[Normal]:
01:10:41 (1) - I can dare be a nazi when it comes to this inherited timing section (and its volume change). Upon listening to it in-game though, the effect is hardly noticeable (The spinner whirl getting muted 1/2 before the end). I would suggest you have this volume changing inherited section right at the spinner end. Why? Spinners won't get an early delay problem like other inherited sections do for circles/sliders. Because of this, you might as well just put it at that intended spot, no?
02:54:02 (1) - Same as above.
[Hard]:
00:25:18 (3,4,5,6,7) - I have a personal problem with this rhythm here and its relationship with the vocals (It's fine when I play it though, but that's just me).
02:31:41 (8) - Nazi: Move 1 up on Grid Level 3.
tieff so pro~ x3
EDIT: honk