
How 'bout preview point before KIAI? like 00:50:854 - suits better for me

[KIAI Timing]
I have some suggest about KIAI times here
00:06:969 - KIAI can or may be applied here if you want, it's optional tho since it's the song's starting
03:18:969 - Make KIAI stop at 03:29:597 -

[Easy]
00:56:340 (1) - Put like this:
picture
01:11:512 (1) - Not too near with 01:11:426 - ? I prefer to let players get full spin and faster reaction in Easy diff
01:19:654 (3) - Inconsistency DS
01:42:283 (3) - Put at left side of 01:41:597 (2) - like:
picture
01:44:683 (2) - Rotate 30* clockwise then place it like:
picture
01:50:854 (2,1) - Copy and paste :P applies to 00:56:340 (1) -
02:06:283 (3) - Not too close to 02:06:369 (1) - ?
02:07:654 - How about let players rest until here 02:18:626 -, easy diff~
02:26:854 (1,2,3) - Here I think a little not good looking, distance between 02:26:854 (1,2) - and 02:27:883 (2,3) - has slightly different, you can consider to change it maybe
02:39:197 - Not too close to 02:39:283 (1) - ?
02:51:540 (1) - Try to put spinner at 02:52:912 -
03:03:197 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 03:05:597 (3) -
03:14:854 (1,2,3) - This pattern might get players combo miss, at this point 03:15:197 - you can see (3) started to appear while slider ball is still in the middle
03:18:283 (3) - NC here, special effect +.+

[Normal]
5 star rating :O rare
Easy can be Normal, Normal can be Hard diff in my opinion
可能很多人会fail吧 orz
00:08:854 - A circle here may be necessary to prevent reading problems
00:12:454 (1,2,3,4) - This looks hard @_@
00:46:740 (3,4,5,6,1) - Try rotate 180* and adjust a little, may be better on flow
02:24:112 (1,2) - Blanket
02:51:540 (1) - Try on 02:52:912 -
03:25:654 (1,2,3) - Like previous mod

[Hard]
I like it

[Extra]
00:13:483 - Add something here to follow vocal
00:15:883 (3) - NC (optional)
00:46:569 (1) - Remove NC and NC at 00:46:740 (3) -
00:48:797 (3) - NC
00:55:140 (1) - Why there's NC here? Feel like it's not needed
01:09:712 (4) - Try 1.20x DS
01:11:597 - Note for vocal
01:11:940 - ^ extra diff *^*
01:40:226 - This is quite a lot slowed from 1.20 SV, try 0.75 SV?
02:29:254 (5) - Try 1.30 SV, or NC cuz 1.50 seems not stable?
02:41:597 (4) - NC
03:26:340 (3) - Object end not snapped
03:26:682 (4) - ^

[AngelHoney's ExtrA]
There's no letterbox during break option ticked here like other diffs do
No KIAI?
I can't mod, it's too epic and fast for me

That's all I guess, hope it helps 觉得水摸就别怪我啦~
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
Hewwo~ c:

~ EASY ~

  1. 00:06:969 -Finish.
  1. 00:08:340 -Clap.
  1. 00:09:026 -Whistle.
  1. 00:09:369 -^
  1. 00:09:712 -Finish.
  1. 00:11:083 -Clap.
Nothing much to mod, but I'll be checking some of your maps. c: GL~ !
Mafumafu
Nomination Assessment Team
3,372 posts
Joined August 2013
Mafumafu
太赞了！！！！！！！！！！酷爱射一星
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
changed some mod by AllStar12

thank you !

http://puu.sh/6xJar.osu

2ha别忘了给人家kds哦:3
tutuhaha
3,000 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
tutuhaha

AngelHoney wrote:

changed some mod by AllStar12

thank you !

http://puu.sh/6xJar.osu

2ha别忘了给人家kds哦:3
Thankyou for AllStar12 :DDDDDDDDDD
顺便一说我再次仔细的端详了一下你的难度
发现你kiai真的有着疯一般风格，狂草般的态度，难得，难得
总而言之还是我的比较简单你不要再反抗了
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney

tutuhaha wrote:

AngelHoney wrote:

changed some mod by AllStar12

thank you !

http://puu.sh/6xJar.osu

2ha别忘了给人家kds哦:3
Thankyou for AllStar12 :DDDDDDDDDD
顺便一说我再次仔细的端详了一下你的难度
发现你kiai真的有着疯一般风格，狂草般的态度，难得，难得
总而言之还是我的比较简单你不要再反抗了
kiai? diff? 笨蛋!
而且虽然是有点难 但是后半段明显有弱化了...要不然到时候榜单和你一样悲剧就不好了!!!
至少我已经找到人1PC 1miss 2PC HR了! 哼哼
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney


事实胜于雄辩!!

(话说你难度的鼓声可以轻一点么....各种"震撼"....
Last edited by AngelHoney , edited 1 time in total.
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
one thing to point out:
in Ky's Insane
02:58:226 (1) - i think the combo color in this part should be gray, and so does the following part.
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible

fanzhen0019 wrote:

one thing to point out:
in Ky's Insane
02:58:226 (1) - i think the combo color in this part should be gray, and so does the following part.
I think I'll fix this after some mods, because if someone is going to Point out a nc, all the work will be messed up again, thanks for reminding!
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
M4M ´'`\_(ò_Ó)_/´'`

[General]

  1. Kiai times are different in some diffs.
[Easy]

  1. 00:21:026 (2,3) - Those seem strange, because the reverse ticks aren't even in the song like that. Do it like in your normal, just remove those sliders, and place circles here: 00:21:369 - 00:22:054
  2. 01:19:312 (2) - Spacing issues. Move to x:231 y:270
  3. 02:27:883 (2) - I think the difference of distance snap is too noticable here. Move to x:374 y:158
  4. Wrong blankets: 01:20:683 (4,1) - 01:27:883 (3,1) - 02:11:083 (2,3,4) (both) - 02:13:140 (1,2,3) (both) - 02:17:597 (3,4) - 02:29:254 (4,1) - 02:56:340 (2,1) - 02:57:712 (1,2) - 03:03:197 (1,2) - 03:12:112 (1,2) - 03:14:854 (1,2) - 03:21:712 (1,2) - There's no reason in not fixing them
  5. Nice diff. Timeline-wise, this is really awesome *-* Just fix the blankets... I think good blankets are needed in an easy diff. There were other places, where I would've normally told you to use blankets, but I think the style fits the song very much, so I'll leave that out.
[Normal]

  1. 00:22:569 (2) - Strange looking distance snap differnce. Move to x:282 y:65
  2. 00:54:797 (4,5) - Fix blanket
  3. 01:49:654 (4,5) - ^
  4. 03:03:712 (1) - 0.06x Distance snap error.
  5. 03:10:054 (3) - 0.04x Distance snap error.
  6. Same general thoughts as in easy. I love your mapping style :3
[Hard]

  1. 00:09:026 (3,4,5) - Place in a straight line? So you would have to move it all up a bit... But it doesn't look good like this.
  2. Blanket fix please (only most important): 00:23:254 (6,1) - 00:27:026 (4,1) - 01:00:112 (5,1) - 01:25:826 (3,1) - 02:09:026 (1,2) - 03:09:197 (1,2)
  3. Genius.
[Angelhoney's Extra]

  1. Letterbox in breaks conflicts with other diffs.
  2. Use same kiai as tutuhaha.
  3. Angelhoney = still one of the best mappers ever <3 Perfect diff! Incredibly fun!
[Extra]

  1. 00:55:140 (1) - This is 1/6 not 1/4, so you should change it into 1/6 reversed slider ;)
  2. 01:00:626 (1) - ^
  3. 01:49:997 (1) - ^
  4. 01:55:483 (1) - ^
  5. 02:59:940 (3) - ^
  6. 03:05:426 (3) - ^
  7. Almost perfect aswell! Really, really nice :3
[Kyversible's Insane]

  1. Use same kiai as tutuhaha.
  2. What should I say.. It's Irre and Kyshiro, has to be awesome <3
I'm in love with this mapset <3 Sorry for noob mod ._. I hope it helped a little bit though... Next time I want Collab between Angelhoney and tutuhaha that would be incredible!! Something like TutuhAHO or something xD Keep up the good work ^^

Here's my mapset: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/130425 Thanks ^^
- Kevin
159 posts
Joined September 2012
- Kevin
Hi~

[Kyversible's Insane]

00:32:854 (3,1) - stack
01:03:026 (1) - shape suggestion http://puu.sh/6G0Tg.jpg
01:03:454 (2,3) - stack under slider tail
01:06:797 (1,2,3) - this is too much DS
01:08:340 (4,1) - stack
02:54:454 (1,1) - end this both at blue tick

[AngelHoney's ExtrA]

00:35:426 (7,8,7,8) - same pattern but diferent DS fix it
01:01:140 (5,6,7,8,1) - 1/6 jump I break all the time here ... I'm not a pro player but this... it's 57~58 ms each jump
01:50:512 (5,6,7,8) - ^
02:19:997 (1,3) - stack tail
02:35:083 (1) - Ctrl + G
except the sinister jumps 1/6 the map is pretty fun

[Hard]

00:08:169 (4,3) - Stack tail (4)
01:43:997 (5,4) - stack

[Easy]

It's too hard! imo this should be Normal


the others diff are good enough for me
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
Diff
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206,141,142397,6,0,L|116:117,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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296,250,143425,2,0,L|380:289,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,165,143769,2,0,P|456:130|384:138,1,134.999995880127,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,94,144112,6,0,P|251:68|160:110,1,179.999994506836,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,43,144626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
17,163,144797,2,0,P|38:214|35:258,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,342,145140,2,0,P|171:297|190:256,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,145483,6,0,P|338:237|250:263,1,134.999995880127,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,256,145826,1,8,0:0:0:0:
298,127,145997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,127,146083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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190,257,146512,2,0,P|145:258|107:235,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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255,202,147540,2,0,P|257:247|295:279,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,54,147883,6,0,P|203:56|171:94,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,276,148569,6,0,P|255:245|257:202,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,301,148912,2,0,P|60:332|104:334,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
129,110,149254,6,0,P|97:140|96:184,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
225,76,149597,6,0,P|196:34|68:29,1,179.999994506836,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,157,150112,2,0,L|349:153,1,134.999995880127,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
386,107,150454,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,191,150626,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,228,150797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,141,150969,2,0,B|243:103|243:103|243:58,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,191,151312,2,0,B|502:229|502:229|502:274,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,305,151569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,305,151654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,339,151826,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,349,151997,1,8,0:0:0:0:
214,270,152169,1,0,0:0:0:0:
375,200,152340,6,0,P|383:154|360:110,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,184,152683,2,0,P|129:230|152:274,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,73,153026,6,0,P|218:65|174:88,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,311,153369,2,0,P|294:319|338:296,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,127,153712,6,0,L|399:23,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,38,154054,2,0,L|130:127,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,228,154397,6,0,P|340:197|296:196,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,209,154740,2,0,P|175:240|219:241,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,74,155083,6,0,P|143:42|24:72,1,179.999994506836,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,154,155597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,154,155769,2,0,P|269:158|313:140,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,140,156112,2,0,P|109:179|103:226,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,313,156454,6,0,B|241:336|241:336|287:319|287:319|362:319,1,179.999994506836,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,255,156969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,255,157054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,255,157140,2,0,P|475:207|459:168,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,45,157483,2,0,P|311:86|319:130,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
407,95,157826,5,4,0:0:0:0:
236,42,157997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,214,158169,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,267,158340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,153,158512,2,0,L|201:144,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,184,158854,2,0,L|110:193,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,278,159197,6,0,P|277:250|357:271,1,134.999995880127,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,274,159540,2,0,B|401:301|401:301|437:277|437:277|494:278,1,134.999995880127,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,279,159883,2,0,P|508:238|493:194,1,89.9999972534181,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,94,160226,6,0,P|337:134|352:178,1,89.9999972534181,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,140,160569,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,156,160912,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,172,161254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,188,161597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,174454,6,0,L|279:99,1,44.999998626709,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,72,174626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,192,174797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,56,174969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,196,175140,6,0,L|245:204,1,44.999998626709,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,224,175312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,244,175397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,268,175483,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,175569,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,308,175654,6,0,P|108:254|79:244,1,104.999996795654,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,72,175997,2,0,P|156:47|179:26,1,104.999996795654,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,93,176340,2,0,P|301:171|307:202,1,104.999996795654,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,336,176683,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,104,176854,6,0,P|233:43|318:94,1,209.999993591309,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,168,177283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,228,177369,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,144,177540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,256,177712,2,0,L|184:364,1,104.999996795654,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,224,178054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
230,145,178226,22,0,P|242:81|234:57,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,280,178740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,96,178912,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,224,179083,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,228,179254,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,144,179426,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,256,179597,6,0,P|216:296|196:340,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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124,280,180112,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,360,180283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,156,180454,2,0,P|238:95|219:18,1,134.999995880127,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,18,180797,2,0,P|308:51|359:25,1,134.999995880127,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,28,181140,6,0,P|372:88|448:128,1,104.999996795654,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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322,222,181654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,24,182169,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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326,80,188940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,85,189026,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,240,189197,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,240,189283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,240,189369,2,0,P|428:308|404:336,1,89.9999972534181,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,380,189712,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,216,189883,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,216,189969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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364,176,190397,1,8,0:0:0:0:
229,313,190569,6,0,P|161:325|93:225,2,179.999994506836,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,216,191426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,124,191597,6,0,P|51:132|28:146,1,44.999998626709,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,177,191940,2,0,P|96:202|97:229,1,44.999998626709,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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376,280,193140,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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176,220,195026,5,0,0:0:0:0:
299,166,195197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,112,195369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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299,166,196226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,188,196397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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299,165,197083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,91,197426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,228,197597,5,0,0:0:0:0:
464,188,197769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,320,197940,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,325,198025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,331,198111,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,337,198197,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,343,198282,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,36,198626,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,343,198969,5,0,0:0:0:0:

Thanks desperate kun, fixed the kiai XD
Thanks to Kevin as well: fixed the stack, the shape Suggestion: I made it a bit different, fixed this stack too, no fix for the "too much DS" because I really think this is very enjoyable, fixed the stack again and fixed the blue tick Thing. Thanks a lot!
UnderminE
osu! Alumni
4,011 posts
Joined August 2010
UnderminE
m4m

kyversible


00:37:654 (4,1,1) - stack better?
01:03:026 (1,5) - stack better?
01:08:512 (1) - this looks somewhat confusing (and ugly, even though the idea is nice)
01:26:854 (4,3) - well, better use same sliders
02:23:769 (3,1) - Ctrl + J one of these
02:26:854 (7,2,1) - stack properly
02:52:912 - maybe a spinner here since the break is veeery long

AHO

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i don't know if it's me but combo colours are VERY confusing. though i think these are not your combo colours, amirite:

and you need some kiai time

00:03:712 - NC?
00:33:197 (2,3,4) - overmapped, really there is no need for this much

Extra


00:13:483 - you need a note here imo
00:18:626 (2,3) - center the tail properly
00:42:626 (1,2,3) - kind of ugly pattern :/
01:12:454 (3) - normal-whistle on this slider?
01:37:826 (3,5,3) - normal-whistle for these to catch that vocal
02:00:626 (1) - normal whistle for this (and the one on previous kiai too)
02:27:712 - i hear some claps at the background (aka red ticks)
02:32:512 - soft-whistle or normal-whistle for those sounds in this part? (and it will be fun in taiko too ;_;)
02:52:912 - spinner starting here makes much more sense (like in AHO's diff)
03:06:283 (3) - normal-whistle

And something for Easy: it is really hard for starters, please AR -1 (and maybe OD too)
Oh and you can choose a better part for preview time, really. (Maybe 02:52:912 - )

good luck!
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
http://puu.sh/6Htyb.osu

thx for mod !!

fixed something and changed

tags letterbox什么的就交给你了 ovo
IadzXenon
47 posts
Joined September 2013
IadzXenon
Hello M4M from your queue...

[Easy]

- 00:22:740(5) = Outscreen, I suggest move (4 and 5) to x276 y:228 prev: 1,22x next: 0,80 to make (4) straight with (3)...
- 01:11:426(3) = Just suggestion, you may don't accept this. Add note here then too close to spinner may enjoyable but feel akwardly for mania. I suggest remove it, moreever to reduce difficulty since this is an easy...
- 02:06:283(3) = - ^
- 03:13:140(2) = May I suggest to move this to x:48 y:44? Looks more beautiful...
- 00:32:683(4,1) = (1) Strange pattern I think, may I suggest to change patterns to like this?

- 00:44:512 May I suggest to add note here? You may keep skip this, but feels so empty and guaranteed if skip "na" vocal there...
- 00:48:112 This is my last suggestion about it...
- 01:10:226 (tail) I suggest to remove it and replace 01:09:883 with circle. Add slider in 01:10:226 till 01:10:569. More fit the music and moreover to follow "koni" vocal here if you do this I think...
- 02:30:112 (2) Abridge slider to 02:30:454 please don't skip "no" vocal here doesn't fit the music well, and dont forget to add note in 02:30:626...

[Hard]

- May I suggest CS -1? Don't make this map is a bit too empty and remember this is a hard, don't make it as difficult as insane especially when use hardrock mod. Reduce it please...
- 00:09:369(5) Out of screen. I suggest block (3,4,5) then move to x:284 y:60 to keep straight with (2). And don't forget to move (5), make straigth with (4)...
- 00:31:226(5) Remove note please too loud here. Also to reduce stream here consider this is a hard diff. Maybe you'll reject this, but you have add stream enough in opening...
- 00:36:026(2) - ^
- 00:37:826(4) - ^ Then place note in 00:37:740 only please...
- 00:41:169(2) - ^
- 00:44:254(2) This is an exception because to keep follow "ri" vocal...
- 01:22:397(1,2,3,4) I suggest to flip verticaly to make this attractive?
- 01:45:369(5) Out of screen again. Move suggestion is x:288 y:340...
- 03:41:483(2,3,4) Move to x:336 y:124 prev: 1,18 next: 1,55x to make nice pararell from (1) please looks better...

Why I too much suggest to not adding stream? You may reject, but you should know the right place to make stream. The right place to add stream is in reff not in chourus, it's impressed so loud...

[Kyversible's Insane]

- 00:02:854(1) Out of screen, move to up for a bit please...
- 00:20:683 I prefer to replace this with spinner better than find more nicer slider pattern...
- 00:26:683(1,2,3) May I suggest to flip vertically to make some variety?
- 00:32:169 - ^
- 01:06:797(1) Move to up for a bit please? Out of screen...
- 01:30:112(6) Move to x:276 y:228 to make a star pattern?
- 00:31:054(2,4) Remove note please don't add stream in downbeat it's so cymbal...
- 01:44:854(4) Out of screen again...
- 02:03:540(1) - ^
- 01:46:912(5) Extend slider to 01:47:254 and don't forget to delete (1) please. Doesn't smooth to hear...
- 02:03:540(1) Move to up a bit please, out of screen...
- 02:19:997(1) Same reason as 01:46:912...
- 02:58:012(5) Move to x:212 y:256 please don't add jump when no jump music here also since downbeat here...
- 03:09:712(4) Out of screen. Please move to up a bit...
- 03:11:940(3) May I suggest to move to x:124 y:208 to make triangle?

[AngelHoney's ExtrA]

- Are you sure want mapping with low grid level? Low grid level make you harder to mapping because you not freely to place note and make certain pattern...
- 00:02:512 Add new combo here to make this harder because it will not show follow point after (3)?
- 00:03:712 - ^
- 00:45:283 Change hitsound to soft downbeat here, also to keep consistency with other diff...
- 00:18:626(1,1,1) Avoid too much new combo, too much new combo make player easier to gain HP...
- 00:53:597(1) Out of screen again...
- 01:01:740(8) Too far I suggest move to x:176 y:128...
- 01:48:797(4) Move to X:228 y:272 to straight with 3...

I LOVE VOCALOID AND I LOVE THIS SONG!!! :D
Hope ranked quickly... ;)
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