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Rex - proposed, flower, wolf

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mican
Topic Starter
mican
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年10月1日 at 16:45:30

Artist: Rex
Title: Proposed, Flower, Wolf
Source: DJMAX
Tags: djmax,dj,max,abalee
BPM: 160.02
Filesize: 11234kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. abalee's Style (4.62 stars, 181 notes)
  2. Hard Style (4.82 stars, 212 notes)
  3. Normal Style (3.52 stars, 134 notes)
Download: Rex - Proposed, Flower, Wolf
Download: Rex - Proposed, Flower, Wolf (no video)
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Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Rex - proposed, flower, wolf (leimiliya) [Hard2].osu
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
>A< satr
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
niedz
719 posts
Joined May 2008
niedz
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Perhaps I've play DJMAX too much because I think the map is worse :(
This is slow and easy song.
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma

DJPop wrote:

This is slow and easy song.
The slider velocity should not be this fast and the map should not be so Insane either, imo. It does not get the feel or mood (?) of the song itself. ): I like your patterns and stuff, though. However, the jumps are not so good - I look at them and nothing at the part merits a jump-like-thing or anything like that "00:51:00 (1)". This part, for example, does not really fit at all to me "00:48:38 (4,5)". Maybe I am wrong? I like when people take the mood of the song and map with that in mind. Shoot a star~
mican
Topic Starter
mican

DJPop wrote:

Perhaps I've play DJMAX too much because I think the map is worse :(
This is slow and easy song.
I will do a difficulty it will slow and easy :D
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Ice coffee
46 posts
Joined March 2009
Ice coffee
>_< good luck
Lisa
85 posts
Joined July 2009
Lisa
>A<leimi<3
star~
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
leilei >O<~♪
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
Joined May 2008
Wizard Of Orz
dammit i claimed this in the djmax project v_v

i really wanted both part 2 and part 1 but you can have it i guess.

I already submitted part 2 so dont touch that >_>
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
Joined May 2008
Wizard Of Orz
orz new bg

abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
i promised
将PreviewTime设置为 61131会好点。

Download: Rex - proposed, flower, wolf (leimiliya) [abalee's Style].osu
deepsea
osu! Alumni
855 posts
Joined April 2008
deepsea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
mican
Topic Starter
mican
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
deepsea
osu! Alumni
855 posts
Joined April 2008
deepsea
@_@
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
Yay!

it'll become leimi's first ranked map!

starry for you*
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
I understand this is one of your firsts, so I'll be more lenient with this one.. I told you some of my advice in irc, please remember it the next time you map, ok?

Hard Style:
The jumps aren't really following anything to me, please avoid this.

abalee's Style:
01:41:24 (2) - Fix the spacing between (1,2) and (2,3).

Normal Style:
00:39:76 (2,3,4) - Jumps really aren't so good in easier difficulties.. especially big ones like this.
01:09:00 (4,5,6,7) - If you're going to do this, the least you can do is put a new combo on the (4). Also, I think it's best if you just stick to a constant distance snap for easier difficulties.

I'm sorry lei, but I have to pop. ;__;
mican
Topic Starter
mican
sorry takuma I won't do any change
because I will remake it
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
;) reimi fighting~~❤
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
慢慢来 0.0

重制也没关系，重要的是做得好就行了 ;)
deepsea
osu! Alumni
855 posts
Joined April 2008
deepsea
如果你不喜歡它，那麼重作就好了，不必道歉。

我的曉之車也是完成後過了幾個月之後，看了覺得很爛，就整個砍掉重做。我很喜歡我的新作品，它也得到了不錯的評價。

當覺得自己過去的作品不好時，不用難過，因為這代表你成長了，進步了。


只要我可以，我不會放棄任何一張map。開學即使我不再接新case，我曾經mod過的圖，我也會recheck。

不用急著完成它。Just map your best map.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
每個人的頭上都有一片天。

這句話我從小聽到大，在我真正開始教書之前，我一直覺得這句話是我老爸說的屁話。說來有趣，我在現實生活與網路中扮演的角色非常的類似，我不是個出色的人(現實 遊戲都是)，不過因為自己是很普通的人，所以總是努力的從周邊學習新事物，這一點讓我得到了不少好處。

當我MOD每一張map時，我都會努力的去猜測對方的想法，(為什麼這個mapper要如此的作) 然後順著那位mapper的想法進行mod，我會把我個人的觀感暫時放到一邊去，因為我自己有自己喜歡的風格，如果把我喜歡的風格強加在其他的mapper身上，這是一種迫害(創意上與自尊上)。

我是BAT的話，我會bubble/rank這張map，但是我個人的觀感上是3000%同意DJObaba說的話，(這樣快速的點擊並不適合這首歌)，其實我自己也是比較喜歡Normal難度，就算很簡單，還是讓我很享受。

This is your map~ 決定的權利在妳自己，如果妳認為妳的那片天空是美好的，就盡全力守護自己的那一片天，這不是要妳把耳朵蓋起來或把眼睛閉上拒絕別人的建議，尊重別人的天空比守護自己的天空更加困難與高貴，仔細思考對方的建議，給出適當的回應，這樣是比較理想的。我個人是相當固執的一個人，大多數的建議我都是拒絕的，不過在拒絕之前我一定會思考對方的建議，提出我不接受的理由。
(如果連對方的建議都沒看沒想就而且拒絕，實在是很失禮，而且這樣的行為會把我惹火 lol)

Map是一種藝術，沒有什麼best mapper best map……blabla的，順著自己的心意就好，作出一張自己滿意的就好，那些數字或是外人的讚美不過都像泡泡一樣，如夢似幻~

這是妳第一張靠自己作出來的map，我給妳的評價是…….
Good job，just keep on going~

埃 我真的變成老人了~
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~All~
01:35:25 (6,7) - snapped by using 1/3 BSD.
End the latest spinner on 01:52:877 or 01:54:752

~abalee's~
01:32:25 (7) - hitwhistle on first note

~Normal~
00:27:57 (1) - extend 1/2 (right white tick)

~Hard~
See ~All~


Better than first time looked ;) +Star
azuki
351 posts
Joined January 2009
azuki
leilei :3
Mystearica
Mystearica
[Normal Style]

No break for the beginners? It's not too hard but I think it'd be nice to have one somewhere o.o

00:33:38 (1) - definitively too large of a jump for the easiest difficulty
01:21:75 (1) - fade this spinner out with the vocal
01:47:25 (1,2,3) - try 40, 50, and 60% volume normal finishes

[abalee's Style]

00:24:01 (1,2,3) - soft whistles on these 3
00:27:29 - redo this break, it shortens
01:41:25 (2) - inconsistent spacing
01:49:12 (1) - fade out this spinner gradually

[Hard Style]

00:27:38 - redo break, it lengthens
00:40:88 (4) - inconsistent spacing
00:55:88 (2) - new combo here
01:09:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing in this combo is slightly inconsistent
01:21:75 (1) - maybe silence the end on this spinner
01:39:56 (1) - add a 40% soft finish on the end of this slider
01:49:12 (1) - fade this spinner out

~
f0012979
232 posts
Joined June 2008
f0012979
蕾米~~>A<
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Sorry,I'm late XD

And star.
Ana_Coppola
100 posts
Joined March 2009
Ana_Coppola
because it's Djmax~~and leimi =w=
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
This map lacks finish hitsound ;) Other than that it's pretty solid.

<Normal>
00:27:76 (1) - I suggest this spinner be removed and a break be inserted.

<Hard>
Fine.

<abalee>
Fine.
taNa
312 posts
Joined January 2009
taNa
>3<
taka1235
609 posts
Joined February 2009
taka1235
nice map ~~

star >A</
1025
41 posts
Joined July 2008
1025
>3
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
fixed @ irc

star .

good map
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
Shit I think lost my modding ability

All of my words are suggestions. You don't have to follow these.

[Normal]
01:36:75 (8) - Stack with (7)'s ending point.

[Aba]
01:27:75 (1) - 直線!

00:54:75 (3) -
01:41:25 (2) -
These slower slider's spacing is kinda confusing.
前者 ignored distance snap
後者 used distance snap
>_> Just pick one style......

[Hard]
Good.

Good luck.
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
Normal Style:
00:44:26 (3) - Honestly, I think this is a little too wide. Please move closer to previous (2). >A</
01:36:00 (7) - I feel the same with the above. Though it might not be too big to you, it is to the Normal leveled players.
00:39:76 (2,3,4) - Mm, perhaps the same applies to here too..

I'm sorry I'm so late..

EDIT: I'm happy that you didn't give up. This is a really great map, good job leilei!
deepsea
osu! Alumni
855 posts
Joined April 2008
deepsea
0.o
Mystearica
Mystearica
Congrats on your first ranked map!
mican
Topic Starter
mican
Thanks~~~~~
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