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SHK - Identity Part II

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Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[Easy] & [Normal]
Fine!

[Hard]
00:17:520 (1) - remove new combo
00:17:720 (2) - new combo
00:18:320 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:320 (6) - new combo(?)
02:00:541 - add note here with finish


Everyone good job. Star~* :D
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Senbon
Feel free to take or leave any suggestions. :D

[NoHItter's Easy]

00:40:125 (1) - Pull the red point to the right one and move the slider one to the left.
01:50:539 (5) - Whistle on end?
01:52:139 (6) - ^

[Climbb's Normal]

00:50:927 (4) - Clap?

[Hard]

00:25:322 (4) - Clap on start?
02:33:113 (2) - Move more diagonally in line with (4) and (1)?

Solid mapping. :D Nothing to find but nazi mods. >.>
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Hey
Kudosu Beuchi and Senbon

Download: SHK - Identity Part II (Chacha17) [NoHItter's Easy].osu
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
Hai there :D
OK Chacha Here I go
A very good map and cool song :oops: Here are my sugesstion feel free to use it or not :D

[General]
I have to agree with Beuchi-Chan the hitsound's volume are quite low ( well this can be easily solved by tweaking the volume in the option)

[NoHItter's Easy]
Very challenging easy ( I can even call this Easy +)
But you really should avoid placing a circle in center after a spinner, novice player could lost sight of it because of the hit300/100

[Climbb's Nromal]
00:22:521 (3) - use the costum slider tick for this slider, if this slider don't have any clap it'll sound bad like something is missing
00:27:322 (2) - seems awkward :? reduce the slider to blue tick then extend the repeat to 00:28:522/00:28:722
00:57:728 (4) - another place I really think you should use costum slider tick
01:58:540 (4,5) - how about making this the same as in 00:27:322 (2,1) by using spinner?

[Hard]
00:31:523 (6) - I really like this kind of slider :oops:
00:46:026 (x) - add a note here with a very low volume
01:21:333 (x) - extend the repeat to here and add very low volume

This is a very cool map :oops: I wish I can make a diff for this
Anyway here's your star Good Luck :D
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hello~

Easy
  • 00:36:924 (1) Finish
    00:40:125 (1) ^ at end
    00:43:325 (1) None
    00:54:528 (6) ^ at end
    00:56:928 (2) None
    00:58:528 (2) ^
    00:59:729 (2) ^
    01:12:131 (1) Decrease 1 reverse
    01:44:137 (3) None at end
Normal
  • 00:33:723 (1) None at end
    00:48:926 (6) None at start
    00:53:327 (1) Clap at middle
    01:09:731 (3,4) 1 Grid down
    01:30:535 (3) None at end
Hard
  • 00:19:420 (2,4) 1 Grid up?
    00:51:727 (5) Symmetry
    00:59:328 (1) None
    01:06:530 (2) Whistle
    01:09:731 (2) ^
    02:09:342 (1) Symmetry
    02:13:743 (4) None
    02:26:646 (x) Add note?
    02:46:450 (2) None
Star~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
SP over 20... :)
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Chacha17

H-boy wrote:

SP over 20... :)
oh but when i posted that it only has 12 sp ;_;
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Hmm nice =)

StaR
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
Fine.

pubble :D
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[easy]
0:42:925 (4) Uneven spacing among (2,3) and (3,4)
1:38:516 (3) Will it be too near to the margin?
1:50:139 (4,5) up 1 grid that parallel to (3) ?

[normal]
0:15:320 (3) up 1 grid to paprallel with (1) ?
0:21:321 (1) up 1 grid?
1:24:534 (5) down/left 1 grid to parallel with (4)'s slider?

[easy/normal]
Small suggestion: will 2:01:741 be a better choice of ending?

[hard]
good~

Star~
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
Try to remove the .osb file and full submit (I dont think it's that important myself, but everybody points it out, so...)

[NH's Easy]
00:27:322 (1) - hm, it's quite easy to pass anyway, but maybe make it end 1/1 earlier?
00:40:125 (1) - move middle point down one grid.
01:00:929 (1) - but this spinner should be 1/1 shorter.
01:22:133 (1) - make it 1/1 shorter and start 1/1 later, it's too close after spinner.
01:40:937 (1,3) - not perfect enough :P

[Climb's Normal]
Fine.

[Hard]
Flawless.
Last edited by Matma Rex , edited 1 time in total.
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
augh you edited your post

ignore this post
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Chacha17
What's with the original post, Lybydose? o.o

I could have it back though.

Anyway, ignore omg you pubbled it ;o anyway thanks

NoHItter? :D mods are calling you now
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Arrgh, how do you get so many mods in a day?

Download: SHK - Identity Part II (Chacha17) [NoHItter's Easy].osu
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
pubbled already >_<!
all minor stuff that I don't think is worth popping for-

NoHItter's-
If this wasn't called Easy, I'd ask to fill in some more notes for the sake of the hitsounds..
Nevertheless this is a pretty good
01:05:730 (1) to 01:12:131 (1) - the claps sound like they're on the wrong white ticks?

Climbb's-
00:54:928 - missed a clap here?
01:27:734 - missed a whistle here? or should sound like there is one..
Fair map

Hard- fun, hp drain keeps killing me though.. that's just me
Pretty flawless
01:37:336 - add note with whistle hitsound? (yea, sounds a lot like 01:43:737 (3))
01:50:139 - ^
02:07:342 (1,2,1) - imo, remove new combo from the 1s and add new combo to that 2...
02:16:144 (1,2,3) - I hear claps starting here, but then they instantly discontinue... add more to next notes or just remove from these?

normal hitsound sample with custom soft clap as slider tick... its kinda odd to hear the soft clap with normal clap sometimes >.<
(for example- 00:22:521 (3) - in Climbb's diff..)
Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
Already modded. Can't find something wrong in new version
Chacha17
501 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
Chacha17
okay okay BATs please don't deny the 2nd kudos for Lybydose (that's for the timing help he did)
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
General:
- Delete .osb in Song Folder and Full Submit
-Xero-
526 posts
Joined October 2009
-Xero-
Yo,

Didn't found much. So mainly nazi things..

[Easy]
01:26:534 (3,...) - 1 tick up

[Normal]
00:15:320 (3) - 1 tick to the left + up
01:26:134 (2,3,4) - Like that:


[Hard]
01:45:338 - Add a circle
01:59:541 (4,5,6) - 1 tick to the right

~star and good luck!
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
as your request but i mod this too late,it seems perfect now >_<
go go get it ranked~just star for my favourite song of O2Jam
DaRRi
267 posts
Joined January 2009
DaRRi
:) some suggestions here

Hard

00:39:525 (4,5) - 1/4 backward
00:43:325 - circle
00:50:327 (2,3) - circle before slider
00:54:327 - circle
02:22:545 (1,2,3,4) - 3/4 rhythm
02:25:746 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:40:749 (4,5) - 1/4 backward
02:47:150 (4,5) - ^


Normal

00:50:127 (2) - remove


Easy

00:46:526 (1) - end at 00:49:326
00:49:727 - circle
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
Nice map:3
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
O2Mania ripped >__>


~NoHItter's Easy~
Map full song pls.

~Climbb's Normal~
Map full song pls.
00:50:127 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - remove all claps
01:28:934 (2,3) - wrong claps
01:30:935 (4) - add clap

~Hard~
00:33:123 (4,5) - move 1/4 left
00:39:525 (4,5) -^
00:54:528 (1) - move 1/2 left
01:19:733 (4) - remove hitfinish
02:40:749 (4,5) - move 1/4 left
02:47:150 (4,5) - ^


You should care about beginner players who like and want to play this song :o
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Just one thing, normal-slidertick2 sounds not so great since there is no normal hitsound in it, it's just a normal clap, so different to other clao which is on notes with normal hitsound, use this one
Download: normal-slidertick2.rar

Other all fine for me
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Hard
01:26:534 (1,2,3,4) - put these like you did here 01:24:934 (1) *.*
02:22:745 (2,3) - move 2 to next blu tick, and remove 3
02:25:746 (5,6) - ^
just suggestions, cuz sounds better, imo ^^

NoHItter's Easy
01:22:133 (1,2,3,4) - 1 and 3 sounds odd, imo, sounds better one beat earlier, also hard to read for beginners (I miss those >.>)

Nice map!!
Star!!
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Here

Download: SHK - Identity Part II (Chacha17) [NoHItter's Easy].osu
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. White and pinkish colors are bad ideas. Change them to dark orange or yellowish colors based on the background.
2. I found the offset is too late. I got around 7,135 - 7,140.
3. The normal-slidertick2 sounds too soft. Use mine instead. I made it just for you buddy.

[NoHItter's Easy]
-- This is a nice easy diff.
00:25:322 (2) - Better move it one or two tiny grid up.
00:49:727 (1) - Too close to the end of spinner. I'm afraid it will be too hard for [Easy] diff. But, since there's no anymore good point to end the spinner, I think we can leave this one. Consider it as a little challenge.
01:08:930 (1,2,3,4) - I myself avoid such this pattern in [Easy] diff. Will it be too hard? [?]

[Climb's Normal]
00:24:591 (1) - Extend one 1/4 tick.
00:26:660 (2) - This note sounds weird. Move backward one 1/2 tick. Then add a note on 00:26:866. I believe this way will be better.
00:28:728 - Add note here.
00:38:453 (1) - Oh no, the placement looks like 1/2 stream. Move it farther from (4).

[Hard]
-- A little bit overmapped.
00:20:921 (1,3) - Change their type to Linear.
00:37:924 (5) - ^
00:41:125 (6) - ^
00:58:828 (5) - Move one tiny grid down.
01:33:735 (1) - Add one more repeat.
02:16:144 (1,3) - Change their type to Linear.
02:23:545 (5) - ^
02:39:148 (6) - ^
02:45:550 (5) - ^
02:48:751 (6) - ^
Star.

Download: normal-slidertick2.rar
Kurai
osu! Alumni
7,734 posts
Joined March 2009
Kurai
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Don't really have a problem with the maps but the mp3 quality sounds awful imo.
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
Hard
all good

Climbb's Normal
01:14:532 (1,2) - make this a slider with a repeat, just a suggestion.

NoHItter's Easy
01:52:139 (6) - could be closer to 5

nice map, star!
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
You might want to add the noninherited timing sections to every diff to make sure the osu! logo beats correctly in the opening.
The combo colors really make it hard for me to read stacks.

NoHItter's Easy:
Combo mod:
00:53:327 (4) - add new combo for change in music and because this current combo is very long?

Climbb's Normal:
Combo mod:
00:16:120 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:19:320 (3)

Do either:
01:04:129 (1) - remove new combo
01:10:531 (1) - ^
or:
01:07:330 (3) - add new combo
01:12:531 (3) - ^
for consistency

01:34:536 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2) - I don't know what these combos are supposed to follow

Hard:
The combo colors with your high OD makes it really hard for me to read some of the stacks.
Combo mod:
02:25:746 (5) - new combo to make new combo of 4 whole notes in length like your previous combos
02:28:999 (5) - ^?

=================================
Overall, nice map. Star.
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
Nice. I like how you map the slowdown part. Good rhythm. No Insane difficulty ? D:
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
Hard
00:20:921 (1) - Sliders like these look terribly sloppy due to having them as Catmull. I'd redo them all as linear so they aren't ugly. I won't bother listing them all, you get the picture.

The score jump between Normal and Hard is very retarded. 700k to 9m. I say decrease HP Drain 1 on Hard as it reduces it to 7.4m. Hard isn't quite deserving of 9m imo. It's not that difficult, and I think this is a fair way to lessen the huge gap.

That's all, looks pretty good.
wanhyrzh
376 posts
Joined December 2009
wanhyrzh
nice song and map=V=
Though I think normal is a bit easier than it could be?
And I find that KIAI time is a little strange……
Gogogo~! Chacha17! :)
STAR~

EDIT：Oh I just suggest you to full-make the first two diffs if you have time.
Since I saw some BATs just complained about this, for the score spreading uneven.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Second map I've looked at in a row with an mp3 so atrocious I can't mod any further. Please, for the love of god, turn the volume down. It burns my ears. ;_; Post on my queue when you fix the mp3 and I'll mod it.
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Nice map, have a star! ^^
blacksymbian
585 posts
Joined December 2008
blacksymbian
Here's the star that I owe ya :)
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
... so long now...

Also if .mp3 quality is low maybe you can ask Ephemeral or someone else to find a better one?
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
NoHItter's Easy
Nice easy.

All your spinners are too close to the following note.

Beginning feels a bit difficult for a beginning.

01:08:930 (1,2,3,4) - Overlaps map confuse.
01:31:335 (3) - Redo this slider.

Climbb's Normal
Good harder normal, I think.

All your spinners are too close to the following note. Most have hit markers which cover notes.

Some weird timing with some notes, e.g.
00:43:725 (1) -
00:52:527 (1) -
00:54:528 (2,3,4) -
01:35:736 (3) -
01:49:739 (5) -
01:52:539 (2) -

Hard
Rename to Insane.
OD+1. (Trust me, it works.)
Okay diff.

I have a problem with the spinners because right after is a blinding kiai. The end of a spinner is blinding enough, and to add kiai and a bright background with bright hitcircles to the miss is just lfjds;lfjdadf. In particular, it's harder to read the doubles. Whatever.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Adjusting some spinners seems to ruin the flow...

Either I have to remove them or keep them as is...

Version without spinner changes:

Download: SHK - Identity Part II (Chacha17) [NoHItter's Easy].osu
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